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NaruSakufluff4ever
06-22-2009, 08:14 AM
I was running from an angry,starving,territorial pack of wolves. How pathetic. If I didn't get through this alive, I wouldn't be able to get into the village. Yet if I died, I wouldn't have to worry about anymore tests! Resolve to live won. I ran faster. The wolves were still hunting me down, I could tell by the smell of hostility in the air. Then suddenly, I was in the air. Upside down. "Ohhhhh, crap! If the wolves get me like this..." I looked around, and saw that my foot was tied to a rope which was tied to a tree branch. "Maybe if I just swing around a lot, I could break the rope..." I said to myself, feeling the blood rush to my head. I moved my body so that i was like on a swing. My momentum carried me nicely, but I still didn't break free. "Oh, what now?!" I said to myself. I was losing consciousness by now. I saw, through my blurring vision, a sharp twig. "Maybe if I..." I blacked out.

vampire Lycan
06-22-2009, 12:54 PM
i like wolves.........

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-22-2009, 05:13 PM
IT GETS BETTER!!trust me

Ryaque
06-30-2009, 10:34 AM
Hmmm...you got me interested. What happens next?

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-30-2009, 12:49 PM
lol since no1 realy posted i hoped it was gonna fade off the page but now i guess i gotta right:lol::D

jacobjak
06-30-2009, 12:51 PM
its pretty good you should write more

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-30-2009, 12:54 PM
lol thanks

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-30-2009, 12:54 PM
and i might

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-30-2009, 02:38 PM
Part Two
"Ungh, uhhh." I groaned. My face felt hard, sticky, and wet. I tried to open my eyes, but it was like they were glued shut. I tried to unglue my eyes, but something furry stopped them. More slime. "Meuw ftgrovz!" I tried speaking, but fur kept getting in my mouth. I got whatever was on me and put it down next to me. I opened my eyes and... I screamed. It was a wolf pup! Then, out of nowhere, two wolves jumped out and stood over me. They pinned down my arms, and two more pinned down my legs. "Nnn! Hmp egh euh!" As much as I tried to free myself, my living chains never got up. I stopped moving and made myself relax as much as I could. A young wolf came out of the bushes in front of me. I could tell by the air of importance around him that he was the Alpha. I dared him to come and strike me down with my eyes. It was a contest of will as we glared at each other, willing the other to do something, dangerous, or not. The leader lost our contest. He backed away a few steps, then nodded his head up. The wolves got off of my arms and legs. I stretched them out, glad the extra weight was gone. I got up and just as I was going to take a step, the leader pounced, and I was forced into a sitting posistion, with my legs going numb again. "Look, at need to go back home and take another test, alright?" The wolf shook his head. "Let me go, you stupid wolf!!" The wolf didn't let me go. After a few minutes it got off and looked at me like, If you wanna live kid, then follow my pack. I'll lead you to a better village. I trusted the wolf...a little. I decided to go with his pack, for now. The wolves got into formation, and I took up the rear. The leader shook his head and brought me next to his second in command. The other wolf tried to push me away, but the alpha had other thoughts. I smirked has the wolf glared at me.

Okay so how was that? i know i might be a rookie but there.But seriously how was it??:evil::twisted::evil::twisted::evil::twisted:

Ryaque
06-30-2009, 02:43 PM
I think it was great.

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-30-2009, 02:45 PM
really? cool :D

Anime Lover
06-30-2009, 02:47 PM
Not bad

Practice more and you could right a best seller

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-30-2009, 03:22 PM
:mrgreen: coool

Sensei : Riku Arashi
06-30-2009, 03:33 PM
great story and I hope you get into Shinobi the Saga Pt.3 or .4 which ever you are trying to get in

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-30-2009, 03:39 PM
ty and lets hope that hope doesnt go wasted

Sensei : Riku Arashi
06-30-2009, 03:40 PM
ty and lets hope that hope doesnt go wasted


yeah i got to be in the last story it was fun

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-30-2009, 03:42 PM
i can tell!! but when did kai raiko sign up for teh order and go power crazed?

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-30-2009, 03:42 PM
thats the one part i didnt get...

nexthokage
06-30-2009, 03:43 PM
ok
it gets better

Sensei : Riku Arashi
06-30-2009, 03:44 PM
i can tell!! but when did kai raiko sign up for teh order and go power crazed?


well that was sabra, nick ,and the viollettehearts' idea and me and chidori shuriken were just guest writers.

they usually lets good writers come in for one story then becuase more than 4 writers is pretty hard to maintane a story so , me and chidori are no longer in the story. Me, chidori ,and takuya came up with Sand Shinobi

Minoru
06-30-2009, 03:51 PM
those 2 parts were pretty good is it gonna keep goin.

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-30-2009, 03:51 PM
yes it is

Sensei : Riku Arashi
06-30-2009, 03:53 PM
yay more story

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-30-2009, 03:55 PM
hurray!!

Minoru
06-30-2009, 04:06 PM
yay..

NaruSakufluff4ever
06-30-2009, 04:06 PM
well that dumbed down the hurrayness

vampire Lycan
07-12-2009, 10:18 AM
WRITE MORE!!!!!!!......*turns into a wolf* i like it now;)

cherryflower
07-12-2009, 10:50 AM
Yay!! you finally decided to write a story!!! It's Great!!! Write more!!!!

vampire Lycan
07-12-2009, 11:52 AM
or else i will call my wolf friends and we will KILL you :lol:

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-12-2009, 03:51 PM
ok me will write!!

cherryflower
07-12-2009, 03:58 PM
hurray!

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-12-2009, 04:02 PM
We had been traveling for four days. The wolves had taught me how to survive on my own, and with the pack's support I tackled deer and bucks and feasted. Herbs that killed the germs on the meat were found everywhere, and I never had to go to the inconvenience of cooking my food. The wolf and I had accepted our temporary status as Beta and co-Beta. The alpha and I had learned to communicate quite well, and I was not afraid to make my opinion known. The alpha summoned me to his side as the pack was huddled up in a cave. He told me we were nearing the Village Hidden in the Darkness. As soon as we neared sight of the front gates they would leave me. It shook me to my core to leave the wolves, but I knew that I would be safe in the village.
Another day had passed. I was the first to see the village, then the rest of the pack did. "Good-bye..." My voice was hoarse from not using it for so long. They all howled in response. It was bright and sunny, which struck me as odd for a Village Hidden in the Darkness. As I turned around I heard paws behind me, and I counted them. One, two...five? There was six in the pack, not including me. I turned around and saw the pup that was on me when I awoke five days ago. He was wagging his tail, and sitting on his haunches obediently. I picked him up and put him in the forest. He came back, tongue lolling out of his mouth and his tail wagging ferociously.
He thinks this is a game! I thought as I picked him up and put on a rock. I walked away, then i felt ripping on my shirt. I looked behind me and saw the pup again, and he was clinging to the fibers of my shirt. I sighed and took him off my shirt and at my feet. I started walking and he followed. I didn't try to put him with his pack because I realized he wanted to stay with me. The front gates were painted brown and black. There were no guards out front, just a booth inside with some ninja. I automatically went to the booth. They asked me who I was, and I said I had no name. They didn't question me further, but I heard them say,"Report this to the Uchikage!" to someone I assumed was a ninja. I walked to the inn and asked for a room. The innkeeper leaned back and handed me a key. The strangest part was he asked if I had any dental problems. I hoped my room had a mirror so I could check what people were staring at.
My room had a small sink, a bed, and a mirror. I immediately went to the mirror. My shirt was cut in some places, and my pants were tattered at the end. I was completely calm until I looked at my face. My face had dirt and in some places, small drops of dried up blood, all over the place! My hair was long and looked untamed, but it remained straight with no knots when I ran my hands through my hair. My eyes and teeth were the most changed. My eyes were slanted, and instead of a chocolate brown, the color was bright green, and when I tilted my head right, dull yellow. Instead of bumpy teeth, all of them were pointed at the end, and my canine teeth were longer and sharper than a normal humans. My ears were pointed just a bit, and I discovered I could move them to detect sound easier. My sense of smell was also heightened, because I could smell the sausage and ham cooking from here.
I thought to myself, No wonder the people I have met so far are taken aback by me. Just then My door was slammed open, and I was knocked out.

NOW DON'T KILL ME!!!:mrgreen:

kentaru
07-12-2009, 04:04 PM
cool story

cherryflower
07-12-2009, 04:04 PM
Let me guess your faverite animal...It's a wolf right? You also wrote about them in the scribes coner.

takuya
07-12-2009, 04:04 PM
We had been traveling for four days. The wolves had taught me how to survive on my own, and with the pack's support I tackled deer and bucks and feasted. Herbs that killed the germs on the meat were found everywhere, and I never had to go to the inconvenience of cooking my food. The wolf and I had accepted our temporary status as Beta and co-Beta. The alpha and I had learned to communicate quite well, and I was not afraid to make my opinion known. The alpha summoned me to his side as the pack was huddled up in a cave. He told me we were nearing the Village Hidden in the Darkness. As soon as we neared sight of the front gates they would leave me. It shook me to my core to leave the wolves, but I knew that I would be safe in the village.

Not as long as the others but it should do ^.^ NOW DON'T KILL ME!!!:mrgreen:*grabs smg*make it longer:lol:

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-12-2009, 04:05 PM
^.^ yea my fave animal is wolves next is dragons ^.^ AND OK I WILL MAKE IT LONGER!!

takuya
07-12-2009, 04:09 PM
lol i was jk on that but at least it worked:lol:

cherryflower
07-12-2009, 04:39 PM
^.^ yea my fave animal is wolves next is dragons ^.^ AND OK I WILL MAKE IT LONGER!!

I also like wolves. but it's a tie between seahorse, tiger, panda and wolves. great story so far!

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-12-2009, 04:49 PM
lol and ty cherry and i know u were jk, i just like playing along...but am I jking when i say angry mob with a puppet holding a gun?

cherryflower
07-12-2009, 04:56 PM
lol and ty cherry and i know u were jk, i just like playing along...but am I jking when i say angry mob with a puppet holding a gun?

Huh? but those are my faverite animals and the story is great.....Now I'm confused.

C4 Karura
07-12-2009, 05:16 PM
Great story! Keep writing!

C4 Karura
07-13-2009, 09:32 AM
Why did everyone stop posting?

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-13-2009, 09:39 AM
ty for the compliment and people are probably off right now lol

Kon
07-13-2009, 09:46 AM
it was a great story

cherryflower
07-13-2009, 09:52 AM
The story's great.
write more!
soon!
!

Kon
07-13-2009, 09:58 AM
The story's great.
write more!
soon!
!
u sure do like stories huh :lol:

cherryflower
07-13-2009, 10:04 AM
Yea! there fun to read. Exspecialy fan fiction ones about the Naruto world!

Kon
07-13-2009, 10:08 AM
oh ok lol *smiles*

C4 Karura
07-13-2009, 10:10 AM
When will the new part be up?

Itachi : )
07-13-2009, 10:12 AM
Its great...upper satisfactory level...

C4 Karura
07-13-2009, 10:16 AM
Does anyone know when the next part will be up?

Kon
07-13-2009, 10:21 AM
i dunno

C4 Karura
07-13-2009, 10:21 AM
Okay... *sighs*

Kon
07-13-2009, 10:23 AM
lol u really want a new story huh*looks at C4karura*

Kon
07-13-2009, 10:26 AM
its ok *hugs and comforts C4karura*

cherryflower
07-13-2009, 10:26 AM
yea! fluff's on ! write more story!

Kon
07-13-2009, 10:27 AM
u guys are obsessed with these stories

C4 Karura
07-13-2009, 10:27 AM
u guys are obsessed with these stories
No, we're just really bored...

cherryflower
07-13-2009, 10:28 AM
Yep, I'm obessed..........well sorta. I just like reading them,

C4 Karura
07-13-2009, 10:32 AM
NaruSaku's on the thread! She must be writing a new part!

jenny
07-13-2009, 10:34 AM
its ok,it stared out as a usual starter.but it did interest me as i read along.good,i guess.

cherryflower
07-13-2009, 10:35 AM
NaruSaku's on the thread! She must be writing a new part!

I just said that a couple of posts ago but nobody listened:cry: but yea! a new post!:) !:)!:)!:)!

Kon
07-13-2009, 10:36 AM
ok cool

C4 Karura
07-13-2009, 10:37 AM
How long do you think it'll take her to write the new part?

cherryflower
07-13-2009, 10:38 AM
Don't know but when ever I write something it takes a while to check over the spelling and grammer.

C4 Karura
07-13-2009, 10:41 AM
Yeah.

cherryflower
07-13-2009, 10:43 AM
But it would be faster if you typed it in a word doc. then spell checked it then copy/paste it and ta-da! your done!

C4 Karura
07-13-2009, 10:43 AM
True...

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-13-2009, 12:35 PM
ok ill start a new post now, k?

cherryflower
07-13-2009, 12:37 PM
Okay!:)!:)!:)!:)!:)!:)!

C4 Karura
07-13-2009, 12:59 PM
Yay!!!!!

cherryflower
07-13-2009, 01:03 PM
Yea!:)!:)!:)!:)!:)!:)!

ItachiAnbu
07-13-2009, 01:54 PM
It's good! You should keep trying!

cherryflower
07-13-2009, 01:59 PM
Yea!:)!:)!:)!.....When is it going to be posted *waits paintly*

C4 Karura
07-13-2009, 02:12 PM
*is still waiting for the new part*

cherryflower
07-13-2009, 02:14 PM
* Still waiting paintly* :p

C4 Karura
07-13-2009, 02:19 PM
NaruSaku said she'd work on it 2 hours ago... What's taking so long?

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-13-2009, 02:34 PM
i had a doctor appointment god the wait was long!

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-13-2009, 02:35 PM
now im working on it, k?

cherryflower
07-13-2009, 02:38 PM
Yea! :)!:)!:)!:)!:)!:)!:)!:)!:)! More story!:)

C4 Karura
07-13-2009, 02:51 PM
now im working on it, k?
Okay! I can't wait!

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-13-2009, 03:04 PM
When I woke up, I was tied to a chair in a dimly lit room. I looked around, and saw ninja in masks, and a figure at the the end of the room i couldn't make out. I remembered who the people in masks were. "Anbu?" I asked slowly as to not strain my voice. All of the people in the room turned their heads toward me.

"We are not trying to hurt you. Tell us who you are, where you come from, and why you came here." One of the anbu commanded. I shook my head. They weren't going to get a word out of me! I thought fiercely. I was slapped. "I will ask you one at a time, who are you?" A harsh voice said. I replied, but it wasn't what they expected.

"I don't have a name. And if you try to get me to say anything else, you will regret that fact!" I said with enough venom in my voice to get it through them that they know I mean business. A few even took a step back because I talked slow enough to reveal all of my teeth.

They had tied me with rope. I tested it's strength, and I could probably break through it. I counted, and listened for breathing, to find about seven in the room, including the figure I couldn't see and me. Five opponents, possibly six. All of them anbu, possibly higher. The odds were against me, but I wasn't afraid. I felt, positive somehow.

"If you won't tell us what we want, then you can't stay here." The figure in the back said. It was the kage, most likely. I had traveled for five days with only wolves for support. I could just find another village.

cherryflower
07-13-2009, 03:14 PM
Wow thats good, It seems like she's part wolf or something. I like stories about woves it reminds me of Inyasha and Julie and the wolves I had to read it for a book report or elese I would never had read it so thank you teacher.....Even though I'm pretty surely posotive your not on this website. LOL :) great story:)

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-13-2009, 03:16 PM
oh i read that book two! it was on choice for me, cause i love wolves and reading stories including them, and i absolutely loved it ^.^

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-13-2009, 03:17 PM
and thank you for le compliment!

cherryflower
07-13-2009, 03:38 PM
Yea I liked the story too! Thank you teacher!:)!:)! even though you can't here me!:)!:)! LOL

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-13-2009, 04:06 PM
yes that is very funny!!:lol:

C4 Karura
07-13-2009, 04:09 PM
That part was great, too, so now I can't wait for the next part!

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-13-2009, 04:11 PM
DONT KILL ME!!:mrgreen::eek::eek::shock::shock:

C4 Karura
07-13-2009, 04:41 PM
Do you know how often the parts will be coming out?

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-13-2009, 05:22 PM
whenever i get death threats pretty much:shock::shock::shock::shock::shock::shock::sho ck:

C4 Karura
07-13-2009, 05:27 PM
All right.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-13-2009, 05:31 PM
but if u death threat me often the story will be over before u know it and then u cry ur eyes out :twisted:

cherryflower
07-13-2009, 05:34 PM
Well A good story has got to end sometime. It can't go on forever or you'll die before you finish it.

C4 Karura
07-13-2009, 05:41 PM
Well A good story has got to end sometime. It can't go on forever or you'll die before you finish it.
All right.

cherryflower
07-13-2009, 06:02 PM
When are you going to write more, and is there any other books like julie and the wolves some how I like it in stories when people live with wolves.....

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-13-2009, 06:05 PM
umm there are three in the julie of the wolves series or was it four? i read the entire series

cherryflower
07-13-2009, 06:15 PM
Oh I didn't know that my teacher just told me I would like the book and should read it because she had a whole bin of classic and we had to read one of them for a report. But any ways back to the main topic..... Write More!!!!!

Chidori Shuriken
07-13-2009, 07:01 PM
i can tell!! but when did kai raiko sign up for teh order and go power crazed?

A mention of our dead characters? A miracle!

Apparently, according to the people who actually HAD the power in this story, changed our guys EVIL... So, apparently, our characters showed the good side for the first half... Then showed the bad side...

C4 Karura
07-14-2009, 07:32 AM
A mention of our dead characters? A miracle!

Apparently, according to the people who actually HAD the power in this story, changed our guys EVIL... So, apparently, our characters showed the good side for the first half... Then showed the bad side...
Ummm... Are you mentioning another story here? Where is the story?

ItachiAnbu
07-14-2009, 08:22 AM
NaruSaku said she'd work on it 2 hours ago... What's taking so long?

You can't rush a good writer,

I like this Fan-Fic. It's often hard to write a good Fan Fiction in first person, but this one is good, and getting better all the time.

C4 Karura
07-14-2009, 08:29 AM
You can't rush a good writer,

I like this Fan-Fic. It's often hard to write a good Fan Fiction in first person, but this one is good, and getting better all the time.
*sigh* Okay...

Kon
07-14-2009, 08:46 AM
LOL calm down geeze u guys r obsessed with these stories

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-14-2009, 09:20 AM
ok me is posting a new part!!just be patient!!

cherryflower
07-14-2009, 09:36 AM
Ok......Waiting.......wating.............its hard to wait.......

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-14-2009, 09:38 AM
"Anbu, release her. There is a new village who might accept her." The figure said.
"Right, Uchikage." The anbu released me.
"Where is my pup?" I asked.
"We took the dog to the pound." One of the anbu said.
"YOU DID WHAT?! YOU TOOK MY WOLF PUP TO THE POUND?!?! IF A SINGLE HAIR IS MISPLACED ON HIS FUR I WILL COME BACK AND KILL YOU ALL!" I yelled in fury, enticing huge amounts of venom into my voice. The anbu backed away, my raw fury keeping them at bay. I stormed out of the room and I heard sighs of relief as I left. I grabbed a villager.
"Where. Is. The. POUND?" I said, too angry to say things in a complete sentence.
"T-The pound is over there!" He pointed in the direction of a large building. "N-Now p-please, let me down!" He screamed in fright. I stormed over to the building and threw the door open.
"WHERE IS THE WOLF PUP YOU TOOK RECENTLY?!" I yelled through the entire building. All the animals went silent except for one. It howled and howled. I went to the cage and my wolf pup was there. I ripped the door open and my pup jumped on my head. I jumped to the top of a building and looked around. It was dark, but I could see a butcher cutting meat. I ran toward the place.
"Give me as much meat as you can, old man." I said venomously. He immediately loaded my pack with as much salted venison that it could hold. Everybody stayed out of my way as I went for the south exit. The guards didn't even try to hold me back, I snarled at them, revealing my fangs, and they even widened the space for me to go by. I ran out of the village, and into my freedom once again.

TA-DA! Aren't I so good at this? Bask in the glory of my newest post! ^.^:mrgreen:

cherryflower
07-14-2009, 09:44 AM
It's great!:)!:)!:)!:)!:)!:)!:)!:)!:)!:)!:)!:)!:)!

C4 Karura
07-14-2009, 10:09 AM
The new part's awesome, too!:p:p:p:p:p

Kon
07-14-2009, 10:11 AM
Yea its pretty cool

jenny
07-14-2009, 10:23 AM
pretty good,ur getting better.

C4 Karura
07-14-2009, 10:31 AM
For newcomers, here's the story so far:

06-22-2009, 09:14 AM
I was running from an angry,starving,territorial pack of wolves. How pathetic. If I didn't get through this alive, I wouldn't be able to get into the village. Yet if I died, I wouldn't have to worry about anymore tests! Resolve to live won. I ran faster. The wolves were still hunting me down, I could tell by the smell of hostility in the air. Then suddenly, I was in the air. Upside down. "Ohhhhh, crap! If the wolves get me like this..." I looked around, and saw that my foot was tied to a rope which was tied to a tree branch. "Maybe if I just swing around a lot, I could break the rope..." I said to myself, feeling the blood rush to my head. I moved my body so that i was like on a swing. My momentum carried me nicely, but I still didn't break free. "Oh, what now?!" I said to myself. I was losing consciousness by now. I saw, through my blurring vision, a sharp twig. "Maybe if I..." I blacked out.
06-30-2009, 03:38 PM
Part Two
"Ungh, uhhh." I groaned. My face felt hard, sticky, and wet. I tried to open my eyes, but it was like they were glued shut. I tried to unglue my eyes, but something furry stopped them. More slime. "Meuw ftgrovz!" I tried speaking, but fur kept getting in my mouth. I got whatever was on me and put it down next to me. I opened my eyes and... I screamed. It was a wolf pup! Then, out of nowhere, two wolves jumped out and stood over me. They pinned down my arms, and two more pinned down my legs. "Nnn! Hmp egh euh!" As much as I tried to free myself, my living chains never got up. I stopped moving and made myself relax as much as I could. A young wolf came out of the bushes in front of me. I could tell by the air of importance around him that he was the Alpha. I dared him to come and strike me down with my eyes. It was a contest of will as we glared at each other, willing the other to do something, dangerous, or not. The leader lost our contest. He backed away a few steps, then nodded his head up. The wolves got off of my arms and legs. I stretched them out, glad the extra weight was gone. I got up and just as I was going to take a step, the leader pounced, and I was forced into a sitting posistion, with my legs going numb again. "Look, at need to go back home and take another test, alright?" The wolf shook his head. "Let me go, you stupid wolf!!" The wolf didn't let me go. After a few minutes it got off and looked at me like, If you wanna live kid, then follow my pack. I'll lead you to a better village. I trusted the wolf...a little. I decided to go with his pack, for now. The wolves got into formation, and I took up the rear. The leader shook his head and brought me next to his second in command. The other wolf tried to push me away, but the alpha had other thoughts. I smirked has the wolf glared at me.

Okay so how was that? i know i might be a rookie but there.But seriously how was it??
07-12-2009, 05:02 PM
We had been traveling for four days. The wolves had taught me how to survive on my own, and with the pack's support I tackled deer and bucks and feasted. Herbs that killed the germs on the meat were found everywhere, and I never had to go to the inconvenience of cooking my food. The wolf and I had accepted our temporary status as Beta and co-Beta. The alpha and I had learned to communicate quite well, and I was not afraid to make my opinion known. The alpha summoned me to his side as the pack was huddled up in a cave. He told me we were nearing the Village Hidden in the Darkness. As soon as we neared sight of the front gates they would leave me. It shook me to my core to leave the wolves, but I knew that I would be safe in the village.
Another day had passed. I was the first to see the village, then the rest of the pack did. "Good-bye..." My voice was hoarse from not using it for so long. They all howled in response. It was bright and sunny, which struck me as odd for a Village Hidden in the Darkness. As I turned around I heard paws behind me, and I counted them. One, two...five? There was six in the pack, not including me. I turned around and saw the pup that was on me when I awoke five days ago. He was wagging his tail, and sitting on his haunches obediently. I picked him up and put him in the forest. He came back, tongue lolling out of his mouth and his tail wagging ferociously.
He thinks this is a game! I thought as I picked him up and put on a rock. I walked away, then i felt ripping on my shirt. I looked behind me and saw the pup again, and he was clinging to the fibers of my shirt. I sighed and took him off my shirt and at my feet. I started walking and he followed. I didn't try to put him with his pack because I realized he wanted to stay with me. The front gates were painted brown and black. There were no guards out front, just a booth inside with some ninja. I automatically went to the booth. They asked me who I was, and I said I had no name. They didn't question me further, but I heard them say,"Report this to the Uchikage!" to someone I assumed was a ninja. I walked to the inn and asked for a room. The innkeeper leaned back and handed me a key. The strangest part was he asked if I had any dental problems. I hoped my room had a mirror so I could check what people were staring at.
My room had a small sink, a bed, and a mirror. I immediately went to the mirror. My shirt was cut in some places, and my pants were tattered at the end. I was completely calm until I looked at my face. My face had dirt and in some places, small drops of dried up blood, all over the place! My hair was long and looked untamed, but it remained straight with no knots when I ran my hands through my hair. My eyes and teeth were the most changed. My eyes were slanted, and instead of a chocolate brown, the color was bright green, and when I tilted my head right, dull yellow. Instead of bumpy teeth, all of them were pointed at the end, and my canine teeth were longer and sharper than a normal humans. My ears were pointed just a bit, and I discovered I could move them to detect sound easier. My sense of smell was also heightened, because I could smell the sausage and ham cooking from here.
I thought to myself, No wonder the people I have met so far are taken aback by me. Just then My door was slammed open, and I was knocked out.
NOW DON'T KILL ME!!!
Yesterday, 04:04 PM
When I woke up, I was tied to a chair in a dimly lit room. I looked around, and saw ninja in masks, and a figure at the the end of the room i couldn't make out. I remembered who the people in masks were. "Anbu?" I asked slowly as to not strain my voice. All of the people in the room turned their heads toward me.
"We are not trying to hurt you. Tell us who you are, where you come from, and why you came here." One of the anbu commanded. I shook my head. They weren't going to get a word out of me! I thought fiercely. I was slapped. "I will ask you one at a time, who are you?" A harsh voice said. I replied, but it wasn't what they expected.
"I don't have a name. And if you try to get me to say anything else, you will regret that fact!" I said with enough venom in my voice to get it through them that they know I mean business. A few even took a step back because I talked slow enough to reveal all of my teeth.
They had tied me with rope. I tested it's strength, and I could probably break through it. I counted, and listened for breathing, to find about seven in the room, including the figure I couldn't see and me. Five opponents, possibly six. All of them anbu, possibly higher. The odds were against me, but I wasn't afraid. I felt, positive somehow.
"If you won't tell us what we want, then you can't stay here." The figure in the back said. It was the kage, most likely. I had traveled for five days with only wolves for support. I could just find another village.
Today, 10:38 AM
"Anbu, release her. There is a new village who might accept her." The figure said.
"Right, Uchikage." The anbu released me.
"Where is my pup?" I asked.
"We took the dog to the pound." One of the anbu said.
"YOU DID WHAT?! YOU TOOK MY WOLF PUP TO THE POUND?!?! IF A SINGLE HAIR IS MISPLACED ON HIS FUR I WILL COME BACK AND KILL YOU ALL!" I yelled in fury, enticing huge amounts of venom into my voice. The anbu backed away, my raw fury keeping them at bay. I stormed out of the room and I heard sighs of relief as I left. I grabbed a villager.
"Where. Is. The. POUND?" I said, too angry to say things in a complete sentence.
"T-The pound is over there!" He pointed in the direction of a large building. "N-Now p-please, let me down!" He screamed in fright. I stormed over to the building and threw the door open.
"WHERE IS THE WOLF PUP YOU TOOK RECENTLY?!" I yelled through the entire building. All the animals went silent except for one. It howled and howled. I went to the cage and my wolf pup was there. I ripped the door open and my pup jumped on my head. I jumped to the top of a building and looked around. It was dark, but I could see a butcher cutting meat. I ran toward the place.
"Give me as much meat as you can, old man." I said venomously. He immediately loaded my pack with as much salted venison that it could hold. Everybody stayed out of my way as I went for the south exit. The guards didn't even try to hold me back, I snarled at them, revealing my fangs, and they even widened the space for me to go by. I ran out of the village, and into my freedom once again.
TA-DA! Aren't I so good at this? Bask in the glory of my newest post! ^.^

cherryflower
07-14-2009, 10:47 AM
Waiting....how do you rate threads.....waiting........good story.......waiting.........congratulations on getting in the saga story.........waiting.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-14-2009, 10:56 AM
cherry the most current was a few posts before now

C4 Karura
07-14-2009, 11:02 AM
Waiting....how do you rate threads.....waiting........good story.......waiting.........congratulations on getting in the saga story.........waiting.
You can rate threads at the top of the page... and NaruSaku got in the Shinobi Story? Way to go!

Kon
07-14-2009, 11:03 AM
ok!?!?!?!?!?!????!?

cherryflower
07-14-2009, 11:05 AM
Yeah she did!

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-14-2009, 11:10 AM
yes i did!!i was screaming in all my pms lol, and cherry that post was freaky and cool too was the black raven supposed to be my character? or just a figment of her imagination?

vampire Lycan
07-14-2009, 11:31 AM
:shock: poor you......WOLVES COME BACK!!!!!!

cherryflower
07-14-2009, 11:33 AM
well, she was sorta remebering what she left behind, and what she's become. Thats all I'll say.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-14-2009, 12:00 PM
ah ok ty for the insight cherry ^.^

cherryflower
07-14-2009, 12:06 PM
Your welcome. now WRITE MORE! please.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-14-2009, 12:10 PM
ok ok!

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-14-2009, 12:30 PM
I was free. Free from any restraints put by villages. I could live off the land and live alone. It was April, a beautiful time. The bushes were thriving with fruit, wild carrots were growing, and flowers were everywhere. The one flower I loved the most was the Cherry Blossoms. They were on trees everywhere. It can't be the Cherry Blossom festival yet, can it? I thought to myself. It smelled so nice, the scent of the flowers was sweet, herbal, and nectarish. I sat down to rest, and soon fell asleep.

A small village. It was in the middle of a circle of Sakura trees. The kage there looked kind and young. Her expression was clearly worried. Only three villagers were there, worried about their Kage. There were only four houses in the village, one for the kage, and the other three for the villagers. One house was burned. There were herbs and flowers in gardens in the back of the houses. In the middle of the village was a giant cherry blossom tree soaring higher than the trees surrounding it. The cherry blossoms were a bright, vibrant pink, and the kage sat down underneath tree's floral crown and just thought. Surrounding the tree were patches of earth over flowing with herbs and flowers of every kind.

I gasped. A presence had just touched me, and it shook me to my core. It was commanding and kind at the same time.

Here is the newest chapter! And for those who don't know their Japanese, Sakura is the word for Cherry Blossom. And if you are interested in Sakura's last name, Haruno means fields. So Sakura Haruno is Cherry Blossom fields. Just a little tidbit for ya. ;)

C4 Karura
07-14-2009, 12:45 PM
AWESOME! And thanks for the tidbit!

cherryflower
07-14-2009, 12:51 PM
Well Sakura actualy means cherry tree so thats why people say sakura flowers. But anyways Great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) :) :) :)

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-14-2009, 01:55 PM
ah ty for that knowledge cherry

abby750
07-14-2009, 01:57 PM
Coool!! :)

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-14-2009, 01:58 PM
tys abby

ItachiAnbu
07-14-2009, 03:17 PM
Well Sakura actualy means cherry tree so thats why people say sakura flowers. But anyways Great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) :) :) :)

The literal translation is Cherry Blossonm, but like kst things in Japanese, they bend in different ways, and translate in different ways when coupled with different characters.

People may say Sakura flowers, but they also say Sakura trees.

I believe the translation for Sakura Haruno is indeed Cherry Blossom Fields.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-14-2009, 03:18 PM
yes score one for me!

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-14-2009, 03:19 PM
HOT WING EATING CONTEST IN THE SAKURA VILLAGE SIGN UP EXPIRES IN 11 MINUTES!be there!!

ItachiAnbu
07-14-2009, 03:20 PM
HOT WING EATING CONTEST IN THE SAKURA VILLAGE SIGN UP EXPIRES IN 11 MINUTES!be there!!

Wait, what?

Anyway, I updated my fan-Fic, why dontcha check it out?:D

cherryflower
07-14-2009, 03:24 PM
The literal translation is Charry Blossonm, but like kst things in Japanese, they bend in different ways, and translate in different ways when coupled with different characters.

People may say Sakura flowers, but they also say Sakura trees.

I believe the translation for Sakura Haruno is indeed Cherry Blossom Fields.


I learned it in a with a different translation I guess and you spelled cherry wrong.

cherryflower
07-14-2009, 03:26 PM
yes score one for me!

Not true he said they bend in different ways. And when your done with the hot wings contest can you write more.(I hate hot wings)

ItachiAnbu
07-14-2009, 03:48 PM
I learned it in a with a different translation I guess and you spelled cherry wrong.

Yeah that's probably what happened.

I fixed it.;)

ItachiAnbu
07-14-2009, 03:49 PM
Not true he said they bend in different ways. And when your done with the hot wings contest can you write more.(I hate hot wings)

Oh, me too. Actually, I'm vegetarian.

I do eat cheese, milk, and seafood though.

cherryflower
07-14-2009, 04:14 PM
I hate hot wings because they are spicy, but do you know how to speak Japanese. And 4 ever when are you going to write more! It's a great story!

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-14-2009, 04:18 PM
1:i used to but it faded when i couldn't practice it daily,
2:i love spicy!!
3:im going to write it later

cherryflower
07-14-2009, 04:21 PM
Okay, *sigh* I know Japanese but need to pratice alot more I can't speak that fluently. *waiting*

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-14-2009, 04:39 PM
dont start the waiting thing!!

C4 Karura
07-14-2009, 04:44 PM
dont start the waiting thing!!
Why?:p

ItachiAnbu
07-14-2009, 04:44 PM
I hate hot wings because they are spicy, but do you know how to speak Japanese. And 4 ever when are you going to write more! It's a great story!

I speak a bit, but not fluently. I'm better at understanding Japanese phrases and associations. I'm trying to learn to read it.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-14-2009, 07:15 PM
ugh learning Japanese must be SO hard..

cherryflower
07-14-2009, 09:35 PM
Not really if you practice, I love how beautiful kanji writing is though and learning to read hirogana is quite simple because it's based off sounds.

jenny
07-15-2009, 06:14 AM
when did the japanese comversation,come up?

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-15-2009, 07:43 AM
when i had the dream about the sakura village? :mrgreen: i had a tidbit explaining sakura's name in Japanese ^.^

C4 Karura
07-15-2009, 12:43 PM
How many parts will there be?

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-15-2009, 04:03 PM
i does not know!

C4 Karura
07-15-2009, 04:42 PM
Okay!

vampire Lycan
07-16-2009, 11:29 AM
STORY!!!!!STORY!!!!!!i want more STORY!!!!!

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-16-2009, 01:53 PM
O.K.!!!dont hurt me!!!!

vampire Lycan
07-16-2009, 02:48 PM
:lol:

C4 Karura
07-16-2009, 03:46 PM
*waiting for the next part* ... Oh, yeah! What do people think of my new font and color?

C4 Karura
07-18-2009, 09:13 PM
Hello.... Are you writing anymore?

vampire Lycan
07-19-2009, 07:51 AM
Write!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-19-2009, 09:11 AM
ugh me is to lazy to write now, but im also kinda stuck...

cherryflower
07-19-2009, 09:54 AM
I can help you if you need any help!:p

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-19-2009, 10:05 AM
my last post kind of left me wondering how to pick up...:mad:

cherryflower
07-19-2009, 10:35 AM
Here is an idea you could use!

Okay well the wovles could hurry and wake her up to show her the luner eclipse, that happnded the only once in many years, the cherry blossum festival could also be on that day, so they would be traveling at day for a short while because the sun is covered. so they will be traveling in the day for 3 hours and 26 mins in the day time.

while they were traveling they could of found a girl or boy her age who was hurt, and later on she could make the desicion to be with her own kind or the wovles, she could remeber the tests she had at the begining and stuff, and the person could also join the pack!

ItachiAnbu
07-19-2009, 01:02 PM
Not really if you practice, I love how beautiful kanji writing is though and learning to read hirogana is quite simple because it's based off sounds.

I love caligraphy, it's so fun, and kanji are very beautiful.

my last post kind of left me wondering how to pick up...:mad:

Writers block sucks....

I know, i've been there... I am there now, thinking of how to wrap up book 1.

SakuraGirl
07-19-2009, 01:22 PM
like it what happen next

cherryflower
07-19-2009, 02:10 PM
Here is an idea you could use!

Okay well the wovles could hurry and wake her up to show her the luner eclipse, that happnded the only once in many years, the cherry blossum festival could also be on that day, so they would be traveling at day for a short while because the sun is covered. so they will be traveling in the day for 3 hours and 26 mins in the day time.

while they were traveling they could of found a girl or boy her age who was hurt, and later on she could make the desicion to be with her own kind or the wovles, she could remeber the tests she had at the begining and stuff, and the person could also join the pack!

You could use this Idea I came up with!

C4 Karura
07-19-2009, 02:57 PM
Hope the writer's block goes away soon!

cherryflower
07-19-2009, 03:40 PM
Hope the writer's block goes away soon!


It will go away once she reads the spoiler in my post!

C4 Karura
07-24-2009, 09:46 PM
Hello? Are you writing anymore?

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-25-2009, 10:28 AM
cherry, thats a good idea.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-25-2009, 10:29 AM
STOP POSTING! HIT THE BREAKS!!! MY MIND IS WORKING AGAIN!!*angels singing hallelujah* SIT BACK AND RELAX!!!!NOW!!OR DROP AND GIVE ME TWENTY!!1!!

ItachiAnbu
07-25-2009, 12:49 PM
STOP POSTING! HIT THE BREAKS!!! MY MIND IS WORKING AGAIN!!*angels singing hallelujah* SIT BACK AND RELAX!!!!NOW!!OR DROP AND GIVE ME TWENTY!!1!!

I gave you fifty.

C4 Karura
07-26-2009, 12:50 PM
STOP POSTING! HIT THE BREAKS!!! MY MIND IS WORKING AGAIN!!*angels singing hallelujah* SIT BACK AND RELAX!!!!NOW!!OR DROP AND GIVE ME TWENTY!!1!!
Sorry, but's it's been 2 weeks
since
you had written a part.
We
were just wondering
if
you were writing at
all
anymore
Ok?

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-26-2009, 06:58 PM
damn, my post is missing!i thought i posted it, hang on let me check word

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-26-2009, 07:06 PM
I got up and ran. Ran through bushes, leaves, and cherry blossoms. I didn't want human presence. I didn't want to encounter humans and all those tests again. I didn't want my wolf to be in a kennel, and me interrogated. I didn't want all of the things that happened to me and my wolf to happen again. I didn't know how far I was going, but I knew my wolf was following me. I decided to name him Oomaki, Japanese for wolf. I must have ran too fast, for I tripped, fell, hit my head on a branch, and was knocked unconscious.

-Later-

Snuffling, wetness, and warmth. I was warm and toasty, just like I was when I was traveling with my pack. My pack! I thought with a start. I looked around, and noticed lots of furry bodies, and I recognized the leader. The alpha was awake, looking at me worriedly, and also curiously. I made a soft howl, and his ears pricked up. The others heard my howl. The entire pack woke up and started howling. I howled with them. It felt good, before I realized it was...ancient. The song was ancient, and pulled to my heartstrings. The pack started running east, towards the village I dreamed of. I warning howled, and made it clear I did not want to go there.

The pack ran on, and I followed. My wolf, Oomaki, was among them. It had to be the middle of the day, yet it was as dark as the evening. I looked up, and saw the moon in front of the sun, letting only a tiny bit of light come through. I panicked, and ran faster. I took the head of the pack, not caring if I broke pack society. I stopped. I smelled...human. My own smell was so mingled with wolves and humans that it was my own smell. The others smelled the human too, stopping with me. I cautiously moved forwards, forgetting the fact I was on all fours. It was a female, like me, and she was injured. She had a rash, and looked deathly pale. My eyes widened. This was the kage I saw earlier! Something happened, she must have been poisoned, or something. I rolled her on to my back, and ran with a desperate fervor. It may take an hour, or more, to get her to the village, and it may be too late. I ran even faster, forgetting my own health in order to save her.

Remarkably, I made it there within ten minutes. The village was closer than I previously thought. The people there, which had increased to about ten, rushed out of their houses, but stayed a distance away as they saw my wild appearance. "Well, what are you doing?! What's wrong with your kage?!" I yelled. Someone came out of the kage building. I looked up, then down, then up again. They looked almost entirely alike! They had different hair colors, but it was worn the same way.

"What happened?" The kage look alike asked.

"I was running with my pack-" I glanced backwards to see the pack waiting at the edge of the village. "when I found the kage on the floor. She has a huge rash on her left leg, and in the center it looks like she was cut. I'm guessing a poison or something, but an herb is not that thin, or sharp." I said. The kage, or co-kage, nodded, not caring about my wild appearance.

"Assasin?" The lady muttered.

"It's possible, aren't kages and co-kages big targets for rogues, and enemy villages?" I suggested. The look-alike seemed to see my face for the first time. She gasped and immediately went to the giant tree and retrieved an herb. It was the herb I had eaten all of my uncooked food with.

"Did you eat this herb, and when was the last time?" She asked.

"About a week ago, when I was traveling with my pack. That herb grew everywhere, and it made the meat digestable. It was a relief to know I wouldn't hinder my pack's speed while I had this around." I said, getting a bad response.

"Crap!" The kage yelled while rushing over to an herb patch. She picked a horrible smelling one, and shoved it into my mouth. I tried spitting it out, but it slid down my throat before I could.

"What the hell was that for?!" I yelled. I looked down at the other kage and noticed she was getting even more pale. I remembered that I felt like that once, and my wolves found me a bitter an chilly herb to feed me. I was better within hours, so our progress was hindered only a little. I went over to the patch and found the herb. I took a cherry blossoms flower, and some water too. I ground the flower and herb to a pulp in a bowl, then added water to it. I oppened the kage's mouth and poured some in. Moving her mouth, I made her swallow as much as her mouth could carry.

The other kage was watching, curious, and worried. I grinned at her, with my canines showing, and the kage backed away. That made me grin even wider, but ragged breaths took me back to my patient. She was awake!

ItachiAnbu
07-26-2009, 07:18 PM
I liked it. The part at the end was especially creepy.:mrgreen:


I'd like your opinion on my newest chapter. I'll be updating it tomorrow as well.:)

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-26-2009, 07:51 PM
oh, ok!

C4 Karura
07-27-2009, 10:21 AM
That was great! Thanks for writing another part!

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-27-2009, 10:23 AM
its no problem!

C4 Karura
07-27-2009, 10:25 AM
Are there any other good Fan Fics on this forum?

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-27-2009, 10:27 AM
ryaque's, takuya's, kuroda's, let me check

C4 Karura
07-27-2009, 10:33 AM
All right, I'll check those out today.

cherryflower
07-27-2009, 10:53 AM
Great! i got a bit counfused though, was the kage the hurt one or not?

C4 Karura
07-27-2009, 11:05 AM
Everyone! Ryaque's considering leaving! Go to the "Who thinks Ryaque is awesome?" thread in off-topic right now and tell her not to go!

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-27-2009, 11:08 AM
Great! i got a bit counfused though, was the kage the hurt one or not? they look a bit alike, so my character is confused. ^.^ she cant tell if they co kage or kage or unimportant people lol ^.^

C4 Karura
07-27-2009, 11:12 AM
Well, I can't wait for the next part.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-27-2009, 11:35 AM
ok, but WE HAVE A CRISIS GOING ON RYAQUE IS THINKING OF LEAVING!!

mangagirl
07-27-2009, 11:37 AM
wow i love it sis!!!!!!!

cherryflower
07-27-2009, 11:40 AM
ok, but WE HAVE A CRISIS GOING ON RYAQUE IS THINKING OF LEAVING!!

WHAT SHE IS!?! She's so nice and fun also a great writer.

mangagirl
07-27-2009, 11:41 AM
shes not leaving!!!

C4 Karura
07-27-2009, 12:59 PM
Ryaque can't leave!

ItachiAnbu
07-27-2009, 04:54 PM
Ryaque can't leave!

I want her to stay!

Why is she leaving?

cherryflower
07-27-2009, 06:45 PM
she's not leaving any more.

C4 Karura
07-27-2009, 08:19 PM
Hmm... Will we have to wait 2 weeks again for the next part?

C4 Karura
07-31-2009, 08:08 PM
Why have you stopped writing?

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-31-2009, 08:10 PM
srry i lost track of my thread...its like a wild animal!!!

C4 Karura
07-31-2009, 08:11 PM
So when will the next part be up?

NaruSakufluff4ever
08-01-2009, 11:49 AM
im working on it...

NaruSakufluff4ever
08-01-2009, 12:39 PM
I helped her sit up. "Sakura! What happened? The tree induced a vision, so I went to investigate. But I got cut by something when I was in the woods, and I felt a searing pain everywhere..." She looked up. I backed away knowing the effect I had on people. "Sister, what happened to her? She didn't eat THAT herb, did she?" She asked.

"Saika, she did. But I already gave her the right herb." Sakura said. Saika sighed in relief. I felt a little left out, but angry as well.

"What's so big about this herb?!?! All I did was eat it for a few days when I was traveling with my pack-" I glanced behind me to see the wolves hovering at the edge of the village. "-and so I didn't hinder them, I found this herb," I got up and picked the herb I ate. "would make raw meat digestible so I ate it!" I yelled, growling afterwards. Saika looked calm, but I could smell anger and fear. Sakura was feeling confident. I got mad at that, the herb she shoved down my throat tasted horrible.

To prove the herb I ate didn't do me harm, I ate it. I felt fine afterwards, but Saika went pale and Sakura, I could smell, was furious, but also scared and concerned. The wolves howled their agreement with me. "See? My pack knows that it doesn't hurt me." I said, rubbing it in their faces.

"Sakura, how did I wake up? I felt like I was going to die, but then my breath came back." Saika asked. "Surely you woke me up, right Sakura?" Sakura grit her teeth.

"That animal-" I grit my teeth at that word. "-somehow knew the right combination of herbs to cure you." I smirked as each word became more forced by her. I walked over, and bit both their hands. Sakura shrieked, and Saika screamed. Then I bit my hand. Blood only flowed from the spot where my canine were. I waited until the blood made a small pool in our hands before it fell, then I put my hand together with Sakura's hand, then Saika's hand, then I put theirs together.

"We are blood sisters now. I will know if come close to dieing by this bond I made. I walked toward my pack and let my pup lick it. "My pup also shares the bond, he will know sooner than me." I called back to them. I got into the running stance with my pack. We were about to go when Saika called out to me.

"Hey! Wait! You aren't going to stay for a bit?" I shook my head.

"Where my pack goes, I go. Unless they will not be stared at like they are a freak show, and are allowed to come indoors, I will not stay." My pack and I turned our heads back towards the forest. A light tap on my shoulder made me turn my head around again. It was Sakura. She was holding Oomaki in her arms in a choke hold. I growled, and got ready to lunge. The alpha's hackles were up, that was his son she was going to choke. "Don't. You. Dare. Kill him." I barely managed to hold back my urge to just rip her arms until the bones showed.

"Is this how I hold him then?" Sakura asked, shifting Oomaki until she held him the way I did. I stopped growling, but still eyed her venomously.

"That's better. Just remember, never hurt my wolves, or else you have my entire pack against you." I warned. Sakura's confidence seemed to drop a little. I went over to the alpha and carved a howling wolf into his fur. I did the rest to my other pack members. A decent amount of wolf fur littered the ground when I was done. I took Oomaki from Sakura's arms and carved the same mark onto him. "There, you will know if this pack is my pack. Even if they grow the fur back, it will still seem like a wolf howling." I told her.

I turned to leave one more time. Sakura sighed. "Look, you can stay. The wolves will take some getting used to, but I can't just leave you on your own especially after saving my sister." Sakura said. She opened one of the pouches she had and handed me a Sakura Village forehead protector. It had a cherry blossom carved on it. I tied it around my neck.

"Thanks." I said. I turned around and stood on my legs. I walked toward a patch of grass in the sunlight. "I'll sleep here until you find a place for me to stay." I laid down and went to sleep, my surrounding by warm, furry blankets.

There! My most recent post!

C4 Karura
08-02-2009, 04:42 PM
I read this yesterday, and it's good.

NaruSakufluff4ever
08-02-2009, 05:12 PM
yay ^.^

C4 Karura
08-03-2009, 11:23 AM
So, when will the next part come out?

NaruSakufluff4ever
08-03-2009, 01:09 PM
when something big happens in the village, LIKE the akatsuki attacking! oh wait, that already happened... ill post later :mrgreen:

C4 Karura
08-03-2009, 01:29 PM
I can't wait!

ItachiAnbu
08-03-2009, 01:55 PM
Wow, that last part was really nice!:mrgreen:

NaruSakufluff4ever
08-03-2009, 02:08 PM
yay ^.^

C4 Karura
08-03-2009, 02:08 PM
Hey, 200 posts! Congradulations!

NaruSakufluff4ever
08-03-2009, 02:22 PM
Woot!!

C4 Karura
08-04-2009, 09:38 AM
Umm... It's been 3 days...

NaruSakufluff4ever
08-04-2009, 09:40 AM
really??fine ill post

C4 Karura
08-06-2009, 01:34 PM
really??fine ill post
Umm... When?

NaruSakufluff4ever
08-06-2009, 04:31 PM
>.< i swear i posted, gah i bet it was my mouse, im always going back a page whenever i right click then left click, it makes me go back a page

Sasuke726
08-06-2009, 04:51 PM
hmm very interestin

C4 Karura
08-06-2009, 05:02 PM
>.< i swear i posted, gah i bet it was my mouse, im always going back a page whenever i right click then left click, it makes me go back a page
So you wrote it, but it's not up?

C4 Karura
08-10-2009, 06:01 PM
Seriously, where's the next part?

C4 Karura
08-12-2009, 09:23 PM
It's been almost 2 weeks...

C4 Karura
10-17-2009, 08:49 AM
Hello?