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Ryaque
06-29-2009, 05:53 AM
I kept running. I could hear the dogs behind me and the shouts of their masters but I kept running. I was running for my life on the night of my birthday. I followed the great white moon and what I could feel right now I can only describe in a few words. I felt unbound to the earth, happy, and...free.

I kept following the pearl white moon and I heard the dogs getting closer. I can't keep on like this!!! I thought to myself and quickly dived into a stream nearby.

I am alone in the world. I hid behind a tree as the dogs lost my sent in the water. I heard voices, one deep one high piched. "Why are we chasing after this girl anyway? It's pointless." The deep voice said and a dog barked and seemed to agree. "Don't you get it?" said the high pitched voice, a woman, "That girl was the ulimate insult to her family!!! We're doing them a favor by killing her." They turned around and continued to argue but Mayamaru didn't want to hear anymore. She looked around for someplace to rest for the night and found a low branch. She climbed onto it and stared up at the moon between a break in the branches. Ulimate insult huh? That's a new one.

(Flash back)
"Mother, why am I named Mayamaru?" I asked this night on my 13th birthday. My mother just slapped me across the face like I just insulted her. "You are named Mayamaru because you are unwanted. We were supposed to have a strong son when you were born, but instead we got something as usless as you; and now you just asked the one question that no one ever asks in our family. A name is sacred; though your's I don't care for." Mayamaru started crying and anger filled up inside of her. It's not my fault I'm a girl!!! I just am and even still they give me a boy's name!!! Why??? She started running and she heard her mother yell "You have exactly one hour before I send the dogs after you; use it well." She had complete disgust in her voice, but Mayamaru ran as fast as she could and continued to run.

(Present time)
I'm a girl that carries a boy's name. I'm totally unwanted anywhere in the world. Maybe I should just let the dogs get me. Being torn apart I would at least be good food for a comine dog. She shook her head and immediately got the idea out of her head. No, just to get my mother and father mad I'll survive. I'll come back home with a medal of honor and they won't even dare say I'm dishonorable. Not ever again. Mayamaru was soothed by this thought as she closed her eyes and started drifting off. She heard the voices in her head again and started crying, but her tears were washed away by the rain that started to fall. Not ever again.

So people don't need to go searching for the next part I'll put it all here.
The Unwanted Girl Ninja That Held A Boy's Name

I kept running. I could hear the dogs behind me and the shouts of their masters but I kept running. I was running for my life on the night of my birthday. I followed the great white moon and what I could feel right now I can only describe in a few words. I felt unbound to the earth, happy, and...free.

I kept following the pearl white moon and I heard the dogs getting closer. I can't keep on like this!!! I thought to myself and quickly dived into a stream nearby.

I am alone in the world. I hid behind a tree as the dogs lost my sent in the water. I heard voices, one deep one high piched. "Why are we chasing after this girl anyway? It's pointless." The deep voice said and a dog barked and seemed to agree. "Don't you get it?" said the high pitched voice, a woman, "That girl was the ulimate insult to her family!!! We're doing them a favor by killing her." They turned around and continued to argue but Mayamaru didn't want to hear anymore. She looked around for someplace to rest for the night and found a low branch. She climbed onto it and stared up at the moon between a break in the branches. Ulimate insult huh? That's a new one.

(Flash back)
"Mother, why am I named Mayamaru?" I asked this night on my 13th birthday. My mother just slapped me across the face like I just insulted her. "You are named Mayamaru because you are unwanted. We were supposed to have a strong son when you were born, but instead we got something as usless as you; and now you just asked the one question that no one ever asks in our family. A name is sacred; though your's I don't care for." Mayamaru started crying and anger filled up inside of her. It's not my fault I'm a girl!!! I just am and even still they give me a boy's name!!! Why??? She started running and she heard her mother yell "You have exactly one hour before I send the dogs after you; use it well." She had complete disgust in her voice, but Mayamaru ran as fast as she could and continued to run.

(Present time)
I'm a girl that carries a boy's name. I'm totally unwanted anywhere in the world. Maybe I should just let the dogs get me. Being torn apart I would at least be good food for a comine dog. She shook her head and immediately got the idea out of her head. No, just to get my mother and father mad I'll survive. I'll come back home with a medal of honor and they won't even dare say I'm dishonorable. Not ever again. Mayamaru was soothed by this thought as she closed her eyes and started drifting off. She heard the voices in her head again and started crying, but her tears were washed away by the rain that started to fall. Not ever again.

I woke up as I felt something crawling on my leg. I looked to see a snake wrapped around it. I screamed and fell out of the tree and the snake came right with me. I tryed to pull it off but it seemed to want to stay with me. I sighed, "Oh fine. You can come with me." I could have swore I saw the snake smile.


It was morning and the birds were chirping loudly. I kept walking even though I was starving. Stupind me I forgot to get food!!! I cursed at myself and tryed to find something to eat. All around I looked but all I found was a couple pine cones. I sighed then continued walking down the path.


It was dark before I decided to stop. The snake was around my shoulders now and kept licking my ear with it's tongue. I sat against a tree and wondered what I ever did to deserve this. Oh yah, now I remember. I was born. Anger whelled up inside Mayamaru as she thought of the injustice. She was so consumed in anger she didn't notice the snake slithering off her shoulder and strike at something. She heard a soft squeak and saw the snake eating a mouse. "Well at least one of us gets to eat." She said and looked up at the moon. For some reason Mayamaru always like night better then day. It was so much more peaceful. She closed her eyes and started to relax and breathed in the night air.


She woke up and realized she was tied to something. Mayamaru looked around and saw that rope surronded her and she was ontop of a horse of some kind. Her snake friend was across her leg and seemed alittle scared and heavy with a lump in it's belly. She tried to get out but was slapped by something. She looked behind her to see a dark man with long white hair, googles on his head, and in a brown T-shirt and torn geans. He also had dark blue eyes. "Try to get away and you'll be killed." He barked at her and she just glared. "What do you want with me?" She demanded and was answered by another slap to the face. " Don't talk slave!!" What??!! When was I a slave??!! Oh once he unties me he is sooo dead!!! Mayamaru though as she put a hand on her sheeth to get her sword ready. It wasn't there; she looked around and nearly fell off. Then man just sighed and said "You won't be needing those where you're going." Mayamaru just sat still and tried to think of a way out of this mess, but she thought of no solution.

I woke up and was in chains. The man that called me a slave was standing outside my cell; he was staring at me and a man next to him was saying "...worth all that money? How strong is she?" The new man asked him. "She is extemely strong and powerful." He said and was handed what looked like a large amount of money. What the hell are they talking about? I tried to get up but the chains held me down hard against the wall. The two men finally noticed I was awake and laughed. "She's spirited, I'll give you that." The other man said. He had on a green hat with brown hair, brown eyes, and a beard. He was very fat and wore a dark green coat that was two sizes too small. He had on dark green pants and black hiking boots. I got even more furiouse and this time I broke one of the chains and charged at them. They both jumped back and the white haired man slapped me again, but this time so hard I was slamed to the ground. "Like I said, very strong." He replied to the other man. My head felt like it was on fire, but I felt something moving along me. I looked to see the snake slithering toward them. Good job. Bite them, bite them!! Mayamaru thought. The snake kept slithering and slithered right up the fat man's leg and bite him on the arm. He screamed and threw the snake at the wall. There was a thud and it didn't move. The white haired man went over to see what was wrong but I got up and tripped him. He fell and didn't move and I stole his keys and unlocked the cell door. I ran over, picked up the snake, and started running as fast as I could.

Everywhere around me I heard alarms going off. I was rather pleased with myself. I started looking for the room where they kept all the weapons, hoping my sword and bow would be there.

I found it along with two other guys. They charged at me and I waited then just stepped aside and they ran right into a wall. Wow, it's really hard to find good bad guys these days. Morons!! I grabbed my weapons and continued running.

I heard footsteps behind me and yelling. I smiled and picked up speed. I was always a fast runner and a good fighter.

(Flashback)
"Come one Mayamaru. Show me what you got." A bully yelled at her. She picked up a stick and prepared to fight him. He charged and she dodged and stabbed him in the shoulder. "OOOWWWW!!" He yelled and tried to pull the stick out. Mayamaru just laughed and ran off. You got what you deserved creep. She ran right home and found that her mother and father were not home again. She sighed and went up to her room to play with her pet hamster.

The next day she found a bag with something dead in it at her door step. She openned it and there was her best and only friend with a note attached. You were dishonorable yesterday. Here is what you get from dishonor, death. The note said and it was signed by her mother and father.

(Present)
Mayamaru shook the memory away. I had the worst parents in the history of the world. The parents from hell. She continued speeding down the halls, trying to find the way out when someone grabbed her from the shadows and gagged her with a rag. She couldn't move. Her sences fading as she saw footsteps coming toward her and evil laughing. She lost conciouseness.

I woke up and felt a rag in my mouth and I was being dragged on the floor. I looked and saw the white haired man and he was dragging me toward a cell. I looked and saw that I still had my weapons and grinned evilly. I wretched my hands free and jumped out of reach and unsheethed my sword. He was caught off guard and that's all I needed. I charged at him with a wordless cry and sliced his throut. "You're slave just killed you." Mayamaru said then turned and ran down a hall.

She encountered people left and right and all of them met the blade of her sword. She was covered in blood but she didn't care. Theses people treated her like a slave and they deserved it.

She saw the doorway and was overjoyed. She ran faster, only to bump into the fat, green man. He growled at her and started making these weird signs with his hands and said Earth Style: Breaking Bolders!!! His hands became huge and grabbed at her. She didn't know what was happening but she quickly dodged and wondered what the hell she was up against. He roared at her and grabbed at her again. She once again dodged and stabbed at him with a dagger, but the blade broke. The man laughed madly and hit her against a wall with his other hand. "That won't work against me, Mayamaru. It's pointless." The man said and laughed madly. Mayamaru felt slithering inside her back pocket and the snake came out and bit the man's hand. Again he cried out in pain but didn't wretch free of the snakes grip. What the hell is this guy???!! Mayamaru thought angrily to herself; then she heard foot steps running through the tunnels towards them. Mayamaru prepared to be captured once again but all of a sudden she was free from the man's masive hands and was on the ground. Infront of her stood someone she did not reconize at all. He was so fast she didn't even see what he looked like. He charged at the man and the next thing Mayamaru knew the man was on the ground with blood spirting out of his neck. She sighed with relife then cringed in pain. Danm, he broke one of my ribs!!! The pain was so much that she started losing conciouseness. She saw a pair of feet heading toward her and could feel herself being lifted up, but she was engulfed by blackness.

For the first time in the last few days I woke up in a warm room. My head had a wet rag on it and my ribs felt alittle better. I looked around and saw I was in a hamock; around me were lots of candles and my weapons were next to me on the ground. I also saw my snake friend curled up on my stomach. What happened? Where am I? Mayamaru thought to herself. She tried to get up but her ribs said otherwise. I won't be able to leave for awhile with protesting ribs like that. She heard soft laughing and she looked to see the person that saved her.


He had long, raven black hair that hung down to his back, he had the most beautiful blue eyes that Mayamaru had ever seen, he wore a black robe and what looked like a white shirt underneath it. He smiled and gave Mayamaru the food he had made for her and helped her sit up. She gladly took the food and started shoveling the stuff down. He then grabbed the snake and put it on the ground and set a mouse near it. He was happy to hunt again.


Breakfast was over quickly and Mayamaru was determined to find out who this man was. She was about to open her mouth but he beat her to the punch. "Hello Mayamaru, I am Kimikage." He said in one of the most beautiful voices that Mayamaru ever heard. "You...you know my name?" She asked him. "Yes, I was working undercover for my village in that place. I was supposed to blow it up, but you set the alarms off and I came looking for you. Luckly I found you before the fat man could squish you like a pancake." They both laughed and Mayamaru contined asking questions about this man. She found out he was a ninja from the Village Hidden In The Fire, and that he was 14 years old. She kept asking questions all through the night and Kimikage ansered them all. She eventually got tired and nodded off and Kimikage helped her back down into bed and put her gently on her pillow. "Good night Mayamaru." He said as kissed her forehead.

Mayamaru woke up and saw food near her bed. On it was a lovely white rose and a note.
Mayamaru,
I had to go to my village today to report to them. I'll be back soon. Enjoy the food.
Love,
Kimikage
She smiled at the note for some reason and started eating.

Later when he got back he told her that the village ordered him to stay with her. She smiled and was happy about this. Kimikage was the only person that really seemed to accept her and she liked being accepted. This time; instead of her asking the questions he asked them. He kept of asking about where did she learn to fight, what kind of things did she like, and why was that snake following her. Until he asked "Mayamaru, how did you get captured?" He seemed curiouse and not wanting to hurt her, but he did. He could see in her eyes that it was a sore subject. "I...I was unwanted back home. No one cared for me...not even..." she cut off and started crying. Kimikage ran over and sat next to her to comfort her. Mayamaru kept crying and wouldn't stop.

She cryed herself to sleep and the next morning she found that Kimikage was asleep next to her. He never left her all night long. She shook him awake and tried to get up, but her ribs still didn't allow it. She flinched and layed back down. She looked at Kimikage and he looked back and the one question that was bothering Mayamaru all day long she finally asked. "Kimikage, why did you save me?" He looked away and the words seemed to get caught in his throat. Finally he said "Because I was ordered to. Nothing more." She shyed away from his harshness and he got up to get some breakfast. He's lying; I can tell. Why did he save me? She didn't understand it at all. All of a sudden the door busted open and a man she reconized came rushing at her and put a bag over her head. She saw white hair and glasses and wondered how her captor survived. She lost conciouseness.


I awoke but didn't want to open my eyes. I just wanted to lay here and imagine I was still with Kimikage in his nice house. Even so I wanted to see where I was; where the white haired man had taken me. I reluctantly opened my eyes and looked around. Once again I was in chains and a cell. Why am I the one that people always kidnapp? Pick on someone else for a change!!! I thought to myself and tried to get up. My ribs sent waves of pain everywhere and I got back down. I looked and saw the white haired my staring at me from the cell door. "Why are you doing this to me??" I demanded and was answered by a slap to the face. "Can't you ever learn to be quiet? Besides slave, you shouldn't even have a right to talk after what you and your boyfriend did to me." Mayamaru flinched at 'boyfriend' and noticed the mans voice was very crackly. She remembered she sliced his throut and was glad she was causing him pain. "Wipe that grin off your face!! What are you so happy about? Huh, ANSWER ME!!" The man ordered her. "Can I actually talk this time or are you going to slap me again?"
True to his nature he slapped her. "Don't play smart with me. Stay here this time." He got up and left and locked the door behind him. Mayamaru got straight to work on thinking how to get out of this mess. As soon as she tried to break the chains she got electricuted and blacked out.

When she awoke again she had a bag over her head and was being carried by someone. "Uukk." Was all she could say. She was slapped again and she knew who was carrying her. "Shut up you stupid slave girl!!" He barked at her. She stayed quiet and listened to the sound of his footsteps as they hit the stone floor and bounced off that walls.

They came to a room and he yanked the sack off of my head. I looked around and was blinded by a bright light. When my eyes adjusted I saw two people I thought I was well ride of. "M...mother? Father?" Mayamaru stuttered.

Mayamaru stared in horror at the two people that were the cause for all her suffering. Not only now but through her whole life. My mother had long, raven black hair and red eyes and always wore a white robe with a sign that meant 'snake.' My father had short, brown hair, brown eyes, and wore a dark, sea blue robe that had the sign 'rain' on it. My mother walked up and slapped me across the face. "What is wrong with you?? Can't you ever stop causing trouble??!!" She was pratically at tears she was so angry and her face was pure red. My father stepped up and comforted my mother while I just let my tounge fly. "Can I stop causing trouble??!! What's wrong with me??!! What about you!!?? You hated me from the start and even when I did nothing to you both of you shunned me. You gave me a BOY'S name when you knew how sacred a name was in our family!! Thanks to you I'll always be unwanted and unaccepted ANYWERE!! All because I was a girl when I was born!!! I..." The white haired man covered my mouth and nodded at my mother and father. They both were staring at me with complete disgust. "You never were even supposed to be born, Mayamaru!!! You are unwanted because you were not planned, not expected!!! You are not supossed to exist!!" My mother screamed at me and she started slapping me across the face. "It's time me fixed that mistake." My father said as he pulled a sword out from under his robe and raised it above my head. "By thankful that we'll give you a burial; though you don't deserve it." He swung down at me and I closed my eyes waiting for the end. Go ahead. If it will make you happy, go ahead and kill me. I don't care.

Mayamaru waited and waited for the final blow and heard the sword coming toward her. People say that when you're about to die your whole life flashes before your eyes; they're wrong. Only all the wrong you did or all the times you were hurt...oh wait that is my life. Getting hurt and doing things wrong; that's me. Then I saw Kimikage, that night when he slept next to me. I remembered his eyes as he stared at me and I cursed myself for not seeing it. He saved me because he likes me!!! And here I am about to die. I'm so sorry Kimikage...good bye. The sword came closer and Mayamaru took in her last breath and prepared for the impact. Closer it came and it was about to strike her when she heard metal clash against metal. "Pardon the interuption but I don't think you want to be killing her if I was you." Mayamaru instantly reconized the voice and opened her eyes to see Kimikage.

"You came!!" She whispered to herself. He had block the sword with his own and was standing infront of her. The white haired man was unconciouse on the floor. Kimikage knocked the sword out of my fathers hands and while they were disracted he untied me and scooped me up into his arms and ran down the hall.

Mayamaru couldn't remember a more happier time in her life. "Thank you." She said as she hugged him tight. "Anytime." He said and she blushed alittle. "Were you ordered to save me again?" She asked jokingly and this time he blushed. "No, this one is on the house." He held her closer to him and continued running through the tunnels.

We heard footsteps behind us but we kept going. I didn't care we were in danger; he had saved me of his own free will so that must mean he likes me. He kept running and we got outside in only a few seconds. He stopped and turned around and threw a sleek black knife with a piece of paper attached to it at the entrance to the cave and blew it up. The rocks topulled ontop of one another and the entrance became blocked. "Come one, Mayamaru, you're probabuly starving. I got breakfast waiting at home, along with your snake friend." He said as he moved her to his back and took off running. We are going home.

I was so happy. Happier than I've been in my whole life. Kimikage and I were heading home and what will happen there; who knows? As long as we are together I am happy. Mayamru thought as Kimikage carried her across hills, never slowing, never stopping. All of a sudden there was an explosion and we were thrown onto the ground.

I got up and saw Kimikage was bleeding bad. I ran over and tore some of my shirt and wrapped it around him. He was coughing up blood and could just barely keep his eyes open. I looked around and saw the white haired man standing on a high rock above us. He had a wicked grin on his face and was holding another sleek knife with a piece of paper attacked to it. "Mayamaru...go on...without me." He coughed out and started losing conciouseness. "OVER MY DEAD BODY!! DON'T YOU DARE DIE ON ME KIMIKAGE!!!" Mayamaru yelled at him as tears ran down her face. From the bolder she heard evil laughing and the man was grinning at them. "Love, what else could this be. *laughs again* It will be a lot better for both of you if I just end it right here." He threw the knife at them; by instinct Mayamaru picked up Kimikage and moved him somewhere safe. Something inside her told her to fight back. You beat this guy before. Make sure this time he STAYS DEAD!! A voice inside her yelled and she could feel power building up inside her. Her green eyes turned red and her black hair started blowing when there was no wind and her clothes started flowing. Let's save him!!! The voice ordered and Mayamaru charged at the man.

When he saw what was coming at him he was shocked. "What the hell are you??!!" He screamed at her and tried to defend himself but failed and was torn to pieces by Mayamaru's rage. She tore and tore until he was nothing but piles everywhere, and she was covered in blood. She started losing her power and was feeling weak. She despiratly ran toward Kimikage and fainted and she fell onto his chest. "Mayamaru...you..." Silence.

Mayamaru woke up with a start. She looked around and saw it was very late and she saw Kimikage's bandages were drenched in his blood. Mayamaru gasped and put him onto her back and ran as fast as she could toward the house. "Kimikage...don't you dare die on me!!!" She silently ordered.

She got to the house and got straight to work tending to his wounds. She got bandages and made as many herbal remedies she could with the herbs around the house. All the time he just kept his eyes closed and his heart barely kept beating.

Three days passed and she never left his side. He seemed to be getting stronger but still stayed unconciouse. Mayamaru had no idea what else to do...she did everything she could and now just had to wait. Damn it Kimikage!!! What did you do to me? If you die...I don't know if I'll be able to live after that. She thought to herself as she replaced the dry rag on his head with a wet one.

That night Mayamaru stared out the window and saw the moon smiling down on her. It seemed to encourage her; saying he'll be alright, but she didn't calm down. She looked toward him on his bed and cryed. She couldn't stand it if he died. He was the only one that accepted her and she didn't want to lose him. No...I won't lose him. He wouldn't leave me EVER!!! She tried to encourage herself but had no luck.

Mayamaru was walking through a tunnel; it was pitch black and the only light was the torch she held in her hand. She walked and walked through it; determined to reach the end. Not knowing where or when that will happen but she kept walking. All of a sudden she heard "Mayamaru help!!!" She turned and saw the white haired man holding a knife to Kimikage's throut. Slightly cutting into him. She turned and ran toward them but they kept moving back as soon as she got close. The cave grew darker and she could just barely see him now. "KIMIKAGE!!!!!!!" She yelled then she heard a slice and a body hit the ground. The white man came out of the shadows, draging Kimkage's body behind him. She screamed a wordless cry and fell to her knees while the man laughed madly.

"NNNNOOO!!!" Mayamaru screamed and sat up from her chair. She looked around and the sun was just over the horizon. She kept panting heavily till she saw Kimikage on the bed; still alive and still fighting to stay that way. She walked over and switched out his bandages and tryed to fight back the fears that the nightmare aroused inside her. He groaned and opened his eyes. He seemed distant at first then the light came to his eyes when he saw Mayamaru. He quickly sat up and backed away alittle. "What are you?" He asked with alittle fear hidden in his voice. Mayamaru didn't know how to reply because she did not know herself. What AM I? I don't even know. "WHAT ARE YOU?? ANSWER ME!!!" He demanded and Mayamaru flinched back at his anger. "I...I don't know!!!" She screamed at him and started crying again. He seemed to soften and walked over to her and hugged her tightly. "It's okay...calm down. I'm sorry." He comforted her but she just kept crying. "The...the only ones who...might know what I am are..." She tried to say but the memories that the sentence brought were too painful and she choked on her words. "...are the people in your village?" He finished for her and she nodded. He looked away and became distant again; lost in his thoughts. "Well, I guess it's time that I saw where you came from then." He finally said as he leaned down and kissed her on the forehead. "But...what they did to me...I..." He covered her mouth with his hand and hushed her. "I'm with you and I swear nothing will happen to you." He said and kissed her again. She seemed to relax and knew that arguing with him was pointless. "Alright. We'll leave tomorrow." She finally agreed.

It was a blistering hot morning but I didn't care. I was too caught up in my thoughts to notice. I followed Kimkage as he led the way to my village. I was beyond nervous. What if my parents are there? What if no one knows what I am. What if they try to kill me if I come close to them. Mayamaru worried to herself. Kimikage seemed caught in his thoughts too so the only sound was the soft hissing of my snake around my shoulders. I tried to remember all the books I've read to see if any mythical creatures fit the description of what happened to me, but I came up with nothing. What the hell am I?

It was getting late and Kimkage was looking around for a place to camp. I blindly followed him; still lost in my thoughts. We eventually decided on staying under an oak tree. I finally snapped awake and started making the fire. The whole day none of us ever spoke and I decided it was enough. "You're not scared of me are you, Kimikage?" I asked and he didn't even look up as the light from the fire danced over his face. "No...I'm not," he finally answered, "I'm just...worried about you." He said and finally looked her in the eyes. "Worried about me? Why?" Mayamaru asked with alittle amusement in her voice. "Because...because I don't want that...thing to take control over you, or for it to hurt you." He looked away when he said the last part and I moved over and sat next to him. "I won't let it control me; it won't even dare to hurt me either. Because if it even thinks about it I will show it so much rage that it will wish it was never even created." They both laughed and layed down around the fire; the wolves howled and they fell asleep.

As Kimikage led the way to my village I started filling him in on all of our costums. I told him never to insult people in the colorful robes, don't eat any meat in public because animals are very important to my people, and above all STAY NEAR ME!! I may have been exiled but I knew the place better than him and I didn't want him to get in trouble with anyone.

We reached the village a few hours later and got a room at an Inn. It was getting dark and I hid my face from the Inn keeper, Anna. She always hated me and was, I'm sure, very happy when I left.

The room was small and damp and smelled like old socks. I pluged my nose and opened a window to let it air out. I looked in the closet and pulled out some nice robes that Kimikage and I could wear to blend in better. Him with his cloak and me with my torn and bloody clothes; we would stand out like sore thumbs. I grabbed a purple robe that had 'flower' on it and the snake was wrapped around my shoulders. He wore one that had the symbol 'tiger' and was bright orange.

We left and started looking for the village elder. He was a kind old man to everyone, everyone but me. He hated me almost as much as my parents did, and it drove me crazy. I never did anything to him; yet he absolutely despises me.

We found his house and I opened the door and stepped inside with Kimkage following close behind, sword at the ready. We found the old man asleep in his bed. He had long white hair that hit the floor when he stood, a white beard that was about half the length as his hair, and he wore a pure black robe that had 'raven' on it. Kimikage and I surronded him and I held my sword to his neck and shook him awake. He opened his eyes and saw Kimikage first then me. He sat up and glared at me and tried to knock my sword away while saying "Danm it, Mayamaru, why can't you just die like you are supposed to and stop causing all this trouble?" I just laughed and held my sword tighter around his neck. "When every baby is born they are examined. When I was born..." I tried to finish but he inturrupted with "Which never should have happened. You're an abomination!!! You should just..." Before he could finish Kimikage pulled him up even to him and glared at him. "When you examined her did you find anything special about her??" He demanded then dropped him back, or more threw him, down into his bed. "Well, Mayamaru, is appears you got a nice little slave don't you?" I slapped him with all my might and made him bleed. "If you want to live to see sunrise, I suggest you answer the question. You old fart!!" He grumbled then said "No, because you were never examined. You never were suppossed to exist. You didn't deserve it; your parents didn't see the point when you were suppossed to die anyway..." He got another slap to the face and a punch after that. "Why don't you people get it through your thick heads? I WAS BORN!!! Sorry to dissapoint you but I was; deal with it because I'm not going to die anytime soon, and I swear I will destroy this place that treated my like dirt. ALL BECAUSE I WAS A GIRL!!!" She sliced his arms and left him bleeding.

Outside Kimikage was fumming but calmly asked "If he didn't examine you and he doesn't know what you have inside you what now?" I looked at him and he instantly understood but didn't like it. "Come on, are you insane?? Don't go to THEM!!!" He was worried sick now, but he cut off after he saw the look Mayamaru gave him. "It's about time I had a family reunion, and besides won't they just be ticked off that I am still alive? I was to see their faces." She said as she started walking off toward the Inn; Kimikage reluctanly followed close behind. This should be interesting.

Mayamaru and Kimikage left the Inn the next morning and went to Mayamaru's former home. "Why are we here?" He asked and she just laughed. "I left something here that I could use." I said as I crawled under my bed and looked for the lose floor bored. I looked around and finally found what I was looking for. I pulled out a nice, but unusual sword. It was curved and had a deep black blade, the hilt was read with black striped and it had a deep crimson red diamond in the middle of it. I crawled back out and showed the sword to Kimikage. "Where did you get that?" He asked as he gazed in awe at the sword. "It was mine, but when I left I couldn't grab it. I've been wanting to get it back for some time. It will help in the fight." She grabbed the holder for in and quickly slid it in and removed her old long sword. "Lets go."

They left the village about and hour ago and walked through the woods. "Mayamaru, how are you going to find them anyway? You have no idea where they are!!" Kimikage worried to much. Mayamaru just laughed really hard. "I know where they are; they'll be someplace hiring henchmen to kill me." Kimikage's eyes popped out of his head. "TO KILL YOU??!! WHY AREN'T YOU MORE WORRIED??!!" He was screaming and Mayamaru turned to see him nearly having a heart attack. "Look, you okay? You seem to be worrying to much. Don't worry; my parents with hire people then I will defeat them and find my parents and demand to know what is in me." He didn't calm at all. "What if they don't know? Or if they did what makes you think they would tell you?" He demanded. Mayamaru hopped he wouldn't ask. "If...if they don't know I'll just leave. If they won't tell me...I'm sure that if I promised them that I would fulfill their greatest wish they would tell me..." Kimikage didn't get it at first then he started shaking his head. "NO!! NO!! I WON'T LET YOU!!!" He grabbed her and she started crying. "You...you aren't going to be with me when that happens, Kimikage. This is where you and I say bye to eachother." She turned around and gave him a kiss on the lips then slipped out of his grip and ran off. He tried to chase after her, but she was too fast. "Mayamaru, NOOOO!!!" He yelled as she disappeared from sight. I'm so sorry.

Mayamaru kept running, never stoping, never slowing. She just kept going all through the night and into the next morning. She reached a small village and finally stopped at an Inn for the night. The Inn keeper seemed to stare at her weird then when she left he looked at a poster and ran over to a man in the corner and pointed at me. Looks like my parents got here. Bring it on!! She thought to herself as she went up to her room, followed closely by the man in the corner.

Mayamaru, where did you go??!! Kimikage yelled to himself as he tried to follow her trail, but the rain that started to fall was washing it away. Danm it!! Can't someone be on my side for once? He cursed at himself and continued along the trail to the next village. I need a ninja hound here. Good thing I know where one is. He picked up speed and turned into the forest, looking for the hound he knew.

Mayamaru cleaned her sword after slicing the man's throat. "To easy." She said to herself and laughed. The man was on the ground, dead, and blood oozed from his throat in spirts. She picked him up and threw him out the window and started cleaning up when the Inn Keeper came in. "What the hell...you, OUT!!!!" He ordered Mayamaru when he saw the mess. She left after giving him a good slice on the arm. "That's no way to treat a lady." She said as she stepped out the door. She went and purchased a map and crossed out this village. Nope not here. So the nearest village is...the Village Hidden In The Fire. She winced at the pain that her heart felt when she remembered this was the village...Kimi...he was from. She couldn't even think his name. She walked out the village with the moon guiding her from above. I will find them and they will regret making me do this to him... She thought to herself as she disappeared into the darkness of the night.

Mayamaru continued walking through this dark forest and she started hearing voices. "Why did you leave me Mayamaru?" She looked around but all she saw were the trees. "Mayamaru you're killing me; come back to me, Mayamaru, COME BACK!!" She started falling into a black abis and screamed as loud as she could. She was caught by someone and saw Kimkage smiling at her; then he started changing and grew horns and his face turned red. "Why did you leave me, Mayamaru? You killed me inside, and now I'm going to kill you!!" She was thrown back into the pit of despare and screamed again.

"NOOOO, KIMIKAGE!!!!!" Mayamaru sat up and realized it was just another dream. She looked around and saw she was laying down on another tree branch. She laughed as memories of just a few weeks ago flooded through her mind. Her snake friend slithered onto her shoulder and started licking her with its forked tounge. She got up and continued on the path; it took all of her will not to turn around and run straight back into the arms of the man she loved. I'm so sorry Kimikage...forgive me. She continued as water rolled off her face, but it wasn't rain.

Kimikage kept running through the forest until he came to a small hut that smelled rancide and old. He walked up to the door and knocked on it gently. Out of a smaller door came a gray wolf with a scare over its right eye. "Kimikage," it said, "It's been awhile. I guess you need my help and you're not just here for a friendly visit right?" It said as Kimikage crouched down to eye level. "I need your help tracking down someone called Mayamaru. I really..." The wolf growled and snarled. "Mayamaru!!! I've heard of her; she destroyed her village for no reason and caused pain to her poor parents!!" Kimikage shook his head. "No you're wrong. I know her; she never did anything but try to make her parents proud. They hated her ever since she was born and they are the ones that want her dead, and they are hiring people to kill her. I need your help to save her." The wolf gave Kimikage a weird look. "You love her don't you?" Kimikage stood up and looked away. "With all my heart; Ryumaru, I need your help. Please help me find her!!" He turned back toward the wolf and it sighed. "I have anything better to do, and she is obviously very important to you. I will help." Kimikage's eyes light up and he gave Ryumaru a piece of her clothing for him to find a scent. "I got it. Come one." Kimikage followed Ryumaru through the woods; running at full speed and fierce determination in his eyes. Mayamaru I'm comeing!!!

Mayamaru walked all the way to the next village and gazed in awe at the village gate. It was larger that the biggest tree in the forest and made of wood with a interesting symbol on it. She walked inside and tried to blend in, but eveyone around her just started at her. I can't take them all if they decide to attack me. I better be careful. She kept walking and saw a wanted poster, pinned up on a wall. She ran over and tore it down and read it:
Wanted For Murder
Name: Mayamaru Uzikage
Age: 15
Crime: Destroyed village and killed innnocent traders
Description: Black hair, green eyes, wears robes, armed and exteremely dangerouse
Know Accomlicess: Kimikage Tyzana
Reward: 100,000 Ryo
Reward Location: Village Hidden In The Fire, report to -kage
Mayamaru panacked and started running away. They're spreading lies about me!! People will be trying to kill me...or worse; him. She started heading for the kage's office and hopped he or she knew where the reward was; maybe then she could stop these lies once and for all!!!! She kept running through the village and prayed to god no one would reconize her, and hopped that after this she could return to her beloved.


Mayamaru kept running through the village till she made it to the kage's office.

the kage was a woman with fire red hair, black eyes, and she wore a black dress with red lace. "You're a little stupid aren't you, Mayamaru? Coming straight up to me when you're wanted for murder." Mayamaru closed the door behind her and said "I have not murdered anyone." The Kage laughed and nearly fell over. "Don't you remember? You murdered several traders and destroyed your village!! You deserve to die." She instantly stopped laughing and pulled out a sword. "I did not come here to fight you, great lady, I simply wanted the adress to where the reward is being given." The Kage seemed to soften for a second then threw her sword at Mayamaru. It stabbed her in the shoulder and pinned her against the wall. Mayamaru flinched but didn't scream. "Why should I tell worthless trash like you anything? You are a A class criminal; you will die today." She said as she drove the sword in further. Mayamaru smoothered her scream and started crying. "I wouldn't do that if I were you." She warned. The Kage just laughed again, "What can a child like you do to a great ninja like me?" She asked and drove the sword even further into her. Mayamaru lifted her head up and the Kage stummbled back when she was her eyes. "Because...I will KILL YOU!!!" Mayamaru screamed and pulled the sword out and the wound healed instantly. She felt the same power as before surging through her and her hair started flowing once again. "Just tell me where they are and I will spare your life." She offered and the Kage just backed up more and fell onto her desk. "They're...they're located on the east side of town. In a old warehouse." She stammered out and grabbed her sword. "Thank you great lady I'll be on my way now. " Mayamaru said as she walked out the door.

Kimikage was shocked when he saw where the trail led. "The village!! Ryumaru, are you sure she's here?" He asked the wolf and it started toward the village gait. "I'm possitive; this nose never fails." Kimikage followed the wolf through town and soon came the the Kage's office.

"Kimikage!!! You have a lot of nerve showing up here right after your little girlfriend!!" Kimikage gasped and ran toward her and grabbed the top of her dress. "Where did she go??!! Tell me!!!" The Kage laughed and hit him against the wall. "She went to go find her parents. To bad she's walking straight into a trap." The Kage started laughing and Kimikage lost his temper. He stabbed her with his sword and pressed it into her hard. "Tell me or I swear I will kill you." The Kage grinaced and realayed the address to where she sent Mayamaru and groaned when she realized she just got beat by two kids in the same day. Kimikage left and him and Ryumaru started heading toward the warehouse, and...to Mayamaru. Hang on Mayamaru, I'm comeing!!!

Mayamaru kept walking toward the building that the Kage had told her. She wasn't sure if this was a trap or not, but if it was, she doubted that she couldn't get out of it with this mysterious power that she weilded.

Mayamaru came to a room that was all boxes and chains hung on the walls. She looked around and saw that no one was here. Suddenly chains wrapped around her and started burning her. She screamed and fought to break them but they kept burning her. A man dressed in pure black appeared followed my the two people that she hated most, but she needed their help the most. "Finally, we have you, Mayamaru. On this day you will breath no more!!!" Her mother said as she pulled out a sword and aimed it toward her. "Any last words?" She taunted her and stepped forward. "Yes, actually. I want to know if you know what power is inside me." Her mother laughed and nearly dropped the sword she was holding. "What power?? You don't have any power at all!!" Mayamaru picked her head up and stared at her. "Then what do you call...THIS??!!" She started realising her full power and the chains suddenly seemed to fall around her. "What...what the hell are you doing?? YOU MONSTER!!!" Her mother accused as Mayamaru lunged at her with black chakura surronding her. "GETTING EVEN!!!!!" She yelled as she grabbed her mother and punched her against the wall. Her father suddenly was behind her and held a sword above his head and swung. Before it moved an inch Mayamaru appeared behind him and kicked him right next to her mother. "Don't you know...when the slave is set free the first thing it does...IS KILL THE MASTERS!!!" She swipped at them and knocked then across the room and they were bleeding bad. Suddenly out of nowhere squads of ninja were surrouding her and started wrapping her up in chains again. She fought back with all her might but couldn't break them. Suddely three ninja dressed in dark robes appeared and layed pieces of paper around her. One in front and two on her sides. The leader said "Ninja Art: SEAL!!" The other two did the same and Mayamaru's power started fading. She was going to lose now and she would never get to say good bye to Kimikage or know what that power was. She fell to the floor and couldn't move. Her mother and father came over with swords at the ready. Then they started stabbing her in the arms and legs, but she didn't scream. They slashed and slashed but she didn't scream. She didn't feel anything at all and she started slipping away. They...they won. I'm dieing by their hand. Good bye...Kimikage. I...love you. She closed her eyes and she felt herself slip into the blackness she knew she could never escape.

Mayamaru kept slipping away into the blackness, she couldn't see or hear anymore, and she couldn't feel the blades piercing her skin. All she knew was she was dieing and she loved Kimikage more that anything else. Out of the darkness Mayamaru saw something. A giant, bird looking creature and it came toward her. "What are you doing?? You're giving up just like that? What about him??!!" The bird spoke and Mayamaru was stunned; then the fimilar pain she felt in her heart returned. "I see no more point in living. Kimikage probabuly hates me, I have no idea what I am, and I'm wanted by many people!! If I lived I would just get captured and put into jail!!! What's the point?" She replied to the bird. "Well, I know for a fact that Kimikage doesn't hate you; on the contraty, he's looking for you like mad. And you may be wanted yes, but you have me and I will not let you be put into jail. As for what you are...you are Mayamaru the Rogue. You left your village and fought to survive and that has awoken me iside of you. You are the holder of one of the legendary guardians of the world; the most powerful one of all." The bird seemed to lift her spirits when it told her about Kimikage and felt the power inside her once again whell up. "What are you?" She asked as the bird unfurlled its wings. "I am the Raven of Death!! The most powerful guardian the world has ever seen!!! Now don't you give up...I'm breaking the seal but it will take some time. I need you to hold on as long as you can and I'll get those two away from you. I promise." The Raven of Death squawked loudly and Mayamaru could fell herself coming back to reality. She felt the stabbing pain in her arms and legs and her anger was refulled. "GET...OFF OF ME!!!" She screamed with horrible vemon in her voice as she shot her eyes open, they were a different color once again. "No...impossible!!!" Her mother said and jumped back, followed by her father. The sealing ninja took their positions again and tried to seal her once more but it didn't work this time. She was fighting to get free but the chains still held her tight and burned against her skin. "KIMIKAGEEEEEE!!!!" She screamed and fought back even harder. Suddenly the door broke open and there stood a great, gray wolf with a scare and a man standing next to it. "MAYAMARU!!!!" He yelled and started slicing down everything in his path. He got the people holding the chains, the sealers, and he aimed for her parents too. They fought back with all their might, but Kimikage was enraged and could not be stopped. "DANM YOU ALL TO HELL FOR WHAT YOU DID TO HER!!! YOU'LL SUFFER FOR IT...I SWEAR!!!" He threatened and Mayamaru fought back against the seals even harder until..."I am...FREE!!!"

There was a flash of black and Kimikage and her parents turned to see a black raven with green eyes before them. "May...Mayamaru??" They all stammered at the same time and it flexed it's great wings and screached as loud as it could. "You will suffer before me for what you did to me!!! This is the last day you'll ever have!!!" It screamed and Kimikage stepped aside as the raven lunged at the mother and father, he heard tearing sounds and blood splattered everywhere and you heard noises as chunck of meat him the floor.

It was finally over; all this time chasing after them, it's finally over. Mayamaru turned back to normal and turned and started at Kimikage. He stared back in awe and didn't move; then...they ran toward eachother and held eachother after all this time. "Mayamaru...I love you." Kimikage said and kissed her hard. "I love you too...Kimikage." They held eachother for a long time and realized that now they had only one thing to do. "We need to find a place to stay for a while; till all of this blows over." Mayamaru suggested and Kimikage laughed. "How about the Village Hidden In The Stars? I heard there is a wise man there that can help you." Mayamaru laughed this time. "If you want, but I know what I am now and I'm with you; that's all that matters." Together forever.



The End


Journey To The Soul

Journey Into The Soul
(sequal to the Unwanted Girl Ninja That Held A Boy's Name)
Part 1


Mayamaru and Kimikage continued walking down the path, heading for the Village Hidden In The Stars. "So what exactly is this 'wise man' suppossed to help me with?" Mayamaru asked, breaking the hours of silence. "He might know more about what's inside you...what did you call it 'Raven of Death?' Sounds alittle creepy." Mayamaru laughed and replied "Don't look at me, it named itself." Kimikage raised a brow and gave a questioning look. "It named itself? So it's alive?" Mayamaru knodded and started walking alittle faster. "It said that it was the most powerful guardian in the world." Kimikage gave a confused look "Guardian of what?" He walked faster to keep up with Mayamaru. "I don't know...that's all it told me." Kimikage shook his head. "Some guardian...it nearly let you get killed." Mayamaru slapped him in the back of the head. "Hey don't say that...if it wasn't for that Raven you would have busted in on a dead body!!" Kimikage started staring off into the distance and Mayamaru realized she had gone to far on that one. "What's it like?" He finally asked. "What's what like exactly?" He turned toward her "What's it like to die?" That one caught Mayamaru off guard. "You feel blackness all around you; you lose all of your sences and you feel no pain or sorrow; just a weird happiness. It almost makes you want to die...it takes away all of the pain."


They continued walking till nightfall. They made a small camp and Mayamaru curled up with Kimikage; her little snake friend wrapped around her leg.


"Is that them boss?" A bandit asked it's leader. "Yeah, that's them...Mayamaru and Kimikage. They got quite a bounty on their heads..." He trailed off and pulled out his sword. "C'mon...let's make some money." The boss finished as he jumped out of the trees, weilding his sword and the other followed as they charged at Mayamaru and Kimikage.


Part Two:

As the boss bandit charged Mayamaru heard him and was awake in seconds. She pulled out her sword and prepared to fight. The boss was about to strike at her when he stopped dead in his tracks. "Wow...you're...gorgious. You single?" He asked as he just stared at her. She grinaced and stuck out her tongue. "I would never date filth like you...and I have someone thank you." She said it with such force the bandit stepped back a couple of steps. At that time the second bandit came out of the bushes and came along side the other. "Wow boss...she's..." Mayamaru sliced his arm before he could say more and knocked the boss over on his back. "If you were smart, you would leave us alone and say you never even saw us...if I find out that you told where Kimikage and I are..." She stopped and raised her arm the her neck and swipped it makeing a crt sound. "Of course...madam...not one word..." He said as he grabbed his companion who was on the ground holding his arm and ran into the bushes. Kimikage got up and looked around and pulled out his sword. "What happened?" He asked as Mayamaru made her way back to the log..."Nice of you to wake up after the bandits have gone." She started laughing and layed down next to him. "Well there is always next time." He said as he kissed her on the forehead and they both went back to sleep.

Part Three:
Mayamaru and Kimikage continued walking down the path, talking about random things they saw. Mayamaru was still a little puzzled as to what the bandit meant when he said she was 'gorgiouse.' No one had even said she was pretty before...besides Kimikage.

They arrived at a small village to get some supplies and maybe rent a room for the night. Mayamaru put on a black cloak the Kimikage had bought her and they stepped into the village unnoticed. It didn't last though.

"Hey beautiful," a man called, "Want to have some fun tonight?" Mayamaru turned to him and he flinched back. In second she was next to him with a sword pointed at his neck. "You should be more careful of who you call out to...it could get you killed." She laughed as the man squirmed away and started running. "What is up with people? That's the second time..." She though out loud to herself.

They continued walking and soon came to a food shop. Mayamaru grabbed some meat and caught her reflexion in a mirror and she understood why people called out to her. Her black hair was some how more beautiful and longer...before it touched her shoulders but now it was half way down her back. Her face was more angled and more feimine looking and her green eyes seemed to gleam. What...what happened to me? She quickly bought the food and met up with Kimikage that had rented a room. "Do you notice anything different about me?" She asked him. "Umm...you have a streak of white in your hair?" Mayamaru stepped back and saw that he was right. On the left side was a pure white steak of hair..."What the..." She just stared at herself. "Is something wrong?" Kimikage was next to her in seconds and wrapped his arms around her. "Kimikage, I look...different. I look more feminine and wild...I look...beautiful." Kimikage looked at her reflection too and seemed to look at her with new eyes. "How...how did you change like that?" Mayamaru shook her head and tried to accept the fact that now every man she met would probabuly drool over her. I think I'll take being wanted and sent to jail now. She thought to herself as she went to bed.

Part Four:
Mayamaru and Kimikage finaly made it to the Village Hidden In The Starts, but there wasn't much of a welcome. Everyone in the village, as soon as they saw Mayamaru, ran to their houses and locked the doors and closed the windows. "I take it they know me..." She joked and continued walking through the village. "The question is...which you?"

They reached a old hut that looked about falling apart at the back of the village. As soon as they were at the door it opened and revealed a kind looking old man with no hair and a short white beard. He also was wearing a old looking white robe. "Welcome friends....come in come in..." He said as he waved them inside. "Maybe he doesn't know us." Mayamaru whipsered into Kimikage's ear and she stepped inside. "So my friends, what brings you to my lowly and humble hut?" He asked them in the most poliet tone he could muster. "We come here seeking information...about...the Raven of Death." Kimikage said carefully. The old man put down the tea he was holding and sighed. "The Raven of Death....that thing was a great enemy to us once. Over 1000 years ago it tryed to destroy this village, and now YOU BRING IT BACK ONCE MORE!!!" He raised his voice and reached for his sword behind him. "Please," Mayamaru pleaded, "We mean no harm and it will NOT harm you...we just want to know about it and maybe the other guardians..." Mayamaru tryed to calm the man and he took his hand off the pomel of his sword. "So,you're the host of that beast..." He said to Mayamaru and picked up his tea. Suddenly Mayamaru started shaking and she tilted her head to the side and out came something inbetween Mayamaru's voice and a squawk. "Who are you calling a 'beast' old man?" Kimikage looked and realized that stupid bird had taken over...oh great; now that bird will scare the man and we probabuly won't get out of here alive...The old man looked at Mayamaru with unusual eyes and stared at her white streak..."So you've sensed another guardian have you?" Mayamaru and the raven both gasped and leaned forward..."What do you mean, old fart?" He laughed and put his tea down again. "Of course that's you, old enemy, I'll explain if you'll be quiet and leave this village in peace." It seemed to consider this; like it was being tricked somehow. "It can't hurt your chances if you do, but I'm not making any promises..." It trailed off and the old man sighed again. "I guess I can accept that....first I'll tell you what it means when you get that streak of white in your hair..."

Part Five:
"...every host of a guardian has their way of senseing other guardians. Your way is that everytime you come across a guardian, active or not, you get a white streak in your hair. You're very lucky to have met another one. Do you know which one?" He asked out of curiosity. "No...I didn't know I met one." The old man seemed surprised. "Must be dormant...there are six guardians. The first is the Bear of Power. It is the least powerful, but it is still a force to be reckoned with. It is the guardian of Strength and power. The second is the Wolf of Knowing. It is the guardian of the Grassland and of knowledge, and is the calmest of the guardians. Next is the Sea Horse of Beauty. It is the guardian of the sea and of everything that is beautiful. The Sea Horse is also a combination animal, part land horse, part sea horse, and is very tempermental. Then next guardian is the Cheeta of Wind; it is the guardian of the desert and speed. It is the fastest guardian but rarely needs to use it's speed. The next guardian you are fimiliar with...The Raven of Death. Guardian of death and skies..." He tried to finish but the Raven seemed outraged. "I am the most powerful one yet you make is sound like I'm second best!!! This is an outrage!!!" Kimikage seemed to laugh at it's outburst and the old man continued. "You were the most powerful, but now my friend you have major ego issues. There is a new guardian, or rather newly discovered. It is the most ancient and powerful, but it has not been seen in over a millenia. It is the Dragon of Mystery...guardian of volcanos and fire. It is the most unpredictable guardian and that's what makes it dangerous." Mayamaru spoke now without the Raven..."Do you know which one I encountered?" The old man shook his head. "There is no way of knowing..." Suddenly he looked up at Kimikage for the first time..."You!! You...are the guardian she encountered!!!" He stood back as the man dove for him and bowed at his feet. "Here I am being polite to the bird when you are the strongest of them all oh great dragon!!!" Mayamaru pulled him to his feet and demanded and explanation. "He...is the dragon host. He is the one that gave you that streak...I didn't notice the force before till now. It is dormant inside him but it still is in him." Kimikage took a couple of steps back and fell to the floor. "I'm...the...impossible." Mayamaru moved next to him and stared into his eyes. "Don't worry...he could be wrong." The old man heard her and shook his head. "No...I'm not wrong he is the...." Mayamaru covered his mouth. "Shut up old fart before I break my promise..." He instantly was quiet and Mayamaru pulled Kimikage out the door and out of the village.

"I'm the...impossible..." He kept muttering to himself and Mayamaru set up a camp fire and made a bed. "Don't worry, Kimikage, he said it was dormant. Maybe it won't ever come out..." Then she started shaking again and the Raven inturrupted her "...but if it does I'll show it who really is more powerful." Kimikage laughed..."I need to get used to that. Raven can I talk to Mayamaru please?" It nodded and Mayamaru once again took control. "I really need to tell him to stop that...it's annoying." Kimikage stood up with his head hung low..."What did it feel like when it first appeared?" She thought then replied "It felt like something stirred deep inside me." He groaned and slowly raised his head...Mayamaru gasped. His eyes were a deep blue now..."I don't think it's dormant anymore..."

Part Six:

Mayamaru stumbled backward as a blue sort of mist surronded Kimikage. "Kimikage...." She said as she continued stepping back. Kimikage started making horrible sounds...like choking noises and fell to the ground. The mist grew more dense and he started changing. His clothes tore and reveled light blue, shining scales. He started growing bigger and scaley wings came from his back...withing seconds he was a light blue dragon with red spikes on his back and to his tail and deep blue eyes. "Kimikage!!!!" Mayamaru yelled as she ran forward and wrapped her arms around his leg..."You need to control it...Kimikage!!!" She ordered him; tears started flowing down her face and the dragon growled and it's nostrils flared. "What is this? A puny human ordering me??!!" It yelled and flung her against a tree with a flick of it's tail. Mayamaru collided with it but barely felt anything...that thing is controling him....I won't let that happen to him!! She slowely got back up and the dragon stared in disbelife. "How?? How...can a puny girl like you still be moving??!!" It demanded and stomped its foot on the ground. "Becasue...you took over my greatest friend...you're making do things he wouldn't...and for that I don't care how strong you think you are...I WILL SAVE HIM IF IT KILLS ME!!!" She yelled as she started running toward the dragon and black mist surronded her now. Within moments The Raven of Death was facing The Dragon of Mystery...clash of the titans. "Well...Raven, it's been a while. Almost 2 million years I believe. So you chose a little girl as a host? How pathetic." He laughed and small spirts of fire came out of his mouth. "This girl is stronger that you think...and you are a fool for taking over that boy...she loves him and because of that I am compelled to destroy you!!! You realise him and go back to sleep like a good little lizard and no harm will come to you." The Raven added with a sneer and waited for the dragons reaction...he didn't wait long. "What??!! YOU DARE ORDER ME AROUND??!! THE MOST ANCIENT AND POWERFUL GUARDIAN OF ALL??!!" It yelled and swipped its tail as the Raven...so the battle begins...this should be fun.

Part Seven:

The Raven quickly dodged the dragon's attack and took to the skies. He then dived and aimed his beack at the dragon's leg..."Raven!! Don't hurt him, you'll hurt Kimikage too!!" Mayamaru shouted from inside. Oh great...I forgot about him. The Raven thought as he quickly pulled out of his dive and landed a few hundred feet away..."Listen Dragon, I mean you no harm...but my host is worried that you are hurting your's. A boy called Kimikage...she loves him and that's why she ordered you around; to see is she could get him back. No insult to you was intended..." The Raven then did something it rarely ever does...it bowed to the dragon and added "A guardian as powerful as you would understand...right?" The dragon seemed to think it over and said "You're right...she didn't insult me; just trying to help her friend. Very well...I will go back, but if he needs me I will be out again to help." The dragon started changing back and getting smaller and within a few minutes Kimikage was laying on the ground, unconious but still all right. Mayamaru changed back in a flash and ran to help him. "Kimikage, are you alright?" He didn't answer...he was still asleep. Oh no...he better not be...no don't think that Mayamaru just get some water for him!! She angerly ordered herself and she took off running, trying to find water to help him.

She soon found a lake and she grab a empty bottle and started filling it...come one hurry!!! I don't want him to be left alone too long!! "Well look what we got hear boys...a lovely little bird stopping for a drink." Mayamaru turned and saw the same two bandits that had attacked them, and about fifty more. "You are a fool, bandit, for coming after me." She said as she stood up and pulled out her sword..."Careful boss, that little birdy has some fight in her." They jokingly said as several of them stepped forward...swords raised. "Who going to get her first?" One asked, "How about whoever knocks her out fist gets her tonight?" They all agreed and Mayamaru was disgusted when she got their meaning. "You know...'little birdy' is not that far off when you talk about me, but I have to be somewhere so if you'll just move out of the way..." They charged and her and in one swing she took them all down. "...I'll be on my way." She finished and started running away. "Get her!!" They yelled as they sent dogs on her...geez...more dogs. Why is it ALWAYS me they're after? Oh right...I forgot. She kept running but changed direction so they would leave Kimikage alone. She hid in the trees and waited for the bandits to pass by and she dived down and killed them all. "Fools...looks like this birdy just killed all of you dirty rats!!" She cleaned her sword on the grass and started running back to Kimikage, but when she got there...he was no where to be found. No...

Part Eight:

Mayamaru searched around wildly...looking for any trace of where Kimikage could be, but she found nothing but trees and rocks. Why? Why is this happening to him? What did he ever do to deserve this??!! She angrily thought to herself as she ran down the way the bandits disappeared on.

Ukk!! My head...Kimikage thought as he opened his eyes. It took him a few seconds before he realized he was tyed to a wagon and they were going fast through the woods. What the...ouch!! His arm burned like mad...he looked and saw a mark that resembled a dragon on his arm. It burned like crazy. "So you're awake at last sleepy head." A female voice said. He looked as saw a girl about 15 years old with a deep blue dress and a red belt going across her waist. She had a flower necklace one and long blonde hair that went down past her waist. It had a black streak in it and she had bright green eyes. "Who are you...where am I?" He demanded as he tried to break free of the ropes that bound him. The girl started laughing, "Why should I tell you? You'll just run back to that little monster of your's and leave me all alone." He glared at her and his eyes started changing to a deep blue color. "You might want to watch what you say...and for the last time LET ME GO!!" His voice started getting deeper and his skin started to tingle. "Now now little dragon, no need to do that. I'm just joking." She said as she untied him. He started calming down but still glared at her. "Why did you take me?" The girl just smiled and said "Because of what you are. I am the..." She started then out of nowhere a voice cried "YARA!! WE GOT COMPANY!!!" The girl turned and glared then said "I'll be right back...don't move." Then she leaned down and kissed him. She was gone in a flash.

Part Nine:

Mayamaru had found a trail left by a single wagon and had finally caught up with it. She heard talking inside and reconized one of the voices and went nuts. Black mist surronded her and she was fireing shots of air out of her fingers that kept on falling one the wagon. They took Kimikage...they will pay with their lives!! Mayamaru kept following them until a blonde woman came out and stood before her. "You are a fool for attacking...you have no idea what you're..." Suddenly her necklace she wore started glowing and turned black and Mayamaru saw another white streak of hair appear infront of her eyes. "You...you're the Raven host!!" The woman said as a green mist surrounded her now. "And you are the forest guardian host...the bear of power." Mayamaru said as the woman started growing bigger and bigger and black fur erupted everywhere. She was covered in red scares and had blood red eyes and sharp claws. Mayamaru changed into the Raven and it laughed. "You seriously think you can defeat me Bear? You don't know who you're dealing with!!" The Raven attacked and the Bear charged in a full on rage attack. "Raven...kick her @$$!!!" Mayamaru cheered from inside and it smiled. "Of course dear Mayamaru." It whispered as the two of them charged head on.

Kimikage was walking about the wagon, trying to understand what was happening but he kept on swaying and things kept on spinning around. Damn that woman...first she kisses me then she..drugs me!! He fell on the floor then someone came and hit him in the back of the head...knocking him out cold.

The Raven had added serveral new woundes to the Bear's hide, but in turn to did the Bear to the Raven. "The legends weren't joking when they called you The Bear of Power, but you shall fall!!" The Raven's eyes started glowing a bright red and realized a black beam out of it's beack and the Bear was thrown into the trees. "Damn you, Raven, why are you fighting me?" It demanded as it slowely got up and charged at it once more. "Because your host took Kimikage!! You shall die for doing that!!" The Bear laughed and tackled the Raven..."Such fierce words coming out of a over sized chiken." It raised it's paw to strike at the Raven's head. "You are the most foolish...guardian I know. You will fall..." The Raven's eyes glowed again and before it was struck it realized a white beam this time and the Bear fell onto it's side...not moving. The Raven smirked as it changed back to that blonde woman. "I told you so." Mayamaru said as she changed back to normal as well and continued following the wagon. Two guardians met...a whole bunch to go. Hold on Kimikage...I'm coming!!

Part ten:

Mayamaru ran as fast as she could, trying to catch up with the wagon. It came into view and her heart nearly jumped for joy as she picked up speed. Hang on Kimikage...I'm coming!! She was right next to it now and she could hear someone laughing inside. She took out her sword and sliced open the side of the wagon. "What the hell? Who are you?" The man demanded as he charged at her. "You took my friend...I'm your worst nightmare!!!" Mayamaru yelled as she jumped up and kindly sliced off the man's head. She looked and saw Kimikage, out cold, on the ground. That back of his head was bleeding. "Oh no..." She grabbed him and jumped up and started running. Why did they do this I wonder....

Yara stirred and groaned as she realized she was covered in wounds. "That stupid girl...fighting me was...a big mistake. They will pay and then I'll take my man back!!!" She swore to herself and started sniffing the air, trying to find Mayamaru's trail, and started limping along the trail.

Kimkage awoke and found Mayamaru asleep, laying next to him and his head was bound in a white bandage. "Owch..." He said when he placed his hand on it and flinched away from the pain. "You alright?" A voice asked. "Woh...who said that?" Kimkage looked around but saw no one. "It is I, the Dragon of Mystery. That mark on you're arm means you have senced another guardian...that woman that kissed you which by the way you might not want to metion to Mayamaru because when she unleashes her rage...I'm not sure if I'll be able to protect you from it." The voice said again and Kimikage laughed "You have a point there...she does have quite a temper. I just hope that woman is dead or else I would killed her myself!!" He threatened then Mayamaru woke up. "Kimkage...you're alright!!" She exclaimed as she wrapped her arms around him, careful not to hit his head. "Mayamaru, that woman...." She tensed and sat up. "I know, she's a guardian host, and she is dead. That's what she gets for taking you." Kimikage breathed a sigh of relife and hugged her again. "Thank you Mayamaru, I love you so much." Mayamaru kissed him and said "I know. I love you too."

There was a rustling noise in the wounds..."GET YOU'RE DAMN HANDS OFF OF HIM YOU PIG, HE'S MINE!!!!" Came a voice that sounded fimiliar. Mayamaru turned instantly and ran into the woods after it. "OVER MY DEAD BODY YOU b****!!!!!" Kimikage tried to help but his head made him do other wise. "Boy and I glad I'm not that girl that Mayamaru is after." Kimkage smiled "You and me both..."

Part Eleven:

Mayamaru charged at Yara in a blind rage and Yara charged right back. They collided and started clawing, biting, and kicking eachother...both having mist surrounding them. "You Pig, KEEP YOU DAMN HANDS OFF MY MAN!!!" Yara cussed at Mayamaru and threw her against a tree. She just got right back up and kicked her across the face. "HE LOVES ME...NOT SOME **** LIKE YOU!!" Yara was flung the the ground. She screamed in rage and grabbed Mayamaru leg and tore her to the ground. "HE WOULD NEVER LIKE A UNWANTED FREACK LIKE YOU!!!" Mayamaru pulled her hait and dragged her across the ground "A FREACK LIKE ME?? LOOK AT YOU, HITTING ON OTHER WOMAN'S MEN AND THINGING THEY'RE YOURS!! YOU A SPOILED BRAT!!!" Yara tore free and started clawing and Mayamaru's face. "AT LEAST I'M A LOT BETTER THAN YOU AT FLIRTING...BLUSHING AND NEARLY FAINTING IS SO SCHOOL BOY CRUSH!!! AT LEAST WHEN I KISSED HIM...." Mayamaru slapped her across the face and threw her toward a tree so hard it snapped in half. "YOU KISSED HIM??!! YOU LITTLE ****. NOW YOU'RE DEAD!!!" Mayamaru picked her up and flung her against another tree. Yara was bleeding bad but didn't give up and charged at her once again. This time Mayamaru pulled out her sword and stabbed her in the stomach. "Ukk...you B****!!" She clawed at her with her nails again and Mayamaru removed the sword and sliced at her legs and gave her huge, deep gashes. "KIMIKAGE IS MINE AND DON'T YOU EVER FORGET IT!!!" Then Mayamaru stabbed her in the heart and Yara stopped moving. Mayamaru gave a evil smile and sheethed her sword and started walking back to Kimikage. "You go girl. Holy sh!t, you got quite a temper." Mayamaru smiled at the Raven comment. "Where...the hell do you...think YOU'RE GOING??!!" Mayamaru stopped in her trackes and turned to see Yara, still wounded and bleeding, but she just smiled and said "DID YOU REALLY THINK YOU COULD KILL ME? I'M THE BEAR OF POWER....I AM IMMORTAL!!!" She charged at Mayamaru and she was hit straight out of the forest right next to Kimikage again. "Mayamaru, what the..." Out of the trees Yara came but she instantly calmed down when she saw Kimikage. "Hi honey, how's your head?" She smiled and walked toward him. "Get the hell away from me!!!" He yelled at kicked at her. As soon as Yara came close enough Mayamaru grabbed her leg and flung her into a bolder. "See, he hates you. Now go away before I chop off your head and feed it to my snake!!!" Yara glared at her and stood up..."I'm not going. If he doesn't like me fine, but I wish to come with you." Mayamaru glared at her back..."Why should I let you?" Yara smiled evilly, "Because I'm you're older sister and you have to do what I say." Mayamaru stumbled back in shock and her eyes almost popped out of her head. "Wow, didn't see that coming...."

Part Twelve:

Mayamaru, Kimkage, and their newest recruit, Yara, continued walking down the road. Mayamaru was careful not to let Yara anywhere near Kimikage but she barely seemed to notice...all she did was stare at him and blush. Can she really be my sister? My parents hated girls....can she really be who she sayes she is? Mayamaru thought to herself. "So where are we going? You haven't told me yet." Mayamaru glared at Yara and didn't answer for the simple reason of she didn't have an answer herself. They were just wandering and had no idea where they were going. "We're going to try and find the other guardians." Kimkage replied and winked at Mayamaru. "Oh really? I know where one is." They stopped and turned to look at Yara in shock. "Who? Which one?" Kimkage asked her as casually as possible. "I know where the Cheeta of Wind is...it's a longs ways away but I think we can get there." Mayamaru got alittle mad that she knew where the guardian was but didn't show it. "Okay so where is the Cheeta then?" Yara smiled and replied "In the Village Hidden In the Breezes of course. It's a very long ways away but..." She turned and gave a little smile to Kimkage..."I think we can make it there." When she said 'we' is sounded like she was pushing Mayamaru away and meant him and her. She stepped inbetween them. "Fine....to the Village of Breezes. Lead the way....furball." Mayamaru whispered under her breath but Yara didn't seem to hear it. "Okay this way......feather butt." So Smokey the Bear heard me....this should be alittle fun. *coughs Pooh Bear coughs* Yara glared and whispered under her breath "So childish Bird Brain." For the rest of the day they silently made fun of eachother and Kimkage wasn't sure what to do so he just sayed back hoping not to get into the fight. "You better watch it Kimkage....these girls might end up killing eachother..."

Part Thirteen:

Yara lead the way while Mayamaru and Kimkage stayed back a couple feet; Mayamaru firmly holding his hand and staring at the back of her sisters head so hard she wouldn't be surpirsed if it caught on fire. "I can do that for you if you want." The Raven said and snickered alittle. It appeared she wasn't the only one that hated Yara, but what did Kimkage think of her? He must have guessed what she was thinking. He leaned down and whispered "Don't worry Mayamaru, I love you. Not her and you'll always be the one I care about." She smiled and blushed alittle and she could have sword she heard Yara sigh. Yeah keep walking you little over grown hair ball...

It was near sunset and they had traveled all day without rest. Mayamaru started the fire and Yara went out to find some food. "You do realize there aren't any towns near here right, Yara?" Mayamaru teased, trying to sound smarter that her older sister. "Who ever said about buying food Mayamaru?" She gave a evil smile then vanished inside the woods. "I think I might become a vegatarian when she gets back..." Mayamaru silently laughed. "I agree with you on that one Raven."

The sun had set and Yara returned with several dead bunnies in her hand; torn to pieces but not a single drop of blood on her. Definitely going vegatarion.....

That night Yara explained a lot about herself. "I'm sure you may be woundering how I'm your sister right Mayamaru?" She paused for an answer but only recieved a grunt. "You and I have the same hating parents. When I was born they hated me for not being a son. They originaly named me Yaramaru. I hated it and absolutely refused to accept it as mine. When I was 13 I was blessed with another sister. Once again no son. They were furious and hated you more that me. You don't remember any of this do you Mayamaru?" This time Mayamaru looked up and replied "No I don't...." Yara continued "A few years passed and I started teaching you how to fight secretly. Our parents didn't want you trained because.......when they dispossed of you they didn't want a big mess to clean up. I only knew how to fight because someone had secretly trained me as well...the village elder." Mayamaru surprisingly started crying. They hated me so much.....and even now where they are in pieces they still cause me sorrow...Kimikage leaned over and comforted her while Yara continued. "When you were a exceptional fighter eventually our parents found out. They banished me from the family and told me I had a few days before they sent the dogs after me. I ran for days on end it seemed...wondering if I should just give up and give those poor dogs a meal of me. But something inside me told me to hold on....something I never felt before. It drove me to keep going and eventually I met up with the bandits that you met earlier. I told them I wished to join them and they all accepted me instantly. Serveral times they tryed to get close to me, but I just kept pushing them away and they eventually left me alone. Then one day......I saw you." She looked up and Kimkage and smiled. "You....the most beautiful person I've ever seen in my life...." Mayamaru instantly was behind her and threw her against the tree. "BACK OFF YARA FOR THE LAST TIME HE'S MINE!!!!!" Yara simply laughed as wished everyone good night and went to sleep. Mayamaru slept next to Kimkage that night.

The next morning Mayamaru woke up in a tree. There was a note....Dear Goose Feathers, you have a lovely boyfriend. I wonder if he'll like my company tonight. -Yara. "That little H***!!!!" Mayamaru jumped out of the tree and instanly turned and flew back toward the campsite. This time that B**** is dead!!!!

Part Fourteen:

Mayamaru flew as fast as she could and this time the Raven was just as pissed off as she was; not for being taken away from Kimikage, but getting tricked by a lesser guardian and to wake up in a tree. They both had a score to settle with Yara.

Kimikage awoke and felt someone laying next to him. He looked, expecting Mayamaru, and saw blonde hair instead of black. He was instantly up and furious. "YARA!!! WHERE IS MAYAMARU??!!" He demanded as he pulled out his sword. Yara stirred and smiled. "She's not here. You can do whatever you want now that she's gone and I won't tell her what you do, I promise." She got up and started walking toward him but he sliced at her and she stepped back. "Listen to me, and this time try to get this through that thick skull of yours. I LOVE MAYAMARU!! NOT a little h*** like you." She started crying and fell to the ground. For an instant he though of helping her; then thought better of it and started walking away. Suddenly he was tackled to the ground by a very upset fangirl. Crap this girl is nuts....."Then why don't we show her why you're not someone to mess with?" Kimikage's eyes started changing again and in an instant he was the great Dragon of Mystery. Yara stumbled back in awe then turned into her guardian as well. "Yara, you shall pay dearly for what you have done to Kimikage and Mayamaru!!" The Dragon warned as it realised a jet of pure blue flames. The Bear was caught off guard and was flung into the trees. "You....you will love me...OR DIE!!!" Yara screamed and charged at him. "I would never love someone that doesn't realize that when I say no....I MEAN IT!!!" He sunk his teeth into her and shook her around; blood oozing from the puncture points from his teeth. The blood tasted terrible but he needed to get even with her for what she did. He finally realised and she was flung a few miles away. He spread his great scaley wings and flew after her.

Mayamaru hovered in the air for a second, watching this weird blob flying through the sky. Then she saw a great dragon and a smile spread across her face. "So Kimikage is getting even with her? This should be fun to watch." Mayamaru flew closer to get a better look at the fight.

Kimikage was on a war path. He shot flames, boulders, trees....anything he could get his claws on. She tried fighting back but he was just too powerful for her to handle. Kimikage knew she was immortal so there was no point in holding back in order to not kill her; though that was exactly what he wanted to do. Rip her to shreds and burn her to ashes to make sure she doesn't rise again!! He picked her up and flew into the sky. She hung helpless from his claws as the ground fell away from them. This is for Mayamaru!! He though as he quickly turned and started diving toward the ground. Yara finally realized what he was going to do and she fought desperatly to get away from his great claws. The wind seemed to cheer Kimikage on as it passed in and out of his ears every second. Yara bit him in the leg at a last ditch effort to save herself, but it was too late.

Mayamaru stared in complete awe as she saw a great dragon diving impossibly fast toward the ground with the Bear in its claws. "Mayamaru, he didn't do that to me when we first fought....HE WAS HOLDING BACK ON ME!!" Mayamaru said nothing and just kept hovering and watching...

"KIMIKAGE PLEASE!!!!" Yara begged and he just smiled. "When you upset a dragon....YOU GET BURNED!!!" He quickly pulled out of the dive but threw Yara to the ground and realised fire right after she was let go. Yara made a crater the size of a bus and was burned by the blue flames...she didn't move. She just stayed there......Kimkage landed and stared into the flames. Dragon...you don't think she....."No Kimikage, Mayamaru wouldn't be deafeted by someone like Yara. Especially over someone like you."

Mayamaru dived faster then ever before, trying to catch up with Kimikage before she loses him. She suddenly saw a dragon staring into the flames and she saw a couple tears falling down his scaley face. She quickly pulled out of it and yelled at the top her lungs. "KIMIKAGE!!!" He turned and changed back instantly when he saw Mayamaru. She changed back and ran into his arms. Their lips met and this was one kiss that no one could ever beat because it was true love's kiss that people would be lucky to get once in three lifetimes.

That night they traveled along the road, holding hands, and stared up to the sky. It was a full moon and Mayamaru smiled. "Now we must find the Cheetah of Wind." She said and Kimikage smiled. "We might as well continue. We should try to find them all and make sure they're not working for the wrong side." Mayamaru turned and smiled. He smiled back and continued down the moon lite path. Three guardians found.....three to go.

Part Fifteen:

Yara opened her eyes and instantly felt the burning pain that consumed her everywhere. She screamed and couldn't move she was completely engulfed in pain's death grip. She tried not to move and looked around. She was in a crater with scourch marks everywhere. Then she remembered what happened and tears fell from her eyes. The only man I ever loved....he's gone and he is forever going to hate me.....what's the point of me living? I should listen to my sister and just go die in a hole somewhere. I can always use that move...."Silence you silly girl. You are not going to throw in the towel now are you? Sure one guy didn't like you but that doesn't mean your life is over!! You have ME remember? The most dangerous guardian of them all; we could kill that Raven if the Dragon doesn't interfer." Yara, despite the endless pain, stood up and started stumbling to the road. Just shut it...I give up. I just give up.....I'm not going to fight anymore. I'm just going to use that move and maybe fall off a cliff somewhere. Maybe then people will finally be happy for something I did instead of trying to kill me every chance they get. "You silly girl....you're fulfilling THEIR dream. You're giving in to what THEY want!! You must not die!!! Besides there is something in the air...something is coming and the world needs the guardians to stop it.....ALL of the guardians....."

Mayamaru had no idea where she was. All around her were flames, sprouting from the ground all over the place. She ran and desperitately tried to escape but all the fire swirled around her and made it impossible. She heard Kimikage yelling for her help but couldn't get away from the flames to save her only love. Suddenly she heard her sisters voice, but she was screaming from horrible pain; she wasn't sure if she should try to help Yara but knew that someone screaming like that was in the most horrible trouble you could imagine. She stared at the flames and she seemed to see herself inside them; her hair with three white streaks and the altered face the Raven made. For the first time in her life she realized she was beautiful. Then she heard Kimkage yelling again and she made up her mind. She jumped through the flames to save him and surprisingly she also searched for her sister; she ran out of the flames and into the darkness.

What do you mean something is in the air? Yara asked her guardian as she slowely and painfully made her way down the worn road. "I never told you how the guardians were forged did I? A long time ago; practically just when the earth was born our creater guarded over this precious planet. He started creating life form to live on it and guarded over it well. Then one day he created the greatest threat that mankind has ever seen. He created this monster without realizing it's true power; it wiped out civilizations without mercy. Millions of animals and humans alike were slaughtered before this great enemies hands. It bent the elements to it's will and nearly took the world from the creaters hands. But he had a great idea; he took six regular animals and turned them into the six great guardians of the world. Bear, Raven, Dragon, Wolf, Cheetah, and Seahorse...each masters of their own homes and they defeated the great enemy know as 'the destoyer.' Or so we thought. The Destoyer someone survived and was able to slip into a deep sleep to heal itself, growing stronger with every passing year. We guardians kept on being passed down to knew hosts, guarding the world from this evil menace and now...it's awakening once again to conquer this world. It will not sleep, it will not eat, it will not stop until everything in this world in under it's control!!!!"

Mayamaru kept running through the darkness but suddenly stopped and stared in complete horror. She stood before a thrown made of fire and lava and saw a monsterous creature. It was sleeping but the flames kept on getting bigger and bigger around it. "Mayamaru," the Raven called, "this thing must never be awakened or it shall bring the destruction of the world. You must help me stop this menace before everyone you know and everything you know will perish in hell's flames." Mayamaru was shown images of destruction and so many bodies of dead animals and people littered the ground. There was so much blood everything turned red, rivers, streams, and even the plants. Raven, what is this? The Raven appeared next to her and stared at the scene before her with endless sorrow. "If The Destoyer awakens....this will be the future of the world....."

Part Sixteen:

Mayamaru woke up in a dead sweat, breathing heavily. She looked at Kimikage and the light in his eyes told her that he had learned the same thing. She started up at the moon and started thinking on what to do next. "We have to find the other guardians....come on. We have no time to waste; the cheetah guardian is close and we could use its help." Mayamaru said as she slowely got up and continued down the rode. Kimikage followed after her; fearce determination on both their faces.

Yara continued stummbling along the rode, fighting the pain all along the way. She had learned that the guardians must unite or else the world will be destroyed. She smiled slightly when she realized this meant she would see Kimikage again...and her lovely sister Mayamaru. She heard a branch crack and turned toward the sound. "Who's there?" She asked timidly and lipped closer to the sound. Suddenly a great wind blew past her and stole all her money and dissappeared before she could attack. "WHY YOU!!!!" She was filled with rage and took the shape of the Bear and chased after the scent of the theif.

Mayamaru and Kimkage continued walking all through the night and finally reached the village. Right away Mayamaru noticed wanted posters, one for her, one for Kimkage, and even one for Yara. But the crimes were upgraded; now Mayamaru had killed an inicent family ruthlessly and destroyed a simple caravan....Kimkage had burned down a forest and killed an protected bear speacies, and Yara had deserted her village and caused untold destruction upon several places. "Huh, those lie keep on getting worse and worse." Then she noticed another poster.
Wanted For Theft
Name:Sokuryoku
Description: Unknown
Crime: Several accounts of stealing
Reward: $100.00
Warning: Is armed and dangerious, extememly fast, and can change form into a monsterous creature.


Mayamaru tore the poster down and handed it to Kimikage. "This could be who we're looking for!! Suddenly a breeze of wind passed by them along with a very ticked off Bear. "Looks like Yara found him first." Kimikage said as him and Mayamaru chased after them.


Part Seventeen:

Mayamaru, Kimikage, and Yara continued following the dust trail left by the supposed host of the cheetah guardian. While running Kimikage's mark on his arm burned and Mayamaru saw another streak appear..."It seems we found it. Now the problem is catching it." Mayamaru said as they ran faster. Yara was right infront of them; her neckalace diamond turned a yellow color. Yes, this is the cheetah guardian...and Kimkage and Mayamaru are here as well....this day just keeps on getting better and better.

They continued running through the village, dodging inoccent bystanders and wooden wagons. It was the ulitimate obstical course. Mayamaru and Kimkage easily dodged everything, or at least everything that was left after Yara ran by and destroyed anything she ran into. "I swear she is one of the the most violent people I know...." Kimkikge said and Mayamaru laughed. "Yeah, she is a bit of a hand full."

Finally they cornered the person against a wall; the smoke started to clear and they all finally saw who it was they were chasing. He was very dark skinned with blonde hair in a buzz cut and yellow eyes. He wore a tan vest over a yellow shirt and long black pants and black boots. "Why are you chasing me??" He asked in a raspy voice, similar to when you yell for to long then lose your voice. Yara turned back to normal and Mayamaru nearly fell over laughing when she saw that Yara was practically a walking skeliton. The man stared at her with weird eyes that Mayamaru instantly reconized....."You stole my money you little twirp!!!" Yara said as she held out her hand. "Give it back now before I hurt you." He stared at her hand like it was something he'd never seen it before...then he bent down on one knee and gently places a red pouch that jingled into her hand. "My apologies great lady." He said as he closed her fingers around it. She yanked her arm and away and glared at him. "Why did you steal it anyway?" He hung his head..."I have no money to live....I'm desperate." He seemed to hold true sorrow in his voice. Mayamaru stepped forward and placed a hand on his shoulder. "Look, I know what you are...I am one too. We need your help," she then glanced at Yara, "all of us need your help." Before he could answer people stared gathering around them and stared in horror. "That's them!!! It's Mayamaru the murderer!!!!" One shouted and then guards came out holding clubs. "Oh great." Mayamaru said, "Company..."

Part Eighteen:

Mayamaru, Yara, Kimkage, and Sokuryoku stared at the on coming guards. "Finally, we caught you. All of you!!!" The guards said as swung at Mayamaru...she quickly dodges and hit the guard on the back of the neck, knocking him out. "The last thing I need is to REALLY be a murderer..." She turned to the people watching as said "I'm not a murderer!! I didn't destroy my village either!!! I was exiled from it by my parents!!" She seemed to have some people but others didn't buy it. "No you destroyed your village!! I saw the remains myself; you're a monster Mayamaru!!!" A man yelled and pulled out a sword and charged at her. "I'm telling the trueth...I'm not a murderer..." She dodges the man's attack and knocked him out as well. "I'm just someone who wants to be left alone..." She started crying as more people charged at her from the crowd, all of them saying she was a monster and a murderer and deserved to be killed.

While Mayamaru was trying to calm the crowd, Kimikage and Sokuryoku fought off the remaining guards. Sokuryoku was so quick and graceful with his attacks while Kimikage just lunged aggressivly and knocked everyone out. Sokuryoku was listening silently to was Mayamaru was saying and he believed her.....he had heard of her from other villages but didn't believe the rubish they were saying about her....he glanced at Yara and she was fighting off another guard with one hand while the other was bleeding badly. I must say...she is beautiful and strong....perfect combination. He thought and continued fighting.

When people stopped charging at tgem there were hundreds of unconcious people on the ground. Mayamaru kept crying and finally put away her sword. Kimikage stepped next to her and wrapped his arm around her and stared at the remaining crowd. "Why won't you believer her? All she is trying to do it help you people, and yet here you are trying to kill her!!!" The people in the crowd numbered maybe in the high twenties and some of them were crying as well. "If she isn't a murderer then why did she kill those two poor people in the Fire Village or that white haired man??" One person demanded and the others nodded in agreement. "Let me tell you this...none of them were inocent....the man kept me prisoner and treated me like a slave...if it wasn't for Kimkage, I'd still be there...and those two people were as far from poor and inocent as you can get. For all my life they treated me as a unwanted monster...they exiled me from the village just for being born....yes I killed them but only because they tried to kill me first..."

Sokuryoku kept listening to Mayamaru and could sense the trueth in her voice. He walked over to Yara and started wrapping up her arm. "Why do you think you're doing??" She asked and shoved him away. "If you don't stop the bleeding you'll die." He said and resumed wrapping. She just shoved him away again. "Leave me alone!!!" This time he didn't move and wrapped faster. "I can't...." He said quietly and finally finished wrapping. She looked at it and was alittle impressed but didn't show it. "You just stay away from me." Mayamaru walked over and shook her head. "He can't...Yara I assume that you have heard what is going to happen? We need to gather all the guardians, and regretably that means that you and him must travel with us to find the others." Yara's face turned bright red..."But YOU BOTH TRIED TO KILL ME!! WHY SHOULD I TRUST YOU???" Sokuryoku put a hand on her shoulder, "Don't worry, I'll protect you from them." Then he winked at Kimikage and Mayamaru. Yara didn't like it one bit...

So all four of them left the village together. Sokuryoku kept asking questions about what Mayamaru did and what was it like to live on the edge...she laughed and answered all of his questions...Yara stayed in the back and kept muttering to herself usless curses. "So where to next?" Kimikage asked and looked at Mayamaru. "Well I'd say that the Sea Horse would be near some large body of water...so let's try the Village Hidden In The Sea..." Yara groaned.."How long did it take you to figure that one out???" Mayamaru just ignored her and kept walking...

Part Nineteen:

Everyone kept walking toward the Village Hidden in the Sea. Yara was always yelling at Sokuryoku about being too close to her or complaining about her wounds...most of it just went in one ear and out the other for Mayamaru and Kimikage. Finally the village came into sight and everyone was realived to finally be there.

Everyone walked into the village and we're met with staring, unbelieveable staring. Everyone where they walked people just kept looking at them like a freak of nature; Yara loved the attention but everyone else would rather have them stop.

They paid for two rooms at a Inn nearby; Yara regretably was stuck with Sokuryoku and she didn't like it. So, as usual, she complained about it. Mayamaru and Kimkage got into robes and sat on the bed. "Tommorrow we need to start looking for the Sea horse." Kimikage said. Mayamaru nodded, "Yes, but this is a big village. It might take a while....." They both sighed and went to sleep.

The next morning they were awakened by a knock, or more of a pound, on the door. Mayamaru lazily got up and opened it to see Yara, pissed off, and still in her bed time robe. "Keep...him...away..from me!!!" She begged and fell to her knees. "What exactly has he been doing Yara?" She sobbed and quickly replied "He keeps watching me!! Plus, no matter where I go he always follows to make sure I don't get hurt, and he keeps on wrapping and unwrapping my wounds!! It's horrible!!" Holding back laughter, Mayamaru helped Yara up and smiled. "Oh you poor thing. That just sounds awful." Yara glared and started walking away mumbling, "So much for counting on my sister....like always I have to take care of myself." Kimikage opened his eyes and stretched. "What did I miss?" Mayamaru smiled and laughed. "You missed the funniest thing ever!!" He pretended to be hurt and did puppy dog eyes. "Will you wake me up next time? Anything with Yara is funny."

By late afternoon everyone was up and ready to go. Yara was still muttering under her breath about something and Sokuryoku kept on being overprotective with everything. A perfect couple... Mayamaru thought and laughed.

They split up into two teams to search faster, and to stop Yara from complaining she went with Mayamaru. They searched along the beach in silence; fierce determination on their faces. "Where is this darn thing??" Yara finally broke the silence with a pethectic wine. "I don't know just keep looking!!" Before Yara could say something back a little girl stepped up to them and held out her hands. "Can..you kind strangers spare me some money?" Yara's necklace turned a seafome green color and another streak appeared in Mayamaru's hair. "Wait, you....YOU are the Sea horse host!!" Mayamaru said and reached out her hand. "Come with us; we need your help." The little girl stepped back and seemed scared. "How...how did you know??" She demanded. "We're hosts as well." Yara explained kindly. "We need you're help." Mayamaru repeared and walked closer to her. "LEAVE ME ALONE!!!" The little girl screamed and the next thing Yara and Mayamaru knew they were on their backs and staring at a really, really upset guardian. Next time...Yara's staying with Sokuryoku. Mayamaru thought to herself.

Part Twenty:

The Seahorse of Beauty was properly named because it was the most beautiful thing Mayamaru or Yara had ever seen. It seemed to be split in two parts..the first part was a brown horse with two front legs and hooves with dark green, long main with seawead caught in it. The second part was a pure green and blue, shinging, mermaid tail. The horse was also as big as three elephants put together. It pawed with it's hooves and glared with stunning blue eyes. "Yara, did you have to scare her like that?" Mayamaru teased and stood up and prepared to fight. "Me??? What about you???" She also stood and took out her sword. The Seahorse spoke in a voice that sounded like wind chimes "Leave me alone!!!" It ordered and slapped the ground with it's tail causing the sand to become a wave and knock them over again. "But me need your help," Mayamaru said, "The world is in trouble and we need all the guardians to save it!! We are not your enemies and we are not going to hurt you!!" The horse seemed to calm down and leaned in close to them. "Why is that my problem?" It arrogantly asked with a smirk. Yara glared and slapped it on the face, but it didn't seem to notice. "Because if the world ends so will you and everything you hold dear. Why won't you help?" The horse turned it's head and stared directly at Yara, glaring. "I never said I wouldn't help, but why must I travel with you two guardians alone? What will three together accomplish?" Before anyone could answer the sand wiped around in a circle; when it cleared Sokuryoku stood there and moved infront of Yara. "They are not the only ones." Kimikage, appearing out of nowhere, hugged Mayamaru and glared at the Seahorse. "Ahh, I see. The Cheetah, Dragon, Raven, and Bear all fighting together....I supposed you want me to help you find the Wolf and save the world...correct?" The question didn't need to be answered but still Mayamaru nodded her head. The Seahorse nodded back and in a puff of smoke turned back into the little girl. "My name is May." She said then walked up and held Mayamaru's hand. She smiled at the little girl. "Hello May." One more guardian to go. The Raven thought and smiled. Mayamaru is doing well...very well.

The gang, now with a new member, headed out the next morning and tried to figure out where they were heading next. "We should head to the land of fangs." Yara suggested but Kimikage shoke his head. "No the Village Guarded by the Wolves." May cleared her thought and got everyone's attention. "I know where the wolf is....." Everyone leaned in close as the little girl started explaining the way.

Part Twenty-one:

"The Village Hidden in the Stars?" Mayamaru asked after May explained the location of the next guardian. "Hey, isn't that village where that wise man lived that told you two about the guardians?" Sokuryoku asked alittle confused. "Yeah is was...but I have a feeling the wise man won't be too happy when all of us guardians show up on his front door step." Yara laughed at her sisters remark. "Like one old man can stop us...." Sokuryoku wrapped his arm around Yara and smiled. "You have a point there." Kimikage and Mayamaru half expected Yara to shove him off but instead she didn't say a thing. "So if you'll be kind enough as to lead us there then." Yara replied and hugged Sokuryoku. Did I really JUST see that? Mayamaru thought to herself but started leading the way toward the village.

It got dark rather early and the small group made a fire and settled around it. Yara and May had brought some meat, surprisingly May was a excelent hunter, and they all ate in silence. The full moon shined brilliantly on the group and in the distance a wolf howled. "Does anyone know what the Destroyer looks like?" May broke the silence and everyone pretended like they didn't hear. "HELLO!!! Answer me..." She glared at everyone and tapped her foot impatiently. "Okay, May, to tell you the trueth....none of us know..." Kimikage replied at stared at the moon. "Oh, that helps a lot doesn't it?" May seemed alittle annoyed but layed down and seemed to fall asleep quickly. Yara whispered to everyone else. "Do you think our guardians even know what it looks like?" Sokuryoku shrugged and Mayamaru and Kimkage shook their heads. "They seem to know but are reluctant to say." Mayamaru answered then she too layed down; Kimikage right beside her. "Do you think we can beat it?" Sokuryoku asked but it didn't require an answer. They all knew deep down inside...that that thing could easily kill them all. They will not only fight to save the world..but fight to stay alive themselves. Don't worry Mayamaru, Raven reasurred, you've got me and I promise nothing will happen to you. Mayamaru sighed and closed her eyes. I hope you're right Raven...I hope you're right...

Part Twenty-two

The gang woke up extra early in hopes that they would reach the village today. Yara, as always, was cranky but a couple hugs from Sokuryoku calmed her down. Poor May though couldn't wake up so Kimikage carried her. Mayamaru was a bit drowzy but she was used to this by now.

The sun came up over the distant hills and greeted our heros with it's warmth. Yara smiled and seemed to enjoy it more then anyone else.

Soon the village came into sight and everyone hurried to reach it. When they got to the gates; however, they saw something truely horrifying.

"What...what happened here?" Mayamaru stammered as she looked around. The house were all burned beyond repair or torn apart. The people littered the ground, all of them long dead. Yara glared and walked forward. "How dare someone do this...HOW DARE THEY!!!" She stormed off into the village looking for survivors with Sokuryoku close behind; both of them were in complete shock. Mayamaru just stared at the bodies of the inocent people. "Why...why would someone do this?" She felt tears roll down her face. Kimikage held her close and kissed her gently. "It's not you're fault...we couldn't have protected them..." It then started to rain and lightning streaked across the sky. "Are you sure about that?" A voice came from behind them. Mayamaru turned and nearly exploded. "YOU!!!!"

Part Twenty-three

"YOU!!!" Mayamaru exclaimed while she pulled out her sword; Kimkage did the same. It was the white haired man that had kidnapped her. "I though you were dead!!" She yelled and raised her sword, ready to fight. "And I thought you were a regular girl...I was wrong..you're too strong for a slave." Then Kimkage gasped as his mark on his arms started to burn and another white streak appeared in Mayamaru's hair. "No..no...you..you're the Wold Guardian?? How??" Mayamaru demanded and nearly fainted from the shock. "Yes, I'm the Wolf Guardian, and I was hired by the Destoyer to kill all of you. What luck to find all of the guardians in one little group." His eyes them turned a pale gray and he started growing bigger. "Oh crap...." Kimikage was able to say before a midnight black wolf pounced on them both.

In one bright flash the Dragon and Raven showed up to join the party. The Wolf seemed alitte impressed. In a deap, gravely voice it said, "What a surprise...the Raven and Dragon in the two of you. This will be interesting." They both glared at the wolf and prepared to fight. "I hope you know how to die..." The Raven started, "or else you're about to learn!!" The dragon finish and the three powerful guardians clashed as the storm increased it's power.


Part Twenty-four:

Mayamaru and Kimikage bit, thrashed, clawed, and pecked at the Wolf but to no avail. Something about it seemed rather odd...like it was being protected by something. "Foolish girl. Do you really think you can stop me?" The Wolf teased and howled in the rain. Suddenly a giant Bear and a near impossible to see Cheetah emerged from the forest. "LEAVE MY LITTLE SISTER ALONE YOU FREAK!!!!" The Bear growled at the Wolf and attacked it with unbelieveable force, even for someone like Yara. Sokuryoku ran in, attacked, then ran back out before the Wolf could react. With two more guardians finally wounds started appearing on the Wolf, but tiny scratches that did really no good. "See? Even with four guardians together you can't defeat me!!!" Suddenly another figure appeared and hit the Wolf into a tree. "Four? How about FIVE!!!!" May had come to help and the Wolf was heavily outnumber, and finally outmatched. But the Wolf started laughing like mad and looked at each of our heros slowely. "You fools...you just doomed yourselves." Yara took a step forward. "What do you mean...?" Suddenly the Wolf howled fiercly, cutting Yara off, and make everyone cover their ears and scream in pain. "WHAT...IS THIS???!!!" Yara yelled but then changed back to normal and fainted. Sokuryoku caught her but then the same thing happened to him. May fell and was out cold, and the next thing Mayamaru knew, her beloved Kimikage was on the ground...he didn't appear to be moving or breathing. "You.....I WILL MAKE YOU PAY FOR THAT!!!!" The Raven hissed through Mayamaru's voice and they prepared for the ultimate fight. "Foolish girl..." The Wolf dissapeared then and the next thing Mayamaru knew she was fallign to the ground, in her human form, and saw black wolf feet....then darkness.

Pain...uncontrolable, unbearable, and unyeilding pain. That was all Mayamaru felt...she saw nothing, heard nothing, and no other sence worked either...Suddenly she heard finally screaming. Thousands upon thousands off people screaming for their lives, suffering the unltimate torture. Then she heard a voice. "Mayamaru...MAYAMARU!!! WAKE UP!!!" She finally force her eyes open and looked around in complete horror and shock..."Where the hell am I?"

Part Twenty-five:

"Finally you're awake..Mayamaru are you okay?" She turned her head and, to her surprise, saw Raven next to her. IT was trapped inside a cage..infact so was she. "Raven..where are we??" She asked and panic struck her voice. "We're near It's lair..infact we're IN it..." The Raven was comsumed in sorrow and despair...Mayamaru knew that when the Raven feels there is no hope..then there is none. "We're going to die aren't we?" The Raven hung it's head and a silver tear dropped out of it's eye. "Yes....along with the rest of the world..."

Yara and Sokuryoku awoke together and looked around. "Where are we??" Yara asked and stood up, Sokuryoku was right next to her. "We're in the Destroyer's lair." A scraggly voice replied. Yara looked to see her guardian, bond inside a cage, and laying on the ground. All it's hope had faded. "Sokuryoku....we can't do anything to help," another voice said. It sounded like shoft whispering...Sokuryoku turned and saw his Cheetah in a cage as well with the same dismal look on it's face. "There has to be some way out of here..." Yara said but the guardians just shook their heads. "We failed.....and we're going to pay for it with our lives." The Cheetah stated.

May woke and saw Kimikage pacing. They were both inside a cage, the Dragon was watching Kimikage, and the SeaHorse was staring at May with sad, hopeless eyes. "There HAS to be a way out of here...." Kimikage thought to himself....suddenly footsteps filled the room. "There is no way out for you or your little girlfriend. You're all dead." The White Haired Man appeared at the bars and held some keys in his hands. Kimikage tried to grab him through the bars but was electrocuted and sent spiraling towards the ground. "KIMIKAGE!!!" May yelled and tried to comfort him. "Don't waste you're breath little girl..he's knocked out cold...and so will you be." The man then realised a eery howl and made all of them, including the guardians, fall to the ground. "It's time for the guardians to perish from this earth...."

Part Twenty-six

Mayamaru knew that their lives were in jepordy..she knew that they had barely, in any hope of escape, but she also knew this. Her friends, no her family, we in danger and she had to save them. "Raven...you constantly brag that you're the most powerful guardian. And yet you let yourself be stuck in a cage?? Was it all lies?" Maymaru teased. The Raven lifted it's head and glared. "You dare insult me? I could kill you if I wanted to...," before he could finish she stuck out her tongue and said "then why don't you try???" That finally set him off. Black mist surrounded the Raven and it's eyes glowed green. Suddenly the cage exploded. Mayamaru's plan had worked, that were both free. "Oh...now I get it." The Raven said then Mayamaru hopped onto it's back and they both took off.

They had been flying around for hours but saw no sign of anyone. Mayamaru was staring to get frustrated when she finally heard something. "LET ME GO!!!!" Kimikage yelled and struggled to be free. He was tied to a giant wood poll, with May right next to him, and their kidnapper was smiling. "Not likely..no one can save you now." The Raven dived and Mayamaru added, "I wouldn't say that." She jumped off of the Raven's back and freed May and Kimikage. He smiled then took out his own sword; the white haired man stupidly didn't take them. May was still out cold but her guardian was protecting her. The Dragon took to the sky and joined the Raven. "You fools...do you really think you can defeat me????" He was about to attack when something came out of the darkness. In a evil voice it yelled "SILENCE!!!!!" The guardians instantly haulted and the man bowed. "Master." He said and finally the creature came out of the shadows. It had fire red horns coming out of it's head, piercing yellow eyes and long, drooling fangs. It looked alittle like a dragon but it also looked like a tiger as well. A mixture of the two...it was red and black....and it was covered in blood. "You fool...you let them escape??!!" The Destroyer was obviously furious. "No sir I......" Before he could finish the creature lobed off his head and smuched it with it's cloven feet. "I'll give this to you, foolish guardians, it is no easy feet to avoid me for so long..." Maymaru and Kimikage raised their swords and prepared to fight...while the Dragon and Raven circled above. "So...you're the Destroyer?" Kimikage asked...course the answer he already knew. "Yes I am....and you are the host of the Dragon guardian," then his eyes shifted to Mayamaru, "and your the little brat who has the loud mouth Raven." The Raven let out a angry squawk but knew better then to fight back. "I'm sorry for all the work you have done to try and save you're world..but this is were you're legend dies..." The Destroyer lunged forward and so began the biggest battle in the history of the world...

Part Twenty-seven:

Mayamaru swung her sword but missed the creature, then Kimikage tried but had the same result. The Raven and Dragon dived but yet again they missed. "God...we need to be faster..." Kimikage thought aloud then gave Mayamaru an idea. "Raven...go and get Sokuryoku!!!" The Raven obidently set off and the two continued fighting the creature. Suddenly Mayamaru was struck to the ground and being smushed under the creatures great feet. "Do you really think you can stop me???" It taunted her. She tried to break free but he was just too strong. "MAYAMARU!!!!" Kimikage yelled and stabbed the creatures foot. It didn't kill it but it drove it back enough so Mayamaru could get up. She thanked him then ran forward and jumped onto it's head. The Destoyer tried to shake her off but to no avail. She struck her sword through it's head and it feel to the ground. Mayamaru stood back and grinned. "That was easy..." Kimikage gave her a grim look..."Too easy." While they were caught off guard the Destroyer knocked them both down and shot out black flames towards them. Both just barely saved themselves but Mayamaru's arm got burned bad. She screamed and switched her sword over to her other hand. "Need some help?" Sokuryoku and Yara had come and looked ticked as ever. Yara charged at the evil creature with the bear right next to her. "NO ONE HURTS MY LITTLE SISTER EXCEPT ME!!!!!!" Surprisingly she kicked the creature and it lost it's balence. The Cheetah and Sokuryoku ran faster then the eyes could see and slashed at it...it appeared they would win. But they were wrong..

"You....you fools...," it stammered, "you...will never win...." The wounds healed...the blood vanished, and it stood as if nothing had happened. The next thing Mayamaru knew was Yara, Sokuryoku, May (still unconcious), and Kimikage were pinned against the wall. The Raven landed next to Mayamaru and glared. "How dare you...HOW DARE YOU!!!!" Mayamaru and the Raven charged in a last ditch effort to save the world....

The Destoryer was knocked into the wall but they weren't done yet. Mayamaru and the Raven started speaking as one and a white light started to shine from then. "You...destroyer of worlds and the ultimate evil..shall perish from this earth and be sent to hell. Never again shall you torment and kill the inoccent...DIE!!!!" A white beam of pure light hit the Destoyer and it roared in pain then it's body went limp. Everyone was free....they finally did it..."Mayamaru..you were amazing!!!" Yara complemented and hugged her little sis. "Yes...my love...you were." Kimikage agreed and kissed her. Suddenly Mayamaru felt a jolt..she looked down and through her chest was a horn...covered in her blood. "If I..have to die...," the Destoryer said, "then...you're going to die with me!!!!" That was the last thing it said.....

Mayamru struggled to breath and pain shot everywhere....it felt like she was on fire and gettign stabbed...she felt the worst pain imaginable. "MAYAMARU NO!!!!" Kimikage yelled and caught her as she feel to the floor. Everyone looked dismal and sad.....the Raven started crying and rubbed it's beak against Mayamaru's head. "She's....gone...." Kimikage started crying waterfalls. "There has to be something you can do!!! Anything!!!!!" The Raven shook it's head..."No.....she's gone.....forever." Yara, Sokuryoku, Kimikage, and May all circled around their friend.....their sorrow consumed them completly. "We...we have to tell the world what she did." May said.....and everyone agreed.

That was the day the world was saved by Mayamaru.....some say she survived..others say she never existed..but I'll tell you right here and right now..she WAS real...she WAS a hero...and she WAS my love....sometimes I can't wait to die so I can see her again.....you now know the story of Mayamaru the Hero....I am Kimikage......remember this legend and always remember.....Mayamaru was a hero.....



The End

Epuloge:

The funneral for Mayamaru was very dismal. The sky was covered in clouds and you could hear thunder off in the distance. Cherry blossoms littered the ground, Mayamaru's favorite flower, and a priest read a prayer for her. Kimikage, May, Yara, and Sokuryoku all wore black. None of them appeared to have any joy left in them at all. Even Ryumaru showed up, but he also looked sad. All the guardians, minus the Wolf, were in attendence as well, but the Raven looked worse them them all. Mayamaru's coffin was the fanicest anyone had ever seen, thanks to Yara, and it seemed she should sleep soundly for all eternity in it. Kimikage stepped forward and placed a black rose on the coffin. "Mayamaru, I hope wherever it is you went to..it's happy. I will always love you...and my heart belongs to you..forever." He went back with the others and cried for his beloved. Yara, May, and Sokuryoku all stepped forward and wished happy things for her. The Bear gave a sorrowful roar, the Dragon shot a jet of flames into the sky in her respect, the Seahorse neighed with such sorrow hearing it could nearly heartbreack you, but the worst sound of all was the sound the Raven made....he never wanted to admit it but he had grown to love Mayamaru...the sound he made was of someone who had just lost their best friend. A terrible sobbing noise that, to everyone who heard it, told them that something unimaginabley sorrowful had happened. Then the Raven spoke while the coffin was being lowered into the ground. "Of..all the people that posssesed me inside them..none of them had as much heart as she did. No matter what people did to her, no matter how much bad things happened to her, she still showed us all that she was a heroine. She shall be remembered in history as the one girl that saved us all, but she will not be known as Mayamaru...she shall be known as the unwanted girl ninja that held a boy's name....and she shall be known for never giving up ever...." Diggers started coving the grave and ran poured down upon them, as if the heavens were mourning the lose of this extrodonary girl as well. The Raven let tears fall from his face, but a strange wind picked up and blew the flowers in a circle around the grave. The Raven smiled and said two words that made everyone forget their troubles..it only for a second. "She's here...."

A few years passed and Mayamaru has all but been forgoten. The Raven now lives alone, but visits from time to time and retells the story of his host and her heroics. Yara and Sokuryoku got married and now have two kids. Miyomaru and Mika. May is not 15 and trains people how to fight, with the help from the Seahorse of course. Kimikage though, no one knows what happened to him. Some say that he died of a broken heart...others say he still is here but we just don't see him. But I know better...I see him still. He flys on his dragon and potrolls the air, saving people wherever he goes, and also spreads the story about Mayamaru. He still visists the grave from time to time, and each time that wind happens and he sences she is near, watching him, and assuring him she is fine....the group rarely ever meet together...except on the anaversary of Mayamaru's death. They catch up on stories and gossip, but then they always hear the Raven retell the story of that one unwanted girl that saved us all.....I believe she still watches over us.....silently, and even though we can't see her it doesn't mean she isn't there......and to think, one girl, that given the chance, became famous..and everyone knows her name....

Characters!!!!
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Hawk
06-29-2009, 06:05 AM
This is a good story! :D

Ryaque
06-29-2009, 06:06 AM
Really?Thanks.:mrgreen:

Hawk
06-29-2009, 06:07 AM
Anytime:D

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-29-2009, 06:26 AM
have to admit, that is a great story but when ur browsing this topic,GO TO CHARACTER BATTLE!!!

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-29-2009, 06:26 AM
that is for Ryaque The Chicken.

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-29-2009, 06:27 AM
juat to let u know, she put ryaque the mysterious in character battle im gonna fight her next ;D

Ryaque
06-29-2009, 06:39 AM
juat to let u know, she put ryaque the mysterious in character battle im gonna fight her next ;D
I was already there!!!! HELLO PAY ATTENTION!!! *starts laughing* Glad you liked the story though.

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-29-2009, 06:41 AM
yes i saw the post and hurray for good stories!!!

Ryaque
06-29-2009, 06:46 AM
Thanks I'm glad you liked it. Anyone want to hear part two?

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-29-2009, 08:15 AM
Part two!!

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-29-2009, 08:15 AM
go part two PART TWO!!!!!!

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-29-2009, 08:15 AM
the first part two was supposed to be in caps

jacobjak
06-29-2009, 08:33 AM
great story

jacobjak
06-29-2009, 08:34 AM
Thanks I'm glad you liked it. Anyone want to hear part two?
i wanna hear part two

Ryaque
06-29-2009, 08:36 AM
I woke up as I felt something crawling on my leg. I looked to see a snake wrapped around it. I screamed and fell out of the tree and the snake came right with me. I tryed to pull it off but it seemed to want to stay with me. I sighed, "Oh fine. You can come with me." I could have swore I saw the snake smile.


It was morning and the birds were chirping loudly. I kept walking even though I was starving. Stupind me I forgot to get food!!! I cursed at myself and tryed to find something to eat. All around I looked but all I found was a couple pine cones. I sighed then continued walking down the path.


It was dark before I decided to stop. The snake was around my shoulders now and kept licking my ear with it's tongue. I sat against a tree and wondered what I ever did to deserve this. Oh yah, now I remember. I was born. Anger whelled up inside Mayamaru as she thought of the injustice. She was so consumed in anger she didn't notice the snake slithering off her shoulder and strike at something. She heard a soft squeak and saw the snake eating a mouse. "Well at least one of us gets to eat." She said and looked up at the moon. For some reason Mayamaru always like night better then day. It was so much more peaceful. She closed her eyes and started to relax and breathed in the night air.


She woke up and realized she was tied to something. Mayamaru looked around and saw that rope surronded her and she was ontop of a horse of some kind. Her snake friend was across her leg and seemed alittle scared and heavy with a lump in it's belly. She tried to get out but was slapped by something. She looked behind her to see a dark man with long white hair, googles on his head, and in a brown T-shirt and torn geans. He also had dark blue eyes. "Try to get away and you'll be killed." He barked at her and she just glared. "What do you want with me?" She demanded and was answered by another slap to the face. " Don't talk slave!!" What??!! When was I a slave??!! Oh once he unties me he is sooo dead!!! Mayamaru though as she put a hand on her sheeth to get her sword ready. It wasn't there; she looked around and nearly fell off. Then man just sighed and said "You won't be needing those where you're going." Mayamaru just sat still and tried to think of a way out of this mess, but she thought of no solution.

jacobjak
06-29-2009, 08:40 AM
that was even better than the first part

Ryaque
06-29-2009, 08:42 AM
that was even better than the first part
Thank you.:mrgreen:

jacobjak
06-29-2009, 08:43 AM
i write storys sometimes but they are more into the future

Ryaque
06-29-2009, 08:51 AM
i write storys sometimes but they are more into the future
Well maybe you should write them here too.

jacobjak
06-29-2009, 08:53 AM
Well maybe you should write them here too.
i can try but i need to think of one give me 10 minutes

Ryaque
06-29-2009, 09:13 AM
i can try but i need to think of one give me 10 minutes
Okay.

Ryaque
06-29-2009, 10:04 AM
Who wants to hear part three?

jacobjak
06-29-2009, 10:16 AM
Who wants to hear part three?
me!!!!!!!!!!!

Ryaque
06-29-2009, 10:38 AM
I woke up and was in chains. The man that called me a slave was standing outside my cell; he was staring at me and a man next to him was saying "...worth all that money? How strong is she?" The new man asked him. "She is extemely strong and powerful." He said and was handed what looked like a large amount of money. What the hell are they talking about? I tried to get up but the chains held me down hard against the wall. The two men finally noticed I was awake and laughed. "She's spirited, I'll give you that." The other man said. He had on a green hat with brown hair, brown eyes, and a beard. He was very fat and wore a dark green coat that was two sizes too small. He had on dark green pants and black hiking boots. I got even more furiouse and this time I broke one of the chains and charged at them. They both jumped back and the white haired man slapped me again, but this time so hard I was slamed to the ground. "Like I said, very strong." He replied to the other man. My head felt like it was on fire, but I felt something moving along me. I looked to see the snake slithering toward them. Good job. Bite them, bite them!! Mayamaru thought. The snake kept slithering and slithered right up the fat man's leg and bite him on the arm. He screamed and threw the snake at the wall. There was a thud and it didn't move. The white haired man went over to see what was wrong but I got up and tripped him. He fell and didn't move and I stole his keys and unlocked the cell door. I ran over, picked up the snake, and started running as fast as I could.

Everywhere around me I heard alarms going off. I was rather pleased with myself. I started looking for the room where they kept all the weapons, hoping my sword and bow would be there.

I found it along with two other guys. They charged at me and I waited then just stepped aside and they ran right into a wall. Wow, it's really hard to find good bad guys these days. Morons!! I grabbed my weapons and continued running.

I heard footsteps behind me and yelling. I smiled and picked up speed. I was always a fast runner and a good fighter.

(Flashback)
"Come one Mayamaru. Show me what you got." A bully yelled at her. She picked up a stick and prepared to fight him. He charged and she dodged and stabbed him in the shoulder. "OOOWWWW!!" He yelled and tried to pull the stick out. Mayamaru just laughed and ran off. You got what you deserved creep. She ran right home and found that her mother and father were not home again. She sighed and went up to her room to play with her pet hamster.

The next day she found a bag with something dead in it at her door step. She openned it and there was her best and only friend with a note attached. You were dishonorable yesterday. Here is what you get from dishonor, death. The note said and it was signed by her mother and father.

(Present)
Mayamaru shook the memory away. I had the worst parents in the history of the world. The parents from hell. She continued speeding down the halls, trying to find the way out when someone grabbed her from the shadows and gagged her with a rag. She couldn't move. Her sences fading as she saw footsteps coming toward her and evil laughing. She lost conciouseness.

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-29-2009, 10:41 AM
GAH I HATE SLAVERY PEOPLE! MAKE SURE YOU CAN THAT EVIL MAN GAAAAAAAH I HATE SLAVERY!!!!!!!!!!! but yea its good :D

Hawk
06-29-2009, 10:41 AM
Great story!! :D

Ryaque
06-29-2009, 10:42 AM
Thanks. I'm glad you all liked it.:mrgreen:

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-29-2009, 10:45 AM
Make sure u write part four i want them to die!!!!!! Kil them kill them kill i will murder all slavery supporters!!

jacobjak
06-29-2009, 10:45 AM
awsome story

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-29-2009, 10:45 AM
srry i just HATE slavery!!!

Ryaque
06-29-2009, 10:46 AM
Don't worry I'll write part four later. I need to think about what happens though.

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-29-2009, 10:49 AM
k just make sure u kill a few slave people GAH I HATE SLAVERY it just makes me so mad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ryaque
06-29-2009, 10:53 AM
Okay, okay. I promise she'll kill a couple of slave people.

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-29-2009, 11:01 AM
yay!!

toadsage
06-29-2009, 11:07 AM
Nice story.You should become an author.U'll be the greatest.:D

Ryaque
06-29-2009, 11:09 AM
You really think I could. I don't know I might but still thanks for the complement.:mrgreen:

jacobjak
06-29-2009, 11:11 AM
You really think I could. I don't know I might but still thanks for the complement.:mrgreen:
you could be an author

Life AKA Death
06-29-2009, 11:12 AM
great stories

Ryaque
06-29-2009, 02:07 PM
Who wants to hear part four?

jacobjak
06-29-2009, 02:09 PM
Who wants to hear part four?
meee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ryaque
06-29-2009, 02:23 PM
I woke up and felt a rag in my mouth and I was being dragged on the floor. I looked and saw the white haired man and he was dragging me toward a cell. I looked and saw that I still had my weapons and grinned evilly. I wretched my hands free and jumped out of reach and unsheethed my sword. He was caught off guard and that's all I needed. I charged at him with a wordless cry and sliced his throut. "You're slave just killed you." Mayamaru said then turned and ran down a hall.

She encountered people left and right and all of them met the blade of her sword. She was covered in blood but she didn't care. Theses people treated her like a slave and they deserved it.

She saw the doorway and was overjoyed. She ran faster, only to bump into the fat, green man. He growled at her and started making these weird signs with his hands and said Earth Style: Breaking Bolders!!! His hands became huge and grabbed at her. She didn't know what was happening but she quickly dodged and wondered what the hell she was up against. He roared at her and grabbed at her again. She once again dodged and stabbed at him with a dagger, but the blade broke. The man laughed madly and hit her against a wall with his other hand. "That won't work against me, Mayamaru. It's pointless." The man said and laughed madly. Mayamaru felt slithering inside her back pocket and the snake came out and bit the man's hand. Again he cried out in pain but didn't wretch free of the snakes grip. What the hell is this guy???!! Mayamaru thought angrily to herself; then she heard foot steps running through the tunnels towards them. Mayamaru prepared to be captured once again but all of a sudden she was free from the man's masive hands and was on the ground. Infront of her stood someone she did not reconize at all. He was so fast she didn't even see what he looked like. He charged at the man and the next thing Mayamaru knew the man was on the ground with blood spirting out of his neck. She sighed with relife then cringed in pain. Danm, he broke one of my ribs!!! The pain was so much that she started losing conciouseness. She saw a pair of feet heading toward her and could feel herself being lifted up, but she was engulfed by blackness.

jacobjak
06-29-2009, 02:49 PM
that was awsome part 5 part 5!!!!!!

Ryaque
06-29-2009, 02:53 PM
Wow, you really like it that much? I need a break though, my fingers are sore from typing.:lol:

jacobjak
06-29-2009, 02:55 PM
Wow, you really like it that much? I need a break though, my fingers are sore from typing.:lol:
lol why dont you grab a bowl of ramen and take a break then

Ryaque
06-29-2009, 03:01 PM
Lol, good idea.

jacobjak
06-29-2009, 03:17 PM
lol, good idea.
:) lol thanks

mangagirl
06-29-2009, 03:18 PM
wow!! i really like it

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-29-2009, 03:29 PM
GO PART FOUR!! u finally killed slave people! :D part five part five part five part five part five part five part five part five part five part five PART FIVE!!!!!

Ryaque
06-30-2009, 06:30 AM
For the first time in the last few days I woke up in a warm room. My head had a wet rag on it and my ribs felt alittle better. I looked around and saw I was in a hamock; around me were lots of candles and my weapons were next to me on the ground. I also saw my snake friend curled up on my stomach. What happened? Where am I? Mayamaru thought to herself. She tried to get up but her ribs said otherwise. I won't be able to leave for awhile with protesting ribs like that. She heard soft laughing and she looked to see the person that saved her.


He had long, raven black hair that hung down to his back, he had the most beautiful blue eyes that Mayamaru had ever seen, he wore a black robe and what looked like a white shirt underneath it. He smiled and gave Mayamaru the food he had made for her and helped her sit up. She gladly took the food and started shoveling the stuff down. He then grabbed the snake and put it on the ground and set a mouse near it. He was happy to hunt again.


Breakfast was over quickly and Mayamaru was determined to find out who this man was. She was about to open her mouth but he beat her to the punch. "Hello Mayamaru, I am Kimikage." He said in one of the most beautiful voices that Mayamaru ever heard. "You...you know my name?" She asked him. "Yes, I was working undercover for my village in that place. I was supposed to blow it up, but you set the alarms off and I came looking for you. Luckly I found you before the fat man could squish you like a pancake." They both laughed and Mayamaru contined asking questions about this man. She found out he was a ninja from the Village Hidden In The Fire, and that he was 14 years old. She kept asking questions all through the night and Kimikage ansered them all. She eventually got tired and nodded off and Kimikage helped her back down into bed and put her gently on her pillow. "Good night Mayamaru." He said as kissed her forehead.

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-30-2009, 06:55 AM
yay part five! the last bit is romantic romance is a key part to everything even stories and games!! now PART SIX PART SIX PART SIX PART SIX PART SIX PART SIX!!!!!

jacobjak
06-30-2009, 06:56 AM
it just keeps getting better and better

Ryaque
06-30-2009, 07:12 AM
Wow, I didn't know people would like the story this much. I'll have the next part soon. I promise.

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-30-2009, 08:07 AM
yay!!!

Ryaque
06-30-2009, 12:12 PM
Mayamaru woke up and saw food near her bed. On it was a lovely white rose and a note.
Mayamaru,
I had to go to my village today to report to them. I'll be back soon. Enjoy the food.
Love,
Kimikage

She smiled at the note for some reason and started eating.

Later when he got back he told her that the village ordered him to stay with her. She smiled and was happy about this. Kimikage was the only person that really seemed to accept her and she liked being accepted. This time; instead of her asking the questions he asked them. He kept of asking about where did she learn to fight, what kind of things did she like, and why was that snake following her. Until he asked "Mayamaru, how did you get captured?" He seemed curiouse and not wanting to hurt her, but he did. He could see in her eyes that it was a sore subject. "I...I was unwanted back home. No one cared for me...not even..." she cut off and started crying. Kimikage ran over and sat next to her to comfort her. Mayamaru kept crying and wouldn't stop.

She cryed herself to sleep and the next morning she found that Kimikage was asleep next to her. He never left her all night long. She shook him awake and tried to get up, but her ribs still didn't allow it. She flinched and layed back down. She looked at Kimikage and he looked back and the one question that was bothering Mayamaru all day long she finally asked. "Kimikage, why did you save me?" He looked away and the words seemed to get caught in his throat. Finally he said "Because I was ordered to. Nothing more." She shyed away from his harshness and he got up to get some breakfast. He's lying; I can tell. Why did he save me? She didn't understand it at all. All of a sudden the door busted open and a man she reconized came rushing at her and put a bag over her head. She saw white hair and glasses and wondered how her captor survived. She lost conciouseness.

Hawk
06-30-2009, 12:14 PM
woohoo!!!!!!!!!!!! GREAT STORY

Ryaque
06-30-2009, 12:23 PM
Thanks.

jacobjak
06-30-2009, 12:25 PM
awsome part 6 part 6

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-30-2009, 02:35 PM
OH NO!!! HURRY GET MAYAMARU BACK!! this is a great story i reread that sentence where she is captured like three times before posting this WAIT ITS THE SLAVE DUDE!! :evil: :evil: :evil:

Ryaque
06-30-2009, 02:37 PM
Well, sadly people you'll have to wait for the next part. I have to get off, Bye.

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-30-2009, 02:37 PM
:( bye

Ryaque
06-30-2009, 04:21 PM
Okay people I'm back. Who wants to hear about where the white haired man is taking Mayamaru?

jacobjak
06-30-2009, 04:22 PM
ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ryaque
06-30-2009, 04:42 PM
I awoke but didn't want to open my eyes. I just wanted to lay here and imagine I was still with Kimikage in his nice house. Even so I wanted to see where I was; where the white haired man had taken me. I reluctantly opened my eyes and looked around. Once again I was in chains and a cell. Why am I the one that people always kidnapp? Pick on someone else for a change!!! I thought to myself and tried to get up. My ribs sent waves of pain everywhere and I got back down. I looked and saw the white haired my staring at me from the cell door. "Why are you doing this to me??" I demanded and was answered by a slap to the face. "Can't you ever learn to be quiet? Besides slave, you shouldn't even have a right to talk after what you and your boyfriend did to me." Mayamaru flinched at 'boyfriend' and noticed the mans voice was very crackly. She remembered she sliced his throut and was glad she was causing him pain. "Wipe that grin off your face!! What are you so happy about? Huh, ANSWER ME!!" The man ordered her. "Can I actually talk this time or are you going to slap me again?"
True to his nature he slapped her. "Don't play smart with me. Stay here this time." He got up and left and locked the door behind him. Mayamaru got straight to work on thinking how to get out of this mess. As soon as she tried to break the chains she got electricuted and blacked out.

When she awoke again she had a bag over her head and was being carried by someone. "Uukk." Was all she could say. She was slapped again and she knew who was carrying her. "Shut up you stupid slave girl!!" He barked at her. She stayed quiet and listened to the sound of his footsteps as they hit the stone floor and bounced off that walls.

They came to a room and he yanked the sack off of my head. I looked around and was blinded by a bright light. When my eyes adjusted I saw two people I thought I was well ride of. "M...mother? Father?" Mayamaru stuttered.

jacobjak
06-30-2009, 04:46 PM
this is getting good part 7 part 7!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-30-2009, 04:50 PM
yes do part seven because i wanna see her kill the mom and dad!!!

Ryaque
06-30-2009, 05:20 PM
Hey she's not that cold. You'll just have to wait and see what happens.

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-30-2009, 05:26 PM
okay...

Ryaque
06-30-2009, 05:27 PM
Oh don't worry. You'll like what happens next.:mrgreen:

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-30-2009, 05:29 PM
Hurray!!

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-30-2009, 05:29 PM
i hope that kimi dude rescues her and then she blushes and he takes her and escapes the evil parents!!

Ryaque
06-30-2009, 05:34 PM
Like I said you'll like what happens next.

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-30-2009, 05:34 PM
Yay!!! ;)

Ryaque
06-30-2009, 05:45 PM
Okay here's a pointless question. Who wants to know what happens next?

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-30-2009, 05:48 PM
MEEEEEEE! if thats the next part of the story!!

Ryaque
06-30-2009, 06:13 PM
Like I said, pointless.

Mayamaru stared in horror at the two people that were the cause for all her suffering. Not only now but through her whole life. My mother had long, raven black hair and red eyes and always wore a white robe with a sign that meant 'snake.' My father had short, brown hair, brown eyes, and wore a dark, sea blue robe that had the sign 'rain' on it. My mother walked up and slapped me across the face. "What is wrong with you?? Can't you ever stop causing trouble??!!" She was pratically at tears she was so angry and her face was pure red. My father stepped up and comforted my mother while I just let my tounge fly. "Can I stop causing trouble??!! What's wrong with me??!! What about you!!?? You hated me from the start and even when I did nothing to you both of you shunned me. You gave me a BOY'S name when you knew how sacred a name was in our family!! Thanks to you I'll always be unwanted and unaccepted ANYWERE!! All because I was a girl when I was born!!! I..." The white haired man covered my mouth and nodded at my mother and father. They both were staring at me with complete disgust. "You never were even supposed to be born, Mayamaru!!! You are unwanted because you were not planned, not expected!!! You are not supossed to exist!!" My mother screamed at me and she started slapping me across the face. "It's time me fixed that mistake." My father said as he pulled a sword out from under his robe and raised it above my head. "By thankful that we'll give you a burial; though you don't deserve it." He swung down at me and I closed my eyes waiting for the end. Go ahead. If it will make you happy, go ahead and kill me. I don't care.

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-30-2009, 06:20 PM
morE moRE mORE MORE!! I NEED MORE!!

jacobjak
06-30-2009, 06:22 PM
morE moRE mORE MORE!! I NEED MORE!!
what she said

Ryaque
06-30-2009, 06:24 PM
Wow, I think you two are getting adictted to this story. Maybe I should wait till tomorrow...

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-30-2009, 06:27 PM
noooooo tonight not tomorrow tonight!!get urself some ramen if u need to!

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-30-2009, 06:27 PM
or massive amounts of energy drinks!

nexthokage
06-30-2009, 06:28 PM
great story

Ryaque
06-30-2009, 06:44 PM
Okay, okay, okay already. Geez, if I stall much longer I think you'll probabuly take me hostage and make me tell you. Okay here is goes.

Mayamaru waited and waited for the final blow and heard the sword coming toward her. People say that when you're about to die your whole life flashes before your eyes; they're wrong. Only all the wrong you did or all the times you were hurt...oh wait that is my life. Getting hurt and doing things wrong; that's me. Then I saw Kimikage, that night when he slept next to me. I remembered his eyes as he stared at me and I cursed myself for not seeing it. He saved me because he likes me!!! And here I am about to die. I'm so sorry Kimikage...good bye. The sword came closer and Mayamaru took in her last breath and prepared for the impact. Closer it came and it was about to strike her when she heard metal clash against metal. "Pardon the interuption but I don't think you want to be killing her if I was you." Mayamaru instantly reconized the voice and opened her eyes to see Kimikage.

"You came!!" She whispered to herself. He had block the sword with his own and was standing infront of her. The white haired man was unconciouse on the floor. Kimikage knocked the sword out of my fathers hands and while they were disracted he untied me and scooped me up into his arms and ran down the hall.

Mayamaru couldn't remember a more happier time in her life. "Thank you." She said as she hugged him tight. "Anytime." He said and she blushed alittle. "Were you ordered to save me again?" She asked jokingly and this time he blushed. "No, this one is on the house." He held her closer to him and continued running through the tunnels.

We heard footsteps behind us but we kept going. I didn't care we were in danger; he had saved me of his own free will so that must mean he likes me. He kept running and we got outside in only a few seconds. He stopped and turned around and threw a sleek black knife with a piece of paper attached to it at the entrance to the cave and blew it up. The rocks topulled ontop of one another and the entrance became blocked. "Come one, Mayamaru, you're probabuly starving. I got breakfast waiting at home, along with your snake friend." He said as he moved her to his back and took off running. We are going home.

jacobjak
06-30-2009, 06:48 PM
yay great story :D

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-01-2009, 07:21 AM
aww that is cute and awesome and hurray for kimikage!! he saved her from the evil parents...they really are evil i mean if ur expecting a boy and get a girl, too bad!!and they are so sick as to call her a boy's name (no offense to boys) that is just wrong and cruel and if a name is so "sacred" then why didnt they give her a good one???teh meanies! and dont worry im not gonna take u hostage!!or am i? :twisted: im kidding kidding but write more! its greeeeeeaaat

Ryaque
07-01-2009, 01:45 PM
Wow, I'm glad everyone is liking this so much, but I have a problem. *dramatic music* I'm suffering writers block.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-02-2009, 08:54 AM
DUN DUN DUUUUUH NOOOOOOOOOOO! u cant suffer from writer's block!! WHAT ARE WE GONNA DO???

Ryaque
07-02-2009, 01:12 PM
I don't know!!! I'm lost!! Wait give me ideas people, I need you're help. What should happen to Kimikage and Mayamaru?

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-02-2009, 03:13 PM
they go on a date!!!DUH!

Ryaque
07-02-2009, 03:32 PM
Oh really? How am I going to fit that into the story??? More ideas!!

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-02-2009, 04:06 PM
okay okay how about they go on a trip to suna and they help fight ninja that suddenly attacked the village kimikage gets knocked unconscious mayamaru rescues him THEN they go on a date XD

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-02-2009, 04:08 PM
and before all that they lived happily in the house until her parents found a way out and tracked her down again they barely escape and live somewhere else then go on the trip to suna XD

Ryaque
07-02-2009, 04:08 PM
No that won't work...unless...hang on I got an idea...I hope.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-02-2009, 04:09 PM
use that idea and let it grow!!!

☆★sasuke☆★
07-02-2009, 04:11 PM
awsomeness

Ryaque
07-02-2009, 04:22 PM
I was so happy. Happier than I've been in my whole life. Kimikage and I were heading home and what will happen there; who knows? As long as we are together I am happy. Mayamru thought as Kimikage carried her across hills, never slowing, never stopping. All of a sudden there was an explosion and we were thrown onto the ground.

I got up and saw Kimikage was bleeding bad. I ran over and tore some of my shirt and wrapped it around him. He was coughing up blood and could just barely keep his eyes open. I looked around and saw the white haired man standing on a high rock above us. He had a wicked grin on his face and was holding another sleek knife with a piece of paper attacked to it. "Mayamaru...go on...without me." He coughed out and started losing conciouseness. "OVER MY DEAD BODY!! DON'T YOU DARE DIE ON ME KIMIKAGE!!!" Mayamaru yelled at him as tears ran down her face. From the bolder she heard evil laughing and the man was grinning at them. "Love, what else could this be. *laughs again* It will be a lot better for both of you if I just end it right here." He threw the knife at them; by instinct Mayamaru picked up Kimikage and moved him somewhere safe. Something inside her told her to fight back. You beat this guy before. Make sure this time he STAYS DEAD!! A voice inside her yelled and she could feel power building up inside her. Her green eyes turned red and her black hair started blowing when there was no wind and her clothes started flowing. Let's save him!!! The voice ordered and Mayamaru charged at the man.

When he saw what was coming at him he was shocked. "What the hell are you??!!" He screamed at her and tried to defend himself but failed and was torn to pieces by Mayamaru's rage. She tore and tore until he was nothing but piles everywhere, and she was covered in blood. She started losing her power and was feeling weak. She despiratly ran toward Kimikage and fainted and she fell onto his chest. "Mayamaru...you..." Silence.

Well what do you think?

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-02-2009, 04:23 PM
eee keep going!!

Ryaque
07-02-2009, 04:30 PM
Sorry but you'll have to wait until later. I have to get off now. Bye.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-02-2009, 04:31 PM
:( bye

Ryaque
07-03-2009, 12:10 PM
Okay I'm back. I still have writers block though. NaruSakufluff4ever, you think of good ideas; what should happen but no dates. Or anyone else for that matter, HELP ME OUT HERE!!!

Ryaque
07-03-2009, 02:26 PM
Someone PLEASE HELP!!!

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-03-2009, 02:27 PM
alright alright...

Ryaque
07-03-2009, 02:28 PM
You got any ideas on what should happen next? I'm drawing up blanks here.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-03-2009, 02:30 PM
alright they get home and kimikage is critically injured mayamaru doesnt sleep fr 3 days and nights tending to him and he gets better the first thing he does when he sees her is move his head a little away and ask, what are you? not yelling but in an afraid voice as well. mayamaru desnt answer he asks louder what are you? mayamaru says she doesnt know and starts crying kimikage comforts her but seems distant and finally a few days later he says we need to find out what you are mayamaru is scared because that means going back to the village she was chased out of. THERE!

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-03-2009, 02:30 PM
is that good?

Ryaque
07-03-2009, 02:33 PM
Heck yeah that's good. I think I could use that. I'll start writing it right now.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-03-2009, 02:36 PM
Yeaaaas!!

Ryaque
07-03-2009, 03:02 PM
Mayamaru woke up with a start. She looked around and saw it was very late and she saw Kimikage's bandages were drenched in his blood. Mayamaru gasped and put him onto her back and ran as fast as she could toward the house. "Kimikage...don't you dare die on me!!!" She silently ordered.

She got to the house and got straight to work tending to his wounds. She got bandages and made as many herbal remedies she could with the herbs around the house. All the time he just kept his eyes closed and his heart barely kept beating.

Three days passed and she never left his side. He seemed to be getting stronger but still stayed unconciouse. Mayamaru had no idea what else to do...she did everything she could and now just had to wait. Damn it Kimikage!!! What did you do to me? If you die...I don't know if I'll be able to live after that. She thought to herself as she replaced the dry rag on his head with a wet one.

That night Mayamaru stared out the window and saw the moon smiling down on her. It seemed to encourage her; saying he'll be alright, but she didn't calm down. She looked toward him on his bed and cryed. She couldn't stand it if he died. He was the only one that accepted her and she didn't want to lose him. No...I won't lose him. He wouldn't leave me EVER!!! She tried to encourage herself but had no luck.

Mayamaru was walking through a tunnel; it was pitch black and the only light was the torch she held in her hand. She walked and walked through it; determined to reach the end. Not knowing where or when that will happen but she kept walking. All of a sudden she heard "Mayamaru help!!!" She turned and saw the white haired man holding a knife to Kimikage's throut. Slightly cutting into him. She turned and ran toward them but they kept moving back as soon as she got close. The cave grew darker and she could just barely see him now. "KIMIKAGE!!!!!!!" She yelled then she heard a slice and a body hit the ground. The white man came out of the shadows, draging Kimkage's body behind him. She screamed a wordless cry and fell to her knees while the man laughed madly.

"NNNNOOO!!!" Mayamaru screamed and sat up from her chair. She looked around and the sun was just over the horizon. She kept panting heavily till she saw Kimikage on the bed; still alive and still fighting to stay that way. She walked over and switched out his bandages and tryed to fight back the fears that the nightmare aroused inside her. He groaned and opened his eyes. He seemed distant at first then the light came to his eyes when he saw Mayamaru. He quickly sat up and backed away alittle. "What are you?" He asked with alittle fear hidden in his voice. Mayamaru didn't know how to reply because she did not know herself. What AM I? I don't even know. "WHAT ARE YOU?? ANSWER ME!!!" He demanded and Mayamaru flinched back at his anger. "I...I don't know!!!" She screamed at him and started crying again. He seemed to soften and walked over to her and hugged her tightly. "It's okay...calm down. I'm sorry." He comforted her but she just kept crying. "The...the only ones who...might know what I am are..." She tried to say but the memories that the sentence brought were too painful and she choked on her words. "...are the people in your village?" He finished for her and she nodded. He looked away and became distant again; lost in his thoughts. "Well, I guess it's time that I saw where you came from then." He finally said as he leaned down and kissed her on the forehead. "But...what they did to me...I..." He covered her mouth with his hand and hushed her. "I'm with you and I swear nothing will happen to you." He said and kissed her again. She seemed to relax and knew that arguing with him was pointless. "Alright. We'll leave tomorrow." She finally agreed.

Well there is the next part but most of the credit goes to NaruSakufluff4ever, she gave me the idea for this so thank her along with me.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-03-2009, 03:06 PM
ty 4 the credit and can u continue from here or r u still stuck

Ryaque
07-03-2009, 03:08 PM
No I'm okay now. Thanks, but I need a rest; my fingers hurt.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-03-2009, 03:10 PM
ah okay and hurray!!no more writers block!

Ryaque
07-03-2009, 03:13 PM
I'm about as happy as you are. I absolutely HATE writes block!!!

takuya
07-03-2009, 03:14 PM
if u get writer's block again i might be able to help

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-03-2009, 03:15 PM
writers block completely fries all thoughts of creative thinking its TORTURE!!

Ryaque
07-03-2009, 03:17 PM
if u get writer's block again i might be able to help
Thanks for the offer. I'll keep that in mind.

Ryaque
07-03-2009, 03:17 PM
writers block completely fries all thoughts of creative thinking its TORTURE!!
UKK!! Way past torture...it's...it's...UKK!!

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-03-2009, 03:32 PM
AGREED! and takuya hurray!!

Ryaque
07-03-2009, 03:34 PM
Hey people I got to go...enjoy the story. See-ya.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-03-2009, 03:39 PM
:( bye

Ryaque
07-04-2009, 07:24 AM
Hey people I'm back and I got more of the story. Who wants to hear it?

Ninja Pink
07-04-2009, 07:59 AM
Me!!:D

Ryaque
07-04-2009, 09:22 AM
It was a blistering hot morning but I didn't care. I was too caught up in my thoughts to notice. I followed Kimkage as he led the way to my village. I was beyond nervous. What if my parents are there? What if no one knows what I am. What if they try to kill me if I come close to them. Mayamaru worried to herself. Kimikage seemed caught in his thoughts too so the only sound was the soft hissing of my snake around my shoulders. I tried to remember all the books I've read to see if any mythical creatures fit the description of what happened to me, but I came up with nothing. What the hell am I?

It was getting late and Kimkage was looking around for a place to camp. I blindly followed him; still lost in my thoughts. We eventually decided on staying under an oak tree. I finally snapped awake and started making the fire. The whole day none of us ever spoke and I decided it was enough. "You're not scared of me are you, Kimikage?" I asked and he didn't even look up as the light from the fire danced over his face. "No...I'm not," he finally answered, "I'm just...worried about you." He said and finally looked her in the eyes. "Worried about me? Why?" Mayamaru asked with alittle amusement in her voice. "Because...because I don't want that...thing to take control over you, or for it to hurt you." He looked away when he said the last part and I moved over and sat next to him. "I won't let it control me; it won't even dare to hurt me either. Because if it even thinks about it I will show it so much rage that it will wish it was never even created." They both laughed and layed down around the fire; the wolves howled and they fell asleep.

Ryaque
07-04-2009, 03:15 PM
naranzi bushikage tuma and kisaaaz
Huh?:???:

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-05-2009, 09:17 AM
lol that was funny AND KEEP GOING!!Narusaku likey!!!

Ryaque
07-05-2009, 09:50 AM
You really like it that much? I'll write the next part tommorw.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-05-2009, 10:05 AM
Awwww!!:(

Ryaque
07-05-2009, 05:04 PM
Lol, I was joking. If you want to hear the next part I'll post it, so who wants to hear it?

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-05-2009, 05:10 PM
Meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ee!:)

assassin
07-05-2009, 05:12 PM
heh Ill listen

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-05-2009, 05:19 PM
HOW DARE THY???this is GOLD!!

Ryaque
07-05-2009, 05:34 PM
As Kimikage led the way to my village I started filling him in on all of our costums. I told him never to insult people in the colorful robes, don't eat any meat in public because animals are very important to my people, and above all STAY NEAR ME!! I may have been exiled but I knew the place better than him and I didn't want him to get in trouble with anyone.

We reached the village a few hours later and got a room at an Inn. It was getting dark and I hid my face from the Inn keeper, Anna. She always hated me and was, I'm sure, very happy when I left.

The room was small and damp and smelled like old socks. I pluged my nose and opened a window to let it air out. I looked in the closet and pulled out some nice robes that Kimikage and I could wear to blend in better. Him with his cloak and me with my torn and bloody clothes; we would stand out like sore thumbs. I grabbed a purple robe that had 'flower' on it and the snake was wrapped around my shoulders. He wore one that had the symbol 'tiger' and was bright orange.

We left and started looking for the village elder. He was a kind old man to everyone, everyone but me. He hated me almost as much as my parents did, and it drove me crazy. I never did anything to him; yet he absolutely despises me.

We found his house and I opened the door and stepped inside with Kimkage following close behind, sword at the ready. We found the old man asleep in his bed. He had long white hair that hit the floor when he stood, a white beard that was about half the length as his hair, and he wore a pure black robe that had 'raven' on it. Kimikage and I surronded him and I held my sword to his neck and shook him awake. He opened his eyes and saw Kimikage first then me. He sat up and glared at me and tried to knock my sword away while saying "Danm it, Mayamaru, why can't you just die like you are supposed to and stop causing all this trouble?" I just laughed and held my sword tighter around his neck. "When every baby is born they are examined. When I was born..." I tried to finish but he inturrupted with "Which never should have happened. You're an abomination!!! You should just..." Before he could finish Kimikage pulled him up even to him and glared at him. "When you examined her did you find anything special about her??" He demanded then dropped him back, or more threw him, down into his bed. "Well, Mayamaru, is appears you got a nice little slave don't you?" I slapped him with all my might and made him bleed. "If you want to live to see sunrise, I suggest you answer the question. You old fart!!" He grumbled then said "No, because you were never examined. You never were suppossed to exist. You didn't deserve it; your parents didn't see the point when you were suppossed to die anyway..." He got another slap to the face and a punch after that. "Why don't you people get it through your thick heads? I WAS BORN!!! Sorry to dissapoint you but I was; deal with it because I'm not going to die anytime soon, and I swear I will destroy this place that treated my like dirt. ALL BECAUSE I WAS A GIRL!!!" She sliced his arms and left him bleeding.

Outside Kimikage was fumming but calmly asked "If he didn't examine you and he doesn't know what you have inside you what now?" I looked at him and he instantly understood but didn't like it. "Come on, are you insane?? Don't go to THEM!!!" He was worried sick now, but he cut off after he saw the look Mayamaru gave him. "It's about time I had a family reunion, and besides won't they just be ticked off that I am still alive? I was to see their faces." She said as she started walking off toward the Inn; Kimikage reluctanly followed close behind. This should be interesting.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-05-2009, 05:44 PM
ooooOooOoooOoooOoOOOohhhh this is going to get very fighty very soon ME LIKEY!!

Ryaque
07-05-2009, 05:50 PM
I'm glad; and yes there is going to be a fight. A BIG ONE!! But I can't give away much more that that.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-05-2009, 05:53 PM
awwww....well please write now not later!!!

Ryaque
07-05-2009, 05:57 PM
I'm still thinking up the details. Give me alittle time okay?

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-05-2009, 05:58 PM
okay okay...:(

assassin
07-05-2009, 05:58 PM
I can wait.

Ryaque
07-05-2009, 06:13 PM
Mayamaru and Kimikage left the Inn the next morning and went to Mayamaru's former home. "Why are we here?" He asked and she just laughed. "I left something here that I could use." I said as I crawled under my bed and looked for the lose floor bored. I looked around and finally found what I was looking for. I pulled out a nice, but unusual sword. It was curved and had a deep black blade, the hilt was read with black striped and it had a deep crimson red diamond in the middle of it. I crawled back out and showed the sword to Kimikage. "Where did you get that?" He asked as he gazed in awe at the sword. "It was mine, but when I left I couldn't grab it. I've been wanting to get it back for some time. It will help in the fight." She grabbed the holder for in and quickly slid it in and removed her old long sword. "Lets go."

They left the village about and hour ago and walked through the woods. "Mayamaru, how are you going to find them anyway? You have no idea where they are!!" Kimikage worried to much. Mayamaru just laughed really hard. "I know where they are; they'll be someplace hiring henchmen to kill me." Kimikage's eyes popped out of his head. "TO KILL YOU??!! WHY AREN'T YOU MORE WORRIED??!!" He was screaming and Mayamaru turned to see him nearly having a heart attack. "Look, you okay? You seem to be worrying to much. Don't worry; my parents with hire people then I will defeat them and find my parents and demand to know what is in me." He didn't calm at all. "What if they don't know? Or if they did what makes you think they would tell you?" He demanded. Mayamaru hopped he wouldn't ask. "If...if they don't know I'll just leave. If they won't tell me...I'm sure that if I promised them that I would fulfill their greatest wish they would tell me..." Kimikage didn't get it at first then he started shaking his head. "NO!! NO!! I WON'T LET YOU!!!" He grabbed her and she started crying. "You...you aren't going to be with me when that happens, Kimikage. This is where you and I say bye to eachother." She turned around and gave him a kiss on the lips then slipped out of his grip and ran off. He tried to chase after her, but she was too fast. "Mayamaru, NOOOO!!!" He yelled as she disappeared from sight. I'm so sorry.

Well that's it for the night. My parents are going to kick me off soon so enjoy this till I;m again.

assassin
07-05-2009, 06:21 PM
I enjoy this story.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-05-2009, 06:22 PM
awww thats sad and romantic and sad...and c ya tomorrow ryaque!

Ryaque
07-05-2009, 06:22 PM
Glad you like it. Bye *waves bye to everyone*

jacobjak
07-06-2009, 07:47 AM
yay great story :mrgreen:

Ryaque
07-06-2009, 07:51 AM
Okay people I'm back with one simple question. Who wants to hear the next part of the story?

jacobjak
07-06-2009, 07:52 AM
Okay people I'm back with one simple question. Who wants to hear the next part of the story?
who doesnt lol

Ryaque
07-06-2009, 08:08 AM
who doesnt lol
Lol, good question.

Mayamaru kept running, never stoping, never slowing. She just kept going all through the night and into the next morning. She reached a small village and finally stopped at an Inn for the night. The Inn keeper seemed to stare at her weird then when she left he looked at a poster and ran over to a man in the corner and pointed at me. Looks like my parents got here. Bring it on!! She thought to herself as she went up to her room, followed closely by the man in the corner.

Mayamaru, where did you go??!! Kimikage yelled to himself as he tried to follow her trail, but the rain that started to fall was washing it away. Danm it!! Can't someone be on my side for once? He cursed at himself and continued along the trail to the next village. I need a ninja hound here. Good thing I know where one is. He picked up speed and turned into the forest, looking for the hound he knew.

Mayamaru cleaned her sword after slicing the man's throat. "To easy." She said to herself and laughed. The man was on the ground, dead, and blood oozed from his throat in spirts. She picked him up and threw him out the window and started cleaning up when the Inn Keeper came in. "What the hell...you, OUT!!!!" He ordered Mayamaru when he saw the mess. She left after giving him a good slice on the arm. "That's no way to treat a lady." She said as she stepped out the door. She went and purchased a map and crossed out this village. Nope not here. So the nearest village is...the Village Hidden In The Fire. She winced at the pain that her heart felt when she remembered this was the village...Kimi...he was from. She couldn't even think his name. She walked out the village with the moon guiding her from above. I will find them and they will regret making me do this to him... She thought to herself as she disappeared into the darkness of the night.

jacobjak
07-06-2009, 08:13 AM
Lol, good question.

Mayamaru kept running, never stoping, never slowing. She just kept going all through the night and into the next morning. She reached a small village and finally stopped at an Inn for the night. The Inn keeper seemed to stare at her weird then when she left he looked at a poster and ran over to a man in the corner and pointed at me. Looks like my parents got here. Bring it on!! She thought to herself as she went up to her room, followed closely by the man in the corner.

Mayamaru, where did you go??!! Kimikage yelled to himself as he tried to follow her trail, but the rain that started to fall was washing it away. Danm it!! Can't someone be on my side for once? He cursed at himself and continued along the trail to the next village. I need a ninja hound here. Good thing I know where one is. He picked up speed and turned into the forest, looking for the hound he knew.

Mayamaru cleaned her sword after slicing the man's throat. "To easy." She said to herself and laughed. The man was on the ground, dead, and blood oozed from his throat in spirts. She picked him up and threw him out the window and started cleaning up when the Inn Keeper came in. "What the hell...you, OUT!!!!" He ordered Mayamaru when he saw the mess. She left after giving him a good slice on the arm. "That's no way to treat a lady." She said as she stepped out the door. She went and purchased a map and crossed out this village. Nope not here. So the nearest village is...the Village Hidden In The Fire. She winced at the pain that her heart felt when she remembered this was the village...Kimi...he was from. She couldn't even think his name. She walked out the village with the moon guiding her from above. I will find them and they will regret making me do this to him... She thought to herself as she disappeared into the darkness of the night.
lol the first part sounded like a poem great story

Ryaque
07-06-2009, 08:16 AM
A poem? I didn't mean to do that, but thanks.

abby750
07-06-2009, 08:18 AM
This is a good story!

Ryaque
07-06-2009, 08:22 AM
Thank you. The next part will be here later today.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-06-2009, 10:31 AM
hurray 4 ryaque!!!!!

Ryaque
07-06-2009, 12:35 PM
hurray 4 ryaque!!!!!
Thank you.:mrgreen:

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-06-2009, 12:36 PM
:mrgreen: stories are awesomes

Ryaque
07-06-2009, 12:40 PM
Okay I got a stupid question. Who wants to hear more?

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-06-2009, 12:41 PM
MEZ MEZ MEZ!!and again, who doesnt???

Ryaque
07-06-2009, 01:08 PM
Mayamaru continued walking through this dark forest and she started hearing voices. "Why did you leave me Mayamaru?" She looked around but all she saw were the trees. "Mayamaru you're killing me; come back to me, Mayamaru, COME BACK!!" She started falling into a black abis and screamed as loud as she could. She was caught by someone and saw Kimkage smiling at her; then he started changing and grew horns and his face turned red. "Why did you leave me, Mayamaru? You killed me inside, and now I'm going to kill you!!" She was thrown back into the pit of despare and screamed again.

"NOOOO, KIMIKAGE!!!!!" Mayamaru sat up and realized it was just another dream. She looked around and saw she was laying down on another tree branch. She laughed as memories of just a few weeks ago flooded through her mind. Her snake friend slithered onto her shoulder and started licking her with its forked tounge. She got up and continued on the path; it took all of her will not to turn around and run straight back into the arms of the man she loved. I'm so sorry Kimikage...forgive me. She continued as water rolled off her face, but it wasn't rain.

Kimikage kept running through the forest until he came to a small hut that smelled rancide and old. He walked up to the door and knocked on it gently. Out of a smaller door came a gray wolf with a scare over its right eye. "Kimikage," it said, "It's been awhile. I guess you need my help and you're not just here for a friendly visit right?" It said as Kimikage crouched down to eye level. "I need your help tracking down someone called Mayamaru. I really..." The wolf growled and snarled. "Mayamaru!!! I've heard of her; she destroyed her village for no reason and caused pain to her poor parents!!" Kimikage shook his head. "No you're wrong. I know her; she never did anything but try to make her parents proud. They hated her ever since she was born and they are the ones that want her dead, and they are hiring people to kill her. I need your help to save her." The wolf gave Kimikage a weird look. "You love her don't you?" Kimikage stood up and looked away. "With all my heart; Ryumaru, I need your help. Please help me find her!!" He turned back toward the wolf and it sighed. "I have anything better to do, and she is obviously very important to you. I will help." Kimikage's eyes light up and he gave Ryumaru a piece of her clothing for him to find a scent. "I got it. Come one." Kimikage followed Ryumaru through the woods; running at full speed and fierce determination in his eyes. Mayamaru I'm comeing!!!

Mayamaru walked all the way to the next village and gazed in awe at the village gate. It was larger that the biggest tree in the forest and made of wood with a interesting symbol on it. She walked inside and tried to blend in, but eveyone around her just started at her. I can't take them all if they decide to attack me. I better be careful. She kept walking and saw a wanted poster, pinned up on a wall. She ran over and tore it down and read it:
Wanted For Murder
Name: Mayamaru Uzikage
Age: 15
Crime: Destroyed village and killed innnocent traders
Description: Black hair, green eyes, wears robes, armed and exteremely dangerouse
Know Accomlicess: Kimikage Tyzana
Reward: 100,000 Ryo
Reward Location: Village Hidden In The Fire, report to -kage
Mayamaru panacked and started running away. They're spreading lies about me!! People will be trying to kill me...or worse; him. She started heading for the kage's office and hopped he or she knew where the reward was; maybe then she could stop these lies once and for all!!!! She kept running through the village and prayed to god no one would reconize her, and hopped that after this she could return to her beloved.

takuya
07-06-2009, 01:14 PM
interesting story i wonder what happens next

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-06-2009, 01:29 PM
oooh poor mayamaru GAH THOSE PEOPLE ARE SO GAAAH JUST BECAUSE SHE WAS BORN DOESNT MEAN U FRAME HER GAH I WOULD CURSE RIGHT NOW IF THE FORUM ALLOWED IT!

Ryaque
07-06-2009, 02:13 PM
Hey people I want your ABSOLUTE honest opinion of the story, what you like about it, and what you want to change in it. I'm just curious.

takuya
07-06-2009, 02:16 PM
i like the story i hope at the end mayamaru kills her parents and gets with kimikage i hope kimikage makes it in time to stop mayamaru from killing herself

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-06-2009, 02:20 PM
i really like this its a great read i dont like how they framed her but then again i also like it in a its for the story way so i guess i like everything about it!i just hate the fact ur wrapping it up soon...:(

takuya
07-06-2009, 02:25 PM
i really like this its a great read i dont like how they framed her but then again i also like it in a its for the story way so i guess i like everything about it!i just hate the fact ur wrapping it up soon...:(
she cant keep the story going forever

Ryaque
07-06-2009, 02:30 PM
i really like this its a great read i dont like how they framed her but then again i also like it in a its for the story way so i guess i like everything about it!i just hate the fact ur wrapping it up soon...:(
Hey don't be so sad. It may end soon yes, but who knows I might start another thread that's the sequal, or I migh start telling you people about a REAL book I'm writing. I can't quite decide, but don't worry the ending will be great; I promise.

takuya
07-06-2009, 02:39 PM
i hope u make them COWER IN AWE CRY THEIR HEARTS OUT CUZ UR ART IS AN.......EXPLOSION

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-06-2009, 02:40 PM
lol takuya lol and yay ryaque yay!!!

Ryaque
07-06-2009, 02:40 PM
i hope u make them COWER IN AWE CRY THEIR HEARTS OUT CUZ UR ART IS AN.......EXPLOSION
So my story is being compared with Deidara's art? I'll take that as a copliment.

takuya
07-06-2009, 02:41 PM
thanks fluff and its a compliment deidara's cool

Ryaque
07-06-2009, 02:47 PM
Of course he's cool. I LOVE Deidara, not as much as Sasuke, but still. He's one of my favorites.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-06-2009, 02:51 PM
deidara is okay i loved the part where he tried to choke tobi with no arms and only his legs lol

Ryaque
07-06-2009, 02:53 PM
deidara is okay i loved the part where he tried to choke tobi with no arms and only his legs lol
For that one I was literally rolling on the ground laughing. My parents thought I went insane.:lol:

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-06-2009, 02:54 PM
lol what did they do?take u to a psychiatrist? that would be funny lol

Ryaque
07-06-2009, 02:57 PM
No they did that last week. They simply asked...
Them: Ryaque, who is that man on the computer?
Me: Ummm...Orochimaru?
Them: We forbide you from watching Orochimaru for the next week.
Me:*pretends to cry and thinks to myself Man, I'm getting good at that.*

Ryaque
07-06-2009, 03:15 PM
Hey people got to go...Bye.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-06-2009, 03:38 PM
:( bye

Ryaque
07-07-2009, 10:02 AM
Hey people I'm back!! *lightning stikes behind me* Woh, where did that come from? Anyway anyone miss me?

jacobjak
07-07-2009, 10:05 AM
Hey people I'm back!! *lightning stikes behind me* Woh, where did that come from? Anyway anyone miss me?
it wasnt me i swear but you were gone i was to busy catching up on manga yesterday

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-07-2009, 10:11 AM
i tihnk all ur fans missed u duh!!(including me!!!) :D

Ryaque
07-07-2009, 10:21 AM
Thanks NaruSaku, and Jacojak if it was you you're in big trouble; though I could have been...anyway. I'm almost ready to post the next part of the story, and I think either this one or the next one after it will be the ending, or there might me five more. I don't really know, but I promise it's going to be good.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-07-2009, 11:11 AM
okay!! and this might be the last...:(:(:(:(:(:(

Ryaque
07-07-2009, 01:50 PM
Maybe but I have it ready. Who wants to hear it?

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-07-2009, 01:51 PM
ME ME ME ME!!!!!!!!!pweaze?

Ryaque
07-07-2009, 02:07 PM
Mayamaru kept running through the village till she made it to the kage's office.

the kage was a woman with fire red hair, black eyes, and she wore a black dress with red lace. "You're a little stupid aren't you, Mayamaru? Coming straight up to me when you're wanted for murder." Mayamaru closed the door behind her and said "I have not murdered anyone." The Kage laughed and nearly fell over. "Don't you remember? You murdered several traders and destroyed your village!! You deserve to die." She instantly stopped laughing and pulled out a sword. "I did not come here to fight you, great lady, I simply wanted the adress to where the reward is being given." The Kage seemed to soften for a second then threw her sword at Mayamaru. It stabbed her in the shoulder and pinned her against the wall. Mayamaru flinched but didn't scream. "Why should I tell worthless trash like you anything? You are a A class criminal; you will die today." She said as she drove the sword in further. Mayamaru smoothered her scream and started crying. "I wouldn't do that if I were you." She warned. The Kage just laughed again, "What can a child like you do to a great ninja like me?" She asked and drove the sword even further into her. Mayamaru lifted her head up and the Kage stummbled back when she was her eyes. "Because...I will KILL YOU!!!" Mayamaru screamed and pulled the sword out and the wound healed instantly. She felt the same power as before surging through her and her hair started flowing once again. "Just tell me where they are and I will spare your life." She offered and the Kage just backed up more and fell onto her desk. "They're...they're located on the east side of town. In a old warehouse." She stammered out and grabbed her sword. "Thank you great lady I'll be on my way now. " Mayamaru said as she walked out the door.

Kimikage was shocked when he saw where the trail led. "The village!! Ryumaru, are you sure she's here?" He asked the wolf and it started toward the village gait. "I'm possitive; this nose never fails." Kimikage followed the wolf through town and soon came the the Kage's office.

"Kimikage!!! You have a lot of nerve showing up here right after your little girlfriend!!" Kimikage gasped and ran toward her and grabbed the top of her dress. "Where did she go??!! Tell me!!!" The Kage laughed and hit him against the wall. "She went to go find her parents. To bad she's walking straight into a trap." The Kage started laughing and Kimikage lost his temper. He stabbed her with his sword and pressed it into her hard. "Tell me or I swear I will kill you." The Kage grinaced and realayed the address to where she sent Mayamaru and groaned when she realized she just got beat by two kids in the same day. Kimikage left and him and Ryumaru started heading toward the warehouse, and...to Mayamaru. Hang on Mayamaru, I'm comeing!!!

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-07-2009, 02:13 PM
oh holy cat this is good!!!!keep writing im at the edge of my seat ;)

Ryaque
07-07-2009, 02:49 PM
oh holy cat this is good!!!!keep writing im at the edge of my seat ;)
Oh holey cat? That's a new one, I've hear holey dog, holey wall, even holey golfer, but not holey cat.

Ryaque
07-07-2009, 03:06 PM
Lol, yup that is a new one.:lol:

Ryaque
07-07-2009, 03:12 PM
Good because if my boyfriend started swearing on this topic...put it this way it wouldn't be pretty.

Ryaque
07-07-2009, 03:28 PM
Lol.:lol:

Ryaque
07-08-2009, 07:29 AM
Hey people I'm back, and I got a good fight scene with me and I ask WHO WANTS TO SEE MAYAMARU AND KIMIKAGE KICK BUTT??!!

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-08-2009, 08:06 AM
MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE(one week later)EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ryaque
07-08-2009, 09:37 AM
Mayamaru kept walking toward the building that the Kage had told her. She wasn't sure if this was a trap or not, but if it was, she doubted that she couldn't get out of it with this mysterious power that she weilded.

Mayamaru came to a room that was all boxes and chains hung on the walls. She looked around and saw that no one was here. Suddenly chains wrapped around her and started burning her. She screamed and fought to break them but they kept burning her. A man dressed in pure black appeared followed my the two people that she hated most, but she needed their help the most. "Finally, we have you, Mayamaru. On this day you will breath no more!!!" Her mother said as she pulled out a sword and aimed it toward her. "Any last words?" She taunted her and stepped forward. "Yes, actually. I want to know if you know what power is inside me." Her mother laughed and nearly dropped the sword she was holding. "What power?? You don't have any power at all!!" Mayamaru picked her head up and stared at her. "Then what do you call...THIS??!!" She started realising her full power and the chains suddenly seemed to fall around her. "What...what the hell are you doing?? YOU MONSTER!!!" Her mother accused as Mayamaru lunged at her with black chakura surronding her. "GETTING EVEN!!!!!" She yelled as she grabbed her mother and punched her against the wall. Her father suddenly was behind her and held a sword above his head and swung. Before it moved an inch Mayamaru appeared behind him and kicked him right next to her mother. "Don't you know...when the slave is set free the first thing it does...IS KILL THE MASTERS!!!" She swipped at them and knocked then across the room and they were bleeding bad. Suddenly out of nowhere squads of ninja were surrouding her and started wrapping her up in chains again. She fought back with all her might but couldn't break them. Suddely three ninja dressed in dark robes appeared and layed pieces of paper around her. One in front and two on her sides. The leader said "Ninja Art: SEAL!!" The other two did the same and Mayamaru's power started fading. She was going to lose now and she would never get to say good bye to Kimikage or know what that power was. She fell to the floor and couldn't move. Her mother and father came over with swords at the ready. Then they started stabbing her in the arms and legs, but she didn't scream. They slashed and slashed but she didn't scream. She didn't feel anything at all and she started slipping away. They...they won. I'm dieing by their hand. Good bye...Kimikage. I...love you. She closed her eyes and she felt herself slip into the blackness she knew she could never escape.

Okay the last part is next...NaruSakufluff4ever, did I make you fall off your seat?

Ryaque
07-08-2009, 09:43 AM
What do you mean?

Ryaque
07-08-2009, 09:47 AM
Oh she will be soon. She really likes this story.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-08-2009, 10:09 AM
Mor more more

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-08-2009, 10:10 AM
owww ii pressed enter before i fell out of my seat that hurt

Ryaque
07-08-2009, 10:33 AM
Mayamaru kept slipping away into the blackness, she couldn't see or hear anymore, and she couldn't feel the blades piercing her skin. All she knew was she was dieing and she loved Kimikage more that anything else. Out of the darkness Mayamaru saw something. A giant, bird looking creature and it came toward her. "What are you doing?? You're giving up just like that? What about him??!!" The bird spoke and Mayamaru was stunned; then the fimilar pain she felt in her heart returned. "I see no more point in living. Kimikage probabuly hates me, I have no idea what I am, and I'm wanted by many people!! If I lived I would just get captured and put into jail!!! What's the point?" She replied to the bird. "Well, I know for a fact that Kimikage doesn't hate you; on the contraty, he's looking for you like mad. And you may be wanted yes, but you have me and I will not let you be put into jail. As for what you are...you are Mayamaru the Rogue. You left your village and fought to survive and that has awoken me iside of you. You are the holder of one of the legendary guardians of the world; the most powerful one of all." The bird seemed to lift her spirits when it told her about Kimikage and felt the power inside her once again whell up. "What are you?" She asked as the bird unfurlled its wings. "I am the Raven of Death!! The most powerful guardian the world has ever seen!!! Now don't you give up...I'm breaking the seal but it will take some time. I need you to hold on as long as you can and I'll get those two away from you. I promise." The Raven of Death squawked loudly and Mayamaru could fell herself coming back to reality. She felt the stabbing pain in her arms and legs and her anger was refulled. "GET...OFF OF ME!!!" She screamed with horrible vemon in her voice as she shot her eyes open, they were a different color once again. "No...impossible!!!" Her mother said and jumped back, followed by her father. The sealing ninja took their positions again and tried to seal her once more but it didn't work this time. She was fighting to get free but the chains still held her tight and burned against her skin. "KIMIKAGEEEEEE!!!!" She screamed and fought back even harder. Suddenly the door broke open and there stood a great, gray wolf with a scare and a man standing next to it. "MAYAMARU!!!!" He yelled and started slicing down everything in his path. He got the people holding the chains, the sealers, and he aimed for her parents too. They fought back with all their might, but Kimikage was enraged and could not be stopped. "DANM YOU ALL TO HELL FOR WHAT YOU DID TO HER!!! YOU'LL SUFFER FOR IT...I SWEAR!!!" He threatened and Mayamaru fought back against the seals even harder until..."I am...FREE!!!"

There was a flash of black and Kimikage and her parents turned to see a black raven with green eyes before them. "May...Mayamaru??" They all stammered at the same time and it flexed it's great wings and screached as loud as it could. "You will suffer before me for what you did to me!!! This is the last day you'll ever have!!!" It screamed and Kimikage stepped aside as the raven lunged at the mother and father, he heard tearing sounds and blood splattered everywhere and you heard noises as chunck of meat him the floor.

It was finally over; all this time chasing after them, it's finally over. Mayamaru turned back to normal and turned and started at Kimikage. He stared back in awe and didn't move; then...they ran toward eachother and held eachother after all this time. "Mayamaru...I love you." Kimikage said and kissed her hard. "I love you too...Kimikage." They held eachother for a long time and realized that now they had only one thing to do. "We need to find a place to stay for a while; till all of this blows over." Mayamaru suggested and Kimikage laughed. "How about the Village Hidden In The Stars? I heard there is a wise man there that can help you." Mayamaru laughed this time. "If you want, but I know what I am now and I'm with you; that's all that matters." Together forever.



The End

takuya
07-08-2009, 10:46 AM
nice ending i hope u make a sequel to it

Ryaque
07-08-2009, 10:47 AM
nice ending i hope u make a sequel to it
Thank you...I might.

takuya
07-08-2009, 10:49 AM
yeah i got a story going called Daichi Katsumi can u read it and let me know what u think start at the beginning

Ryaque
07-08-2009, 11:00 AM
Good stuff shes gonna break everybody
Lol, thanks.I think.

athoatho
07-08-2009, 12:19 PM
Ryaque you write in a beautiful way congratulations take care of your gift

Ryaque
07-08-2009, 12:27 PM
Ryaque you write in a beautiful way congratulations take care of your gift
Thank you very much Athoatho.:mrgreen:

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-08-2009, 01:05 PM
:cry::cry::cry: THAT WAS AWESOME!!!BUT WHY MUST IT END!!

athoatho
07-08-2009, 01:37 PM
(every thing has a beginning has an end ) martix

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-08-2009, 01:38 PM
i no but still...

Ryaque
07-08-2009, 02:19 PM
Don't worry; there MIGHT be a sequal, or I'll just post my other story, though it's not Naruto related at all.

Ryaque
07-08-2009, 06:34 PM
Hey people I need your opinion on something. I'm not sure weither I should make a sequal, or post another story I'm working on, but it's sort of fantasy/Supernatural story. What do you think I should do?

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-08-2009, 06:36 PM
im good with either one supernatural/fantasy and naruto are my thing:mrgreen:

Ryaque
07-08-2009, 06:38 PM
Oh that helps. Hmm...I still can't decide.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-08-2009, 06:39 PM
were u being sarcastic or not?

Ryaque
07-08-2009, 06:42 PM
Both...that didn't help at all, but I still can't decide.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-08-2009, 06:48 PM
well whatever u say goes ur the writer after all

Ryaque
07-08-2009, 06:49 PM
Well, maybe I'll know by tomorrow...but I don't have any idea what to do.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-08-2009, 06:53 PM
well what do u like better? writing another naruto related or writing a supernatural/fantasy one?

Ryaque
07-08-2009, 06:57 PM
I like them both equally, but the supernatural on is sort of similar to Twilight, and it isn't finished. I could tell you part of it and you could say if you like it or not.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-08-2009, 06:59 PM
i like twilight i read all four books i read every book in just about a few days GIVE ME A TASTE!

Ryaque
07-08-2009, 07:14 PM
Okay if you want...
Hunter and the Hunted
Prologe
Many people think that when they die they will go to Heaven or Hell. To some extent this is true. People who die as victims or have done a lot of good in their life go to the happiest place in the universe. However, people who are evil and cruel go to the worst place in the universe. Yet there is another option that can happen. Sometimes there are people who are the worst of the worst, and their punishment is not to die but to live; forever. They live as some of the worst creatures and everyday must deal with what they have done. Until they give penance for their sins they must always live with the guilt.

I learned this while I lived in Missorie; properly named beacause everything is so dark and dreary. I just moved there with my mom, in a small, sad town called Mortville, after her divorce from me dad. Here in this horrible place I met Him and had one of the greatest adventures in the history of the world.

cherryflower
07-08-2009, 08:03 PM
The storys great and I think you should write a seuqal to it.

Ryaque
07-08-2009, 08:10 PM
The storys great and I think you should write a seuqal to it.
Thanks.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-09-2009, 07:34 AM
okay i know why ur torn...

Ryaque
07-09-2009, 07:39 AM
SEE!!! They're both good stories but I can't decide which, but with the sequal I have no idea what will happen next...got any ideas?

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-09-2009, 07:42 AM
okay for the sequel...maybe they participate in helping suna fight of rogue ninja and mayamaru clears her name and is accepting with kimikage everywhere!^.^

Ryaque
07-09-2009, 07:44 AM
Hmm...do you think I should also add in the other guardians? Like the Raven of Death is only one of them. There should be about four more. What do you think? Good idea or no?

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-09-2009, 07:45 AM
yes that is a good idea like maybe the tiger of life or something or the monkey of wisdom somehting like that

Ryaque
07-09-2009, 07:49 AM
Oh no...I can't do tiger. I already have a character that has a tiger and it's a tailed beast...but what about raven, wolf, bear, leopard, and something from the sea...like a shark or something?

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-09-2009, 07:51 AM
mm maybe but the person might be at a disadvantage away from the sea when they transform into their guardian

Ryaque
07-09-2009, 07:55 AM
Good point. What can live in the sea and land? All I can think of is a crocodile, but I don't think that's a good idea.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-09-2009, 08:01 AM
yea too slow

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-09-2009, 08:02 AM
turtle? lol

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-09-2009, 08:02 AM
ive got nothing

Ryaque
07-09-2009, 08:03 AM
Lol, no I'm trying to stay AWAY from the tailed beasts...tortise? Nope even slower....ukk I HATE WRITERS BLOCK!!!

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-09-2009, 08:04 AM
ME TOO!!umm gaaaah i cant think of any land and water animals lets stay with land or air animals

Ryaque
07-09-2009, 08:09 AM
Okay so here's the list
Raven of Death: Guardian of souls and the sky
Wolf of ....(I'll work on nicknames later): Guardian of the night and of freedom
Bear of...: Guardian of power and the forest
Leopard of...:Guardian of speed and the dessert
.....of...: Guardian of... and the sea
What should the last one be?

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-09-2009, 08:11 AM
giant kingfisher!! giant kingfisher guardian of...: of air and sea sky is diff tthan air ^.^

Ryaque
07-09-2009, 08:14 AM
No that won't work...Hmn...What about a horse? Guardian of beauty and of the sea. Do you think that would work? (Or a sea horse that can go on land and sea)

cherryflower
07-09-2009, 08:15 AM
umm...a crab can live in and out of the water right.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-09-2009, 08:16 AM
lets go with horse not sea horse what can a giant sea horse do?

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-09-2009, 08:16 AM
crabs good but they are a little slow we want to balance the animals out

Ryaque
07-09-2009, 08:18 AM
lets go with horse not sea horse what can a giant sea horse do?
Well it doesn't have to be like a real sea horse. I was thinking the front half in a regular horse, but the back is a tail...like a mermaid. Sea horse...get it?

Ryaque
07-09-2009, 08:19 AM
crabs good but they are a little slow we want to balance the animals out
Well these animals are dangerouse or mysterious then you get a crab...kind of ruins it.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-09-2009, 08:20 AM
how would the horse run with a mermaid tail?

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-09-2009, 08:20 AM
and yea crab is just kinda normal dangerous and mysterious is what the animals are ^.^

Ryaque
07-09-2009, 08:23 AM
how would the horse run with a mermaid tail?
It doesn't have to...a sea horse has fins but why can't this sea horse have wings? Anyway I like the idea...the crab could be a back up though.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-09-2009, 08:24 AM
but then its a sea pegasus

cherryflower
07-09-2009, 08:24 AM
what about a penguin, but I like the sea horse one.

Ryaque
07-09-2009, 08:25 AM
but then its a sea pegasus
Oh geez, I really like the idea though..besides a pegasus is still a horse. It's just a different breed that's all.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-09-2009, 08:25 AM
ooh cool penguin but what are they're attack abilities?u mean sea pegasus for the wing part

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-09-2009, 08:26 AM
does it still has 2 front legs?

Ryaque
07-09-2009, 08:26 AM
what about a penguin, but I like the sea horse one.
Hmmm....I don't know...good idea, but I'm not sure it fits.

Ryaque
07-09-2009, 08:27 AM
does it still has 2 front legs?
Yes, the front part is a regular part, but the back is the sea part.

cherryflower
07-09-2009, 08:27 AM
ooh cool penguin but what are they're attack abilities?u mean sea pegasus for the wing part

they have beaks to attack with.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-09-2009, 08:27 AM
okay so its like a brown horse with browwn wings and a brown mermaid tail thing?or something?