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Yajyuu Mikazuki
06-28-2009, 08:39 PM
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Chishiki O Hiromeru


PROLOGUE:

He looked up at the great tree. The one lone tree that stood in the arid desert was bigger than any other tree he had seen in the Land of Fire, or anywhere else. What was stranger was the sudden drop he felt on his face. As the wind blew the loose ends of the bandage wraps he wore over his mouth flapped wildly. The rain poured down. The man with bandages wrapped around his face continued to walk towards the giant tree.

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Chapter 1: The Servant

The great feudal lord of the Land of Rain sat among his servants, food, and concubines in his great mansion. The rather large man stroked his long beard and smiled. He thought about his many mansions, his concubines, and most of all his mass amounts of currency and food. The lord frowned. He remembered the things he didn't have. Friends. Laughter. Love. All he had were his concubines and servants. The concubines did not even make him happy anymore. The more women he saw the less he enjoyed being around them, almost to the point of despise. He closed his eyes. He thought about his servants. He thought about how loyal they were to him and how much he needed that support. Then he thought about the concubines. The thought was pushed out of his head quickly. He thought about how much he loved the servants foot rubs maybe to the point of...... arousal and th- "Excuse me Dai-sama". The feudal lord opened his eyes. "Yes what is it" He almost yelled at the person in front of him for interrupting his thoughts. Then he saw the person. Susumu Kiyoshi. A young servant that had just been recruited. "I am sorry for waking you Dai-sama I wil-" Susumu was cut off by the feudal lord. "No please Susumu please continue". Susumu raised an eyebrow. He had never seen the feudal lord this way. It worried him but he eliminated the thought from his mind and continued. "We have just received word that an important leader of a clan in Amegakure would like to meet with you". The feudal lord made a note of it. "Yes thank you Susumu you are excused". As the young man walked away the feudal lord stared. He thought things he had never thought before. He shook his head and thought to himself, "Am I...". But before he knew it, he called. "Actually, I am not done with you Susumu, would you come to my personal quarters with me?" Susumus eyes widened. He looked back, horrified. He wanted to question, to refuse, but Dai-sama would have his head with a snap of his fingers if he dared to. He gulped and escorted the feudal lord to his quarters.

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Chapter 2: The Massacre

As he walked towards the huge, lone tree, he thought of nothing. The man who once joked with friends and family. The man who was once a hero to his clan. The man who once said I love you to a special girl every night and had to make sure she fell asleep comfortably before he could get any rest. He now walks as a rogue, a friend to few. As the tree neared, he only mildly felt the rain drop on him. He looked up and saw the trees gigantic branches towering over him. He would be at the trunk soon.

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Mikio sat atop his tree palace, over looking his "kingdom". He thought about the recent reports of Dai, an associate and feudal lord over the Land of Rain. There were reports of Dai's sexuality and choices with servants. They said that he has been hand picking servants to have affairs with him. This was not the Dai he knew. He wondered what was going through Dai's mind and what would happen with th Mikazu-. "Mikio-sama!" Mikio, surprised sent a kunai into the mans leg. "Oh, Takeo, I am so sorry about that I was just surprised an-" "It is not a problem Mikio-sama" The small man pulled the kunai out, and it immediately healed up. The man called Takeo was a skinny man. He looked wimpy, pathetic, and unfitting to be a shinobi. But this man had a secret few people knew. "An intruder has been found walking towards the trunk Mikio-sama" said the shriveled man. "Thank you Takeo, leave him be until he gets closer, if he does, sustain and question him." "Yes sir" He said with a salute, then scurried out of the room.

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The man with bandages around his face saw that he was close to the trunk. He made a deep sigh. Now was the time to focus. He made hand signs and drew his Zanpuktou. Taking one more deep breath in, he flashed away.

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"MIKIO-SAMA!!!" "Yes Takeo what is it??!?" "All of our guards, there heads are off!!!"

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Chapter 3: The Name

"What!!!?!?!?" Mikio screamed. "Dead all 250 of them!" exclaimed Takeo, "I went down there to check the reports on the intruder and there bodies were scattered. The only strange thing was that there heads were....."

"What about there heads Takeo?!"

"They were stacked up 1 by 1, with perfect balance." Mikios eyes widened.

"Not him" he whispered. "Mikio-sama could this be that Mikazu-" Takeo was flung towards the tree and embedded into the tree about 10 feet. The blood splattered over Mikios face. When Mikio opened his eyes after the shock, all he saw was a bandage flowing in the wind. "I am so sorry Yajyuu Mikazuki..."

Chapter 4: The Tiny Man

"You lied to me" whispered a grungey voice. "Yajyuu I would never lie to you, you know that" whispered Mikio back. Yajyuu put his hand around Mikios neck. "Then why are they dead?!" Yajyuu pushed Mikio back further. “I swear to you if I would of known what would have happened I would have stopped him from making you execute the plan.” Mikio pleaded. “WHO IS HIM!? YOU KEPT US IN THE DARK ALL THIS TIME AND NOW THEY ARE DEAD!” Yajyuu was yelling at this point. You could almost see his lips come in and out of his bandages. “It’s Dai the feudal lord of the Land of Rain! He is probab-” At that moment Mikio was snapped out of Yajyuus hand. “I was sent from the feudal lord to protect this information, and if you are going to be so easy I will have to sustain you as well as the enemy.” There stood a tiny man, with no bruises or cuts, no blood, nothing. “T-t-Takeo?” said an exasperated Mikio with the few breaths he had left.
Takeo threw Mikio back and faced Yajyuu. “I am your opponent.” Yajyuu sighed. How hadn’t this guy gotten hurt at all? The guy was so small and he had hit him with the flat of his zanpuktou hard enough to embed him into the tree. He took another deep sigh. After making sure the loose ends of the bandages around his face were tucked in, and his top hat was straightened out, he made the hand signal for Tiger and whispered “Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu”. 5 water clones sprung up from the rain in a 10 foot radius around Takeo. Takeo observed his opponents. He saw that the zanpuktou had been cloned as well. They would all most likely charge at him, swords raised high. If the real one didn’t charge that would mean they would go all out, not caring for they were only clones, and could be killed and duplicated as many times as needed. He could easily counter this with a jutsu to make his chakra blade bigger. The clones, including the real one, raised there swords up into the air. “Ah this will be easy” Takeo muttered to himself. “The stupid bloke hasn’t thought about what his clones will do to him as well, while my body will string back together on it’s own, how stupid!” When Takeo thought that Yajyuu would start his charge, the clones all shouted together, “Ration: Kokurai!”. Black Lightning came down from the sky, ripping through the tree branches, directly towards Takeo. Takeo screamed at the pain as his heart was puked out through his mouth. His hands flew off as well as his head. When the lightning was done all of the clones grabbed different parts of the body. The clones quickly flashed away in each direction.
As the clones jumped a loud crack was heard. Yajyuu looked up and saw a branch that had cracked from the lightning. It fell straight on Mikio, then fell to the bottom of the trunk. Yajyuu rushed over to Mikio. “Yajyuu, you know I loved Luna and Toshi so much. You 3 were like family to me. I tried to tell you but Dai would have had my head.” Mikio coughed up blood. “What are you going to do about Takeo? He is a follower of Jashin and canno-” “I sensed that he was when he survived the smack from the flat of my zanpuktou, my clones are burying his various body parts in various places in the Mirage Desert and without his rituals and killing he will lose his immortality and die.” Yajyuu said quietly, cutting off Mikio. Mikio coughed up blood once again. “You’ll find Dai in the rice lands south of Amegakure, about 150 kilometers out. Beware of his army. He has thousands of specially trained ninja. They call the army Jinsei.” Mikio told Yajyuu. “Thank you for the warning but did the follower of Jashin not tell you what I did to you 250 men?” said Yajyuu plainly. Mikio chuckled abit but coughed out blood as a result. “Do not underestimate his army Yajyuu. Each team of Jinsei has a leader with a special Kekkei Genkai. Do you understand Yajyuu? Do not underestimate them. If you do Luna, Toshi, and I will never be avenged.” said Mikio with a smile. “Thank you Mikio, I am sorry for ever thinking you would have betrayed us, please live well in heaven, I am forever grateful.” Yajyuu said, head down. “Go Yajyuu, go back to our home. Seek out Akemi, tell her I am dead and sent you to seek her out. She may seem…. Juvenile, but train with her and you will be able to defeat jinsei. Leave! I don’t want you to see me die. Kill him for me. Please.” Mikio said, coughing up blood after every sentence. “Thank you, Mikio.” Those were Yajyuus last words too Mikio, as he sped down to start his voyage to Amegakure.

Chapter 5: The Story

Yajyuu Mikazuki ran across the Mirage Desert. He hated the Land of Wind. The 2 good things about it were Sunagakure and Mikio. Mikio was dead so that left Sunagakure. Not a very fun place.
He wiped the thought from his mind. He need to think about what would happen when he reached his home. Amegakure, he wasn’t very welcome there anymore. At least not in his clan’s home. Ever since the incident, the whole clan thought he was to blame. They held him hostage in his room, giving him no freedom. Of course, he deserved it a little. He, Luna, and Toshi should not have been getting in to trouble for nothing but money. He went through all that happened in his mind…..

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“Mikio we need this money. You should take the deal and let the guy know we can do that.” said Yajyuu. “Ok but I just hope you guys don’t feel horrible after all this is over, it will take a toll on your souls.” said Mikio seriously. “Mikio your always so serious about things, all we have to do is take some scrolls, it’s no biggy!” Luna said with a laugh. “AND it’s from our clan. Plus if your guy is right no one will be there. Easy man!” said Toshi adding on to Lunas statement. “Ok guys but…I just don’t want you getting hurt an-” “Mikio!” “Ok ok…I will tell him you guys will do it.” said Mikio resistant still. “By the way Miki who is this guy anyway?” asked Luna. “I can’t say Mikio yelled, walking away.

2 weeks later….

Yajyuu, Luna, and Toshi walked up to there clans sacred house. “Mikio said the big guy made a distraction so the elders wouldn’t be here correct?” whispered Toshi. “Correct” replied Luna. The 3 jumped on to the roof. “Yajyuu cut a hole!” Yajyuu drew his zanpuktou and cut a big enough hole in the roof for them to enter. “Go” They all slid in to the sacred temple of the Mikazuki clan. “Ok we will split up and try to find these things.” whispered Yajyuu. “Maybe it would be better to stay together Ryuu, these forbidden jutsu scrolls will be easier to find together,” said Luna. “Trust me Luna this will be easier, there are no enemies and this will be easy!” said Yajyuu cockily. They all ran off in different directions, in search of the forbidden scrolls that the unknown source wanted.
About an hour later Yajyuu wandered through the halls. He had found one of the 2 scrolls and wanted to find Luna and Toshi. He heard footsteps and smiled. He ran into the hallway and saw 2 silhouettes further down and ran towards them. They turned into the next hallway. When Yajyuu got to the end and turned his heart dropped. There in a bloody pool were his lover and best friend. Walking away from the bloody pool were 2 of his cousins. He couldn’t recognize them from the back but he ran towards them. “What the hell is this!?” He yelled. “Why are they dead!?” “You were involved as well Yajyuu? Kill him Hajime.” Yajyuu was crying at this point. He drew his zanpuktou and as his cousins made hand signs he sliced them to pieces. He fell to his knees, crying until the elders came.
Yajyuu was placed under house arrest. About a week into it he tried to resist, so he was taken to a prison facilty, and his zanpuktou was taken away from him. Even the Mikazuki clan tag, the bandage he wrapped around his face, was taken away from him. After his service was done. He went into denial. He hated his elders. He hated everyone. He hated himself. The time came when he wanted to escape. To get revenge on his lover and friend. Mikio had moved to the great oak tree to make a small “kingdom”. Yajyuu decided his next move. He would hunt down Mikio.

One week later….

Yajyuu turned around. The rain pounded down on his skin. He looked back at Amegakure for the last time. He was hated by his own clan elders. He was a rogue nin.

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Yajyuu shook his head. He could see the borderline of trees ahead. He would be to the borderline between the Land of Rain and Land of Fire soon.


Chapter 6: The Escape

“Dai-sama, Dai-sama please awaken we have an important report.” whispered Susumu, afraid. Dai’s eyes opened wide and he made a frown. “Boy! I told you not to wake me when I am sleeping! Do you understand me never! Come over to me!” Susumu almost cried. He hated life here. It all started that day when Dai had started acting weird. Dai picked up a brass plate in which he had eaten off of before dozing off. “Lean in here boy!” Susumu squinted and leaned in hesitantly. Dai kissed him on the cheek then came down hard on his head with the brass plate. “NEVER WAKE ME WHEN I AM SLEEPING BOY! I HAVE TOLD YOU THIS-” Dai backhanded Susumu hard in the face. “A THOUSAND TIMES! YOU WILL NEVER-” Dai punched Susumu hard on the forehead. “WAKE ME UP! Now come into here boy!” Susumu almost cried but held the tears back because he knew Dai would beat him more for it.
Another servant walked past Dai’s room and put his hear to the door. He frowned. “That poor boy.” And continued walking.

2 Hours later….

Susumu walked into the servants quarters. His lip was bleeding still and his forehead had a big welt. He went into his bed, curled up, put his pillow over his face and started crying. A couple hours later, when the bleeding stopped and Susumu had shed all his tears, the servant who had walked by the door earlier came over to Susumu’s bed. “Wake up boy, come with me.” Susumu looked up. “Who are you?” He asked. “Don’t ask questions you need to get out of here, come with me.” Susumu was surprised and hesitated, but he decided it was a chance to get out of this hell house so he followed the man.
Susumu followed the man to the kitchen. “Listen to me boy,” the man said, “When you get out of here seek a women called Akemi, I have alerted her that you would be coming. She will house and take care of you. DO NOT disrespect her, she is not very…. Unpleasant at times.” “Why are you helping me sir?” asked Susumu. “And how will I get out?” “I will blast a hole in the wall.” Susumu’s eyes widened. “When I blast a hole through the wall I will tell Dai that you were trying to escape but I burnt you to a crisp, that will clear you up.” “Well thank you sir but you didn’t answer the first question,” Susumu said, looking the man in the eyes, “Why are you helping me?” The man looked away. “I don’t like the way Dai-sama has been acting lately,” he said, eyes diverted, “I don’t like what he does to you and you need a good life, you’re a strong healthy young man who shouldn’t be some perverts pet that he can beat and do whatever he wants with, live a happy life, now go!” As soon as he finished the sentence he shouted loudly, “You will not escape! Katon: Gokakyu no Jutsu!” He put his fingers to his mouth and sent a giant fireball towards the wall. “Thank you!” Susumu said over the great crash, and jumped out. Susumu ran, ran as fast as he could in the dark. He headed towards the light, the light of Amegakure.



Chapter 7: The Death

Yajyuu cleaned the blood from his zanpuktou. He hated bandits. They were so meaningless. No desire of anything but money. Pathetic. He put his zanpuktou on his back and walked away. He had just entered the forest in Land of Fire and was anxious to see his home again. If the stubborn bandits wouldn’t have attacked, he would have been in the Land of Rain already! Whatever. He took off at full speed.

“Where should I go when I get there?” He thought to himself. “Oh yeah Mikio told me to find that Akemi girl. I wonder why it would be her? He said she would train me. She better be better than me! I doubt she will be, I am pretty good, and charming, and AY!” Yajyuu felt a sharp pain in his left shoulder. He felt the warm feeling of blood and looked over. An arrow was stick out from it! Before he knew what to do he was tackled to the ground by an unknown source from the left.
Protected by his zanpuktou, he slid down a hill on his back and kicked the thing that had tackled him off. He put his hands out and did a backhand spring up. He looked up the hill and saw a man with long, spiked hair, a tail, and bat-like wings on his back sprinting at him. Yajyuus eyes widened. A curse mark. And he was in stage 2.
Yajyuu drew his zanpuktou. “Ration: Kokurai Infusion” His zanpuktou suddenly started making loud zapping noises. Out of no where it seemed, the zanpuktou conducted black electricity all around itself. Yajyuu sighed. “Kokurai Senbon” small senbon flew from the great blade shaped as lightning. The curse mark simply flew into the air to dodge. Yajyuu swore under his breath. What was this guys motives? Why was he attacking Yajyuu? He didn’t know.
Yajyuu took a deep breath. “Kokurai Nagashi.” Black Lightning flew everywhere. The curse mark was electrocuted and thrown to the ground. Yajyuu stopped the flow and grabbed his zanpuktou again. He walked over to the seemingly unconscious curse mark and rose his mighty blade. The curse mark flew upwards and bit his left shoulder near the arrow. Yajyuu moaned from the pain. He felt a force moving through his body. He looked at his shoulder and a black mark appeared. Two lightning bolts parallel to each other appeared in black. He cried out in pain. He tried to do the hand signals for Korukai, but couldn’t raise his hands. Before he knew it, Yajyuu Mikazuki was dead.


Chapter 8: The Woman

Susumu sat down under a nearby tree, taking huge breaths in. He had just ran into a bandit party. They asked if he was a ninja and he told them the truth that he wasn’t. They then smiled and tried to kill him. He ran as fast as he could to get away from them. Susumu got up and kept walking.
Why did it matter if he was a ninja. He was strong! He punched the air. Why was he getting so worked up, he didn’t know but he was mad. It would be dark soon though, and he wanted to get to Amegakure. The journey went on.


2 hours later….


The rain beat down on him. He had no hat or hood, or sleeves. Susumu was used to the cold though. No heating was offered in the Slaves Quarters at night. The thong Susumu wasn’t used to was rain. He had not been outside since he was a young boy. The wetness all around, the feeling of his foot passing through the long grass and sinking into the mud. It was strange, but he enjoyed it.
The gates of Amegakure loomed over him. He looked up and smiled at the site of new structures. He had never been to the village. Susumu had been raised on a farm in the Land of Fire till he was 7. Then his father was killed by bandits and Susumu was traded from place to place, never seeing sunlight. Now he was here. Alone. Something entered his mind. The woman! He had to find a woman named Akemi.
So he started his tread through Amegakure, asking people about the mysterious woman. No one knew about her until he found a small girl running a family owned flower shop. “Yes I know who she is!” The girl said in a high pitched voice. “Mrs. Akemi taught me some taijutsu! She is a kind woman! Funny too!” The girl smiled. So she is married and knows taijutsu, Susumu thought to himself. A married ninja. “Where can I find her little girl?” asked Susumu. Well she lives right down the street to the left, in the center of the big rice field!” The little girl replied. “Thank you very much for the information! You are a very nice, cute girl!” The girl blushed. “Thanks mister come back sometime, please!” She said shyly. Susumu nodded with a smile and practically sprinted down the street, and into the rice fields. He could see a small house in the distance. He took off towards the image.
After sprint for a couple minutes, Susumu neared the house and knocked on the door. A woman with dark green hair opened the door. “What do you need?” She asked. “My name is Susumu!” he replied with a smile. The woman gasped. “Oh come here boy I am sorry about all that has happened and all that horrible man has done to you!” The woman embraced him and Susumu blushed abit. The woman wasn’t exactly bad looking, for her age. She was probably in her mid 40’s, but looked great. “Now come on in and have something to eat, we can talk about me a little, and you. I will explain everything!”

Nick Tasogare
06-28-2009, 08:56 PM
*fangirl scream* eeeeeekkk We want more!! XD

Yajyuu Mikazuki
06-28-2009, 10:25 PM
Chapter 2 is up

Luna Mikazuki
06-28-2009, 10:44 PM
I like it

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-29-2009, 07:34 AM
lol nick tasogare lol and its a good story write part 3!!

Yajyuu Mikazuki
06-29-2009, 02:00 PM
Even though it's rather short, chapter 3 is up

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-29-2009, 06:07 PM
thats cool!! 250 heads stacked perfectly! COOL!! PART FIVE WOOO!

Yajyuu Mikazuki
06-29-2009, 08:39 PM
Part 4 is up!

Nick Tasogare
06-29-2009, 08:45 PM
Wow, that was sad, but really good.

Luna Mikazuki
06-29-2009, 08:49 PM
I read it

Yajyuu Mikazuki
06-29-2009, 09:10 PM
I read it
koool

Luna Mikazuki
06-29-2009, 09:11 PM
koool
Yesh...

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-30-2009, 09:12 AM
aww tats sad and cool! but still sad...

Yajyuu Mikazuki
06-30-2009, 08:47 PM
Chapter 5 is up! It tells Yajyuus story so read it!

Yajyuu Mikazuki
07-01-2009, 12:00 AM
Chapter 6 is up!

Nick Tasogare
07-01-2009, 12:15 AM
chapter 6 is up!

best chapter ever!!!!!!!

Yajyuu Mikazuki
07-01-2009, 01:30 AM
Chapter 7 is up.... Just because what happens doesnt mean it is the end so stick with it!

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-01-2009, 08:15 AM
why is every story involving curse marks now...?

Nick Tasogare
07-01-2009, 08:16 AM
why is every story involving curse marks now...?

SHHHH It's a good story anyway, better than others, and my buddy Yajyuu writes it, he's really good.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-01-2009, 08:22 AM
okay okay

Yajyuu Mikazuki
07-01-2009, 11:06 AM
okay okay
It was kinda like a little filler because I didn't want him killed easy

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-02-2009, 09:53 AM
ooooh

Yajyuu Mikazuki
07-04-2009, 10:46 PM
Chapter 8 is up

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-05-2009, 10:53 AM
lol blushing about a married woman hugging him?this might get interesting...:twisted:

Yajyuu Mikazuki
07-06-2009, 07:38 PM
I put up pictures of Yajyuu and Mikio I drew.... What do you think?

Nick Tasogare
07-07-2009, 10:49 AM
It only has up to 4 now. Where'd the rest go?

Yajyuu Mikazuki
07-07-2009, 11:58 AM
It only has up to 4 now. Where'd the rest go?

Mmmm It does that error sometimes

Nick Tasogare
07-07-2009, 12:00 PM
Wow, you get on just as I have to get off. I'll be back in a little. Bye XD