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Sephiroth
08-17-2009, 09:32 PM
I am the voice that on one hears, the one you expect nothing from
I wonder if this is reallity or is this just a dream
I hear the stillness in the night
I see the world turning into nothing but darkness in the night
I want to not fail in this game called life
I am the voice that on one hears, the one you expect nothing from
I pretend to be the conque of evil with in me
I feel that defeat in this game is upon me
I touch the very defeat that lays inside of us all
I worry that after this year I will mean Nothing to everyone I know
I cry when I think of failing everyone i know
I am the voice that on one hears, the one you expect nothing from
I understand that there is a savior for me
I say that there is nothing to hide and it will be ok
I dream that I will become the somebody in your life that you can turn to
I try to make people smile and make them see that it will get better soon
I hope that i will become one with myself
I am the voice that on one hears, the one you expect nothing from

ShariKage
08-17-2009, 09:36 PM
better than mine.

Sephiroth
08-17-2009, 09:37 PM
hmm idk bout that

ShariKage
08-17-2009, 09:38 PM
read it, its my newest thread.

Sephiroth
08-17-2009, 09:49 PM
ok i did

Ryaque
08-18-2009, 06:52 AM
Awesome poem, two thumbs up.:mrgreen:

SakuraGirl
08-18-2009, 09:02 AM
great poem

mangagirl
08-18-2009, 09:04 AM
wow its awesome jeremy...*cries*

IAmSasukeUchiha
08-18-2009, 09:23 AM
You're good at writing poetry. Two thumbs up! XD

Row Inuzuka
08-18-2009, 09:55 AM
Such a nice peom. Sooo cool. Some much imagry

abby750
08-18-2009, 09:57 AM
awesome poem!!

Shinagami
06-06-2012, 09:38 PM
Good, very good :)

Sephiroth
06-07-2012, 06:05 AM
lol old xD

Jonesy
06-07-2012, 06:06 AM
Very old. o.o

Not bad though. ;)

Sephiroth
06-07-2012, 06:50 AM
aww thanks xD

Tifa Legacy
06-07-2012, 07:46 AM
I am the voice that on one hears, the one you expect nothing from
I wonder if this is reallity or is this just a dream
I hear the stillness in the night
I see the world turning into nothing but darkness in the night
I want to not fail in this game called life
I am the voice that on one hears, the one you expect nothing from
I pretend to be the conque of evil with in me
I feel that defeat in this game is upon me
I touch the very defeat that lays inside of us all
I worry that after this year I will mean Nothing to everyone I know
I cry when I think of failing everyone i know
I am the voice that on one hears, the one you expect nothing from
I understand that there is a savior for me
I say that there is nothing to hide and it will be ok
I dream that I will become the somebody in your life that you can turn to
I try to make people smile and make them see that it will get better soon
I hope that i will become one with myself
I am the voice that on one hears, the one you expect nothing from
*reality
Do you mean, 'Ears'?
Or did you mean, 'NO one hears'?

'Nyways, tis good, Seph. b:P

Sephiroth
06-07-2012, 07:48 AM
do realize i wrote this like 5 years ago lol

Tifa Legacy
06-07-2012, 07:53 AM
There is something like, 'Editing' yuh know. :lol:

Shoukry
06-07-2012, 07:59 AM
Nice poem Seph. ^^

Sephiroth
06-07-2012, 09:30 AM
There is something like, 'Editing' yuh know. :lol:
:roll: whatever my English teacher thought it was fine so meh