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Maikeru D. Shinigami
07-26-2009, 03:02 AM
So I decided I should post some of my poems and see what you think.
I will be posted three right now.

Poem #1
Roses are Red (As is the Blood a Broken Heart)

Roses are Red
Violets are Blue
My Heart is Broken
And it needs some Glue.

I missed my past
I wished it could've last
I missed you so deeply
I needed someone to need me.

My life had no meaning
My heart was no longer gleaming
My mind had eroded
My heart had imploded.

Your smile which once kept me awake
Then just left me drowning in a lake
I wanted to feel better, better forever
But the way life was going I thought that would be never.

I cried at night when I thought of what was lost
Those memories all came with a terrible cost
A cost of losing our love
And a heart that was shoved.

Time has passed and I feel much better
In the end I could never regret her
My heart has returned with all of its pieces
And maybe my chance of love increases.

So roses are red
Violets are blue
You no longer need me
So I no longer need you.

Poem #2 (This is an oldy)
Tortured Souls

Tortured Souls out in midnight
Tortured Souls scream in freight
Tortured Souls beaten and battered
Tortured Souls crushed and splattered.

When in the night you start to bleed
You'll remember how much you meant to me
The busted glass,
The shattered dreams.

Do you know what you see?
Do you know how I feel?
Do you have a freakin clue?
No because you said we we're through.

Hearts ripped in half
You turn around and begin to laugh
Screech, Scream, Screech, Scream
I thought we were supposed to be a team.

Tortured souls what are they?
What do they say?
Do they cry in a corner?
Do they drift away?

The blood rushes through your veins
You start to scream in pain
Your eyes fill with tears
And you get crushed with emotional spears.

Dieing inside your heart explodes
Run away before your mind implodes
Your tortured soul in all its pain
One day will help you gain.

But as of now
Blood falls with your tears
Whatever you don't stop it's flow
Don't let go.

Stay away from the light
In eternal ghostly freight
Drift into darkness
On cruel blade's sharpness.

Let the blood flow
Just let it go
But don't dig your graveyard hole
You poor Tortured Soul.

Poem #3
You're just a Heartbreaker (With the way you step on Me)

So much for the times we shared
So much for saying you cared
So much for being okay
So much for getting my way.

Pieces, and pieces that's all that is left
You committed a crime, a crime of theft
You stole my heart, made it beat faster
I wished it would've been happily ever after.

Fell into your arms, how foolish was I
Never expected to hear a final goodbye
Your words were oxygen to me
Without them I could barely breathe.

When I said I loved you I meant it
Whether you believe, or decide to throw a fit
I made you a promise to be with you forever
And you agreed saying you'd leave me never.

You told that lie
And it made me cry
Yet when you ended it all
I was still standing tall.

Your chance is done
In the end I won
Because you're just a heartbreaker
And I don't have time for a faker.

Maikeru D. Shinigami
07-26-2009, 03:07 AM
Crap that first one had some fixes that needed to be made, I think I finally got them though.

07-26-2009, 03:07 AM
That's pretty good.I hope you make some more.

Maikeru D. Shinigami
07-26-2009, 03:08 AM
Thanks I might just, I had to edit the first one a bit to change some wordings.

07-31-2009, 01:00 PM
i still like it.

07-31-2009, 01:54 PM
i like them i hope you make some more

Maikeru D. Shinigami
09-01-2009, 01:30 PM
I made a new poem entitled

"My Precious Mind Slave"

My Precious Mind Slave
Why won't you behave?
To me, you used to cower in fear
Now you just run whenever I am near.

My Precious Mind Slave
Can you hear my cry?
You once were loyal
But now you must die.

My Precious Mind Slave
Why do you continue to boast?
When it comes to you
Why can't I coherse?

My Precious Mind Slave
Is the pain too much?
When you feel the wrath of my rod
Do you feel anger and such?

My Dying Mind Slave
Why didn't you listen?
I tried to grant you life
But now knife is slipping.

My Dead Mind Slave
Do you like the taste of your blood?
You will never oppose me now
Too bad you're just a lifeless shell on the ground.

My Dead Mind Slave
Do you regret what you've done?
I warned not once but twice
If you disobeyed your life would be gone.

01-21-2010, 11:41 PM
I like 'em. There great

01-21-2010, 11:50 PM
Your poetry's quite good.

zombie ruler
01-21-2010, 11:54 PM
Your poems are great

Maikeru D. Shinigami
01-22-2010, 12:22 AM
Thanksies, I'm hoping to write some more soon, matters how lazy I am.

01-22-2010, 05:07 AM
i love your poetry maikeru <3 ^^

Maikeru D. Shinigami
02-12-2010, 12:19 AM
Thank You sasu!

Maikeru D. Shinigami
02-13-2010, 01:28 AM
Revival No Jutsu

02-13-2010, 01:30 AM
Dang, nice Maikeru.

Maikeru D. Shinigami
02-13-2010, 01:31 AM
Dang, nice Maikeru.

I have some more if I can find them.

02-13-2010, 01:31 AM
I always envied your writing and respected you as a writer.

03-07-2010, 08:26 AM
Good poetry... Write more...

03-07-2010, 08:35 AM
good poem's maikeru

03-07-2010, 08:45 AM
Mai-mai-kun's words are so dreamy <3 <3

Maikeru D. Shinigami
06-25-2010, 11:04 PM

It's Only You

It's only you who makes me feel this way
The one I long for every single day.
It's only you who holds my heart
The one I want you to keep every little part.

I feel overjoyed whenever from you, I hear
You make me so happy I sometimes shed a tear.
In your arms is where I want to be
Even if I have to travel across the shining sea.

I love you so much, you cannot see
It's impossible to know what you mean to me.
From your words I feel such love
It's a love no one can shove.

My heart with you it feels complete
And to me you are the only elite.
The way that I feel I can't explain
For you, my heart goes insane.

It's only you who makes my heart leap
And that heart is what I want you to keep.
It's only you I long for every night
Only you who I want to hold me tight.

My heart has been stolen right from my chest
I'm just glad it was taken by the very best.
When I hear from you my day is alway made
With you holding my heart I am not afraid.

Unconditional, my love is for you
Just know that all this is true.
When I see your eyes I feel at home
Lost inside them I forever roam.

It's only you who holds the key to my heart
It's only you who knows how to make it start.
It's only you from whom I long to hear calling
It's only you for whom my heart has fallen.

06-25-2010, 11:08 PM
Why do all teenage poems has to be emoooooo???? Looney no likey emo poemsssss. `~(

EDIT: Except for the one right above me apparently... <.<"

They're nice though. Very... Rhymey. `:) ~<3

Maikeru D. Shinigami
06-25-2010, 11:10 PM
I'm not a teenager. [o.o]

06-25-2010, 11:11 PM
I'm not a teenager. [o.o]



Maikeru D. Shinigami
06-25-2010, 11:12 PM
I just turned 20. I'm barely not a teenager. >.>

06-25-2010, 11:15 PM
I just turned 20. I'm barely not a teenager. >.>

Peeeeeeeeeeeeeeedoooooooooooooo. >.>

Ya srsly, once you turn 20, it's just common sense to steer away from all under-aged kids on the internet. Saves us all a lot of trouble in court. xD

06-25-2010, 11:17 PM
And hey! I'm only a year and 5 days away from eighteen! Then we can have our own little pedo-stalker club! And you can buy me booze!!! `:P

Maikeru D. Shinigami
06-25-2010, 11:25 PM
Screw that, I'm not changing myself just cause I am a day older than I was yesterday.