Cosesu
04-28-2010, 11:59 AM
Before i start i would like to say i am not a writer. But if any person would like to comment on my sentence structure i would gladly listen. Also each chapter might not be long, and also i will probably not have a chapter everday. I will try though. Well anyway here is the
Prologue
It was cold in the hospital room. Chris NAvillus and his wife Susan were thrilled when they heard the news from the doctor that they were to have twins. Now though, Susan was not so happy.
CHris was flinching with pain from the deathly grip of his wife's hand. The first baby, a boy, was born just 20 seconds ago, and now ther were working on the other.WHen Susan heard the doctor tell her one more push; she pushed as hard as she could looking forward to the relief that would soon come. When everything was said and done Susan now held her two kids, Jason and Ellen Navillus, in her arms.
"I fell a stong Soul Force," said a hooded figure.
"Yes, i feel it too," said a second. "Wait," said the second, "I feel two"
"Are you sure," asked the first.
"Yes, and they have the same level of Soul Force."
"Could it be twins," asked the first.
"Maybe."
"When they turn one they could produce strong Protector Spirits," said the first. "Don't you think Cael?"
The second figure looked up reveiling a strong, rough face covered in many scars. His dark black eyes seeming as if he had no soul. "We shall see Aopmack, we shall see."
Prologue
It was cold in the hospital room. Chris NAvillus and his wife Susan were thrilled when they heard the news from the doctor that they were to have twins. Now though, Susan was not so happy.
CHris was flinching with pain from the deathly grip of his wife's hand. The first baby, a boy, was born just 20 seconds ago, and now ther were working on the other.WHen Susan heard the doctor tell her one more push; she pushed as hard as she could looking forward to the relief that would soon come. When everything was said and done Susan now held her two kids, Jason and Ellen Navillus, in her arms.
"I fell a stong Soul Force," said a hooded figure.
"Yes, i feel it too," said a second. "Wait," said the second, "I feel two"
"Are you sure," asked the first.
"Yes, and they have the same level of Soul Force."
"Could it be twins," asked the first.
"Maybe."
"When they turn one they could produce strong Protector Spirits," said the first. "Don't you think Cael?"
The second figure looked up reveiling a strong, rough face covered in many scars. His dark black eyes seeming as if he had no soul. "We shall see Aopmack, we shall see."