Tournament Fight: Makoto VS. Dev

[Makoto Cifer]

Location: Hueco Mundo desert
Distance: 10ft
Weather: Very windy
Description: Several menos roam the area. Many rock formations suround us.
Makoto goes 1st.

[Makoto Cifer]

Makoto sat atop a boulder, amoungst many rock formations, several miles from las noches. Makoto held in his hand a cup of hot tea, the steam gave him warmth and comfort. He slowly pressed his lips against the cup, as he took a rather sip of his hot tea. Sighing, he gazed at the moon for a long while, thinking. Abrubtly, makoto caught a shimmer within his pesquisa. The spiritual pressure was rather large, however it only severed to spike his resolve for a good fight. His gaze, quickly drifted to his right. Not soon after, a strange figure stared down makoto to a distance of 10ft. "You know, i don't how your people get in and out o hueco mundo so easily. I can tell by your spiritual prssure your no ordinary soul reaper. Though, you have harnessed the power of your hollow, heh, how laughable. Humans, soul reapers, quincey's, you name it. You will never come close to the power of a hollow. You damn dirty soul reaper, seeking power from your hollow was not a good idea. You will not leave here to harm any of my family." Makoto said, in a serious tone. With that, makoto took the last sip of his tea. Rather quickly, he held out his right hand towards the soul reaper, as he erected his index finger towards him. Makoto began to charge a cero upon his index finger.


Within seconds, came forth a rather large cero that attempted to engulf the reaper, threatening to cause severe burns all over his body. The cloud of smoke obsucred the fighters. Makoto took this intervel, as he advanced soindod, as he reached super sonic speeds. Makoto left behind a single after image, attempting to confuse his opponent of his wereabouts. Makoto then, appeared 15 feet, directly south of the reapers current position. Without missing a beat, makoto quickly placed his right arm below his left elbow, as he erected all five of his finger towards the reaper. In doing so, came forth five white, thin and sharp bala from his finger tips. Those bala were very sharp and thin, enabling them to slice, pierce and cut through most defences and hierro. The spiritual pressure that surrounded the edges of those projectiles vibrated at very high speeds, which enabled them to pierce, slash, cut, and penatrate through most defences, hierro, shields, barriers and most hard or dense substances. The projectiles were also enclosed with super heated spiritual pressure, the smallest cut would fry your organs from the inside out, literally cooking the reaper. Each one was guided towards the reaper, which were aimed towards specific vital points of his chooseing, from the help of makoto's spiritual pressure. One was guided vertically towards the reapers skull, attempting to slice his skull in half. Another was guided horizantally towards the reapers neck, attempting to slice off his head. Another was guided pierceingly towards the reapers heart, attempting to pierce through his heart. The last two were guided in a vertical line towards the vertebre above the reapers kiddeny's, attempting to sever his spine in two various places, also threatening to pierce and slash through any vital organ that may or may not lie within there path. Wolf striking bala


Moments past, as makoto quickly soindod, as he reached super sonic speeds. He appeared atop a rather large rock formation. He wasted none of time, as he opened his mouth very wide, as spiritual energy began to gather within his mouth. Within a few short seconds, makoto released several super sonic sound waves from his mouth. This technique had two initial attacks. The first was an immense, condensed beam of spiritual energy that was released in accordiance with sound waves. The beam had enough power to pierce through most defences, hierro and shieldings. The beam was guided towards the center of the reapers chest, attempting to pierce through it, leading to his lungs, and most of the upper part of his body to be wiped away. The beam had enough force to thrust the reaper backwards at high speeds towards the rock formations. The initial strike could and will fracture any bones that may or may not be left afterwards. Hitting the rockformaions at that speeds will fracture at break your spine. The second attack were the sound waves. They had enough power to cause immense ringing within the ears. If the ringing persisted for more than a few seconds, it will burst your ear drums, leading to perfuse bleeding of the ear, which would cause severe pain. They had enough force to send the reaper flying backwards also, enhancing the speed of the intial attack that came previously. All in all, if this attack made contact it could kill you. Howling Moon.


Makoto then, placed his right palm upon his swords hilt, as he then, quickly, drew forht his blade. In the wake of doing so, came forth an immense burst of spiritual pressure. Looking upon his blade, the reaper witnessed the following: Makoto's blade appeared a long distance of at least 6 feet. His blade appeared to have two guards. The first was a white triangle. The second was a white circular shaped symbol below the intial one. Makoto took a stance to which he held his blade infront of his body, as his left arm stayed beside his waist, awaiting his oppnents counter.

[Makoto Cifer]

Makoto, Hally called pause to the fights.
*He sighed* Yeah........... i just noticed.`~(

[Makoto Cifer]

While inside the world of Hunoce Mundos this small lad jumps down from the rocky formation that he landed on. With a small scratch on his head the lad only brushed off some dirt and looked around to see even more land formations made of stone and rock. On one of them he spots the figure of a large man with claws and a tail. He kicks his feet up and cracks the side of his neck before floating inside the air and hitting break neck speeds with a dash almost looking as if the lad was flying.

The lad stooped and saw the waves of tea rising from a distance not ten feet away, he then saw this glow and was fired, the lad only laughs and skips to the side pushing forth one of his hands which then begins to glow a bright red color, with one large heave the light wraps around and turns into a large blast that collides with the foes beam. The dust cleared and this person them launched out.

The lad pulls back his arms and a white aura comes over him making a light for the smoke, he then sends off this aura into a human shape and put small bits of his energy into it making it a clone of him now, the Lad then bounces up and spins around two time creating a current to fly up out of the smoke avoiding any harm done to him. Looking down the Lad smiles.

" Ectoplasm Reactions Body Double" The clone made of white aura that had traces of the energy inside of it started to expan out ward, it then became a texture of jelly and started to expand more and more with each bala that came into it making it now the size of 7 feet tall.

With a snap the Lad's Ectoplasm started to bubble and produce large amounts of heat that would start to soak into the ground, the plasm reached to 5 feet and then with the Lad snapping once more the form blew up and made a raduis enough to over take the foes screams and other attacks only making the force stronger, once the blast reaches the foe it would not harm him only pushing him backward with enough force that would crack earth itself but not arrcnarr's bone.

The Lad was pleased with his blow up and smiled before dashing out once more landing on a rock formation that was 10 m from the blast site. The Lad holds out his hands and the white aura starts to morph around into forms of guns that where plate black and hand solid silver triggers.

The Lad spins them around and waits propping his left foot on his right and jaunting his body to one side almost like a bar was made out of the hair bit it was only the extreme balance.*
Makoto's eyes widend slightly in a surprised manner, he had mistaken this human for a dirty soul reaper. His sound waves were then pushed backwards towards him location, though only at tenth of there normal destructive capacity. Makoto then, using his spiritual pressure, he leap backwards rather quickly, as he landed atop another rock formation 20 ft from his previous position. The human appeared upon a rock formation that was barely 20 feet from his location. A white aura then, erupted from the humans body, the took manifestation into guns. Makoto gave this human a smirk of excitment, as he began to focus spiritual energy within the many part of his eyes. The retna, pupils, iris. Makoto eyes then shifted to a magnifesent swirled color of blue and white, as that revealed his hightened vision. Wolf sense level two. (Level two allowed makoto to see super sonic+ - hyper sonic movments, projectiles etc etc.)


Makoto kept his focus upon the human. He then, shifted the blade end of sword downward towards ground, letting his come down fiercely. Makoto leaned downward, as his hieght matched his blades lenght. He placed his finger below the guard of his blade, slighly cutting his middle finger. Blood ran down his finger, as he held his right arm outwards towards the human. Makoto charged an omnious light blue cero upon the palm of his right hand. Within moments, came forth a rather large light blue cero that obsucred the humans of his opponent. The width of thiscero was rather intimadating, as it was guided towards the human, attempting to engulf him, which will result in 2nd - 3rd degree burns all over the humans body. Gran Ray Cero.

[Makoto Cifer]

By the way, i modified my character quite a bit a while back. I Don't have characteristics in base form. It's almost completly changed, kinda, i guess.

[Devroux]

Edit the title to say Lax.

Everyone has that power within 10 days of making the thread.

[Makoto Cifer]

I will tell you this much, I will be my fathers image.


Except you counter. Though he does counter, but not that often. By the way, heh, how do you edit the thread title.

[Devroux]

Just edit the OP. If it doesn't take you directly to the advanced page hit "Go Advanced."

Above the part where you edit your actual post you'll see where you can change the title.

[Makoto Cifer]

Does he even fight anymore?

[Sephiroth]

Actually she cancelled the tourny

[Makoto Cifer]

*Tho the shock waves would have only pushed my foe back The Lad stands there and picks up his energy level, with a slight smile he prees down at the edge of his formation and sees his foe cut his finger. The wide blue eyes open wider and the Lad jumps back and glides across the formation and never did stop inill he looked back and saw the blue light that came behind him.

The lad twisted his body and aimed his guns at the light in which he jammed his fingers into the triggers and shot over 100 of his small specks that where full of energy that priced the light and tried to shut it off, the guns barrel spun around more and more as specks of energy where pushed out.

Before long the Lad was far enough away to let his fire down long enough for a large balls of energy on the tips of the bullets. The Lad hit his twin triggers and let lose a massive blast of compressed heated energy that slammed into the blue light blasting it away coming out of the back pushing into the rock itself blowing it up as well slamming shards into you since you where under it.

The Lad clams down and sets his hands down before reloaded his guns with two more of those energy balls at the tips of the guns. With a pant his holds them up and fires them once more hitting even more area you need to cover if the foe was getting away.*


Makoto stood straight, he kept his focus upon his opponent and his cero. He glared downwards towards the human, his eyes held no emotion, his face shown no expression, his look was blan. Abrubtly, makoto caught a gaze of several energy projectiles coming towards him. He acted accordingly thier location, as he leaped backwards. The body movment was enhanced by his spiritual pressure, in which the movments speed was twice it's initial ability. Mid-range from the formation, a sheild of spiritual energy came forth from his body, the rock shards served no purpose, as to only be repeld by this shelid. Suddenly, makoto caught a gaze of more threatening projectiles. He began to rotate his body at ultra high speeds, the sheild responded, as it to began to rotate. Any shards that were released towards him were easily repeld, if not expunged. Moments past, as makoto began to lower his speed. Abrubtly, makoto extened his limbs outward, which resulted in a rather large shockwave that sent any formation within the radius of 20 meters to oblivion. In the wake of the shockwave, a small burst of wind was sent forth, clearing the air of any debris. Leaving a clear view for the fighters.

[Makoto Cifer]

Not enough my dear friend.

* The Lad's foe made a shield and blocked the energy blast that was made from his guns. The Lad made a very unhappy face and started to charge his guns once more this time the energy balls where made in sets of threes on each gun. The Verry unhappy lad held out both guns and started to scream out like he was charging energy. However this scream was deep and loud like a lions roar.

The Lad's aura from before started to show once more and now a pale blue color. This time a large blue horse with a blue like flaming mane showed on top of him as the Lad screamed. The Lad's scream halted as the horse then soaked up into the energy of his arms and one sly smile came over the Lads face. His words where soft but frice.

" This is over, Glancing Death, Spirt bomb."

The energy from around the guns spooled up so much the twin blast took up over half the Lads large six foot height and expand out so wide it was as if it was made from a super bomb that Dad had showed me back when I was just a small boy.

This energy blast was enough to completely level the area we where in and make mild burns on my arms and part of my shoulders. Not the same for you, because you had a energy based skill up my energy reacted and would be able to draw every single particle to you and smash into you, if so you would die and be wiped away from further expedience. This speed from the blast was enough to reach breakneck speeds of hypersonic+

The Lads body fell back as the guns then vanished and the area was left in nothing but pure dirt. with a tear falling the Lad stood up and begin to charge back his energy.*

Game over you let me fire my guns to long.



Makoto stood upon an invisable platform created from his spiritual pressure, his focus was constant upon the human. He was rather confused of the magnifsent events that took place around the human. He knew it was very destructive from experience. Makoto acted accordingly, very quickly, almost in sequence with the human actions. He, placed the blade of his sword below his left arm, as he slowly began to drift his claws downward upon his blade. Following that, immense spiritual energy began to emit from his body, as he prepared to reveal his ressurection form.






Brighten the moon. Lobo angelo. With those words spoken, spiritual pressure began to slowly build upon makoto's body, as an immense white light emit from his body. Within seconds, came forth high frequency sound waves. The sound waves came forth in sequence with the humans roar. If these soud waves should reach you, it will cause immense pain within your ears, resulting in perfuse bleeding of the ear. The trama will lead to nausea, which will cause immense pukeing. Moments afterward, spiritual forced it's self outward into an explosion, almost simultaneously with the explsion of the humans, attempting to engulf the human within it of a radius of 150 - 195 feet. The smoke slowly settled, as the human witnessed makoto's ressurection form. He had sproughted two, meter long white wolf ears atop his head. A rather large halo of spiritual energy glimmered atop his head. His hollow bone mask had refomed to cover his jaw and vital parts surrounding his neck. Partial skull fragment had reformed as well. His eyes had shifted to an orange color surrounding his retna, as it revealed his hightened vision. Wolf sense level 3. Level three allowed makoto to see hyper sonic movments and projectiles. It also amplified his pesquisa, making it highly sensitive. Makoto sproughted two twenty foot angel wings upon his back that radiated with a bright light. His torso had formed an immensely hard hollow bone armor. The spiritual energy within this armor was highly compressed, making it very durable and hard. It is very hard to pentrate. His espada uniform had changed desighns below his waist. Makoto grew 5 inch claws that could extend and contract at ultra high speeds. His tail was made of purely condensed spiritual energy. They were very sharp and the spiritual pressure surrounding the edges of makoto's tail vibrated at utra high speeds, enabling it to pierce, slash and pentrate through most defences, hierro, barrier, and most hard substances. Behold his ressurection form.



Makoto glared at the human, giving him a look of absolute no emotion behind it. Makoto held out his right arm towards the human quickly, as he erected his index finger towards him as well, as he began to charged an omnious black cero surrounded a white aura, upon the tip of his index finger. Within seconds, came forth an immensely large, black cero surrounded by a white aura towards omoi, attempting to engulf him, threatening to cause severe 2nd degree burns upon the human's body. "Cero Oscurous"





Makoto lowerd his right arm, as he began to focus spiritual pressure within the palm of his right hand. Without a beat, came forth a magnifecent katana of which the blade radiated with a bright, healthy glow of spiritual energy. Makoto stood their, as he awaited the human's counter.

[Noctis Arashi]

What exactly happened? I'm lost.

[Makoto Cifer]

What exactly happened? I'm lost.
As am i, brother.

[Noctis Arashi]

He was basically eradicated by giving you energy.

[Noctis Arashi]

He had NO chance to counter?

[Makoto Cifer]

* The Lads eyes felt still, the blood rushed from his heart into his eyes filling them with a red line over the irs, the Lads face was still as well, the sound of rushing wind swept past him. His thought focused on the now object before him. Only a small blink came from the foes change and finshing morphs. The Lad was not phased only happy that he was able to use this now.

With a jaunt the Lad's body swept into the wind almost dashing from sight only the fact that his body was now only thirty feet to the side of his foe which fired out a black like ball of energy just like the one from once he was toying with the lad. The still hands of the Lad shoot up and fired out his own kind of energy blast that was a dark red shade and would combine with the others from his other hand, the twin blast left his hands and can hit his foe even from fifty feet away in under seconds flat. The twin blast closed in and should be around the foe about the time his blink was done and these dark cold voice came out.

" Evolution Stage 2.. Start System Blast."

As the words let lose the bast closed in and compressed in on the foe and then stooped blowing away the whole filed in one blast rejecting the energy waves that formed around the male stooping energy attacks from reaching him creating multi scars and burns over his arm sending the Lad flying backward.*

Your done this blast is enough to wipe you clear, no mater where you run or hide the blast was to great, good job creating enough energy inside the area to expand it tho.
You've got to elaborate more on what you actually did. Can you explain it?