The Sixth Shinobi War

[Sai's brother]

Prolouge

Prolouge
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...This isnt good. We've been attacked for years now. The Hidden Galaxy Village war has called the the sixth shinobi war upon our village...the Hidden Life Village...hidden within the sands of time. How...how long has it been?...I cant remember, my parents said this war this war started about four years before I was born so I guess its been eight-teen or nine-teen years. I am...scared everyday one of our own die while thier army seems to expand. Im...worried if me and my family and my friends are next. I've never been to war...I've never been to battle. I dont know how to fight, I dont know how to use chakra. If I do want to survive I'll need to learn before someone close to me gets attacked.
I'll join the miltary and learn as fast as I can. There taking in new people today. Well I over-heard yesterday that the Galaxy Village is going to use there secert move within this next month. I heard this move is strong enough to destory a entire village with a short time. I'll pack my things and set off to join the miltary.


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Introduction

Introduction
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My name is Akihito, this name means Distinct person.
I am fifth-teen years old, I have no known chakra attruibute.
Im heading off to the weapon and armour shop first.
As I walked there I bumped into a friend named Amami, the name means beautiful sky. "Huh?...oh hello Amami" I said
"Hi...um what are you doing here?" she replied
"Just getting equipment for the war" I sighed "What?...you can die! your completey unexpirenced" Amami nagged.
"I know, I know...but they have special training for people like me" I said a little sadly. "Well, then looks like im coming" she said
"What?....what made you want to come all of a sudden?" I said
"Well, you obviously cant handle this yourself, you'll need someone to watch your back if something happens" She said
"...Ok fine" I said walking into the weapon store.
I started to browse around until I found a strange pair of kunais.
I picked them up...these kunais seemed to have a some amount of static in them. I guess they use to have a power but now its gone.I've took them anyway, along with a TON of senbon needles. I've paid then left the store. I started to walk to the military camp site as Amami followed me there.
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[Theres are both the main charcters in the story, they'll be three more of them]

[shinmarubountyhunter]

this story is nice way better than mine

[Sai's brother]

Introduction
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My name is Akihito, this name means Distinct person.
I am fifth-teen years old, I have no known chakra attruibute.
Im heading off to the weapon and armour shop first.
As I walked there I bumped into a friend named Amami, the name means beautiful sky. "Huh?...oh hello Amami" I said
"Hi...um what are you doing here?" she replied
"Just getting equipment for the war" I sighed "What?...you can die! your completey unexpirenced" Amami nagged.
"I know, I know...but they have special training for people like me" I said a little sadly. "Well, then looks like im coming" she said
"What?....what made you want to come all of a sudden?" I said
"Well, you obviously cant handle this yourself, you'll need someone to watch your back if something happens" She said
"...Ok fine" I said walking into the weapon store.
I started to browse around until I found a strange pair of kunais.
I picked them up...these kunais seemed to have a some amount of static in them. I guess they use to have a power but now its gone.I've took them anyway, along with a TON of senbon needles. I've paid then left the store. I started to walk to the military camp site as Amami followed me there.
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[Theres are both the main charcters in the story, they'll be three more of them]