Live, fight, kill, no hesitation

[assassin]

poem i wrote i know really long name....

Live to fight
fight to live
never stop and follow the path
kill all who get in the way
show no hesitation
don't worry about who it is
you are the beast
and he is the prey
and the prey must be killed
so the beast may live
this is law
a law i intend to follow
give it 100 percent
if you can aviod a fight
aviod the fight
no need to waste your strength
on the weak or the sick
just walk right past them and don't look back
if they persist
introduce them to your fist
he has no right to challenge your might
there is no point in starting a fight
Live to fight
fight and kill
kill with no hesitation
this is the law of the strong
Live
fight
kill
no hesitation...

so how'ld i do...?

post ppl so i know i didn't waste my time

[cherryflower]

It was good. (I just don't like poems about killing..)

[CutieSakura]

Wow it was really good..hmm it gave me the will to fight..I don't feel as figedty anymore

[assassin]

Wow it was really good..hmm it gave me the will to fight..I don't feel as figedty anymore

HA HA...then i did my job...

[Kuroda Taishi]

post ppl so i know i didn't waste my time

you wasted your time

[DragonAngel]

you wasted your time

Especially since I felt/saw no specific meaning in that,

[assassin]

you wasted your time

you read it...I write to express who I am and how i am currently feeling or to just make ppl laugh...so since you read it i didn't waste my time.

[Kuroda Taishi]

you read it...I write to express who I am and how i am currently feeling or to just make ppl laugh...so since you read it i didn't waste my time.

I read the first sentance and the last sentance, which were not a part of the actual poem, so you still wasted your time.

[nexthokage]

i ve heard that intro before

[Kuroda Taishi]

Thank you for the negative rep, it is very much appreciated.

[assassin]

never gave you rep good or negative....disagreement isn't worth killing your rep over.

[Kuroda Taishi]

never gave you rep good or negative....disagreement isn't worth killing your rep over.

I never said you specifically gave me negative rep. It was just a general appreciation for who ever did.

[Kuroda Taishi]

I wasn't asking for positive rep Ita, but thank you none the less.

[Amai Shikome]

Why am I not surprised by the rapor here.

[Kuroda Taishi]

Why am I not surprised by the rapor here.

A raptor! awwe crap! I thought they were extinct! xD

[Amai Shikome]

A raptor! awwe crap! I thought they were extinct! xD
Now you try to be funny.

[jenny]

cool. i think. *shrugs* i liked it. lol

[Hidan.of dA.MisT]

ummm mines is like dis
Kill or be Killed ahhahaha from something but thts wat i think

[foxboy]

I read the first sentance and the last sentance, which were not a part of the actual poem, so you still wasted your time.


i think it was a good story but i think that Kuroda Taishi is kinda being ajerk, i mean i get that you have your own oppinions and stuff but have you ever tried constructive critisisim:|