assassin
07-26-2009, 08:56 AM
Introduction- a forgotten story
In the year 1257 the worlds worst fears became reality. A powerful group of 10 demons rose near a small village in the Holy Roman Empire(now present day germany). each looked like a human but their power was far from being human and each had a characteristic that set them apart from humans. they called themselves the apocalypse. within a few days half the empire was set in flames.
Soon the group split up knowing that each had enough power to fight on their own and continued to destroy whatever came their way. each had a section of the world to destroy given to them by their leader the strongest of the 10 demons in the apocalypse.
But then a group of 10 men rose to stand against them. each gifted in some way. one was a vampire, a species known for thriving on blood and was sensitive to sunlight. the 2nd was gifted with the power of the hell hound cerberus. the 3rd was a healer from a land now known as the USA. the 4th was a russian cosak and the 5th was a japanesse ninja. the 6th was a british scholar and the 7th was a common thief from the Sahara in Africa. the 8th was a legendary spanish general and the 9th was a chinese profit that could use mystic talismans to control the elements. the 10th was a teenage boy the only one of them that had no special skill or talent and was taught by the other 9 worriors. this boy was the only one to see the demons and survive. he wielded 2 blades (one of light and the other of darkness).
the 10 went around the world and fought each demon successfully sealing each because they were immortal. in the end though, only the 10th stood against them and fought the leader of the apocalypse. in the end he too was sealed and the boy came to be the only one of the 10 to see the end result of their actions.
after the battle, all records of the incedent were burned and the weapons of the 10 worriors were sealed away. each of the seals holding the demons was buried as to prevent the apocalypse from coming again.
the year is now 2010 and the seals holding the members of the apocalypse grow weak.
to be continued
how was the intro of my story?
character profiles(will be edited often so come here to see changes in the story you may have missed.)
the Shotenkesuki(the heroes of the story):
Ethan-a boy who survived a meeting with one of the apocalypse. and is the only person alive to ever survive. he gained powers during that meet but has yet to know what they do main character of the story.
age:16
height:5'10
weight:105 lbs.
power:still unknown
home:north carolina USA
Derrius- a boy who's parents were killed and gained a dog like appearence and dog like abilities yet his true potential remains a mystery. his goal is to find the person who killed his parents and get his revenge.
age:16
height:5'7
weight:123 lbs.
power: has dog like powers but still remain a mystery
home:Michigan USA
Apocalypse(the bad guys):
hate:leader of the apocalypse with gray skin and black eyes. his powers are unknown.
age:???
height:6'0
weight:150 lbs.
power:unknown
greed: a demon girl who has a relationship with hate. has cold eyes and looks like a beautiful woman
age:???
height:5'9
weight:120 lbs.
power:unknown
blood: a demon with crimson red eyes and streaking crimson hair. can manipulate blood and use it as a weapon and has a thrist for it. when he finish's killing he absorbs all the blood into his own veins.
age:???
height:5'11
weight:110 lbs.
power:manipulating blood
other characters:
michelle: derrius's older sister who mistook him for the thing that killed their parents.
age:18
height:5'7
weight:127 lbs.
power:none.
In the year 1257 the worlds worst fears became reality. A powerful group of 10 demons rose near a small village in the Holy Roman Empire(now present day germany). each looked like a human but their power was far from being human and each had a characteristic that set them apart from humans. they called themselves the apocalypse. within a few days half the empire was set in flames.
Soon the group split up knowing that each had enough power to fight on their own and continued to destroy whatever came their way. each had a section of the world to destroy given to them by their leader the strongest of the 10 demons in the apocalypse.
But then a group of 10 men rose to stand against them. each gifted in some way. one was a vampire, a species known for thriving on blood and was sensitive to sunlight. the 2nd was gifted with the power of the hell hound cerberus. the 3rd was a healer from a land now known as the USA. the 4th was a russian cosak and the 5th was a japanesse ninja. the 6th was a british scholar and the 7th was a common thief from the Sahara in Africa. the 8th was a legendary spanish general and the 9th was a chinese profit that could use mystic talismans to control the elements. the 10th was a teenage boy the only one of them that had no special skill or talent and was taught by the other 9 worriors. this boy was the only one to see the demons and survive. he wielded 2 blades (one of light and the other of darkness).
the 10 went around the world and fought each demon successfully sealing each because they were immortal. in the end though, only the 10th stood against them and fought the leader of the apocalypse. in the end he too was sealed and the boy came to be the only one of the 10 to see the end result of their actions.
after the battle, all records of the incedent were burned and the weapons of the 10 worriors were sealed away. each of the seals holding the demons was buried as to prevent the apocalypse from coming again.
the year is now 2010 and the seals holding the members of the apocalypse grow weak.
to be continued
how was the intro of my story?
character profiles(will be edited often so come here to see changes in the story you may have missed.)
the Shotenkesuki(the heroes of the story):
Ethan-a boy who survived a meeting with one of the apocalypse. and is the only person alive to ever survive. he gained powers during that meet but has yet to know what they do main character of the story.
age:16
height:5'10
weight:105 lbs.
power:still unknown
home:north carolina USA
Derrius- a boy who's parents were killed and gained a dog like appearence and dog like abilities yet his true potential remains a mystery. his goal is to find the person who killed his parents and get his revenge.
age:16
height:5'7
weight:123 lbs.
power: has dog like powers but still remain a mystery
home:Michigan USA
Apocalypse(the bad guys):
hate:leader of the apocalypse with gray skin and black eyes. his powers are unknown.
age:???
height:6'0
weight:150 lbs.
power:unknown
greed: a demon girl who has a relationship with hate. has cold eyes and looks like a beautiful woman
age:???
height:5'9
weight:120 lbs.
power:unknown
blood: a demon with crimson red eyes and streaking crimson hair. can manipulate blood and use it as a weapon and has a thrist for it. when he finish's killing he absorbs all the blood into his own veins.
age:???
height:5'11
weight:110 lbs.
power:manipulating blood
other characters:
michelle: derrius's older sister who mistook him for the thing that killed their parents.
age:18
height:5'7
weight:127 lbs.
power:none.