The Destiny of an Outcast

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Okay, so my last thread didn't work because I couldn't edit it for some reason... So uhh... Here it is, back with a title....


WARNING:PAST THIS POINT I AM NOT RESPONSIBLE FOR BLINDNESS.



So... Uhh... I'm pretty much a fail writing. Mainly writing to get criticism to get better..

Since this'll be a boring story (I bet) I'll add kind of... a competition...
But I'll explain that part later.

I'll also be cutting the story up into weird parts. I'll go into fractions of chapters... For example, I'll go into a chapter 1.5 sometimes. My reason is that to keep it organized I'll start ever whole number paragraph with the main character being the protagonist of the series.

Index-
Introduction Arc
Chapter 1:...............Post Two.......My new Role.
Chapter 1.5:............Post Three...A Meeting......

To be continued when I type the rest out.

Biographys
None as of now.




Summary
Not here as of now.


Competitions!
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The Sharingan.
This Contest is for those who think they can decode anything, no matter how messy or confusing it may be. Well you've never met a challenge as hard as mine...
I like to handwrite things before I type them, incase my fail computer gives out. Problem is I have horrible handwriting. So, to get the title of Sharingan, and have a spot in the hall of fame, you must be able to decode a word. In every chapter there will be a word in the margin saying "Read this" if you can successfully read that word, you get the title. There will only be one person to be allowed to decode the word per whole chapter.
(You'll have to wait for the original page to be scanned on and you have to click on the link...)

Hall of Fame
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The Magnekyo Sharingan

This one is for those who think they have an eye for the abnormal. Every chapter there will be something weird in the margin areas. If you can find those weird things I'll give you the title of Magnekyo Sharingan!
(You'll have to wait for the original page to be scanned on and you have to click on the link...)

Magnekyo Sharingan Users.
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The Rinnegan

This one if for those who think they can predict the future. This is by far the hardest because there are limitless possibilities. If you give me something you think will happen in the near future of the story or something you're put together that I think is rewarding enough to even be considered to be a Rinnegan user I'll PM you. For this particular contest you HAVE TO PM ME THE ANSWERS. For the others you can PM or post. Who ever gets considered is put into the judging circle and me (along with anyone else who would want to be judges) judges who made the better prediction wins the Rinnegan. This is a weekly prize! All of the judging ends by Wednesday.

Rinnegan Users.
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So Uh... Try not to go blind or crazy.

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Chapter One: A New Role!



We were all sitting there, well, anyone who knew what the word “sit” meant. In other words anyone over the age of ten in my clan was sitter there. I could only name a few even though I’ve lived in this clan my whole life. I heard my father, the leader of the village speak. His voice echoed around the small, dimly lit room.

“We don’t Know where we’re going, we don’t know where we are, so basically we’re lost,” he said “But one thing’s for sure, we have food, water, and each other. What really matters besides that right?” My dad always seemed to be able to get everyone in a good mood, no matter how depressing the scene really was.

“The only news we really have that is positive is we have a new Genin now! Everyone, his name is Saharu!”

He motioned for me to stand up, I did, hardly proud of my so called “accomplishment”. I hardly got praise from anyone but my mother, father and brother. I was always treated like an outcast and no matter how hard anyone tried to hide it, they never successfully did. Parents would drag their kids away whenever I would try to talk to them. I walked around the table in my black outfit, fashioned to fit around me with a large red belt that fit around my waist. The tattoo on my ankle was almost completely hidden.

As I got to the side of the table that my father sat at I picked up my ring. I shoved it onto my middle finger, and wordlessly walked back to my seat.

As I sat back down my father gave me a half-hearted nod. It even seemed like my parents tried to avoid me. I don’t know why, I’ve never injured my clan mates, I’ve never done anything wrong. They just didn’t like me.

“That’s all the news for this weeks’ meeting, be sure to come to the next one, goodbye.” My father said. And with those words, the only person to come congratulate me was my new teacher. Since I was so far advanced, I had to graduate only one year after I joined the academy. Since there was space on his team, he was the obvious choice for a teacher. I was never informed of his name or anything, I was just told to call him teacher. He told me I’d meet him in front of my house. He told me I’d better be ready by five A.M. Or my team would be ready to train without me.

I was the last one to walk through the door to my apartment. Everyone else had already got washed up and ate. I wasn’t really hungry, or smelly. I decided to just have a cup of water and go to sleep.

I took a cup out of the Pantry in the kitchen and walked over to the sink. I looked up at the moon and it was nearly full. I began to get scared, I didn’t know what to do! Then I calmed down, “Father probably has this under control.” I told myself. I turned the handle and filled up my glass and walked up the stairs. I stepped on every step as if my life depended on not making a noise. I went to my fathers room to wish him a good night.

Opening the door I saw no one in there. Strange, it was pretty late for my dad to be out doing anything really.

I went into my brothers room, only to find the same thing. I decided that nothing was really wrong and just got ready to go to bed.

I went to get a robe to sleep in. I just looked at myself in the mirror. I must’ve looked like a freak. I had a dull red hair with a few lines of black to top the strangeness. My skin was very pale. And finally, I had this mysterious tattoo on the bone of my ankle. I sighed, the tired lines around my eyes are the only normal thing about me.

I took off my red belt and black dress type thing and put on the robe, then went to sleep. Right before I went to sleep I realized I had forgotten to drink my water.

I woke up the next day to my alarm clock, four-fifty, just enough time to get ready. I got dressed, walked down the stairs and stood in front of the door. I opened the door to find three people waiting in front of my house.

Haruno, an average sized teen with grey hair, he had a sword attached to the side of his white shorts. We always wore the same blue shirt with a green jacket over it. His eyes looked caring, kind of like the “I’ll-take-the-stab-for-you” kind of guy. The girl on the other side couldn’t have been any different. Her bright red hair and orange dress was her normal outfit. She had eyes full of rage and was more of an “I’ll-stab-you” kind of girl. Her name was Rey, short for something of which I don’t know.

The last person was my Sensei (of whom I didn’t know the name of yet). His appearance was exactly like Haruno’s, they would be twins if they had the same age.

“Come on Saharu, It’s time to train.”

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Chapter 1.5
“I hope you know how important you job is, Karosi. It is a matter of life and death that you train this boy as quick as possible!” Said a mysterious man sitting at a desk in a long black cloak covering everything from his toes to the tip of his head. There were only two holes where his eyes were.



“Yes sir! I will make sure he gets the best training possible!” I said.

“I’d hope so, because if you don’t, the punishment is your life!” The cloaked man threatened. I nervously walked out of the round, dimly lit room. Wouldn’t you? I mean first, my training with a child decides the fate of my village. Second, if he’s not trained soon, it’s my head. I turned around and started getting ready to train.