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[Ino]
09-09-2010, 01:25 PM
*Opens book* "Once upon a time..." No... that's not it... *flips pages* "Long ago in a far far far place lived..." That's not it either... hmm.... *flips more pages, then slams book closed in frustration.* I guess I will have to tell you what I remember! Here is how it goes...

Prologue
This is where we meet our first character, a little boy
named Binkie Biff who was heading off to his first day of Pre-K at a place called Playgarden. Now Binkie had powers, but the only thing was... he did not know what they were. So Binkie, went to Pre-K and met our second character, Candy Clyde, the prettiest girl in all of Playgarden! As soon as Binkie saw her, he fell in love, but alas! There was another man in love with her! Our third character's name is Dan DiCaprio. Binkie had went to talk to Candy, but Dan was on the scene faster. And ever since that first day of Pre-K, Binkie and Dan have been enemies, for Dan always steals the girl Binkie liked. Then one day in the near future, Binkie had had enough.

Find out what happens next in the Binkie Chronicles!

Credits for the name; Shikamaru Nara

Shikamaru Nara
09-09-2010, 01:27 PM
Looks good, just get rid of the red, it's too distracting.

[Ino]
09-09-2010, 01:29 PM
Good thinking /edits

Shikamaru Nara
09-09-2010, 01:30 PM
Much better. And you should probably make it all one color as well.

[Ino]
09-09-2010, 01:31 PM
Much better. And you should probably make it all one color as well.
I'm a colorful person. I find that it needs to be more than one color.

Shikamaru Nara
09-09-2010, 01:32 PM
The prolouge is way too hard to read.

[Ino]
09-09-2010, 01:33 PM
The prolouge is way too hard to read.
Fine I'll change it.

Shikamaru Nara
09-09-2010, 01:34 PM
Green and purple so don't go!

[Ino]
09-09-2010, 01:35 PM
Green and purple so don't go!
Who made you Color queen?

Shikamaru Nara
09-09-2010, 01:36 PM
I'm just giving advice.