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Jarod Chidogashi
08-03-2009, 06:10 PM
My first story thing. (If the prologue is bad, well... it was written at 2:00 in the morning.:p)

Its about the resistance of humans, in the middle of a massive war against the "Capitals". More specificly, Gamma Squad. And elite squad of Stealth Infiltration Troopers, that have been trained for years to fight the Capitals. Hope you like it.

Part 1- The troubles on Aldeern
Chapter 1 (http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost.php?p=778582&postcount=9)
Chapter 2 (http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost.php?p=779958&postcount=19)
Chapter 3 (http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost.php?p=781737&postcount=32)
Chapter 4 (http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost.php?p=784175&postcount=35)
Chapter 5 (http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost.php?p=786731&postcount=52)
Chapter 6 (http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost.php?p=796854&postcount=64)
Chapter 7 (http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost.php?p=804391&postcount=71)
Chapter 8 (http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost.php?p=814358&postcount=78)
Chapter 9 (http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost.php?p=842314&postcount=84)
Chapter 10 (http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost.php?p=946561&postcount=89)
Part 2- Defense of Botanic
Chapter 11 (http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost.php?p=957601&postcount=98)
Chapter 12 (http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost.php?p=970165&postcount=123)
Chapter 13 (http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost.php?p=988491&postcount=131)
Chapter 14 (http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1029709&postcount=140)
Chapter 15 (http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1060799&postcount=166)
Chapter 16 (http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1081175&postcount=171)
Chapter 17 (http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1099673&postcount=174)
Chapter 18 (http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1109866&postcount=211)
Chapter 19 (http://naruto.vfatality.viz.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1139960&postcount=215)
Chapter 20 (http://naruto.vfatality.viz.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1156507&postcount=222)
Chapter 21 (http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1201405&postcount=263)
Chapter 22 (http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1213618&postcount=264)
Chapter 23 (http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1470769&postcount=273)
Chapter 24 (http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1477927&postcount=275)
Chapter 25 (http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1500973&postcount=279)


Alien Guide (http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost.php?p=805452&postcount=75)



Gamma Squad



Prologue
The start, it wasn’t fun.
Planet Quantom, Loading docks-Hangar 21C
September 24, Year 2633

“We never get anything out here. Just space rocks, and trash…” “Ahh, quit complaining marine, at least we’re not dead.” Muttered Corporal, Andy Jackson. “I’m just saying we never get anything interesting out here…” Suddenly a strange, blue-grey, bulbous ship appears out of hyperspace, near the docks. “Whoa, sir what is that?” “How should I know marine, never seen anything like it...”
“Sir, they’ve pinged us! Seems they want a transmission. Orders?” “A strange ship appears out of hyperspace and pings us… why wouldn’t we answer? Open transmission.”
An olive green skinned, alien appears on the screen. “We are sorry for the intrusion of your space, but we are hopelessly lost, and require repairs.” “Sir, what should we do?” “We invite them in. Don’t need to make enemies of them.” Replied the corporal. “Sir, yes sir!”
As the blue-grey, alien ship enters the docks, its guns begin to hum, and glow a bright red. “Sir, they’re going to fire at us!” “Well I can see that, what are they even firing?!” The atmosphere crackles with heat, as three bolts of energy arc towards the dock. “We’re screwed!” A marine yells before his section of the dock erupts in flames.
“This is the planet Quantom, requesting reinforcements. We have unknown hostiles and are severely outgunned-” “Infidels! This is merely the beginning! Your filth shall be cleansed! The Capitals shall rule.” Multiple grey drop ships fly out of the alien hangar. As they fly to the surface, many pieces of the loading docks are falling to the ground.
With the dock system destroyed the marines on the ground had no way out. It truly was the end of Quantom… but the beginning something much bigger.

KIBAFAN321
08-03-2009, 06:20 PM
That was a great story Jarod! Now...post chapter 1!

Jarod Chidogashi
08-03-2009, 06:32 PM
That was a great story Jarod! Now...post chapter 1!
Why the hurry? :p

KIBAFAN321
08-03-2009, 06:51 PM
Because its a great book! Or story!

Jarod Chidogashi
08-03-2009, 07:00 PM
Because its a great book! Or story!
Ill put chapter one, after I get more readers...

KIBAFAN321
08-03-2009, 07:02 PM
Come on! NOW NOW NOW!

DragonAngel
08-03-2009, 07:24 PM
Good story.

Jarod Chidogashi
08-03-2009, 07:26 PM
Good story.
I'd say so, for being written a 2:00 in the morning. :p

Jarod Chidogashi
08-04-2009, 09:09 AM
Chapter 1
This is Gamma, right?
Planet Octamis, Training facility-B
January 16, Year 2649


“You’ve been training since you were children. You are going to be the most elite squad out there. You are Gamma Squadron. Five Stealth Infiltration Troopers, you are the best of the United Colonies Resistance.
Michael, Gamma 1, Designation: Leader. The leader of Gamma team, he specializes in medium range combat, mainly using automatic guns.

Morgan, Gamma 2, Designation: Sniper. The sniper of Gamma, she is unmatched in her ability, and can hit targets any normal person wouldn’t even see. Specializing in with the sniper rifle, she naturally is the best for long-range combat.

Will, Gamma 3, Designation: Weapon Specialist. He knows about everything Capital. He can use their weapons to even greater effectiveness than even they can. He specializes in anything Capital, including vehicles.

John, Gamma 4, Designation: Explosives. Ranging from rocket launchers, to handheld door breaches, he knows explosives. He excels with the rocket launcher, and will be seen using one very often.

Ashley, Gamma 5, Designation: Close Quarters Combat. She can’t be beat, when it comes to close range. Specializing with the shotgun, you’ll never see her with a sniper rifle.”
“Alright Gamma Squad, here is your first mission. You are to sneak into, and take over the Capital base, on the planet Aldeern. It may seem easy, but it is heavily guarded, we’re counting on you for this.” Ordered Commander Polen. “But I suppose you should know what you’re up against… the Capitals have enslaved many races, and forced them to fight in this war. So, I’ll give you a little slide show.”
“First we have the Stigmea, or as we call them, ‘Stalkers’. This brutish, primitive race is a force to be reckoned with. They seem to have cloaking devices and always come in trios. They use primitive weapons, which propel spikes through the air. We don’t have much data on what the look like, as they have cloaking but we know that they are grey skinned, lightly armored, and have a long tail, ending in a spike. Watch out for it, it’s deadly at close range.”
“Second there is the very first race we met, the green-skinned, four-eyed freaks, know as the Tigaanien, or ‘Orcs’. They have never been seen in ground combat, yet it seems they are the main pilots of their ships. They are probably one of the most intelligent races in the Capitals, but they continue the talk about this ‘religion’ of theirs, just a bunch of gibberish.”
“Then we have the An’kum, or ‘Elephants’. As the name implies, they are huge. They tend to carry large explosive launchers, not that they need them. With a swipe from their massive arm they can toss a car. Close combat it not good against them, as they can break all the bones in your body with one hit. They have relatively small eyes for their size, so you may be able to assassinate them fairly easy. They have short tails and blue skin. They may be rare, but their deadly.”
“And lastly, we have the Bungama, or ‘Roaches’. The cannon fodder of the Capitals, these small insect like creatures are not much of a threat, except in large numbers. They are able to stand on their hind legs for short amounts of time, as well as being able to slice into armor with their mandibles. They have a tough, black exoskeleton, making them good at their role of cannon fodder.”
“So that’s the rundown Gamma. Go prepare for the travel to Aldeern. You need to get some rest.” Said the Commander.

Jarod Chidogashi
08-04-2009, 09:35 AM
Chapter one is mainly just a big description of the Squad, and Capital races.

KIBAFAN321
08-04-2009, 10:36 AM
Nice story Jarod! Its great so far! Keep it up!

Jarod Chidogashi
08-04-2009, 10:47 AM
Nice story Jarod! Its great so far! Keep it up!
Thanks, I may post Chapter 2 later today. >.>

KIBAFAN321
08-04-2009, 10:48 AM
Yay! I can't wait for the next one!

Jarod Chidogashi
08-04-2009, 10:56 AM
Yay! I can't wait for the next one!
Thanks! :D

The Demon Zabuza
08-04-2009, 11:20 AM
You really should keep writing. You and ash are the only people not basing theirs on ninja, and even then they are very different. I like to read different styles and storylines, so keep it up!

Jarod Chidogashi
08-04-2009, 11:27 AM
You really should keep writing. You and ash are the only people not basing theirs on ninja, and even then they are very different. I like to read different styles and storylines, so keep it up!
Thanks for the encouragement. I'll put chapter 2 up later today. :mrgreen:

KIBAFAN321
08-04-2009, 11:29 AM
Yay! Jarod will put up Chapter Two later! YAY!

Ninja Pink
08-04-2009, 11:37 AM
Good story.


This.

Jarod Chidogashi
08-04-2009, 11:56 AM
Chapter 2
Off to Aldeern, doesn’t look safe.
Planet Aldeern, Stealth-class cruiser, Dusk
January 30, 2649


“Alright Gamma, we’re here. Gear up, and get ready for drop.” As Gamma team walks towards the armory, many marines stop and stare. They were already a legend before their first mission.
“Hey Will, what are you gonna use? We don’t have anything Capital here.” Asked Michael. “Hehe, I’ll just go with the pistol, until I can get my hands on something… And by that, I mean until the first Roach goes down.” “Looks like you all know what you’re doing…” The loudspeakers roar, “Gamma Squad, report to the hangar decks immediately for drop.”
As Gamma enters the ‘Tetra’ drop ship at the hangar, explosions are heard all around the planet. “Ya know, we really should get a professional pilot.” “Cut the chatter Will, we’re going in hard.” Ordered Michael. As the Tetra soars down into the atmosphere, the remnants of the UCR are struggling to fight off the Capital forces on the ground. It was a losing battle.
“Gamma, we’re going in hot!” Yelled Michael as the Tetra swerves out of control, straight towards a forest. “I told you we needed a professional.” Complained Will, as the tetra crashes into the trees. “For once, I think I have to go with Will.” Agreed Morgan. As the Tetra plows head on into a tree, and Gamma is knocked from their seats, into the undergrowth.
“Ugh… Gammas, report in.” Ordered Michael. “Gamma two here.” Replied Morgan. “You got five, too.” Answered Ashley. “Why is it you two are always the first to report in?” “Don’t worry about that, worry about where John and Will are.” Complained Ashley. “Urgh… Gamma four, reporting in.” “So that leaves Wil-” “I have multiple contacts, Gamma come in! I need reinforcements.” “Was that Will?” Asked Morgan. “I think it was. Morgan, I need you and John to take the ‘Mako’ and get to his position, ASAP.” Ordered Michael. “Yeah, give us a two person ATV, that’s nice.” Complained Morgan. “Can it. It’s the best we can do, be glad I’m not making you walk.”
“Ashley, we should link up with the remaining UCR forces. The more help we get, the easier this mission becomes.” “Shouldn’t we wait for them to get back though?” Inquired Ashley. “We all were trained together, they’re probably going to circle back to the remnants anyway.” “Ok, I guess… but I’m going to look for them, if they don’t radio back soon.”

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“Gah, weren’t they gonna send me reinforcements. I can’t hold out forever.” Complained Will. Suddenly three Stalkers uncloak, guns to Will’s head. “Yeah… they better get here soon...”

KIBAFAN321
08-04-2009, 12:40 PM
Yay! You posted chapter 2!!! And that was where I last left off! Yay! Nnow..you need to post chapter 3. GO GO GO!

Jarod Chidogashi
08-04-2009, 12:44 PM
Yay! You posted chapter 2!!! And that was where I last left off! Yay! Nnow..you need to post chapter 3. GO GO GO!
At 5:00 eastern I'll post three, than at 8:00 I'll post four. Than I'll have to write five. >.<
But im going on vacation, so I might not be able to put up anymore until Sunday.

KIBAFAN321
08-04-2009, 12:47 PM
You'll be going on Vacation? T-That means that you won't get to post anymore stories until you come back! A-Also...Everybody Loves Pink has to wait for you part! T-T

Jarod Chidogashi
08-04-2009, 12:48 PM
You'll be going on Vacation? T-That means that you won't get to post anymore stories until you come back! A-Also...Everybody Loves Pink has to wait for you part! T-T
I said might. If I can find wifi Ill get on...

KIBAFAN321
08-04-2009, 12:49 PM
FIND WIFI!! Jarod, you HAVE to find WIFI!!!

Jarod Chidogashi
08-04-2009, 12:52 PM
I will try, but if I dont, look on the bright side, ill have more chapters to post! :mrgreen:

NaruSakufluff4ever
08-04-2009, 01:23 PM
WRITE MAN WRITE!!!!!*puppy dog eyes* pweeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaase?

Jarod Chidogashi
08-04-2009, 01:23 PM
At 5:00 eastern I'll post three, than at 8:00 I'll post four. Than I'll have to write five. >.<
But im going on vacation, so I might not be able to put up anymore until Sunday.

WRITE MAN WRITE!!!!!*puppy dog eyes* pweeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaase?
I am :mrgreen:

NaruSakufluff4ever
08-04-2009, 01:25 PM
ok... write as fast as you can but make it slow enough so its as good as the rest!!

Jarod Chidogashi
08-04-2009, 01:27 PM
ok... write as fast as you can but make it slow enough so its as good as the rest!!
Actually I wrote three yesterday, and finished four earlier, I just like making you wait. :p

Ninja Pink
08-04-2009, 01:29 PM
Awesome story!!!

Jarod Chidogashi
08-04-2009, 01:44 PM
Awesome story!!!
Thanks! In chapter 3 things start moving along alot more.

Jarod Chidogashi
08-04-2009, 03:00 PM
Chapter 3


Definitely not safe…At all.

Planet Aldeern, Unknown location, Two hours after drop
January 30, Year 2649


“Go faster! We can’t let Will die.” Complained Morgan. “Hey, I’m going as fast it this thing will go, I don’t want him to die either.” Said John. “I would complain about your driving too… but it makes no difference with my aim.” “Would you stop talking for five minutes?!” John yelled.

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“You’re going to come with us.” One of the Stalkers said in a rough voice. “Aww, but I don’t want to go with you big ugly aliens.” Will said, jokingly. “Quit stalling, you’re coming with us to the High Tigaanien.” “Why am I not I flattered…?”
“Wahoo!” John exclaimed, as the Mako left the bounds of the forest. “Hey is that-” Crack! One of the Stalkers falls to the ground, shot straight through the head. “Headshot.” “Even with my ‘bad’ driving you can’t miss, can you?” Asked John. “Wouldn’t count on it.”
“You guys sure took your time.” Yelled Will, while picking up the fallen Stalker’s weapon. “Hey buddy, I’m not going anywhere.” Will quickly unloads three spikes into the beasts neck. “Hey, you should be glad we came at all.” Remarks Morgan. The third Stalker reactivates its cloaking and runs. “Just let him go, with Michael out there we have no reason for stealth.” John remarks.
“Where do we go now?” Will asked. “I saw a UCR firebase, back in the forest, want to check it out?” “Alright, John you take the Mako and head towards the UCR forces we saw during the drop.” As John gets on the Mako, Will and Morgan dash back into the forest.

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Will and Ashley walk out of the forest, to see a barren battlefield, littered with dead UCR and Capital alike. “What do you think happened here?” Asked Michael. “I don’t think I want to know…” Ashley said. A sniper shot breaks the silence. “Take cover!” Yelled Michael. “Where? We’re in a barren field!” “Back into the forest, they can’t see us in the underbrush!”
A squad of five Roaches crawls into the forest. “Shh… take them out one by one.” Ordered Michael. With a small burst of automatic fire by Michael, two of the Roaches are down. The remaining three pull out small energy pistols, and begin to fire at the undergrowth, burning the leaves. Ashley flanks them, and knocks out two more with a shotgun blast. The final Roach, fires bolts of energy at Ashley, while Micheal quickly assassinates it.
A loud roar is heard from across the field. “This is not good. We got Elephants inbound! Ashley, fall back.” Michael ordered. “… They can take a lot of punishment, if the Capitals are resorting to them, they must be really angry…” Stated Ashley.

KIBAFAN321
08-04-2009, 03:06 PM
-_-" Wow they are dumb...

Jarod Chidogashi
08-04-2009, 03:08 PM
-_-" Wow they are dumb...
What, the Stalkers?

Jarod Chidogashi
08-04-2009, 06:17 PM
Chapter 4
I don’t think they want peanuts.
Planet Aldeern, UCR firebase Alpha, Six hours after drop
January 31, Year 2649


“Alright, were here.” Said Morgan. “Looks like we’re not the only ones… I just hope it isn’t Capital.” A nervous Will said. “Yeah, don’t we all. Well I guess we should go in, Capital or not, we need what’s in there.”
Will slowly opens the door, careful not to make any noise, as Morgan silently enter the base. “FREEZE!” A far off, human voice said. “Well, we know there aren’t stalkers here.” Will said, lightheartedly. “This is UCR Gamma Squad, Gammas two, and three.” Morgan yelled towards the voice. “SITs huh? We could use your help. The rest of the base has been destroyed, along with most of my men. The Capitals are making their presence on this planet very clear. Heavy armor, a giant Communications Center, and much more… I am General Briggs.” Said the now, General.
“Pleased to meet you General. The rest of our squad is most likely going to rendezvous at a massive battle field we saw on the way down.” Said Morgan. “Oh… that’s not good. All of our forces there have died. In fact, this base may be the last.” “It’s alright, they know what they’re doing. What functional supplies do you have left here?” “Not much, we have two working ‘Angler’s, and some ammo, but that’s it.” “Will, get in the Angler, we’re moving out. General, we’ll be back.”

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“Come on… I have to get to Michael and Ashley.” John thought, as he was speeding through the plains. “Are those Elephants? …Oh hell no. Where are they?!”
“Is that John?” Ashley exclaimed. “I think it is… we have to get to him.” “How? Those Elephants will kill us if we go out.” “You’re right… we can radio him!” Michael turns on the radio, and gets static. “They’re jamming us… we have to signal him somehow!”
“Where are they? Come on Michael, give me a signal! Even with my rocket launcher I’m going to have trouble killing those elephants.”
“We could run out flailing our arms…” “Ashley, are you trying to get us killed.” “No, just trying to get John to see us.” “This isn’t working, they’re coming to close!” The giant blue beasts move closer to the forest, and begin to knock over the trees.
“They aren’t going to come out are they…? Ahh well, screw it. I’m going to take out those elephants!” John settles the rocket launcher on a rock. “Here goes nothing.” John says, while firing a rocket directly at one of the lumbering giants. The rocket hits the Elephant directly on the foot, making it topple over onto a rock, not quite dead. “Hehe, I wish Morgan saw that.” John said proudly.

KIBAFAN321
08-04-2009, 06:28 PM
What, the Stalkers?

Yeah, the stalkers....

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Yay! The elephants are coming! The elephants are coming!

Sephiroth
08-04-2009, 06:29 PM
cool story man i like the title

Jarod Chidogashi
08-04-2009, 06:32 PM
Yeah, the stalkers....

__________________________

Yay! The elephants are coming! The elephants are coming!
Thats a good thing? :shock:

Jarod Chidogashi
08-04-2009, 06:32 PM
cool story man i like the title
Thanks, glad you like it! :mrgreen:

KIBAFAN321
08-04-2009, 06:32 PM
....No, its just that those fat aliens are coming!

Jarod Chidogashi
08-04-2009, 06:33 PM
....No, its just that those fat aliens are coming!
They really arent fat, just big. 11ft tall. :D

KIBAFAN321
08-04-2009, 06:35 PM
...When people say the word big...I picture Choji. And picturing choji makes me beleive that they are fat.

No offence Choji!

Jarod Chidogashi
08-04-2009, 06:38 PM
-.-" Wow...

KIBAFAN321
08-04-2009, 06:39 PM
Its my opinion!

Jarod Chidogashi
08-04-2009, 06:45 PM
Its my opinion!
Yeah it is...
*Back on topic*

Jarod Chidogashi
08-04-2009, 07:09 PM
So, how do you think the story is going? Anything I can improve?

NaruSakufluff4ever
08-04-2009, 07:39 PM
its pretty good ^.^ sounds halo related tho...

Jarod Chidogashi
08-04-2009, 07:44 PM
its pretty good ^.^ sounds halo related tho...
Really? Hmm... just sci-fi.

KIBAFAN321
08-04-2009, 07:46 PM
So, how do you think the story is going? Anything I can improve?

My opinion: Its great so far, Jarod! Keep it up!

Improvement: I don't think there needs to be one. Its great the way it is so far.

The Demon Zabuza
08-04-2009, 07:47 PM
Thats a good thing? :shock:


It makes everything far more interesting. But if they can be taken down by a rocket to the foot, I suggest that you toughen them up a little.

I am having Halo flashbacks Jarod. Is this normal?

Jarod Chidogashi
08-04-2009, 07:51 PM
It makes everything far more interesting. But if they can be taken down by a rocket to the foot, I suggest that you toughen them up a little.

I am having Halo flashbacks Jarod. Is this normal?
As you'll see in Chapter five the Elephant is not out. ;)

Im not sure... you might wanna get that checked out.

Jarod Chidogashi
08-04-2009, 09:52 PM
Here's Chapter 5, I figure I'd might as well post it.

Chapter 5
Voice of the fallen.
Planet Aldeern, Unknown battlefield, Nine hours after drop
January 31, Year 2649


“Woah, Ashley did you see that?” “Yeah, it’s John alright.” “Let’s move the Elephants are distracted!” Michael ordered.
“Hehe, took them long enough to come out.” John thought to him self. “04, you up there?” Micheal yelled. “You know anyone else who could’ve hit that, Mike?” John yelled back. “Morgan?” “That was rhetorical!”
“That was my only rocket for the launcher…” an annoyed John said. “Then let’s head up the hill, and into the rocks. The more cover the better.” Ordered John. The three race up the hill, hiding behind rocks, as an enraged Elephant pounds away at them.

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“Why do the call this thing the ‘Angler’ anyway?” Will asked, as they were speeding through the forest. “See this turret I’m manning, It looks like the little lure on an angler fish.” Morgan answered. “Really? Looks more like the snout on a Marlin to me.” “Would you stop complaining? It’s just the name of a vehicle!” As the vehicle speeds through the forest, the roar of the fallen Elephant is heard, for miles.
“What was that?” Morgan asked. “Probably the rest of Gamma…” Will said. “We need to get there.”
A small group of Roaches scuttle through the underbrush, but upon hearing the Angler’s engines pull out their pistols. “Roaches! Morgan, take ‘em out!” “On it.” Morgan fire a burst of bullets from the Angler’s turret, killing most of the roaches. “Heh, sometimes they make it to easy.” “Don’t take all the kills.” Will said, while ramming the remaining Roaches into the dirt.
“Looks like we’re finally here.” Will said, as they broke the tree line. “Woah, an Elephant… not good. Morgan take it out.” The turret releases a stream of bullets headed straight towards the Elephant attacking the others. Ashley races out from behind her rock and shoots the alien dead on, with her shotgun.
“Watch out!” Michael yells, as the second Elephant fire two explosives at the Angler sending it flying, along with Will and Morgan.

NaruSakufluff4ever
08-05-2009, 08:40 AM
O.O and dude im seriously having halo flashbacks ESPECIALLY from when u play the alien side on halo 2....

KIBAFAN321
08-05-2009, 10:55 AM
It just keeps on getting better and better.

The Demon Zabuza
08-05-2009, 10:55 AM
You found Wifi!

Jarod Chidogashi
08-05-2009, 03:04 PM
You found Wifi!
Yesh! But I just got it... so I have to go write 6! >.>

The Demon Zabuza
08-05-2009, 03:42 PM
Run Jarod, run!

Jarod Chidogashi
08-05-2009, 05:25 PM
Run Jarod, run!
Im like halfway finished with chapter 6 >.>

KIBAFAN321
08-05-2009, 05:28 PM
Really? Well, WRITE WRITE WRITE!

Jarod Chidogashi
08-05-2009, 05:31 PM
Really? Well, WRITE WRITE WRITE!
-.-" Dont you think im trying?

The Demon Zabuza
08-05-2009, 05:33 PM
There's a perfectly good Forest Gump joke out of the window :(

Jarod Chidogashi
08-05-2009, 05:34 PM
There's a perfectly good Forest Gump joke out of the window :(
O.o Oh well

KIBAFAN321
08-05-2009, 05:38 PM
True true...

Jarod Chidogashi
08-05-2009, 08:28 PM
Chapter 6


The flock… of DOOM!

Planet Adeern, Capital Temple, Lighting of the Holy
January 31, Year 2649


“It is time to release the flock upon those filthy wretches.” The High Tigaanien said. “But sir, those flesh craving beasts will not only devour the human filth, but our own forces as well!” A high ranking Stalker objected. “Than tell your troops to retreat back to the holy temple, we must release them. They have gotten restless, I do not know how much longer we can contain them.” “As you wish, my lord. But I don’t know how they will take it, with their love of war.”

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The Angler flips wildly, knocking Will and Morgan onto the hard unforgiving rocks. “Ashley, you go get them, John and I will stall the Elephant.” Michael ordered. “How are we going to stall it?” John asked. “I already used my only rocket and that barely made it fall!” “I don’t know John, use your head. How did the others kill Elephants?” “They died!” John yelled.
“Ugh… Morgan, you there?” Will groaned. “…Yeah think so, where are the others?” Morgan answered. “How should I know? That Elephant shot us around quite a bit.” “Agh! I think I broke my leg.” Morgan screamed. “It’s ok, here comes Ashley.”
“This is not good.” John muttered. “Doesn’t this thing ever run out of ammo?” John asked, as the Elephant continues to pound away at the rocks. “Since when does the bad guy run out of ammo?” Michael complained, as the Elephant suddenly stop firing. “John, you go out and check!” He ordered. As John walks out, the Elephant fire a shot, that barely misses his head. “That figures.” “Hey, be glad it didn’t hit you.”
“What happened to Morgan?!” Ashley asked. “She says she broke her leg, got a med kit on you?” Will said. “Luckily for Morgan, I do.” As Ashley patches up Morgan’s wounds, the Elephant turns and races off, for a reason unknown to Gamma.

-----

“The flock has been released, my lord.” The Stalker said. “Good, we must hope your forces heed the warning, and have fled to the temple.” The Orc said, with a hint or sorrow in his voice. “It is sad to say, but if the flock fails… we may be forced to flee this holy planet. The previous filth has weakened us.”

The Demon Zabuza
08-05-2009, 08:29 PM
AAAAAHHHH!

No chapter!

[EDIT]WOOOOOOH!

Chapter!

Jarod Chidogashi
08-05-2009, 08:30 PM
AAAAAHHHH!

No chapter!
-.-" Its right above your post...

The Demon Zabuza
08-05-2009, 08:33 PM
The flock will be a swarm of insects or birds I'm guessing, that like locusts eat away at everything. But why is the planet holy?

The Demon Zabuza
08-05-2009, 08:34 PM
-.-" Its right above your post...

well it wasn't there a second ago. :???: :?:

Jarod Chidogashi
08-05-2009, 08:34 PM
The flock will be a swarm of insects or birds I'm guessing, that like locusts eat away at everything. But why is the planet holy?
You'll find out in the next chapter.
There is something there... that makes it holy! You'll find out soon enough.

Jarod Chidogashi
08-05-2009, 08:54 PM
So, as of Chapter 6, who is everyone's favorite character?

Jarod Chidogashi
08-06-2009, 07:18 PM
Chapter 7
Aliens don’t fly! Do they?
Planet Aldeern, Unknown battlefield, 15 hours after drop
February 1, Year 2649

A birdlike silhouette appears on the horizon. “Michael what is that thing?” “I wish I knew Will, let’s just hope it isn’t Capital.” As the silhouette gets closer, feathers and bat-like wings become visible. “Whatever it is, it doesn’t look friendly.” A worried Ashley said. As it gets closer, a bright orange beak, filled with rows of razor-sharp teeth are seen. “Morgan, it’s coming at us! Shoot it!” Michael ordered. Crack! A sniper shot flies through the air, and through the creatures wing. It emits a strange sound, as it falls towards the ground.
“Gamma, retreat back to the forest, I bet there’s more where that thing came from!” Michael ordered. “Hey, we saw a UCR base back there, we should go. Backup is always nice.” Will said. “Why didn’t you tell me earlier?!” Michael yelled. “Where do you think we got that Angler?” “Whatever, Will, Morgan, lead the way.”

-----

“We must find the Stone!” The High Tigaanien roared. “But lord, the humans are whittling away at our forces, we won’t last out here much longer.” The stalker said. “Than we must find it quickly! It has the energy to power our fleet for ages.” “Do you even know where it is, my lord?” “Fret not, for according to scanners, it is here in this temple. Once I claim it, we shall leave this place.” “Those native beasts where just a distraction?”
A Roach commander dashes in, terrified. “Ssss… my lord the nativesssss have taken a liking to my racccce. They have devoured many of them already. We mussssst leave quickly!” “Blasphemy! We shall not leave until we have the Stone!” The Orc roared, angrily. “The flock hassss eaten many of ussss though! I have called in the sssssurvivors, and blocked the doorsss, but they are not giving up!”

-----

As Gamma reaches the Alpha base, they notice it looks very different. “Woah, they changed the place up a bit.” Will said, while examining a new found turret. “I am sorry I lied to you about our condition.” Said Briggs as he was walking out of the base. “But seeing as how you lost our Angler, I believe it was a good choice. Now come, we have much to discuss.”
An odd sound is heard in the distance, much like the one the other creature made when it fell. “Hold that talk General. We have bigger problems.” Michael said, as multiple flying figures enter the bounds of the forest.

KIBAFAN321
08-06-2009, 07:22 PM
*runs in thread* I read it! I read both of them! Just could'nt post! But I read it! :D :D :D

Great job so far, Jarod!

To answer your question, so far, I still like Morgan! :D

Jarod Chidogashi
08-06-2009, 07:34 PM
*runs in thread* I read it! I read both of them! Just could'nt post! But I read it! :D :D :D

Great job so far, Jarod!

To answer your question, so far, I still like Morgan! :D
Roachessssss talk funny :P

KIBAFAN321
08-06-2009, 07:45 PM
:lol: Nice...!

Jarod Chidogashi
08-06-2009, 09:36 PM
Here is something I decided to make, hope it clears up any questions about the Aliens.


Everything Alien


These aliens, not the friendliest of people.



Capitals

Orcs (Tigaanien) - The green skinned four-eyed freaks of the Capitals. They seem to be the religious leaders, and have never been seen in ground combat. Their motives are unknown to the UCR currently, but they seem to hold a grudge against them. They are often seen piloting ships, or any of other various non-combat related tasks. They where the first species to be seen by the UCR, as they started the “Burning of Quantom”.
Stalkers (Stigmea) - First seen during the “Burning of Quantom”, this is a primitive, but brutal race. They carry weapons, which seem to fire superheated spikes at the target. They are dangerous at close range, with their strength and spiked tail. They always seem to carry a cloaking device, and come in trios, making them even deadlier. Their reason for joining the Capitals is unknown, but it is thought that they are merely using them for inter-galaxy travel.
Roaches (Bungama) - These insect-like creatures are the cannon fodder for the Capitals. They typically come in squads of four to seven, and are sometimes followed by cloaked Stalkers. Their black exoskeletons serve as makeshift armor, able to take a few bullets before cracking. They tend to carry pistols, that fire strange bolts of energy, able to burn through a tree. Able to stand of their hind legs, and cut through the toughest of armor with their mandibles, they are not to be taken lightly.
Elephants (An’kum) - Not seen until 2640 during the “First War of Enamele”, these huge blue beasts are a force to be taken with. Their massive arms are powerful enough to launch cars, and delicate enough to hold their explosive launchers. They stand at a frightening 11 feet, the sight of them alone strike fear into the hearts of many UCR. With their tough armor, not even a direct rocket will take them out. Their roar is so loud, it can be heard from miles away. They have fairly bad eyesight, making that their main weakness.


Natives

The Flock (Pheoni) - A race native to Aldeern, the Capitals kept them locked up, due to their flesh craving nature. Later released against the UCR these frightening beasts are something to be feared. They have bright orange beaks, filled with rows of razor-sharp teeth, which re-grow in a similar manner to sharks. They look like a cross between a bat and a bird, they have leathery wings along with feathers. Their black and red feathers make them look even more terrifying. They have ripping talons, that can shred through many surfaces with ease.

NaruSakufluff4ever
08-07-2009, 05:15 AM
pheoni dont sound very good! i guess my favorite chapter is chapter 7, especially cause of the title :mrgreen:

Jarod Chidogashi
08-07-2009, 09:49 AM
pheoni dont sound very good! i guess my favorite chapter is chapter 7, especially cause of the title :mrgreen:
No, they dont. :p Cool, who's your favorite character so far?

Jarod Chidogashi
08-07-2009, 08:52 PM
Chapter 8
Is it a bird? Is it a bat? No really, what is it?
Planet Aldeern, UCR Firebase Alpha, 20 hours after drop
February 1, Year 2649

“I see you made some friends.” The General said, as the Flock enters the bounds of the forest. “Hey, at least we’re alive. Where are the rest of your men, anyway?” John remarked. “Right here.” Briggs said, as seven marines leave the base. “At least we have a force now. There are a lot of them out there.” Michael said.
“Marines, man the turrets, and get the Angler. Gamma, you know what to do.” Briggs ordered. As John goes into the base to get more rockets, Morgan positions herself in a nearby tree. “Here they come!” A marine named Buck yells. As the first Pheoni fly at the base, a wave a bullets hail them down. “Oh rah!” A marine yells at they fall to the ground.
“Don’t get cocky marine, there are a lot more ahead.” Briggs said. As the Angler rides around hailing the Flock with bullets, more and more swarm into the forest. Three board the Angler, and slash at the marine driving it. Crack! Crack! Crack! Three mangled Pheoni bodies falls to the ground. Morgan was at work.
Ashley dives in between trees, killing Pheoni, by Pheoni. As Will fills their ugly beaks with spikes, John arrives with the launcher. “You guys started the party without me?” John complained. “Not our party, not our timing.” Michael said, while sending a storm of automatic fire into a Pheoni.
As more Pheoni arrive, they try to board the Angler once again. As the Angler’s turret struggles to knock them off, more and more swarm it. Unable to fend them all off, the Angler is finished. As all the Pheoni fly over towards the now dead marines, Gamma and the others release wave after wave of bullets, piercing their skin. “Flesh craving monsters, they’re gonna eat those marines!” John yells.
Suddenly, a Pheoni jumps out of a tree, onto one of the turrets manned by a marine. A small hole in the wing is noticed by the marine, before he is devoured alive, by the Pheoni. “You’re dead this time!” Morgan shouts, as she fires a shot straight through its head.
“There’s too many!” Briggs yells. “Yeah, I’m running out of ammo. We should retreat into the base.” Michael ordered. Three bolts of energy race by Michael’s head, incinerating a Pheoni behind him. “Whoa…”

-----

“My lord, the Flock has almost broken down the door.” Said the Stalker. “It matters not, for I have found it!” The Orc roars. “We must leave this planet. The natives have been upset, by our actions.” Crash! The door bursts open as multiple Pheoni fly in. Suddenly a blue beam breaks through the ceiling, engulfing the Capitals. They are lifted into a strange bulbous drop ship, leaving the atmosphere.
“Hello… my lord.” A rough voice says.

KIBAFAN321
08-09-2009, 07:44 PM
*runs in and reads*
____a few minutes later_____

Yay! Morgan is going to kick their butt! Woo hoo! :D

Jarod Chidogashi
08-09-2009, 07:46 PM
Or have her butt kicked XD

KIBAFAN321
08-09-2009, 07:53 PM
-_-" Well, you have to make her kick their butts!

Jarod Chidogashi
08-09-2009, 07:56 PM
-_-" Well, you have to make her kick their butts!
No garuntees. ;)

Jarod Chidogashi
08-10-2009, 01:23 PM
Chapter 9 should be up later today.

Jarod Chidogashi
08-10-2009, 07:15 PM
Chapter 9


Unexpected allies, or maybe just a few traitors.

Planet Aldeern [Orbit], Capital Cruiser Flare of the Holy
February 1, Year 2649


“Lord, do you even feel a hint of regret for our forces left on the ground?” Asked Garganon, the Stalker Chief. “I do… but it is too dangerous. The natives have run wild, we have no way to return.” Answered the High Orc. “We were able to get most of them, so it matters not. All that is left are a few Roaches, and an Elephant.” “My lord, we must get to Solairia quickly!” “I realize your concern, but it is not of importance right now.”

-----

“What was that?” A confused Micheal asked. “Greetingssss…” A strange insect-like voice said. “I don’t know whether to be happy or scared right now.” Will muttered. “I got them.” Morgan said. “Don’t shoot Gamma, I don’t think they’re here to kill us this time.” Ordered the General.
A small squad of roaches scuttles out of the undergrowth, pistols raised ready to fire at any oncoming Pheoni. “It seemsss you need some asssisstance.” A Roach said. “Maybe and alliance would be for the best…” Michael muttered. “We’ll discuss it later, right now we have to get into the base!” Briggs ordered, as a roach inflamed a hungry Pheoni.
As the rag-tag group of eight humans, and five roaches race into the base, the Pheoni fly after them, attempting to grab a roach.
“Close the doors!” Ashley screamed, as the Pheoni flocked through the open door. “On it!” The marine Bret yelled back. A hurricane of bullets and energy arcing towards the Pheoni as Bret closes the door. “We have limited time before they break down the door. How do we get off this hell of a planet?” Michael asked. “I wish I knew…” Briggs muttered. “Doesn’t this place have a com center?” Morgan asked. “Yeah, it’s in the back.” “Let’s go!” “What about ussss?” Asked the appearent roach squad leader. “Uhh… you guys guard to door.” Michael ordered.

Jarod Chidogashi
08-11-2009, 08:18 AM
Sorry chapter 9 was short, anybody have any imput?

Kon
08-11-2009, 08:28 AM
whens chapter 10 gonna be realesed

Jarod Chidogashi
08-11-2009, 08:54 AM
whens chapter 10 gonna be realesed
Hopefully today, or tomarrow. Pretty much when I finish it >.>

Jarod Chidogashi
08-20-2009, 10:06 AM
Alright, I had writer's block for awhile, but 10 is done!!!!

Jarod Chidogashi
08-20-2009, 10:06 AM
Chapter 10
I want to go home!
Planet Aldeern, UCR Firebase Alpha, 32 hours after drop
February 2, Year 2649


“Dusk come in!” Michael said into the com device. “This is Stealth Class Cruiser Dusk, what do you need?” “This is Gamma Squad, the native Pheoni have gone wild, and we have had to ally with a roach squad, along with General Briggs’ men. We need immediate extraction!” “Rodger that, Michael. You got Tetras inbound. Hold out as long as you can.”
“Alright, we are to hold out here for now. Tetras inbound.” “Tetrasss?” A confused roach asked. “They’re coming with us?” Will asked. “Yeah, we need all the help we can get in this war.” Michael answered. “Is that okay with you?” “The Capitalssss have betrayed usss. Left ussss stranded. We will gladly join you.” The roach leader answered.
“We hold out here for the Tetras, with the roaches.” Briggs ordered. “I would prefer it if you would call us Bungama, or by my personal name, Yan-mena.” The roach said. “Alright, marines we’re going to guard the back door. Will, you and Michael take the left. Morgan, Ashley, and John get the right. Bungama, you guys take the front.” Briggs ordered. As the Pheoni pound against the doors on all sides, the Bungama got nervous. “What if they break down the door?” One asked. “We’re safer here, than we were out there…” Yan-mena said.
Cracks begin to appear in right door, as the pounding increases. “That can’t be good…” John muttered. “Right door almost breached!” Morgan yelled.
A loud roar is heard from outside. Muffled screeches of Pheoni, and the rapid sound of chain guns sound off, as the Tetra lands. “Just in time.” Michael stated, walking out the door.
As the odd group enters the Tetra, more Pheoni are seen in the distance. “Lets try to leave before they get here…” Will said. “Thessssse sssseats don’t fit.” A Bungama complained. “Sorry, weren’t made for your kind. The fact that you’re here is odd in itself.” The pilot muttered.
As the Tetra leaves the atmosphere, the Pheoni continue their rage for hunger on the surface. “Looks like we won’t be going back there.” Will said, watching the silhouette of the planet fade away.

-----

“So the Capital used the natives against you?” Inquired Commander Polen. “Well… it didn’t go as planned. The natives also attacked the Capitals, though we did get an unexpected ally out of a Roach squad led by Yan-mena. ” Michael summarized. “I see. Rest up, your next mission will be sent to you shortly.” Polen said.
“What do you think our next mission will be?” Will asked. “I heard that Botanic was under attack. We may get sent there…” Morgan said. “Botanic eh? That should be fun. I always liked the forest there…”

KIBAFAN321
08-20-2009, 10:33 AM
Finally! I've been waiting for a week or two!!!

Jarod Chidogashi
08-20-2009, 10:36 AM
Finally! I've been waiting for a week or two!!!
Sorry... cant help it. I had writer's block. But I think I know whats up next for Gamma. ^_^

KIBAFAN321
08-20-2009, 10:37 AM
Well, thats good them.

Keep it up...and don't drop it!

Jarod Chidogashi
08-20-2009, 10:39 AM
Well, thats good them.

Keep it up...and don't drop it!
I wont... not until I finish alot more atleast.

KIBAFAN321
08-20-2009, 10:41 AM
Ok then...http://mail.google.com/mail/e/333

Jarod Chidogashi
08-21-2009, 08:17 AM
Chapter 11 should be up later today. Anything I could improve on, while im writing?

Gamabunta
08-21-2009, 08:19 AM
About time I got a fan club. FYI you mispelled my name.

Jarod Chidogashi
08-21-2009, 09:53 AM
About time I got a fan club. FYI you mispelled my name.
Sure Gamabunta... I'll go with that. ;)

Jarod Chidogashi
08-21-2009, 12:21 PM
Chapter 11


Whack an alien!


Planet Earth [Orbit], Command Cruiser Wildebeast
April 13, Year 2649


“Alright Gamma squadron, you are to eliminate any and all Capital presence on Botanic. Do not let it perish, we have civilians to look after there.” Ordered Polen. “Will do, sir.” Michael immediately replied. “Good, now get down to the hangar ASAP. Your going ground.
As Gamma enters the Tetra drop ship, they receive a fleet wide message from “Fleet General” Coleski, “All cruisers, report in! Our biggest military base, the planet “Inary” is under attack by multiple Capital vectors. Every ship in range of this communication report here now. We will not let Inary fall. This is direct order.”
“You heard him Gamma, the Wildebeast has to go. We will send you an evacuation ship shortly. Don’t die.” Said General Polen.
“This time, I’m flying.” Will said, taking the Tetra’s controls. “We don’t need to crash again.” “If you don’t want to crash, than why are you flying?” Morgan remarked smartly. As the Tetra soared down, closer and closer to ground level, multiple Capital battle groups were seen.
“They have ‘Axes’ (The Capital main artillery unit) down there. We need to be careful.” Will said, as they approached the landing zone. As the fish-shaped drop ship lands, a squad URC is seen fighting off a group of trio of stalkers. “You sure took your time…” One of them said, walking up to Gamma squad.
“Zulu! Long time no see.” Will said, shaking the soldier’s hand. “Sarah, is that you?” Ashley asked, walking up to her old best friend. “You got it.” Zulu- 07, Sarah replied. “What, nobody likes me?” Asked Samuel, Zulu- 08. “Still wanting attention, eh Sam?” Michael muttered.
A silhouette is spotted racing through the trees, around Zulu, and Gamma. “What do you think that is?” Asked Zulu- 06 Grace. “Trouble.” John muttered under his breath. As the reptilian figure circles the squad, more are seen coming through the trees. The strange tailless creatures bring out strange looking energy rifles, and aim directly at the two squads.
“I didn’t come unprepared.” John says, lofting a rocket launcher. “Neither we did…” Said Samuel, hand on his standard Assault rifle. As a rocket flies toward the creatures, bullets pepper their armor. “Almost too easy…” Morgan remarks, as the creatures fall to the ground unmoving.
“More where those came from.” Grace says, kicking the dead beast.

KIBAFAN321
08-21-2009, 02:20 PM
The stalkers were there! The stalkers were there! :D

Jarod Chidogashi
08-21-2009, 02:21 PM
The stalkers were there! The stalkers were there! :D
Where?

KIBAFAN321
08-21-2009, 02:23 PM
Originally Posted by Jarod Chidogashi
trio of stalkers

Right there! ^

Jarod Chidogashi
08-21-2009, 02:26 PM
Right there! ^
Wow, you really like those stalkers. -.-

KIBAFAN321
08-21-2009, 02:29 PM
Their names are cool! And funny!

Jarod Chidogashi
08-21-2009, 02:34 PM
I guess... you think theres anything I could do better?

KIBAFAN321
08-21-2009, 02:38 PM
Nope!

Wait...yeah. Nope!

Although you could add more stalkers. And elephants!

Jarod Chidogashi
08-21-2009, 02:40 PM
Nope!

Wait...yeah. Nope!

Although you could add more stalkers. And elephants!
You like Stalkers too much. XD

KIBAFAN321
08-21-2009, 02:41 PM
They're cool!

And I love their stupidity! XD

Jarod Chidogashi
08-21-2009, 02:45 PM
They're cool!

And I love their stupidity! XD
Yup. They're powerful, but stupid.

KIBAFAN321
08-21-2009, 02:47 PM
Which makes them cool! And funny!

Jarod Chidogashi
08-22-2009, 11:00 AM
Chapter 12 will be up later. Hope you like it.

The Demon Zabuza
08-22-2009, 11:02 AM
Chapter 12 will be up later. Hope you like it.

12!?!?!?!

I've got a bit of catching up to do... Sorry I haven't been here for a while, but I've been trying to write my own story, and reading other's actually changes my writing style.

Jarod Chidogashi
08-22-2009, 11:04 AM
12!?!?!?!

I've got a bit of catching up to do... Sorry I haven't been here for a while, but I've been trying to write my own story, and reading other's actually changes my writing style.
Yeah 12. XD The second Chapter of part 2

You have? Cool. ^_^ How does it do that?

The Demon Zabuza
08-22-2009, 11:17 AM
Yeah 12. XD The second Chapter of part 2

You have? Cool. ^_^ How does it do that?

I normally write with more description than you, but I find that after I read yours or Vat's fan fics, it changes. I don't want my story to be continually changing right the way through.

So I kinda stopped reading for a while, but right now I've got writers block, so it's safe :D

Jarod Chidogashi
08-22-2009, 11:20 AM
I normally write with more description than you, but I find that after I read yours or Vat's fan fics, it changes. I don't want my story to be continually changing right the way through.

So I kinda stopped reading for a while, but right now I've got writers block, so it's safe :D
Yeah, I've been trying to add more discription, but... takes time. So, besides that, anything I could improve upon?

The Demon Zabuza
08-22-2009, 11:21 AM
Yeah, I've been trying to add more discription, but... takes time. So, besides that, anything I could improve upon?

Not that I can think of right now, but I may come up with something later. I am usually more constructive than that, but I'm a little tired at the moment.

Jarod Chidogashi
08-22-2009, 11:22 AM
Not that I can think of right now, but I may come up with something later. I am usually more constructive than that, but I'm a little tired at the moment.
Thats ok, Im just trying to make it better. So who's your favorite character so far?

The Demon Zabuza
08-22-2009, 11:23 AM
Right now, it's Will :D

Jarod Chidogashi
08-22-2009, 11:25 AM
Right now, it's Will :D
He's mine too. XD
What do you think of the Capitals?

DragonAngel
08-22-2009, 11:26 AM
I'm up to chapter eight right now.

Jarod Chidogashi
08-22-2009, 11:27 AM
I'm up to chapter eight right now.

Cool. ^_^
Wait 'till you get too 11. Part two is where it gets good. :p

The Demon Zabuza
08-22-2009, 11:28 AM
He's mine too. XD
What do you think of the Capitals?

*A gravelly voice said*.

Dun dun dunnnnn.

Jarod Chidogashi
08-22-2009, 11:29 AM
*A gravelly voice said*.

Dun dun dunnnnn.
Wow... XD

You can expect chapter 12 to be up around 5:00 eastern today.

Jarod Chidogashi
08-22-2009, 02:56 PM
Chapter 12
Nasty lizard demons!
Planet Botanic, UCR Command, 2 hours after drop
April 13, Year 2649


“So that’s what happened to Aldeern…” Muttered Zulu squad leader Grace. “Yeah… so tell me Grace, what are these new Capitals we encountered before?” Inquired Michael. “They are known as ‘Janeimaye’ or what we call them, ‘Commandos’. They carry strange directed energy rifles, or energy sniper rifles. They seem to be the military commanders of the Capitals, and are often seen leading Roach squads.”
“You know the orders Zulu. We are to defend Botanic at all costs. I say, we take out those ‘Axes’ first.” Michael ordered. “I got them.” John muttered, toying with his rocket launcher. “Alright John, but we’re counting on you. Zulu will be our distraction. Will, you and me will take out any infantry near the Axes. Morgan, you know your job. Ashley, you’re going with Zulu on this mission.”
Crash! A loud explosion goes off outside the Command, startling both squads, the Axes where on the move. “We have to hurry.” Grace said. As the two squads raced out of the Command, explosions go off all around them, toppling trees and destroying most everything in their path.
Narrowly avoiding explosions, the two squads where surprisingly making good time. “We might actually make it.” Will exclaimed. Whoosh! A group of six stalkers uncloak from behind a tree. Suddenly, one fell to the ground, limp and missing an eye. “Always gotta have the first move, huh Morgan?” Michael muttered, peppering a stalker in front of him with a storm of bullets on full auto. Ashley blasts one, point blank in the head, as two more fall to the ground, bullets lodged in their heads.
The remaining stalker now enraged fire spike directly into Samuel. “Agh!” He yells, clutching his injured arm. Will quickly incinerates it, firing three bolts from the energy rifle he picked up from the earlier Commando.
Now approaching the two Axes, the squads split up. Morgan takes her position in a tree, with John hiding in the underbrush. Zulu squad races out of the trees with Ashley, making the Axes focus their fire on a smaller target. Ashley races around Axe, forcing it to turn around to get an aim, giving John enough to time fire a rocket into the cockpit.
Michael and Will dash around avoiding any stray artillery shot, and mowing down any roach stupid, or just plain unlucky enough to come in range.
With Zulu running around down there John had to be careful. He fired two rockets, each barely missing. Suddenly Grace jumped on top of the Axe. “You like explosions? You’re about to become one.” She muttered angrily, as she shoved a grenade into the cockpit, next to its Commando pilot. She quickly leaped of the Axe, and raced back into the trees, as the blue-grey vehicle exploding in a blinding light.
“Remind me again how you guys beat us in the training exercise?” She said to John, sarcastically. As the two squads returned to the Command, the smell of burnt roach was welcomed, by them both. “How did you guys beat us back then?” Asked Sarah. Morgan cast Will a quick glance, who returned it with a smile.

The Demon Zabuza
08-22-2009, 03:03 PM
So, if there is Gamma and Zulu, is there Alafa? Beta? Pi?

Jarod Chidogashi
08-22-2009, 03:05 PM
So, if there is Gamma and Zulu, is there Alafa? Beta? Pi?
At one point in time. I wont reveal how many squads are still alive though. ;)

The Demon Zabuza
08-22-2009, 03:06 PM
Love the chapter though. They were pwnedge.

And I'm still thinking Spartans, especially with the elite squad thing... please tell me there won't be a Cortanna.

Jarod Chidogashi
08-22-2009, 03:08 PM
Love the chapter though. They were pwnedge.

And I'm still thinking Spartans, especially with the elite squad thing... please tell me there won't be a Cortanna.
Thanks! ^_^

Well they arent! No sheilds, superstrength, any superhuman stuff, just lots of training. Nope. I dont plan on adding any AI right now, if ever.

KIBAFAN321
08-22-2009, 06:53 PM
Woo hoo! Go Morgan! Also...THERE WAS A STALKER! :D

Jarod Chidogashi
08-22-2009, 06:57 PM
Woo hoo! Go Morgan! Also...THERE WAS A STALKER! :D
Yeah notice the Stalkers, and not the giant tanks. XD

Jarod Chidogashi
08-23-2009, 09:26 AM
Chapter 13 is going to be different. Way different. But it will give you some farther knowledge of the SITs.

Jarod Chidogashi
08-24-2009, 04:27 PM
Chapter 13
This is the way it began.
Planet Inary, Training facility-C
June 18, Year 2645


“This is your final test. Today is the day you all become true SITs. This test is different than any before. This will decide your squads, and most likely your future. This is an all out combat. At the end of this test, you will be grouped in fives depending on you survival. As in, the last man standing is in one squad, with the other four behind him. You will be using tranquilizer bullets, instead of live ammo. We don’t want any deaths. Any questions?” None of the soldiers dared raise their hands. “Good, you have one hour to prepare. You will be dropped separately into the forest, Good luck to you all.”
“I need this… and this…” Morgan muttered to herself, grabbing a scope and tranquilizer rounds for her sniper.
“So this is it, huh?” Michael asked blankly. “This decides it all.”

-----

Will checked his helmet display. “Only five left huh? Looks like we’re a squad once this is over… Morgan, John, Michael, Ashley, and me... Wonder how that will turn out. Well, better focus on the mission the hand.” Will said to himself.
As Ashley walking through the bushy undergrowth, a faint ticking sound is heard in the bush next to her. “What is that ticking?” She muttered to herself. Suddenly she found herself engulfed in bright light. “What the he-” Boom! Three flash grenades went off around the bush, stunning her.
“We should have known the directors would do this.” Michael muttered, jumping out of the tree behind her. “Guess she’s out cold… saves me the trouble.” Michael said, placing the red ‘dead’ flag onto her back.
John cautiously walked through the undergrowth, lofting his heavy chain gun. He had amassed the most ‘kills’ of anyone during this test. But that meant nothing, all the mattered was for him to win. He heard rustling in the trees behind him. “Must just be the wind.” He muttered, continuing his search for the remaining soldiers.
“Phew, that was close.” Morgan whispered, aiming her rifle at John. “Sorry John… but this is how it goes.” Morgan says while firing a tranquilizer bullet at John’s back. “And that leaves three…” Morgan recounts, as she places a red flag on John.
Morgan climbs up a new tree, and prepares her rifle. Using the leaves as camouflage, she scopes around for anything that moves.
As Will races through the forest, he sees Morgan in her tree. He closes the distance unnoticed, and climbs up behind her. “Hi there.” He says, sitting behind her. Morgan slowly turns around unable to say anything due to fear. Regaining her confidence, she slowly asks, “Why didn’t you just shoot me?” “Not that simple. I really don’t want to be a leader, and with just three of us left… well I don’t want that chance. Just give me the flag. I’m done here.” He said.

KIBAFAN321
08-24-2009, 04:37 PM
I wanna become a SITs! xD

Did they past? When will they past?

Jarod Chidogashi
08-24-2009, 04:38 PM
I wanna become a SITs! xD

Did they past? When will they past?
"Past"? Im not following...

KIBAFAN321
08-24-2009, 04:45 PM
Now that I found out that it was in the past...nevermind. :D

The Demon Zabuza
08-24-2009, 04:57 PM
My favorite characters a wimp?

:(

Jarod Chidogashi
08-24-2009, 05:02 PM
Now that I found out that it was in the past...nevermind. :D
The dates and location is there for a reason.
My favorite characters a wimp?

:(
Not a wimp, just lazy. XD

KIBAFAN321
08-24-2009, 05:09 PM
I know! But I don't read the dates... and the location. I just read the story. Thats where the good part is...

Jarod Chidogashi
08-24-2009, 05:10 PM
I know! But I don't read the dates... and the location. I just read the story. Thats where the good part is...
Well start reading them. It makes alot more sense that way... -_-

Jarod Chidogashi
08-29-2009, 10:56 AM
Sorry for the delay, but with school I will be slower to get chapters out.
But heres 14!

Jarod Chidogashi
08-29-2009, 10:57 AM
Chapter 14
That hardly seems possible.
Planet Botanic, UCR Command, 8 hours after drop
April 13, Year 2649


As Gamma raced through the forest next to Zulu, a grey spear-like vehicle floats around in the distance. As the long vehicle approaches, the two squads dive into the undergrowth. “What is that?” A nervous Will asked. “They’re called ‘Spears’ oddly enough. They have what looks like a dual energy rifle-type thing on the front,” Answered Grace.
As the ‘Spear’ passed by; un-alerted to their presence, Gamma raced towards what looked like an odd blue-gray Capital base structure. “Zulu, make sure nothing comes in. We may be here for while.” Michael ordered, examining the large structure.

-----

As the flashing lights of hyperspace peeled away, the crew of the Wildebeast was left in shock.
“So… many Capitals. This is the largest fleet we have ever seen. Get the missiles primed, we’re going in hard!” General Polen ordered. One Capital cruiser turned to face them. Its energy weapons charging, the Wildebeast had little time to move. “Open fire!” Polen shouted, as close to thirty missiles flew right at the Capital ship. One by one the missiles exploded, as the fire spread across the Capital ship blocking its sights. Suddenly its shields sputtered, and went out with a crack, as the last few missile impacted directly into its hull.
With its gravity displaced, the Capital ship tumbled hopelessly, and fired its energy bolts to no avail. As the fire spread across the hull, it was finished. The Cruiser finally exploded, once its engines caught fire. Though it was merely the first of many, it was a victory. Small as it was, it was a win.
“Sir, missile decks 1-5 are empty. 6-12 are operational, with little ammo left,” Reported Lieutenant Commander Pierce. “Damn… open fleet com, we need reinforcements!” Ordered the General. “Sir, we are the reinforcements. We were all ordered here. This is our final stand.” Pierce said, regretfully. “Link up with the fleet, head to the dark side of Inary. We aren’t leaving without a fight.” He ordered.
As the Wildebeast slowly arrived at the far side of the planet, around thirty ships drifted into view. It was the largest fleet in UCR history. They wouldn’t let Inary fall, without giving the Capitals hell first. “Looks like we might just have a chance.” Polen said, a smile crossing his face.

Jarod Chidogashi
08-29-2009, 04:16 PM
Any opinions...? At all?

KIBAFAN321
08-29-2009, 06:43 PM
Oh! I'll say my opinion!

It was great so far. :D Took you long enough... well, I don't blame you. You have school...

Ninja Pink
08-29-2009, 06:45 PM
I loved it too!!

Jarod Chidogashi
08-29-2009, 06:54 PM
Oh! I'll say my opinion!

It was great so far. :D Took you long enough... well, I don't blame you. You have school...

I loved it too!!
Yayz! XD

Shika'sgurl
08-29-2009, 09:09 PM
Awesome story! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Jarod Chidogashi
08-29-2009, 09:14 PM
Awesome story! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Thanks! ^_^

Shika'sgurl
08-29-2009, 09:16 PM
Thanks! ^_^

No problem. :mrgreen: You should post the next chapter. I'm not a very patient person. ^_^

Jarod Chidogashi
08-29-2009, 09:17 PM
No problem. :mrgreen: You should post the next chapter. I'm not a very patient person. ^_^
Cant post what isnt written. Im only about halfway done. ^_^
Whos your favorite character?

Shika'sgurl
08-29-2009, 09:20 PM
Cant post what isnt written. Im only about halfway done. ^_^
Whos your favorite character?

:(
I like Morgan!

Jarod Chidogashi
08-29-2009, 09:24 PM
:(
I like Morgan!
Cool ^_^
Anything I could improve on, or whatnot?

Shika'sgurl
08-29-2009, 09:27 PM
Cool ^_^
Anything I could improve on, or whatnot?

Nope! Everything seems perfect!

Jarod Chidogashi
08-29-2009, 09:28 PM
Nope! Everything seems perfect!
Wow, thanks! What do you think Is gonna happen next?

Shika'sgurl
08-29-2009, 09:32 PM
Wow, thanks! What do you think Is gonna happen next?

Well, for some reason, i keep think they're going to war in the next chapter.

KIBAFAN321: You're never act happy when i say there's nothing wrong with the story. :(

Jarod Chidogashi
08-29-2009, 09:34 PM
Well, for some reason, i keep think they're going to war in the next chapter.

KIBAFAN321: You're never act happy when i say there's nothing wrong with the story. :(


Well they're sorta already in a war. XD

Sure I do! You just dont see it.

Shika'sgurl
08-29-2009, 09:35 PM
Well they're sorta already in a war. XD

Sure I do! You just dont see it.

Well, i'm thinking of "World War 3" Or "Planet War 1" XD

No you don't. Don't lie.

Brother: Hi!

He's the brother that called you weird. xD

Jarod Chidogashi
08-29-2009, 09:36 PM
Well, i'm thinking of "World War 3" Or "Planet War 1" XD

No you don't. Don't lie.

Brother: Hi!

He's the brother that called you weird. xD
Im not sure what that is. XD But you can expect a good fight in the next few chapters.

Im not lieing.

Hi.

Shika'sgurl
08-29-2009, 09:39 PM
Im not sure what that is. XD But you can expect a good fight in the next few chapters.

Im not lieing.

Hi.

Very well. :mrgreen:

Uh-huh. I believe you....

How you doing?

Jarod Chidogashi
08-29-2009, 09:42 PM
Very well. :mrgreen:

Uh-huh. I believe you....

How you doing?
And the first space battle. ^_^

Ok... well change the subject. What do you think is going to happen?

Fine. You?

Shika'sgurl
08-29-2009, 09:44 PM
And the first space battle. ^_^

Ok... well change the subject. What do you think is going to happen?

Fine. You?

Ok! :):D:mrgreen: I can't wait!

I already told you Jarod, I think more stalkers are going to come. xD I told you that in PM...

Not good.

Jarod Chidogashi
08-29-2009, 09:47 PM
Ok! :):D:mrgreen: I can't wait!

I already told you Jarod, I think more stalkers are going to come. xD I told you that in PM...

Not good.
I'm done for tonight. I have Gamma's side done. Now I need to finish the General's for the chapter.

Oh right, though they wont come the way you expect. ;)

Oh, that sucks. Why?

Shika'sgurl
08-29-2009, 09:49 PM
I'm done for tonight. I have Gamma's side done. Now I need to finish the General's for the chapter.

Oh right, though they wont come the way you expect. ;)

Oh, that sucks. Why?

That means you can post it sometime tomorrow right?

:( So they're not going to roll in, shoot goo out of their mouth, and run away? xD

Cause I'm bored.

Keep in mind, Jarod. He's only 7. I mean 8. ;)

Jarod Chidogashi
08-29-2009, 09:50 PM
That means you can post it sometime tomorrow right?

:( So they're not going to roll in, shoot goo out of their mouth, and run away? xD

Cause I'm bored.

Keep in mind, Jarod. He's only 7. I mean 8. ;)
If I finish it, yes. ^_^

Err... no. But they might be complete idiots. ^_^

Wow, great reason.

That explains alot.

narokiuzumaki
08-29-2009, 09:51 PM
hello

Shika'sgurl
08-29-2009, 09:54 PM
If I finish it, yes. ^_^

Err... no. But they might be complete idiots. ^_^

Wow, great reason.

That explains alot.

Yes!!

T-T Aww man...

Ok

Yes, yes it does.
Well, we'a going to bed. Night Jarod!

Night! And i better see that chapter posted tomorrow! JK!!! Anyway night! ;)

Good night.

Jarod Chidogashi
08-29-2009, 09:55 PM
Yes!!

T-T Aww man...

Ok

Yes, yes it does.
Well, we'a going to bed. Night Jarod!

Night! And i better see that chapter posted tomorrow! JK!!! Anyway night! ;)

Good night.


I have to go anyway.
Yes Shika, hopefully you will. ^_^

Jarod Chidogashi
09-01-2009, 03:35 PM
Chapter 15
Bigger than it looks.
Planet Botanic, Capital base Inflaming of the Unholy, 14 hours after drop
April 14, Year 2649

“Wow… this place it pretty big,” Will muttered, entering the massive Capital base. “Yeah, and we have to clear it out. No survivors. If we leave even one, they will radio back for reinforcements. And with no way off this planet that’s the last thing we want,” Michael said.
A small roach is spotted scuttling down the hall. “Get it,” Michael ordered. In a flurry of gun fire it went down without putting up a fight. The squad silently creeps down the halls, unsure of where to go.
Suddenly a loud roar breaks the silence. “Elephants,” Ashley muttered. “With them, we have no more reason for stealth,” John said, lofting his rocket launcher. “John, be careful with that. In these cramped halls the explosion will hurt more than the Elephants.” Michael ordered.
With a dull ‘thud’ the door at the far end of the hall fell, revealing three Elephants. “They don’t look to friendly…” Will muttered, aiming his energy rifle at the massive blue beasts.

-----

“Sir,” Shouted Lieutenant Commander Pierce. “Spit it out Lieutenant. We don’t have all day,” Replied the General. “We have multiple Capital vectors leaving hyperspace. Stealth cruiser Entering Darkness reported STARFISH mines set.” “Good. How are the missiles coming?” Asked Polen. “Fully restocked, sir,” Said Pierce.
The dark, bulbous, shapes of Capital ships appear with a flash, near the edge of the system. “They’re here, sir,” Muttered the Lieutenant, gravely. “Prime the new NML system. We’re going to make them regret coming to Inary,” Ordered Polen.
The air around the Capital ships crackled with heat, as their guns blazed bright red. “Sir they want a… transmission,” Pierce said. “Open it. We might as well hear what they have to say,” Polen ordered.
“Greetings… filth. Your time of cleansing has come. You shall pay for your unholy ways.” The face of the green alien leaves the screen. “Those aliens just love to run their mouths…” Polen muttered.
The red energy discharges, arcing across space towards the UCR ships. “Fire the nuclear warhead, NOW,” Polen ordered. “Nuke away,” Pierce replied, with the hit of a button.
As the first bolts of energy impact on the UCR, the Destroyer ship Rage of the Dead erupts into flames. The earlier missile launched from the Wildebeast explode in the middle of Capital lines. “We got ‘em, sir,” Pierce said, proud. The radiation quickly drains the Capital shields, while the following missiles impact of their blue-grey surface.
As the blinding light from the explosion clears, more Capital ships are left than before.
“Unbelievable…” Polen said amazed. “They used the explosion as cover for reinforcements.” “We still hit some,” Pierce said, trying to lighten up the mood.

Jarod Chidogashi
09-02-2009, 02:33 PM
Any opinions on Chapter 15?

KIBAFAN321
09-02-2009, 08:50 PM
Yay!!! Aliens! Monsterous creatures!! xD No stalkers though... but there were elephants... and roaches!!! :D

Nice part, Jarod. Keep it up! :mrgreen:

KIBAFAN321
09-02-2009, 08:50 PM
Yay!!! Aliens! Monsterous creatures!! xD No stalkers though... but there were elephants... and roaches!!! :D

Nice part, Jarod. Keep it up! :mrgreen:

Jarod Chidogashi
09-03-2009, 03:24 PM
Yay!!! Aliens! Monsterous creatures!! xD No stalkers though... but there were elephants... and roaches!!! :D

Nice part, Jarod. Keep it up! :mrgreen:
There's Stalkers in this Chapter. Dont worry. ;)

Thanks! :)

Jarod Chidogashi
09-03-2009, 03:24 PM
Chapter 16


Big explosions do not mean big fun.

Planet Unknown, Capital Holy city Solairia
April 14, Year 2649


“My lord, the humans have put up quite a resistance,” Said Garganon, the Stalker Chief. “Yes, but our Janeimaye unit shall cleanse them soon enough,” The High Orc said, a hint of doubt in his voice. “My forces would have been better…” Garganon muttered. “Do not question my judgment,” The High Orc said, slightly annoyed at the Stalker’s outburst.
“You doubt my forces?” A rough voice asked, entering the room. “Ahh, General Kato ‘Sorum. I hope your Janeimaye do not fail me. It would be a shame to lose such well trained forces. The Orc said, more calmly this time. “They won’t,” Kato replied, leaving the room.

-----

“This is not good. Orders?” John asked. “We get out,” Michael said. An Elephant fires its launcher, creating an explosion behind them.
“Will, suppress it. Your energy rifle is the only thing that can hurt them, until we get out of this hall for John.” He ordered. “On it,” Will replied, firing three bolts at the closest beast.
As the bolts hit, it kneels in pain, emitting an angry growl. “That didn’t work…” Will muttered, as the beast rises, rage in its eyes. The other two, feeling its best not to get in their enraged comrade’s way, back up down the hall.
Will, backing out of the hall, closes the door behind him. “Have fun getting through that,” He says, happy with himself. “Wow…” Ashley says, never finishing the sentence.
Will looks over the edge of the balcony, and finds himself amazed. “It’s the biggest Capital force we’ve ever seen,” He said, staring at neat rows of Axes, Spears, even ‘Arrow’ fliers.
Morgan turns around, to hear loud banging on the door. “Looks like they want in.” “Gamma, firing positions. Cover that door!” Michael ordered.

-----

“Sir, they’ve entered the mine field.” Pierce said. “Good, get as many as we can, then let all hell loose.” Polen ordered. As five Capital ships enter the range of the STARFISH mines, they go off, one by one, in a massive array of fireworks.
“Alien bastards, how do you like that?” Polen muttered. “We got three of them, two left; high damage, and shields down.” Pierce reported. “Fire the new ‘Coral’ missiles. Burn them to dust, just like they did to Quantom.” Polen ordered. “Sir, yes sir!”
The missiles fly through space and impact on the hull of the cruiser. The fire spreads, melting through its armor. By the time the fire reached the engines in a massive explosion, they were finished.
The remaining twenty-five or so Capital ships regroup, and fire a second barrage of energy.
The frigate Into the Fire maneuvers into the barrage area. The General pinged her, “What do you think you’re doing?!” “Sir, giving Inary a chance. Now General, the Fire is going to take this hit for you. Make it last. Go burn their alien hides to the ground. For Inar-” The com went dead.
“Into the Fire sacrificed herself for us. Let’s make it count.”

Shika'sgurl
09-03-2009, 09:20 PM
When's the next chapter?!?!?!?!?! Huh? When?

STALKERS!!! Yay! Yay for stalkers! You added stalkers... and elephants too!!! :D :D My day is happy right now...

Jarod Chidogashi
09-05-2009, 09:28 AM
When's the next chapter?!?!?!?!?! Huh? When?

STALKERS!!! Yay! Yay for stalkers! You added stalkers... and elephants too!!! :D :D My day is happy right now...


Should be today.

Jarod Chidogashi
09-05-2009, 12:09 PM
Chapter 17


Going Commando

Planet Botanic, Capital base Inflaming of the Unholy, 20 hours after drop
April 14, Year 2649


“Sir?” Ashley asks, nervous. “Calm down Ash. I have a plan,” Michael replied. “We’re blowing this place into next week.” “Hehe, explosions. Should be fun,” John said, hefting his launcher. “But that’s later, now we cover that door.”
“They’re going to force it down soon,” Will observed. Morgan was in her zone. No talking. She was focused on that door.
The door takes too much, and finally falls allowing the Elephant through. “Open fire!” Michael orders and a hail of bullets strike the beast. It roars in agony, but doesn’t stop its advance. It fires an explosive at Will, who dives out of the way, only getting his foot caught.
He tries to fire his energy rifle, but only gets a faint clicking. “Gah, stupid internal battery,” He mutters throwing the empty rifle at the Elephant.
Crack, crack, crack! Morgan unloads her clip into the beast, knocking its launcher out of its grasp.
“Now!” Michael yells, as John fires a rocket at the beast. The beast falls to its knees, as Ashley weaves out of cover and fire a point-blank blast down its throat.
The massive beast falls with a roar. Not even an Elephant could survive that. A second roar goes off in the hall, farther down. “Uh-oh, looks like they heard us…” Morgan muttered.
“We have bigger problems,” Michael said, pointing at the squads of Commandos emerging from the hall on the bottom floor. “I’ll hold them off,” Will says, pointing at a Spear. “You radio Zulu; we need at the backup we can get.”
“Don’t jump this time,” Michael muttered, annoyed at him. “I’m not! At least, not while there’s a ladder right there.

-----

Aboard his ‘Shield’ dropship, Commando general Kato ‘Sorum ponders his next move, “We must go planet side. We will cleanse the filth off ‘Botanic’, as the humans call it.”
The drop ship flies into Botanic’s orbit. The com goes on suddenly, “Looksss like you want to die… I will grant you that wisssssh, General.”

KIBAFAN321
09-05-2009, 12:47 PM
BOOM!!!!
Explosions!!!!!
Elephant died. MUHAHA!!! (:<
But no stalkers....

The General going to die? Is he? Huh?

Jarod Chidogashi
09-05-2009, 12:50 PM
BOOM!!!!
Explosions!!!!!
Elephant died. MUHAHA!!! (:<
But no stalkers....

The General going to die? Is he? Huh?
Elephant died. XD
More where it came from though...
Yeah, Kato doesnt really like them. And he's in charge of the invasion of Botanic.

Is he? You'll find out soon enough. Can you guess who the one that threatened him was?

KIBAFAN321
09-05-2009, 12:54 PM
Yay!!!
Yayer!!! xD
Aww.... I love the stalkers! xD Their names are SO funny!

Is it the roaches? Cause it sounds like them. Hmm........

Jarod Chidogashi
09-05-2009, 12:55 PM
Yay!!!
Yayer!!! xD
Aww.... I love the stalkers! xD Their names are SO funny!

Is it the roaches? Cause it sounds like them. Hmm........
They weren't even intended to be funny. XD

Maybe. Do you really want to know?

KIBAFAN321
09-05-2009, 01:01 PM
Really? But they're awesome anyways!! :D

Shika went on her account... but I want to know!!!

Jarod Chidogashi
09-05-2009, 01:03 PM
Really? But they're awesome anyways!! :D

Shika went on her account... but I want to know!!!
Yeah. Sure they are... O.o

Ok, I'll PM it.

KIBAFAN321
09-05-2009, 01:04 PM
Don't you laugh when you hear the name, "Stalker"?

Ok

Jarod Chidogashi
09-05-2009, 01:05 PM
Don't you laugh when you hear the name, "Stalker"?

Ok
Not really, though that could be because I type it alot now.

KIBAFAN321
09-05-2009, 01:09 PM
Well, I keep on typing "stalker" and I don't get bored. :D

Shika'sgurl
09-05-2009, 01:11 PM
They weren't even intended to be funny. XD

Maybe. Do you really want to know?

Yeah. But then again, it might spoil everything.......I know! If you post the next chapter, then i'll know what it is. Then it won't spoil anything, and i get to read what happens next! :mrgreen::mrgreen::mrgreen:

Jarod Chidogashi
09-05-2009, 01:13 PM
Well, I keep on typing "stalker" and I don't get bored. :D
Thats you.
Yeah. But then again, it might spoil everything.......I know! If you post the next chapter, then i'll know what it is. Then it won't spoil anything, and i get to read what happens next! :mrgreen::mrgreen::mrgreen:
Good choice XD

Shika'sgurl
09-05-2009, 01:14 PM
Good choice XD

So you'll do it?

Jarod Chidogashi
09-05-2009, 01:17 PM
So you'll do it?
I post the Chapters when I finish them. I got so many out this week, because I did them during the boring classes at school. XD

Shika'sgurl
09-05-2009, 01:27 PM
I post the Chapters when I finish them. I got so many out this week, because I did them during the boring classes at school. XD

Ok then. Wait, didn't you get caught or something? .........Not trying to jinx you though.....

Jarod Chidogashi
09-05-2009, 01:30 PM
Ok then. Wait, didn't you get caught or something? .........Not trying to jinx you though.....
No. Not yet atleast... Though my SS teacher said if she saw someone drawing or something, she would put it in our portfolio. XD

Shika'sgurl
09-05-2009, 01:37 PM
No. Not yet atleast... Though my SS teacher said if she saw someone drawing or something, she would put it in our portfolio. XD


Well then Good luck!! :mrgreen:

Jarod Chidogashi
09-05-2009, 01:38 PM
Well then Good luck!! :mrgreen:
Who's your favorite character so far, now?

Shika'sgurl
09-05-2009, 01:40 PM
Who's your favorite character so far, now?

Still like Morgan. :mrgreen:

Jarod Chidogashi
09-05-2009, 01:42 PM
Still like Morgan. :mrgreen:
Cool. You can expect more new Capitals soon too. ^_^

Shika'sgurl
09-05-2009, 01:45 PM
Cool. You can expect more new Capitals soon too. ^_^

I can't wait!!!!

Jarod Chidogashi
09-05-2009, 01:46 PM
I can't wait!!!!
Well you're going to have to. XD

I need to start this chapter. >.>

Shika'sgurl
09-05-2009, 01:48 PM
Well you're going to have to. XD

I need to start this chapter. >.>

*pouts* JK!!!!! Ok fine i'll wait.

Jarod Chidogashi
09-05-2009, 01:49 PM
*pouts* JK!!!!! Ok fine i'll wait.
All I have is the name... and location. I need words... o.o

Shika'sgurl
09-05-2009, 01:55 PM
All I have is the name... and location. I need words... o.o


Oh.......good luck!?

Jarod Chidogashi
09-05-2009, 01:57 PM
Oh.......good luck!?
Oh and FYI, this Chapter isnt going to have Gamma squad in it.

Shika'sgurl
09-05-2009, 02:08 PM
Oh and FYI, this Chapter isnt going to have Gamma squad in it.

So it'll just have the aliens and stuff?

Jarod Chidogashi
09-05-2009, 02:10 PM
So it'll just have the aliens and stuff?
Yeah. I didnt want to juggle 3 parts per chapter, so this will have Polen/Kato's sides.

Shika'sgurl
09-05-2009, 02:26 PM
Yeah. I didnt want to juggle 3 parts per chapter, so this will have Polen/Kato's sides.

Works for me!

Jarod Chidogashi
09-05-2009, 02:27 PM
Works for me!
Good. ^_^

Shika'sgurl
09-05-2009, 02:30 PM
Good. ^_^

Yep yep!!

Jarod Chidogashi
09-05-2009, 02:32 PM
Yep yep!!
Something big is happening this Chapter. Something big, and unexpected.

Shika'sgurl
09-05-2009, 02:34 PM
Something big is happening this Chapter. Something big, and unexpected.

:shock:
Really? Is someone important going to die? Or is someone going to be a traitor? Tell me!! ...............................plz?

Jarod Chidogashi
09-05-2009, 02:36 PM
:shock:
Really? Is someone important going to die? Or is someone going to be a traitor? Tell me!! ...............................plz?
Maybe. You can wait and find out!

Shika'sgurl
09-05-2009, 02:43 PM
Maybe. You can wait and find out!

I hate waiting though!!!!

Jarod Chidogashi
09-05-2009, 02:47 PM
I hate waiting though!!!!
I have a third of 18 done now, so not much longer.

Shika'sgurl
09-05-2009, 02:53 PM
I have a third of 18 done now, so not much longer.

Ok then. Thanks!

Jarod Chidogashi
09-06-2009, 11:15 AM
Chapter 18
New guys. I hate them too.
Planet Inary[Orbit], Cruiser Wildebeast
April 15, Year 2649


“Sir, the Capital energy lines are hot. They’re preparing to fire. What do we do?” Pierce asked. “We hit first. Order the Cruiser to fire their nukes. Prepare the Coral missiles. Inary isn’t going down.” Polen ordered.
A bright light flashes through space, and the ship next to the Wildebeast explodes in a blinding flare. “Sir, we’re reading radiation from that ship. Their nuke went off!” Pierce yelled. “Get us out of here! Now!” Polen yelled.
The explosion devours the Wildebeast. Its hull heats, radiation leaking through.
Suddenly a new ship appears out of hyperspace, UCR Command frigate Entering Dayligh, One of the most powerful ships in all of the UCR. The ship carried three nuclear warheads, and a prototype energy weapon made of salvaged Capital tech.
Another flash incinerates a second UCR ship. The Capitals had a new toy as well.

-----

“Yan-mena! You have betrayed us,” Kato said, angrily. “No General, you have betrayed me. You and you’re so called ‘Lord’ left ussss stranded on Aldeern,” The Roach said, his voice dripping in anger. “It is not my place to speak for the High Orc. But I can say, my Commandos and I for that matter; mean you no harm. Should you choose to fight us, it is up to you,” Kato said, his voice calmer this time.
“If only I could believe that. I’m ssssorry General, but is mussst be done,” The Roach said, no fear in his voice. “As you wish Mena, but you are in a pitiful human ship.” Kato replied, his voice showing the same amount of confidence.
“Ssssorry General, but I am at the advantage here.” Yan-mena’s ship releases a barrage of missiles, heading towards the General.
“You would think that. I pity you Bungama,” Kato says, his escape pod falling to Botanic’s surface.
“Escape pods, falling towards the surface,” Inti, Yan-mena’s right hand man said. “Inti, prepare a Tetra drop ship. We’re going planet side too,” He ordered.

Shika'sgurl
09-06-2009, 02:58 PM
So does the guy, what ever his name is, going to die?.................I think it was Kato.......

Jarod Chidogashi
09-06-2009, 03:21 PM
So does the guy, what ever his name is, going to die?.................I think it was Kato.......
Wait and see. ;)

KIBAFAN321
09-07-2009, 12:46 PM
Blah! That Yan-Mena is annoying! So much "ssssss" BLah!

Nice part, Jarod! Wasn't really big... but deh Kato guy didn't die... yet..

Jarod Chidogashi
09-09-2009, 06:39 PM
Chapter 19
Yes mother.
Planet Botanic, Capital base Inflaming of the Unholy, 25 hours after drop
April 15, Year 2649


Will climbs down the ladder, and limps toward a Spear. “This is a step up from those rifles,” He said, examining the strange glowing buttons.
“Morgan, get in position,” Michael ordered. “Ashley, go down with Will. Get a Spear. “What about me?” John asked. “Or right… uhh 04, stop any Capitals getting vehicles. Cause as much chaos as you can.” “I love this job.”
“Sir, Capitals on that balcony over there. Commando snipers,” Morgan reported. “Take ‘em out. One shot each.” Crack, crack, crack! Morgan emptied her clip into the aliens.
Ashley flew down the ladder, and landed next to Will. Will pressed a button, and his Spear rose a meter off the ground. “Anti-grav. Nice, now I just need the weapons.” Will said, staring at the rows of buttons.
“Cut the chatter,” Michael ordered, via the com. “Yes mother,” Will said, sarcastically. “I will cut your com,” He said, annoyed. “Oh come on Mike, take a joke,” Morgan said.

-----

Kato ‘Sorum examines his pod. “Two energy rifles… that’s it. It’ll do against the filth.” He picks them up, checking their battery. “Time to cleanse. The humans shall burn under my feet.” He roars.
His pod hits the ground with a dull, thud.
He walks out into the underbrush, tail twitching back and forth. “I know this smell… human filth. We shall claim this planet.” He runs through the forest, towards UCR Command on Botanic. Unknown to him, he was about to stumble upon the most heavily defended place on Botanic.

“We have movement on the scanners,” Said Zulu 08- Samuel. He was stuck at Command due to his earlier wound. “Capital?” Asked Colonel Jeffries. “Possible, not sure. It’s going fast though, Commando fast. Lock up. We’re calling Zulu back, if the Capitals are here than it’s bigger than we thought.”
Sam turned on the radio. “Zulu, come in! We need you here at Command. This overrides anything Gamma ordered you.” “Alright Sam, but Gammas tied up in a Capital base. A whole army of them.” Grace replied.

Jarod Chidogashi
09-10-2009, 02:47 PM
Any opinions?

Shika'sgurl
09-10-2009, 04:13 PM
Pretty good!! The Gama are back in this chap!! And Morgan's in it!!! Yay!!!

Jarod Chidogashi
09-10-2009, 04:14 PM
Pretty good!! The Gama are back in this chap!! And Morgan's in it!!! Yay!!!
Yup. She's in this next one too. Got about half done. Only time I really get to wright it is in school. Wierd how that works.

Shika'sgurl
09-10-2009, 04:24 PM
Yup. She's in this next one too. Got about half done. Only time I really get to wright it is in school. Wierd how that works.


Yay!! Yeah, school is really boring. Anybody would do anything to make it go by faster. XD

Jarod Chidogashi
09-10-2009, 04:31 PM
Yay!! Yeah, school is really boring. Anybody would do anything to make it go by faster. XD
Yeah, I dont like school.

Jarod Chidogashi
09-11-2009, 06:25 PM
Next chapter is almost done!

Jarod Chidogashi
09-11-2009, 07:29 PM
Chapter 20
Welcome to Inary, hope you die!
Planet Botanic, UCR Command
April 15, Year 2649


The Elephants thundered down the slim hallway. They had their minds set on one thing; Killing Gamma squad.
They climb through the wreckage of the door and face Will, Morgan, and John. They release a low growl and fire their launchers.
The explosives impact all around, but the balcony holds. It was strong.
“Big as they are, these oafs have bad aim,” Morgan said. She pulls the trigger of her rifle. Nothing happens. “Uh-oh…” She muttered. The ammo counter read zero. “John, try to hit those Elephants. Preferably before they blow us up,” Michael ordered.
“I have to rockets. There are two of them. I don’t like these odds,” John said, reloading his launcher. “Watch it though, John. This balcony barely holds the Elephant’s launchers. Your rockets may break it,” Michael said.
John fired a rocket anyway. It impacts on the floor in front of the Elephant, shattering it. The balcony crumbles away beneath their feet.
“John you idiot!” The falling Morgan screamed. John fires a second rocket mid-fall. “Idiot huh?” The second rocket explodes on the Elephant, striking dead on.
Gamma and the remaining Elephant fall into the rubble, more falling around them. “Yes, you are an idiot,” Michael mutters, knocking rocks off of himself.
“Look what you did!” Michael said, lifting Morgan’s limp body. “She’s breathing, but barely. “Argh…” John muttered. He glances at Morgan. “Command isn’t going to like this.”
The first Commandos get in their ‘Arrows’, unstopped by Gamma, and quickly fly out of the hangar area. They where headed somewhere.



Vice Admiral Julia Paterson, Commander of the most powerful UCR ship on this side of the galaxy. The Entering Daylight. “What happened here?” She asks over FleetCOM.
“Capitals, and a lot of them. We took most out, but not without heavy casualties. We lost General Polen, and the Wildebeast, Reported Entering Darkness. “The remaining Capitals have fled behind this planet’s moon.”
“Curses, they’re smart. What’s our condition?” Paterson asked. “10 functional ships. 3 weapons offline and two nearly destroyed. And we’re up against 10 of the Capital’s.” “I don’t like these odds,” She muttered.
“Evacuate one of the critically wounded ships. They’re no use to us. Arm its nukes, and send it on a collision course with the Capitals. Call it a ‘Welcome to Inary gift basket’.”

Jarod Chidogashi
09-12-2009, 10:28 AM
It makes me sad that nobody seems to read this.

Jamie Chidogashi
09-12-2009, 10:34 AM
It makes me sad that nobody seems to read this.

wow...cool chapter :D

Jarod Chidogashi
09-12-2009, 10:40 AM
wow...cool chapter :D
You read it? The guy who reads nothing but Naruto? Wow, Thanks! XD

mysticninja
09-12-2009, 11:25 AM
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mysticninja
09-12-2009, 11:26 AM
jarod are u on

mysticninja
09-12-2009, 11:27 AM
nice chapter jarod

mysticninja
09-12-2009, 11:28 AM
jamie u there

mysticninja
09-12-2009, 11:28 AM
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mysticninja
09-12-2009, 11:29 AM
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mysticninja
09-12-2009, 11:29 AM
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mysticninja
09-12-2009, 11:29 AM
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mysticninja
09-12-2009, 11:29 AM
total awsome story really

Jarod Chidogashi
09-12-2009, 11:30 AM
mystic- hey

jarod are u on

nice chapter jarod

jamie u there

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im getting post
Stop spamming. I will report these posts.

mysticninja
09-12-2009, 11:30 AM
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mysticninja
09-12-2009, 11:30 AM
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sorry jarod

mysticninja
09-12-2009, 11:31 AM
jarod

mysticninja
09-12-2009, 11:31 AM
jarod uthrer

mysticninja
09-12-2009, 11:32 AM
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Jarod Chidogashi
09-12-2009, 11:33 AM
jarod

jarod uthrer

no really u there
Stop spamming! Reported again

KIBAFAN321
09-12-2009, 12:08 PM
19-... its a nice chapter, Jarod!

20-OO Poor Morgan. ): Yes, John is an idiot!!

Jarod Chidogashi
09-12-2009, 12:09 PM
19-... its a nice chapter, Jarod!

20-OO Poor Morgan. ): Yes, John is an idiot!!
Something wrong with 19?

Yeah... yay for stupidity! XD

KIBAFAN321
09-12-2009, 12:10 PM
No, theres nothing wrong with it. Just I didn't really understand it much...

Yay!! xD lol

Jarod Chidogashi
09-12-2009, 12:13 PM
No, theres nothing wrong with it. Just I didn't really understand it much...

Yay!! xD lol
What didnt you understand?

KIBAFAN321
09-12-2009, 12:18 PM
I don't knjow. Just didn't make sense for some reason..

Jarod Chidogashi
09-12-2009, 12:20 PM
I don't knjow. Just didn't make sense for some reason..
Has to make more sense than knjow. XD

KIBAFAN321
09-12-2009, 12:21 PM
Well, it just didn't make sense for my idiotic brain

Jarod Chidogashi
09-13-2009, 08:24 AM
Well, it just didn't make sense for my idiotic brain
Ok... well, I hope you understand the next one better.

Shika'sgurl
09-13-2009, 02:33 PM
Chap 20 was good! :mrgreen: Poor Morgan though. I hope she doesn't die. :(