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CutieSakura
08-21-2009, 09:11 AM
i do feel a little better,I do feel a little stronger
I do feel like I'm brave,I do feel like im strong
but there is just a tiny pain in me,it wants out
it makes me feel sad,I want everything back
I'll have to work so hard again,things might never be the same,
it will be a long time probably in October when I can say,
what I need to say,I'm going to try my hardest,
I wanna make people proud,I wanna prove that I can do it
I wanna prove myself to a very important person to me,
with everyones help,I think I can get through it
my depression is fading,my cheerfulness is coming back
I want to be more happy,I still want to be noticed by some people
but I would like to thank,all you people,
for what you have done,has changed my life

CutieSakura
08-21-2009, 09:13 AM
iam not depressed anymore but I feel this way

SaiyoichiUchiha
08-21-2009, 09:15 AM
Well poetry is one of the best ways to let your emotions out so yeah

abby750
08-21-2009, 09:18 AM
awesome poem :D

Hebi
08-25-2009, 06:49 PM
You is a true poet Sakura-chan :)

NinjaVanish
08-25-2009, 08:31 PM
i do feel a little better,I do feel a little stronger
I do feel like I'm brave,I do feel like im strong
but there is just a tiny pain in me,it wants out
it makes me feel sad,I want everything back
I'll have to work so hard again,things might never be the same,
it will be a long time probably in October when I can say,
what I need to say,I'm going to try my hardest,
I wanna make people proud,I wanna prove that I can do it
I wanna prove myself to a very important person to me,
with everyones help,I think I can get through it
my depression is fading,my cheerfulness is coming back
I want to be more happy,I still want to be noticed by some people
but I would like to thank,all you people,
for what you have done,has changed my life
im so glad that youre feeling better...i was so sad when i read your other poem...:( i cant wait until october!;)

Vatanui AKA Pride
08-25-2009, 09:00 PM
Good poem.

CutieSakura
08-26-2009, 12:54 AM
im so glad that youre feeling better...i was so sad when i read your other poem...:( i cant wait until october!;)
i wanna throw it out in the garbage..and yeah mean either!;)

Taker369
08-26-2009, 01:04 AM
awsome my friend simply awsome.

SakuraGirl
08-26-2009, 09:17 AM
wow lady hana i like it

Shinobi_Kitten
10-25-2009, 07:30 PM
Awesome poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Vatanui AKA Pride
10-25-2009, 08:56 PM
Gravedigger, huh...=\

princezzhinata
10-26-2009, 06:08 AM
*Sobs* Very touchy poem! ^__^

Shinagami
06-06-2012, 10:35 PM
Good :)