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itachifan100
08-15-2009, 10:08 AM
my charecter

his normal mode
http://i31.tinypic.com/30t0xfc.jpg (http://i31.tinypic.com/30t0xfc.jpg)

his demon mode
http://i27.tinypic.com/wv4mf9.jpg (http://i27.tinypic.com/wv4mf9.jpg)

his lycan mode
http://i31.tinypic.com/2wel9i0.jpg (http://i31.tinypic.com/2wel9i0.jpg)


Bio:
Name:Dark Naraku
Age:13
Birthday: March 9th
Gender:Male
Race:Human/Demon/Lycan
Occupation now:Genin ninja
Hair Color: dark red
Eye Color: dark red
Blood Type: A
Height: 5'3
Weight: 96 lb
Personality: Likes: Fighting,Goofing off in class,Sowrd fighting
Dislikes:his older brother,his rigirous training
Hobbies/Interests:sparing with friends






The Chapters so far
chapter 1-meet dark
chapter 2-the sunset massacre
chapter 3-meeting marcus


chapter 1-meet dark
Dark Naraku is a 12 year old boy in the village hidden in the setting sun. Born into the kendo clan,dark was a sowrd master,he poseses the honoo naraku.With this ability,dark can summon fire,and even turn demon!
Dark always got bad grades in the ninja academy.
Dark was coming home one day,badly beaten up in the academy tourney to see who will advance and graduate,and when he found himself walking back to the kendo clan's home,drops of blood dripped down from the roof.Dark noticed the blood was going in his wounds!he soon passed out.Later,dark awoke in his home and saw his parents.They asked him what happened and he answered,all i remembr is that i saw blood on the roof and it was dripping down into my wounds.His parents decided to let him rest.

chapter 2-the sunset massacre
Dark awoke that night to find it was very quiet.dark look around the house and forund his siblings dead!who could of done this,dark thought.dark went outside to find his village ninja fighting strange ninja with black cloaks with red clouds.Dark hid under a cart to see what was happening.(he wasnt a good fighter,remember the bad grades?)a few minutes after Dark crying,there was silence,and soon a blood curdling scream.Dark ran to his home to find his parents tied up!soon,a human figure appeared next to his parents.the figure wore a black cloak with red clouds.the figure stepped into the light and it was his brother,Takai!Dark said,"Takai,what are you doing?These are our parents!"Takai grabbed his katana and said,"sorry Dark."And he sliced his parents in 2!Dark was just in shock.Dark was so furious,an orange chakra appeared around him!Takai said,"What is this?!"
Dark bore fangs,claws,and had the appearence of a werewolf.Dark has taken the lycan mode!Takai teleported out of the house and was on top of a pole.Takai called his men to get ready for a fight.Dark appeared before Takai's men,and one by one killed them.Takai was surprised at dark,his elite men,killed!Takai said,"hmmm,some other day we shall do this,and until that day,train so you can kill me!"Takai's body dissolved into grains.He fled.Dark somehow reverted nto his normal state and passed out.

Chapter 3-meeting marcus
The next day,Dark awoke on the streets.The whole village was at the site of the attack.a man with a strange black cloak went to him.his name was marcus,the kage of the village.marcus asked dark what happened.Dark told marcus about everthing.and unforutanetly,when the massacre went on,there was a barrier around the kendo clan's home so the village couldnt help.Marcus let dark live with him.And finally,after a month living with Marcus,Dark asked marcus to train him.Marcus agreed.

rose93
08-15-2009, 10:10 AM
wow cool story Dark's normal mode is prety cute.
CAnt believe he is getting bad grades and is being bullied, well he looks pretty innocent. Cant wait for the next chp.

cherryflower
08-15-2009, 10:11 AM
It's veary good.

itachifan100
08-15-2009, 10:12 AM
thanx rose and when the next one comes out,his life completley changes

itachifan100
08-15-2009, 10:12 AM
thanks cherryflower

cherryflower
08-15-2009, 10:14 AM
thanks cherryflower

Your welcome. I can't wait to hear the next chapter

Should Of Had A V8
08-15-2009, 10:17 AM
Nice Story

itachifan100
08-15-2009, 10:18 AM
yay ppl like it!

Ashurii Kisate
08-15-2009, 12:32 PM
neat!

I should work on my fanfic again...>.> <.< Its called Sadistic.

Nick Tasogare
08-15-2009, 12:33 PM
Oh Inuyasha! xD

SakuraGirl
08-15-2009, 12:43 PM
it good keep going

AkatsukiMember
08-15-2009, 07:58 PM
The first chapter is beautiful. *wipes tear from eye*

itachifan100
08-16-2009, 07:46 AM
Chapter 2 is out!!!!

mangagirl
08-16-2009, 07:58 AM
wow i nt belive it its awesome!

itachifan100
08-16-2009, 08:13 AM
later or tommorow will be chapter 3

akatsukiLOVE
08-16-2009, 08:44 AM
awww hes sooo cute in his normal and demon mode thingy awwwwww<333333

akatsukiLOVE
08-16-2009, 08:49 AM
........omg its itachi all over again...i bet the ending is going to be like dark kills his bro then figures out that he had to do it but saved his bro.........

itachifan100
08-16-2009, 08:54 AM
........omg its itachi all over again...i bet the ending is going to be like dark kills his bro then figures out that he had to do it but saved his bro.........
http://i603.photobucket.com/albums/tt112/ausador/o_rly.jpg

akatsukiLOVE
08-16-2009, 08:56 AM
......O-Owtf??

Shkin
08-16-2009, 08:57 AM
nice itachifan100! keep it going...i'll wait for the next chapters.

itachifan100
08-16-2009, 09:34 AM
nice itachifan100! keep it going...i'll wait for the next chapters.
thanx

itachifan100
08-16-2009, 10:51 AM
i was bored so i made this(girls squeal)




http://image.blingee.com/images17/content/output/000/000/000/5c8/480203877_731863.gif?4 (http://blingee.com/blingee/view/97023506-dark)

akatsukiLOVE
08-16-2009, 10:58 AM
ahhhhhhh heesssss soooooooooooooo cuteee<333333333

itachifan100
08-16-2009, 11:08 AM
ahhhhhhh heesssss soooooooooooooo cuteee<333333333
pwned!!!!
xD

akatsukiLOVE
08-16-2009, 01:32 PM
howd u do that?????????

itachifan100
08-19-2009, 05:07 AM
chapter 3 is now out

AkatsukiMember
08-20-2009, 08:43 AM
Keep it going. It's awesome.
I'll like know how he got his Lycan mode. I wonder.*sarcasm*

itachifan100
08-20-2009, 09:11 AM
Keep it going. It's awesome.
I'll like know how he got his Lycan mode. I wonder.*sarcasm*
ull see when the story goes on.......................................

Shkin
08-20-2009, 09:23 AM
keep it going itachifan100 :D