obitobi
12-01-2010, 04:36 PM
Hello everyone. I would like to introduce my new story. And now I will write the first part...
I approched the altar of the Darkness, and was ever ready to recive its blessings. I slowly tilted my head down, and wrapped one palm with my hands.
"Dear Maker, please send me the blessings of shadow, for I wish to be trained in your ways..."
I waited...
And waited...
But no response from the one I worshipped.
"Please... PLEASE!" I begged.
Still not a response. Then came an echoing footstep, the sound bouncing off of the church- like interior.
"Hello...?" I asked the air.
"Hehehehe...."
The slow laughter kept ringing around me, I almost felt trapped within the everlasting mockery of my faith.
A shadow slowly stepped out of the darkness, it's definition shaped in that of a human.
A long, frightening smile was etched into its face. It stared at me, and it's head turned lightly to my left. It rushed at me.
"Kachiro?!" I thought out loud. "No! You died... you're not Kachiro!"
I then realized... that monster was the true embodiment of me... It was here to take my soul, and my body.
I opened up my arms in the shape of an embrace.
It turned into a wisp like item, and it went down my throat.
"Hello Khaos..." It whispered... and everything went black.
***
"Fira!" Yuki yelled, "It's dinner time you clown!"
I stared over my shoulder at the door to the house.
"Yuuuuuuki! I'm NOT a clown! I'm an elementian! I have to train in Pyro! Leave me alone!"
Her 10-year-old face went pouty.
"FINE! No salmon for you ya big bully!"
"Wa-wait! I looooooooooooove salmon!"
"Then it's inside with you!!!"
***
I walked into my house. Wow... alot changed since our parents died...
I pushed the thought of it away and sat with my sister, Yuki, at the table.
"So big bro, how is the training?" She queried.
"Eh, it's coming... I can barely do a tornado! You wanna see?"
"Ugh, you're such a child sometimes! I almost forget that you're fifteen... but heck yeah I wanna see!"
Before I had a chance to show off, a knock came at the door.
"I'll get it!" I claimed.
I opened the door, surprised to see a man in the Kagui-Country attire... almost looked like one of Lord Khaos' guard...
It was.
"Umm... hi?" I said.
"Hello Master Firos."
"Are you... a guard?"
"First division, and I come bearing bad news..."
I froze.
"As you may have guessed, lord Khaos... is dead."
My brother... was dead...
How was it? If you like it enough I just might make another.
I approched the altar of the Darkness, and was ever ready to recive its blessings. I slowly tilted my head down, and wrapped one palm with my hands.
"Dear Maker, please send me the blessings of shadow, for I wish to be trained in your ways..."
I waited...
And waited...
But no response from the one I worshipped.
"Please... PLEASE!" I begged.
Still not a response. Then came an echoing footstep, the sound bouncing off of the church- like interior.
"Hello...?" I asked the air.
"Hehehehe...."
The slow laughter kept ringing around me, I almost felt trapped within the everlasting mockery of my faith.
A shadow slowly stepped out of the darkness, it's definition shaped in that of a human.
A long, frightening smile was etched into its face. It stared at me, and it's head turned lightly to my left. It rushed at me.
"Kachiro?!" I thought out loud. "No! You died... you're not Kachiro!"
I then realized... that monster was the true embodiment of me... It was here to take my soul, and my body.
I opened up my arms in the shape of an embrace.
It turned into a wisp like item, and it went down my throat.
"Hello Khaos..." It whispered... and everything went black.
***
"Fira!" Yuki yelled, "It's dinner time you clown!"
I stared over my shoulder at the door to the house.
"Yuuuuuuki! I'm NOT a clown! I'm an elementian! I have to train in Pyro! Leave me alone!"
Her 10-year-old face went pouty.
"FINE! No salmon for you ya big bully!"
"Wa-wait! I looooooooooooove salmon!"
"Then it's inside with you!!!"
***
I walked into my house. Wow... alot changed since our parents died...
I pushed the thought of it away and sat with my sister, Yuki, at the table.
"So big bro, how is the training?" She queried.
"Eh, it's coming... I can barely do a tornado! You wanna see?"
"Ugh, you're such a child sometimes! I almost forget that you're fifteen... but heck yeah I wanna see!"
Before I had a chance to show off, a knock came at the door.
"I'll get it!" I claimed.
I opened the door, surprised to see a man in the Kagui-Country attire... almost looked like one of Lord Khaos' guard...
It was.
"Umm... hi?" I said.
"Hello Master Firos."
"Are you... a guard?"
"First division, and I come bearing bad news..."
I froze.
"As you may have guessed, lord Khaos... is dead."
My brother... was dead...
How was it? If you like it enough I just might make another.