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Sasuke/Itachi
08-01-2009, 03:27 PM
I was bored so I decided to do a fan fiction story. So it is about a boy who is a genin in the village hidden in the ocean. So far there is one arc but it will be updated everyday.

Characters(Updated everyday):

Tachi
Gender: Male
age:13
personality: He is like naruto but is not lonely at first.
Backround: His Father died from the great shinobi war 2 when his Mother was pregnant with him.

Tachi mother(Miskso)
Gender: female
age: 34
personality: He cares for her 2 children and teaches her childrn disaplan.
backround: She is a widow since her Husban died in the great shinobi war 3. She is a Jonin and often have their next neighbor look after her children when she is doing mission.

Ankamru(Tachi big brother)
age:15
personality: He likes to fool around sometimes. But during mission he never fool arounds.
Backround:He is a genin looking forward to the chunin exams.

Jino
age:13
personality: He is a wise person
backround: He is Tachi best friend. He know alot about ninja. He is in cell # 12with Kin and Rin.

Kanda
age:28
personality:?
Backround: An acaedmy teacher.

Gand9imaru
age:13
personality: He is a kind person. But gets introuble in the academy alot. Till he graduate
backround: he is in the Kang clan and weilds the Kangan. He is in cell #13 with Tachi and Kayla.

Kayla
age:13
personality: She is rude and also a gossiper.
backround: She is friends with Kanto and she gossips. She is in cell # 13 with Tachi and Gandimaru.


Inamaru
age:34
personality: Unknown so far.
backround: A Jonin in the village hidden in the ocean. He is like Asuma because of his knuckle weapon and chakra nature. But he doesn't smoke and have a beared. He is the Jonin/Sensei/ Leader of cell # 13.

Kanto
age:13
personality"rude and a gossiper. Has a crush on Tachi
backrond: Friends with Kayla and gossips. She is in cell # 10 with Kichimaru and Mimi.

Kichimaru
age:13
personality: Cool(Like sasuke but doesn't do the revenge thing)
backround: He is cool guy girls are all over. Tachi, Jino, and Hina dislies him.

Mimi
age:13
personality:shy
backround:shy boy who only talks to his family,teachers, and his friends. Ever since he met Jino Jino would do bunch of stuff to trick him to talk.

Hina
age:13
personality: positive attitude
backround: Hina is Tachi and Jino friend. She is a girl who wants to be the ultimate female ninja. She allways believe in others in herself.

Rin
age:13
personality: unknown
backround: Rin is this normal guys. He couldn't do the transformation jutsu which means he almost failed. He just started training his clan jutsu but has no talent in his clan kekkie Genkie. He is in he Abarami clan

Shika
age:13
personality:?
backround:Shika is in a family of puppet master. He only have one puppet but it is not for fighting. Shika will do anything to get a fighting puppet.

kin and Zin
age:13
personality:?
backround:Kin and Zin are creepy twins. When I mean creepy. Kin says one half of the sentence and Zin says the other.

The 4th Naukage
age" He is in his 40's
personality:?
backround: He is the fourth Naukage of the Ocean village.

Prince Tyson
age:13
personality: spoil and complains
backround: He visits the Ocean village and is going home so Tachi cell is escorting him. He is chunin and the son of the Rainbow village kage. He is knownas the Prince of the Rainbow village.













Ars and chapters:

The begining arc


Prolouge
#1 The acedemy test
#2 Bell training
#3 First mission escort the Prince(part 1)
#4 First mission escort the prince(part 2)
Mom's new boy friend arc


Masa
Traning with Mom and Masa
The secret of Masa
Battle Tachi and Ankamaru v.s Mom's boyfriend
Mom and sons v.s Masa the final showdown

Below is the chapters if you don't want to search this thread for it.

Prolouge
Proluge


The prolouge take place in the great shinobi war 3.(Like world war but ninja version). Ninja were asign mission every day and it was about 15 mission a day nonstop. During a battle Tachi dad was engaging in battle with a Tree village ninja. But a rogue ninja ambush them and killed Tachi father. When a chunin found his body he took the body with him and return it to his wife. She was pregnant with Tachi so she wasn't on any mission a the moment. Tachi brother Aknamaru ask"why is he sleeping at a like this:. SHe replied :He is dead." Ankamaru was only 2 so he just learn how to talk and walk. Tachi mother explain the word death. Right after the story Ankamaru fell asleep. His mother cried tel he fell asleep.12 years later Tachi was 13 years old and an Acedemy sudent getting ready for the acedemy exams. If he pass that will be hisa birthday gift since that day was his birthday.

To be continued in chapter 1.

Chapter 1 the academy test

Chapter 1 the academy test

Tachi wakes up at 6:30 in the morning. He got out of his bed and change clothes. He put on his T shirt and some blue pants and brush his hair and brudh his teeth and headed down stais. He took an apple sat down and ate it. "Tachi are you ready for the big test?" asked his Mother. "Mom I'm ready and excited to finaly become a ninja" Tachi said proudly. " If you pass. Don't worry bro. The test is easy as long you know the shadow clone jutsu." Ankamaru said. Ankamaru is packing up his Kunais, Shurikens, and srolls. " Do you have a mission Ankamaru?" Ask achi." Yes I do. I need to gaurd civilian to the other village. Since he has a wanted price on his head" reply Ankanmaru. The Ankamaru left the house to meeet up with his cell. "Tachi you need to go to the acedemy it is almost time. Good luck. I have a mission but I'll be back before you come home." Said his Mother putting away the dishes. Tachi said bye and left the house too the acedemy.
So while he was walking towards the acedemy his best friend Jido walks near him. "Are you ready for the big test Tachi?" asked Jino. "Not really. I study and pratice the shadow clone jutsu.. Are you nervous." reply Tachi. "No I'm not. It will be easy" reply Jino. The two friends walked all the way there. Once they were at the acedemy they went through the doors took a left and in a room. They sat at the end.
Their academy teacher Kanda. Kanda sensei said" The test begins now. Each student pick up their pencil and start the test. Tachi was answered the first 6 question easily but it started to gethard on number 7. Jando put his pencil down and said"DONE". Jando is a genius when it comes to ninja stuff. Kando lead him to a different room. tachi discover each answer. Then when he got to the last one half the class was in the other room. The question was this. What rank mission does genin get asisn too. He thin about it for a while hen put the answer D ranks and sometimes C ranks. He yelled"DONE" then went to the other room. A Jonin was there and said" perform the jutsu". Tachi form a hand sign and said "shadow clone jutsu'' 2 shadow clones appear. "Good" said the the Jonin. He headed him his head band. He put on his forehead. Then left the building.
He meet up with Jino. "So by the looks of your forehead you pass the test" Jino said. "Yep the last quistion was hard" said Tachi. "It was easy they tell us everyday for a week. You just can't get over that you can't do S ranks missions. Well see ya my family are going to celebrate." Tachi went home. His mother was there. They went to a ramen restarunt. "Your father must be proud right now" his mother said. tachi smiled and ate till they go home and fell asleep.

To be cotinued in chapter 2 the bell training.

Chapter 2 the bell training Chapter 2 the bell training.

Tachi woke up at 6:00 in the morning. he did his orning routine and went down stais. No one is in the house but a note on the table.
Dear tachi,
I have an a rank mission so I won't be home in a while. nkamaru is suppose o be back around 9:00 p.m. Don't have an act if you don't like your ninja cell or your grounded for a month. By I love.
From mom.

Tachi leftthe house and ran all the wy to the academy. While he was running he put on his headband. H enter the asademy doors and into the rooms. he found Jino and stand by him. Once everyone is here he started to anounce the cells. "O.K. Most of you pass. So I'll anounce your three teamates and your sensei. " kando anounce to the people who pass." I hope me and you will be in the same cell. That will be awesome." Jino said to Tachi. "Me too but remember. I don't think they want us in the same cell" tachi replies. "Your right" Jino said.
" Cell #10. Kanto, Kichimaru, and Mimi. Their sensei will be Raji." kanda anounce. Kanto is this girl who is always gossiping with his friends. She dislikes Jino. But has a crush on Tachi. Kichimaru is a the type of guy girls are all over. He has cool looks. Tachi and Jino and Hina( A classmate) dislike him. Mimi is this shy boy who only talks to his family,teachers, and his friends. Ever since he met Jino Jino would do bunch of stuff to trick him to talk.

"Cell #11 will be Hina, Rin, and Shika. Their sensei will be Loonei." announce Kanda again. Hina is Tachi and Jino friend. She is a girl who wants to be the ultimate female ninja. She allways believe in others in herself. Rin is this normal guys. He couldn't do the transformation jutsu which means he almost failed. He just started training his clan jutsu but has no talent in his clan kekkie Genkie. He is in he Abarami clan. Shika is in a family of puppet master. He only have one puppet but it is not for fighting. Shika will do anything to get a fighting puppet.

"Cell #12 Kin, Rin, and Jino. Their sensi will be Hinoh." announce Kanda. Kin and Jin are creepy twins. When I mean creepy. Kin says one half of the sentence and Jin says the other. You should know Jino. He is my best friend and is pretty smart.

" Last but not least cell # 13 Tachi, Gandimaru, and Kayla and their sensei Inamaru." announce Kanda. Ganamaru is a guy who gets in trouble with Kanda alot. he is in the Kang clan and posses the Kangan. Kayla is friends with Kanto so she is always gossiping.

"I'll give 15 minutes to get to know your cell while I get the Joinin. "See ya later Tachi I have to del with the twins so bye." Jino said running of to them. Tachi headed towards th closets in his cell. it ended up to be Kayla. " So who knew ou have to be my team mate." said Tachi. "Tsk. why can't I get paired up with Kanto. Why do I have to del with this shrimp." said Kayla and a mad mood. " hey we have to work together." said tachi. Gandimaru walks come near them. " So you guys are Tachi and Kayla. Nice to meet you. I hope we get along well." Gandimaru said. "Please!" kayla said in a nasty voice. Everyone in cell 13 hard a foot step come near them. It was a man wearing a Joinin vest. he is atleast 5 feet 9. He has black hair too. " So now on. I'll be the Jonin/leader/sensei of team 13. I'm Inamaru." Inamaru said. "Wow. When is our first mission?"said Tachi excitedly. " slow down. i have to see if you guys are really quilifiy as true Genin." Inamaru said."WHATTTTTTTT!!!!!!" The whole cell number 13 besides Inamaru said. "You'll see. meet me at the training grounds in exactly 3 hours. Bring your kunais and shurikens" Inamaru commannd them. The cell left the academy and went home.

Once tachi was at home he enter. He saw Ankamaru eating. "hey you're back. I saw your cell while I was in the nakage office." Ankamaru said. " Yeah. Our Jonin Inaaru said we aren''t full Genin yet. Did that happen to you." Tachi asks Ankamaru. "Oh the bell training. That was rough. Hey catch this scroll. This is one of dads scroll mom told me. It has his signature jutsu." Ankamaru said throwing him the scroll. Tachi went out of the house and headed towards the training grounds.
Once Tachi got to the training grounds. The rest of the cell was already there. "O.k first I got to explain. This is a test to test your abilities. To see if you are quilify to be a genin.What I mean is you won't be true genin if you don't pass the test. Hre is your objective. You have to get these 2 bells hanging on my belt. We will fight like we're enmies. You got till 12:00 in the after noon to get these bells from me. Lets begin." Inamaru said. Tachi charge at Inamaru . he took out his Kunai and strike Inamaru. But Inamaru dodge the attack ran quickly in front of Tachi and kick back to Gandamaru and kayla. Inamru put his hands in his pocket and grab out two shorts weaopns then he put his hand trought the hole till it reach his knucles. It seems with these weapons on his hands if he put both of his arms out. The two points of each blae was towards each other. "If you guys are carius what these are. They are brunch knucles. They are rare in this village. I put the fingers through the hole with bumps at the bottom till the knucles reach the hole. I close my hands in a fist and i swipe at my oppoment. I can add chakra to the bruch knuckles." explain Inamaru. he put his hands in a fist. Then he ran very quickly in the midle of the three teamates and uses wind style: Twister. He spin himself that sent the three flying in diferent directions.
Gandamaru landed in the woods. He got up but was shocked. He heard Inamaru running after them.He then apear infront of Kandamaru about 10 feet away . Taijutsu would be useless againts you so I'll use ninjutsu. Inamaru was about to use a hand sign but he was frozen. "Huh by the looks of your eyes you are apart of the Kang clan aren't you. Oh well I can't stay frozen for long." said Inamaru. "Those bells are mine." said Gandamaru charging at Inamaru. Once he got 1 feet away from him. Inamaru form a hand sign and use Wind style: wave palm. Blades of wind charge at Gandamaru but he dodge all of them. "Impossible. No one can't escape the kangan!" Gandamaru said. " It only works if you are consetrating on your target." Inamaru explain. Gandamaru shock was ever. Then he did a hand sign then he uses wind style: hurricane. That sent Gandamaru flying.
kayla was running in the forest but she heard a foot step. She threw shurikens and kunais at the person behind her but the person dodge it all Kayla look behind her and saod"Oh it you Kanto". " Yeah it is me . Guess what my jonin is a pervert." said Kanto. But she disapear. "What a shadow clone" said Kayla. "No a genjutsu." It was Inamaru preparing to kick kayla but tachi ran to protect her but he kick both of them flying. They both landed near Gandamaru.
All threee of them got up. "What are we doing. We got to put our act together." Tachi said. Inamaru apears. Then Tachi threw kunai. It went through the bells and the kunai landed on a tree with the bells hanging from the kunai.Inamaru said"Gah. But I can alway go it." But he was frozzen. Kayla notice Gandamaru eyes. he was doing the kangan. Kayla ran quickly to the bells and grab them. Gandamaru unfroze Inamaru. Tachi and Gandamaru smile at kayla. Inamaru grinnat both of them. They have officaly become genin.

Since the bell training they have been off on D-ranks mission then enventualy they get a C-rank mission.


To be continued in chapter 3 C-rank mission protect the prince.(part 1)

Chapter 3 C-rank mission escort the Prince(Part 1)Chapter 3 escort the prince(Part 1)

Tachi was walking to the Naukage's office. He walked through the entrance then went to the Naukage office. His cell was there and stand by Gandamaru."You're late. Tachi. I'll explain your mission. Our greatest ally the rainbow village. Their kage son known as the Prince of the Rainbow visit this village. He is now coming back to his village. So this is where you guys come in. You need to escort the Pince to his village safely. But here is a warning he has a bounty on his head for 500000 Ryo" said the Naukage. The Naukage is about in his 40's. He has gayish blackish hair. He wears a Kage robe. "Got it. Kayla,Gandamaru, and Tachi gear up. Pack your shurikens,Kunia, and scrolls." vommanded Inamaru. All 4 of them vanish.
Tachi appears at his house. " See ya mom. I won't be back in probaly 2 days." said Tachi packing his surikens, Kunais, and his one scroll. Tachi then vanish."He is growing up. ALready doing mission. You must be prowd." thought Tachi's mother.
Tachi appears at the village gate with his cell. "Finally you guys show up. The mission should be a S-rank mission and the ninja should be ANBU ninja not you guys." said the Prince. He is about Tachi size and age but he has Yellow hair and is wearing Chunin vest. So he is probaly a chunin."we will depart once we have our plan together. Team hudle." said Inamaru. They kneeled down and while Inamaru pulled up a map. "What a map. How does that have do with the misson." said Tachi. "Idiot the map is the most important part of the mission. So let me explain. We will be walking in a diamond. Gandamru will be infront because of his Kangan. Then Tachi and Kayla will be in the sides. I'll be in the back so if we are ambush my wind syle jutsu will stop it. The Prince will b in the middle. Here take these scrolls. The directions are attach to it. Only use these if we are separated and there is an emergincy." said Inamaru. The Genin nods and take the scrolls and get to postion. "Finally" said the Prince. And they begin to walk to th Rainbow village.
10 miles later. "Can't we go any faster? Whats up with you ninja?" complain the Prince. "Shut up. Ever since we started the mission all you been doing is complaining and being a spoil brat" said Tachi. That go the Prince mad and h puch Tachi on the face and says"No one ecer says that to Prince Tyson.". Kayla gasp and threw shurikens at kunais heading towards us. Then two women appears infront of them. " So we finally tracked the Prince. Leave this to me to kill him Hermania." said one of the women. But the other womn had her hand out who must be Hermania. "Don't. Remember what happen last time. I go it. Ermania" said Hermania. Ermania nods. They are both blondes twins. Hermania charge at them but Gandamaru uses his Kangan to freeze him. Then Inamaru appears infront of him put on his knuckle weapon and strike Hermania. She fell to the ground but turn to a puff of smok. Then Hermania appears behind Inamaru and strike him with her sword. But Inamaru blocked it with his knuckle weapon. Then he punches her in the stomach and sent her flying to a tree. "So you are Inamaru of the Ocean. I can tell with that weapon of yours." said Hermania. He did a hand sign and uses Tree capture death. A branch of a tree captures Inamaru so he couldn't escape then Hermania charge at him and slash him on his arm. She was about to stab him but Kayla uses RELEASE. To free Inamaru. "So you use genjutsu huh. Well then I have to trap you in a genjutsu of my own. He udid a hand ign and uses. Mind trick genjutsu. Then Hermania could see a bunch of people who looks like her sorounding her. They strike her. Then Inamaru appears and say. You ae retreating. Go to your home. Now I'll wake you up. But Hermania uses release. "Lets go Ermania even though I release the genjutsu I must do what he says. This must be a special jutsu. Lets go to the hideout." said Hermania. They both vanish.
" Why didn't the rest of you fighting. This is how you will reat me then I will tell my Dad." said Prince Tyson. "Shut up. If you never revaial your identety this will never happe. Stopbeing spoil. We'll camp out here tonight. So they prepare a fire and when it was dark they fell asleep.

To be continued in chapter 4 C-rank mission escort the Prince(part 2)

If you have any ideas pm me or post it here. THIS POST GET UPDATED AFTER EVERY CHAPTER IS DONE. Tell me if I make any mistakes.

Sasuke/Itachi
08-01-2009, 03:39 PM
Proluge


The prolouge take place in the great shinobi war 3.(Like world war but ninja version). Ninja were asign mission every day and it was about 15 mission a day nonstop. During a battle Tachi dad was engaging in battle with a Tree village ninja. But a rogue ninja ambush them and killed Tachi father. When a chunin found his body he took the body with him and return it to his wife. She was pregnant with Tachi so she wasn't on any mission a the moment. Tachi brother Aknamaru ask"why is he sleeping at a like this:. SHe replied :He is dead." Ankamaru was only 2 so he just learn how to talk and walk. Tachi mother explain the word death. Right after the story Ankamaru fell asleep. His mother cried tel he fell asleep.12 years later Tachi was 13 years old and an Acedemy sudent getting ready for the acedemy exams. If he pass that will be hisa birthday gift since that day was his birthday.

To be continued in chapter 1.

Sasuke/Itachi
08-01-2009, 03:52 PM
Tell me what you think of the prolouge.

Spark
08-01-2009, 03:57 PM
sound good cant wait to read the rest of it

Sasuke/Itachi
08-01-2009, 03:58 PM
Thank you.

Sasuke/Itachi
08-01-2009, 04:52 PM
Chapter 1 the academy test

Tachi wakes up at 6:30 in the morning. He got out of his bed and change clothes. He put on his T shirt and some blue pants and brush his hair and brudh his teeth and headed down stais. He took an apple sat down and ate it. "Tachi are you ready for the big test?" asked his Mother. "Mom I'm ready and excited to finaly become a ninja" Tachi said proudly. " If you pass. Don't worry bro. The test is easy as long you know the shadow clone jutsu." Ankamaru said. Ankamaru is packing up his Kunais, Shurikens, and srolls. " Do you have a mission Ankamaru?" Ask achi." Yes I do. I need to gaurd civilian to the other village. Since he has a wanted price on his head" reply Ankanmaru. The Ankamaru left the house to meeet up with his cell. "Tachi you need to go to the acedemy it is almost time. Good luck. I have a mission but I'll be back before you come home." Said his Mother putting away the dishes. Tachi said bye and left the house too the acedemy.
So while he was walking towards the acedemy his best friend Jido walks near him. "Are you ready for the big test Tachi?" asked Jino. "Not really. I study and pratice the shadow clone jutsu.. Are you nervous." reply Tachi. "No I'm not. It will be easy" reply Jino. The two friends walked all the way there. Once they were at the acedemy they went through the doors took a left and in a room. They sat at the end.
Their academy teacher Kanda. Kanda sensei said" The test begins now. Each student pick up their pencil and start the test. Tachi was answered the first 6 question easily but it started to gethard on number 7. Jando put his pencil down and said"DONE". Jando is a genius when it comes to ninja stuff. Kando lead him to a different room. tachi discover each answer. Then when he got to the last one half the class was in the other room. The question was this. What rank mission does genin get asisn too. He thin about it for a while hen put the answer D ranks and sometimes C ranks. He yelled"DONE" then went to the other room. A Jonin was there and said" perform the jutsu". Tachi form a hand sign and said "shadow clone jutsu'' 2 shadow clones appear. "Good" said the the Jonin. He headed him his head band. He put on his forehead. Then left the building.
He meet up with Jino. "So by the looks of your forehead you pass the test" Jino said. "Yep the last quistion was hard" said Tachi. "It was easy they tell us everyday for a week. You just can't get over that you can't do S ranks missions. Well see ya my family are going to celebrate." Tachi went home. His mother was there. They went to a ramen restarunt. "Your father must be proud right now" his mother said. tachi smiled and ate till they go home and fell asleep.

To be cotinued in chapter 2 the bell training.

Chidori stream
08-01-2009, 04:57 PM
cool sgtory so far. But where is the action. I want to read the bell training

Chidori stream
08-01-2009, 05:40 PM
Can't wait to see his ninja cell

Sasuke/Itachi
08-01-2009, 07:57 PM
Here is something to see what is in the next xhapter

Tachi gets his cell and begin the bell training that proves if he is wothy of becoming genin. Will they exceed or will they fail. Find ou tomorrow.

Sasuke/Itachi
08-02-2009, 01:52 PM
Is anybody reading this. If so. Tell me if you like it. I'm doing the bell training chapter today.

Spark
08-02-2009, 01:56 PM
i already told you i lke it

Sasuke/Itachi
08-02-2009, 02:16 PM
I know

Sasuke/Itachi
08-02-2009, 04:19 PM
Well I need to post the next chapter.

Sasuke/Itachi
08-02-2009, 06:09 PM
Chapter 2 the bell training.

Tachi woke up at 6:00 in the morning. he did his orning routine and went down stais. No one is in the house but a note on the table.
Dear tachi,
I have an a rank mission so I won't be home in a while. nkamaru is suppose o be back around 9:00 p.m. Don't have an act if you don't like your ninja cell or your grounded for a month. By I love.
From mom.

Tachi leftthe house and ran all the wy to the academy. While he was running he put on his headband. H enter the asademy doors and into the rooms. he found Jino and stand by him. Once everyone is here he started to anounce the cells. "O.K. Most of you pass. So I'll anounce your three teamates and your sensei. " kando anounce to the people who pass." I hope me and you will be in the same cell. That will be awesome." Jino said to Tachi. "Me too but remember. I don't think they want us in the same cell" tachi replies. "Your right" Jino said.
" Cell #10. Kanto, Kichimaru, and Mimi. Their sensei will be Raji." kanda anounce. Kanto is this girl who is always gossiping with his friends. She dislikes Jino. But has a crush on Tachi. Kichimaru is a the type of guy girls are all over. He has cool looks. Tachi and Jino and Hina( A classmate) dislike him. Mimi is this shy boy who only talks to his family,teachers, and his friends. Ever since he met Jino Jino would do bunch of stuff to trick him to talk.

"Cell #11 will be Hina, Rin, and Shika. Their sensei will be Loonei." announce Kanda again. Hina is Tachi and Jino friend. She is a girl who wants to be the ultimate female ninja. She allways believe in others in herself. Rin is this normal guys. He couldn't do the transformation jutsu which means he almost failed. He just started training his clan jutsu but has no talent in his clan kekkie Genkie. He is in he Abarami clan. Shika is in a family of puppet master. He only have one puppet but it is not for fighting. Shika will do anything to get a fighting puppet.

"Cell #12 Kin, Zin, and Jino. Their sensi will be Hinoh." announce Kanda. Kin and Zin are creepy twins. When I mean creepy. Kin says one half of the sentence and Zin says the other. You should know Jino. He is my best friend and is pretty smart.

" Last but not least cell # 13 Tachi, Gandimaru, and Kayla and their sensei Inamaru." announce Kanda. Ganamaru is a guy who gets in trouble with Kanda alot. he is in the Kang clan and posses the Kangan. Kayla is friends with Kanto so she is always gossiping.

"I'll give 15 minutes to get to know your cell while I get the Joinin. "See ya later Tachi I have to del with the twins so bye." Jino said running of to them. Tachi headed towards th closets in his cell. it ended up to be Kayla. " So who knew ou have to be my team mate." said Tachi. "Tsk. why can't I get paired up with Kanto. Why do I have to del with this shrimp." said Kayla and a mad mood. " hey we have to work together." said tachi. Gandimaru walks come near them. " So you guys are Tachi and Kayla. Nice to meet you. I hope we get along well." Gandimaru said. "Please!" kayla said in a nasty voice. Everyone in cell 13 hard a foot step come near them. It was a man wearing a Joinin vest. he is atleast 5 feet 9. He has black hair too. " So now on. I'll be the Jonin/leader/sensei of team 13. I'm Inamaru." Inamaru said. "Wow. When is our first mission?"said Tachi excitedly. " slow down. i have to see if you guys are really quilifiy as true Genin." Inamaru said."WHATTTTTTTT!!!!!!" The whole cell number 13 besides Inamaru said. "You'll see. meet me at the training grounds in exactly 3 hours. Bring your kunais and shurikens" Inamaru commannd them. The cell left the academy and went home.

Once tachi was at home he enter. He saw Ankamaru eating. "hey you're back. I saw your cell while I was in the nakage office." Ankamaru said. " Yeah. Our Jonin Inaaru said we aren''t full Genin yet. Did that happen to you." Tachi asks Ankamaru. "Oh the bell training. That was rough. Hey catch this scroll. This is one of dads scroll mom told me. It has his signature jutsu." Ankamaru said throwing him the scroll. Tachi went out of the house and headed towards the training grounds.
Once Tachi got to the training grounds. The rest of the cell was already there. "O.k first I got to explain. This is a test to test your abilities. To see if you are quilify to be a genin.What I mean is you won't be true genin if you don't pass the test. Hre is your objective. You have to get these 2 bells hanging on my belt. We will fight like we're enmies. You got till 12:00 in the after noon to get these bells from me. Lets begin." Inamaru said. Tachi charge at Inamaru . he took out his Kunai and strike Inamaru. But Inamaru dodge the attack ran quickly in front of Tachi and kick back to Gandamaru and kayla. Inamru put his hands in his pocket and grab out two shorts weaopns then he put his hand trought the hole till it reach his knucles. It seems with these weapons on his hands if he put both of his arms out. The two points of each blae was towards each other. "If you guys are carius what these are. They are brunch knucles. They are rare in this village. I put the fingers through the hole with bumps at the bottom till the knucles reach the hole. I close my hands in a fist and i swipe at my oppoment. I can add chakra to the bruch knuckles." explain Inamaru. he put his hands in a fist. Then he ran very quickly in the midle of the three teamates and uses wind style: Twister. He spin himself that sent the three flying in diferent directions.
Gandamaru landed in the woods. He got up but was shocked. He heard Inamaru running after them.He then apear infront of Kandamaru about 10 feet away . Taijutsu would be useless againts you so I'll use ninjutsu. Inamaru was about to use a hand sign but he was frozen. "Huh by the looks of your eyes you are apart of the Kang clan aren't you. Oh well I can't stay frozen for long." said Inamaru. "Those bells are mine." said Gandamaru charging at Inamaru. Once he got 1 feet away from him. Inamaru form a hand sign and use Wind style: wave palm. Blades of wind charge at Gandamaru but he dodge all of them. "Impossible. No one can't escape the kangan!" Gandamaru said. " It only works if you are consetrating on your target." Inamaru explain. Gandamaru shock was ever. Then he did a hand sign then he uses wind style: hurricane. That sent Gandamaru flying.
kayla was running in the forest but she heard a foot step. She threw shurikens and kunais at the person behind her but the person dodge it all Kayla look behind her and saod"Oh it you Kanto". " Yeah it is me . Guess what my jonin is a pervert." said Kanto. But she disapear. "What a shadow clone" said Kayla. "No a genjutsu." It was Inamaru preparing to kick kayla but tachi ran to protect her but he kick both of them flying. They both landed near Gandamaru.
All threee of them got up. "What are we doing. We got to put our act together." Tachi said. Inamaru apears. Then Tachi threw kunai. It went through the bells and the kunai landed on a tree with the bells hanging from the kunai.Inamaru said"Gah. But I can alway go it." But he was frozzen. Kayla notice Gandamaru eyes. he was doing the kangan. Kayla ran quickly to the bells and grab them. Gandamaru unfroze Inamaru. Tachi and Gandamaru smile at kayla. Inamaru grinnat both of them. They have officaly become genin.

Since the bell training they have been off on D-ranks mission then enventualy they get a C-rank mission.


To be continued in chapter 3 C-rank mission protect the prince.(part 1)

Sasuke/Itachi
08-02-2009, 06:09 PM
So how do you like it?

Sasuke/Itachi
08-02-2009, 07:04 PM
For real is anbody reading this besides spark?

takuya
08-02-2009, 07:09 PM
ive read all of it so far its good

Sasuke/Itachi
08-02-2009, 07:13 PM
Thanks

Sasuke/Itachi
08-02-2009, 07:24 PM
So anybody else can give a comment.

kazuki_65
08-02-2009, 07:27 PM
it's good so far. I have my own story but, right now im suffering writer's block. it's been a week already and i have no idea what to write...i need help.:(

Sasuke/Itachi
08-02-2009, 07:44 PM
Thanks. I would like some ideas too. Once I'm finish with this arc. I need to think of something else.

Chidori stream
08-02-2009, 08:02 PM
it is good so far. You had Inamaru be like Asuma but doesn't smoke.(he has wind chakra too.

Sasuke/Itachi
08-02-2009, 08:04 PM
Well there is something that you'll learn about him. Wait till next chapter to find ouet.

Sasuke/Itachi
08-02-2009, 08:09 PM
Once I get the next chapter together I'll post it but here is something that will happen in this chapter.

Tachi and his cell are sent on a C-rank mission. Protect the prince of the rainbow village. Can Tchi protect a Prince who is a spoil brat and has a bounty on his head for 5'0000 ryo(money)

Sasuke/Itachi
08-03-2009, 02:58 PM
So what do you think of the recently chapter.

Sasuke/Itachi
08-03-2009, 04:04 PM
The next chapter will be hard to make becase it has alot of fighting so more details.

Sasuke/Itachi
08-04-2009, 04:55 PM
So who is your favorite character so far?

Chidori stream
08-04-2009, 05:02 PM
I like Inamaru becuse he is like Asuma but he doesn't smoke or have a beard. But you need to make sure you change his chakra nature.

Chidori stream
08-04-2009, 06:58 PM
hmm. I wonder who is this prince they need to escort?

Chidori stream
08-04-2009, 07:07 PM
http://naruto.viz.com/forum/clear.gif

Sasori the puppet master
08-06-2009, 06:46 PM
I read this fanfic. I like it bro. But the next time you hog the computer I'll critisize this.

mangagirl
08-06-2009, 07:20 PM
its awesome

Chidori stream
08-06-2009, 07:50 PM
Can't wait till next chapter

Sasuke/Itachi
08-06-2009, 07:51 PM
I'm going to begin on the next chapter

Sasuke/Itachi
08-07-2009, 01:31 PM
sorry but I forced to get off the computer.

Sasuke/Itachi
08-07-2009, 02:17 PM
Chapter 3 escort the prince(Part 1)

Tachi was walking to the Naukage's office. He walked through the entrance then went to the Naukage office. His cell was there and stand by Gandamaru."You're late. Tachi. I'll explain your mission. Our greatest ally the rainbow village. Their kage son known as the Prince of the Rainbow visit this village. He is now coming back to his village. So this is where you guys come in. You need to escort the Pince to his village safely. But here is a warning he has a bounty on his head for 500000 Ryo" said the Naukage. The Naukage is about in his 40's. He has gayish blackish hair. He wears a Kage robe. "Got it. Kayla,Gandamaru, and Tachi gear up. Pack your shurikens,Kunia, and scrolls." vommanded Inamaru. All 4 of them vanish.
Tachi appears at his house. " See ya mom. I won't be back in probaly 2 days." said Tachi packing his surikens, Kunais, and his one scroll. Tachi then vanish."He is growing up. ALready doing mission. You must be prowd." thought Tachi's mother.
Tachi appears at the village gate with his cell. "Finally you guys show up. The mission should be a S-rank mission and the ninja should be ANBU ninja not you guys." said the Prince. He is about Tachi size and age but he has Yellow hair and is wearing Chunin vest. So he is probaly a chunin."we will depart once we have our plan together. Team hudle." said Inamaru. They kneeled down and while Inamaru pulled up a map. "What a map. How does that have do with the misson." said Tachi. "Idiot the map is the most important part of the mission. So let me explain. We will be walking in a diamond. Gandamru will be infront because of his Kangan. Then Tachi and Kayla will be in the sides. I'll be in the back so if we are ambush my wind syle jutsu will stop it. The Prince will b in the middle. Here take these scrolls. The directions are attach to it. Only use these if we are separated and there is an emergincy." said Inamaru. The Genin nods and take the scrolls and get to postion. "Finally" said the Prince. And they begin to walk to th Rainbow village.
10 miles later. "Can't we go any faster? Whats up with you ninja?" complain the Prince. "Shut up. Ever since we started the mission all you been doing is complaining and being a spoil brat" said Tachi. That go the Prince mad and h puch Tachi on the face and says"No one ecer says that to Prince Tyson.". Kayla gasp and threw shurikens at kunais heading towards us. Then two women appears infront of them. " So we finally tracked the Prince. Leave this to me to kill him Hermania." said one of the women. But the other womn had her hand out who must be Hermania. "Don't. Remember what happen last time. I go it. Ermania" said Hermania. Ermania nods. They are both blondes twins. Hermania charge at them but Gandamaru uses his Kangan to freeze him. Then Inamaru appears infront of him put on his knuckle weapon and strike Hermania. She fell to the ground but turn to a puff of smok. Then Hermania appears behind Inamaru and strike him with her sword. But Inamaru blocked it with his knuckle weapon. Then he punches her in the stomach and sent her flying to a tree. "So you are Inamaru of the Ocean. I can tell with that weapon of yours." said Hermania. He did a hand sign and uses Tree capture death. A branch of a tree captures Inamaru so he couldn't escape then Hermania charge at him and slash him on his arm. She was about to stab him but Kayla uses RELEASE. To free Inamaru. "So you use genjutsu huh. Well then I have to trap you in a genjutsu of my own. He udid a hand ign and uses. Mind trick genjutsu. Then Hermania could see a bunch of people who looks like her sorounding her. They strike her. Then Inamaru appears and say. You ae retreating. Go to your home. Now I'll wake you up. But Hermania uses release. "Lets go Ermania even though I release the genjutsu I must do what he says. This must be a special jutsu. Lets go to the hideout." said Hermania. They both vanish.
" Why didn't the rest of you fighting. This is how you will reat me then I will tell my Dad." said Prince Tyson. "Shut up. If you never revaial your identety this will never happe. Stopbeing spoil. We'll camp out here tonight. So they prepare a fire and when it was dark they fell asleep.

To be continued in chapter 4 C-rank mission escort the Prince(part 2)

Sasuke/Itachi
08-07-2009, 03:05 PM
So who likes it?

Sasuke/Itachi
08-07-2009, 06:42 PM
I neeed help. After Mom's boyfriend arc should I do the chunin exams?

Sasuke/Itachi
08-08-2009, 01:38 PM
Post if you read the current chapter