View Full Version : The Day

08-14-2009, 08:55 PM
The day start out with light and everything is okay,and end in dark with no one knowing what happen in your day

In the day things happen we don,t understand or may not want to happen,but there are may other days in your life , so don't get down hearted because went dark comes it means there is a other day on its way

08-15-2009, 08:29 AM
I like the poem.

08-15-2009, 08:37 AM
yes its like a poem and i like it!

08-15-2009, 10:45 AM
thanks guys

Vatanui AKA Pride
08-15-2009, 10:50 AM
Good poem.