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The Demon Zabuza
10-14-2009, 01:55 PM
This is a fan-fic set in the real world, with... twists.

I'll try to write something every day, but I may miss a day. Don't blow off at me if I do, I'm sorry.

Note: There will be no jutsu or anything related to Naruto. I have an imagination.

Chapters:
Arc 1 - Hiukaiki Ryda
Prologue (http://naruto.vfatality.viz.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1423247&postcount=2)
Chapter 1 (http://naruto.vfatality.viz.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1435124&postcount=10)
Chapter 2 (http://naruto.vfatality.viz.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1447580&postcount=22)
Chapter 3 (http://naruto.vfatality.viz.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1449719&postcount=31)
Chapter 4 (http://naruto.vfatality.viz.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1453791&postcount=37)
Chapter 5 (http://naruto.vfatality.viz.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1465377&postcount=40)
Chapter 6 (http://naruto.vfatality.viz.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1473516&postcount=46)
Chapter 7 (http://naruto.vfatality.viz.com/forum/showthread.php?p=1482095#post1482079)

Characters:
Name: Tsuya Akari
Gender: Male
Age: 27
Power: Face Changer
Description: Usually fairly tall. Dark unruly hair covers his brown eyes, and his muscular frame is covered by close fitting clothes. Cares about his apperence, and can spend an hour getting ready every morning.
Personality: Claims to be lazy and workshy, but actually enjoys it.

Name: Bibou Yubutsu
Gender: Female
Age: 24
Power: Conscious Affector
Description: She wears baggy clothes that don't show off her body. He long blonde hair dangles down her back in an uncombed mess, almost reaching her waist. Her delicate face features and high cheekbones are balanced by a large nose, which she is very protective of.
Personality: She is a feisty woman, and will fight for her views.

Name: Henshin Kokki
Gender: Male
Age: 32
Power: Telepathic Manipulator
Description: Tall, with a dark hair that gives him a brooding expression. His muscles bulge from his frame, a result of many years spent working out.
Personality: Preferring to keep quiet, he gives off the impression of stupidity, when the opposite is true.

Name: Hiukaiki Ryda
Gender: Male
Age: 54
Description: Small, with a weaselly expression. Always wearing black or grey suits, he pairs them with a white shirt underneath. He walks with a slight hunchback, and speaks in short bursts.
Personality: Greedy, and a bully. Not a nice man in either life or business.

Name: Callum Donnegan
Gender: Male
Age: 42
Description: A heavy set man, and tall, around one meter ninety. His eyes are close and his black hair is shaved to the scalp. Wearing a suit, he looked like an educated thug.
Personality: A bully and all round baddy.

The Demon Zabuza
10-14-2009, 01:55 PM
Prologue


Sitting there, facing the monitors, he stared at them intently. Thousands, no, millions of numbers scrolled down the multiple screens, each flashing by in a second. Besides the flickering monitors, all was still in the room, total silence prevailing.

Suddenly, his hand snapped out, moving with lightning speed. selecting a single number from the masses infront of him, he changed it. Sitting back, he once more started watching the screen, numbers flashing, illuminating his face in strange ways. If you didn't know better, you would almost say that his tongue was darting out, tasting the numbers...

__________________________________________________

Groaning, Tsuya Akari rolled over in bed. He was in a pokey hotel room, only ten feet in diameter. The bare cupoards on the side held a weeks worth of clothes. The bed, situated in the middle of the room, was hard and uncompromising, and the blankets itched. Hardly luxury, but it would do. Despite all this, Tsuya was reluctant to get up, preferring to preserve his little bundle of warmth.

Bursting in through the connecting door, Bibou clattered into the room, shattering the world that Tsuya had built. Grinning wildly, she whispered to him 'It's time'.

Uchiha master
10-14-2009, 01:59 PM
Prologue



Sitting there, facing the monitors, he stared at them intently. Thousands, no, millions of numbers scrolled down the multiple screens, each flashing by in a second. Besides the flickering monitors, all was still in the room, total silence prevailing.

Suddenly, his hand snapped out, moving with lightning speed. selecting a single number from the masses infront of him, he changed it. Sitting back, he once more started watching the screen, numbers flashing, illuminating his face in strange ways. If you didn't know better, you would almost say that his tongue was darting out, tasting the numbers...

__________________________________________________ _

Groaning, Tsuya Akari rolled over in bed. He was in a pokey hotel room, only ten feet in diameter. The bare cupoards on the side held a weeks worth of clothes. The bed, situated in the middle of the room, was hard and uncompromising, and the blankets itched. Hardly luxury, but it would do. Despite all this, Tsuya was reluctant to get up, preferring to preserve his little bundle of warmth.

Bursting in through the connecting door, Bibou clattered into the room, shattering the world that Tsuya had built. Grinning wildly, she whispered to him 'It's time'.
:eek:interesting can't wait for the rest

Hockey Otaku
10-14-2009, 02:03 PM
*gahack* you made me choke on my sandwich. Not the story, just I was reading it and I choked xD

The Demon Zabuza
10-14-2009, 02:04 PM
*gahack* you made me choke on my sandwich. Not the story, just I was reading it and I choked xD

Naw, that's how good my writing is. xDD

Hockey Otaku
10-14-2009, 02:05 PM
Riiiiight... xD

sasu_girl
10-14-2009, 02:07 PM
Prologue


Sitting there, facing the monitors, he stared at them intently. Thousands, no, millions of numbers scrolled down the multiple screens, each flashing by in a second. Besides the flickering monitors, all was still in the room, total silence prevailing.

Suddenly, his hand snapped out, moving with lightning speed. selecting a single number from the masses infront of him, he changed it. Sitting back, he once more started watching the screen, numbers flashing, illuminating his face in strange ways. If you didn't know better, you would almost say that his tongue was darting out, tasting the numbers...

__________________________________________________ _

Groaning, Tsuya Akari rolled over in bed. He was in a pokey hotel room, only ten feet in diameter. The bare cupoards on the side held a weeks worth of clothes. The bed, situated in the middle of the room, was hard and uncompromising, and the blankets itched. Hardly luxury, but it would do. Despite all this, Tsuya was reluctant to get up, preferring to preserve his little bundle of warmth.

Bursting in through the connecting door, Bibou clattered into the room, shattering the world that Tsuya had built. Grinning wildly, she whispered to him 'It's time'.
awesome!! now i wait somwhat patiently for da rest. *fidgets*

shinmarubountyhunter
10-14-2009, 03:24 PM
nice job

Vatanui AKA Pride
10-14-2009, 03:33 PM
Interesting.

The Demon Zabuza
10-16-2009, 02:23 PM
Chapter 1

After three hours, they were finally ready. Walking through into Bibou's room, Tsuya looked around. The room was identical, although he swore it was slightly larger. This was disguised by the fact that an entire wall was covered in screens, each showing independent camaras they had planted over the past three days. He noticed the last threes days clothes strewn all over the floor. Three days stuck in this hell hole. Well, they would be out of there soon enough, and then back to base. Sighing, Tsuya turned to her and said

'Why does it have to be me that is put in danger?'
'Shut up, and get dressed'.

Turning around, muttering under his breath, he grabbed the top that was lying on the dresser. Pulling on the balacalva, he spun. They were ready.

__________________________________________________

Driving up to the bar, Tsuya lowered his glasses. This was the one time in the plan that something could go wrong. They had watched this happen countless times, and knew every step. Right now Bibou was watching from three cameras. But he still felt a cold bead of sweat roll down his face. This might just kill him. A guard wondered up to the window, clearly bored as his shift was just about to end.

'Yeah?'
'It's Namiwaka Toseyga here.'

He flashed a card in his face. It was almost perfect, but without a copy, they had no way of knowing anything. Namiwaka was an employee here, and Tsuya looked identical, but he was fired yesterday by the boss, with no explanation. This whole thing balanced on wether the guard knew this. His knees were knocking, the excitement coursing through his veins. This was why he joined the Boneshakers!

Giving the card only a cursory glance, the gaurd was about to go back to his booth to raise the gate when he stopped and frowned. Tsuya started, and then settled. It was probably nothing, just something he remembered at home, right?

'Hey, weren't you fired?'.

One day, and I already missed. T_T Well, I couldn't help it.

Vatanui AKA Pride
10-16-2009, 02:26 PM
Lol, good.
I'm wanting to know more about the Boneshakers.

The Demon Zabuza
10-16-2009, 02:27 PM
hell, you read fast!

And you'll just have to wait. I have dropped clues about them, but subtle ones.

Hockey Otaku
10-16-2009, 02:29 PM
Hey that's pretty good! and it didn't make me choke today xD

The Demon Zabuza
10-16-2009, 02:32 PM
Didn't make you choke? T_T

*must improve writing*

Hockey Otaku
10-16-2009, 02:33 PM
Lol all the good writing makes me choke. So does laughing. So does breathing. So does sitting and doing nothing, I choke on my own spit all the time xD

Uchiha master
10-16-2009, 02:35 PM
Chapter 1


After three hours, they were finally ready. Walking through into Bibou's room, Tsuya looked around. The room was identical, although he swore it was slightly larger. This was disguised by the fact that an entire wall was covered in screens, each showing independent camaras they had planted over the past three days. He noticed the last threes days clothes strewn all over the floor. Three days stuck in this hell hole. Well, they would be out of there soon enough, and then back to base. Sighing, Tsuya turned to her and said

'Why does it have to be me that is put in danger?'
'Shut up, and get dressed'.

Turning around, muttering under his breath, he grabbed the top that was lying on the dresser. Pulling on the balacalva, he spun. They were ready.

__________________________________________________

Driving up to the bar, Tsuya lowered his glasses. This was the one time in the plan that something could go wrong. They had watched this happen countless times, and knew every step. Right now Bibou was watching from three cameras. But he still felt a cold bead of sweat roll down his face. This might just kill him. A guard wondered up to the window, clearly bored as his shift was just about to end.

'Yeah?'
'It's Namiwaka Toseyga here.'

He flashed a card in his face. It was almost perfect, but without a copy, they had no way of knowing anything. Namiwaka was an employee here, and Tsuya looked identical, but he was fired yesterday by the boss, with no explanation. This whole thing balanced on wether the guard knew this. His knees were knocking, the excitement coursing through his veins. This was why he joined the Boneshakers!

Giving the card only a cursory glance, the gaurd was about to go back to his booth to raise the gate when he stopped and frowned. Tsuya started, and then settled. It was probably nothing, just something he remembered at home, right?

'Hey, weren't you fired?'.

One day, and I already missed. T_T Well, I couldn't help it.

awsome chapter

The Demon Zabuza
10-16-2009, 02:36 PM
Thanks!

I should probably write character bios.

sasu_girl
10-16-2009, 02:50 PM
*thumbs up* good job.

shinmarubountyhunter
10-16-2009, 03:26 PM
good job but i just want to know what a boneshaker is

The Demon Zabuza
10-17-2009, 08:06 AM
Added bio's.

There may be two chapters today, because I am already bored.

sasu_girl
10-17-2009, 10:52 AM
Added bio's.

There may be two chapters today, because I am already bored.
cool charactaz ^-^

The Demon Zabuza
10-17-2009, 01:34 PM
Chapter 2

'Hey, weren't you fired?'

Tsuya froze. He now had about a minute before the guard realized he was a fake and shot him. The danger was now very real and very fatal. Sweat glistened on his upper lip, and his heart was pounding. The guard was headed back towards him, his hand reaching towards the gun strapped to his waist. Tsuya could do nothing now but rely on Bibou to save him. He signaled frantically to the camera.

Pointing the gun at the window, the guard signaled for him to lower it. With no option but to obey, the window slowly ground down. He took note of his name tag; Christopher Wren.

Tsuya had fourty seconds. He had to delay the guard, even if it wasn't for very long. The guard gestured with the gun, and demanded

'Let me see that pass again.'
'B-But you just saw it'
Show it to me again. One more time.'
'Sure, just let me find it...' Pretending to be searching his pockets, Tsuya could feel the sweat pouring down him brow.
'Get a move on!'

Digging out the pass from his back pocket, he handed it once again to the guard. That delay had given him more time, but now he had thirty seconds.
Twenty seconds. The guard checked the picture.
Ten seconds. Finding nothing wrong, he turned it over, and inspected the back.

Five seconds. Eyes working down the left hand side.
Four seconds. He looked at the fake address.
Three seconds. His eyes opened in surprise.
Two seconds. He bought it closer to look again.
One second. Raising the gun, he pointed it at Tsuya.
Zero.

I will post another chapter later.

sasu_girl
10-17-2009, 01:43 PM
but sasu wantz a new chap now.

The Demon Zabuza
10-17-2009, 01:47 PM
Yeah, wait! xDD

I know. What will happen? Tune in later!

Vatanui AKA Pride
10-17-2009, 01:56 PM
How later?
An hour or two, perhaps?

BTW, you have something to reply to in my story's thread.

The Demon Zabuza
10-17-2009, 02:01 PM
How later?
An hour or two, perhaps?

BTW, you have something to reply to in my story's thread.

Probably two. I have to head upstairs, go to bed, then get on my laptop before I can type it.

But I will!

Hockey Otaku
10-17-2009, 04:04 PM
Ah! I love it! It's so suspenseful

The Demon Zabuza
10-17-2009, 04:57 PM
Chapter 3

The guard was still there, pointing his gun at Tsuya. There was nothing he could do now but surrender. Suddenly, the guard collapsed onto the bonnet of the car, his eyes whiting out. Releasing all his breath in a relieved expulsion, Tsuya relaxed. From his ear he heard a distant buzzing noise, and concentrated on it. It was Bibou, telling him the guard would be uncontious for about ten minutes, and shouting at him for not trying to tackle him. Just like her. But now they had no plan. They would have to wing it.

Smacking him round the head to keep him unconscious, Tsuya changed into the guard. The next shift must notice nothing wrong. Dragging the body out of sight, he sat in the booth and waited ten minutes. During that time, he completed breathing exercises to calm himself, and settled back, planning his next move.

The shift changed with no fuss. It was a wonder this place was called secure. Now, all he had to do was find his assassination target. Hiukaiki Ryda, the President of Palioli Enterprises, had been trying to stop what the Boneshakers stood for. Now he would pay.

Entering the complex, he looked for signposts, and found an abundance. Really, this was just too easy now. No one challenged him, assuming that he had been let through, so he dawdled down the corridors for a bit. Bibou was telling him to get a move on, but he just took out his earpiece and put it in his pocket. That would take care of the fool.

__________________________________________________

Finally, he found the office. Almost everyone had gone home hours ago, and it was just the president of the company who remained now, along with two secutaries and the night shift of guards, sitting in the camera room. Reaching out for the handle, Tsuya cautiously opened the door.

Has anyone noticed anything odd about wording?

Uchiha master
10-17-2009, 05:21 PM
thumbs up,keep up the good work

sasu_girl
10-17-2009, 05:35 PM
good job

Hockey Otaku
10-17-2009, 07:14 PM
Hockey senses...

FORESHADOWING!!!

Yori
10-17-2009, 09:43 PM
http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showthread.php?t=28312

TDZ only

The Demon Zabuza
10-18-2009, 02:39 AM
Chapter 4

Nothing happened. Not even an alarm. And there wouldn't be cameras in here, the rich liked their privacy. Snorting, he was about to go through into main area, when a coffee machine caught his eye. Might as well get a drink, right?

Wondering over, he grabbed a cup, and put it under the nozzle. Chosing a Cappuchino, Tsuya waited patiently. Hearing a noise out of the corner of his ear, he tried to locate it. At that very moment, the coffee machine dinged, and he took his drink. sipping it, he pondered on what would happen next. After he had tried to kill him, then they would wait, and Hiu-
At that moment, he heard the noise again, this time more insistent. Carefully placing his coffee down on the table in front of him, he reached into his pocket, and found a radio. Not good. A voice on the other end was saying

'Guard 43, you have ten seconds to get out of the Presidents office before we will escort arrest you. I repeat, you have ten seconds'

Frantically patting himself down for the earpiece he took out earlier, he put it back in his ear. Instantly, Bibou’s voice came to him, and bellowed at him

'You set off a tripwire when you entered the office, you fool! There is no alarm, but the security knows that you’re there, and the President is already gone. Get out of there now; you’ve done what you could'.

I have no time at all today, so here is todays chapter. Sorry if it's a bit short, but I am really busy!

sasu_girl
10-18-2009, 05:55 AM
Chapter 4

Nothing happened. Not even an alarm. And there wouldn't be cameras in here, the rich liked their privacy. Snorting, he was about to go through into main area, when a coffee machine caught his eye. Might as well get a drink, right?

Wondering over, he grabbed a cup, and put it under the nozzle. Chosing a Cappuchino, Tsuya waited patiently. Hearing a noise out of the corner of his ear, he tried to locate it. At that very moment, the coffee machine dinged, and he took his drink. sipping it, he pondered on what would happen next. After he had tried to kill him, then they would wait, and Hiu-
At that moment, he heard the noise again, this time more insistent. Carefully placing his coffee down on the table in front of him, he reached into his pocket, and found a radio. Not good. A voice on the other end was saying

'Guard 43, you have ten seconds to get out of the Presidents office before we will escort arrest you. I repeat, you have ten seconds'

Frantically patting himself down for the earpiece he took out earlier, he put it back in his ear. Instantly, Bibou’s voice came to him, and bellowed at him

'You set off a tripwire when you entered the office, you fool! There is no alarm, but the security knows that you’re there, and the President is already gone. Get out of there now; you’ve done what you could'.

I have no time at all today, so here is todays chapter. Sorry if it's a bit short, but I am really busy!
itz ok
tsuya made n oopsie in dis chap.

shinmarubountyhunter
10-18-2009, 06:11 AM
nice chapter

The Demon Zabuza
10-19-2009, 12:21 PM
Sorry about yesterday, but I was really busy. Really.

Chapter 5

Happy to oblige, Tsuya searched for a way out. The room was sealed, with no vents large enough for a human or even a mouse. He would have to take on all the guards chasing. This was going to be fun.

Three guards rushed through the doors. Tsuya dispatched them with a chop to the neck each. Nothing fancy yet. The next two entered more cautiously prepared for an attack. Tusya took them head on, kicking at the left ones leg as he spun round. Dodging the kick, he bought his leg up and sent his own foot flying at Tusya. Now off balance, he barely dodged the retaliation, and the second guards punch caught him in the jaw, knocking him to the floor.

Growling in pain, Tsuya swung one leg round, taking out the guard that had knocked him over. That would teach him! The other was pulling out his gun, and aiming it at Tsuya. Rolling to the left, Five bullets slammed into the ground where he had been just milliseconds ago. Leaping up in one bound, a punch to the diaphragm doubled him up, then a knee to the nose broke it, splattering blood everywhere. Stomping on the guard rolling on the floor, he smashed two ribs, piercing his lungs and causing him to cough up blood.

With no other guards nearby, he casually brushed a spot of blood off his shoulder, stepping over the body with blood bubbling out of its mouth. His back was on fire, but he ignored it. He reached the door, ignoring all the alarms and bells buzzing around him. Emerging into the street, he stopped. Lined up in front of him were five men in full body armor, pointing rifles at him. Sighing, he gestured towards them. The middle three collapsed causing confusion. Behind them before they knew what was going on, he took their semi-automatic rifles, and took aim. Without a word he opened fire, bullets thudding into living flesh, blood fountaining everywhere.

Walking calmly away, he turned the corner, turned the corner, and hailed a cab.

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Callum Donnegan was Hiukaiki Ryda's most trusted man. Hired by him twenty three years ago, he had become his most trusted man, taking care of not just defense, but also making deals for Palioli and even was counted as Hiukaiki's friend. He was a heavy set man, and tall, around one meter ninety. His eyes wer close and his black hair was shaved to the scalp. Wearing a suit, he looked like an educated thug. However, with a black belt in both Karate and Judo, you could not underrate this man.

Regarding the man in front of him with disdain, he looked at his profile. Henshin Kokki, 32. Trained in both kickboxing and jujitsu, with advanced gun training. He had previously worked in the army for seven years, fighting in both Iraq and Afghanistan. Since then, he had worked as a bouncer for various clubs, as well as a personal bodyguard for various dignatries. He seemed sound.

'OK, your profile looks good. You're hired as a personal bodyguard for Hiukaiki Ryda. You will swear to protect him at all costs, and to keep everything about him secret. Do you understand?'

'Yes.'

'Good. In a week, Hiukaiki Ryda will go on a business meeting to Chicago. You, along with twenty others, will protect him. After a recent attempt on his life, we are taking no chances.'

There was no no way for Tsuya or Bibou to kill him now.

Uchiha master
10-19-2009, 01:02 PM
It's getting really interesting,good work

Hockey Otaku
10-19-2009, 01:12 PM
You write really good fighting scenes

The Demon Zabuza
10-19-2009, 01:20 PM
I guess the War System is good for something. xDD

In the next arc, there will be a lot more fighting. This was just an intro arc, and only has 2 chapters left (which I have already written. I'm just making you wait.)

Hockey Otaku
10-19-2009, 01:25 PM
I guess the War System is good for something. xDD

In the next arc, there will be a lot more fighting. This was just an intro arc, and only has 2 chapters left (which I have already written. I'm just making you wait.)
Hey! Don't make us wait!
Lol I feel like writing. Last year I would have been at writing club right now

Vatanui AKA Pride
10-19-2009, 02:18 PM
Great chapter, loved the action.

The Demon Zabuza
10-20-2009, 11:26 AM
Chapter 7

It was now one week later, and Tsuya and Bibou were in Chicago, with Ryda. They were not there to find him, or kill him, but would do what they could to help.

Sitting outside, sipping tea outside in the lovely weather, they admired the view. No longer were they here on a mission, so they might as well relax, and this was the perfect way to do it. Enjoying the cooling breeze on his back, Tsuya sighed. They had done their part, now they would have to wait for Hiduga to get on with it.

__________________________________________________

At the same time, on the other side of the city, Hiukaiki Ryda was entering a business meeting. Standing on the steps outside were Callum Donnegan, Henshin Kokki and Thomas Kelly. All were armed, and prepared for a fight. Taking up position, they sealed off all entrances and exits to and from the building. They were taking no chances.

Three hours later, the meeting was finally over. Ryda emerged, ready to pose for a photo opportunity. They had just signed a major deal, which would generate billions of dollars for Palioli Enterprises. He was in an undeniably good mood. The guards watched carefully, keeping an eye out for any signs of trouble.

Then, the unthinkable happened. Ryda's shoulder exploded in a mesh of torn muscle and sticky blood. Three more bullets were fired, one entering his neck and punching through the other side, another piercing his heart. He was dead before he could know what hit him. But bystanders knew.

Callum Donnegan, Ryda's only friend, the most trusted person in his team, had killed him. Not in secret or with poison like it would have been sensible to do, but in full view of the public. Now no one could blame it on anyone else.

Strangely, as armed police swamped him, a man called Henshin Kokki could not be found. And a teacup, still half full, sat at an empty table overlooking the ocean.

Soon, we move onto bigger, more exciting things!

shinmarubountyhunter
10-20-2009, 11:37 AM
just finished it

The Demon Zabuza
10-20-2009, 11:40 AM
What did you think? I'll tell you now, Callum is not a traitor.

sasu_girl
10-20-2009, 12:34 PM
sasu iz likein dis story very much ^-^

shinmarubountyhunter
10-20-2009, 01:26 PM
What did you think? I'll tell you now, Callum is not a traitor.
pm me the answer is callum or ryda a clone or imposter

shinmarubountyhunter
10-20-2009, 01:29 PM
and the chapter was very interesting and unexpecting

shinmarubountyhunter
10-20-2009, 01:32 PM
i cant find out who did it tdz

Vatanui AKA Pride
10-20-2009, 02:55 PM
Very interesting, I didn't expect the murder.

The Demon Zabuza
10-21-2009, 09:12 AM
Chapter 7

This was the power of the Boneshakers. They were a force of elite humans, all with special unlocked powers, unique to each of them. They operated with the permission of almost every government, finding and eliminating corruption and lawbreakers with ruthless efficiency.

There are three ranks in the Boneshakers, the 'Ichimaiue' (Highest), the 'Reinen' (Middle), and the 'Mijime' (Lowest). Out of the structure, twelve Boneshakers are mijime, eight are Reinen and there are just two Ichimaiue. Both Tsuya and Bibou are Mijime, and cannot begin to challenge Reinen. Henshin Kokki is Reinen, and can beat everyone below him in a fight. There are also slaves around the place, taking care of their things. Even Mijime live in luxury. Their base is a series of tunnels laced through the Himalayan Mountains.

Tsuya Akari: Face Changer. At will, can alter height, facial features, body shape and hair to perfectly mimic another person. However, he must remain in humanoid form, and skilled observers can pick up this change. A master at close combat, his body altering abilities have given him peak human strength and speed. Mijime.

Bibou Yubutsu: A Conscious affecter. As long as she knows a persons face, she can place them in a state of unconsciousness. If given enough time to prepare, she can actually kill with a glance. However, she requires a lot of time to prepare her attacks. When the armed guards fell over outside the building, she had been preparing that for the past five minutes. Can use a metal staff with amazing skill. Mijime.

Henshin Kokki: Telepathic manipulator. Can see and alter other peoples minds. Can cause others to believe something that isn't true, see something that isn't there, or can control their actions to a certain extent. He cannot change someone's mind unless he has eye contact, although once it is established, it can be done quickly. Also cannot force someone to kill themselves, though can manipulate situations so they do. Master of the broad sword. Reinen.

The Demon Zabuza
10-21-2009, 09:18 AM
There was clues that powers would be introduced.

This is a fan-fic set in the real world, with... twists.

Namiwaka was an employee here, and Tsuya looked identical, but he was fired yesterday by the boss, with no explanation.

Suddenly, the guard collapsed onto the bonnet of the car, his eyes whiting out.

Smacking him round the head to keep him unconscious, Tsuya changed into the guard.

And he was recognised as Guard 42. And there have been empty spots on the character bios.vI'm surprised no one picked it up.

shinmarubountyhunter
10-21-2009, 11:36 AM
I like Tsuya. he reminds me of mystique from x-men

Uchiha master
10-21-2009, 12:18 PM
wow TDZ u have put alot of work into this,I think it's awsome

Vatanui AKA Pride
10-21-2009, 02:21 PM
I thought the Boneshakers were something like that, a mysterious group with people that manipulate special abilities that had power in the government.

sasu_girl
10-21-2009, 03:01 PM
awesome, keep up da good work ^_^

The Demon Zabuza
10-21-2009, 07:19 PM
I thought the Boneshakers were something like that, a mysterious group with people that manipulate special abilities that had power in the government.

Sure... xDD

Vatanui AKA Pride
10-21-2009, 08:00 PM
Yeah . . . xDD

The Demon Zabuza
10-22-2009, 11:08 AM
Sorry, but there will be no chapter today, since I have stupid amounts of french work.

P.S. If you want to get a PM when I post a chapter, please post.

The Demon Zabuza
10-23-2009, 02:25 PM
No one loves this place. T.T Either way, I will continue on regardless!

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After an exhausting three hour trip, the plane finally touched down on the private runway.

They were home.

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Lying back on his bed, Tsuya streched. To his left, a pretty female servant bustled around, placing all his new, clean clothes in the wardrobes. Another was dusting around the corners of the room, and Tusya knew that down in the kitchens his dinner was being prepared. Roasted duck, his favorite. This was exactly where he wanted to be; surrounded by luxury, with servants to wait on his every whim. Curling into a ball, he fell asleep.

When he woke up, everyone was gone, but sitting in front of him was a steaming plate of duck, surrounded by vegetables. Just one look at the succulent meat, and the buttery potatoes with just the right consistency made his mouth water. Taking just a bite, he could feel the tension leaking out of his body. This was it.

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Downstairs, Bibou was having a very different time. Raising the rifle to her shoulder, she looked down the barrel at that target. BOOM! Down the other edge of the range, the middle of the target was blown out, tearing a hole in the flimsy paper. Wiping the sweat from her brow, she looked around, and saw that Teiku Taitou had wondered up to her. Grinning at her, she said in a breathy voice

"Want a battle? I'm nicely warmed up"
"Sure, I need an easy battle"

Laughing, Teiku, wondered over to the roped area.

"Just one limit. No powers. OK?"

Crouching down, Bibou prepared for an attack. Reaching for the rapier at her waist, she drew it, and leveled the blade at Teiku. Darting forward, the thin blade whipped at her legs. With a graceful jump, she lifted up her legs, and landed just after the blade had passed her. Spinning on the ball of her foot, she drove a kick at Bibou's chest. Off balance, she fell backwards, the kick skimming her chest, taking off the top level of skin. With a drop of blood forming, she stood up, and crouched.

Ready, she sprung.

Vatanui AKA Pride
10-23-2009, 02:41 PM
Pretty good.

So Tsuya's favorite food is roasted duck, huh..

The Demon Zabuza
10-23-2009, 02:42 PM
Pretty good.

So Tsuya's favorite food is roasted duck, huh..

And mine.

Hockey Otaku
10-23-2009, 02:49 PM
That's some good description.....*suddenly becomes hungry*

Uchiha master
10-23-2009, 03:01 PM
That's some good description.....*suddenly becomes hungry*
I'm hungry too...btw that was good TDZ

The Demon Zabuza
11-04-2009, 01:37 PM
I meant to finish this arc before posting it, but I then realized how behind I am. TT_TT

Enjoy.

Launching herself through the air, Bibou slashed at her opponent. Driving towards her, with all her power thrusting her forwards, her blade was within a hairs width of Teiku, when a graceful roll to the right left Bibou clutching at empty air. Rising slowly Teiku threw a punch at Bibous ribs, and, feeling the sharp pain in her side, Bibou braced herself for the fall.

It came, like a hammer from hell, blasting all the wind out of her. Forcing herself upwards, she stood on shaky feet, still defying Teiku. As Bibou walked towards her, swaying slightly, she bought her fists up to her face, attempting to get ready for an attack. Sighing, Teiku disappeared. Bibou looked round surprised, and then felt a thud in her back. As pain exploded across her back, she attempted to look round, but all she saw was a smirk.

She reached out to the rapier lying at her side, and hurled it at Teiku her eyes widened in surprise, and she barely managed to spin to the left. As the blade shot past her, the silks floating around her body ripped.

Looking down, surprised, Teiku smiled.

"Well, you've improved. To think that you could actually touch me! I'm impressed, but now, this is over."

Teiku reached across her shoulder, and drew out a beautiful katana, its hilt engraved with gilt scrolling. Bringing it down to Bibou's throat, she lunged. Bibou closed her eyes, and stopped.

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Tsuya suddenly stopped, mid way through a mouthful. The food dripping off his loaded fork, he stared at the doorway. Sillouetted there, infront of the light, was a malformed shape. It may have been human at some point, but not now. Now, it was twisted, its head refectly round like a ping pong ball, glinting in the half light. Hunched over, with an arm that was curled in on itself at impossible angles, its leg bending backwards. It was a messenger, sent by Reichou. Opening it’s mouth, a soundless scream came out, but in Tsuya’s mind, words formed.

"I have discovered a traitor in our midst. I want you to find, and eliminate him. Tell no one. Leave now."

With that, the messenger broke into four pieces, its blood leaking out onto the flagstones. Maggots crept out of the flesh, eating the remains. Carefully placing the remainder of his food back on his plate, Tsuya stood up, and walked out, stepping over the mess of flesh, already half gone. He was going to have to find this traitor alone, and without help. He had better start, and searching rooms would be as good a bet as anything. How about starting with Teiku?

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After half a minute, Bibou cautiously opened her eyes. Looking down at her with distain was Teiku, her eyes openly mocking her. The katana away from her throat, she turned her neck, and saw they had an audience. Blushing with shame and anger, she wished that Teiku had killed her, that she had made the final blow. It would have been better than everyone seeing she had failed.

A voice from the gathered onlookers called

"Well done on beating a weak little Mijime. How would you like to see a real fight?"

Shamefully climbing out of the rink, Bibou looked at the pair approaching. It was Nureki Hanama, and Barekgu Manetea, two Reinin.

"What’s say we make this interesting?"
"Hakinma?"
"Hakinma."

Bibou watched, awestruck. To think that she would be witness to Nureki's Hakinma. She shivered at the thought. To be able to create a substance stronger than steel, but as malleable as gas would be exhilarating. And Barekgu, changing his entire body to suit his needs. These people were truly frightening, and not to be messed with. Looking around, she saw that Teiku had left. Probably headed back to her quarters, with her snotty nose held high. Someday, Bibou swore, she would destroy that woman.


Nureki placed both palms on his thighs, and bowed at the waist. Following suit, Barekgu copied. Running up to the observation deck, Bibou watched with avid interest. This was going to be good.

No one moved. Then, faster than Bibou could see, Barekgu was surrounded by a mess of steel, and the two were standing stock still again. Shocked by what had happened, Bibou replayed what had happened in her mind. Crossing the gap, metal had launched towards Barekgu, but something had changed in his skin, and he punched right through it. She was right, this was amazing.

Turning to the monitors next to her, she set the feed to 'slow motion'. It meant that she could actually follow this. Watching, she bit her lower lip.

This time, she could see it. Barekgu grew to twenty feet tall, and bought a massive foot down on top of Nureki. Without flinching, steel had fountain up from his shoulders, stopping the smash in it’s tracks. But it didn’t stop, and shot up Barekgu’s new leg, threatening to crush her.

Not waiting around, Barekgu seemed to disappear. In fact, he had shrunk to a few inches tall, but weighed 1000 kg. cutting through the barrier like a knife through hot butter, he looked as though he was about to beat Nureki for real.

But Nureki wasn’t there anymore. In an astonishing display of speed, he had burst through the steel cage surrounding him, already gone long before he was in danger. Once again Barekgu was in trouble, surrounded by metal that was zooming in on her. Changing himself to weigh 10000 kg, Barekgu shot down, narrowly escaping being crushed, and cutting through the floor below.

Collapsing the remainder of the structure over the hole he had made, Nureki cocooned himself in his strongest steel. A dent appeared in it, and even with slow motion, Bibou couldn't see what happened. Watching it back, a tiny leapt out of a hole to the left, following the natural cracks in the rock. Leaping to the cave ceiling, he stopped, and flew down, striking the new cocoon with all his force.

But it didn't even seem to phase Nureki, who just changed it so that the metal dent sealed over itself. A hand emerged, punching it’s way through solid steel, and hauling Barekgu out of the tangled mess. Using his enormous power, he sprung backwards, landing on the opposite side of the sixty foot cave. With a graceful leap, Nureki leapt to the left, and placed both hands out infront of him.

They stood, facing each other.

shinmarubountyhunter
12-10-2009, 01:36 PM
is this done

sasu_girl
12-10-2009, 01:40 PM
is this done
i think so...

sasu_girl
12-10-2009, 05:50 PM
Likely, since Zabuza hasn't updated this in a while.
didn't he leave? or was that someone else?