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Ayden
06-20-2009, 03:42 PM
............

animelover
06-20-2009, 03:46 PM
wow......very "unique" ayden, your a good writer, any other parts?

KIBAFAN321
06-20-2009, 04:02 PM
.......Nice story. But is the guy gay?

KIBAFAN321
06-20-2009, 04:07 PM
LOL! Thats funny. But thats a great story you got there.

Kakashi71
06-20-2009, 04:09 PM
not to be rude animelover but he makes storys probuly as good as urs and mine

KIBAFAN321
06-20-2009, 04:09 PM
Really? I like it so far. Its funy. ^_^

animelover
06-20-2009, 04:11 PM
not to be rude animelover but he makes storys probuly as good as urs and mine
what do you mean?

animelover
06-20-2009, 04:54 PM
Part 3 plz :)

KIBAFAN321
06-20-2009, 05:15 PM
Nice story. The cuz is a girl. Right?

KIBAFAN321
06-20-2009, 05:20 PM
What do you mean by on one likes it? Its great! Its funny that the guy is gay. LOL!

animelover
06-20-2009, 05:22 PM
If you don't write part 3
then I will! >_>

KIBAFAN321
06-20-2009, 05:22 PM
That's not true. animelover reads it. I read it. Kakashi what ever the # were at the end of his name reads it.

KIBAFAN321
06-20-2009, 05:23 PM
WHAT?!?!?!? Why? It was so good though.

animelover
06-20-2009, 05:26 PM
:cool: Part 3:

As i growled, my teeth snarled and-I'm sorry your call has been dis-connected, please try again

:( awww

KIBAFAN321
06-20-2009, 05:27 PM
That's funny animelover. LOL!

animelover
06-20-2009, 05:29 PM
I am, i'm sorry (i was just joking love)

animelover
06-20-2009, 05:56 PM
The aged wolf stood outside the circle and made an amused smiled. "Oh? Why should I, the whole pack is on my side, and your a lone wolf? I can have you killed within a blinks time."

I bared my own fangs at the end of his remark, but he was right, I was clearly unmatched. The pack continued to growl, except for my whimpering cousin. "Fine, I'll listen to your words under one condition." the aged wolf asked with that same amused smile of his. "Don't die" He then snarled and every single wolf lunged at me. No time to think, I lunged at one of my friends and overpowered him to the ground, I dug my fangs into his neck and pulled a big chunk of his flesh, blood splattered across the grass. I gave a crazed look to the pack, red dripping from my fangs. "Stop this, I don't want to, but if you threaten my life I'll take yours."

The pack continued to growl, and two lunged at me, I dove to the right but my evasive action was no good, my own brother had caught my foot and ripped off a huge chunk. I wailed in pain, and fell to the ground. My friend and brother closed in on me, I was caught. I tried to drag my body out of the way, but I couldn't move fast enough. I felt wet at my side as I noticed my brother's fangs were deep into me. The aged wolf growled and they pulled back. "Wait, the father must finish his son off"

My father arose from the crowd and stood in front of me and snarled. I was frightened. He turned to face the aged, and the aged nodded. My father lunged at me and I stared at him. It seemed as if time had stopped, he stood there frozen in the air, the pack howling and laughing, stood there stolid stones. I felt my blood curdle, this was my end. My father made contact, his nails deep in me, and his fangs in my neck. I noticed he had tears overfilling his eye lids. This was the end?
:shock::shock::shock: U can't end it like this!!!!! part 4?!?!???

animelover
06-20-2009, 06:07 PM
unfortunately there is still more
*kisses you* Thank you love!

Shinobi_Kitten
06-28-2009, 10:12 PM
What is supposed to be about??