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Shisko Shi
04-08-2013, 10:08 PM
Everyone else this is our battle. YOu can give advise later. Let me do it so I can focus, thank you.

Shisko Shi, GM.

You go first.

Just go..

As I stood there I saw sasuke as I ran at him with my kunais as I thrusted it to his chest in hope/attempt to kill him."

Make sure you use things like Attempt and hope. If you say you hit me, then you hit me and that is Auto Hit/AH making it impossible to dodge.

Now if you make it to I have to go back and avoid an attack after I said I did something, then that is TM/Time Minipulation.

So you go first as I can see what you have.

I am using Ben Hayabusa.

http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20110423041416/tatsufannon/es/images/f/f9/Sleyd_H.png

Lets see what you can do.

Location: Blood Village Arena.

http://farm5.staticflickr.com/4016/4429268858_8404970fff_z.jpg (http://www.google.com/url?sa=i&rct=j&q=&esrc=s&frm=1&source=images&cd=&cad=rja&docid=zKcrdSziWhuQKM&tbnid=zYue59qTfq32UM:&ved=0CAUQjRw&url=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.flickr.com%2Fphotos%2Ffantasy-art-and-portraits%2F4429268858%2F&ei=B6JjUavNJuTbigKF7YD4Dg&bvm=bv.44990110,d.cGE&psig=AFQjCNEWqD6anY2QPzwc5sJO0FmRMOddOg&ust=1365570366758801)


Rules: Normal, No GM, TM, CC, AH, ect. Ask if you do now know what I am talking about.

Restrictions: None.

Rednodchi
04-08-2013, 10:12 PM
(Shall I use Rednodchi for this? Noob mode activate!)

Rednodchi
04-08-2013, 10:17 PM
(Never mind. My tiny brain put it together xD)



Rednodchi stood around always being the one to wait for an attack. His eyes closing as he tried to sense for an attack his right hand was located on his blade, and his left hand out ready to use Blaze arm.

Shisko Shi
04-08-2013, 10:19 PM
TM is Time Minipulation, going back in time. I will let you know if you do it.

CC is Character Control. "after Red was hit, he fell to the floor as he grabbed his sword." That is me controling you.

AH is Auto Hit. Basicly hitting me with out giving me a chance to counter. No "I go to stab him as my sword hits hit gut." THat is a big no no in RPing.

GM is, yes, God Mode. You know all of those I listed or Planet busters, or using 1000000000 fricken jutsu's in one turn. >.> ;););) XD But yea. lol. Real easy.

Then things that are not on the rules that will make you better...

Have has best of grammar as you can.I will preach that I have the worst. I type so fast and do not even proof read. But it is best to do it so people will understand you and not get pissed.

Then be creative. Simple. I can go in more detail later.

And use detail. Like tell me what I am seeing, as for yuo to tell me I am in a open field with flowers and spring temp. with butter flys around me will help a hella lot more then just saying, "You stand in a field as I come at you." Then I have no idea what it is like.


Ok, go when you are ready. Take your time.

Shisko Shi
04-08-2013, 10:21 PM
As I see my opponent infront I speed through the trees appearing in the air. the wind blowing on my calm face as I look with my eyes not activated.

I land in the area looking at him.

"So... a lost little lamp.." I say as I throw a Kinai to hit face.

Rednodchi
04-08-2013, 10:30 PM
(I might go to bed xD My power keeps going out anyways xD It's storm like 1969 over here xD)

Rednodchi moves away just in time to avoid a fetal blow to his face, and then opens his right eye. "Lost little lamb?" he chuckled as he pulled out his sword, but only for distraction as with his free hand he was throwing three kinai hoping to catch the enemy by surpise;

Shisko Shi
04-08-2013, 10:36 PM
As I see the man pull a sword as I then notic Kunais coming at me. "sH...!" He said as he duckedas they passed then lifted his body up wuth his hands and into a flip. Landing on his feet he bent downa she speed off to the man and went in to cut him.

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OK cool. You are doing suprisingly well right now. I would love to see where you go from here. Lets kci kit up a bit. Add more attacks ect. You are really good at your point.

Rednodchi
04-08-2013, 10:39 PM
Rednodchi watches taking a few seconds to decide if he should use Blaze arm. 'I would be risking my arms' he thought, and then got his sword ready to attempt to block the attack.

Shisko Shi
04-08-2013, 10:53 PM
A few pointers.

If you are blocking, just block it. YOu do not have to do things like Attempt. Only if you are attacking.

Also you can attack more then once in a post.
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As the attack was blocked I then body flicker behind him as I thrust my fist to his back that would send a shock wave throwing him in a powerful puch across the ground and into the wall making a crater if hit.

This is enough to break a bone.

I then appear in front of his face as i throw 50 fast punches to his face that would easly break through a wall and would be hard for a normal human to dodge.
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Ok i stepped it up. There are ester eggs in here so to speak. These eggs will be the things that make a HUGE diffrence in a fight. Theses words allowed me to advance from 1% to 10% in a way.

To your time. Go one attck at a time and counter thinking how you believe it would be done. If you are in the show.

Rednodchi
04-08-2013, 11:01 PM
Rednodchi was able to block most of the punches with a substitution jujsu, and found himself in a tree, and soon jumped to another tree as soon as he was able, and started doing hand signs. "Fire style fire ball jujsu!" he put two fingers two his mouth, and breathed a fire ball attempting to hit the enemy with a full blast of fire.

Shisko Shi
04-08-2013, 11:22 PM
Seeing the bass come froma near by tree I turn as I speed to it. I close my eyes as I focus my chakra to my body and eyes as I reopen them with the fire ball only a few feet from me. I then have my eyes activated in Phase 1 ass I begin to blur from speed. I then vanish my speeding far to the left then forwards as I dodge the attack moving with such speed it would be impossible for human instinct to find my as I appear behind him and go to punch him. This would throw a shock wave killing him if in sight of my attack.

Rednodchi
04-08-2013, 11:29 PM
Rednodchi not having the eyes built for watching speed didn't notice the enemy til it was to late, and he went flying forward his back in pain he could have swore his spine almost gave out as he flew forward though he closed his eyes, and you could see sweat beating from his forehead, but only after a few seconds of sweating his arms took ablaze, and he did a flip so he landed on his feet. The pain from that punch was now being over shadowed by the slight pain he felt in his arms that where now on fire. Lifting up his sword he held his hand their for awhile till just like his hands the sword caught ablaze, and he ran at the enemy going normal speed his clan's power was not really one of the most dangerous.

(Now that I think about it I should have took you're advise, and made Blaze arms better xD)

Shisko Shi
04-09-2013, 12:10 AM
Yea that shock way would have killed you.

Seeing the bass come froma near by tree I turn as I speed to it. I close my eyes as I focus my chakra to my body and eyes as I reopen them with the fire ball only a few feet from me. I then have my eyes activated in Phase 1 ass I begin to blur from speed. I then vanish my speeding far to the left then forwards as I dodge the attack moving with such speed it would be impossible for human instinct to find my as I appear behind him and go to punch him. This would throw a shock wave killing him if in sight of my attack.

Bold is the things I am talking anout that you can use to help win battles.

But I will keep going because I am enjoying this fight.

Remeber to get creative. One way to increase your speed is t focus chakra that increases speed and strength. As in speed, use things you know by science that can slow me down. But logicaly.

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I see the man coming at me as I close m eyes sighing. "Is this is? Quite wasting my time boy..."

This is his eye in phase one.
http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/191/7/e/rigan_by_blacklightning777-d3lmc2z.png (http://www.google.com/url?sa=i&rct=j&q=&esrc=s&frm=1&source=images&cd=&cad=rja&docid=IyIPS4hJNaCQgM&tbnid=kooMGWTeuD9DcM:&ved=0CAUQjRw&url=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.deviantart.com%2Fmorelikethis %2F251413313%3Fview_mode%3D2&ei=5hVZUYKaFsbOiwKw_IDoDQ&bvm=bv.44442042,d.cGE&psig=AFQjCNFssSYxZLmPtLZ8duEZFSkZIWTDyg&ust=1364879019428639)
Also note this is not the sharingan so it is not owned by Viz. I can help you find bad ass pics to for characters. if you need.

I then appear in front as I through a punch sending a powerful force of wind that would blow the fire away enough for me to hit his head killing him if hit.

Rednodchi
04-09-2013, 10:07 AM
Rednodchi moved out of the way using chraka to focus his movement. Proceeding he took out a kunai which caught ablaze as he picked it up, and threw the blazing kunai at the enemy.

Shisko Shi
04-09-2013, 11:54 AM
Still good. But do not sweat it. Make sure you counter/dodge ect my attacks oher wise they are coutned as a hit and you would die.

So counter > Attack.

So go ahead and add the counter in there.

Rednodchi
04-09-2013, 12:28 PM
Rednodchi focused his charka into his feet, and did a roll, and proceeded to ran using the charka for extra speed just in case the enemy had another move coming.

Shisko Shi
04-09-2013, 12:46 PM
I see him avoid me as I appear in a blur with chakra forming into my muscles. I wait for him to attack as I watch him.

Rednodchi
04-09-2013, 12:51 PM
Rednodchi staring at him put his blazing hands together, and started make hand signs. "Fire style fireball jujsu!" he once again put his hands to his mouth, and blew a fire ball, but this time he felt like adding a surprise, and threw in three kunai knifes into the fireball while he did that he also released his blaze arms so his arms wouldn't turn to ash.