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Sai's brother
10-12-2009, 04:56 PM
Just gonna say say things beforee I begin. This isnt a Naruto-World Fanfic...so there wont be any jutsus. It may be a 'little' similar to Paper Mario: The thousand Year Door. Some scenes! I do relieze the main charatcers name is a name from somewhere else but, hey a lot of people do that.
-Edit, sorry the name doesnt fir, I was gonna make another story but ended up making this and forgot changing the name.


Chapter 1
A young boy, around seven-teen years old had recently woke up. He got cleaned up and got dressed before going downstairs to eat breakfeast. He didnt really eat much...he never did...he was weak and pale. After he finish eating he washed his plate and grabbed his scarf wrapped it around his neck, then when outside. He walked to a Mailbox and took out a few letters.
He went back inside the house and open the first letter. It was his monthly bill for the water and everything else. He put the letter to the side and took out another letter and began reading it.

Dear Marluxia,
Our Kingdom has been attacked and several citizens have been kidnapped. We understand that you possess very little physical strength but we have heard that you possess something far greater. Anyways back on topic lad. We had been attacked like I said before. I have given you a map attached to this letter. I would like you to meet up with one of my royal guards at Ice-Frost Mountain. Its located North of Kriston Town. To get there go to the nearest harbor and reserve a private ship and tell them to take you here. They all know of this place. This means you MUST! come.
~Marika

Marluxia sighed and got up and went upstairs and putted on a hooded robe and grabbed a Staff. Not the one to assist in walking. This staff was called the Arc Staff. He headed to the harbor and reserved a private ship. He told the captain where to go and they where off.
Hours have passed and Marluxia had fell asleep. He started to dream about what may happen on this 'force-ful' adventure.
"...Sir?...Sir?...please wake up sir, we have reached Kriston town." the captain said. Marluxia woken up and yawned. "Are you sure you want to get off here? You DID listen about those tales about this place didnt I?" The Captain said. "Yes, you did but I have some...'errands' to run here" Marluxia said getting off the ship. "Well if you say so." The captain said and he drove the ship away from Kriston Town's Harbor. Marluxia looked around to find a way into town. He found a way into town and headed there. Marluxia went to the towns shop first to buy some foods and drinks, for his journey. He also bought a Explorer Bag to keep his stuff in. "Is that all sir?" The clerk said
"Yes, This is all I need for now I should'nt waste all my money right now" he said as he left the shop. Marluxia started to walked towards Ice-Frost Mountain. He came upon a gate and it was locked. A Guard stood on the far right of the gate. He walked over there to ask him to open the gate.
"Um...Can you pleas-" "Get Away you creep!!!" A loud voice shouted from somewhere.

Vatanui AKA Pride
10-12-2009, 06:33 PM
You took the name from Organization XIII, Kingdom Hearts. xD

Sai's brother
10-13-2009, 07:04 AM
You took the name from Organization XIII, Kingdom Hearts. xD


Your point? XD

Vatanui AKA Pride
10-13-2009, 02:04 PM
But cool name nonetheless.
Looking forward to the next chapter.

Sai's brother
10-21-2009, 08:08 AM
Chapter 1 Continued
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"Huh?...What was that?....never mind that...Sir can I.....huh? ....Great he's sleeping." Marluxia said
"Well I could see what that noise was" He walked around town looking for who screamed. Marluxia walked around town and got to the West part of the town. He saw a 'kid' on ground and some person in armour going towards him. The 'kid' was badly injured and he was bleeding. It looked like he was fighting back becuase the armour man and sword cuts on his armour and it smelt newly cut. "What is going on?" Marluxia whispered. "Huh? Ughnn..." The kid got up and went behind Marluxia as fast as he could.
"So you're also going to interfer with our plans? Then you should join the others who did try do interfer...in the underworld!!!" The armour man said angrily as he charged towards Marluxia. "Wait a minute when did I say anything like that?" Marluxia said.

The armour man jumped up and his fist glowed red. It felt like...fire, and a lot of it. The man's fist deattached from his arm and flew right towards Marluxia. Quickly Marluxia blocked the fist with his staff. "Looks like Im forced to fight" Marluxia said. He took out a book and it open and floated in the air. "Gravi-" The second fist struck him from the side knocking him to the ground. "Ughnn..." Marluxia got up and began to walk towards his book. But The armour man teleported next to it and pick it up. "So this is what makes you strong huh?...Without this the Queen cannot be saved." He tore the pages out and they vanished.

..."Now lets see you fight without your magic Marluxia" The man said.
...."Who are you?" Marluxia asked
"Kanaye" he said
"Well then lets continue" Marluxia said. He leaped in the air and swung his staff down towards Kanaye's head and it actually hit him. "Ow" Kanaye said...what is that staff made out of?...never mind that your not even a threat anymore" He said and then he vanished away. "...Thank you sir" The boy said. "...It wasnt...really anything." Marluxia said
"Well thank you anyways...My name is Kiyoshi and I heard your name is Marluxia." The kid said

"Well yah it is" Marluxia said
"Well im coming with you...like it or not" Kiyoshi said