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SakuraGirl
07-30-2009, 09:09 PM
Prologue

Deep in the trees of the village of hidden in the sakura, A woman yell"you must not go kin. I see danger in this mission" Kin, a tall lanky muscled men look at his wife sadly"I am sorry my love, but i must the kade as ask i do this mission for the village' But i also do it for you daring and for little girl" Mekio look at the love of her life and knew that there was no stoping him,his mind was made up, and start to cry has this came to mind,The men sign and said" Tell me of this new dream you have seen, it can,t be all bad" Mekio smile and and said" I see are little girl becoming a great ninji like you my love, so great that the ninja world will remember her name, so i deside to name her Miyo Ai together her name will mean beauiful generation love " The men smile and she will be a great kunoichi Mekio just like you say, but I must go and don,t worry he said has giving her a kiss " I will be back to hold this beautiful child in my arms" then he run out the door so as to not be late for his team, has mekio stood looking at the last place her husband. She knew that would never happen.
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Miyo Ai

Born-Apirl 16, 1990,Mother died that night.
Parents- Father- Kin-Ai- died three months before.she was born-Mother-Mekio Ai- kill from her dream powers
Rank-Chunin(working on becoming a Jonin)
Age-19
Height-5,5
Gender-Female
Name Meaning-"beautiful generation love."
Name- Miyo Ai
Likes-Her village, Training,Her two best friends Aigyou and Harumi, and eating any kind of food.
Dislikes-Fighting,Wars, People hurting her love ones.

Personality:As a child, Miyo was regularly seen being rather shy, but as she got older she also became confident,kind-hearten, soft-spoken, and polite,but is also at times generally overbearing, if not crude, toward those around her,and rarely afraid to speak her mind. she strongly believes that female ninja can be as strong as a male ninja and went it comes to missions she is very level-headed, practical, and a rational thinker and often become stress because of this,but missions get done because her, she is very like by everyone she know and always willing to make new friends and help them or anyone in need,she is very quiet went first meeting her and also caring and loving,but once you get know her she is very load and won,t stop talking,useless you make her stop and it is very hard to do. But if you push her to far, she will knock you out and some people after that don,t remember who they are for a long time.

Childhood-Miyo childhood was hard even though she had harumi as a friend and people who took care of her, Many people said that her power in dream seeing was magic and it why her mother was kick out of her village and her mother being kill her because of it, because of this her dream were often nightmares in childhood. but this stop went ethering the academy,and being to learn new jutsus in fast time then anyone else in her class making her the first one gradating

Aurora was attack by assassin that was going to kill her and Miyo stop and kill him before he could,Aurora and her became friends that day

Looks-tall,lanky body,straight long Brown hair short banes in front it hits the middle of her back like her mother hair, purple eyes, heart shape face, most of her looks are from her mother,but she got her personality from her dad

Clothing- long sleeve shirt, baggy black short,black gloves,blue high knee socks,black short black boots,headband on her left arm with a sakura symbol on it.

New Outfit-Purple sash around neck,black jacket over it, purple tank top,black pants,short purple socks,short black boots,hair is tie up high on the back of her with a purple ribbon and her black gloves

Hobbies-Reading, Training with her friends Aigyou and Harumi, daydreaming,Picking flowers

Weapons-2 kodachi strapped across shoulders,a katana on the back that was her fathers and give to her went entering the academy by her father best friend Aigyou father, a pack of hidden kunai high up on thigh,Exploding Tags,Two silver daggers that her give to her father went he found her mother was having her, they have two pink Sakura gems in the middle of them on the back of them is her name,she carries them in the two pockets on the side of her shorts.

Dream Seeing-Miyo can see what May happen to people, herself , mission, or others by her dream at nights,If this happen,s during the day her eyes turn from a deep purple to dark blue and she began to talk anyone close to her about what she is seeing and after this does not remember much of what happen in the dream itself, this happen rarely,Dream seeing only happen to girls in the family her mother came from making the woman very powerful,

Nindo-That i will never turn a away from my friends went there in need of something, that is my ninja way.

Dream-to be a Medical-nin like her Hanakage in the Villiage, to meet her mom and dad, to be greatest kunoichi in the village.

Chakra nature-wind and lightingAbility-Chakra control,superhuman strength,building up chakra in her fists and releasing it on contact with a target,she can reduce most obstacles to rubble with great ease

Harumi Satou
Name-Harumi Satou
Gender-female
Name meaning-spring beauty
Age-17
Rank-Chunin
Born-March 9,1992
likes-her friend and Family,learning new jutsus, sweets,flowers and, the rain
Dislike-her love one getting hurt, fell useless, not being able to help in a mission,Crying
Personality:The eldest child,of the satou clan,it was her birthright to become the next heir to the Satou clan's main house. She was regularly put through grueling training by her parents,who love dearly and only train her in hope of becoming a great and beautiful heirness.Harumi is generally kind-hearten, soft-spoken, and polite, applying appropriate name suffixes to most people. Harumi can be a bit of a pacifist as well. She is a kind individual, who is unwilling to watch people get hurt in front of her and she generally thinks carefully before acting, allowing her to think more clearly in tough situations.But Miyo one of her best friends help her out went this happens
Height-5,1
Looks-short.small and skinning fair skin,raven black hair in a long poytail down the middle of her back, ice blue eyes
Clothing-light ruby short sleeve shirt,short black pants that go to her knees and a ruby sash tide around her wast ,ruby high heels and fishnets on elbow and knees, and fingerless black gloves, her headband is around her neck.
weapons-two katana on her left and right sides, and a pack of hidden shuriken on her right thigh,needles in her hair poytail
Powers&Abilities- Flash steps-a movement technique that allows the user to move faster than the eye can follow it is a technique only the Satou Clan knows,medical jutsu,how learning Taijutsu from Miyo and Aigyou after the attack on Aigyou and feeling unless and being able to help,Wind storm-Harmui throws chakra out of her hands into the sky,creating a big storm that can be seen for mile and will a attack anyone with a move of hands,causing damage to other person,windneedles-needles that wind chakra in them, they hit chakra points in the body very fast killing the person on first hit,Acid Rain-Clouds build up in the sky,the slowy start turning dark green,then something falls Rain?Snow?Hail?No it's freakin ACID
chakra hature-wind and water
Dreams-to become a jonin, marry young, have a big family and to be a great heirness and kunoichi like her mother.


Aigyou Nokimono
Aigyou Nonkimono
Gender-female
Name meaning- loving and happy
Rank-Chunin
Age- 17
Likes-Sweet,family and friends, being lazy,reading, picking on her friends,the summer time, raining days, and learn new jutsus
Dislike-going on a missions,people hurting the one she loves, people calling her a boy and say her name wrong
Persoality-Aigyou is hot-tempered, easygoing, lazy,tomboyish, and sometimes hyperactive,unlike like her two best friends, she does not like going on missions and like to stay home for this reason her and miyo get into fights often, but still love her friends and village and willing to do anything for either one.
Looks-Aigyou has fair skin orange hair that goes to the middle of her back like miyo and her eyes are light green that become a dark emerald went she is mad or upset.
clothing-black hat with a orange strip around and with orange sakura in the middle of it her heardband is under her hat on her forehead,black jacket with a orange strips on the arms and orange sakura flower on the right side of her collar, two pocket on jacket for holding scrolls, with black pants with strips on each pants leg,black running shoes with orange sakura flowers on each side of them,and black fingerless gloves. she also made this outfit herself
chakra nature-earth and wood
summon-birds
powers & abilities-Taijutsu,weapons specialist,Painful Sky Leg-This jutsu is simply a falling axe kick to the ground,this kick results in either a gigantic crater or a deep fracture along the ground, killing any opponents caught in its immediate strike zone,Earth barrier-a barrier at least ten feet high topped with timber walls at another fifteen feet-keep the emery out while at war and other emergency,hobbies-visting hot springs, reading, training, learning new jutsus, hanging out with Miyo and Harumi
weapons-large scythe on back,pack of kunai on left thigh, two kodaci strapped arcoss her shoulders like Miyo
Dream- to be the greatest taijutsus kunoichi in the village hidden in the Sakura

Masaaki NakamuraMasaaki Nakamura
village hidden within the Twilight
Rank-Jonin
Gender-male
Name meaning-True brightness
Age-11
Personality- Masaaki is generally mature and serious,and quite optimistic,very free-spirited, cold and meanheart went first meeting Miyo in the story.
looks-5'4 tall,Dark blue hair,Dark blue eyes, round face that make him look older that he really is
clothes-he was wears a dark blue shirt with black short, black elbow protector, black fingerless gloves and blue ninja sandles,and his headband on his forhead
Clan-The Nakamura Clan is know for there swordsmanship and Genjutsus. Masaaki is the first natural genius in the clan graduating the academy at the age of 10 at the top of his class and become a chunin by the next week
Family-father middle child of three brothers is older Aace wanted the clan power for himself and murder the whole clan to get it beside his younger Brother Gajiu and Masaaki not much is knowen about Masaaki mother

Vatanui AKA Pride
07-30-2009, 09:12 PM
This seems good so far.

SakuraGirl
07-30-2009, 10:41 PM
thanks i am still working on it

SakuraGirl
07-30-2009, 11:06 PM
three months later
She is coming mekio, you must push harder" said a midwife. A small fragile woman being gripped of unknown horrific pain scream" No i can,t it hurt to much make it stop, do it for kin mekio come on one more push. the small woman put all her power into that push and heard her child cry , died knowing the world would be a better place because of it, and with these last words" I love you miyo left the world with a sweet smaile on her face. As her little her girl cry into the night.

cherryflower
07-31-2009, 07:35 AM
Good story so far!!! ~_~

SakuraGirl
07-31-2009, 01:06 PM
Miyo AI
The village hidden in the sakura was a peaceful place where everyone love, help and knew and care for each other. One of the most caring , loving and helpful in the village was Miyo, She was also said to be as beautiful as one of the godness in the sky, with a slim tiny lanky, body, with a small wrist, long arms and legs,straight light brown hair that fell to the middle of her back and deep purple eyes that draws you in every time you at them, it no wonder the boys and men in the village have a hard time not looking at her for hours.She is said to be as gentle has her mother , long with getting her mother dream seeing power, that was past down to every girl in her mother family. But she is also loving, caring as her her, who the village still honor to this day, and in his honor they take care of miyo, put her in the academy and helping her graduating at the top of her class, and even thought she is only a genin level, she is one of the village,s most capable ninja like her father.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-31-2009, 02:53 PM
uh, sakura, is it ok if i point out just a few mistakes in ur story so far?

SakuraGirl
07-31-2009, 02:56 PM
uh, sakura, is it ok if i point out just a few mistakes in ur story so far?
sure i don,t care

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-31-2009, 03:03 PM
Prologue

Deep in the trees of the village hidden in the sakura, A woman yelled "You must not go Kin! I see danger in this mission." Kin, a tall, lanky, muscled man looked at his wife sadly. "I am sorry my love, but I must, the kage has asked I do this mission for the village. But I also do it for you darling and for our little girl." Mekio looked at the love of her life and knew that there was no stopping him,his mind was made up, and started to cry as this came to mind. The man sighed and said "Tell me of this new dream you have seen, it can't be all bad." Mekio smiled and said "I see our little girl becoming a great ninja like you my love, so great that the ninja world will remember her name, so I have decided to name her Miyo Ai together her name will mean beauiful generation love." The man smiled. "And she will be a great kunoichi Mekio just like you say, but I must go and don't worry," He said, giving her a kiss, "I will be back to hold this beautiful child in my arms." Then he ran out the door so he wouldn't be late for his team. Mekio stood looking at the place her husband stood. She knew that would never happen.



thats the prologue, as i think, fixed

SakuraGirl
07-31-2009, 03:06 PM
thanks a lot

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-31-2009, 05:41 PM
np, and i will do the others later

SakuraGirl
07-31-2009, 06:48 PM
np, and i will do the others later
ok thanks

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-31-2009, 06:58 PM
three months later
"She is coming Mekio, you must push harder." Said a midwife. A small fragile woman being gripped of unknown horrific pain screamed "No I can't! It hurts too much! Make it stop!" "Do it for Kin, Mekio! Come on, one more push!" The small woman put all her power into that push and heard her child cry. She died, knowing the world would be a better place because of it, and with these last words "I love you, Miyo..." left the world with a sweet smile on her face. The sound of the little girl crying rang through the night.



ok thats fixed

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-31-2009, 07:06 PM
Miyo AI
The Village Hidden in the Sakura was a peaceful place where everyone loved, helped, knew, and cared for each other. One of the most caring, loving, and helpful in the village was Miyo. She was also said to be as beautiful as one of the godesses in the sky, with a slim, lanky body, small wrists, long arms and legs,straight light brown hair that fell to the middle of her back and deep purple eyes that draws you in every time you look at them. It was no wonder the boys and men in the village had a hard time not looking at her for hours.She was said to be as gentle as her mother, along with getting her mother's dream seeing power, that was passed down to every girl in her mother's family. She was also as loving and caring as her father, who the village still honors to this day, and in his honor they took care of Miyo, put her in the academy, and helped her graduate at the top of her class. And even thought she was only a Genin level, she was one of the village's most capable ninja like her father.


and there ya go

SakuraGirl
07-31-2009, 07:11 PM
uh thanks

SakuraGirl
08-03-2009, 05:54 PM
The bad dream
It was dark, she was running thought the woods at a fast speed hoping that someone would save her, this enemy was just to strong for her, as she thought that she heard the men yell"come back little girl lets have some fun. Miyo sat up in bed trying to remember everything about the dream she had. but her dreams did not always like that, sometimes she could everything that happen,( which was rare) and sometime she could,t and that is what she hate the most about her powers, because today she just could not remember, there were bits of it , here and there but to help know what the dream was about and her mother power was different too, has it was for all the woman in her mother family bloodline. Her mother dreams only show danger, beside the pain of childbirth some say that what kill her. Miyo shook the thoughts out of her head , got up and ran the the water for her bath while seting out her clothes, a long blue sleeve shirt , black gloves , black baggy shorts, blue knee high socks and shorts black boots. since that was done, she slowleygot in the tub, after along hot bath,she put on her clothes bush out her hair , to were it was hanging drown her backlike always . she walk out the door into the light blue sky and the sweet smell of cherry blossom in the morning. I need to speak with lady hana about this dream maybe she can help, as she thought this someone put there hand on her butt," you fool" she yell hitting the men in face and sent him into the wall arcoss the road.It was a men from the village hidden in the twilight and that went she heard laughing and turn around to see her to best friends Aigyou Nonkimono and Harumi Satou rolling around on the ground laugh. " oh yea go and laugh all you want too just help me get this men up" yell miyo. After they help the up and sent him on him on his way after seening he was on hurt. They begin there way to lady hana office . Harumi ask " did you have a dream again ? yea Miyo said and i don,t want to talk about it, Harumi and Aigyou look at each other and knew something was wrong because miyo always talk about her dreams with them unless it was a bad one.

NaruSakufluff4ever
08-03-2009, 06:10 PM
lol i love the sakura reference lol

SakuraGirl
08-03-2009, 06:19 PM
thanks

SakuraGirl
08-06-2009, 08:15 PM
worried
Miyo walk up to the door of Lady Hana office " I hope everything go's alright'' she thought and knock once " come in" said a small but sweet voice. Has miyo, harumi ,and Aigyou walk in they saw a small girl behind a desk also know Hanako Ichigo , or lady hana. She had pink medium hair with shaddy bangs and a flower clip on the left side hold some of the bangs together with brown eyes, she was wering a violet pink jacket with a lavender top on with straps on side showing her chest a little, with black shorts, black stocking and silver high sandles with two square holes on the sides.She was a kind, sweet, caring girl, who would do anything for the village and the people in it and miyo would give up her life for Lady hana" oh good the three people i want to see" she said with a smile that lit up her face. "I have a mission for you three in the village hidden in the twilight.A missing-nin has been attcking the people in the village. you are to go and find out way and stop him, report to me went you are done are found out anything " Lady hana said. then she look up and saw miyo worrid faced and ask "Miyo is there something you wish to talk about" Miyo sign and began to tell her the dream that she had last night. when she was done Lady sign and said" I am sorry I can,t give you anything Miyo, because i think this dream may have something to do with thae attacks in thw village hidden in the twilight.Oh and this men will be going with you to the village since he live and his family was killed in one the attcks. The door began to open and there was the men that miyo attack that morning.NO!! the three girls yell at the same time, while landy hana look on smile and said " you three girls will have the day off. but meet this men at the village main gates in the morning at eight". "Hey miyo are you alright" Aigyou ask the two girls were on there way home since harumi had left lady hana aoffice with her mother to train with and get ready for the next day . Miyo sign and said " yea aigyou am okay just worried and sometimes i wish i did,t have this seening power. this power . Then she saw the road leding to home and said" well i will see you later am going home to get some rest and try and find out what this dream means,with that she walk home with Aigyou looking on worreid, Miyo lay down on the bed looking at the celling thinking about the dream that she had and the men in it , it look like the men who killed her father.he was a missing -nin that love blood and world do anything or kill anything to get ,slowely the world fell into darkness and sleep came to her this time with sweet dreams

rainbowrazor
08-06-2009, 08:23 PM
seems good

cherryflower
08-06-2009, 08:24 PM
It's veary good!

SakuraGirl
08-06-2009, 08:30 PM
it going to get better

SakuraGirl
08-13-2009, 10:35 PM
Attack
Aigyou you can't be man at me forever mom's to train me in the morning and it took a lot longer then i wanted it too and why are you mad at me you don,t like going on mission anyway" Said Harumi with punny dog eyes. Miyo walked down the road and listen to her two best friends, while thinking about what the men said this morning. He said his name was gaiju nakaura and the missing- nin was his older brother aace nakaura who had left the village over 20 years ago and now has come back to kill the powerful familys and take out the village and start over with him being the to led and rebuid the village. but want gaiju did not know was that this brother of his had heard he was going to the village hidden in the sakura for help and sent ninja spy to find and kill them. but there was one person in gaiju family that made it out alive, while aace set fire to the house killing everyone in it, and that was gaiju's granson Masaaki Nakamura and is said to be a natural genius graduated the academy at the age of 10 at the top of his class. Miyo smaile and well this is good how we have someone who can tell us want happen and we can report it back to lady Hana,just as though this tree kunai came out of no were. Miyo grab gaiju and jump into a tree and then look over to the right and saw harumi and aigyou were okay , she look around secneing the spy-nin about 10 or more trees down from them and and who is not a ninja , the odd were asainst them!

cherryflower
08-14-2009, 09:26 AM
Keep going, I really want to hear what happens next.

SakuraGirl
08-14-2009, 12:32 PM
Keep going, I really want to hear what happens next.
reallly did,t think it was good

SakuraGirl
08-14-2009, 10:54 PM
Attack-Part2
She went to the tree" Harumi can you used your flash step to see how many there are,I got two hurdard.Harumi nod and left gone for no more than a min, she came back and said she got the same number"Aigyou are you ready? said miyo "yes" said Aigyou " Harumi stay here with gajiu me and aigyou will take care of them. Aigyou and Miyo took off sending chakra to there feet for speed.A mile intomany kunai came out of no were along with spy-nin attacking at once in hand to hand comart for two minters. Then one grab aigyou by her orange hair and put a kunai to her neck.then the spy-nin said" put down your first and your friends don't get hurt as he said this four other spy-nin brought out Harumi and gaiju. " Well what will it be" said the ninja witha kunai to aigyou neck that was now bleeding bad.

SakuraGirl
08-19-2009, 12:18 PM
Attack-Part3
Then she remember something Aigyou father said about his best friend her father"He made sure the people he was on the mission with were okay before getting the mission done and he said that if anything happen to him or your mother to tell you this and make sure you did this in you own mission one day and just has she remember this a pain hit her back and darkness fell over her and hearing her name being call out by Harumi and Aigyou a power she never know before came over her. Her glove hand moving to the pack on her thigh, she grab a kunai turn around and thew it at the ninja closest to her. It landed in the middle of the ninja forehead and wend it did the ninja let out a moan with a line of blood going down his chin and feel to the ground with a thrun,he move around a little and let out the word " bart" and die. Then the ninja who had a hold of Harumi let go of her and began running to her, she grab her
two.......

Kon
08-19-2009, 12:25 PM
this story is cool sis

cherryflower
08-19-2009, 01:47 PM
It's really good. ^_^

SakuraGirl
08-19-2009, 05:07 PM
glad yall like it

AuroraxEve
08-19-2009, 05:47 PM
I like this. :O keep going!

SakuraGirl
08-19-2009, 05:50 PM
lol okay, but not tonight tired and about to go to bed.

SakuraGirl
08-21-2009, 09:00 PM
she grab her two kodachi and took one to the ninja heart and the other place. The ninja stood there holding the kodachi at his heart and fell to the ground, she look up to aigyou sitting back to a tree, harumi standing over the ninja who had the kunai to aigyou neck that she had knock out, with tears in her eyes,Miyo knew what she was thinking that she was not much help and said to her" harumi you did great your mother would be proud" harumi smile and said thanks miyo you are a great friend" She walk over aigyou and used her her healing jutsu on her neck before she pass out. Harumi turn and said" i think we should camp here tonight and let aigyou and gaiju rest" as she look over to gaiju who was scared so bad that he was saking and talking to himself. Later that while everyone was sleeping Miyo said a prayer to her Parents to let this mission go okay and after today to keep harumi and Aigyou safe and out of danger.

SakuraGirl
08-22-2009, 06:01 PM
Training
The Next morning Miyo found Harumi beside Aigyou looking at her neck, Aigyou was up and looking at her with a piss off look and knew she was going to get an earful later.Miyo watch has Harumi got up and said" She will be alright she just need to take it easy" She said with tears in her eyes again and she walk away"what wrong with Harumi"ask Aigyou. She feels bad because she think she was useless
in the attack the other day and she thinks it happen because of her you got hurt" said Miyo "You did tell her that it not true and and it did not happen because of her" said Aigyou"Yes I did but I think we need to let her have some time to herself before we head out and turn to go for a walk went Aigyou Said " we can train her" "What" Said Miyo" We can train her in taijutsus went we get to the village hidden in Twilight and it can be an early birthday perasent (Harumi birthday was a month away)and She won,t know intill we start training" Miyo smile and said "See Aigyou you can be sweet went you want to be"
Aigyou smile and said only went I want to be and lay back down to rest before heading the next day.

SakuraGirl
09-02-2009, 12:21 PM
Village hidden within the Twilight
Gajiu,Miyo,Aigyou, and Harumi walk in the gates they notice that the village is surrounded by grasslands the sun was glowing dimmly, having meaning the twilight village when they reach the gate that one door is black and the other is white door, the white said light snd the other dark. The village was know for it hopitally to guests and kade, except during time of war,they were peaceful people, but love to fight and were guite proud of it. "Wow" saidHarumi it's so pretty with a smile on he face and the tears gone.Then Gajiu said welocme ladies to the village hidden within the twilight come to my house and rest ,eat my wife must have some great food cook for three pretty ninjas she has always love your village and wanted to live there, but i don,t really believe she will leave, this is her home. Miyo smile said and "well if she does are village gates are always open to you and her,Gajiu just smile at this knowing that these three were good girls and would help this village and him and his wife to bring after what to there family,Has they walk farer into the village they came to a small house set off in a little area(IT's good to be home after the week and all you can rest from that attack and from waking all this way, we even have a hot spring in the back Gajiu said with a smile"Gajiu Honey are you alright" said a small woman with long white hair and ruby eyes hugging her husband then she look over to the girls and Said"why don,t you three come inside for dinner is just about ready",they walk in and Miyo feel something hit her in the head , she look down and saw a blue ninja sandle;Masaaki why you do that these girls are here to help us "said Gajia setting forward but stop by Aigyou holding her arm in front of her and then turn her to miyo, Miyo look over Masaaki this boy she heard so much a boy, He was 5,4 for an a 11 year old, he was to be very tall went he older,he was wearing a dark blue shirt with black short, black elbow protector, black fingerless gloves and blue ninja sandles,Masaaki dark blue hair and eyes along with his round face made him look older than he really is. Miyo smile and said" if you let your arm out a little longer, you could have knock me out but nice try, Masaaki yell with tears runing down his face,they kill my mom and dad and you and you little friends could not even begin to understand the pain i am in. your wrong said Miyo with a deep sadness in her eye"I do and I don,t,I do because my mom died giving birth to me and my dad died during a mission three month's befor i was born and i don,t because even though i have stories about them,i still don,t even seem to know the real them or had them love me like your mom and dad did,but i promise you right here and now has a ninja from the village hidden in the sakura that i will find this man and make him pay for want he has to and your family,Masaaki stood there looking at her,"whatever" he said then turn and walk away. thats went a kunai sail though the air making a nissing nosie has it did, lond ing in the wall with a thud beside Masaaki head."You better watch your month boy words like that piss me off to end"Miyo said with piss off look then suddley smile and let's have dinner, everyone just stood there has she walk away trying to figer out want happen,After dinner dinner she learn the wife name was Sayuri-meaning lily,Miyo sign these were good people'Masaaki,Gajiu,and Sayuri who was one great cook she was about to fall asleep went she heard soft crying coming from a room down the hall and it came to a door that was open half way and she saw masaaki crying over a pic of his mom and dad, she slowley walk in closing the door behide her and walk over to his bed and set down beside him"I am sorry if anything i said upset you , but it is true""I know said Masaaki with small sods coming from now,I just wish i could see them one last time and tell them i love them, he said before faling asleep in her arms,Miyo grin he was cute went was not being a brat, she lay him down and pull the crover over before walking out and to her own bed, she feel a sleep knowing that masaaki and her ahd form a bond that night just my understanding.

CutieSakura
09-02-2009, 04:55 PM
Wow:shock:
It's REALLY good!!!:mrgreen:

SakuraGirl
09-05-2009, 07:26 PM
Aurora Tasogare - The next morning at breakfast Masaaki smiled over at Miyo (Who he had a crush on now), while the others look back and forth at them trying to find out what was going on with them. "Oi, oi. What is going on with you two?" Asked Aigyou. Miyo and Masaaki smiled and replied. "Nothing, we have just come to an understanding at the same time." Aigyou and Harumi look at each other and shook there heads not knowing that Masaaki had a crush on Miyo, and she did not know a thing about it. When they were just about done, Miyo suddenly froze. Her body froze in place, just like a statue. Vivid images flowed into her mind as purple eyes became a deep blue, Aigyou and Harumi jumped, rushing toward the girl, they grabbed her by the shoulders and shook her, trying to snap her out of it. "Miyo! Daijobu desu ka?! Miyo!"

Miyo was seeing a girl. The girl was around the height of five feet and four inches, Miyo estimated. The female had black spikey hair, her face was heart shaped with big shiney purple-ish eyes. Her smooth skin was slightly tan, and she had a muscular build. She didn't look very...Feminine. But she was being attacked, by one of the Aace Nakaura Assassin, as the vision ended, Miyo fell to the floor with a 'thud'. Sayuri knelt down to the girl. "Honey, are you alright?"

"Yes." Replied Miyo, taking a deep beath, filling her lungs with fresh air. After a moment she stood up and exited the building, ignoring the protests to come back. Miyo paced chakra into her feet to incrase her speed. 'I have to get there before it happens!' Miyo thought to herself, the girl with the spikey black hair flashed her mind, she forced more chakra into her feet, making her go even faster.

As she made her way though the trees, she could see the girl and the assassin coming up behide her, which the female didn't notice. Miyo jump from the tree, landing on the ground, grabbing her katana and thrusting it though the assassin's back, the assassin fell to the ground, failing to assassinate the girl. Who had turned around in horror to him lay in a puddle of his own blood, and her savior. Miyo stood there lookimg at the assassin and thought 'I made it in time.' Before blackness took over.

CutieSakura
09-05-2009, 07:53 PM
Wow that was very good!! :mrgreen:
Awwww MasaakiXMiyo <3

SakuraGirl
09-05-2009, 07:58 PM
Wow that was very good!! :mrgreen:
Awwww MasaakiXMiyo <3
yea i think they be cute together, but he is a little young for her, but we will see

Kon
09-09-2009, 12:30 PM
WOW awsome!!!!!

Kon
09-09-2009, 12:31 PM
wait how old are they???

SakuraGirl
09-09-2009, 12:34 PM
check the character spoiler at the last pace

Kon
09-09-2009, 12:39 PM
11 and 19

SakuraGirl
09-09-2009, 12:44 PM
yea but i need a other guy , she will fall in love with

SakuraGirl
09-26-2009, 08:45 PM
here is a next part

The darkness was worse this time and she could see herself running from thought the woods away form the Man again, but want did mean and what was trying to show her, she may not know much about the clan her mother came from, but she had a letter from her mother saying that if she is in a dream and being in full body while in the dream that met, She was in a deep sleep or in a coma from not resting after vision about the girl, she knew what was deffenet from a vision or a dream too, A vision was what she had during the day coming to her so shuddery that take much of energy and charka from her and putting her in a deep sleep or coma this was also something her friend did not know, A dream she during the night and brought warning of war( bad times and good time past or now). Miyo, Miyo, called a soft voice she turn and could not believe her eyes. There was a small voice slim woman in front of her with black raven and purple eyes like hers and from the stories she heard and take people she had talk to in the village this woman with the small sweet smile on her face was her mother

Taker369
09-26-2009, 10:45 PM
O.O omg more more i must read more.

SakuraGirl
09-27-2009, 09:03 AM
am working on it

mangagirl
09-27-2009, 09:05 AM
wow i love the story,

SakuraGirl
09-27-2009, 09:07 AM
wow i love the story,
thank you

SakuraGirl
09-29-2009, 06:15 PM
Mekio Ai
Miyo stood there in shock looking at her mother,Mekio Ai was a tiny small woman not build for fighting or the ninja life, but her love to her family and friends was known thought the village and ninja world, but the people in the town were she came from hate her for her clan power and killed the whole family one night to get evil power that there lord had told them about, Mekio who was a small child at the age of 10, she slip out a door and run for life with the town people coming after her and with her feet getting tierd trip over a rock and black out in a grass feild"Child are you all right" Said a man and She ask" were am i? You are in the village hidden in the Sakura said the man' Then a small boys voice said" She is sure is pretty daddy and at those words Mekio turn her heard and look at the boy who had light brown and ruby eyes and said " no one has never told me i am pretty " she said looking at the boy with a grin on his face and said " i know what i like and with those words Mekio told herself that she would marry this boy one day bring him love and great children .....Has Mekio remember this these times, she look at her daugther with tears in her eyes and said "what a great ninja you have become just like your father, my sweet child "What you doing her mother Miyo ask, Mekio just smile and said "to get you out of this dream and find out why that girl was being attack and for you to finish this mission i will be with you always Miyo and with that Meiko set foward and hug her daugther and I am sorry my child this is the last of my power use it well, and she feel herself leaving her dream world. Miyo open her eyes and look up at her friends and said " I met my mother and i know what to do.

princezzhinata
09-29-2009, 10:35 PM
Very Cute ^__^

Taker369
09-30-2009, 12:22 AM
omg awsome.

SakuraGirl
09-30-2009, 08:43 AM
Very Cute ^__^
thank you

Kon
09-30-2009, 08:44 AM
cool :cool:

SakuraGirl
09-30-2009, 08:45 AM
omg awsome.
Thank you

SakuraGirl
09-30-2009, 08:45 AM
cool :cool:
Thank you

Taruko
09-30-2009, 10:00 AM
ARGH!!
There is never anyone online!!

SakuraGirl
10-13-2009, 07:35 PM
Knowing Aurora and Meeting Issac
"wow" you met your Mother Miyo that has always been you dream and now it has come true Said Harumi Yes said Miyo looking at Aurora "you are from the Moonlight Vilage or you not "ask Miyo" "yes" said Aurora I am look at the girl with light brown hair and Purple eyes and Aurora knew she was different from any other ninja she had meet before and how did she know that assassin was coming to to kill her and getting there just in time to save her, then she said "Thank you" Miyo turn and Smile and Said" Your welcome and you many not believe this but me and you are going to become good friends, and with that Aurora knew She would never be alone again

Later that night
"well Miyo What now"Said Aigyou" hold on"said Miyo, She was sitting in a tree with Aigyou looking a young guy on the ground who was looking around for someone,Miyo jump drown from the tree and took out her Katana standing in a fighting pose and said"are you working for aace and come to kill me" ask Miyo "No said the young Guy "My Name is a Issac and i am looking for an xin member of the lergion and has he said this a Cold laughing feel the air and the voice said" well at last we meet Miyo,I am the Aace the man who been looking for and kill you father...

Taker369
10-14-2009, 10:41 AM
Wow awsome storie but u spelled legion wrong but it happens to the best of us i like were your going with it keep it up.

SakuraGirl
10-14-2009, 01:15 PM
Wow awsome storie but u spelled legion wrong but it happens to the best of us i like were your going with it keep it up.
Thanks so Much Taker369, you have help me alot and your a great friend

Taker369
10-14-2009, 11:37 PM
thanks so r u.

SakuraGirl
10-17-2009, 03:01 PM
Miyo,s Rage's
Miyo stood there her body shaking in anger and body glowing in a pink light her eye's had true a deep blue"yall are all going to pay for this" starting with you" she said looking at Issac. Aace laugh "so this is the Ai clan,s power, I have heard about from your father went i kill him " what are you talking about" yell Issac well said Aace went a ninja from the Ai Clan is push to there limit that there seeing prower over take,s them and they seen and feel everyone pain in the ninja world making there body glow in pink light and has them kill or fight anyone close to them, even if they are friends or not.Aace laugh and said " have fun not trying to kill her Issac and he left " Great thought Issac how what"you now fight me Issac Said Miyo "wait Miyo we are friends this is went Miyo apper behine him and kick him in the side sending him rolling into the ground Issac sat up from the attack and said" I need to stop her from herself and other,s

Yori
10-17-2009, 09:43 PM
http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showthread.php?t=28312

Sakura girl only

I_Luv_Dogboy22
10-18-2009, 04:16 AM
Ewwww!!!!

I_Luv_Dogboy22
10-18-2009, 04:16 AM
Very Girly! :mad:

I_Luv_Dogboy22
10-18-2009, 04:17 AM
and Boring

I_Luv_Dogboy22
10-18-2009, 04:17 AM
and rubbish!

SakuraGirl
10-18-2009, 04:30 AM
well who ask you anyways

I_Luv_Dogboy22
10-18-2009, 04:46 AM
Don't show me attitudes! :mad: You Fartface!

cherryflower
10-18-2009, 07:04 AM
Hey, stop it! If your so mad because your crush has a girlfriend get over it. You don't need to be mean to other people because of that do you? Now I advise that you leave this thread.

SakuraGirl
10-18-2009, 07:17 AM
Hey, stop it! If your so mad because your crush has a girlfriend get over it. You don't need to be mean to other people because of that do you? Now I advise that you leave this thread.
thank you cherryflower it means alot

I_Luv_Dogboy22
10-18-2009, 07:19 AM
Hey, stop it! If your so mad because your crush has a girlfriend get over it. You don't need to be mean to other people because of that do you? Now I advise that you leave this thread.

Wow...:roll: a so-not-have-guts chick wanna prove some bravery toward me...back off snot butt

cherryflower
10-18-2009, 07:26 AM
Hey, I'm not starting a flame war or whatever it's called here. but whatever. just stop being mean to random people. duh. I'm not the one who's obsessed with a certain person. :roll:

I_Luv_Dogboy22
10-18-2009, 07:29 AM
Ok...bye weird butt people

Naruke Uchiaki
10-18-2009, 10:03 AM
I_Luv_Dogboy22, I have to ask you to stop flaming that, if I see it one more time you will be bad repped and reported.

SakuraGirl
10-18-2009, 11:18 AM
why does know body like my story:(

Taker369
10-18-2009, 03:04 PM
i love it.

SakuraGirl
10-18-2009, 03:26 PM
someone does thank you

vino
10-19-2009, 03:40 PM
I Like your story ^_^

SakuraGirl
10-19-2009, 03:41 PM
I Like your story ^_^
thank you so much

Naruke Uchiaki
10-20-2009, 01:21 PM
why does know body like my story:(
I like your story!!

SakuraGirl
10-20-2009, 07:51 PM
I like your story!!
thank you

Taker369
10-21-2009, 11:48 AM
i love it.

SakuraGirl
10-22-2009, 09:47 AM
Miyo vs Issac

Miyo smile an evil grin and said"we are going to have fun Issac and with that she attack him with her katana, Issac got out his sword and stop Miyo,s katana from hitting him, "Man thought Issac her power has grower 10 times stronger,then she put her katana in the ground grad the end of it and used it to hit Issac with her foot,while this was going on Aace laugh watching the fight going on and said" Thats right Miyo used your power to kill him and you will be all mine in breathy and power before you know it, you my love and i will have at all cost ( back at the battle)Went Miyo foot hit Issac face the power of it sent him into a tree , then Issac got up grad his sword and try to attack Miyo,but she grad his hand and thew him to the ground making a hole , this is went Miyo let a blood like scream grad her head and yell" make it stop the pain is too much" has she said this Issac apper behind her and hit the back of her neck knocking her out and pick her up and took her and her team back to the village.There mission was never got done, but Masaaki sore that he would find his uncle Aace and kill him for he did to his family and Miyo who he still has a crush to this today

Taker369
10-22-2009, 11:20 AM
omg thats epic girl u did real well with it this time the fighting is breath taking and the emotion just poors out screaming more .

princezzhinata
10-22-2009, 11:45 AM
My fave character is Harumi ^_^

SakuraGirl
10-22-2009, 11:52 AM
My fave character is Harumi ^_^
really i might take her out, but you can used her as forum character

SakuraGirl
10-22-2009, 11:55 AM
omg thats epic girl u did real well with it this time the fighting is breath taking and the emotion just poors out screaming more .
i got the next few parts work out, so get ready for more like this one

kay
10-22-2009, 01:28 PM
thi story is pretty cool :cool:

SakuraGirl
10-22-2009, 01:37 PM
thi story is pretty cool :cool:
i am trying to make it better

SakuraGirl
10-23-2009, 09:00 PM
Left Alone
"Miyo wake up" said a small sweet voice
Miyo open her eyes and let out a small moan of pain,to see a small girl in front of her, the girl had pink eyes and brown eye, and Miyo knew her as Lady Hana, "you need rest now Miyo you body is weak from the power blow"What about Harumi and Aigyou" ask Miyo "I am sorry Miyo, but they saw your power and now want nothing to do with you because of want you did to that man Issac and they are sacred of you and never want to go near you again"Want yell Miyo they are my friends and they love me and would never leave me your liying now go away" she said pushing Lady Hana away. Lady Hana turn and walk out of the room, and turn to face Issac and Miyuki and said"I hope you know what your doing" and walk away "Yea" said Miyuki "you better" "I know what am doing so trust me"said Issac
A Day Later
Miyo got up from her bed on a raining day and jump out of the windrow of her hospital room(her not being heal all the way this hurt alot ) Miyo walk thought the village with the rain coming down on her , she came to a house Aigyou house and knock on her door, Aigyou father her father best friend came to the door and open it "Miyo" What is it?I need to talk to Aigyou plz"said Miyo "I am sorry Miyo after what happen and what you did, I can never let you go near Aigyou or Harumi again,With these last words he turn and walk in the house slaming the door in Miyo face and leave her in the cold rain wondering with sadness in her eyes"What now i have no one,I am left alone

Taker369
10-23-2009, 11:11 PM
wow awsome one sakuragirl u did really good and took your tme congrats.

SakuraGirl
10-23-2009, 11:13 PM
wow awsome one sakuragirl u did really good and took your tme congrats.
thanks i am getting better at this.:)

Taker369
10-23-2009, 11:14 PM
yes u r.

SakuraGirl
10-23-2009, 11:27 PM
yes u r.
i could help you with your,s if you want

SakuraGirl
10-29-2009, 09:22 PM
Leaving
A week after the night after Aigyou father told her want happen and that she could not ever see harumi or aigyou again, she beside to leave the village, but was not sure why she need to leave she just got this feeling that if she did something great was going to happen to her just as she was about to walk out of the gate she heard a voice say "where you going Miyo,Miyo turn to see Lady Hana looking at her worried "I am leaving for a while Lady Hana and I am not sure went with be back,Lady Hana sign and said"well there is no stoping you once your mind is made up Miyo, So go on,but just be careful"Mind if we come to said two voice Miyo turn to see the boy she attack and a girl "sure"said Miyo This is Issac and his girlfriend Miyuki they brought you home after the attack and have been watching over you since "said Lady Hana"uh Thanks"siad Miyo "you can come along with that they turn and walk out the gate

A Day Later
Miyo,Issac, and Miyuki were resting in a town that they had stop at, to begin walking again the next day to were Miyo did not know,then Miyo got up and when for a walk ,as she was walking thought the town loving the view of the starly sky a voice said "what is a pretty thing like you do out here by yourself" Miyo turn to see a young her age , he was tall with black hair and brown eyes"the Name is Takayuki what your,s Takayuki said holding out his hand,Miyo jus turn and walk away "Hey wait"said Takayuki i just want you name it Miyo now go away said Miyo Miyo huh nice name Hey Miyo you mind if i come with you and your,s friends to were your going,and if i say no said Miyo.Then i will follow you said Takayuki Miyo sign and said okay but your going to have to keep you grade up "cool with me said Takayauki with a grin and Miyo walk away not knowing what was to become of her and Takayuki.

Taker369
10-29-2009, 09:24 PM
Awsome job again u out done yourself.

SakuraGirl
10-29-2009, 09:29 PM
thanks

SakuraGirl
11-01-2009, 12:00 AM
Takayuki word's
Miyo,Takayuki,Issac and Miyuki were walking thought a flied and Takayuki who had join them that morning had done nothing but talk the whole way"Enough" said Miyo"you need to stop talking you are drive me nuts and i might hurt you if you you don,t stop"Miyo stop and said "wait a sec you guy feel that" she said sensing something and for some reason she knew they who ever "they" were were here for her. That,s went a kuani came out of nowere at them and they jump into a tree the kuani missing them.Takayuki turn to Miyo and it you there after but why? My clan power is what they what aace whats and now do you know that said Miyo in a shock scared voice"never mind that just listen to me said Takayuki grading her and turning face to his were there eye,s met I don,t want they have done t you or who this aace guy is but i won,t let them hurt you, you are to good of a girl to have this happen to you and i don,t know why but i think me and you Miyo were sopost to meet so don,t worry about a thing i will take of this that went a aace voice came out and said" i like to see you try boy"Aace said Takayuki kissing Miyo on the forehead i want you to trust me okay will you do that for me" Yes said Miyo with tears in her eyes and with a nod of his head Takayuki jump out of the tree and said Aace come on if you want Miyo you going have to get thought me first" Aace laugh and said that fine boy i have not had a good fight in a while with that the battle begin.

Taker369
11-01-2009, 12:24 AM
awosme.

SakuraGirl
11-06-2009, 08:40 PM
Love
Miyo stood there in the tree watch Takayuki fight Aace for her"are you not going to do something Miyo"ask Muyiki.She can,t said Issac she is too much shock,we need to get her out of here,"why"ask Muyiki because she is having a vision,No"said Miyo in a soft voice if i leave then he will die and that can not happen she said has Takayuki was throw into a tree,"why are fighting for boy went you only meet,it not like you love her or do you said Aace "oh god you are well i hate to tell this she will be mine and i will kill you,and you and her will never me together" Stop"yell Takayuki you won,t have her i will make sure of that"said Takayuki his chothes torn up he rise his axe and run towed Aace who had a katana in his hand and a evil grin on his face, before the attack could hit each other the attack was stop by Miyo with her katana"this my battle this time i will stop him,and if i don,t i will never be able to live my life, now plz leave and so i can do this,ask Miyo but said Takayuki "plz just do it"yell Miyo i will be fine with this Takayuki jump back to the tree with Issac and Muyiki who were watch,that went Issac said if it true want Aace said then you better not hurt her,but Takayuki was watch Miyo fight aace with everything she had,aace had cut the side of her and it was bleed out then Miyo took her kanata put thought his heart the fight was over in a sec that went Miyo pass out

Three days had past since she had kill aace went she had woke in the village in the glass, Miyo look in the glass and smile to herself she like her outfit it was a black jacket, purple tank top, black pants,short purple socks, short black boots with a purple sash around her neck were Aace had cut her,her hair was tie up high on her head with a purple ribbon,she grab her kanata and walk out the door it was time to find Takayuki and find out if want he said was true about him loving her

SakuraGirl
11-07-2009, 05:51 PM
plz someone read and comment

princezzhinata
12-09-2009, 03:57 AM
Awww! This chapter is my fave! ^^
Awesome Blossom job! ^^

SakuraGirl
12-09-2009, 01:53 PM
wow thank you so much,should i keep writing

Taker369
12-10-2009, 12:18 AM
wow u did a new one congrats it rules.

SakuraGirl
12-10-2009, 12:50 PM
wow u did a new one congrats it rules.
Thanks

princezzhinata
12-11-2009, 04:04 AM
Can't wait for the next chap! XD

SakuraGirl
12-11-2009, 09:44 AM
Can't wait for the next chap! XD
lol thanks, it might be a while

princezzhinata
12-14-2009, 07:59 AM
Okay,I can wait (maybe xD)

toad
12-14-2009, 08:43 AM
cool...

SakuraGirl
12-14-2009, 11:55 AM
cool...
Thank you

SakuraGirl
03-10-2010, 09:38 AM
anyone else want to read?

Taker369
03-15-2010, 12:42 AM
wow i missed alot not bad at all keep it up girl your doing great.

SakuraGirl
03-15-2010, 12:51 AM
thank,s i am doing one about her childhood now

Taker369
03-15-2010, 12:51 AM
i cant wait for it .

SakuraGirl
03-15-2010, 01:04 AM
i cant wait for it .
yea thanks,i just need idea,s

Taker369
03-15-2010, 01:09 AM
well pm me about them.

SakuraGirl
03-20-2010, 09:44 PM
well pm me about them.

Thanks for the commets