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Row Inuzuka
08-18-2009, 10:46 AM
I feel like writing a funny poem,
But it;););)8217;s hard when my father just died.
Watching his James brown dressed corpse
Wink at me, telling me it;););)8217;ll be okay.
But I know it wont be okay, because now
The kids at school look at me like I kicked the bucket.
He always told me laughter was the best medicine.
But this medicine won;););)8217;t make it down my throat.
Because pats on my back stop the flow.
They say, ;););)8216;to feel someone;););)8217;s pain put yourself in their
Shoes,;););)8217; but how can you?
I;););)8217;m size 9. Your size five.

Tell me a joke about chickens.
Being stuck in the dark shadows
Of your ghostly sympathy angers me.
Choke on yours lies,
Because I can see in your eyes
That the closest thing you ever lost was your dog.
He name was Rex and he was brown,
And you fed him every other Tuesday.

I;););)8217;m a pity-party pooper.
I don;););)8217;t like surprise pity parties,
Or planned ones.
What I do like is
The knock-knock jokes you;););)8217;d crack
In the middle of Algebra
That made my eyes light
Before my father ever saw the light.

Make me smile again.
Because people always apologize,
Though I;););)8217;m pretty clued in,
That my father is dead.
I don;););)8217;t need to be reminded of the hole in my heart.

Do me a favor and josh about
How Ms. Langford;););)8217;s butt seems to drag the ground
More then it did last year.
;););)8216;lol;););)8217; me.
;););)8216;lmao;););)8217; me
I beg you,
Don;););)8217;t ;););)8216;sorry;););)8217; me.

I want to smile again
But more resembling the koolaide man
Without you reminding me
My father;););)8217;s gone forever.

08-18-2009, 11:08 AM
awesome poem Row Inuzuka :D:D

08-18-2009, 11:13 AM
awesome poem

08-18-2009, 11:19 AM
goos poem

08-18-2009, 01:42 PM
wow thats really good!!!:D

Row Inuzuka
08-18-2009, 02:28 PM
Thank you. I really appreciate the compliments! ^^