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ukiyo
08-22-2010, 01:26 AM
Imagine you're back in high school (some of you probably are). At your school is a girl named Sarah. She was adopted into a poor family. Her parents are abusive drunks, who spend most of their time at the bar. On top of this, Sarah is subject to being bullied and beaten up at school. You've seen this happen, but don't do anything, like everyone else. Then, one day in 4th period English (the only class you have with Sarah), the teacher has to leave class 10 minutes early. Once she'd gone, a bully picks up a pen, and stabs Sarah in the eye. Everyone just sits and watches as she cries in pain. You know she could bleed to death soon, so wat do

ADDITION: ok she was taken to the hospital but her eye couldn't be saved so she has to wear an eye patch the kids still make fun of her for it but you're the only one thats nice to her and after a month she finally decides to ask you out

what do you do now

ADDITION 2:ok you take her out on a date but make your intentions clear that you only would like to stay friends, she understands it and is cool with it. While walking home one day you see the bully that caused the mess in the first place, alone, you get the sudden urge to beat him up right there, right now. what do you do

ADDITION 3: you decide to fight the bully get in a couple of hits before his crew show up and chase you, luckily you lost them and go home. the next day after school the bully and his crew jump you while walking home with her. she tries to stop them but the bully takes her behind the school and rapes her now dealing with the average taunting she is emotionally scared what do you do

ADDITION 4: ok you try to stop her from getting raped but end up being hospitalized before even getting close to her the bully and his crew are sent to jail with assault and rape charges. you were in the hospital for a week and everyday she came to visit you. the day you can finally come home all of your friends and family including her have thrown you a welcome home party, the party lasted until 9 pm and everyone enjoyed it your parents have gone out leaving you and her alone. your watching a movie you pause it and say your going to get a soda, coming back with a can of dr.pepper you find her naked under the bed sheets motioning for you to come to her. what do you do (don't go into extreme detail on this part i don't want this to get deleted)


ima drop this off here
http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/3100/1282463320440.jpg (http://img825.imageshack.us/i/1282463320440.jpg/)

Kiseki
08-22-2010, 01:27 AM
Too bad Sasuke hasn't got that idea yet! :lol:

Raiton:Gian_Kakuzu
08-22-2010, 01:28 AM
Look at the guy like w_t_f and then probably watch everyone else's reaction

Killerbee12(Naruto_sage)
08-22-2010, 01:29 AM
Beat that freaking bully, and pull that pen out her eye and let her join my crew and go on a freaking rampage then we will take over the world

Sai's brother
08-22-2010, 01:31 AM
Imagine you're back in high school (some of you probably are). At your school is a girl named Sarah. She was adopted into a poor family. Her parents are abusive drunks, who spend most of their time at the bar. On top of this, Sarah is subject to being bullied and beaten up at school. You've seen this happen, but don't do anything, like everyone else. Then, one day in 4th period English (the only class you have with Sarah), the teacher has to leave class 10 minutes early. Once she'd gone, a bully picks up a pen, and stabs Sarah in the eye. Everyone just sits and watches as she cries in pain. You know she could bleed to death soon, so wat do



ima drop this off here
http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/3100/1282463320440.jpg (http://img825.imageshack.us/i/1282463320440.jpg/)

Oh my. That is.. o.o

b-but my school is too good for that kind of behavior. The rival school may do that but not my school ((Its the school with the most polite students ,among the other three high schools in the city))

but anyways...i don't know what to do. I hate seeing blood i cant stand it so i most likely would shudder and... stuff >.<

Narutodemon11
08-22-2010, 06:41 AM
i would throw up because i hate lookin at blood

HinataBG
08-22-2010, 06:44 AM
I'd probably try to help the girl and then give the bully the evil eye or something!!`!:)

lolohwd
08-22-2010, 06:49 AM
i would snap the guys neck cause hes focusing on her and carry sarah and hop out the window and take her to the hopital.

Uchiha_Itachi
08-22-2010, 06:58 AM
I'd call 911 on my cell phone, and wonder why no one is helping when someone got stabbed in the eye.

Shika-fiend
08-22-2010, 09:05 AM
Help her get the pen out of her eye, and call the police.

Shikamaru Nara
08-22-2010, 09:08 AM
That was intended.

tanduhman
08-22-2010, 09:39 AM
wth? id kick that guys azz!

Tsukinomai
08-22-2010, 09:45 AM
i would snap the guys neck cause hes focusing on her and carry sarah and hop out the window and take her to the hopital. and get some " u saved my life" loving in the hospital in a nurse outfit

You mean a sexy nurse's outfit correct?

Kakuzu
08-22-2010, 09:51 AM
I would first watch in horror for a few seconds considering the blood and pain. Imagine being stabbed in the eye... That's just horrific. You can actually feel the pen in youe eye. O.o I'm not getting into much more detail, but I would carry her somewhere safe, help her get the pen out of her eye, call 911, and go kick me some azz by jamming pens in their eyes.

Vex
08-22-2010, 09:54 AM
Beat that freaking bully, and pull that pen out her eye and let her join my crew and go on a freaking rampage then we will take over the worldI LOVE this post.

Tsukinomai
08-22-2010, 10:02 AM
I would first watch in horror for a few seconds considering the blood and pain. Imagine being stabbed in the eye... That's just horrific. You can actually feel the pen in youe eye. O.o I'm not getting into much more detail, but I would carry her somewhere safe, help her get the pen out of her eye, call 911, and go kick me some azz by jamming pens in their eyes.

Jabjabjabjabjabjabjabjabjabjabjab.

ukiyo
08-23-2010, 12:29 AM
ok she was taken to the hospital but her eye couldn't be saved so she has to wear an eye patch the kids still make fun of her for it but you're the only one thats nice to her and after a month she finally decides to ask you out

what do you do know

ONIMUSHA
08-23-2010, 12:34 AM
i would wake up from that nightmare of seeing a girl get HER EYE JABBED OUT WITH A PEN
and if it turns out its not a nightmare, slit the bully's throat with a piece of wood with nails sticking out of it, call 911

♥♥♥♥♥♥
08-23-2010, 12:43 AM
0___0" Poor girl

Anyways...IDK...Cuz I'm a straight girl xDD

ukiyo
08-23-2010, 12:48 AM
0___0" Poor girl

Anyways...IDK...Cuz I'm a straight girl xDD

bewbz or get out

♥♥♥♥♥♥
08-23-2010, 12:51 AM
What?

ukiyo
08-23-2010, 12:52 AM
What?

http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/370/638bcae57030a02f.jpg (http://img834.imageshack.us/i/638bcae57030a02f.jpg/)

boobs

Manda
08-23-2010, 12:57 AM
If I liked the girl, and if I were single, then I don't see any problem with going out with her. Looks don't hold any weight in the way I view the world, so the eye patch wouldn't matter. Its the soul that matters to me.

As for the bully, well lets just say I can send him to a certain place, stuffed in a handbasket. I'm insane.`:P

shikamarulover18
08-23-2010, 12:57 AM
i hate how some people can be so cruel...i hope you're a strong enough person to treat this girl well and remind her that some people out there are human and actually have positive feelings. some high schoolers are can be so stupid..always worrying about their reputations and status. how pathetic. i hope that bully is repaid in kind.

and as for her date request, i say go for it. just make it clear that you would like to be friends. in a nice way of course. if that's what you want

♥♥♥♥♥♥
08-23-2010, 01:02 AM
Dude...She needs you,be her support

ShariKage
08-23-2010, 01:16 AM
WE LIVE IN AMERICA.

Obama would not let this happen.

NBT
08-23-2010, 01:33 AM
1.Not care.Why should I?It has absolutely nothing to do with me.
2.No

ONIMUSHA
08-23-2010, 01:37 AM
1.Not care.Why should I?It has absolutely nothing to do with me.
2.No

so if you saw a girl get stabbed in the freaking eye with a pen, you wouldnt care...

NBT
08-23-2010, 01:39 AM
Why should I care?

ONIMUSHA
08-23-2010, 03:26 AM
Why should I care?
because she would die if noone helped

ukiyo
08-23-2010, 03:35 AM
because she would die if noone helped

dude your trying to reason with ECW if he said he doesn't care than he doesn't care, simple as that

ukiyo
08-23-2010, 03:38 AM
added another addition read OP and then continue what would you do


i think this is a fun game wouldn't you agree?

kakashirox
08-23-2010, 03:45 AM
I would be all like beating tha bull up and then i would still his eye and a give to the girl and Looks are meaningless to the heart and secondly i would stay with her

ONIMUSHA
08-23-2010, 03:59 AM
i try to fight the bully who did this and end up killing him on accident

NBT
08-23-2010, 04:49 AM
I get urges like that on a daily basis,except I want to kill or at least hospitalize.I have yet to come close to doing either,unless you include my brother,but that's a different story.

Shika-fiend
08-23-2010, 05:14 AM
For the second one. I beat the bully within an inch of his life with a sledgehammer.

NBT
08-23-2010, 05:21 AM
because she would die if noone helped

And I should care why?

ukiyo
08-23-2010, 05:43 AM
be a little more realistic i use your submissions to build the story

ONIMUSHA
08-24-2010, 12:33 AM
And I should care why?
theirs a little thing called a concience...its what makes us human

ukiyo
08-24-2010, 12:43 AM
ok fine i'll go for the sake of it


yes i will be adding this



you decide to fight the bully get in a couple of hits before his crew show up and chase you, luckily you lost them and go home. the next day after school the bully and his crew jump you while walking home with her. she tries to stop them but the bully takes her behind the school and rapes her now dealing with the average taunting she is emotionally scared what do you do

ONIMUSHA
08-24-2010, 12:55 AM
okay this story is getting really ****ed up

erm...i dont know
i guess...god

ONIMUSHA
08-24-2010, 01:45 AM
ok fine i'll go for the sake of it


yes i will be adding this



you decide to fight the bully get in a couple of hits before his crew show up and chase you, luckily you lost them and go home. the next day after school the bully and his crew jump you while walking home with her. she tries to stop them but the bully takes her behind the school and rapes her now dealing with the average taunting she is emotionally scared what do you do

okay i thought of something

i try to stop him from raping her, but i end up being hospitalized by the other people. they are arrested afterwards under charges of assault and rape

ukiyo
08-24-2010, 02:25 AM
okay i thought of something

i try to stop him from raping her, but i end up being hospitalized by the other people. they are arrested afterwards under charges of assault and rape

im basing this stry off of what could actually happen in modern society yes it is a little effed up but hey

hmm your is a good submission.......i'll add it

ukiyo
08-24-2010, 02:34 AM
ok added new part dont go into extreme detail

for people just looking into this thread go to OP and read it then submit what you would do

ONIMUSHA
08-24-2010, 03:24 AM
i feel i should let someone else go, if noone does within the next hour i'll go again

NBT
08-24-2010, 04:27 AM
theirs a little thing called a concience...its what makes us human

I've learned to ignore my conscience.

ukiyo
08-24-2010, 05:08 AM
I've learned to ignore my conscience.

hitman?

NBT
08-24-2010, 05:13 AM
Say wha?

ukiyo
08-24-2010, 05:14 AM
Say wha?

DIE POTATO!

potato:*pulls out gun* not today

ONIMUSHA
08-24-2010, 05:24 AM
erm okay...i seriously dont know how to add to this one...erm

NBT
08-24-2010, 06:12 AM
nothing
walk away

Cagalli
08-24-2010, 08:16 AM
Imagine you're back in high school (some of you probably are). At your school is a girl named Sarah. She was adopted into a poor family. Her parents are abusive drunks, who spend most of their time at the bar. On top of this, Sarah is subject to being bullied and beaten up at school. You've seen this happen, but don't do anything, like everyone else. Then, one day in 4th period English (the only class you have with Sarah), the teacher has to leave class 10 minutes early. Once she'd gone, a bully picks up a pen, and stabs Sarah in the eye. Everyone just sits and watches as she cries in pain. You know she could bleed to death soon, so wat do

ADDITION: ok she was taken to the hospital but her eye couldn't be saved so she has to wear an eye patch the kids still make fun of her for it but you're the only one thats nice to her and after a month she finally decides to ask you out

what do you do now

ADDITION 2:ok you take her out on a date but make your intentions clear that you only would like to stay friends, she understands it and is cool with it. While walking home one day you see the bully that caused the mess in the first place, alone, you get the sudden urge to beat him up right there, right now. what do you do

ADDITION 3: you decide to fight the bully get in a couple of hits before his crew show up and chase you, luckily you lost them and go home. the next day after school the bully and his crew jump you while walking home with her. she tries to stop them but the bully takes her behind the school and rapes her now dealing with the average taunting she is emotionally scared what do you do

ADDITION 4: ok you try to stop her from getting raped but end up being hospitalized before even getting close to her the bully and his crew are sent to jail with assault and rape charges. you were in the hospital for a week and everyday she came to visit you. the day you can finally come home all of your friends and family including her have thrown you a welcome home party, the party lasted until 9 pm and everyone enjoyed it your parents have gone out leaving you and her alone. your watching a movie you pause it and say your going to get a soda, coming back with a can of dr.pepper you find her naked under the bed sheets motioning for you to come to her. what do you do (don't go into extreme detail on this part i don't want this to get deleted)


ima drop this off here
http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/3100/1282463320440.jpg (http://img825.imageshack.us/i/1282463320440.jpg/)
Is this based off an anime or something?

Azal
08-24-2010, 08:22 AM
um..........um......herm
eh......um....im scared O.o

ukiyo
08-24-2010, 09:13 AM
Is this based off an anime or something?

no it is not


it is a buildup story submit what would happen and i might choose yours to add then users will have to buildup from that

Cagalli
08-24-2010, 09:15 AM
no it is not


it is a buildup story submit what would happen and i might choose yours to add then users will have to buildup from that

Then where is the picture from?

ukiyo
08-24-2010, 09:16 AM
Then where is the picture from?

dunno just some random picture that conveniently happened to have a pin in a girls eyeball

Cagalli
08-24-2010, 09:27 AM
ADDITION 4: ok you try to stop her from getting raped but end up being hospitalized before even getting close to her the bully and his crew are sent to jail with assault and rape charges. you were in the hospital for a week and everyday she came to visit you. the day you can finally come home all of your friends and family including her have thrown you a welcome home party, the party lasted until 9 pm and everyone enjoyed it your parents have gone out leaving you and her alone. your watching a movie you pause it and say your going to get a soda, coming back with a can of dr.pepper you find her naked under the bed sheets motioning for you to come to her. what do you do (don't go into extreme detail on this part i don't want this to get deleted)


You slowly back out of the room saying sorry, but you still just want to be friends.

ukiyo
08-24-2010, 01:02 PM
You slowly back out of the room saying sorry, but you still just want to be friends.

well that sucked


i think this part is better off for a guys point of view after its done you can come back and submit

ONIMUSHA
08-24-2010, 07:29 PM
well that sucked


i think this part is better off for a guys point of view after its done you can come back and submit

i dont really think a guys point of view would be that good, considering that what most guys would write would have to be censored

ONIMUSHA
08-24-2010, 07:32 PM
but man...you should make a manga, or turn this into a book, ya never know it might be good

Azal
08-24-2010, 07:59 PM
ukiyo you need help

ukiyo
08-24-2010, 09:06 PM
but man...you should make a manga, or turn this into a book, ya never know it might be good

maybe

ukiyo
08-24-2010, 09:07 PM
ukiyo you need help

i know.

ONIMUSHA
09-09-2010, 04:30 PM
okay sorry its been a while...no i was not spending all that time trying to think of a response that wont get the whole forum banned with this part

i get undressed, get in the bed with her, but she decides she doesnt want to rush into things but we do both end up sleeping in the same bed...just not...you get the idea...YOU FILL IIN THE REST! NAO!

ONIMUSHA
09-09-2010, 04:43 PM
NAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pplease

ukiyo
09-09-2010, 08:49 PM
NAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pplease

what frut was that?????? seriously? shes naked ready to get some and when you get there she dosent want to? WHO DOES THAT!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

alex1231
09-09-2010, 08:53 PM
i would like tell her to put her clothes back on it doesn't work that way it just doesn't

ukiyo
09-09-2010, 08:54 PM
i would like tell her to put her clothes back on it doesn't work that way it just doesn't

it does in my world

alex1231
09-09-2010, 08:57 PM
wow to much info

ukiyo
09-09-2010, 08:57 PM
wow to much info

what? kid....get out

alex1231
09-09-2010, 09:03 PM
make me *dances *

ONIMUSHA
09-10-2010, 02:43 AM
what frut was that?????? seriously? shes naked ready to get some and when you get there she dosent want to? WHO DOES THAT!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
...ramona flowers from the first scott pilgrim graphic novel
my first girlfriend

theres a list for you of who does that

ukiyo
09-10-2010, 07:00 PM
...ramona flowers from the first scott pilgrim graphic novel
my first girlfriend

theres a list for you of who does that

well i feel sorry for you


that movie was awesome BTW

NBT
09-10-2010, 07:25 PM
Hi Kenny

ukiyo
09-10-2010, 11:59 PM
Hi Kenny

ZOMG HI! *shoots you in the face with shotgun*

ONIMUSHA
10-12-2010, 05:27 PM
i completaly forgot i had this saved to my favorites...and i guess you didnt add what i put...hmm

Dedara6875
10-12-2010, 07:10 PM
I would call the cops and hope there is a cash reward.

ukiyo
10-13-2010, 08:45 PM
i completaly forgot i had this saved to my favorites...and i guess you didnt add what i put...hmm

eff no if you know me you would know that i would only put a very interesting part in there

ukiyo
10-13-2010, 08:46 PM
I would call the cops and hope there is a cash reward.

laaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate