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i_love_kakashi
02-09-2010, 03:01 PM
From the Gods


Prologue: Her name is Yuzuki, and she is 18 years old. After years of training she has finally got out of school for the angels, and she was sent to earth for her first mission as a guardian. Sounds simple doesn't it? Well it was till she gets to her first client. His name is Hayato Taiki, he is twenty years old and is in a mess of trouble. He could care less about himself, always in fights, and is willing to do anything to get what he wants no matter who it hurts. Can she change him or even keep him alive? Little does she know about his dark past and what he has gone threw. Though he doesn't remember his past life, all he knows is he can be pure evil.

Chapter One.

Chapter one: Graduation


She grabbed her diploma and rushed to her mother...

"I am finally free, no more school! I can now start my life, and live!" Yuzuki said to her self while dancing.

"Yuzuki, stop dancing and lets get home so you can pack your bags." Her mother said.

"But mom! I don't wanna leave just yet! I am now an adult and I can do what I want when ever! I don't wanna go to the council and listen to them talk about how responsible I have to be, and who they are going to assign me to." She said as she pulled a fuzz off of her wing.

"Listen to me. The sooner you get your first human, and help them out till they don't need you anymore, or die you can come back. I have had over ten humans, and I have been with them since the day they were born to till the day they died. It's a lot of work but once you get one out of the way you get a break. So go!" Yelled her mother

~Yuzuki's mother is one of the top guardian angels, she has never let any of her humans get taken by the Yamiku. The Yamiku is the devils demons that try to take the humans with them to hell. There they force them to work for thousands of years, and will be let go but as an evil spirit in the next life. In their next life they cause trouble and kill others so that the Yamiku can take them.~

They walk to home to pack....

NOW ON EARTH~

"Your going to die... I gotta get away now, but I don't want to lose this fight." Hayato said to himself in his head while laying on the ground.

"Hahaha, you done yet boy!? One more hit and you should be out of our lives and not bothering us anymore!" Yelled Akomo, a leader of a small village.

"No, you think I am going to lose to you old man!? I can't! Because I want your village" Hayato said as he staggered to his feet with his sword still down.

"You can bearly stand! How do you think you can win!? Anyways what are you going to do with a village? Your only twenty years old! Also, if you were to beat me my villagers would kill you as soon as you step foot into my land." Akomo said while being entertained by his opponents determination to win.

"I don't know just yet, but when I do win, I will kill all those who don't follow me!" Hayato then charged to Akomo.

As he came to Akomo, Akomo slashed Hayato in the back of his right leg, and Hayato fell to the ground.

"See you haven't even hit me yet! How do you expect to win? I will just cut your other leg and let you bleed out here and die slowly. It's what you deserve for coming to my village causing trouble." Whispered Akomo in Hayato's ear.

"I guess I can't win, and I guess this is the end of me. Oh well it's not like this matters. No one cares for me." Hayato said in his head.

"Good luck kid, in your next life. If your lucky enough to get another one." Akomo stood up and cut Hatato's other leg and walked off back to his village.

"Looks like this is the end for me." Hayato said just before he blacked out.


Chapter Two.


Chapter Two: Why did I get him!?


"Oh goodness here I go..." Yuzuki said as she looked at the large coucil building. She walked in and went to a coucil member at a desk and said "I just graduated and I am here to get my human to protect."

"Ah, I see you one of the new graduates. Well I guess it's time for you to go and do your job. Um... Let me see who I can find for your first time around. I won't give you anyone really young though because that takes someone really experienced." The member said carlessly.

"Oh okay! I don't care who ever I get is fine!" She smiled faintly, but really she did care who she got because she didn't want anyone who was a trouble maker.

"I will be back in a couple minutes, go talk to your mother because once I had you the paper work and tell you what's going on you will be leaving." Said the member sounding bored.

"Okay I will!" She walked over to her mother to say good bye. "Mother looks like this will be the last time you see me in a long time. Maybe we will meet up on earth with our human or something like that."

"Yes, right after you leave I will be getting assigned also so just maybe we will see each other. Well it looks like the coucil memeber is back with the paper I guess it's time for you to leave. I love you and return home safely, see you soon!" She said as she hugged Yuzuki.

"I love you mother and yes see you soon! I will try to be safe!" Yuzuki said as she turned around going back to the coucil member. "Well who is my pereson? Is it a boy a girl? How old? OHHHH I wanna know!" She said impataintly.

"Relax relax! Your humans name is Hayato Taiki. He is twenty years old. He has got some problems also, and right now it looks like he is in trouble. I guess you have your hands full hahaha! He was once in hell so he is partly evil, so be careful he can be pretty darn mean sometimes hahaha! Good luck on this one." The coucil member said laughing. "No wonder why no one else will take this boy he is messed up, oh well lets let a new gardian have the troublesome ones! Hahaha!" The member thought to him self.

Yuzuki looks down at the papers..."Oh my... This guy is terrible, and I can see he is a terrible fighter... Gosh what have I gotten myself into? Why did I have to get him!?" Now she is starting to disappear and travel to earth...


Chapter Three.

Chapter three: Meeting


"Oh great, he is almost dead... I can't believe I got him. Ugh... What should I do? I guess I should try to heal him before he does die." Yuzuki had just arrived to earth and she found Hayato almost dead from his last fight.

"Where am I? What's going on?" Hayato said in his mind after blacking out. "Why do I feel as if I am gettting healed?" He said confused. Hayato then opened his eyes and looked to his legs, and there he saw Yuzuki healiing him. "What are you doing!? Get away!" He yelled at her.

"What do you mean what am I doing!? I should be asking why are you trying to get your self killed!" She yelled back to him while healing his left leg. "You should be thankful that I even came as soon as I did or you would have died!"

"Well I guess I could say thank you, but what are you? You have wings... Are you some sort of angel? Am I dead!?" He asked while looking to the trees that outlined the village he tried to take.

"I am your guardian angel. My name is Yuzuki and no you are not dead." She rolled her eyes as she finished healing him. "Now tell me what you did to get into this situation."

"I... I... I wanted to take that village over there as my own." He said and looked down as if he was embarrassed. "The old guy who owns the village did this to me, well umm... He got me when I wasn't paying attention."

"Okay, sure you didn't do anything if you did you wouldn't be in this shape. Oh well now what do you plan on doing?" She said and looked around. "Don't tell me you plan on going back to the village..."

"Well umm..... I kinda was now that I am not dead... So anyways what do you do for me or are you even mine?" Hayato was confused.

"I am your guardian angel, and I am with you for the rest of your life or until you say you don't want me anymore and feel as if you can live without protection. I highly doubt that." She rolled her eyes again at him. "Oh and no one else can see me only you. I will also be able to tell you if others have angels."

"Wait, you mean others have them too? Well can you fight? What can you do?" He asked curiously.

"I can fight, heal, and am stuck with you for a long long time." Yuzuki now was helping Hayato to his feet. "Now come on lets not go back to the village and get going to where ever else you need to go."

"Hold on, hold on! Who do you fight?" Hayato stumbled to his feet and put his sword back into it's holder.

"I fight the Yamiku. They are evil spirits from hell, so basically the devils henchmen. They will try to take you away from me and take you to hell so you can work for thousands of years." Yuzuki followed Hayato down the path. "Don't worry they don't come very often, only when someone is hurt really bad because they know you are weak then."

"Then shouldn't one be here now? I was just almost dead..." Hayato said nervously, and then he froze in this tracks. "Someone is here..."

"Hahahaha.... Well where do you think your going with my new worker?" A Yumiku was standing right behind them with his sword drawn.

Chapter four.

Chapter four: First fight

Both Yuzuki and Hayato stopped right in their tracks.

"Oh no... I have been with this guy for only a half and hour and now we are already having our first fight. I guess things can't get any worse." Yuzuki thought to herself and turned around to see the Yumiku. "So who are you?"

"Me? I am asking who are you. Anyways I am Kuroyami, one of the head Yumiku, and I am here to take a new worker, okay?" He said smiling.

"I-I- I am Yuzuki and I am afraid you can't have him." She said nervously.

"Hey! What about me!? NO one cares to know my name? I am Hayato Taiki! And prepare to lose to me! No one is taking me to hell!" Hayato said in a fighting stance and his sword drawn. "Can I even fight him?" He asked Yuzuki the next second.

"Yeah you can fight him, with me here you can see him." She rolled her eyes "Great I wonder how this is going to turn out." Yuzuki thought to her self.

"Hahahaha! You guys think you can win? You little Miss. Guardian have no chance! And you Human I watched your last fight you can't win!" Kuroyami laughed and drew his sword ready to fight.

"I believe you are wrong!" Yuzuki yelled and pulled out her bow and arrows. "Are you ready Hayato? Because the fight is going to begin!"

"You know it!" Hayato said smiling and he charged at Kuroyami "I'm not going to lose to you!"

Chapter five.

Chapter five: Let it begin!

"I am worried about this fight. This man is huge! Wait I shouldn't even describe him as a man... He has yellow eye that go right threw you, but then a normal hair color. His skin though is gray or like he is dead. Then he is just so tall. His muscles are massive, but yet all his features look human." She thought to her self.

"Here I come!" Hayato yelled swinging his sword at Kuroyami.

Kuroyami just laughed and blocked Hayato's attack easily knocking him to the ground. Hayato being kinda tall and muscular isn't very good at fighting more like he is clumsy and can't control his body yet, like he his body out grew his mind.

"Hayato! Be careful!" Yuzuki screamed and then fired two arrows at Kuroyami.

"Do you guys honestly think you can win? Please I know this is your first human, and this is your first day. Yuzuki I know your mother I have fought her before, she is an amazing fighter, but I see nothing of her in you." He said while blocking her two arrows.

"Don't insult her like that!" Hayato said while running back at Kuroyami.

Again he was knocked down by Kuroyami. "You are possibly the worst fighter I have ever saw. You can't even attack correctly. Looks like you better train more. Anyways who taught you to fight?" Kuroyami said laughing.

"My father died when I was ten years old, and my mom left when us when I was five. So I have been alone for ten years." Hayato said looking down. "No one has taught me anything. I tried to teach my self, and all I have got was in trouble."

"Enough, I don't want to hear you life story anymore! You seem really pathetic, I think I will let you live and not take you, I will come back though when you are strong enough because I want you, but I want to kill you Yuzuki... Your mother needs to pay." Kuroyami said sounding revengeful.

"Oh thank god!" Hayato said sounding happy. "I feel bad for you though Yuzuki!"

"Thanks Hayato, this is what I get for helping you earlier? OH well anyways! Kuroyumi, what did my mother ever do to you!?" Yuzuki sounded angry.

"She protected all of her humans I tried to take from her, and she did this to me" Kuroyami said pulling up his left arms sleeve showing you he has a metal looking arm. "She cut my arm off! No one gets away with that! So that is why I am going to kill you, so she feels the pain I felt losing my arm."

"But.... Isn't that a little extream? You have a substitute for an arm, and it works just fine." Yuzuki said nervouly.

"Hmm... Maybe it is... But I still don't like your mother.... So I am still going to kill you." He yelled to her. "I want her to feel pain!" He then charged to Yuzuki.

Yuzuki then hunched up right before being hit and right then something or someone stopped Kuroyami's blade from hitting her. Yuzuki opened her eyes and right in front of her was a man holding back Kuroyami's blade with his own.

"Who are you, and how can you see me!?" Yuzuki yelled in terror.

"Don't worry who I am just go, get out of here and take your human! I will fight him off, and maybe I will find you again." The unknown man said.

"Okay, I will go... Hayato come on! Now is our chance!" Yuzuki yelled.

"Right behind ya!" Hayato chased after.




Well this is the first chapter, tell me if I should make more! ^_^
I will post the chapters up here also so you don't have to
go and look for them.



Characters Bio's

Main Characters

Yuzuki
Name: Yuzuki
Birth date: March 17
Age: 18
Height: 5'6
Weight: 110lbs.
Eye color: Blue
Hair color: Orange
Skin color: White
Description: Her hair is long and is pulled back into a pony tail with a ribbon. Her shirt is really tight and is yellow and low cut. She wears short shorts that are blue. She has her bow and arrows in a carrier over her back.

Hayato
Name: Hayato Taiki
Birth date: July 29
Age: 20
Height: 6'2
Weight: 190lbs.
Eye color: Green
Hair color: Blonde
Skin color: Tan/Kinda dark skin
Description: Long dark pants and a red shirts wears his sword across his back.


Kuroyami
Name: Kuroyami
Birth date: November 14
Age: 45
Height: 6'7
Weight: 220lbs.
Eye color: Yellow
Hair color: Brown
Skin color: Grey
Description: Full black robe and sword to the right.

takuya
02-09-2010, 03:30 PM
Very good, ILK. Yuzuki seems sort of impatient. And Hayato seems bloodlusted. Either way, I look forward to reading more of your story.

i_love_kakashi
02-09-2010, 06:57 PM
Chapter Two: Why did I get him!?

"Oh goodness here I go..." Yuzuki said as she looked at the large coucil building. She walked in and went to a coucil member at a desk and said "I just graduated and I am here to get my human to protect."

"Ah, I see you one of the new graduates. Well I guess it's time for you to go and do your job. Um... Let me see who I can find for your first time around. I won't give you anyone really young though because that takes someone really experienced." The member said carlessly.

"Oh okay! I don't care who ever I get is fine!" She smiled faintly, but really she did care who she got because she didn't want anyone who was a trouble maker.

"I will be back in a couple minutes, go talk to your mother because once I had you the paper work and tell you what's going on you will be leaving." Said the member sounding bored.

"Okay I will!" She walked over to her mother to say good bye. "Mother looks like this will be the last time you see me in a long time. Maybe we will meet up on earth with our human or something like that."

"Yes, right after you leave I will be getting assigned also so just maybe we will see each other. Well it looks like the coucil memeber is back with the paper I guess it's time for you to leave. I love you and return home safely, see you soon!" She said as she hugged Yuzuki.

"I love you mother and yes see you soon! I will try to be safe!" Yuzuki said as she turned around going back to the coucil member. "Well who is my pereson? Is it a boy a girl? How old? OHHHH I wanna know!" She said impataintly.

"Relax relax! Your humans name is Hayato Taiki. He is twenty years old. He has got some problems also, and right now it looks like he is in trouble. I guess you have your hands full hahaha! He was once in hell so he is partly evil, so be careful he can be pretty darn mean sometimes hahaha! Good luck on this one." The coucil member said laughing. "No wonder why no one else will take this boy he is messed up, oh well lets let a new gardian have the troublesome ones! Hahaha!" The member thought to him self.

Yuzuki looks down at the papers..."Oh my... This guy is terrible, and I can see he is a terrible fighter... Gosh what have I gotten myself into? Why did I have to get him!?" Now she is starting to disappear and travel to earth...

takuya
02-09-2010, 07:39 PM
Great chapter.

~*♥ThePinkChidori♥*~
02-10-2010, 08:48 AM
lolz! xDDDD Great story!

toad
02-10-2010, 08:54 AM
i usually dont read storys posted but this was really well dude

i_love_kakashi
02-10-2010, 09:47 AM
Chapter three: Meeting

"Oh great, he is almost dead... I can't believe I got him. Ugh... What should I do? I guess I should try to heal him before he does die." Yuzuki had just arrived to earth and she found Hayato almost dead from his last fight.

"Where am I? What's going on?" Hayato said in his mind after blacking out. "Why do I feel as if I am gettting healed?" He said confused. Hayato then opened his eyes and looked to his legs, and there he saw Yuzuki healiing him. "What are you doing!? Get away!" He yelled at her.

"What do you mean what am I doing!? I should be asking why are you trying to get your self killed!" She yelled back to him while healing his left leg. "You should be thankful that I even came as soon as I did or you would have died!"

"Well I guess I could say thank you, but what are you? You have wings... Are you some sort of angel? Am I dead!?" He asked while looking to the trees that outlined the village he tried to take.

"I am your guardian angel. My name is Yuzuki and no you are not dead." She rolled her eyes as she finished healing him. "Now tell me what you did to get into this situation."

"I... I... I wanted to take that village over there as my own." He said and looked down as if he was embarrassed. "The old guy who owns the village did this to me, well umm... He got me when I wasn't paying attention."

"Okay, sure you didn't do anything if you did you wouldn't be in this shape. Oh well now what do you plan on doing?" She said and looked around. "Don't tell me you plan on going back to the village..."

"Well umm..... I kinda was now that I am not dead... So anyways what do you do for me or are you even mine?" Hayato was confused.

"I am your guardian angel, and I am with you for the rest of your life or until you say you don't want me anymore and feel as if you can live without protection. I highly doubt that." She rolled her eyes again at him. "Oh and no one else can see me only you. I will also be able to tell you if others have angels."

"Wait, you mean others have them too? Well can you fight? What can you do?" He asked curiously.

"I can fight, heal, and am stuck with you for a long long time." Yuzuki now was helping Hayato to his feet. "Now come on lets not go back to the village and get going to where ever else you need to go."

"Hold on, hold on! Who do you fight?" Hayato stumbled to his feet and put his sword back into it's holder.

"I fight the Yamiku. They are evil spirits from hell, so basically the devils henchmen. They will try to take you away from me and take you to hell so you can work for thousands of years." Yuzuki followed Hayato down the path. "Don't worry they don't come very often, only when someone is hurt really bad because they know you are weak then."

"Then shouldn't one be here now? I was just almost dead..." Hayato said nervously, and then he froze in this tracks. "Someone is here..."

"Hahahaha.... Well where do you think your going with my new worker?" A Yumiku was standing right behind them with his sword drawn.

i_love_kakashi
02-10-2010, 12:30 PM
Chapter four: First fight

Both Yuzuki and Hayato stopped right in their tracks.

"Oh no... I have been with this guy for only a half and hour and now we are already having our first fight. I guess things can't get any worse." Yuzuki thought to herself and turned around to see the Yumiku. "So who are you?"

"Me? I am asking who are you. Anyways I am Kuroyami, one of the head Yumiku, and I am here to take a new worker, okay?" He said smiling.

"I-I- I am Yuzuki and I am afraid you can't have him." She said nervously.

"Hey! What about me!? NO one cares to know my name? I am Hayato Taiki! And prepare to lose to me! No one is taking me to hell!" Hayato said in a fighting stance and his sword drawn. "Can I even fight him?" He asked Yuzuki the next second.

"Yeah you can fight him, with me here you can see him." She rolled her eyes "Great I wonder how this is going to turn out." Yuzuki thought to her self.

"Hahahaha! You guys think you can win? You little Miss. Guardian have no chance! And you Human I watched your last fight you can't win!" Kuroyami laughed and drew his sword ready to fight.

"I believe you are wrong!" Yuzuki yelled and pulled out her bow and arrows. "Are you ready Hayato? Because the fight is going to begin!"

"You know it!" Hayato said smiling and he charged at Kuroyami "I'm not going to lose to you!"

Ohako
02-10-2010, 01:28 PM
Hmm wow ILK you started a story? hmm it is a really good start and is very interesting. I just have one question do "Yamiku" look like normal people?

i_love_kakashi
02-10-2010, 01:57 PM
Hmm wow ILK you started a story? hmm it is a really good start and is very interesting. I just have one question do "Yamiku" look like normal people?



I haven't decided yet lol put I think they are going to look different, I gotta change that some time lol
And thank you!!! ^_^

Ohako
02-10-2010, 01:59 PM
I haven't decided yet lol put I think they are going to look different, I gotta change that some time lol
And thank you!!! ^_^

O lol ok and yep it is a really good start. i can't wait for Yuzuki to fight

i_love_kakashi
02-10-2010, 02:01 PM
O lol ok and yep it is a really good start. i can't wait for Yuzuki to fight


Lol its my first story I gotta work a lot harder on it
and thank you again lol

Ohako
02-10-2010, 02:05 PM
Lol its my first story I gotta work a lot harder on it
and thank you again lol

LOL i see you have potential to write a good story i had a rough start, but yours started out good the whole thing whith andgels is cool i was just confused on how she healed him though. Out of my entire Senior class i was voted to be future author that will never happen:lol:

i_love_kakashi
02-10-2010, 02:08 PM
LOL i see you have potential to write a good story i had a rough start, but yours started out good the whole thing whith andgels is cool i was just confused on how she healed him though. Out of my entire Senior class i was voted to be future author that will never happen:lol:


I still gotta go back and edit things I am just trying to get it out there first and edit some lol!

That is awesome! I wish I got that! I bet you can write a book! If you did I would read it.

(lol last year my 8th grade year I got votes most likely to succeed~ I think that is the right word lol XD)

Ohako
02-10-2010, 02:11 PM
I still gotta go back and edit things I am just trying to get it out there first and edit some lol!

That is awesome! I wish I got that! I bet you can write a book! If you did I would read it.

(lol last year my 8th grade year I got votes most likely to succeed~ I think that is the right word lol XD)

lol well i am writing that story just too busy to write the next chapter and LOL yeah succeed sounds right

i_love_kakashi
02-10-2010, 02:12 PM
lol well i am writing that story just too busy to write the next chapter and LOL yeah succeed sounds right


Write! lol Write like there is no tomorrow! oH and I got all that snow you promised me! ^_^ Thank you! *hugs*

Ohako
02-10-2010, 02:15 PM
Write! lol Write like there is no tomorrow! oH and I got all that snow you promised me! ^_^ Thank you! *hugs*

lol i would but am currently sick my head is too stuffy to think lol i am using what brain power i have left to write my essay for english which was on Naruto lol and OOO yes i heard i saw your snowday thread too bad i did not have one *hugs back*

i_love_kakashi
02-10-2010, 02:22 PM
lol i would but am currently sick my head is too stuffy to think lol i am using what brain power i have left to write my essay for english which was on Naruto lol and OOO yes i heard i saw your snowday thread too bad i did not have one *hugs back*


Lol writers block?
I have never wrote anything about Naruto for school O.O
lol yes snowday! I have had two of them in a row! yay!
That sucks you didn't even get one

Ohako
02-10-2010, 02:25 PM
Lol writers block?
I have never wrote anything about Naruto for school O.O
lol yes snowday! I have had two of them in a row! yay!
That sucks you didn't even get one

Hmm well for my story a little bit but i already planned out most of the plot
and my teacher challenged me saying it was almost impossible but i got it done:cool: And o wow i never had two snowdays in a row and i am in college well community some classes were canceled but not mine and hmm very sorry for spamming your story thread

i_love_kakashi
02-10-2010, 02:28 PM
Hmm well for my story a little bit but i already planned out most of the plot
and my teacher challenged me saying it was almost impossible but i got it done:cool: And o wow i never had two snowdays in a row and i am in college well community some classes were canceled but not mine and hmm very sorry for spamming your story thread


Whats your story called?
Lol did you and your teacher have a bet?
That sucks! I would be p'oed if I were you lol
Oh and it's okay i don't mind not very many people are even reading it lol

Ohako
02-10-2010, 02:31 PM
Whats your story called?
Lol did you and your teacher have a bet?
That sucks! I would be p'oed if I were you lol
Oh and it's okay i don't mind not very many people are even reading it lol

You posted in it before lol it is called Ohako's story remember?
and kind of he just siad it will be challenge to write on a manga for a analysis project
i was little since i am a little sick but it was all good
and lol i bete you have a bunch of ppl reading it is a smart idea to put chapters in the 1st post lol i should do that

i_love_kakashi
02-10-2010, 02:34 PM
You posted in it before lol it is called Ohako's story remember?
and kind of he just siad it will be challenge to write on a manga for a analysis project
i was little since i am a little sick but it was all good
and lol i bete you have a bunch of ppl reading it is a smart idea to put chapters in the 1st post lol i should do that


I thought you were writing another story my bad and I really do like you one that is posted on here! What is a analiysis project?
I'm sorry your sick!
Lol how many chapters do you ahve?

Ohako
02-10-2010, 02:36 PM
I thought you were writing another story my bad and I really do like you one that is posted on here! What is a analiysis project?
I'm sorry your sick!
Lol how many chapters do you ahve?

o lol no that is the only i started and thanks
anaylsis is where you are suppose to analyze a picture, song, painting, poem, short story etc. I wrote mine on the Haku Zabuza death i can pm you the rough draft if you want.
thanks i hope i get better before work tomorrow
hmm and i think 3 chapters are out

i_love_kakashi
02-10-2010, 02:39 PM
o lol no that is the only i started and thanks
anaylsis is where you are suppose to analyze a picture, song, painting, poem, short story etc. I wrote mine on the Haku Zabuza death i can pm you the rough draft if you want.
thanks i hope i get better before work tomorrow
hmm and i think 3 chapters are out


Your welcome! ^_^
Yes pleasee!! I would like to see
I hope you get better also!
I haven't read any for a while

Ohako
02-10-2010, 02:43 PM
Your welcome! ^_^
Yes pleasee!! I would like to see
I hope you get better also!
I haven't read any for a while

ok
thanks
and yeah i haven't written in awhile lol

i_love_kakashi
02-10-2010, 02:44 PM
ok
thanks
and yeah i haven't written in awhile lol


Lol It is a lot of work thinking of what to write

Ohako
02-10-2010, 02:46 PM
Lol It is a lot of work thinking of what to write

yeah i know and i cannot at the moment lol

i_love_kakashi
02-10-2010, 02:47 PM
yeah i know and i cannot at the moment lol


I hate when you get stuck on something and you can't find anything to fit! D8<

i_love_kakashi
02-10-2010, 06:24 PM
Chapter five: Let it begin!

"I am worried about this fight. This man is huge! Wait I shouldn't even describe him as a man... He has yellow eye that go right threw you, but then a normal hair color. His skin though is gray or like he is dead. Then he is just so tall. His muscles are massive, but yet all his features look human." She thought to her self.

"Here I come!" Hayato yelled swinging his sword at Kuroyami.

Kuroyami just laughed and blocked Hayato's attack easily knocking him to the ground. Hayato being kinda tall and muscular isn't very good at fighting more like he is clumsy and can't control his body yet, like he his body out grew his mind.

"Hayato! Be careful!" Yuzuki screamed and then fired two arrows at Kuroyami.

"Do you guys honestly think you can win? Please I know this is your first human, and this is your first day. Yuzuki I know your mother I have fought her before, she is an amazing fighter, but I see nothing of her in you." He said while blocking her two arrows.

"Don't insult her like that!" Hayato said while running back at Kuroyami.

Again he was knocked down by Kuroyami. "You are possibly the worst fighter I have ever saw. You can't even attack correctly. Looks like you better train more. Anyways who taught you to fight?" Kuroyami said laughing.

"My father died when I was ten years old, and my mom left when us when I was five. So I have been alone for ten years." Hayato said looking down. "No one has taught me anything. I tried to teach my self, and all I have got was in trouble."

"Enough, I don't want to hear you life story anymore! You seem really pathetic, I think I will let you live and not take you, I will come back though when you are strong enough because I want you, but I want to kill you Yuzuki... Your mother needs to pay." Kuroyami said sounding revengeful.

"Oh thank god!" Hayato said sounding happy. "I feel bad for you though Yuzuki!"

"Thanks Hayato, this is what I get for helping you earlier? OH well anyways! Kuroyumi, what did my mother ever do to you!?" Yuzuki sounded angry.

"She protected all of her humans I tried to take from her, and she did this to me" Kuroyami said pulling up his left arms sleeve showing you he has a metal looking arm. "She cut my arm off! No one gets away with that! So that is why I am going to kill you, so she feels the pain I felt losing my arm."

"But.... Isn't that a little extream? You have a substitute for an arm, and it works just fine." Yuzuki said nervouly.

"Hmm... Maybe it is... But I still don't like your mother.... So I am still going to kill you." He yelled to her. "I want her to feel pain!" He then charged to Yuzuki.

Yuzuki then hunched up right before being hit and right then something or someone stopped Kuroyami's blade from hitting her. Yuzuki opened her eyes and right in front of her was a man holding back Kuroyami's blade with his own.

"Who are you, and how can you see me!?" Yuzuki yelled in terror.

"Don't worry who I am just go, get out of here and take your human! I will fight him off, and maybe I will find you again." The unknown man said.

"Okay, I will go... Hayato come on! Now is our chance!" Yuzuki yelled.

"Right behind ya!" Hayato chased after.