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Yoshi-Chan
06-26-2009, 05:13 PM
okay well I like writing, and i like peoples comments about my poems. So here are some of my poems!:

The Outcasts

All alone,
No one there,
By themselves,
Plotting,
Always plotting,
Pretentious seconds,
Ticking away,
Needless to nobody,
Needn't to care.
If you showed a speck of kindness,
Maybe you'd be spared,
For tonight the Outcasts take revenge,
Taking your souls,
Because you made them like this,
Uselessly beaten,
Horridly picked on,
Tonight the Outcasts take your life.

Welcome to My Land of Missfits. ( i spelled misfits wrong)

Welcome to my land of missfits,
where everyone is welcome to stay,
Come to the missfit town,
Listen to the Missfit band play,
Welcome to my land of missfits,
You can be the Mayor of this little town,
throw a ball,
and dance round and round,
or be alone and dont make a sound,
The choice is yours in this land,
In the meadows the fawns lay,
And the bunnies may,
eat the lush greens,
If you catch one,
Sure you can brush him,
Or go to the rivers,
and take a swim,
For you see in this town,
In this land,
You can be free,
To run in the breeze,
Or sit on your nees,
So now my friend,
I welcome you to my land of missfits.


(this one is about a vampire, its kinda older than the others) So Alone...

I am so alone
No one's there
Day after day
Night after night
Always by myself
Why dont they like me
No one does
I am so alone
On the run from everything
For they shun me
For what He made me
And so for that I am so alone
But one day
I wish I could find u
And maybe we could be
...Friends?


okay thats all im gonna post for now, so tell me what u think!

Mini
06-26-2009, 05:15 PM
.Great Poems I Write Some Two.

Kuroda Taishi
06-26-2009, 05:16 PM
I would ask a mod to move this over to the Fan Forge section Yoshi-Chan

mangagirl
06-26-2009, 05:16 PM
great and cool!!

Yoshi-Chan
06-26-2009, 05:25 PM
thankx

Lou!e
06-26-2009, 05:26 PM
*Points at yoshi* You are an outcasters! :p LOL me too.

Anbu-Phoenix
06-26-2009, 05:28 PM
those were great you are very talented

Life AKA Death
06-26-2009, 05:28 PM
i like writing poems to but mine urs i think r a little better

Yoshi-Chan
06-26-2009, 05:29 PM
those were great you are very talented
thanks, i try to be.^_^

Spark
06-26-2009, 05:33 PM
awesome poems

Yoshi-Chan
06-26-2009, 05:37 PM
*Points at yoshi* You are an outcasters! :p LOL me too.
yeah, i am!

Yoshi-Chan
06-26-2009, 05:37 PM
awesome poems
thankz

Yoshi-Chan
06-26-2009, 05:55 PM
okay this one i wrote when i was extremely bored

Over the Rainbow

There is a land they say,
Some where way over that rainbow,
But have u ever heard of anyone who's been there?

One day,
I hope we will find that place,
But I hope there is no chace,
Or race,
But peace,

At least,
Have people to share,
Those things over that rainbow,

But we arrive back at the one major problem,
How the heck do we get over the fricken rainbow?

Lou!e
06-26-2009, 07:09 PM
okay this one i wrote when i was extremely bored

Over the Rainbow

There is a land they say,
Some where way over that rainbow,
But have u ever heard of anyone who's been there?

One day,
I hope we will find that place,
But I hope there is no chace,
Or race,
But peace,

At least,
Have people to share,
Those things over that rainbow,

But we arrive back at the one major problem,
How the heck do we get over the fricken rainbow?

I like rainbows.

Yoshi-Chan
06-26-2009, 07:38 PM
me too.

Lou!e
06-26-2009, 07:57 PM
Gay rainbows!

animelover
06-27-2009, 09:24 AM
nice poems, i may write one too

Anbu-Phoenix
06-27-2009, 09:27 AM
okay this one i wrote when i was extremely bored

Over the Rainbow

There is a land they say,
Some where way over that rainbow,
But have u ever heard of anyone who's been there?

One day,
I hope we will find that place,
But I hope there is no chace,
Or race,
But peace,

At least,
Have people to share,
Those things over that rainbow,

But we arrive back at the one major problem,
How the heck do we get over the fricken rainbow?thats really good

madara'
06-27-2009, 09:34 AM
Awesome.

Yoshi-Chan
06-27-2009, 10:28 AM
thankz

Yoshi-Chan
06-27-2009, 03:16 PM
okay here is another one about a vampire(i like vampires =F)

This Curse...

You see me,
walking down the streets,
But you dont know,
who im going to meet,
even i dont know,
But the night is calling,
I have to go,
Dont follow me,
This is show you dont need to see,
There is no glee,
and here no ones free,
Shadows take control,
Since they're on patrol,
Once you get caught,
You can not get out,
Its worse than any penatentury,
To be one of the ones to carry this curse.

waa-laa!!! ^-^

itachiuchiha85
06-27-2009, 03:34 PM
i like them. :)

Yoshi-Chan
06-27-2009, 03:43 PM
thankx

cherryflower
07-04-2009, 09:28 AM
All the poems are great!

Yoshi-Chan
07-10-2009, 04:39 PM
okay i got one i just wrote!

Secret Sorrows, Bittersweet Lovers

All alone,
Darkest night,
Feeling fright,
This one you might:

One boy,
One girl,
Sitting there,
Waiting at the door,
Joyous casualties,
Fill the lands,
While the boy and girl,
Hold hands,
"You want me to leave," the boy says,
"So you won't deal with my ways."
The girl nods.

These bittersweet lovers come and go,
Fast and slow.

Feeling terrified,
Senses to abide,
Silently suffering,
Always bluffing,
These secret sorrows,
Keep coming,
And coming,

They shall never stop.