View Full Version : The Life and Times of Hajime Soto
09-26-2009, 02:15 PM
I am making this because the other one didnt have a title and it was getting off topic...soo here u go..
Hajime Soto (肇ソト) was and still is a prodigy since the first time he touched a sword.Trained by his older family members he turned out one of the greatest ninjas ever.And he is only 13.Also with his incredible ability to use 3 elements after only 4 years of training and his wolf-like powers he is an almost virtual army onto himself..with a few drawbacks of course.
Chapter 1.The New Face of a scarred Warrior.(this takes place when he is 11)
"Shinooooobuuu!..WHHEEERREEE ARE YOU? I told you not to go in my room but you insisted on going in there so im going to kill you."
As Hajime looks around in the forest he sees a body hunched over on a tree.As he approaches and sees what it is a face of horror plays across his face.Shinobu.His Twin brother.Killed.Slaughtered mercilessly. And in his chest was carved,"Orochi Bandits."...Tears started to fall down his face as fast as his heart began to race.He was furious.He darted home as fast as he possibly could.Within minutes he arrived."MOTHER?FATHER,HARUHI,KYOYA?SHINOBU IS DEAD!!!" "WHAT!" Asked a panicking mother.His older brother by 4 years Kyoya came rushing down the stairs.Hajime fell to his knees for he could no longer stand on his own."Hajime!Why do you babble about this nonsense?" Shouted a not very amused father. "TRUST ME FATHER...S-s-shinobu is dead." he said with tears streaming down his cheeks. "WHO DID IT! WHERE IS YOUR PROOF?" questioned his father again. "T-he Orochi B-bandits did it." "DAMMIT!" Shouted his older brother Kyoya.Hajime's mother was on the ground in her purple silk kimono crying with her face hidden.
As they arrived at the site where Shinobu's body was they found nothing but small traces of blood.Shinobu's body was gone.They were being watched....Kyoya,Hajime,His Father...were surrounded..
DUHM DUHM DUUUHHMM!! TO BE CONTINUED!!!:mrgreen:
09-26-2009, 02:20 PM
Chapter 2. The hidden beast of children..
As the enemy advanced more and more,Kyoya became more and more nervous.He has never faced more than 4 enemies at a time.Suddenly,out of the shadows an Orochi Bandit attacked Hajime.Hajime ducked,grabbed his leg,slammed him to the ground and punched him in the throat.Permanatly immobilizing him.Then all of them started to attack.Hajime's father let off a giant chakra burst sending multiple enemies flying away.Kyoya performed his most pwerful jutsu just to get the fight out of the way. "Fire Style:TWIN SNAKES,FIERY DRAGON DEATH!".This attack almost wiped out the entire troupe.As they began to retreat Hajime went berserk."YOU COWARDS,YOU TAKE MY BROTHER'S LIFE AND YOU WON'T EVEN FACE ME!!!COME ON COME BACK!!!WUSSES!" This piqued the curiosity in about 10 or so adversaries.As soon as they turned around,Hajime's eyes turned goldish with a slit for a pupil.The wolf eyes of death.Hajime bellowed out a B-rank jutsu. "RAITON:TWIN SHADOW CLONE ELECTRIFIED SMASH!!!!!"..He killed the remaining attackers."We should follow them." Stated his father.And with two nods of the heads,the trio was off.
WWWWWWWEEEELLL G2G FOR NOW....something about my mom being mad and calling me "not part of the family"
09-26-2009, 02:22 PM
Chapter 3.Another tragedy.Outburst of an enraged adolesence.
As they were pursuing the enemy Koyaya noticed some thing about the enemies direction."They keep turning,and their arms are making wierd movements." Hajime noticed this as well. "Father,maybe we shouldnot pursue them any further,they will show up again." "NO!" shouted his father. "THEY MURDERED YOUR BROTHER,MY SON,AND YOU WANT TO TURN BACK!YOUR NO SON OF MINE!" Hajime looked down at this...eventually those words pierced his heart.He stopped.Looked at his father."Why are you always so cross towards me.Nothing i do makes you happy,why?"...His father stopped.His long red hair flowing in the wind.His face forever a frown is instilled.His Clothes,rustled."What did you say boy?" he questioned."I SAID NOTHING I DO IS GOD ENOUGH FOR YOU,WHY IS THAT!?" his father rushed to him,grabbed his throat and threw him into a tree."IF YOU EVER SPEAK TO ME OUT OF LINE AGAIN I WONT BE AS GENTLE!" staring at his father with scornful eyes,Hajime said boldly."I have had it with you,I refuse to go on living like this.We are the richest people in the village and you treat me like im scum on the street.No,no more.I'm out of here.I'm going to find and kill the bandits on my own." With a swift and unexpected kick to his father's face,Hajime disappeared.
09-26-2009, 02:23 PM
Chapter 4.Saviour...A fallen comrade...alive!?
"Hmpf! His kick needs improvement,but his form is amazing." his father stated.Kyoya stared in amazement and awe at his father,last time Hajime kicked Kyoya he had to eat through a straw for a week.As soon as they started to advance again and explosion went off,and Kyoya and his father were tied together by purple chakra threads.The bandits approached them....ready to kill.Suddenly a tall lanky figure appeared from behind a tree,still hidden in the trees shadow.He was about 5'8,,,Hajime's size..Suddenly he spoke."Hello father."
Hajime heard the explosion."Dammit,looks like i have to see what it is." He darted back incredibly fast.When he arrived he saw someone that resembled him.'No,it couldn't be...' he thought.He jumped into the air getting ready to kick the figure.The person grabbed his leg punched him in the stomache 2 time and threw him to the ground,cracking 4 of his ribs and temporarily unconcious.
09-26-2009, 02:24 PM
Chapter 5.Reunion.Tough decision.
"Hmpf.Weak fool." Kyoya averted his stunned gaze over to Shinobu."How could you?What is this about?" Shinobu staered at him like a aby would a stranger. "This is for revenge.Does that answer your question?"....."You traitorous runt! What revenge could you possibly want?!" I want revenge against you!You are always so arrogant and evil.I also know you prevented mother from being pregnant!You killed the unborn child...you're a muderer."
Below them an injured Hajime woke up and listened to the conversation.His eyes lit up with hate.He could not believe what he was hearing.Despite the enormous pain in his side he managed to jump up to the level of the others."Is this true father?" A small pause of silence was followed by."Yes." His father lowered his head.Shinobu finally said. "Well if it bother you that much i will just kill you." Shinobu grabbed a kunai out of his pouch and began to bring it downwith incredible speed only to be met by a fist to the face from Hajime.It sent him flying off of the tree onto the floor."WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU HAJIME!?" "I WON'T LET YOU KILL HIM NO MATTER HOW PITIFUL AND IDIOTIC HE IS!" Hajime jumped down next to Shinobu.A strike of pain hit him,forcing him to kneel down.'Damn,my ribs are broken.' He thought. Shinobu appeared in front of Hajime and delivered a crushing blow to the left side of his face.This caused Hajime to smash into a tree."Lightning style:Lightning prison!" Hajime shouted,then a lightning barrier formed around Shinobu."HA!" Hajime shouted. The barrier exploded and Shinobu was nowhere to be found.Hajime was kicked in the back of the head then Shinobu shouted "Earthe Style:MUDSLIDE SLAM!" Hajime was hit by a giant pile of mud that instanlty solidified as it touched an object.
"Well,time to die brother.You could have lived if you had joined me.Shinobu raised a 4 point kunai.usually used to commit treason, and brought it down.
DUHM DUHM DUHM!! SEE YOU NEXT TIME AND YOU WILL FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS!:mrgreen:
09-26-2009, 02:26 PM
Chapter 6.The escape.
Hajime barely had time to dodge the attack.He bit Shinobu's hand as the kunai was lodged into the solidified mud.Shinobu shouted in pain and released the jutsu.As the mud melted away Hajime rushed at Shinobu.Shinobu side stepped Hajime and kick him in the stomache,then he punched him in the ribs sending him flying into a tree and swearing in pain."Shinobu im so gonna KICK YOUR PANSY ASS!" Hajime got up,stared a Shinobu,and did the most unexpected thing.Stab himself.Shinobu stared in awe.But suddenly there is a poof and Hajime is behind him and kicks him in the spinal cord,temporarily paralyzing him."Lightning style:small binding pillars." A cage of lightning surrounded Shinobu and contained him as Hajime went to free his father and Kyoya.As he finally gets the threads off he hears an explosion and Shinobu is gone...forever swearing vengence on his twin...forever.Then Hajime collapses from over fighting with broken limbs.He passes out.
HOPE U GUYS ENJOID IT!!!:mrgreen:
09-26-2009, 02:27 PM
Chapter 7.The decision.
Hajime woke up in a hospital bed,being treated for multiple serious wounds.He tried to move but the pain was so excrutiating he almost swore so loud that the lobby might have heard it.Just then Kyoya walked into the room."Hajime-kun,we need to talk." said Kyoya. "Anout what nii-san?"There was a momentaral pause,then Kyoya said,"Well since Shinobu got away,he is now a missing-nin...to be killed on sight,And since you were fighting him it is your job to kill him. Hajime was horror struck. "No,I won't do it" Kyoya's eyes almost closed."I'm afraid you can't....They will kill you instead if you don't kill him.Even if you are the youngest Jounin or genius in the village it wont make much of a difference of what you say. Hajime looked at his feet from under the hospital covers,he looked at Kyoya and said "I will leave the village then." "WHAT! HAJIME THAT IS PERPOSTUROUS!I WILL NOT ALLOW YOU TO LEAVE!" "You can not stop me Kyoya."
(The next day)
Hajime's wounds were all healed up.He woke up in the middle of the night,grabbed his on raiton katana and started to leave the house.Hajime was almost out of the village when Kyoya was there waiting for him."I told you,you will not leave." Hajime was not in the best of moods ,so he took out his large raiton blade and did a 360 degree spin,bud disappeared and reappeared behind Kyoya with the blade to his throat.Kyoya kicked Hajime in the stomache flying about 2.5 meters."If your are so intent on leaving,then go.I understand how much you want to leave now,so leave,and dont come back until Shinobu is dead." "BUT HE IS YOUR BROTHER TOO KYOYA!WHY DO YOU WANT HIM DEAD?" "He threatend to kill us.That is reason enough." And with those final words Kyoya disappeared and Hajime left the village.
THIS WAS AMAZERFUL!!:geek:
09-26-2009, 02:28 PM
WHEW!!OK ALLL POSTED...chapter 8 will be here soon.
09-27-2009, 07:54 PM
Chapter 8.A newfound power.
After running about 3 hours Hajime saw the sun starting to rise behind the near but still distant jagged mountain peaks.As Hajime was about to leave the forest he sensed two huge chakras coming his way very quickly.'Damn.' He thought.The last thing he needed right now was a fight.He looked to the left and to the right and then he jumped up,and two figures clashed into eachother,but within that split second the figures used the speed and velocity to propel each other into the air using there feet.They grabbed onto Hajime.they each had one leg in each hand, and threw him down hard to the forst floor.Blood was pouring from Hajime's forehead.He struggled to get up and barely managed to dodge the next 2 attacks from his adversaries.Then he counter another attck.He grabbed on of their legs and pulled it down.He rushed up to their face and gave an incredibly hard punch,that if it were a normal human,it would have died.But the attacker just looked dazed and punched Hajime back in the face.As the next attacker came to finish Hajime off a black wolf appeared out of nowhere and slashed the oncoming attacker in the face and then bit down on Hajime's collar and disappeared.
Hajime looked up to find himself in a place full of wolves."W-who are you?" Hajime barely managed to say as the blood ran past his eye."My name is Zero (ゼロ),"said a large grayish whitish wolf."Now be quiet."Hajime saw 12 wolves and a human/wolf.there were 3 black wolves,3 white wolves,3 gray wolves, and one yellow one bluee and one red wolf.The wolf boy was about 13."Zero,what have you done!?"Shouted a white wolf."He was going to be killed!!" Retorted Zero.."Well you should have left him to be killed,for his death shall be much worse now."
DUHM DUHM DUUUHHMM! yeah i know..intense right.
09-27-2009, 07:55 PM
holy crap! thats alot of words!!!!1
09-27-2009, 07:56 PM
holy crap! thats alot of words!!!!1
yup...i redid this 3 times due to major setbacks.
09-27-2009, 08:05 PM
09-27-2009, 08:50 PM
thnx..the other three were much longer than this though.
09-28-2009, 04:07 AM
coolio! my dude is here!
09-28-2009, 09:46 AM
coolio! My dude is here!
09-28-2009, 02:30 PM
im gonna upload a picture i drew of him too.
09-28-2009, 02:36 PM
im gonna upload a picture i drew of him too.
awesome!..did u see my characters piktuh?
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