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Ninja of Cao
08-08-2009, 04:38 PM
Hi. This thread is to discuss things about the book I am writing, my own Naruto story (read it at: http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showthread.php?t=10440). If you think I need to do any edits in the story, just leave a reply.

Nikito Tao
08-08-2009, 04:44 PM
I got a question. Why would you use TenTen as the girlfriend of the main character? She is weak and... um...
Well, you get my point.

Ninja of Cao
08-08-2009, 04:48 PM
Ok, that's a start.
Everyone reading this thread, please reply to this question; which girl in Naruto do you think I should use to be the girlfriend of... probably one of the strongest young Ninjas ever. Please let me know what you think; TenTen, Temari, Ino, ... Just no adults.

rose93
08-08-2009, 04:49 PM
I dont actually care that much about the girlfriend.
Maybe u should make a poll and whoever wins u put her in the story.
haha~

Ninja of Cao
08-08-2009, 04:51 PM
That's a good idea, but I dont know how to delete a vote poll when the voting is over. Can I send a pm to the administrators and ask them to delete the poll?

Nikito Tao
08-08-2009, 04:52 PM
... I think you should use Ino... or maybe Temari... both are hot.

Kunoichi of Tao
08-08-2009, 04:53 PM
I think that you should keep use TenTen.

Ninja of Cao
08-08-2009, 04:58 PM
But fine, I'll make a poll. But first I need your help with one thing; I need to make sure all teenage girls in Naruto will be in the poll.

Hinata Hyuga
Ino Yamanaka
Sakura Haruno
Temari
TenTen
...
Did I forgot someone? I have not watched much of Naruto Shippuden.

Ninja of Cao
08-08-2009, 05:00 PM
I must go to bed now. I'll see you tomorrow.
Bye.

Ninja of Cao
08-09-2009, 03:54 AM
I'm back.

Ninja of Cao
08-09-2009, 05:00 AM
...
And noone is here yet...

Hokage Jack
08-13-2009, 12:22 AM
I think you should change TenTen's name to someone that isn't in Naruto so it would be more original, but besides that it was really good!

Oh and sorry I'm so late, I've been busy...

Ninja of Cao
08-14-2009, 04:11 PM
You mean I should create a female Ninja that could be the girlfriend to the main character. That was something I was thinking about, but I thought that I should take someone from Naruto instead.

Hokage Jack
08-15-2009, 01:08 AM
You mean I should create a female Ninja that could be the girlfriend to the main character. That was something I was thinking about, but I thought that I should take someone from Naruto instead.

Okay, I think that if you are going to have a Naruto character, that it should be Temari. Jun Tao is already a weapon user, so I think it's kind of a waste to have two. But that's just my opinion, I say you should make a poll about this!!!

Ninja of Cao
08-15-2009, 06:54 AM
Ok, I'll make a poll.

Kaoru Tao
08-16-2009, 04:22 AM
I don't think you may need much edits. It was truly a great story. Keep up the good work!