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obitobi
07-26-2009, 08:04 PM
It was hard times as the second great shinobi war ended.
Other villiages wanted peace. They cowered behind politics and feudal lords. They didn't understand that at the same time a blonde haired hero was born, an equally strong force was born in the Hidden Sand.
He grew up with his best friend Zamakie, and his brother Hiro who died in the war. But it changed everything when his master died.
Zamakie also was murdered by a crazy lunatic. Zamakie had been stabbed to death. His sheets filled with bloodlust. It was a Waterfall villiage troop.
Kama, now renegade, has killed over 400 people. It was all for hopes to find that one murderer.
He had ravaged the countryside only to find out that the man was named Hiro... Hiro Yuchi.
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If anyone likes it, i will make more.


(edited it cause of character issues.)

Sai's brother
07-26-2009, 08:06 PM
Its good but I dont think your allowed to use people from the show