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Zeek Uchiha
05-02-2009, 10:31 PM
Ok what u do in the forum is act like your in naruto and you are your own character u walk around the village and talk 2 people stuff like that fight or whatever

Spartacus
05-02-2009, 10:32 PM
All right you start

Luna Mikazuki
05-02-2009, 10:35 PM
Hm my character is Luna btw okay
*walks down random street*

waterlemon-chi
05-02-2009, 10:40 PM
Okay, my character is Reika (yay, I get to use my name! lol :D )... *rushes off to a random ramen stand and orders 15 bowls*

Luna Mikazuki
05-02-2009, 10:40 PM
Okay, my character is Reika (yay, I get to use my name! lol :D )... *rushes off to Ichiraku and orders 15 bowls*

Hi Reika chan..whats up? *literally engulfs ramen*

Spartacus
05-02-2009, 10:43 PM
you can't use anybody from the show in your role play

Luna Mikazuki
05-02-2009, 10:44 PM
you can't use anybody from the show in your role play
Whats that mean?

garraswerewolf
05-02-2009, 10:45 PM
you can't use anybody from the show in your role play
Whats that mean?
it means you can get in trouble for it i think

Luna Mikazuki
05-02-2009, 10:46 PM
you can't use anybody from the show in your role play
Whats that mean?
it means you can get in trouble for it i think

O okay sorry..so what do we do?

garraswerewolf
05-02-2009, 10:48 PM
Whats that mean?
it means you can get in trouble for it i think

O okay sorry..so what do we do?
you could delete the posts with there names in them

Luna Mikazuki
05-02-2009, 10:49 PM
Does that mean we can use our characters?

4thHokage
05-02-2009, 10:53 PM
My character is DC Uchiha (is training with Kakash at the training grounds)

Luna Mikazuki
05-02-2009, 10:54 PM
Does that mean we can use our characters?
yes just no one from naruto
sorry guys thats the way it has to be

Okay..what do we exactly do?

garraswerewolf
05-02-2009, 10:55 PM
Does that mean we can use our characters?
yes just no one from naruto
sorry guys thats the way it has to be

4thHokage
05-02-2009, 10:56 PM
well then my character is Draco Uchiha (still training with Kakashi)

Luna Mikazuki
05-02-2009, 10:57 PM
Gotta go nite

garraswerewolf
05-02-2009, 10:59 PM
yes just no one from naruto
sorry guys thats the way it has to be

Okay..what do we exactly do?
you can go back and edit them or delete them
but you can play as long as its not naruto characters or places
make up your own its not hard :D

waterlemon-chi
05-02-2009, 11:06 PM
Okay, my character is Reika (yay, I get to use my name! lol :D )... *rushes off to Ichiraku and orders 15 bowls*

Hi Reika chan..whats up? *literally engulfs ramen*

Hi, hi! What's your name??? :D

4thHokage
05-02-2009, 11:10 PM
(After training goes to romen shop)

4thHokage
05-02-2009, 11:13 PM
(orders 15 bowls)

waterlemon-chi
05-02-2009, 11:24 PM
(orders 15 bowls)

Hi, hello! You're eat ramen too??? :D

*extends hand for a shake and orders 7 more ramen bowls*

Sabra
05-03-2009, 01:43 AM
Well this looks to be alot more random then the last Role Play Forum thread I was in, long ago. Do you plan to actually detail anything out like a story, or just throw one liners back and forth. That came out sounding alot harsher then I ment it to... What I mean is like this:

A girl with dark pink hair is carefully picking cactus flowers on the border of a desert. A middle aged woman comes along with a basket full of berries and beckons to the girl. "Come along now Sabra, your father expects us home before dark." The girl gentally adds her flowers to the basket and leaves hand in hand with the older woman.

That's the sort of thing I mean, versus what's been done in the thread so far.

waterlemon-chi
05-03-2009, 01:47 AM
Well this looks to be alot more random then the last Role Play Forum thread I was in, long ago. Do you plan to actually detail anything out like a story, or just throw one liners back and forth. That came out sounding alot harsher then I ment it to... What I mean is like this:

A girl with dark pink hair is carefully picking cactus flowers on the border of a desert. A middle aged woman comes along with a basket full of berries and beckons to the girl. "Come along now Sabra, your father expects us home before dark." The girl gentally adds her flowers to the basket and leaves hand in hand with the older woman.

That's the sort of thing I mean, versus what's been done in the thread so far.

*sigh*

I get your point... Might as well implement it... :)

Sabra
05-03-2009, 02:38 AM
*sigh*

I get your point... Might as well implement it... :)

I really didn't mean it to sound like it did the way I worded that, but I'm just used to Role Play meaning alot more indepth then the thread had shown so far. The last role play thread I was on was with a group of friends who were english students who used it to improve their writing skills of college courses, so I'm kinda used to something more visual. We used it to practice our writing and story telling skills.

So you can see how I might be expecting a bit more then most would. I can leave the thread if that's not the kind of posting that you guys would like to try doing. It sure can make for an interesting read though when you have several people doing a paragraph at a time of a scene. Kinda like colaberating a play/movie script, or writing a fanfiction together.

Really just a suggestion, no need to take it seriously.

TheViolletteHeart
05-03-2009, 05:09 AM
A girl with light-lavendar, elbow-length hair, tan skin and sorrow-filled magenta eyes sat down at the ramen shop table and ordered a single bowl. She softly muttered, "Akemi did nothing wrong...Akemi is a good girl..." She hugged herself tightly.

Zeek Uchiha
05-03-2009, 06:29 AM
Zeek Uchiha just got up on my way out the village on a mission

Moon
05-03-2009, 07:24 AM
Dark brown hair, white skin,name is Moon *goes in ramen shop and orders 1 bowl of ramen* then says,"why me why"

chihiro_428
05-03-2009, 07:31 AM
oh so you talk only about your charecter and other peoples charecter can't be in it...

chihiro_428
05-03-2009, 07:35 AM
well a girl with really short brown hair and pale skin named suzuki walks around the village looking to see ware she can get some sushi

Moon
05-03-2009, 07:44 AM
*walks out and jumps on the roof. sits down and looks at the sky*" then says I need to find it"

Zeek Uchiha
05-03-2009, 07:45 AM
Back from a long mission with Naruto and Sakura

Rotate
05-03-2009, 09:10 AM
at he weapons shop a tall kid with red hair and a dark cloak picks up some paper bombs :mrgreen:

Zeek Uchiha
05-03-2009, 09:11 AM
wanna train rotate

Rotate
05-03-2009, 09:11 AM
on the cloak it has a huge red "R" who is he? (i really just got some ideas from u guys)

Moon
05-03-2009, 09:14 AM
*goes in weapon shop* then says"i wonder if my scythe is fixed"*gets scythe and disappears*

waterlemon-chi
05-03-2009, 09:21 AM
A bouncy brunette bounces randomly off a ramen stand. "I wish they had more ramen!" *stalks off to find more random ramen stalls* :D

Rotate
05-03-2009, 11:58 AM
wanna train rotate
i don't care, sure

4thHokage
05-03-2009, 01:09 PM
goes on a mission with Rocklee and Might Guy

Moon
05-03-2009, 01:12 PM
*A dragon is attacking the village* "kill the dragon" i shouted

Zeek Uchiha
05-03-2009, 01:14 PM
*A dragon is attacking the village* "kill the dragon" i shoutedHey need help

Moon
05-03-2009, 01:15 PM
*A dragon is attacking the village* "kill the dragon" i shoutedHey need help
no im ok *pulls out scythe then cuts off the dragons head*

Zeek Uchiha
05-03-2009, 01:20 PM
Okay everyone when u get in a fight with someone or something make at least a challenge don't do 1 hit kills have fun

Moon
05-03-2009, 01:21 PM
*the dragon rises from the dead but with two heads*what the---------

Zeek Uchiha
05-03-2009, 01:23 PM
good job moon make it a challenge

Zeek Uchiha
05-03-2009, 01:23 PM
*the dragon rises from the dead but with two heads*what the---------are u sure u don't need my help

Moon
05-03-2009, 01:26 PM
no i...*dragon eats my arm and looks at the dragon*OK YOUR DEAD FOR THAT!

4thHokage
05-03-2009, 02:33 PM
*appears out of nowhere and uses dark rasengan on the dragons head* "RASENGAN!!"

Nick Tasogare
05-03-2009, 02:37 PM
*Chinsei arrives in the village and sees Draco Uchiha Fighting the Dragon and also sees the armless Moon* I wonder why wherever i go there seems to be turmoil. *sighs* Gravity Style: Black Hole *the dragon gets sucked in but there was an egg behind him* Oh, she was protecting a baby. * Crack.... ROAR!!!!!!* Oh..... yay....... * dragon shoots a ball of fire at chinsei. he jumps away but his hand gets badlt burned so he goes to find a medic*

Rotate
05-03-2009, 02:56 PM
*Eggs pop out of the dragon and start lighting on fire. Then the eggs grow and dragons come out*

4thHokage
05-03-2009, 02:56 PM
*takes out zangetsu and Completely destroys dragon*

Luna Mikazuki
05-03-2009, 02:58 PM
*Eggs pop out of the dragon and start lighting on fire. Then the eggs grow and dragons come out*

Um..my name is Luna

4thHokage
05-03-2009, 03:02 PM
*puts zangetsu away and goes to Irukas ramen shop*

Zeek Uchiha
05-03-2009, 03:07 PM
everyone regroup and heal the wounded

Rotate
05-03-2009, 03:07 PM
*dragons fly away to regroup and don't bother village*

4thHokage
05-03-2009, 03:08 PM
Hey luna what happens if i call you short?

TheViolletteHeart
05-03-2009, 03:11 PM
Akemi groaned as her eyes fluttered open. She had been knocked on her back when the dragon appeared. She managed to fall on a sensitive area, and the pain knocked her out. She shook out her lavendar locks and sat up. "What happened? Akemi was just minding Akemi's own buisness when everything went dark..."

Luna Mikazuki
05-03-2009, 03:11 PM
Hey luna what happens if i call you short?

Nothing I was quoting it from FMA

4thHokage
05-03-2009, 03:12 PM
whos Akemi

seannfma
05-03-2009, 03:12 PM
Hey luna what happens if i call you short?

Nothing I was quoting it from FMA
Ya ed hates to be called short :roll:

Luna Mikazuki
05-03-2009, 03:13 PM
Yes it is *eats some ramen*

TheViolletteHeart
05-03-2009, 03:14 PM
whos Akemi

Third page, my post, my role play character.

4thHokage
05-03-2009, 03:14 PM
I love FMA its an awsome show.

4thHokage
05-03-2009, 03:18 PM
oh ok

Nick Tasogare
05-03-2009, 03:28 PM
Hey everyone celebratory ramen on me for beating the dragon and dragon babies at the diner club!!!!!!!!!!!

4thHokage
05-03-2009, 03:30 PM
"im not going to comment on the battle but ill take the ramen"

Luna Mikazuki
05-03-2009, 03:31 PM
Poor Ed lol nah

Zeek Uchiha
05-03-2009, 03:32 PM
Hey luna what happens if i call you short?

Nothing I was quoting it from FMA
Ya ed hates to be called short :roll:Ed gets ready 2 kill when u call him short

TheViolletteHeart
05-03-2009, 03:33 PM
Akemi stood. "Dragon? There was a drag--"

She gasped and fell to her knees. The memories were flooding back to her. She remembered getting whacked with a large, scaly tail, and pain and...

Losing her train of thought, she looked around. "Too many people," she groaned. She rose to her feet and began tiptoe-ing into the shadows.

4thHokage
05-03-2009, 03:37 PM
oh well see ya later *leaves ramen shop and heads twords the Trianing grounds*

Luna Mikazuki
05-03-2009, 05:16 PM
Um this is Luna is anybody HERE

TheViolletteHeart
05-03-2009, 06:19 PM
Yes.

Sabra
05-03-2009, 06:35 PM
Sabra is jolted out of her conversation with her care taker as she looked in the direction of Konoha. "Sheu-chan what was that sound? It was like a large creature screamed." The older woman sped up her pace slightly as she adjusted the basket she carried. "I'm unsure dear, but I'm sure whatever it was it shall be taken care of by the time we get there." The woman seemed more alert now, having been knocked from the melencoly of looking after the child that was her charge.

"Sabra dear, don't you start academy tomorrow." She said trying to distract from the errie silence that had fallen over them as they continued on the small trail. "I don't wanna... I want to go train with mother and father directly. I don't want to have to go and spend all day at a desk listening to other people talk..." The girl pouted, her eyes wondering over the various plants they passed. "Come now Sabra don't be like that. All kids who want to learn the ninja way are required to attend school to learn the basics." "But!" The small 'discussion' continued from there as they began to see the edge of Konoha's gate in the distance.

(The sound was from the dragon fight.)

TheViolletteHeart
05-04-2009, 03:08 AM
Akemi sat curled up in the shadows. People had come and past, but there were still too many around for her to be comfortable to leave her hiding spot. Slowly, the villagers left for their homes or other things. Just as the magenta-eyed teen rose to leave, though, a small pink-haired girl and an old woman passed.

As Akemi's eyes set on the girl's face, a sharp pain shot through her. Her eyes burned. She fell to her knees, gasping as a bright light flashed around her.

Seconds later, the burning was gone and the only light was a flickering red on her face. She opened her eyes and looked around. She was no longer in a dark alleyway, but rather kneeling before a flaming ruin.

Akemi jumped at the noise of sobbing. The small girl was sitting only a few feet away from her, crying into her hands.

"What is wrong?" The purple-haired teen's voice echoed around the area, but the girl didn't react. Before Akemi could do anything else, the light flashed around her again.

When the light was gone, so was the pain. Akemi sat up. She was back in the alleyway. The girl and the woman had long passed.

The psychic sighed. 'That girl has trouble in her future,' she thought. That vision was her least random in recent years. But there was no way for her to warn the little girl now.

Realizing how late it really was, Akemi ran home, hoping that for once her father would forgive her.

Hidan
05-04-2009, 07:35 AM
My persons named cirin tosuey and he just walks down the streets and then, see's a bird in the air, notices its for him, then he goes to the Kages place and then after gets a mission, My daily life.

gaara 51
05-04-2009, 08:10 AM
*enters raman shop*(red hair black top n trousers girl)
HI! im ueki and .... oooooooo ramen!!!!!!!!!
what!!!! i dont have any money!!!!!!!!!!! :cry: :cry:

Nick Tasogare
05-04-2009, 01:35 PM
Chinsei is at the training field, working on a his Gravity Style jutsu. Since it uses so much chakra and a delicate amount of chakra control, he is working on using the least chakra that is possible. A young ninja who he knows as Kyra appears in the field. He stops training to go and talk to her. She seems preoccupied so he asks whats wrong. She begins the story of the mission she had just come back from. "We had been given a B-rank mission and my friend Bunta had been so excited. We were to go to the Land of Rice Patties to escort an old woman who was going to see why the dragon had attacked, and give us more information on the type of dragon it had been. On our way there, in the Land of Rivers, we were attacked by three ninja who had wanted us to give them the information of our mission. Shenji-sensei said 'We are ninja of the leaf and we will do no such thing.' Without replying, they disappeared, only to reappear behind Bunta. Shenji-sensei immediately told him to duck and threw a kunai at the strange ninja. He was hit, but it was just a clone. Our sensei told us to get into alpha formation, which we did right away. The ninja came after us and Bunta broke formation because the other ninja used an earth style jutsu to take him underground. But in a flash, Shenji-sensei appeared from the ground with Bunta in one arm and the dead ninja in the other. In the meantime the oter ninja must have been preparing a jutsu because one second Bunta was relieved to be alive, but in the next, he spit up blood, and fell over. We realized that he had a tag on him. Shenji-sensei looked at the tag and realized that it was a tag used in an evil jutsu known as the Jashin Art: Sacrifice: Seal!!!. We realized that Bunta was gone when my other teammate, Yora, was unable to heal him, while Shenji-sensei went off to kill the ninja who had taken his student. Yora and i uneasily waited for our sensei to return. When he did he was panting with black soot all over his body. He said ' We should bring Bunta back to the village to notiy his family and Lady Hokage.' We went back to the village, walking silently the whole way, until we reached the village where wwe proceded past the gate, Bunta in sensei's arms. He told us to wait for him at the training field while he went to see Lady Hokage." She started to cry and Chinsei hugged her, trying to tell her that it would be ok.

TheViolletteHeart
05-04-2009, 01:49 PM
"Where have you been, you little brat," Akemi's father hissed.

"Ake--Ake--" Akemi gasped in between words, tears rolling down her cheeks.

"SPIT IT OUT, YOU WORTHLESS PIECE OF DUNG!!!"

"Akemi was just in the village when Akemi had a vision," the fifteen-year-old whimpered."There was fire and--"

"No, you think?" he asked sarcastically. "We're only in the LAND OF FIRE."

"Akemi is sorry. Akemi is an idiot, father."

Rage flashed across the man's face. "Don't call me that. You are not worthy of the name Hamasaki. Now go before I decide to beat your @$$."

The lavanda-haired girl dashed out of the room in a hurry. Her father had gone easy on her for once, and she wasn't going to give him a chance to change his mind. She was running so fast that she almost didn't notice a single dragon scale lying on the floor.

TheViolletteHeart
05-04-2009, 07:03 PM
I killed the roleplay. Whoo! XD

KyuubiAkatsuki
05-04-2009, 09:00 PM
Ruziki Tensai enters Hidden Leaf Village in search of new victims. He notices a Jonin level ninja entering woods. He follows the Jonin into the woods. Deep in the woods...............,"Wind style:Wind Pressure Cage Jutsu!" Jonin gets caught in cage and dies a slow and painful death while the pressure in the cage increases to a deadly level. Ruziki smiles and absorbs the pride in his kill.................

Sabra
05-05-2009, 01:54 AM
I killed the roleplay. Whoo! XD

Role play cannot be killed, it can only be subdued for a short time. Actually I'm really liking your little psychic, she's suitably skiddish, and makes for good forshadowing oppertunities. It's an interesting design, but I keep think of Hinata whenever I'm reading about her.

Sabra skipped on into the house on the edge of Konoha, it was hugged up close to the kage mountian at the edge of a thicket of trees. It was a relatively modest house for a family so old. She slipped her shoes off and darted down the hall for her father's study. He was drinking tea as she entered. "There you are. Are you ready for your gift for qualifying to enter the academy?" The tall man appeared fairly old to have a child only now starting her training. His hair had started to grey at the temples and his face held laugh lines.

"Yes, Father." The child said politely as she seated herself across from him. "Now you must promise me that you will take care of her well. You know how improtant Ninja animals are to us. They are not just a tool, they are an essential part of your future, and a living being that you much respect and care for." He stared down at the girl with eyes that shown expectation. "Of course. I've watched you and mother for so long now. I know what I should do." The girl's mint green eyes meet her father's slightly darker ones and he smiled.

"Your mom has her in the next room then." Hardly had the words left his mouth by the time the young one had swept past him and pushed aside the rice paper door.

A beautiful woman with strawberry hair and light hazel eyes stood before the girl cradling a small tapioka colored Ferret. "Her fur's bright, it'll make her easy to spot Sabra. You'll have to learn how to overcome that weakness to make full use of her as your companion." The woman's soft singsong voice spoke of how young she herself was. She knelt down and left the Ferret loose from her grasp.

The creature seemed confused at first. "She's young, but she's from one of our best pairs of breeders. She was born earlier this year on your birthday which we were gone in Suna. Your father delivered the litter and thought she would be perfect for you." The information made the girl's eyes light up as the tiny creature sniffed her carefully. After a few seconds of investigation the animal grabbed hold of the girl's skirt and skirried up to her shoulder.

"What's her name?" Sabra questioned excitedly. "We haven't given her one yet." The girl stared at her new friend for a while. The little animal watched her back with dark red eyes. "You're so pretty. Your eyes esspecially. I think I'll call you Ruby." The whiskers on the pet's face twitched as if she was considering the name, then she licked the girl's cheek in acceptance.

Her mother giggled to herself. "Now go wash up for dinner then to bed with you, you have a big day tomorrow. I don't want you staying up all night with Ruby or you'll sleep thru your ceremony. "Yes momma!" The girl took off obediantely leaving her parents laughing.

TheViolletteHeart
05-05-2009, 02:14 AM
Do you know one thing I've noticed? In a lot of roleplays I've seen, there are only two or three actually going along with some kind of a plot. Everyone else just kinda does their own thing...

Akemi paused to scoop up the scale. It was silver and felt as strong as diamond and as light as a grain of salt. "What the...?"

She had the sudden feeling she was being stabbed in the forehead. She squeezed her eyes closed.

She saw a massive dragon--the same dragon that had attacked the village earlier. Its silver scales flashed in the light. This was no vision, atleast not of the future. It was of the past. Akemi watched herself get knocked to the ground. Eventually, the ninjas in her vision fought the great beast away, right in the direction of her house.

The lavendar-haired girl opened her eyes. "It flew here?" She thought for a moment before shaking her head. "No, it just flew OVER here when it was leaving. Akemi means, there is no way Akemi's father has something to do with it, is there?"

Sabra
05-05-2009, 04:33 AM
Essentually yes, usually it's a handful of people following some simblance of story, while the rest typocally just hang out. Which is perfectly fine mind you.

I think I'll let you go ahead and progress forward again while others add in some more before I do my next scene. Do you want to have your character interact with anyone in perticular or just roll with whatever developes?

I'm having slight difficulty with my progression of my character as I'm transplanting her from a fanfiction I've been doing alot of planning and design for. The problem being in it she's Sakura and Gaara's daughter, so sense we're not supposed to use anyone from the series directly or anything like that it's forcing me to come up with a whole new back ground.

Basically it would of made my job as a writer easier to not use her and come up with someone completely new, but that's something I'm not sure I want to do just yet.

Sometimes challenging yourself is the best way to improve.

Nick Tasogare
05-05-2009, 04:40 AM
Ive notice the whole plot thing too.

After bringing Kyra home, Chinsei went to Lady Hokage and asked that he be assigned the escort mission. She assigned him the mission, briefed him on the mission specs, and he was off. He encountered no trouble on the way to the Land of Rice Patties, where he found the town where the woman Kikame was to be waiting in a cabin in the middle of town. Chinsei located her, and after a few words with her shinobi protectors, he was given responsibility of the woman. "Hello, I am Chinsei Tasogare, and i will bee escortng you to the Hidden Leaf." "Well what are you waiting for then, lets get going. *Mutters under her breath* 'Oh boy' Chinsei thought as he jogged to catch up with the quick moving women. They barely spoke a word on the way home, until the woman stopped Chinsei. "Do you hear that?" she asked. "Hear wha......." And suddenly there was a burst of light. 'Are we being attacked?' he wondered as he grabbed the women and jumped out of the way. "Well are you just gonna stare at him or are you going to fight him?!" she yelled. "Well YOU'RE my priority and i have to keeep you safe and get you to a safe place." 'Theres only one of them at least, i can handle this in no time.' "Gravity Style: Field of Disturbance" the enemy ninja was unable to move, floating in the air. Chinsei realized that the ninja was smiling. 'Had he been expecting me? This is my only chance. He pulled his wolf blade from its sheath. "Ninja Art: Crescent Slashes!" White Chakra projected from the sword in the shape of crescents and the ninja had been sliced beyond recognition. "This is getting weird. I bette get you back to the village fast." He lifted her onto his back and sped towards the village. Towards safety.

Nick Tasogare
05-05-2009, 04:42 AM
by the way feel free to interact with my char and the people that he interacts with i thinkit would be more fun if all of our chars knew each other and stuff. and if akemi wants her father to beinvolved with the dragon let mee know how and why so i can work it into tthe old woman kikame :)

Sabra
05-05-2009, 04:52 AM
by the way feel free to interact with my char and the people that he interacts with i thinkit would be more fun if all of our chars knew each other and stuff. and if akemi wants her father to beinvolved with the dragon let mee know how and why so i can work it into tthe old woman kikame :)

Your character has any interesting power with that ability over gravity. Can I ask a favor though? I know I've done it myself before with the wall of text, but could you please start putting in a couple of paragraph breaks?

I'm having to highlight with my mouse to be able to keep my spot cause my eyes keep jumping all over the posts.

Nick Tasogare
05-05-2009, 04:58 AM
by the way feel free to interact with my char and the people that he interacts with i thinkit would be more fun if all of our chars knew each other and stuff. and if akemi wants her father to beinvolved with the dragon let mee know how and why so i can work it into tthe old woman kikame :)

Your character has any interesting power with that ability over gravity. Can I ask a favor though? I know I've done it myself before with the wall of text, but could you please start putting in a couple of paragraph breaks?

I'm having to highlight with my mouse to be able to keep my spot cause my eyes keep jumping all over the posts.

oh yea sorry my bad ill put things into paragraphs from now on or ill try at least

Sabra
05-05-2009, 05:02 AM
It took me months to break my habit of just writing long strings of text, so I understand very well what it takes to remember to press enter and space it down. I have to teach myself if you write more then five lines break, now I've trained myself to break between 3-5 sentences without thinking.

It took practice, but it really helps in the long run.

Nick Tasogare
05-05-2009, 05:03 AM
ok ill start doing that im so sorry because i know i write alot lol :)

Sabra
05-05-2009, 05:06 AM
Writing alot is a good thing. It shows creativity and enthusiasm. It's just a matter of being able to read it.

Nick Tasogare
05-05-2009, 05:07 AM
i like how your char uses a ferret is she gonna be like akamaru is to kiba?

Nick Tasogare
05-05-2009, 05:27 AM
After Chinsei had arrived in the village, he and Kikame bumped into a young lavander haired girl. "Oops, sorry kid." he said. She seemed to be in pain, her face was scrunched up and she fell over in pain. "Are you okay? Do you need a medic?" She did not respond, but when she came to, she looked at the old woman and sped away.
"I wonder what that was about." said Kikame. "Whatever happened it seems she is ok. Well, lets get you to the hokage." They walked the way to the Hokages Mansion, slowly so that Kikame could take in the surroundings. "This village seems very peaceful. You are lucky to call this your home." "Dont i know it. Well, we've arrived"
They walked into the Hokages office and Chinsei was dismissed until further notice.

Nick Tasogare
05-05-2009, 01:00 PM
After leaving the Hokages mansion, Chinsei decided to continue his training. He walked to the training field and became stringing handsigns. When he finished he said "Gravity Style: Pressure" There was a sudden wave of air and a heaviness around the training field and the trees seemed to have been pushed into the ground.

"Hm........lets see....." He adjusted his chakra control to cause gravity to be heavier and then lighter. Then heavier and lighter. He began to have fun doing this when Lady Hokage appeared in his vision. He dropped the jutsu so that she wouldn't be crushed. "Good afternoon Chinsei. Good job on escorting Kikame safely to the village. She told me that you were attacked?"

"Yes Lady Hokage. I believe it was by a rogue ninja because he had no village marking on him and he seemed to have no reason for attacking. All that i can think is that he was hired by someone to capture Kikame. She seemed to be fine, is she alright?" "Yes shes fine but this hired ninja worries me. Gather a team and head out to the scene of the attack, see what you can find." "Yes my Lady." He disappeared in a puff of smoke. "The clouds seem to be darkening. I have an uneasy feeling about this."

If its ok with you guys i want to bring Akemi and Sabras dad for my team.

Moon
05-05-2009, 01:41 PM
*three dragons appear*Im goingto kill them and help me if you you want

Yoshi-Chan
05-05-2009, 02:00 PM
*randomly pops out of some random window* HULLO!!!!!!!!! I ISH...*super hero pose* YOSHI!!!!!!!!!!!!! :mrgreen: :mrgreen:

Moon
05-05-2009, 02:01 PM
*starts to fight one dragon*grrrrrrrrrrrrr

Yoshi-Chan
05-05-2009, 02:05 PM
GASPY-NESS!!!!! DOES U NEED HELP?!?!?! *now standing on random tree branch hero posing*

Nick Tasogare
05-05-2009, 02:07 PM
GASPY-NESS!!!!! DOES U NEED HELP?!?!?! *now standing on random tree branch hero posing*

ummm wth dude lol

Yoshi-Chan
05-05-2009, 02:09 PM
GASPY-NESS!!!!! DOES U NEED HELP?!?!?! *now standing on random tree branch hero posing*

ummm wth dude lol

*sobbing in emo corner* d-d-dont judge me!!!!! ='(

Yajyuu Mikazuki
05-05-2009, 02:10 PM
*From top of dragon* my name is pooch from the land of poochrats where poochs mate with rats to make enlarged rats with floppy ears...... im trying to pooch this dragon so he has floppy ears will you help me!?!?

Moon
05-05-2009, 02:11 PM
*From top of dragon* my name is pooch from the land of poochrats where poochs mate with rats to make enlarged rats with floppy ears...... im trying to pooch this dragon so he has floppy ears will you help me!?!?
Im busy*somehow cracks the dragon's neck*

Nick Tasogare
05-05-2009, 02:11 PM
[quote="Yoshi-Chan":2p5ru7xu]GASPY-NESS!!!!! DOES U NEED HELP?!?!?! *now standing on random tree branch hero posing*

ummm wth dude lol

*sobbing in emo corner* d-d-dont judge me!!!!! ='([/quote:2p5ru7xu]

ummmm....ooook then......lol

Yoshi-Chan
05-05-2009, 02:12 PM
SHAAAA!!! Wait......uh....wth do i do?!?!?!!?!?!?! *kinda really hyper*

Yajyuu Mikazuki
05-05-2009, 02:16 PM
*From top of dragon* my name is pooch from the land of poochrats where poochs mate with rats to make enlarged rats with floppy ears...... im trying to pooch this dragon so he has floppy ears will you help me!?!?
Im busy*somehow cracks the dragon's neck*



ok i will take the head and put it on a pooch rat and sew on floppy ears!

Yoshi-Chan
05-05-2009, 02:20 PM
whoa..........thats kinda weird......*just stareing at it* ooOO ^^'

Yajyuu Mikazuki
05-05-2009, 02:39 PM
ill name it poochratdragon? :roll:

Moon
05-05-2009, 02:40 PM
*fights the other two dragons*DIE

TheViolletteHeart
05-05-2009, 03:49 PM
Essentually yes, usually it's a handful of people following some simblance of story, while the rest typocally just hang out. Which is perfectly fine mind you.

I think I'll let you go ahead and progress forward again while others add in some more before I do my next scene. Do you want to have your character interact with anyone in perticular or just roll with whatever developes?

I'm having slight difficulty with my progression of my character as I'm transplanting her from a fanfiction I've been doing alot of planning and design for. The problem being in it she's Sakura and Gaara's daughter, so sense we're not supposed to use anyone from the series directly or anything like that it's forcing me to come up with a whole new back ground.

Basically it would of made my job as a writer easier to not use her and come up with someone completely new, but that's something I'm not sure I want to do just yet.

Sometimes challenging yourself is the best way to improve.

I just go with whatever fits. I'm fine with people including interaction with my character, just as long as they keep her in character.

Akemi is the kind of person who avoids others (usually). She shies away from handshakes and flinches at other motion.

She's scarred from the years of abuse her dad put her through after her mom died. She's used to beatings and has marks all over her back from them. She is 15; her mom died when she was 6.

Her only known powers are plasma blasts and the visions (normally of the future, but occasionally of the past and present (in another location)). Because of her father's abuse, her visions are normally random, which is why she's kinda weirded out by how much sense her visions are making in this plot.

TheViolletteHeart
05-05-2009, 03:51 PM
by the way feel free to interact with my char and the people that he interacts with i thinkit would be more fun if all of our chars knew each other and stuff. and if akemi wants her father to beinvolved with the dragon let mee know how and why so i can work it into tthe old woman kikame :)

Yeah, her father is involved with this. Akemi comes from a family of fire-type chakra users and her dad is an b*****d, so it makes sense.

Nick Tasogare
05-05-2009, 03:52 PM
Akemi i would like to incorporate you into chinseis plot so im gonna see if she will come on amission with me reguardingthe dragons and id also like to ask sabras dad would that be ok you 2?

TheViolletteHeart
05-05-2009, 03:53 PM
Akemi i would like to incorporate you into chinseis plot so im gonna see if she will come on amission with me reguardingthe dragons and id also like to ask sabras dad would that be ok you 2?

Sure!

Nick Tasogare
05-05-2009, 03:54 PM
oh cool thanks ill pm you the story b4 i post it ok ill make it in an hour or so ok?

TheViolletteHeart
05-05-2009, 03:56 PM
oh cool thanks ill pm you the story b4 i post it ok ill make it in an hour or so ok?

Okay! :D

Nick Tasogare
05-05-2009, 03:59 PM
omg since ur in the hidden ink village that means since your kage merged villages with mine ur in the crescent fang village too!!! coolio

TheViolletteHeart
05-05-2009, 04:14 PM
omg since ur in the hidden ink village that means since your kage merged villages with mine ur in the crescent fang village too!!! coolio

Oh yeah! I just changed that in my signature.

Nick Tasogare
05-05-2009, 04:46 PM
Chinsei went to gather a team for the mission he was assigned. He had one person in mind, but decided to wait until he had found another ninja. He saw the lavender haired girl and decided to ask her. "Hi, my name is Chinsei. Lady Hokage asked me to investigate a spot where myself and the woman you saw me with earlier were attacked. i was wondering if you wouldd like to come, because you seemed like a high level ninja." "Well, Ameki really isnt that impressive and Ameki has to be home soon so that my father doesnt hurt Ameki for being worthless again." Well i'll make sure that the Hokage takes care of that, and if she cant, i will." He winks at her. "O-ok, Ameki will help you to find out about the dragon." She smiles because she feels wanted by someone for once, but this is soon followed by a painful vision of the mission.

'There are three ninja. Chinsei, Ameki, and another. They were fighting and the mysterious ninja was performing hand signs. But before the ninja had finished, Chinsei had pushed Ameki out of the way.' She came to on the ground where Chinsei was standing over her.

"Are you ok. Are you sure you will be okay on the mission?" "Y-yes, A-Ameki thinks so." She tried to push the vision out of her mind, but she knew that something bad would happen on this mission. "We are not bringing any other people on this mission, are we. Ameki really doesnt think it nessecary." "Well i guess not. It is only an information gathering mission. Alright, lets go." Ameki felt better now that she knew nobody else would have to get hurt, but she still feelt uneasy, for she knew that there were bad things to happen.

4thHokage
05-05-2009, 05:42 PM
*uses black cloud jutsu to hide myself I follow chinsei on him mission undetected* this could be intersting,thinking to myself

Nick Tasogare
05-05-2009, 06:03 PM
*uses black cloud jutsu to hide myself I follow chinsei on her mission undetected* this could be intersting,thinking to myself

im a boy.....

4thHokage
05-05-2009, 06:05 PM
my bad i thought you wer a gir with the whole temari pic thing

Nick Tasogare
05-05-2009, 06:06 PM
my bad i thought you wer a gir with the whole temari pic thing

thats because temari is bomb

4thHokage
05-05-2009, 06:07 PM
.....no comment

Nick Tasogare
05-05-2009, 06:09 PM
.....no comment

:O......... temari IS bomb Itachi (Gags) lol jk

4thHokage
05-05-2009, 06:12 PM
Itachi is AWSOME

Nick Tasogare
05-05-2009, 06:14 PM
Itachi is AWSOME

maybe........ lol he is pretty cool

4thHokage
05-05-2009, 06:16 PM
Anyways get on with the RPG

TheViolletteHeart
05-05-2009, 06:44 PM
Akemi bit her lip and looked around. All was quiet. She kept trying to keep her thoughts away from the dragon scale and the visions, but she was finding it impossible.

As they walked along, Chinsei would occasionally glance back at her with some emotion the girl could not recognise. Whatever it was, she knew it was the same as the look he gave her when she had fallen down the last time. Akemi gave him a weak smile and kept walking.

Sabra
05-06-2009, 03:19 AM
i like how your char uses a ferret is she gonna be like akamaru is to kiba?

Not exactly, the ferret as a nin pet would likely be more oriented toward information gathering, more like Kakashi's Pakkun is. Ferrets while they're aggressive and predators, are not of proper size to really fight outright. It may join in a couple of surprise attacks, but they're really geared more toward other uses. I picked it over something else primarily because my character is a child, and likely not going to see too much combat.

As far as using one of my characters, generally the same rule apply, feel free but keep them in character as much as possible. If you wish to use her father know that he specializes in tracking and earth jutsu. Her mother is a genjutsu user with water for her primary chakra.

By now it's probly morning so I'll go forward with my section of the story. You can still aquire her father for you team if you want, but I'll probly have to come by the acedemy to get him.

Sabra sat impatiently as the ceremony progressed. How long were they going to stand around and be lectured about what an honor it is to be selected to enter the nin academy instead of being sent to the standard school? The girl looked around her aimlessly searching for where her parents were in the cluster of proud parents to the side.

Only a few dozen students had been selected for this year, barely enough to fill two classrooms. She felt out of place and on the spot with her bright hair and fancy little outfit mom had put her in. She wanted to go on room and put on her usually skirt and simple shirt. This was taking forever. She idly petted Ruby as the furry animal slept in her lap.

Finally the ceremony came to a close and she stood to stretch. She ran toward the crowd of parents in search of her own. She found her mother waiting for her. The woman smiled down at her kindly. "You were very patient. Are you ready to start actual class tomorrow?" The girl glanced around and answered offhandly. "Yeah, I think so... Where's daddy?"

"He had to go before they finished dear. Come on let me treat you to something before we go home." The girl looked sad but nodded to her mother and took her hand as they left.

Nick Tasogare
05-06-2009, 12:55 PM
ok sabra whay is your dads name and im gonna make it so that Lady Hikage sends him as back up becaue she has an uneasy feeling ok. ill make the story in a while imm stil thinking about it :)

Nick Tasogare
05-06-2009, 01:26 PM
"Hey Ameki, i think we should go the rest of the way in the trees, so that we wont be seen"
"I-if you think that would be best." They entered the trees and began jumping from branch to branch. After about an hour and a half, they reached the site of the attack. "Is this where you were attacked?" "Yes, this is the spot, but....something seems off."

All of a sudden a Demon Wind Shuriken came flying from within the trees. "Ameki. DUCK!" She ducked just in time while Chinsei began a sequence of handsigns. He pulled a scroll from his pocket and bit his thumb. He spread the blood on the scroll. Scroll Summoning: Wolf Fang Shuriken. He threw the shuriken and it went into the trees. A ninja dressen in black jumped out. "Fire Style: Flaming Arrows Jutsu" screamed Ameki. The ninja had been caught off guard making an opening for Chinsei. "Gravity Style: Dark Matter Blast" The ninja was hit and vaporized in the air.

"Well guess someone doesnt want us finding out about this dragon. Well lets see. Lady Hokage said to find some things left by the ninja and put them in these scrolls." Hands one to Ameki. "Ok." "Lets meet here in an hour ok Ameki?" "Y-yes Chinsei." She smiles weakly, because the vision she had still lingers.

4thHokage
05-06-2009, 06:59 PM
*while Chinsei fight was over and they leave I capture the attacker and question him* "what are you doing here?"i say
"i wont tell you anything!", says the culpret
*uses my Rinnegan to seach him memory then throws him aside unconssious*

Nick Tasogare
05-06-2009, 07:11 PM
*while Chinsei fight was over and they leave I capture the attacker and question him* "what are you doing here?"i say
"i wont tell you anything!", says the culpret
*uses my Rinnegan to seach him memory then throws him aside unconssious*

he was killed he disintegrated from my jutsu... lol and we havent left yet lol

TheViolletteHeart
05-06-2009, 07:13 PM
Akemi felt blood dripping from her bottom lip. She had been biting it so much that her teeth finally pierced through the skin. She had never been outside the village, and to run off without telling her father--

She shivered. Shaking the thought of the punishment she was going to face upon her return from her mind, Akemi raced on. Unfortunately, without the thought of her dad distracting her, the teen's ponderings returned to her visions.

"Gah! Can't Akemi get some peace?"

Her question was answered when a kunai barely missed her neck and embedded itself in the trunk of a nearby tree.

Nick Tasogare
05-06-2009, 07:21 PM
Chinsei found an interesting piece of evidence. He sealed it into the scroll and went to look for Ameki. He heard an explosion. "Ameki!?!? Dont worry, I'm coming!" He rushed towards the explosion, and saw Ameki staring at a hooded ninja. Her lip was bleeding. "He rushed to her side. "Has he hurt you? Are you ok?" "Ameki is fine. Ameki had been biting her lip."

"Any idea who this guy is?" "No, Ameki has no idea. Ameki was just walking when a kunai came very close to her head." He realized the myserious ninja was a women. "Well, we need to see if we can capture her and bring her back to the village, do you think you're up for it?" "Yes, Ameki will try." Chinsei began stringing hand signs together when the mysterious kunoichi lunged at the two.

4thHokage
05-06-2009, 07:25 PM
*appears out of the woods and punches the konuchi to the side*

Vatanui AKA Pride
05-06-2009, 07:35 PM
Okay :| , My character is Shadow. I was strolling down to ear ramen when suddenly, a timid-looking ninja comes. He quickly hands me a circular object and disappears. After that, I heard someone yell, "Hey!! Give that back or I'll kill you, mon!" I turned and saw a Jamaican ganster ninja running at me with a giant broadsword.

TheViolletteHeart
05-06-2009, 07:42 PM
Akemi's hands shook. She took a steadying breath and stepped back with one foot. She made a few quick hand motions. "Fire Style: Fire Canon Jutsu!"

A large red orb built up in the palm of the girl's hand. It began to glow. It grew brighter and brighter until it shot off in the direction of the mysterious kunoichi.

Sabra
05-06-2009, 10:25 PM
I hadn't honestly come up with a name for her dad or her mom yet. Hami will do, I wanted to use something with an ha sound for him. I suppose Kisa for her mother. He usually fights with ninjutsu using earth style and her mother is more up close and personal using water style to unbalance the enemy and give herself openings.

Together they can disrupt an opponet so much from whatever they normally do that they can capture of subdue them for someone else to deal with. They're search ninjas trained to gather information, aquire objects of interest, and sometimes sent to track down rogues of other sorts of illusive targets. Not really your normal nins.

That's just how her family has developed into their position in the village. That's why they raise and train a very different kinds of ninja animal too.

Nick Tasogare
05-07-2009, 12:48 PM
"Gravity Style: Pressure!" Chinsei uses the jutsu to cause the orb of fire to become extremely dense and small, and used his gravity manipulation to control it. He aimed it at the kunoichi, and she dodged it, but did not realize that Chinsei was controling it. It redirected back at her.

"Water Style: Vortex Swirl" Water appeared around the ninja and then it flew towards the orb of flame and extinguished it. "Damn it. Shes good." Ameki froze, identifying the kunoichi as the ninja from her vision.

"Hami, I recently sent Chinsei on a mission to recover evidence from the place he and Kikame were attacked, and i would like you to go and help them." "Yes, Lady Hokage." He disappeared and began to track them down by using the earth and his tracking skills. He pinpointed there location and sped off because he heard shakes in the earth.

"Ameki!....Ameki, snap out of it." Chinsei had to push her out of the way so she would not be hit by the jutsu the ninja had used. "S-s-sorry Chinsei. I-its just that...well....never mind..." Knowing they were in trouble he summoned his wolf companion Shiro from there home with a quick set of handsigns. "Shiro, Combination Ninjutsu, ok?" :Arf!" "Combination Ninjutsu: Blizzard Pulse" From Shiros mouth came a blue light which turned into a widespread blizzard. The mysterious ninja was hit in the leg and fell to the ground when Hami arrived.

"Chinsei, Lady Hokage sent me to back you up, but it looks like you've got it covered." "Don't get so cocky, Hami. She is very good." All of a sudden the kunoichi was gone, and reappeared about 100 ft. behind Ameki. "Ameki, look out!" Before they noticed, the ninja had started and completed a set of handsigns. She began to glow with a dark red aura. She shouted, "Forbidden Jutsu: Dark Aura Destruction." She smiled sinisterly before she completely disappeared into the red light. The light quickly streaked at Ameki. There was a horrible shriek. "Ameki? Hami? Where are you?!"

He looked around and saw Ameki and Hami on the ground, Hami covering Ameki. Chinsei ran towards them and saw that Ameki was unharmed, but Hami was bleeding. "Ameki, get up. We have to get back to the village. Hami is hurt." "Oh no. This is all Ameki's fault." "Ameki be quiet and suck it up!" She looked at him, amazed. "If you want to help him you need to realize that you are not a burden, that people rely on you, trust you." Finding a long lost sense of confidence, she got up. "You're right, I've always been so weak and sorry for myself but no more!" She got up and Chinsei lifted Hami into his arms. They hurried back to the village, to try and save Hami.

Notice how Ameki is saying "I" instead of speaking in the third person now. :)

Hinata
05-07-2009, 01:37 PM
Just call me Hina :mrgreen:

Nick Tasogare
05-07-2009, 01:40 PM
Just call me Hina :mrgreen:

welcome to the role play :) lol

Hinata
05-07-2009, 01:54 PM
Thanks! :)

Moon
05-07-2009, 02:16 PM
*A giant kangaroo appeared*WTH

Zeek Uchiha
05-07-2009, 02:48 PM
Just waiting on Hinata

Moon
05-07-2009, 02:50 PM
*starts attackin giant kangaroo*

Hinata
05-07-2009, 03:21 PM
*sneaks up on Zeek* Hi!

Zeek Uchiha
05-07-2009, 03:24 PM
Hey hinata looking good as always ready for our date u decide where we go it's up 2 u

Moon
05-07-2009, 03:25 PM
*snaped the Giant kangaroos neck*finally done

Hinata
05-07-2009, 03:25 PM
Anywhere is good for me. :)

Zeek Uchiha
05-07-2009, 03:26 PM
Anywhere is good for me. :)How about the ramen shop

Hinata
05-07-2009, 03:27 PM
Sure!!! :mrgreen:

Zeek Uchiha
05-07-2009, 03:28 PM
slurp while eating ramen how have things been with u Hinata

Hinata
05-07-2009, 03:29 PM
eats ramen pretty good a bit busy but good. How about you?

Zeek Uchiha
05-07-2009, 03:30 PM
Yeah for me today was kinda boring but I'm doing fine

Hinata
05-07-2009, 03:33 PM
Yah I have plenty of those days. I'm home schooled so pretty boring. But I'm on a mime team so I have a good amount of friends.

Zeek Uchiha
05-07-2009, 03:35 PM
Yeah I like 2 play basketball

Hinata
05-07-2009, 03:36 PM
ME TOO!!!! I've started to make a few 3 pointers.

Zeek Uchiha
05-07-2009, 03:37 PM
Guess we both like something that's good ay how did u begin 2 like naruto Hina

Hinata
05-07-2009, 03:40 PM
I saw the first episode. I got hooked pretty fast because Naruto and I are alot alike. When I used to go to regular school most of the class didn't like me.

Zeek Uchiha
05-07-2009, 03:42 PM
I saw the first episode. I got hooked pretty fast because Naruto and I are alot alike. When I used to go to regular school most of the class didn't like me.Tell me about but u look good in real life they were probably jealous

Hinata
05-07-2009, 03:44 PM
No not really. But maybe.

Moon
05-07-2009, 03:45 PM
**battling a 6 headed dragon*help

Zeek Uchiha
05-07-2009, 03:46 PM
No not really. But maybe.not reall about what

BaneDeidara
05-07-2009, 03:48 PM
what is this roleplay about? i like roleplaying but after reading the last few pages i dont realy get it... :|

Zeek Uchiha
05-07-2009, 03:49 PM
It's about u in Naruto u going on missions u are your own character here

Moon
05-07-2009, 03:50 PM
*cut off one head and two appeared*I NEED HELP THEY KEEP ON GROWING BACK

Hinata
05-07-2009, 03:50 PM
The jealous part. But now if they knew me they would see s different person. Of course that was like 5 years ago.

BaneDeidara
05-07-2009, 03:51 PM
*cut off one head and two appeared*I NEED HELP THEY KEEP ON GROWING BACK
stop cutting them off and live with however many you have now ;)

Zeek Uchiha
05-07-2009, 03:51 PM
It's not now that's all that matters right slurp finish ramen

Hinata
05-07-2009, 03:53 PM
Yah. finishes ramen. But now they would just be sad about not being my friend.

Moon
05-07-2009, 03:54 PM
*the dragon ate my arm*THAT IS THE THIRD ONE THIS WEEK

Zeek Uchiha
05-07-2009, 03:56 PM
Yah. finishes ramen. But now they would just be sad about not being my friend.Your'e fine the way u are I'll walk u home

BaneDeidara
05-07-2009, 03:57 PM
*the dragon ate my arm*THAT IS THE THIRD ONE THIS WEEK
kill the dragon!
wait...third arm... :|

NaruSakufluff4ever
05-07-2009, 03:57 PM
is new peoples allowed?cause this looks pretty deep in so yea just asking :?: :|

Rotate
05-07-2009, 03:57 PM
ok ill help *i use my crystal arrow to peirce one of the dragons hearts*

Moon
05-07-2009, 03:58 PM
*the dragon ate my arm*THAT IS THE THIRD ONE THIS WEEK
kill the dragon!
wait...third arm... :|
my right arm is mechanical

BaneDeidara
05-07-2009, 03:58 PM
is new peoples allowed?cause this looks pretty deep in so yea just asking :?: :|
ive skimmed a few pages and have no clue what is going on lol

NaruSakufluff4ever
05-07-2009, 03:59 PM
im taking that as a nobody cares :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:

NaruSakufluff4ever
05-07-2009, 03:59 PM
no clue is hard but ur comment is still nobody cares :?

Rotate
05-07-2009, 04:00 PM
i kill one of the dragons with my crystal clot which makes the blood stop flowing

BaneDeidara
05-07-2009, 04:01 PM
no clue is hard but ur comment is still nobody cares :?
well i dont see any reason why i cant join. the more the merryer right?
but ill leave if you dont want me to be in the roleplay

NaruSakufluff4ever
05-07-2009, 04:02 PM
no dont leave ur the only person acknowledging my comments!!!! :!: :!: :!:

Moon
05-07-2009, 04:02 PM
*ataches new mechanical arm on*what are you two talking about

BaneDeidara
05-07-2009, 04:05 PM
*ataches new mechanical arm on*what are you two talking about
i dont know, but i guess im in the roleplay now

Zeek Uchiha
05-07-2009, 04:06 PM
Hinata were at your house I got 2 ask u something

Hinata
05-07-2009, 04:07 PM
Ok. What is it?

Zeek Uchiha
05-07-2009, 04:08 PM
Are your lips cold

Hinata
05-07-2009, 04:09 PM
No. Why?

Zeek Uchiha
05-07-2009, 04:10 PM
Kisses Hinata softly on the lips

Hinata
05-07-2009, 04:10 PM
Kisses back

Zeek Uchiha
05-07-2009, 04:12 PM
That's why I asked were your lips cold Hinata Chan

Hinata
05-07-2009, 04:13 PM
Oh Zeek kun! hugs Zeek

Moon
05-07-2009, 04:14 PM
wow nice roleplaying

Zeek Uchiha
05-07-2009, 04:15 PM
Hugs back I'll see u later okay I'm in the village forum okay

Hinata
05-07-2009, 04:15 PM
Ok. See you later.

4thHokage
05-07-2009, 06:42 PM
goes on a mission to go to The hdden sand village and fight the akatski

Moon
05-07-2009, 06:52 PM
*fighting a giant bear wicheats my arm*I AM SICK OF PEOPLE EATING MY ARM

TheViolletteHeart
05-07-2009, 06:58 PM
Akemi breathed slowly in and out. She and Chinsei were sitting outside of the hospital room where they were treating Hami's wounds. They had been back in the village for about an hour then. Judging from the dragon carcusses they saw when they arrived back, they had missed quite a bit of excitement.

Akemi's lip had stopped bleeding, but it was now sporting a lovely crimson scar.

The teen tapped her hand against her leg. She stared worriedly at the clock. Nothing could break her focus...until the little pink-haired girl from before came running into the waiting room, a ferret fast at her heels.

"Where's my dad!?" Sabra inquired, eyes wide.

Moon
05-07-2009, 07:00 PM
*kills giant bear and went to get another mech arm*

4thHokage
05-07-2009, 07:13 PM
*before leaving I ask everyone if they want to come with me*

Moon
05-07-2009, 07:16 PM
*3 dragons appear*I hope they dont eat my arm*starts fighting*

4thHokage
05-07-2009, 07:20 PM
Before im was about to leave i notice the dragons and i use space/time barrier o kill them

Moon
05-07-2009, 07:20 PM
*falls down unconcius with a gashed head*

Rotate
05-08-2009, 04:02 AM
jump in to heal moons head with chakra then takes him to the wepons shop to make him a titanium arm.

Viceroy
05-08-2009, 08:22 AM
My Character

Name:
Mister Bojangles
Gender:
Male
Age:
None of your concern!
Height:
5'9'' (I'm really that tall)
Weight:
160 pounds
Eyes:
Like dark pools of endless darkness
Hair:
Giant afro
Shin colour:
Dark as coal dust
Chakra Nature:
Water
Background
I was born in a beggars village that traveled through out the land as a nomadic tribe. I finally got a start as dish washer to a veteran shinobi who inspired me to train to become a ninja. My first job as a ninja was a chain of assisnations of corrupt political leaders. When I was captured I was forced to a mining camp where I worked tirelessly. I did not escape immediately but instead dug a secret tunnel which lead all the workers to be free. After that I settled down in a small village under a new alias. I quickly progressed through the shinobi ranks of the village and now hold a position of Jonin. My speciality, subterfuge.

Viceroy
05-08-2009, 08:30 AM
Mister Bojangles walked through the silent town as the sun made its slow rise over the distant mountains. Mist hung suspended in the air as he briskly walked. Finally he stopped at a fountain and looked around. Quickly leaping to the top of nearby building he started running. He scanned the surrounding village until he found what he was looking for- the kage's headquarters. He jumped down and looked up at the massive building. No one was awake so set down his back pack slid down against the wall. In no time he was asleep since he had been traveling all night. He waited...

Viceroy
05-08-2009, 11:20 AM
Are your lips cold
I just read the whole thing. Its a very nice story, but I have to give the reward for the funniest line to Zeek. Smooth as ice. Hahahaha. I've gotta use that one.

Viceroy
05-08-2009, 11:21 AM
Hi my name is Mister Bojangles an Ihave a message for the kage of this village. *Pulls out a scroll and hands it to kage.*

It reads:
To the Kage,
I am the Misokage of the Wax Village. I have sent this message to you in hopes that you will except my offer for a War Ally. I realize that my village is not able withstand a full-scale attack at this time. But as proof of our worth I am leaving you one of my finest shinobi, Bojangles. I do hope you accept my offer. If not then send him back post haste. Otherwise he's yours as a service for as long as you want.

[center:2c858adj]Signed,
Duke Ellington, Misokage of the Land of Trees[/center:2c858adj]

Bojangles tries to put on his most friendly face and bows. Lady Hokage looked him over and after a long period of apprehensive silence. "Alright, you're in. Welcome." Bojangles bowed and smiled "You won't regret it." "Fine. Now go get settled in." Bojangles bowed and turned away. He walked through the village looking around.

He stopped at some sort of ceremony. Kids sat in front of what he supposed were they're parents. One of them stood out in particular, a girl with bright coloured ferret. She looked like she didn't want to be there. He smiled because she reminded him of himself years ago. He wondered where he was going to stay for a while until he can get enough money to buy an apartment....

Nick Tasogare
05-08-2009, 11:58 AM
what is this roleplay about? i like roleplaying but after reading the last few pages i dont realy get it... :|

pay no attention to that thats just really random lol

Viceroy
05-08-2009, 12:03 PM
Hey Nick hows the roleplaying going. I was waiting for someone to get online so I could incorporate someone,

Nick Tasogare
05-08-2009, 12:07 PM
im about to start my next part so just wait till i finish ok and you can go on from there :)

Nick Tasogare
05-08-2009, 12:11 PM
A girl with red hair and a furret with mysterious red eyes appeared in the hallway. "Where is my dad?!?!" "He's in surgery, im sure he'll be ok." Chinsei smiled weakly at her, truly not knowing if Hami would make it. "Why dont you wait here with us?" Ameki had finally found her confidence. The child ran to her and thrust her head into Ameki's shoulder. She began to cry. "I'm scared. I dont want him to die. i just started the academy." "I know, it's ok." Ameki sat there holding the child, looking sadly at Chinsei.

Rotate
05-08-2009, 12:30 PM
at least he got the girlAre your lips cold
I just read the whole thing. Its a very nice story, but I have to give the reward for the funniest line to Zeek. Smooth as ice. Hahahaha. I've gotta use that one.

Nick Tasogare
05-08-2009, 12:37 PM
at least he got the girlAre your lips cold
I just read the whole thing. Its a very nice story, but I have to give the reward for the funniest line to Zeek. Smooth as ice. Hahahaha. I've gotta use that one.

gag me lol

Viceroy
05-08-2009, 12:37 PM
Just then a man walked by wearing a surgeons clothes and a huge head piece snuthering his giant afro. He walked into the ER and was stopped by a med nin. "Sorry this place is off limits." He fumbled through his apron until he found his NInja Card. "Oh, you're a med nin. And this is your speciality. Come in, we have a..."

lj0615
05-08-2009, 12:41 PM
ok my character is shikariu

Nick Tasogare
05-08-2009, 12:45 PM
Just then a man walked by wearing a surgeons clothes and a huge head piece snuthering his giant afro. He walked into the ER and was stopped by a med nin. "Sorry this place is off limits." He fumbled through his apron until he found his NInja Card. "Oh, you're a med nin. And this is your speciality. Come in, we have a..."

ur a med nin vice?

Viceroy
05-08-2009, 12:54 PM
Just then a man walked by wearing a surgeons clothes and a huge head piece snuthering his giant afro. He walked into the ER and was stopped by a med nin. "Sorry this place is off limits." He fumbled through his apron until he found his NInja Card. "Oh, you're a med nin. And this is your speciality. Come in, we have a..."

ur a med nin vice?
Thats my speciality. But I'm also a fighter. Short range taijutsu and low level ninjutsu. My choice of weapons is a staff.

Nick Tasogare
05-08-2009, 12:58 PM
dude staffs are bomb but i figured wolf blade sounded better than wolf staff

seannfma
05-08-2009, 12:59 PM
Can i be Naruto beleive it :mrgreen:

Nick Tasogare
05-08-2009, 01:04 PM
Can i be Naruto beleive it :mrgreen:

:( u cant use chars from the anime.... :( its legal junk

Viceroy
05-08-2009, 01:05 PM
Can i be Naruto beleive it :mrgreen:
How can I put this...NO! Why? Because it's illegal. Create a character and join the fun seann.

Wolf Staff is cool. How about Harlem Bow Staff.

Nick Tasogare
05-08-2009, 01:06 PM
yea seann what viceroy said GOD lol

Moon
05-08-2009, 02:08 PM
*wakes up with memory loss*w-who am i and where am i

Zeek Uchiha
05-08-2009, 02:18 PM
I'm bored

Zeek Uchiha
05-08-2009, 02:37 PM
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gag me lol[/quote]Got somethingsmart 2 say

Nick Tasogare
05-08-2009, 02:38 PM
no it was a joke........ u know...haha.....lol :lol:

Zeek Uchiha
05-08-2009, 02:39 PM
[gag me lolGot somethingsmart 2 say

Moon
05-08-2009, 02:39 PM
*eats a grenade*these are good

Zeek Uchiha
05-08-2009, 02:40 PM
Cool then if it was just a joke

Moon
05-08-2009, 02:40 PM
Cool then if it was just a joke
i really ate one

Heero
05-08-2009, 02:41 PM
i dont get this zeek :?: :?: :?:

Nick Tasogare
05-08-2009, 02:42 PM
Cool then if it was just a joke

yea totally go for it with hinata good luck

Moon
05-08-2009, 02:43 PM
i dont get this zeek :?: :?: :?:
make a character and make and do stuff*eats another grenade*

Zeek Uchiha
05-08-2009, 02:45 PM
Anybody can go out in my forum adventures it doesn't matter your welcome 2 do anything

Nick Tasogare
05-08-2009, 02:45 PM
i luv this forum its fun to make stories

Moon
05-08-2009, 02:46 PM
anyone want a grenade*looks at mech arm*w-what happened to my arm(remember i have memory loss)

Hinata
05-08-2009, 02:51 PM
*Walks down street to the weapons store*

Moon
05-08-2009, 02:53 PM
*presses a button on mech arm and a scythe comes out*cool

Hinata
05-08-2009, 02:58 PM
*buys 2 chakra blades 5 kunai and 10 shurikan*

Rotate
05-08-2009, 03:41 PM
throws a gernade at moons character. Youre right this is fun :mrgreen:

Moon
05-08-2009, 03:42 PM
throws a gernade at moons character. Youre right this is fun :mrgreen:
*eats the grenade and presses another button and a cannon came out*wow*shoots at rotate's character*

BaneDeidara
05-08-2009, 03:43 PM
*falls asleep* yeah this is fun. (even though i forgot about this thread until now) wake me up when someone tries to kill me. and if any of you just let someone kill me, i will come back and find you :evil:

Rotate
05-08-2009, 03:44 PM
block the shot with a crystal and asks.... hey anyone want to go wwith me to a mission to the hidden sound village

BaneDeidara
05-08-2009, 03:47 PM
block the shot with a crystal and asks.... hey anyone want to go wwith me to a mission to the hidden sound village
*wakes up* sure, ill come

Hinata
05-08-2009, 03:48 PM
Guys don't make me trap you in my genjutsu.

BaneDeidara
05-08-2009, 03:49 PM
Guys don't make me trap you in my genjutsu.
no, you dont trap me in genjutsu, i trap you in genjutsu!

Moon
05-08-2009, 03:50 PM
*shots cannon*my arm is gone but this is fun

BaneDeidara
05-08-2009, 03:51 PM
am i going on a mission or can i go back to cutting myself? umm... i mean...*what did i say i was doing* oh ya! sleeping, lets go with that!

Moon
05-08-2009, 03:54 PM
am i going on a mission or can i go back to cutting myself? umm... i mean...*what did i say i was doing* oh ya! sleeping, lets go with that!
emo

BaneDeidara
05-08-2009, 03:54 PM
am i going on a mission or can i go back to cutting myself? umm... i mean...*what did i say i was doing* oh ya! sleeping, lets go with that!
emo
im not emo! i just like the feel pain ;) and i said i was sleeping!

Moon
05-08-2009, 03:55 PM
am i going on a mission or can i go back to cutting myself? umm... i mean...*what did i say i was doing* oh ya! sleeping, lets go with that!
emo
im not emo! i just like the feel pain ;) and i said i was sleeping!
i fell no pain mostly