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assassin
08-06-2009, 12:28 PM
why fight
what makes it right
to take the life
to create a strife
do we fight for love
or do we fight for god up above
or do we fight for fun
why do we pick up the gun
and pull the damn trigger
why are we skin diggers
we take up the knife
and dig into the skin and take life
give me a reason as to why it's right
why fight

why fight at all
why pin a man to the wall
and shoot him down
and bury him 6 feet under ground
what gives us the right
to kill in the night
or even in the day
is it because your gay
i truely don't know why i fight
but i know its right
but i don't know why
and until i know i refuse to die.
so what makes it right
to take a mans sight
and show him heavens light
tell me, why fight.


please post what you think and your answer to the poem. on this page plz.

human007
08-06-2009, 12:36 PM
um nice poem assassin nice ryhme

assassin
08-06-2009, 12:37 PM
thanks. these are what im best at. next are skits/stories

mangagirl
08-06-2009, 12:44 PM
hmm we fight cuz...maybe lvoe... or hate... power? idk...but i hate fights

assassin
08-06-2009, 12:45 PM
this will have ppl stumped for a while

*sighs* how long til l i learn the answer to "why fight"

Vatanui AKA Pride
08-06-2009, 12:49 PM
Nice Poem.

Ryaque
08-06-2009, 12:50 PM
Assassin this is honestly one of the best poems I've read in my whole life....and why do people fight? There are so many reasons, anger, revenge, drugs, boredom.....all them are reasons, but none of them are good reasons. There is no good reason to fight and there never will be.

assassin
08-06-2009, 12:50 PM
PLZ ANSWER THE POEM!

"why fight" ultimately this is a question i can't answer.

assassin
08-06-2009, 12:51 PM
Assassin this is honestly one of the best poems I've read in my whole life....and why do people fight? There are so many reasons, anger, revenge, drugs, boredom.....all them are reasons, but none of them are good reasons. There is no good reason to fight and there never will be.

i truely know fighting is right.

i just don't know what makes it right.

assassin
08-06-2009, 12:53 PM
# of ppl who have reviewed it so far:4

good reviews:4
bad reviews:0

Kuromaki
08-06-2009, 12:57 PM
Wow... that was impressive. Better than anything I could write.

assassin
08-06-2009, 01:01 PM
plz answer question.