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Makoto Cifer
07-26-2010, 05:31 PM
location:abondoned city
distance:20 meters







i am roaming the menos forest after getting back from a relaxing vaction to the world of the living for a little R and R then i decid to visit huceo mundo after yoris regin of terror is till at large i quickly walk along the desert of huceo mundo watching the moon i awe as i find a large bolder to sit on and watch the moon then a thought strikes my head i remebered how mad i was about what yori did so then as i have that thought i quickly walk through the garaganta to an abondoned city then my eyes glow a deep piercing orange then my pesquisa picks up an unusal reiatsu i quickly hop off the bolder and i use wolf sense(this technique amplifies my pesquisa alllowing me sense reiatsu at a very high level it also hightens all of my senses and it allows me to sense distubences within the flow of reishi) then i quickly sprint toward the location while at the same time i sniff your scent then i arrive at my locaton 200 hundred yards from your location then i focus my vision toward a figure in the distance then i see my opponent is yori my quickly give quickly grin of anxiety "yori your reighn of terror is over i will stop the dark ness you will pay for what you did to hally light will break the dark ness" then i quickly jump back as i pre pare to attack


as i jump back i quickly increase my reiatsu to 50% stenght then as that ahppenthen as i do so i quickly put both of my hands 2 meters away from my legs then as that ahppens i quickly focus most of my reiatsu around my hands and arms as i do that i dence membrane of dimond approimetly 2 meters thick envelpos my hands and arm up to my shoulders then as that ahppens i quickly focus my reiatsu to a point at the end of the membranne toward my hand i quickly fluctuate the reiatu in that area around the membrane then i quickly alter the shape of the dimond then as that ahppen both of the dimond membranes surrounding my hands is formed into blades of dimond then as that ahppens i quickly use the reiatsu in air to create a shield of reiatsu around the blades to prevent them from breaking then as that ahppens i quickly rotate the reiatsu around the blades then as that ahppens i turn the reiatu around the blades into chainsaw like blade whie rotateing the reiatsu then as that ahppen i begen to charge a orange cero in my mouth then as that ahppen i quickly say this cahnt in my head"show your fangs the king of wolves" as i say that two wolf heads made of pure dimond appears out of the sand at soindo speed biteing your feet tearing through your flesg with one bite severing some the veins in your feet makeing your feet bleed perfusly then as that ahppen i quickly fucus my reiatsu to a point surrounding your location then as that ahppen hudreds of dimond shard rise from the ground the as your being bitten and held in place evey dimond shard plaunches at you at soindo speed like bullets implaeing you from all angles causeing you great pain the as that ahppen i quickly advance soindo concealing my location as well as my reiatsu then as that happens unknowningly i quickly soindo and appear 3 meters above your head then i quickly swing my left hand blade toward your head as i do so i slice your skull in two then as that ahppen i quickly rotate my body as i do that i quickly stop abrubtly and i fire the massive cero down upon your body as i engulfs you destroying your body then i quickly soindo behind you about 50 metrs and i quickly wait to see what ahppens

Hidan.of dA.MisT
07-26-2010, 05:48 PM
i dont think he will want to

Yori
07-26-2010, 06:58 PM
location:abondoned city
distance:20 meters







i am roaming the menos forest after getting back from a relaxing vaction to the world of the living for a little R and R then i decid to visit huceo mundo after yoris regin of terror is till at large i quickly walk along the desert of huceo mundo watching the moon i awe as i find a large bolder to sit on and watch the moon then a thought strikes my head i remebered how mad i was about what yori did so then as i have that thought i quickly walk through the garaganta to an abondoned city then my eyes glow a deep piercing orange then my pesquisa picks up an unusal reiatsu i quickly hop off the bolder and i use wolf sense(this technique amplifies my pesquisa alllowing me sense reiatsu at a very high level it also hightens all of my senses and it allows me to sense distubences within the flow of reishi) then i quickly sprint toward the location while at the same time i sniff your scent then i arrive at my locaton 200 hundred yards from your location then i focus my vision toward a figure in the distance then i see my opponent is yori my quickly give quickly grin of anxiety "yori your reighn of terror is over i will stop the dark ness you will pay for what you did to hally light will break the dark ness" then i quickly jump back as i pre pare to attack


as i jump back i quickly increase my reiatsu to 50% stenght then as that ahppenthen as i do so i quickly put both of my hands 2 meters away from my legs then as that ahppens i quickly focus most of my reiatsu around my hands and arms as i do that i dence membrane of dimond approimetly 2 meters thick envelpos my hands and arm up to my shoulders then as that ahppens i quickly focus my reiatsu to a point at the end of the membranne toward my hand i quickly fluctuate the reiatu in that area around the membrane then i quickly alter the shape of the dimond then as that ahppen both of the dimond membranes surrounding my hands is formed into blades of dimond then as that ahppens i quickly use the reiatsu in air to create a shield of reiatsu around the blades to prevent them from breaking then as that ahppens i quickly rotate the reiatsu around the blades then as that ahppens i turn the reiatu around the blades into chainsaw like blade whie rotateing the reiatsu then as that ahppen i begen to charge a orange cero in my mouth then as that ahppen i quickly say this cahnt in my head"show your fangs the king of wolves" as i say that two wolf heads made of pure dimond appears out of the sand at soindo speed biteing your feet tearing through your flesg with one bite severing some the veins in your feet makeing your feet bleed perfusly then as that ahppen i quickly fucus my reiatsu to a point surrounding your location then as that ahppen hudreds of dimond shard rise from the ground the as your being bitten and held in place evey dimond shard plaunches at you at soindo speed like bullets implaeing you from all angles causeing you great pain the as that ahppen i quickly advance soindo concealing my location as well as my reiatsu then as that happens unknowningly i quickly soindo and appear 3 meters above your head then i quickly swing my left hand blade toward your head as i do so i slice your skull in two then as that ahppen i quickly rotate my body as i do that i quickly stop abrubtly and i fire the massive cero down upon your body as i engulfs you destroying your body then i quickly soindo behind you about 50 metrs and i quickly wait to see what ahppens

Um, Work on your damn spelling.

Teddie
07-26-2010, 07:42 PM
Are....are you actually serious?

Yori
07-26-2010, 08:12 PM
Are....are you actually serious?

Lol, what would you do teddie?

Zeek Uchiha
07-27-2010, 07:01 AM
Well this battle won't end well I sense alot of argueing and Yori constantly intimidating Mako

Yori
07-27-2010, 07:16 PM
I'm not countering. The opponent shouldn't have to go re-read his opponent attack over and over again fixing the spelling errors to understand the attack.

Zeek Uchiha
07-27-2010, 07:20 PM
lol well I can understand that