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Ace adventurer
10-10-2009, 05:24 PM
CHAPTER 1
the reunion
I live in Breakdown town"Whats up Big Big?"I asked the Giants in
front of the store.
I walked in adventure-mart, ready to shop.I bought a sword as big as my sister's mouth.So it was humongous.Then I bought a book of magic as thick as my neighbor's butt!!Next I bought some quest clothes.They looked real good on me.I looked like a real Adventurer,But I just graduated from Adventure Quester Academy.After I purchased the items,I strolled outside.Guess what?There was a fight!!Finally I get to show off my skills!!I hopped in the middle of the fight,But someone else hopped in."What are you doing"The BOY asked.That voice that is... he is...oh yeah.He's Tike,My friend from Adventure Quester Academy.
"Trying to stop this fight"I answered.GRRRR the fighters growled.Me and Tike got back to back.The fighters started growing...and growing...and growing...and growing.Now they were the size of giants."Darn,They're change-o giants"I told Tike



Chapter 2
The giant battle
Me and tike now were very scared.I managed to read a few pages of the book of magic.My hands clashed,and I muttered " Beast Magic,Wolf wall."A wall of wolves appeared in Front of both of us.I could hear pounding on the walls.Suddenly... The wall broke!!Tike put his hands together and shouted"Ice Magic,Ice streak".Pillars of Ice shot out of the ground.The giants flinched."ME NO LIKE ICE!ICE COLD!
That gave me an idea. "Tike do some ice magic at my hand"I commanded.
"Ice Magic ,Ice bullet!"Tike cried.Bullets of ice shot out of his hand.I jumped up,and my hands clashed."Wind magic,Air ground"I shouted.I was coming to the ground,Hand in front of face.The Ice crashed into my hand,And my hand hit the ground.The ground rumbled wildly,And turned into an area of Ice."Auuuugggghhh"The giant sreamed.The giants slipped,and slided,trying to get up,But it stumbled to the ground again.Except 2 animals a baby wolf, and a bunny popped out the pocket of 1 giant.They tramped over to us.I got down to pet the The wolf,Tike petted the bunny too.I heard a slight whimper . It looked like he wanted to be my pet,the bunny was already Tike's pet ;cause The bunny was perched on his head."Hey buddy"I got back down on my knees,"I'll be your owner"I told the wolf."I'll name you fury"I announced."I will name you bugz"Tike prounounced.

CHAPTER 3
the shopping spree
Me and The others hurried to Targettarget in this world is a store which archer giants like to train at cause of the multiple targets on top. I TRAIN THERE TO IMPROVE MY ABILITY OF DODGINGWhy,?cause we needed more stuff to set out on our adventure which is in 2 more weeks.We ran as fast as we could,cause I wanted to start now.20 seconds later...Finally we were there.Tike walked in looking around.I charged in looking like I was born to shop. I bought bunches of delicous snacks,some more quest clothes,a bunch of do-it yourself-training-book,Some pet feed, 2 moon swords; a sword like a bow and arrow,I also bought a bow n arrow.Tike bought the same things except the moon sword and the bow n arrow,He bought a ChainswordA chain sword is a sword which has a chain ball at the endand a crossbow.After I purchased the items,I went outside to catch up with Tike.But Tike was frozen,And when I looked up I was frozen too.


CHAPTER 4
the date and the hate
Do you know what we saw???Babes,Mega hot babes.One had red hair and a red blouse,but she also had a baby wolf with a ribbon on its ear and her wolf's name was Celia.My mouth was wateringthe other also had red hair and was wearing a pink blouse and had a ribbon in her hair and also had a bunny with a headband on it's head and her bunny's name was HopsWe strolled over to ask them a pacific QUESTION.I could see em blushing and whispering,looking at us.Before I opened my mouth "Will you 2 go on a date with us?"The first girl blurted out."S-S-SURE"I stuttered."We'll pick you up at 6:00."Tike told the 2 twin girls
5 Hours later...Ring Ring!!!We were at the girls house.The
2 girls walked out" We're so sorry I am Charlena and my sister is julie"Charlena announced"We just graduated from adventure quester academy".I flinched ,fury flinched too, he was also a study animal from the academy."Travel Magic,Teleportation"I yelled. In a flash, we were at Ty's Food n fightHere you can eat and also do battles agaist other adventurers AND IS KNOWN FOR FASTEST SERVICE IN THE WORLDWe walked in and the hostess led us to our seats.I ordered a large plate of hotwings extra sauce.The food was already on the table when I put my menu down.I devoured that food quicker than you can say the letter a. After I finished my food I walked to the battle table to sign up for a battle.After a few battles It was time for my battle.I sprinted up the stairs to the arena."20th Fight of today, Ace Novix Against Dragoen Flame"The Referee boomed.I took out my moon swords and got ready to fight.Dragoen took out a large sword with the word Dragoen.
"3...2...1...FIGHT"the Referee Shouted!I lunged for Dragoen. He put his sword in front of his face to protect hiself.Our weapons clashed together.He was actually too strong.He sent me flyng to the wall.CRASH!!I fell to the ground with a loud thud."Go Ace Go Ace"My three friends bellowed.Cheering...I was almost down.I slowly got up to my feet."Fury hurry come morph with me"I commanded.I didn't know what I was saying.But before I knew it I was a few inches taller , my clothes were made out of wolf fur, and I had a helmet that looked Like the wolf's head.
I charged for Dragoen ,and this time I sent him flying to the wall behind him."10...9...8...7...6...5...4...3...2...1...And Ace Is the winner"The referee boomed With excitment.I went over to Dragoen."Sorry bout the dramatic ending"I apoligized.
"Back off Kid"Dragoen shouted meanly.Then he got up and walked away.Looks like I got a rival. Fury Popped out my chest."How did you get in there"I asked without a clue that I morphed with fury.


CHAPTER 5
the forest of the undead
bandit
Today was the day we set off on our adventure!.I packed all my gear into my quest pack. "Hey Fury, come on"I called.Fury came sprinting towards me,and hopped on my shoulder.I put on my pack and left.If you want to know about no breakfast we were going to Bush's Breakfeast palace..I was heading to Tike's to pick him up.When I was there I had to wait cause he was packing bugz stuff into a Mini pillowcase which is as big as a wii steering wheel.After he came out we headed for the girl's house to say good bye.We've been dating them for 14 days ,and wouldn't want to hurt them emotionally.We knocked on the hard wooden door.Click went the lock.The door opened. Charlena and Julie were already to set out."Honestly, do you think we are dumb enough not to know your; going to set off on your adventure?"Charlena asked sarcastically shaking her head.Me and Tike just shrugged. "Oh well, Come on "Tike told them as he took out his map"The first place is...THE FOREST OF THE UNDEAD BANDIT!!!I almost fainted after I heard that.That place Is the most dangerous place in the whole country our town is the place farthest south thats why
nobody leaves town.We headed north to the forest.Every step I took I trembled.After they caught me when I was trying to run away,we tramped in.The Trees had skeletons hanging from its branches.AUGGHHHH! I turned around to find Julie looking at a an undead puppy.It fled cause of the bloodcurling sream.I could tell this part of the adventure is going to be scary.A few hours later... we're half through the forest,but it was dawn and we had to wait because it was too dark to go any farther.
Charlena went to go get the fire wood.I setted up the two tents, One for me and Tike,and One for the two twins.Tike and Julie got out the cooking supplies from Tike's pack.Charlena came back with th wood,and put them in a pile.The pets collected stones and put them around the wood so;The fire wouldn't turn into a forest fire."Fire Magic, Flame Fire"Charlena shouted. She looked at the wood and it caught on fire.Tike put the pan slightly over the fire and fryed the fish.Me and Fury's mouths were watering.Fourtanetly I bring an forever lasting bottle of buffalo sauce.I devoured my food.After I finished I went to the boys tent.3 hours later it was 12:00.SNAP!That noise It was coming from outside.I quietly crawled out,wouldn't want to wake the rest up.It appeared to be I woke up Julie."Quiet don't you hear that?"Julie wondered out loud. Before I could answer a Skeleton popped out.That...that..That was"THE UNDEAD BANDIT"I screamed.
I took out my bow and arrow and julie took out her 2 axes.Wow!axes.I loaded an arrow and shot it,but I missed.I kept on doing it while Julie threw one of her axes and got ready to beat the Undead bandit.She lunged for The skeleton.She swung her axe and knocked the skeloton half way in the air.I shot another arrow and got him in the back.
"It just won't go die"Julie exclaimed.The undead bandit took out the arrow and came charging for me.Right in the nick of time an axe hit the pursuing skeleton. It hit the ground with a thud,suddenly it vanished into thin air.We decided not to speak of it ever again.We both dived back into a tent.

CHAPTER 6
the battle arena
We started heading for the next town.My head was in one of the do-it yourself-training-books."Hey' Did you know the only way to destroy an undead person is throw something at it's head?"I asked."No". Julie punched me in the shoulder."Eh-uhh,just wanted to know"I chirped timidly.The little pet group sprinted to a light in the forest.I ran over to see what was there.It...It..was the next Town.I saw a sign That read Vandel Village.Me and the little pet group tramped in the village.
Just as I was going to the closet shop a big arena appered in my sight.I slid to a stop and turned around.I now sprinted to the big arena.The door opened and I walked in.It was just like a roman arena, Except the glass roof.I strolled over to the sign up desk.I signed my name on the battle sheet.But I saw another famiualir name...Dragoen!!
I walked away with my head down."What wrong?"Charlena asked."My...My rival is here." I replyed."Where is he"Charlena asked.I pointed To the benches.
"Whoa, He is hot and also has a 12 pack."Charlena anounced slowly."Lucky you beat him".
"Hello I,Not helping."Tike called.
Ding-Ding!!!! I hurried to the arena,This is the final round.
"Looks like we meet again."Dragoen bellowed."3...2...1...Fight"the referee boomed. But before the fight started I fell to the ground with a thud. Changing to Dragoen's point of view!!
What is that Idiot doing.But before I could give him a whack a cloud appeared.Out came a guy In a white Dress suit."Me the leader of the parishers will take the lost princesses of The world."All I knew was that my girl Alice was a princess of something...But I'm not going to risk anything!I shall protect Alice. I lunged for...
Changing to ace's point of view.

I saw a man in a whte dress suit.Only evil people dres up like that.The man was eyeing my girl and Julie.Tike and Dragoen were already fighting.I saw a name tag which said Yoshio of the parishers...Huh Yoshio...MY DAD. I jumped to my feet and in no time at all I was morphed wit fury thinking about my past.A giant sword formed in my hand it was as big as the empire state building.I sped too Yoshio.I took a swing but missed.Then he parished in a blink of an eye.
I turned around to speak..but guess what they were gone.Dragoens was too ,he was on his knees crying.


CHAPTER 7
the convent

Sasuke/Itachi
10-10-2009, 05:49 PM
It seems good but a few spelling mistakes

Ace adventurer
10-11-2009, 07:15 AM
I am puting in the two twins as two twin babes

Nori
10-11-2009, 07:34 AM
It was okay.

Ace adventurer
10-11-2009, 08:32 AM
Thank you Nori! I'M still not finish