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Space Cowboy Sasori
01-20-2010, 03:16 PM
I agree great chapter broham, especially the fight scene.
Chapter 47: Untitled
When Yori fell to the ground a smirk came across Eiji face.
"Yori you know how dangerous Kokurai is. Once you get struck the black lightning will stay in your system for months and possibly years. It's over brother."
Eiji held out his hands and his sword came back to him.
"Rest in peace Yori"
Before Eiji could kill his brother a large kick came across his face. Standing before the were the boys father.
"Yori, your taking it to easy on him. He is going to kill you if you don't stop. Get up my son."
Eiji got up with the look of death in his eyes as his angered boiled.
"You old fart!"
Eiji with speed took off trying to kill his father with his sword, but Setsuko kept up with him. Knowing that he couldn't get the upper hand Eiji quickly threw dirt in his fathers.
Before he could react Eiji's dark blade was through the chest of his fathers.
"Serves you right for meddling in old man. Some father."
As he fell Setsuko looked at Yori with a smile then closed his eyes. Setsuko is killed.
Yori eyes widen, speechless as he looked at the bloody corpse of his father. He then rose to his feet and picked up his sword.
"Eh, your turn Yori.."
Before Eiji could finish Yori sword meet his and a hard kick met Eiji's stomach. Following the kick was two rights across the face of Eiji sending him into the grand room.
"Wind Style: Joyful Praise"
A tremendous wind over took the room and made a direct hit on Eiji cutting almost everywhere in his bed. In a flash Yori's hand caught his brothers face, then slammed his head into the ground.
Yori then started walking away into the room his father was killed. Before he could reach him a hard elbow made contact with his back, sending him outside in the Kage's sacred yard.
"I'm, I'm, I'm going to kill you!!"
Eiji's dark chakra over took him as a monstrous figure rose out of no where.
The guardian was big and black. It had horns that was great in height and wore the same garments as Eiji. Eiji then held out his hands and yelled,
Black lightning comes forth out the guardians hand and towards Yori. Yori barely dodged the first attempt.
"I have no choice then.."
White chakra over took Yori as he yelled,
Yori's guardian was almost the same as Eiji's but his was white.
Kaz'e nearby saw his teacher guardian and said,
That's the signal"
Kaz'e took out a large scroll with 2 animals on it. He then begun to do a series of hand signs and slapped his hands on the animals. Then suddenly the ground begun to cracked and the trees started to be destroyed.
The brothers stop fighting each other for a brief moment and looked.
"Good work Kaz'e"
Yori looked at his brother and said,
'Tell me you didn't."
"Eiji why do this!?"
"Because a village system is futile and I believe this is the only way to get my point across."
"Summoning the star beasts is pointless and dangerous to the villages."
Eiji guardian disappears as he looked at his brother and said,
"Like I care"
Chapter 48: Introducing the Orderly Threat
After the battle Yori stood of his brother broken body. Tears rolling down his face as rain begun to fall upon them. Eiji body was faced down and his hair covered his face.
"I'm sorry Eiji.. I Love you"
Yori walked away back into the great hall and left his brother body like it was. For the next five minutes Eiji body just lied there. Until his right index finger flickered up and his head begun to lift it's self up. Kaz'e body was stuck on the middle of the kage tower with Eiji sword in him. Trying to get up Eiji started to cough up blood and he looked up to his possibly dead prodigy. Eiji with his little strength rose his left hand out and his sword came back to him. As Kaz'e body flew down Eiji slowed the fall down with the same technique he just did. He walked over to Kaz'e and grabbed him. In a flash both Eiji and Kaz'e were gone.
Eiji and Kaz'e appeared in the fallen forest surrounded by tree's. With the rain falling Eiji sat down and leaned on a tree with Kaz'e on his lap.
"Am I going to die here?"
The rain stopped and a rustle came from the nearby tree's.
"Show your self.."
Out came an old man with a cane. He was dressed in loose garments with the colors white, grey and purple. The old man had a long mustache and a serious look on his face.
"I watched you..Eiji.. You lost.."
"And you are?"
"Let's say I'm going to be the one that will heal you.."
"To hell with you old man. Just let me die."
"So naive. I know you don't want to die, so that's why I'm taking you."
"Oh yeah.. Your too old to even land a blow on me."
The old man laughed quietly,
"Like I said naive."
With the snap of his finger 14 people appeared standing on the branches of tree's. All wearing the same loose garments as the old man.
"What the hell.."
"Just call us the Orderly Threat Eiji. And our goal is to cause Armageddon to the world and re-shape it our way."
Eiji eyes gazed in amazement and then his Kamimeh turned on.
"I want in.."
The old man smirked and said,
"Nana.. treat our last two members here. Suki open the gates.."
Note: I'm sorry for the delay. Forgive me
Vatanui AKA Pride
02-11-2010, 09:38 PM
A nice chapter, this is becoming interesting.
Chapter 49: The Forever King
The leader of the Ryuusei open his eyes and stared off into the night. Suddenly a young man with a long braids going down tied together when they met at the middle of his chest. He wore loose garments with the a big Kanji symbol that stood for animal on his back. The young man seemed calm with ice blue eyes.
"Master I am back.."
"Ah, it took you long enough. So was is successful?"
"Yes, but it took some force to gather some of the originals."
"How many original members did you get?"
"Six my lord"
"Well I was hoping for eight, but six is OK. I trust your judgement of the new members.. Kaz'e.."
"My lord if you don't mind me asking, it's been almost 20 years since you came out in the open.."
"Kaz'e are you supposing i'm too weak?
"No my lord.. everything is ready lord Eiji.."
"What I told Rein was fools play and a cover, the Ryuusei are nothing but pawns so I can by time. Although Hayato I wish was still living. No matter it's time for I Eiji Tenshi to make my move... Kaz'e go find Zenaku.."
Zenaku walking with this scroll in his pocket start's thinking as the snow started to fall.
"Am I being to nice? No no, I haven't had a friend like Hayato since the day I killed my child hood friend by accident."
Zenaku reached this out side temple and a memorial was in the middle. On it wrote, "He who fall, will rise again"
Zenaku laid the stroll on the memorial and summoned it. The memorial started to have this golden aura, but then..
Zenaku turned around and saw Kaz'e.
"Kaz'e what do want?"
"I'm on orders from Lord Eiji.."
"And that order is?"
"To eliminate you.."
Zenaku bowed his head and snow started to pile up between them.
"I should of known.."
Zenaku charged at Kaz'e with his sword twirling on his finger.."
Chapter 50: Kaz'e vs. Zenaku
Zenaku sword is meet with Kaz'e kuni and both men looked at each other before Kaz'e attempted to stab Zenaku in the stomach with another kuni in his mouth. Zenaku flipped back with his sword in his hand and blood started to meet with the snow on the ground. Zenaku arm started to bleed.
"But how?" He didn't hit me."
"Actually I did, the attack was too fast for you to see. Now if you don't mind lets hurry up and end this."
Kaz'e in a flash got beside Zenaku and attempted to stab him in the head but Zenaku ducked and kicked the kuni out of Kaz'e hand. Kaz'e retaliated by grabbing Zenaku's leg and throwing him into the snow.
"Fire style: Ever Blazed"
Fire started to build up underneath Kaz'e and then fire shot through the ground underneath him. Kaz'e dodged it but another fire shot up and then another. 10 fire's shot up from the ground and one was able to burn Kaz'e arm. The memorial behind them started to shake and the aura started to expand.
"Zenaku, I'm sorry but it looks like I have to end this now. By the way you never stood a chance. I held back. I could of killed you with my kuni."
Kaz'e stood still and held out his hand and said,
Nothing happened and Zenaku started to laugh,
"That's it? Pity.."
Zenaku quickly appeared in front of Kaz'e attempting to stab him but Kaz'e dodged but a sword was met at the back of Kaz'e.
"Damn, Zenaku was so fast he left an afterimage and the real one stabbed me. Dammit, so care less."
Kaz'e fell to the ground and the snow turned red with his blood. Zenaku started to walk off but felt the need to look at Kaz'e again. When he looked Kaz'e body dispersed into a black shadow and blood splattered from Zenaku chest before he could noticed. Kaz'e appeared sitting on the memorial looking lazily at Zenaku.
"How did you?"
"Houmen = Release. Guess what that means Zenaku."
"Damn an illusion? A powerful one at that."
"Bingo. Good bye Zenaku."
Kaz'e snapped his fingers and everything broke like glass around them and reality was back. Zenaku chest had no wound but a tale was struck through his stomach and neck. Zenaku turned around and his eyes was wide opened.
There standing was a man with the Ryuusei wardrobe on. He lift his right arm and pulled it back. The tale came back into his hand dripping eith Zenaku blood.
"Zenaku you took to long. Kaz'e glad that you took care of him."
"Ah no problem. I had nothing else to do anyway.."
Zenaku eyes started to tear up while starting at the man and he said,
"I thought, I thought.."
"You though wrong Zenaku.. Good bye."
The man launched the tale and it went through Zenaku head killing him.
"That was ruthless, but you were always like that...Hayato.."
Update on whats been going on!!
1. Eiji is the leader of The Ryuusei
2. His prodigy Kaz'e is still alive
3. The Orderly Threat is an organization
4. Status of the OT is unknown
5. Zenaku is so dead
6. Hayato never really died
7. A war between 2 villages is under way (Eiji influenced)
8. Eiji plan he told to Rein was a complete lie
9. Houmen is an illusion
10. Eiji is more powerful than Yori.
Vatanui AKA Pride
02-13-2010, 10:12 AM
Yes, Hayato's back! =]
I had to bring him bacck to complete Eiji's team. What do you think of Kaz'e?
Chapter 51: Cover
With the snow still falling down and Hayato and Kaz'e standing over Zenaku's dead body Eiji comes out of the shadows clapping his hands.
"Nice work boy's, Zenaku would of been a problem later."
Hayato saw Eiji and got one knee,
"Lord Eiji thank you. I.."
"Don't my boy get up. We have work to do."
The three men started walking out of the memorial sight.
"So how long did it take the scroll to work?"
"Long enough to put Zenaku under my illusion, so Hayato can come forth."
"I worked hard on that scroll Hayato, be grateful. Any way it's time for us to make our real move. My generals are complete. The Orderly Threat is back in business."
Eiji removed his Ryuusei hood and under revealed the same loose garments as Kaz'e. On his back was the kanji symbol for king. Eiji now had short black hair and looked fairly young. The colors of his clothes were gold, black, and white.
In a flash all 3 men were gone.
Rein starts walking down the the sky village hill and into the village. He stop once he was at the edge of the entrance and he summoned three panda's and two lions.
"On my command I want the lions to go on the west wing, and the panda's to attack the left wing. I will take care of the rest."
Rein eyes turned yellow and with a black triangle in the middle. He then held out his hands and the barrier over the village shattered into pieces.
All of them scattered across the village.
Ayumu looked out the window and quickly caught a sight of a giant panda landing on the west wing. He got up and started running to the council and bust in.
"Invasion! Have the jonin on the west wing and most likely the east to get ready for battle. I'm sure this the Ryuusei! Somebody go find Siya and bring him here next to me. And contact Kana now!"
Everybody ran off but one of the members stopped and said,
"But my lord..Kana went to the silent village to train"
"Been a while since we been here lord Eiji."
Eiji, Hayato, and Kaz'e were in this blank dimension that's sealed off from the world. Then appeared 12 people all lined up across from them.
"Eiji can we finally come out of the darkness?"
Eiji snapped his fingers and the dimension disappeared and they were back into reality. He spoked,
"Well consider it done. I apologize for the wait but I had to gather the Ryuusei to eliminate the threat of their host. we have up to seven collected and number nine is about to be captured."
The old man from Eiji's flash back came forth and said,
"I'm glad we recruited you when we did. I'll admit making you leader had me on edge for a while but your power and intelligence out shines every ones."
Eiji smirked and said,
"This is the first thing we are going to do. We are going to kill the only man every village kage look up to for peace. Once that is done, we are going to kill every Ryuusei member that's left. After we will meet and I will tell you all the rest. Alright the Orderly Threat is now active once again!"
04-02-2010, 11:40 AM
Did i send you the picture of Rein, i just remembered, an di'm not sure if i linked it to you...
well here it is anyway
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