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darkXotaku
09-26-2009, 01:04 AM
this is my story. ^^yeah thats righ i wrote a story, i wrote it during math class.
ok so my charcters name is Kira Soto. shes 17 years old.
has red hair with matching cat ears, and has purple eyes.
and has a tatto of a dragon spiraling up her arm.
is an A rank assasin (would be S if she didnt goof off so much)
Partners name is Zoah, hes a perv but is also serious, reads loveless.
She wears a blue tanktop with a netted shirt underneath,wears black slashed skinny jeansand wears 5 inch black leather platform boots wich have spikes on the bottom (kinda like the pro golfer ones excapt the spikes are pointy)and have buckles all the way up the leg.
she has fire and water element, and is awsome at genjutsu, is only moderet at tai jutsu though.here ill tell u a secret that even she doesnt know.. within her she harbors a ancient cat demon named Zero.
ill draw a pic of her and post it up later.

Sharingan_Kakashi_Hatake
09-26-2009, 01:17 AM
this is my story. ^^yeah thats righ i wrote a story, i wrote it during math class.
ok so my charcters name is Kira Soto. shes 17 years old.
has red hair with matching cat ears, and has purple eyes.
is an A rank assasin (would be S if she didnt goof off so much)
Partners name is Zoah, hes a perv but is also serious, reads loveless.
She wears a blue tanktop with a netted shirt underneath,wears black slashed skinny jeansand wears 5 inch black leather platform boots wich have spikes on the bottom (kinda like the pro golfer ones excapt the spikes are pointy)and have buckles all the way up the leg.
she has fire and water element, and is awsome at genjutsu, is only moderet at tai jutsu though.here ill tell u a secret that even she doesnt know.. within her she harbors a ancient cat demon named Zero.
ill draw a pic of her and post it up later.
nice.

darkXotaku
09-26-2009, 01:19 AM
yeah ill probably start typing up the story soon, i just need my editor to read it. *cough* *cough* disaster, that lazy ass.

Sharingan_Kakashi_Hatake
09-26-2009, 01:22 AM
yeah ill probably start typing up the story soon, i just need my editor to read it. *cough* *cough* disaster, that lazy ass.
oh ILL BE THE EDITOR!!:mrgreen:

darkXotaku
09-26-2009, 01:23 AM
fine ill type it up and pm it too u and u tell me if i should changre anything or not.

Taker369
09-26-2009, 01:24 AM
hmmmm.

darkXotaku
09-26-2009, 01:26 AM
yeah.

Inofanboy
09-26-2009, 01:27 AM
lol nice story.:p

darkXotaku
09-26-2009, 01:29 AM
thank you ^^

Inofanboy
09-26-2009, 01:29 AM
no prob.

darkXotaku
09-26-2009, 01:33 AM
^^ arigato

Taker369
09-26-2009, 01:42 AM
walks out.

darkXotaku
09-26-2009, 10:51 AM
Part 1
The enemys aproach,geting closer and closer, eyes glowing yellow,smirks shining in the darkness. "Here kitty kitty kitty!" one of them taunted in a gruff voice. "Shut up! Ill kill you!"Screamed ared haired girl who had cat ears upon her head. "You cant kill all of us, lil' ;););););) cat!" another one shouted."oh yeah! Ibet i can!" She shouted confidently while bareing her fangs and rushing towards them."Kira, Kira." the earth begins to shake.She grabs on to the rock next to her for dear life. "Kira, Kira" Fissures in the earth open up,showing the depths of hell within them. The yellow eyed monstersslowly got swallowes up, by the fissures.In fear of being swalowed up aswell shedug her clawsimnto the stone she was holding on to."Oww!""Kira wake the ... up!"

darkXotaku
09-26-2009, 10:52 AM
there is part 1 4 yas ^^

darkXotaku
09-29-2009, 05:26 PM
Part 2
With those words Kiras eyes opened to see her angry partner glareing at her. "God Kira! Yuneed to wake up easier, we have a mission!"her blue eyed partner Zoah shouted.Kira yawned, "sorry, wait we have a mission!?" "dont you rember at dinner last night, we got assigned another mission?" Zoah asked."Umm, ..i rember i had miso ramen,with stake on the side" she replied. Zoah sighed, "thats all you think of, food isnt it?" he said angerly, and stands up. "im sorry ok!" Kira said apologeticly. "Lets just go." Zoah says as he gets up and walks out of the narrow ally."Wait!" Kira yells as she gets up from the cardboard box she was sleeping on. "Soo, who are we after this time?" she asks when she catches up. "We are after a man named Chow Lang, he was sentenced to exicution but he escaped, and we have to recapture him." kiras now inthused her ears standing tall, "Cool! What kind of exicution huh? Drowning, hanging, posin, ..the bloody eagle?" she aske excitedly. "Guillotine." Zoah responds with one word, completly emotionless." hehe guillotine' she giggles as she flashes a toothy grin,"I think ill stick around for this exicution." " Not if we get another mission." Zoah responded quickly. "Come onnnm!!!!1" Kira whined, "please" "No." Zoah responded with a sting in his voice. Her ears flatten against her head,"spoil sport" she said

darkXotaku
09-29-2009, 05:29 PM
Part 3
After an hour of walking silently."So, Kirawhy didnt you sleep in the hotel room?" Zoah said, "It took me forever to find you even with the tracking device." "I donty lik- wait tracking device?!?!" Kira exclaimed. "Yeahthere's one in your radio, u didnt know that?" "Radio?" " The one in your choker." Zoah said pointing to the chocker Kira was wearing, and giving kira a look that said 'your such a retard'. "oh.. why did they put a tracker in it and not tell me, i though Boss trusted me." "Cause you probably wouldnt have worn it if they told you.." Zoah sighed. "No!.. i wouldnt have she said sheepishly. "See my point?" Zoah said "".. i guess, bu still.." Kira wimpered. "Anyways, why dont you sleep in hotels?" Zoah asked "This is the third time i found you sleeping on a card board box in an ally." "Bad expeerience...." Kira replied. "Tell me" Zoah demanded" "Fine. You know that one reconassense mission we did last year?" "Yeah, the one where i was a host to Hitsugami springs?" Zoah asked."Yeah that one, i had to be a stupid maid." kira says as shee swatdrops. "being a miad i got to see the dark secrets of the hotel buisness." she says as she shivers. "What are these "dark secerts" you speak of" Zoah asked. "well.. they only clean the blankets and comferters like once a month, or longer, they clean really crapily, and ... u dont want to know the last one." Kira said quivering."Ewww?" said Zoah grossed out. "I Know, and that why i dont stay in hotels any more, especially the cheap ones the Boss pays for" Kira responded."Yeah....." Zoah said. And thus the akward scilance began.[/

Taker369
09-29-2009, 10:50 PM
awsome job girl.

darkXotaku
09-30-2009, 07:01 AM
thank you thats what school does to me ^^

?ink?
10-01-2009, 06:38 PM
this is my story. ^^yeah thats righ i wrote a story, i wrote it during math class.
ok so my charcters name is Kira Soto. shes 17 years old.
has red hair with matching cat ears, and has purple eyes.
and has a tatto of a dragon spiraling up her arm.
is an A rank assasin (would be S if she didnt goof off so much)
Partners name is Zoah, hes a perv but is also serious, reads loveless.
She wears a blue tanktop with a netted shirt underneath,wears black slashed skinny jeansand wears 5 inch black leather platform boots wich have spikes on the bottom (kinda like the pro golfer ones excapt the spikes are pointy)and have buckles all the way up the leg.
she has fire and water element, and is awsome at genjutsu, is only moderet at tai jutsu though.here ill tell u a secret that even she doesnt know.. within her she harbors a ancient cat demon named Zero.
ill draw a pic of her and post it up later.
....go on O.O
(wats an assasin)

miss sakura
10-01-2009, 07:21 PM
wow thank you its very nice

darkXotaku
10-04-2009, 05:10 PM
your welcome?
i tottaly forgot what i did.

darkXotaku
10-04-2009, 05:14 PM
....go on O.O
(wats an assasin)
an assasin is aperson who is highered to kill, or capture people, and sometimes various odd jobs. an assasin is another word for a mercenari.

darkXotaku
10-04-2009, 05:20 PM
Part 4
A bit later, "... Hmmm now that i think about it the reason u couldnt be a host was that your ears would have scared people away... haha mabey you should just go loose l them." starts laughing really hard. "ZOAH YOU PERV!" Kira shouts as she hits him with the un sharp side of her sord."oww..." Zoah coplaines as he rubs the back of his head.Kira blushes and looks away "Plus it doesnt work that way..." "So you dont lose your ears when you loose your virginity? So have y-?"
Kira cuts him off with another smack of her blade. "Thats none of your buisness." "Gee sorry." Her partner says in a sarcastic tone.And thus the walk became a tense and silent one.

darkXotaku
10-05-2009, 04:52 PM
Part 5
"Ummm so what does our guy look like?" Kira asked. "Here is his profile" Zoah said as he handed Kira a manila envlope. "hmm... 23, 5'9, green eyes, virgo... Omg!" Kira said as she scaned the info. "What?!" Zoah asked franticly. "He... has .. a moustash! Thats soo awsome!" Kira shouted excitedly."really now..." Zoah said as he mushroom sighed. "Duuude, what if i had a moustash?" she says as she uses her hair to simulate a moustash. "No ears and a tail are enough, ....did you have an energy drink?" Zoah asked. Kira quickly hides a Monster behind her back and smiles sweetly. "Nooo..." "Give it!" Zoah demanded, holding out his hand. Kira reluctently gave it to him. Zoah takes it and throws it across the field. "Litter bug!" Kira shouts. "Get back to your reading." Zoah demanded. "Fine... hehe" she giggled after a while of reading. "What now?" Zoah asked annoyed. "The Hidden in the Sunflowers Village really? It sounds weak. Why dont something more intimidating like, umm.. Yellow Death Village?" Kira said hyperly. "no more energy drinks for you, and call it by its proper name, Village Hidden in the Sunflowers." Zoah said angerly. "Hehe death flower village." Kira said snickering. "What ever you will get jumped if you call it that when we get there, we are only a few miles away so straiten up." Zoah said "Alright" Kira says as she sighs."this is going to be boreing" she says to herself.

darkXotaku
10-10-2009, 02:33 PM
T.T no ones reading my story this is just sad.

?ink?
11-04-2009, 08:19 PM
this one forgot bout it xD

?ink?
11-04-2009, 08:24 PM
Part 5
"Ummm so what does our guy look like?" Kira asked. "Here is his profile" Zoah said as he handed Kira a manila envlope. "hmm... 23, 5'9, green eyes, virgo... Omg!" Kira said as she scaned the info. "What?!" Zoah asked franticly. "He... has .. a moustash! Thats soo awsome!" Kira shouted excitedly."really now..." Zoah said as he mushroom sighed. "Duuude, what if i had a moustash?" she says as she uses her hair to simulate a moustash. "No ears and a tail are enough, ....did you have an energy drink?" Zoah asked. Kira quickly hides a Monster behind her back and smiles sweetly. "Nooo..." "Give it!" Zoah demanded, holding out his hand. Kira reluctently gave it to him. Zoah takes it and throws it across the field. "Litter bug!" Kira shouts. "Get back to your reading." Zoah demanded. "Fine... hehe" she giggled after a while of reading. "What now?" Zoah asked annoyed. "The Hidden in the Sunflowers Village really? It sounds weak. Why dont something more intimidating like, umm.. Yellow Death Village?" Kira said hyperly. "no more energy drinks for you, and call it by its proper name, Village Hidden in the Sunflowers." Zoah said angerly. "Hehe death flower village." Kira said snickering. "What ever you will get jumped if you call it that when we get there, we are only a few miles away so straiten up." Zoah said "Alright" Kira says as she sighs."this is going to be boreing" she says to herself.
lolz xD monster

darkXotaku
11-07-2009, 06:19 PM
i know ^^

?ink?
11-21-2009, 01:51 PM
so is the setting today but somewere else

darkXotaku
11-21-2009, 03:03 PM
wat? im confused. its settend in the same time period as naruto is.. when ever that is.

?ink?
11-21-2009, 11:12 PM
oh xD i get it now
sweet

darkXotaku
11-23-2009, 04:33 PM
yup. ^^

darkXotaku
11-25-2009, 06:52 PM
part 6
Soon the pair arrive at a pair of massive gates wwith the words "Hidden in the Sunflowers Village"inscribed across them, and surrounding these gates was a large medow that wasd covered with sunflowers that were dancing with the wind. "Wow.. I see where they got the name." Kira said astounded. "Yeah" responded Zoah in an emotionless voice."Excuse me. we are tavlers who wish to stay in this village" he called to the Gates keeper. "Do you have passes?"the gate kepper responded." Yes we do" Kira said as she pulled out a pass and flashed it to the guard. "Alright you may go. Open the gates"called the gatekeeper to his commrad. The gate opened in front of them." You may go in. " He said, bowing."Arigato kosai masu. (thank you very much)" replied kira bowing back."Come on!" Zoah said already entering the village.

darkXotaku
11-25-2009, 06:57 PM
Part 7
"We heve to go meet the Solkage," Zoah said."Okay wheres the office?" Kira asked curiously. "Right in front of you.. the tallest building in town" Zoah said as he sweet drooped."Ohhh..okay." Kira smiled. "Lets just go" he said shaking his head. They walk towards the large yellow building in the center of the town.
In the solkages office,"State your buisness here." stated a gruff old man wearing the formal -kage robes. "Wow... i thought people here would be kinder" Kira wispered to her partner. "Shhh" Zoah replied quietly. "We are here to track down a criminal that is said to be hiding among this village." Zoah said in a formal tone. "Very well you are granted to stay here until you catch this person." the solkage replied."Thank you" both Kira and Zoahreplied bowing in perfect harmony.But qas kira bowed her hat fell off, and exposed her soft red cat ears.Zoah and Kira turned to leave un awear of what just happened. "Wait!!" called the man stand ing beside the solkage. "Hmm?" Kira and aZoah say as they turn around. zoah notices the hat on the floor and does the math. "crap!" he says under his breath. "Solkage-sama, I thought demons were not allowed within this village? And your just going to let one in just like that!" the man prolaimed pointing at Kira. "Demon?! What are you talking about?!?" Kira asked.

Bacon
11-26-2009, 02:50 PM
cant wait dark xD

darkXotaku
11-27-2009, 02:37 PM
alright! ill post the next part soon!!!!

?ink?
11-30-2009, 05:26 PM
*waits =D*

darkXotaku
11-30-2009, 09:11 PM
it will be out by the end of this week.. i hope >.>