Epic: Susano vs Shino

[Shino Hatake]

Location: HM
Distance : 100 feet
You go first.

[Noctis Arashi]

*sigh* I hate going first.
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*I notice a large sp in the distance and see its a fellow arrancar known as shino. I quickly activate my Takashimami, as my eyes turn black my reaction times are greatly incresed, I can sense your sp even if you hide it and I have no blind spots. I then sonido at you creating 10 AI. Each AI forms 20 black flame extensions around you forming a cage that harden into a black, indestructible substance known to me as black steel. I then form a large black flaming cero. I fire it at you while you should be traped in the cage. I then retreat back focusing rieatsu into my palm.*

[Shino Hatake]

*sigh* I hate going first.
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*I notice a large sp in the distance and see its a fellow arrancar known as shino. I quickly activate my Takashimami, as my eyes turn black my reaction times are greatly incresed, I can sense your sp even if you hide it and I have no blind spots. I then sonido at you creating 10 AI. Each AI forms 20 black flame extensions around you forming a cage that harden into a black, indestructible substance known to me as black steel. I then form a large black flaming cero. I fire it at you while you should be traped in the cage. I then retreat back focusing rieatsu into my palm.*
Um one word Cadian * My cells then form so that i am now sp based smoke the quickly increase my speed so i can get from the ais before they form. After i am a good distance i then use my sp to make a large green ceor that uses over half my arm to fire. When it is fired it hits the cage and i use my advance sp control to make it absorb the sp so that this cero grows. When it is done in a mere .5 sec it would hit your right side where your heart is. Breaking the ribs the impact would push a force upon your heart making it bust. This would kill you. After i then fire a series of ten ballas around me to where they form my Indension. Theses ballas then made a cylinder that changed its levitation trough out time. This then made my first defense. * Still think im weak?

[Noctis Arashi]

Um one word Cadian * My cells then form so that i am now sp based smoke the quickly increase my speed so i can get from the ais before they form. After i am a good distance i then use my sp to make a large green ceor that uses over half my arm to fire. When it is fired it hits the cage and i use my advance sp control to make it absorb the sp so that this cero grows. When it is done in a mere .5 sec it would hit your right side where your heart is. Breaking the ribs the impact would push a force upon your heart making it bust. This would kill you. After i then fire a series of ten ballas around me to where they form my Indension. Theses ballas then made a cylinder that changed its levitation trough out time. This then made my first defense. * Still think im weak?
Not as weak as I thought.
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Black steel......level 2. *As I say this I move in an instant and appear next to you.* Do you think I'm that slow? *Before the words are finished I sonido away creating 4 more AI. They each create create a sphere of black steel around you. I am pumping my rieatsu into the sphere making it much more powerful. The sphere begins to glow a darkish blue as it emits a large black flaming cero inside the sphere and sending a 360 pulse of it outside. This ignites everything inside the sphere and outside into inextinguishable black flame. I then sonido back and clap both hands together. Ten large black flaming lances form behind me. Each one extremely dense and powerful enough to take a part of las noches with it. They each begin to spin and form an enormous black cero.* Black...... annihilation cero..... *The cero fires off engulfing all of Hueco mundo in a black cero, dissolving buildings to nothing but ash. This cero is thousands off times more powerful than any gran ray cero. It will break through all defenses unless you are in a released from. When the cero finally clears, the barren wasteland that was once hueco mundo is covered in black flame.*

[Noctis Arashi]

Boy that was nice XD.
* After it hen see that the black steel i then see your image and let my balla Idension to fire one at you before you can get away the 2nd time. When i say that 4 more AI have formed i then use my cero twister. Forming two blue and black ceros in both hands i then spin in a 360 making a full ration to make the AI's go way. The twister also hit your skin and left a now full cut through the rubs skin and breaking the spine. Then as i shinso away past you i was now 100 meters making a massive green cero in my hand and fire it our of my hand making the cut in half body then reduce to ash.*
Allow me to prove you wrong.

What you just did was GM. You must counter you cannot stop a move that has already been typed. Hally and others have proved it.

[Shino Hatake]

But i stooped your move before you already tried. I grab you before you could make any of those moves.So if this whole fight is attempts then those are failed because i stooped the user before he released them.

[Noctis Arashi]

But i stooped your move before you already tried. I grab you before you could make any of those moves.So if this whole fight is attempts then those are failed because i stooped the user before he released them.

That is what I'm talking about. It is not legible to do. Its considered GMing fix your move.

[Shino Hatake]

Um no. If you are dead before you can make any of the moves because you made a action perpetrate to prepping the moves then if i have you before you can produce the other action so you can make those moves then they are failed.

[Noctis Arashi]

Um no. If you are dead before you can make any of the moves because you made a action perpetrate to prepping the moves then if i have you before you can produce the other action so you can make those moves then they are failed.

Its GM hally made an entire thread on it......


So....yea it is.

[Shino Hatake]

Thats it that all you got to back it up. I have more and more to back mine up with.

[Noctis Arashi]

Thats it that all you got to back it up. I have more and more to back mine up with.

Its GM and I Pmed hally.

[Shino Hatake]

Your word is not the high for me to believe.

[Noctis Arashi]

Your word is not the high for me to believe.

Your controlling my actions when you say you stop my moves from happening which is god mod.

[Shino Hatake]

Im not controlling anything but my own attack. I merely blocked all of those before you can even make the others.

[Noctis Arashi]

http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showthread.php?t=59789 More proof.

Your stopping attacks from happening in the first place which is GM. You must counter all of them.

[Shino Hatake]

No i don't Only one that then stops the others. It basic fighting. Now just counter its not like its that hard.

[Noctis Arashi]

No i don't Only one that then stops the others. It basic fighting. Now just counter its not like its that hard.
Its GM. And I don't counter to GM moves. Fix it.

[Shino Hatake]

How? And no i backed up everything. This move is SO easy to counter. Just do it.

[Noctis Arashi]

How? And no i backed up everything. This move is SO easy to counter. Just do it.

Its not a matter of countering or not. Its the fact you CANNOT stop other moves from happening. Its GM. Your controlling actions.

Besides I'm having issues with my life right now.

[Shino Hatake]

For the last time. I am not controlling any actions. I am only stoping attacks before they happen.
And im sure that having your mom and sister missing for a weak after you found out your grandfather is dead and your cousins husband is SOOOOOOO much nicer then what your dealing with.

[Noctis Arashi]

For the last time. I am not controlling any actions. I am only stoping attacks before they happen.
And im sure that having your mom and sister missing for a weak after you found out your grandfather is dead and your cousins husband is SOOOOOOO much nicer then what your dealing with.
Actually my dog just died, my grandparents both died, my sister commited suicide and my GF Is in the middle of nowhere after getting stabbed and hasn't texted back.

[Shino Hatake]

Sucks for you. At least you have a mother and father. Im here alone and have to realy on my best friend to come by and see i am ok then take me to SS. So i dnt want to heal your whining.

[Noctis Arashi]

Sucks for you. At least you have a mother and father. Im here alone and have to realy on my best friend to come by and see i am ok then take me to SS. So i dnt want to heal your whining.

HAHAHAH. My parents don't give a damn about me. They beat me for fun. They could care less about me. They are the reason my sister commited suicide. And They didn't care they were GLAD she was dead. At least your parents give a damn.

[Shino Hatake]

One i don't have any
Two I feel your pain i never understood what mine where.

[Hally]

*sigh* I hate going first.
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*I notice a large sp in the distance and see its a fellow arrancar known as shino. I quickly activate my Takashimami, as my eyes turn black my reaction times are greatly incresed, I can sense your sp even if you hide it and I have no blind spots. I then sonido at you creating 10 AI. Each AI forms 20 black flame extensions around you forming a cage that harden into a black, indestructible substance known to me as black steel. I then form a large black flaming cero. I fire it at you while you should be traped in the cage. I then retreat back focusing rieatsu into my palm.*

Indestructible is gming nothing is indestructible. Near indestructable you can say. Carful how you word things or ppl can say its gming. You are not in your release form so 10 Ai forming that many flames would waist sp very fast. Carful not to run out of sp. Its better to make fewer afterimages until you release then 10 is okay.

Um one word Cadian * My cells then form so that i am now sp based smoke the quickly increase my speed so i can get from the ais before they form. After i am a good distance i then use my sp to make a large green ceor that uses over half my arm to fire. When it is fired it hits the cage and i use my advance sp control to make it absorb the sp so that this cero grows. When it is done in a mere .5 sec it would hit your right side where your heart is. Breaking the ribs the impact would push a force upon your heart making it bust. This would kill you. After i then fire a series of ten ballas around me to where they form my Indension. Theses ballas then made a cylinder that changed its levitation trough out time. This then made my first defense. * Still think im weak?

You are smoke. How can you turn into smoke? Thats making you intangeble which is gming. 5 seconds to charge a cero in an unreleased form? Dont use numbers its causes too much contiversy. Just say I charge a cero at a faster rate then normal due to my advanced control of sp.

Not as weak as I thought.
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Black steel......level 2. *As I say this I move in an instant and appear next to you.* Do you think I'm that slow? *Before the words are finished I sonido away creating 4 more AI. They each create create a sphere of black steel around you. I am pumping my rieatsu into the sphere making it much more powerful. The sphere begins to glow a darkish blue as it emits a large black flaming cero inside the sphere and sending a 360 pulse of it outside. This ignites everything inside the sphere and outside into inextinguishable black flame. I then sonido back and clap both hands together. Ten large black flaming lances form behind me. Each one extremely dense and powerful enough to take a part of las noches with it. They each begin to spin and form an enormous black cero.* Black...... annihilation cero..... *The cero fires off engulfing all of Hueco mundo in a black cero, dissolving buildings to nothing but ash. This cero is thousands off times more powerful than any gran ray cero. It will break through all defenses unless you are in a released from. When the cero finally clears, the barren wasteland that was once hueco mundo is covered in black flame.*

Again carful with your wording look at the highlighted text. All of Hueco Mundo? Your not released you would die from waisting sp pretty fast I dont think thats possible.

Boy that was nice XD.
* After i then see that the black steel i then see your image and let my balla Idension to fire one at you before you can get away the 2nd time. When i say that 4 more AI have formed i then use my cero twister. Forming two blue and black ceros in both hands i then spin in a 360 making a full ration to make the AI's go way. The twister also hit your skin and left a now full cut through the rubs skin and breaking the spine. Then as i shinso away past you i was now 100 meters making a massive green cero in my hand and fire it our of my hand making the cut in half body then reduce to ash.*
Allow me to prove you wrong.

This whole move makes no sense and is not really a counter to the previous move. This confuses me 100 percent. I have no idea what you are doing how you are countering and attacking. I am lost. Bye the time you form a twister I am pretty sure that you would have been hit by susannos massive cero. You never even countered the cero you assumed your attack you made before he made his cero would effect him. You cant do that. Your toast pretty much sorry but that really is not a good counter. Sussanoo has some things to work on and is not perfect but take some advice from him cause hes definatly getting the hang of freeverse and trying not to gm.

[Hally]

Alright read my comments please. Susanno and I am afraid that Shino ignored your cero. I am really lost with what he was trying to do.......

[Noctis Arashi]

So I won.

[Shino Hatake]

No, we both gmed. So we both loses.

[Noctis Arashi]

No, we both gmed. So we both loses.

Yea but you never countered. My cero. Hally PMed me and said I won. So you lost.

[Shino Hatake]

No i didn't. We both gmed so i would not have lost and in less you can screen shot and then PB. After send my a link you word means lil to none to me.

[Noctis Arashi]

No i didn't. We both gmed so i would not have lost and in less you can screen shot and then PB. After send my a link you word means lil to none to me.

You are the most stubborn little......

I never GMed I mis worded something to make it seem like gm. But it was not.


Fine, wait for Hally.....AGAIN.

[Shino Hatake]

Indestructible is gming nothing is indestructible. see

[Noctis Arashi]

Indestructible is gming nothing is indestructible. see

IT WAS MIS WORDED!!!!!! SHE even said!!!!!!!! YOU MADE YOURSELF INTANGIBLE!! So you died.

You ignored my cero, so you died.


TWICE!

[Noctis Arashi]

He is GMing me by controlling my actions but refuses to listen so will you go and tell him.

send me a link to the fight please and I will look at it
http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showthread.php?p=3235229&posted=1#post3235229

Okay I am getting way more criticle with stuff. I highlighted the stuff from each move in red and explained stuff. You are basically creaming his butt. You have a few things to work on from what I see. Just how you word things. As for shino......he never even countered your massive cero. He would be toast would he not and his move doesnt make any sense in my little mind.....


CREAMED YOUR BUTT......


You lost. Deal with it.

[Shino Hatake]

Not as weak as I thought.
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Black steel......level 2. *As I say this I move in an instant and appear next to you.* Do you think I'm that slow? *Before the words are finished I sonido away creating 4 more AI. They each create create a sphere of black steel around you. I am pumping my rieatsu into the sphere making it much more powerful. The sphere begins to glow a darkish blue as it emits a large black flaming cero inside the sphere and sending a 360 pulse of it outside. This ignites everything inside the sphere and outside into inextinguishable black flame. I then sonido back and clap both hands together. Ten large black flaming lances form behind me. Each one extremely dense and powerful enough to take a part of las noches with it. They each begin to spin and form an enormous black cero.* Black...... annihilation cero..... *The cero fires off engulfing all of Hueco mundo in a black cero, dissolving buildings to nothing but ash. This cero is thousands off times more powerful than any gran ray cero. It will break through all defenses unless you are in a released from. When the cero finally clears, the barren wasteland that was once hueco mundo is covered in black flame.*
* Looking to your image i then hear words. Turning around i am to late and have over 3 AI around me. Forming a massive cero in both hand i then jump in the air and conduct a spin so it makes a sphere and shoots out over 500 needles that would impale the Ai'S. Seeing you made a black cero i then spin faster making my sphere then gain more energy. After i have gained enough and see that you are about to fire it. Pulling my hands down i send my sphere down to the ground and send a massive pulse wave from the impact power of it. This wave sends over 200 lbs of presser and had it hit ti would send you back in the air making you ceor fire into the air before it hits me.. This would push me back as well due to the high impact from my own stance. When i am far away i then take my blade out and slam it in the ground. This made twelve points on it where my sp would then form a series of lances. Each had a golden shaft and can fire ceros from the ip of there head. When i clap my hands i then send sp oout so that these lances can spin around me. After i do this is then clap once more and ther now glow making a newly fomed second layer of cover around me.* Ah crap almost had me there.

[Hally]

* Looking to your image i then hear words. Turning around i am to late and have over 3 AI around me. Forming a massive cero in both hand i then jump in the air and conduct a spin so it makes a sphere and shoots out over 500 needles that would impale the Ai'S. Seeing you made a black cero i then spin faster making my sphere then gain more energy. After i have gained enough and see that you are about to fire it. Pulling my hands down i send my sphere down to the ground and send a massive pulse wave from the impact power of it. This wave sends over 200 lbs of presser and had it hit ti would send you back in the air making you ceor fire. This would push me back as well due to the high impact from my own stance. When i am far away i then take my blade out and slam it in the ground. This made twelve points on it where my sp would then form a series of lances. Each had a golden shaft and can fire ceros from the ip of there head. When i clap my hands i then send sp oout so that these lances can spin around me. After i do this is then clap once more and ther now glow making a newly fomed second layer of cover around me.* Ah crap almost had me there.


And how exactly does this stop his massive cero????? A little lost again. How are you exactly evading getting hit by the cero?

[Shino Hatake]

And how exactly does this stop his massive cero????? A little lost again. How are you exactly evading getting hit by the cero?
It would make the wave then push it up into the air where it would hit the air instead of me. I said it in my decrip. Just need to read a lil further.
EDITED: OK I DID NOT MY BAD!

[Hally]

It would make the wave then push it up into the air where it would hit the air instead of me. I said it in my decrip. Just need to read a lil further.
EDITED: OK I DID NOT MY BAD!

So once he fired it it would push the cero away and you could easily sonido away from it? I never really understood your description.

[Shino Hatake]

What do you mean?

[Shino Hatake]

So once he fired it it would push the cero away and you could easily sonido away from it? I never really understood your description.
No when i push it way the force that would have hit would have pushed both me and him back. Also the amount of force that i slammed down with my sphere would push me back as well only it would not causes any damage because the would redirect the amount of force on to susan.

[Noctis Arashi]

200lbs would never redirect a cero. Especially one of such magnitude. You lost. This battle is concluded.

[Hally]

No when i push it way the force that would have hit would have pushed both me and him back. Also the amount of force that i slammed down with my sphere would push me back as well only it would not causes any damage because the would redirect the amount of force on to susan.

Against a massive special cero. I dont think so the cero would ither continue moveing towards you or explode causing a massive widespread explosion enguphing you. If you are gonna counter something like that you have to be very specific. I mean my black cero of death would hit it and explode causing a wide spread explosion engulphing you. You were not really specific enough with how your move worked.

[Noctis Arashi]

Against a massive special cero. I dont think so the cero would ither continue moveing towards you or explode causing a massive widespread explosion enguphing you. If you are gonna counter something like that you have to be very specific. I mean my black cero of death would hit it and explode causing a wide spread explosion engulphing you. You were not really specific enough with how your move worked.

Exactly. He is dead. >.>

[Hally]

Yes I hate to say this but I Shino you failed to make a decent counter 2 times too Susannoos cero. You would die its a wide spread cero. Not exactly the size of las noches we determined this but it would be more widepread then an gren rey and more deadly then an oscuras due to the fact it was a specialized cero. Susannoo wins this fight but keep training Shino and dont get frustrated just focus and work on countering better.

[Shino Hatake]

Um what? But how can he make one that bog to over take oucruas in a unreleased form? Is it not that big it would drain him?

[Noctis Arashi]

Um what? But how can he make one that bog to over take oucruas in a unreleased form? Is it not that big it would drain him?
No. But I would be exhausted.

You lost. Deal with it.

[Shino Hatake]

You keep being harsh and rude you lil punk i wont gm and show you what my release looks like. And yes it would. Ulquiria did it in his 2nd release. Your in base form and it would waist you in no time flat. From what you described as it would wait you and kill us both. So in this case we both lost. Now stop being rude and a snot. You yourself are not as perfect as you but on.

[Noctis Arashi]

You keep being harsh and rude you lil punk i wont gm and show you what my release looks like. And yes it would. Ulquiria did it in his 2nd release. Your in base form and it would waist you in no time flat. From what you described as it would wait you and kill us both. So in this case we both lost. Now stop being rude and a snot. You yourself are not as perfect as you but on.
I'm not perfect. You lost. Don't argue.

It would not. I would be physically exhausted. But no.

[Shino Hatake]

YES YOU WOULD. Looking at the real effects of it now the odds of you living after firing one in your base form is 0 : 100000. We both lost.

[Noctis Arashi]

Where did you find those odds?

No. I wouldn't.


*gets Hally AGAIN*

[Shino Hatake]

Yea you would. A cero of that size is able to be fired in a release form not a base form. The amount of sp is so high it takes all of yours. You would be dead as would i. So in that case you would die. Now if you where released at least into just your first, then i can see a cero of that power being fired. But your not.

[Hally]

Um what? But how can he make one that bog to over take oucruas in a unreleased form? Is it not that big it would drain him?


I have one destructive widespread move in base form that exausts my sp. He would us all his sp with that move then have to release.

[Shino Hatake]

See my point. If he did not release then it would drain him. So we both lost.

[Hally]

Does running out of sp kill someone? Since when. He would lie on the ground exausted and if you countered he could release to save himself. You died he was well unable to move from lack of sp............

[Noctis Arashi]

Exactly. You lost.