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Sasuke/Itachi
09-20-2009, 12:51 PM
This is a fanfic. It is about 3 Jonin from the village hidden in the fire who are sent by their kage to look for a man that can stop a great threat of the darkness. During their journey they end up helping out villages and battleing a mysurious organization.

Characters:
Yoshio
gender: girl
rank: Jonin
afflation: Fire village
clan: Phys
abilities: She is a phsic she can everything a phsic can do besides seeing the future.
chakra nature: Lightning

mandamuru
gender:boy
rank:Jonin
afflation: fire village
clan: Douyoubi
abilities: His clan is master of Earth style jutsu. He fights with a huge sword(About the size of Kisame's) by using his chakra and cause Earthquakes with it.
chakra nature: Earth


Lin
gender:boy
rank: Jonin
clan: He is not it a special clan with KG
abilities: He is a normal Jonin but is the most skilled Jonin.
chakra nature: wind and water


story:

The begining arc:

prolouge:Three ninja are walking to their kage mansion. They enter the bulding and walk up the stairs and inside thweir kage's office. A elderly man about the age of 70 was sitting in a chair. He is the Kasaikage of the village hidden in the fire. "Yoshio, Lin, and Mandamaru you guys are my most skilled,talented, and powerful Jonin. I'm sending you guys on a very improtant mission. You know how there is alot of storms lately and after every storm small monster would attack. I want you to look for a person name kango. He has the secret of all of this. This is an S-rank mission." said the Kasaikage.
"O.K" said the 3 Jonin. They all headed out the village and begin to search for him. They cross their land border but a person apears and about to attack them. Yoshio says" i read his mind he is going to charge at us". So the 3 Jonin prepares for a battle.


To be continued.

Chapter 1 the battle againts the rogue
Chapter 1 the mysturius rogue

The rogue ninja took out a sword from his cloak and he charges at Lin. Lin takes out his Kunai and they clash. Lin transfer somee chakra into the kunai. The kunai glow with chakra sorounding it. It broke through the sword but the rogue punch Lin to a tree. Mandamaru apears behind the rogue and strike him with his sword. The rogue easily dodge the attacks and the sword hits the ground. The part of the ground craked and the Earth shook so Yoshio and Mandamaru jumped above the trees with Lin on a tree. The rogue fell down while Lin jumped off the trees.
The ground stop shaking so Yoshio landed on the ground and uses Lightning style:Lightning monster. Lightning striked behind Yoshio then when the smoke cleared a beast made out off Ligthning was there and charges at the rogue. The rogue stood there and once the lightning beast tackles the rogue smoke apears. Once the smoke cleared the beast was gone but a roasted log was there. The rogue apears behind Yoshio. "Gah subsitution" she said and he rogue throw a punch at her but she blocked it and threw the rogue on the ground.
"I'm a physic I read your mind. I knew the subsitution was coming so I used my weakest jutsu on you. So I won't be wasting chakra." she explain. The rogue got up with Lin about 5 meters behind him and Mandamaru atleast 10 meters infront of him. "Your weakest jutsu that jutsu almost killed me?!" said the rogue in shock. " Yoshio maybe be a women but she is strong" stated Mandamaru performing a hand sign. He used headhunter jutsu to go underground. Lin smiles and throws a chakra Kunai at the rogue. The rogue jump to dodge it and the chakra kunais a tree but goe through it and it hits a bolder. The bolder cracked. The rogue landed on the ground but he was shock because his feet was grabbed and pulled underground. Mandaramru uses headhunter jutsu at come back from underground. "Hmph you falled in my trap. I left my sword there I'll use my chakra to move it causing the ground to shake with you in it. This was not much of a fight" explain Mandamaru. He waved his hands and in a few seconds the ground shook. The three ninja jump on the trees while the rogue is underground. Mandamaru waved his hand again and his sword apears from underground and landed in his hands. But out of the sudden the ground cracked and it becamse wide. Then the roue apears by using head hunter jutsu."Gah" yelled Mandamaru.
But Lin appear behind the rogue and kicked him to fall on the ground. The ground stop shaking. Yoshio uses a hand sign and closes her eyes and uses Physic style:Mind wave blast. The rogue started to yell out in pain. Yoshio opens her eyes and the rogue stoped yelling. "Iblasted your mind by my physic abilities." said Yoshio.
The rogue got up and he perform a hand sign and yells out"Sommoning jutsu:Portal open". A small portal apears besides the rogue. the three ninja was shock to see it. Some darkcloud came from behind the portal and goes through Lin. Lin tries to fight it but he was disabled and he blacked out. The dark clouds return in the protal. "Hahaha. You guys are interesting. See ya later" said the rogue. The rogue goes int he portal and it closes.
"What was that?" asked Manamaru. "I read his mind. It was a chakra cloud." relied Yoshio. Mandamaru put Lin on his back and says" We got to take him to a hospital. Where is the closet village?" asked Mandamaru. Yoshio replies" The village hidden in the Ocean.". They begin to run to the village. Once they got there they found the hospital and put Lin in a bed.

To Be Continued.


The village hidden in the ocean arc:


chapter 2: the destruction of the oceanchapter 2: The destruction of the ocean

Yoshio and Mandamaru took Lin to the village hidden in the fire. They layed Lin on a hospital bed. Yoshio and Mandamaru stands outside Lins room door talking. "Who was that man" asked Mandamaru. "I read his mine. His name is Syd. He is a rogue ninja from the village hidden in the storm." answered Yoshio.
"But what was that portal. Also what was that chakra cloud came from?" ask Mandamuru. "I don't know Manda" replied Yoshio. The 2 ninja were quit for a few seconds then BOOM!!!. "What was that" aksed Manda in shock. "Most likely a fight lets go check it out" replied Yoshio. The 2 fire village ninja ran into Lins room and looked out the window. They saw smoke in the village. Yoshio and Mandamru jumped out the window and jump to building to building towards the smoke. Once they reached the location of the smoke it cleared up. They saw a street with a bunch of shops. In the cnter of it there was a small crater on the ground. There was a person in a black cloak and the person is wearing a hood. The hood shadow covered his face so you couldn't see his face. The person looked like a man. The cloaked man performed a hand sign.
Yoshio sees this and she jumps in the crater with Mandamru while he took out his sword. The cloaked man used Fire style: phoenix vortex jutsu. Fire apears about 10 feet behind him and forms into a bird. Then the fire bird flies around the cloak man. It went faster then faster then faster. The cloak man points at a building. The building has a counter and ovens behind the counter it was a ramn shop. The fire bird charges at the building and it crash into. The building caught on fire and the fire bird flied out of the fire and circled the cloak man again. " Manda use boulder jutsu " comanded Yoshio. Mandamru perform a hand sign and uses Earth style: Boulder shelter. Part of the grounds apears from undergound and covers Yoshi and Mnadamru. BOOM!!!! The earth prtecting Mandamru and Yoshio return underground. Mandamru gasp. All the buildings on the street is on fire and it is spreading acrsoos the village. Yashio jumped on a building that is about to catch on fire and see a whole bunch of people outside he gates of the village. It seems the village is safe. Yoshio spot 5 people in a bed on wheels. Lin must be one of the 5. She jumped down next to Mandamru.
" You have manage to survive the attack. The village evactuated too. The village's Jonin should be coming soon I'm going to end this village." said the cloak man. " What do you want. What do you have againts this village." asked Mandamaru in disgust. " Nothing." said the claok figure. " Then why are you attacking this village?" asked Yoshio. "I'm sent on a mission. This is all I'll tell you" replied the cloaked man.
The cloak man raised his hand and all the fire in the village travels behind the coaked man and begin to form. " All the fire in the village is combining and forming anything you can't never imagine" said the cloak man. The fire then transform into a giant fire bird. It is alteast 1000 meters tall. 'ow will we defeat that?" asked Mandamaru.
Then out of the sudden there was a yelled that said"Water style: sommoning monster of the lake. The voice apeared behind Manamru and Yoshio they looked behind themselves and they saw a blue reptile like water monster. There was a person on it. Mandamru and Yoshio was shocked to see Lin standing on it.


chapter 3: Stricking sunChapter 3: Sticking sun

"Lin what are you doing here.?!" asked Madamaru shocked. "It is O.K Manda. All I need was sleep." said Lin. Yoshio and Mandamaru nodded then they look at the cloak man and the giant fire bird. The fire bird roared. It flapp it wings and it flied about 20 meters above the air. " fire againts water hmmm. It seems unfair. Bu it doesn't matter" said the cloak man. The cloak man lifted his hand and grabed the tip of his hood and he took it off revailing his face. He had orange hair, green eyes, his skin is white.
"Now it is time to revail the true power of I Kanji. The master of fire." said the cloak man who is Kanji. " Are you ready water Kaiju" asked Lin. "Yes I am" answer Kaiju the water monster. Lin perform a hand sign and use wtaer style: wtaer pump. The wtaer monster open its mouse and wtaer blasted out at the fire bird. The bird flies backwards and it open its beak and it spit out fire at the blast. It created steam. Lin perform a hand sign and use wind style: wind slash on the steam to clear it up.
The fire bird flapp it wings and two wheels of fire about 50 meters tall apears. It begins to turn and it goes towards in and Kaiju. Kaiju jumps and wtaer style: hydration with Lin. Once the two fire hweels hit them they urn to water and steam apears. The water reforms back to Lin and Kaiju. It beins to rain.
" Yes. Lin the rain will power the down the bird. " said Yoshio. Lin takes out his katanas and jumps off Kaiju and charges at Kanji with them. Kanji sees this so he takes out his sword but it was made out of fire. Lins stills charges at Kanji he transfer chakra to the sword using his ability to add transfer chakra and he clash with the fire sword but once it hit the Kanji's fire swords water splash out of the sudden destroying the sword. Kanji jumps about 10 meters away from Lin. "What the?! How did you?!" asked Kanji in shock. " Well it seems you specialize in fire. I was hiding in the shadows after you burned down this village. I saw when you used that phoenix justu of yours and how you created this bird. So I know your chakra nature is fire. So I use my ability to transfer my chakra. So I added my water chakra to my sword in the rain gave it power. So that is how the splash occurs so the fire is destroys your sword because it was made out of fire." explain Lin.
"Damn" yelled out Kanji. He looked up at the water monster it is completly made out of water while it keeps on growing. " This is the water monster famous justu. Ultimate hydation' said Lin. It stop raining and Kaiju was about 10000 meters tall. It raised its hand and it punches the bird destroying it. "Nooooo!!!!" yelled Kanji. " Yoshi teleports next to Kanji and push him down and akes out her sword and hold the tip of it to his neck and says" Who are you working for". " I'm part of the organization called the stricking sun" Confess Kanji.
Yoshio lefts up her sowrd and puts it away. Kanji stands up perform a hand sign and he jumps about 50 meters high and he charges up the sky like a comet and it headed towards north. They lost sight of him.
After that they get rid of the fire and Mandamaru uses Earth style:Justu to rebuild most of the buildings. The 3 ninja leaves the village.

To be continued

So how do you like it so far?

Sasuke/Itachi
09-20-2009, 12:52 PM
Chapter 1 is coming later today

Sasuke/Itachi
09-25-2009, 04:47 PM
Well here is an idea to tell you what it is about before I get the first chapter ready. The three ninja travel to look for a man who can stop the darkness during their journey they visit villages and help them out. They fight an organization called the rising sun and a rogue ninja who controls the dark chakra.


PM me if you want to know t=what the first chapter is about

Sasuke/Itachi
09-25-2009, 06:54 PM
Chapter 1 the mysturius rogue

The rogue ninja took out a sword from his cloak and he charges at Lin. Lin takes out his Kunai and they clash. Lin transfer somee chakra into the kunai. The kunai glow with chakra sorounding it. It broke through the sword but the rogue punch Lin to a tree. Mandamaru apears behind the rogue and strike him with his sword. The rogue easily dodge the attacks and the sword hits the ground. The part of the ground craked and the Earth shook so Yoshio and Mandamaru jumped above the trees with Lin on a tree. The rogue fell down while Lin jumped off the trees.
The ground stop shaking so Yoshio landed on the ground and uses Lightning style:Lightning monster. Lightning striked behind Yoshio then when the smoke cleared a beast made out off Ligthning was there and charges at the rogue. The rogue stood there and once the lightning beast tackles the rogue smoke apears. Once the smoke cleared the beast was gone but a roasted log was there. The rogue apears behind Yoshio. "Gah subsitution" she said and he rogue throw a punch at her but she blocked it and threw the rogue on the ground.
"I'm a physic I read your mind. I knew the subsitution was coming so I used my weakest jutsu on you. So I won't be wasting chakra." she explain. The rogue got up with Lin about 5 meters behind him and Mandamaru atleast 10 meters infront of him. "Your weakest jutsu that jutsu almost killed me?!" said the rogue in shock. " Yoshio maybe be a women but she is strong" stated Mandamaru performing a hand sign. He used headhunter jutsu to go underground. Lin smiles and throws a chakra Kunai at the rogue. The rogue jump to dodge it and the chakra kunais a tree but goe through it and it hits a bolder. The bolder cracked. The rogue landed on the ground but he was shock because his feet was grabbed and pulled underground. Mandaramru uses headhunter jutsu at come back from underground. "Hmph you falled in my trap. I left my sword there I'll use my chakra to move it causing the ground to shake with you in it. This was not much of a fight" explain Mandamaru. He waved his hands and in a few seconds the ground shook. The three ninja jump on the trees while the rogue is underground. Mandamaru waved his hand again and his sword apears from underground and landed in his hands. But out of the sudden the ground cracked and it becamse wide. Then the roue apears by using head hunter jutsu."Gah" yelled Mandamaru.
But Lin appear behind the rogue and kicked him to fall on the ground. The ground stop shaking. Yoshio uses a hand sign and closes her eyes and uses Physic style:Mind wave blast. The rogue started to yell out in pain. Yoshio opens her eyes and the rogue stoped yelling. "Iblasted your mind by my physic abilities." said Yoshio.
The rogue got up and he perform a hand sign and yells out"Sommoning jutsu:Portal open". A small portal apears besides the rogue. the three ninja was shock to see it. Some darkcloud came from behind the portal and goes through Lin. Lin tries to fight it but he was disabled and he blacked out. The dark clouds return in the protal. "Hahaha. You guys are interesting. See ya later" said the rogue. The rogue goes int he portal and it closes.
"What was that?" asked Manamaru. "I read his mind. It was a chakra cloud." relied Yoshio. Mandamaru put Lin on his back and says" We got to take him to a hospital. Where is the closet village?" asked Mandamaru. Yoshio replies" The village hidden in the Ocean.". They begin to run to the village. Once they got there they found the hospital and put Lin in a bed.

To Be Continued.



So how do you like it?

Anbu Leader
09-25-2009, 07:15 PM
wow i like it! kool nice job!

Sasuke/Itachi
09-25-2009, 07:16 PM
Thanks. I'm planning to use the villages in the war sytem and some villages I made up in my mind

Anbu Leader
09-25-2009, 07:24 PM
kool man! Yea i amthinking of making a village but the village i am right now it looks like i am avery the kage!

Sasuke/Itachi
09-25-2009, 07:52 PM
PM me if you want to know the order of villages and when they will appear in the fanfic

Rubberlipsjjrr
09-25-2009, 08:58 PM
ok dude

shadowatching
09-26-2009, 11:54 AM
add more, add more

Spark
09-26-2009, 12:04 PM
your a good writer

Sasuke/Itachi
09-26-2009, 03:08 PM
I'm going to start the village hidden in the ocean arc today or tomorrow. Here are th first 5 arcs in order



The begining(finish)
The village hidden in the ocean(Starts today)
The village hidden in the darkness
Village hidden in the Sakura arc
villlage hidden in the rythem arc

Nine
09-26-2009, 03:10 PM
I want a Ark!!

Sharingan_Kakashi_Hatake
09-26-2009, 03:14 PM
YEA GIVE ME AN ARC TOO!! IT SHOULD BE CALLED HAJIME SOTO ARC!! LOOK FOR MY CHARACTER IN MY POST!!:p

Sasuke/Itachi
09-26-2009, 05:05 PM
I want a Ark!!
I'll have the inferno village in it with you in it

Sasuke/Itachi
09-26-2009, 05:05 PM
YEA GIVE ME AN ARC TOO!! IT SHOULD BE CALLED HAJIME SOTO ARC!! LOOK FOR MY CHARACTER IN MY POST!!:p
I'll fit you in

Sasuke/Itachi
10-09-2009, 07:18 PM
chapter 2: The destruction of the ocean

Yoshio and Mandamaru took Lin to the village hidden in the fire. They layed Lin on a hospital bed. Yoshio and Mandamaru stands outside Lins room door talking. "Who was that man" asked Mandamaru. "I read his mine. His name is Syd. He is a rogue ninja from the village hidden in the storm." answered Yoshio.
"But what was that portal. Also what was that chakra cloud came from?" ask Mandamuru. "I don't know Manda" replied Yoshio. The 2 ninja were quit for a few seconds then BOOM!!!. "What was that" aksed Manda in shock. "Most likely a fight lets go check it out" replied Yoshio. The 2 fire village ninja ran into Lins room and looked out the window. They saw smoke in the village. Yoshio and Mandamru jumped out the window and jump to building to building towards the smoke. Once they reached the location of the smoke it cleared up. They saw a street with a bunch of shops. In the cnter of it there was a small crater on the ground. There was a person in a black cloak and the person is wearing a hood. The hood shadow covered his face so you couldn't see his face. The person looked like a man. The cloaked man performed a hand sign.
Yoshio sees this and she jumps in the crater with Mandamru while he took out his sword. The cloaked man used Fire style: phoenix vortex jutsu. Fire apears about 10 feet behind him and forms into a bird. Then the fire bird flies around the cloak man. It went faster then faster then faster. The cloak man points at a building. The building has a counter and ovens behind the counter it was a ramn shop. The fire bird charges at the building and it crash into. The building caught on fire and the fire bird flied out of the fire and circled the cloak man again. " Manda use boulder jutsu " comanded Yoshio. Mandamru perform a hand sign and uses Earth style: Boulder shelter. Part of the grounds apears from undergound and covers Yoshi and Mnadamru. BOOM!!!! The earth prtecting Mandamru and Yoshio return underground. Mandamru gasp. All the buildings on the street is on fire and it is spreading acrsoos the village. Yashio jumped on a building that is about to catch on fire and see a whole bunch of people outside he gates of the village. It seems the village is safe. Yoshio spot 5 people in a bed on wheels. Lin must be one of the 5. She jumped down next to Mandamru.
" You have manage to survive the attack. The village evactuated too. The village's Jonin should be coming soon I'm going to end this village." said the cloak man. " What do you want. What do you have againts this village." asked Mandamaru in disgust. " Nothing." said the claok figure. " Then why are you attacking this village?" asked Yoshio. "I'm sent on a mission. This is all I'll tell you" replied the cloaked man.
The cloak man raised his hand and all the fire in the village travels behind the coaked man and begin to form. " All the fire in the village is combining and forming anything you can't never imagine" said the cloak man. The fire then transform into a giant fire bird. It is alteast 1000 meters tall. 'ow will we defeat that?" asked Mandamaru.
Then out of the sudden there was a yelled that said"Water style: sommoning monster of the lake. The voice apeared behind Manamru and Yoshio they looked behind themselves and they saw a blue reptile like water monster. There was a person on it. Mandamru and Yoshio was shocked to see Lin standing on it.


To be contiunued

Sasuke/Itachi
10-09-2009, 07:19 PM
So how do you like it

Chidori stream
10-09-2009, 07:31 PM
Good so far

Sasuke/Itachi
10-10-2009, 03:17 PM
Here are all the arcs in order



The begining
The village hidden in the ocean
The village hidden in the darkness
Village hidden in the Sakura arc
villlage hidden in the rythem arc
village hidden in the wood arc
village hidden in the steam
village hidden in the setting sun arc
village hidden in the moonlight arc
The meeting of the kages
Stricking sun hidout the village hidden in the storm
The final battle 3 gaurdian ninja v.s darkness chakra
Epiouge
sneak peak of the sequel

Sasuke/Itachi
10-10-2009, 06:50 PM
Chapter 3: Sticking sun

"Lin what are you doing here.?!" asked Madamaru shocked. "It is O.K Manda. All I need was sleep." said Lin. Yoshio and Mandamaru nodded then they look at the cloak man and the giant fire bird. The fire bird roared. It flapp it wings and it flied about 20 meters above the air. " fire againts water hmmm. It seems unfair. Bu it doesn't matter" said the cloak man. The cloak man lifted his hand and grabed the tip of his hood and he took it off revailing his face. He had orange hair, green eyes, his skin is white.
"Now it is time to revail the true power of I Kanji. The master of fire." said the cloak man who is Kanji. " Are you ready water Kaiju" asked Lin. "Yes I am" answer Kaiju the water monster. Lin perform a hand sign and use wtaer style: wtaer pump. The wtaer monster open its mouse and wtaer blasted out at the fire bird. The bird flies backwards and it open its beak and it spit out fire at the blast. It created steam. Lin perform a hand sign and use wind style: wind slash on the steam to clear it up.
The fire bird flapp it wings and two wheels of fire about 50 meters tall apears. It begins to turn and it goes towards in and Kaiju. Kaiju jumps and wtaer style: hydration with Lin. Once the two fire hweels hit them they urn to water and steam apears. The water reforms back to Lin and Kaiju. It beins to rain.
" Yes. Lin the rain will power the down the bird. " said Yoshio. Lin takes out his katanas and jumps off Kaiju and charges at Kanji with them. Kanji sees this so he takes out his sword but it was made out of fire. Lins stills charges at Kanji he transfer chakra to the sword using his ability to add transfer chakra and he clash with the fire sword but once it hit the Kanji's fire swords water splash out of the sudden destroying the sword. Kanji jumps about 10 meters away from Lin. "What the?! How did you?!" asked Kanji in shock. " Well it seems you specialize in fire. I was hiding in the shadows after you burned down this village. I saw when you used that phoenix justu of yours and how you created this bird. So I know your chakra nature is fire. So I use my ability to transfer my chakra. So I added my water chakra to my sword in the rain gave it power. So that is how the splash occurs so the fire is destroys your sword because it was made out of fire." explain Lin.
"Damn" yelled out Kanji. He looked up at the water monster it is completly made out of water while it keeps on growing. " This is the water monster famous justu. Ultimate hydation' said Lin. It stop raining and Kaiju was about 10000 meters tall. It raised its hand and it punches the bird destroying it. "Nooooo!!!!" yelled Kanji. " Yoshi teleports next to Kanji and push him down and akes out her sword and hold the tip of it to his neck and says" Who are you working for". " I'm part of the organization called the stricking sun" Confess Kanji.
Yoshio lefts up her sowrd and puts it away. Kanji stands up perform a hand sign and he jumps about 50 meters high and he charges up the sky like a comet and it headed towards north. They lost sight of him.
After that they get rid of the fire and Mandamaru uses Earth style:Justu to rebuild most of the buildings. The 3 ninja leaves the village.

To be continued

Sasuke/Itachi
10-10-2009, 06:55 PM
So how do you like it

Chidori stream
10-11-2009, 11:17 AM
I like it

Sasuke/Itachi
10-16-2009, 06:20 PM
bump up new chapter up today

Sasuke/Itachi
10-24-2009, 08:07 PM
Chapter 4: rouge colony X

Lin,Yoshio, and Mandamaru walks through a deep forest. "Yoshio where is the closets village I'm hungry and tired" complain Mandamaru. "Don't worry we're there" said Yoshio. The 3 nija stop. They looked ahead and the saw an entrance to a village." It is about time. What is the name of this village?" asked Mandamru. "This is the village hidden in the darkness" said Yoshio.
"What?! I thought the village falled and was abonded." said Lin in confusion. " Your right. I read some people minds when we came in and recieved some information. This village is dead but he reason people still living in it because this is a rogue colony." explain Yoshi. "What!?" said Mandmaru. "Just go inside the colony" said Yoshio.
The 3 ninja walks through the entrance and into the village. The 3 ninja look around while walking. The buildings are black it seems this village is with the forest because there are like a dozen trees in it. The villagers are walking around and talking. But all the villagers are looking at them walking. The villagers begins to whisper to each other. "Ocward why are they staring at us." said Lin. " They're rouge cilvilins. So they probaly saw ours headbands and they are probaly surprise to see a ninja in an actual village." explain Yoshio. The 3 ninja walk to a hotel until out of nowwhere 5 ninja apears in front of them. "Stop there this is far as you go. Surreneder and come with us." said one of the 5 ninja. Mandmaru grabed his sword but Yoshio grabed his arm. "Lets not make a scene lets go along with them. I'll read their minds." she tells Mandamru and Lin through Yoshio talking to them in her mind. The 3 ninja fire village ninja agrees to go with them and the 5 ninja lead them to a dark building.
" This is our leader mansion. Go ijside the mansion." said one of the ninja. The fire village ninja go in with the other 5 ninja following. They apear in some hallway and saw the strairs one of the 5 ninja push them on the strairs which signals them to go upstaris. They climb the stairs once they go on top of the stairs they were in another hallway. One of the 5 ninja open a door and the other 4 lead the fire ninja in that room. They saw a man looking out the window. He was wearing a brown cloak and had black hair. " Keep them in here. One of you stay." commanded the man. The 4 of the 5 left while the other one closed the door.
"So tell me why are fire village ninja in an abonded village?" asked the man. " We're just here to relax. We're not here to do no harm" said Mandamru. " Why should I believe you. You are probaly trying to destroy rouge clony X peace after all of hard work hmmm." said the man. "Thats not it. We're telling you the truth we walk over 60 miles and I had a tough battle with a striking sun member." said Lin. The man was shocked. He turn around and he looked at the 3 fire village ninja. " I'l let you go if you tell me all you know about the Striking Sun." said the man. He had brown eyes.
" The Striking Sun member I fought had orange air and green eyes. He looked like he is in his late 20's. His name is Kanji and specialize in Fire style jutsu." said Lin. "Interesting. Mind if you help me. Track down this gut who might be a member." said the man. "Sure we need to find more information about this organization and probaly find more info on this man we're looking for." said Yoshio. "Thanks my name is Nick. I know your names already." said Nick.
BOOOOOM!!!! "Hmph good timing. Lets go." commanded Nick. They saw a smoke out the window. "He is here" said Nick. He threw a kunai at the window and it broke. " Contect the rest of the ninja it is code red evactuate every civilin. commanded Nick. The ninja open the door and runs out. 'Follow me" ordered Nick. "O.K. But we're not taking oreders from you like that." said Yoshio.
Nick,Lin,Yoshio, and Mandamru jumped out the window and ran towardsthe smoke.

To be continued