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assassin
09-14-2009, 01:52 PM
on that day
my heart fell into darkness
and as such fell silent
even when i scream
no one can hear me
the darkness enters into my eyes
and my sight becomes black and lifeless
for no moment am I happy
i have forgotten what happiness feels like
so i searched endlessly
only to lose it all
so i continue to live on
and even if i have to embrace this hopeless solitude alone
i will still live on
and no one will stop me
those who have the drive to move on
even when you've been stopped in your tracks
and the weight is to much to bear
will one day find happiness
but for now i will live
with a heart of darkness
and i will allow no one to live
in the same hopeless solitude with me
the hopeless solitude
of the dead soul

Kuroda Taishi
09-14-2009, 01:54 PM
Why didn't you just put this one in the same threadas your other poem?

DragonAngel
09-14-2009, 01:57 PM
Why didn't you just put this one in the same threadas your other poem?
Exactly, instead of making a lot of threads you can just put them all in the same thread and first post.

Plus how does this belong in the "Fan fiction, Art, Stories, and RP" section?

assassin
09-14-2009, 01:58 PM
Why didn't you just put this one in the same threadas your other poem?

i come up with poems at random...so i didn't have this poem in my head at the time...

assassin
09-14-2009, 01:59 PM
Exactly, instead of making a lot of threads you can just put them all in the same thread and first post.

Plus how does this belong in the "Fan fiction, Art, Stories, and RP" section?

its a poem...poems are pieces of liturature just like stories...so technically i can get away with it...cause they're like miniature stories.

Kuroda Taishi
09-14-2009, 02:00 PM
i come up with poems at random...so i didn't have this poem in my head at the time...

That doesn't explain why you couldn't have just edited it in to the first post on the other thread.

DragonAngel
09-14-2009, 02:00 PM
i come up with poems at random...so i didn't have this poem in my head at the time...

Its still no excuse for not editing any of your thread's first post.

assassin
09-14-2009, 02:02 PM
That doesn't explain why you couldn't have just edited it in to the first post on the other thread.

and no one's gonna notice...since i only put one poems name...next time i write a poem will be the last thread and i'll name it the assassin poetry thread so i can put more than one poem in it....and people will actually look and see if there's more....

DragonAngel
09-14-2009, 02:05 PM
and no one's gonna notice...since i only put one poems name...next time i write a poem will be the last thread and i'll name it the assassin poetry thread so i can put more than one poem in it....and people will actually look and see if there's more....

I guess I'm just a futuristic spambot then.

Kuroda Taishi
09-14-2009, 02:19 PM
I guess I'm just a futuristic spambot then.


good one