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narutolord37
04-18-2009, 06:48 AM
i thought about this so why not make up your own character (note the names dont have to be japanese)




ok this is why i posted this i write storys and i going to write a naruto story but i need your help to make some characters

instructions
1leave the name
2leave the village he/she is from (make one up if you want)
3. pick the style jutsu you want them to use (make one up if you want for example cable style)
4 pick his strongest justu
5 leave 3 more (not including his strongest)
6 i will choose 4 but i never stop writing so u might not get picked this time but mabye next time

Sage Mode
04-18-2009, 11:22 AM
You guys can go ahead and make characters, but unfortunately due to legal reasons, narutolord37, won't be able to post any Naruto stories here. Sorry. :(

narutolord37
04-18-2009, 01:42 PM
You guys can go ahead and make characters, but unfortunately due to legal reasons, narutolord37, won't be able to post any Naruto stories here. Sorry. :(
i wasnt going to i was just going to choose the caracters here not post the story

Luked90
04-25-2009, 07:00 AM
il help you out
but u wil have 2 send me ur finished story thn :)
tht is if u pick me

1leave the name/ Takami Hyujiro
2leave the village he/she is from/ leaf
3. pick the style jutsu you want them to use/ fire, lightning
4 pick his strongest justu/ combo of the two chakras, Darkness Inferno
5 leave 3 more (not including his strongest) Thundering Assault
Incinerating Star
Spark Volcano

Message me bak with what you think

JamesD
04-25-2009, 07:46 AM
instructions
1leave the name / Kiyoshi Mitsuhita
2leave the village he is from/ Village Hidden In the Mist
3. pick the style jutsu you want them to use / Water Primary , Lightning Secondary
4 pick his strongest justu / Dual Water dragon jutsu , Thunder Storm Barrage
5 leave 3 more (not including his strongest) Water Lightning Combo : Shocking Tidal wave, Water Lightning Combo : Water prison of pain & Water style : Grand Tsunami.

k+h4ever
04-25-2009, 11:32 PM
Nature Type: Lighting(main) wind (secondary)
Kekkei Genkai: She can master any jutsu including other kekkei genkai and is the
only one in the world. If their is someone who claims to be the same or in the same clan it is not true because the whole clan was wiped out with only Hitachi the remaining survivor.
Name: Hitachi (girl)
Profile: leaf ninja, konahagakure
She is a drop dead gorgeous ninja. Using her very special kekkei genkei she has mastered the sharingan, rinnegan, byakugan, and dead bone pulse. She graduated the ninja academy when she was 3 years of age. Regarded as the most gifted child of the century, she mastered many techniques. Her whole clan was wiped out when she was only a baby. She was cared by a close family friend, Akemi Sato. Akemi died when Hitachi was 13 years of age making Hitachi an orphan. She was seen alot with Kakashi Hatake in the 2 1/2 year time laps. Walking around toqether, going to movies,and training. People suggest a relationship but this can not be confirmed.
Rank: ex-anbu captain, kage level(but not a hokage), jonin
Signature Technique: Lightning Pulse
What it does: Revives anyone dead or not but does not take the life of the user. Note: regarded as a forbidden justu. Hitachi only uses it in desperate times of need
Drawback: Hitachi can not use this technique on herself or she drains almost all of her chakra.
Strongest Technique: Reverse Sharingan(works with Rinnegan or Byakugan but the Sharingan has the best effect)
What it does: lets the opponent use the sharingan
Drawback for the opponent: the opponent most likely tries to use Amaterasu or some other jutsu. Right when the opponent is going to use it on the user it overwhelms him, killing the opponent.
Type: Ninjustu, Genjustu, Taijustu
Clothing: white or black(reverse able) long sleeved shirt tall collar and billowing sleeves, black pants.
Trivia: When Hitachi was in her mother she was tested on to see if she was healthy and something happened. Hitachi's blood was mixed somehow with a test tube's blood letting her have this one of a kind kekkei genkai.
Depending on how fast the kekkei genkai can be copied varies on how old the kekkei genkai is or how old the clan is.
Weight: 100.245

Vermillian
04-26-2009, 12:01 AM
1 Kaien Sasaki
2 The village hidden in the Massacre(blood country)
3. Blood style(bloodline limit), Heavy reliance on Taijutsu
4 Vampiric Resonance- The ability absorb the chakra out of your opponents blood cause your wounds to slightly heal.
5 Blood Bindings Jutsu- Cause your opponents blood to work against them causing there wounded limb much resistance(opponent must have an open wound to control the blood.
Blood spikes- Cause Blood whether it be yours, or your opponents form into needles and strike your Target like Senbon
Bleed out- A sword maneuver in which you relentlessly strike at your opponents extremities to cause them to begin bleeding hence enabling your Blood style.


The Blood style shares many Similarities with water style only you are not able to summon the blood using your chakra like water style. And it's biggest weakness lies in the sheer fact that in order to use it you must cause you or your opponent(most cases) to bleed.

This character uses primarily Taijutsu in order to set up for his Kekkai genkai. He Carries Ninjaku as his primary weapon and a Kusarigama as a back up as well as in battles which require range. On top of these 2 weapons he Carries the normal ninja equipment.

Tell me what you think about this character^_^ I tried to come up with some severe restrictions for the blood style to kinda balance it out.

narutolord37
04-26-2009, 01:35 PM
il help you out
but u wil have 2 send me ur finished story thn :)
tht is if u pick me

1leave the name/ Takami Hyujiro
2leave the village he/she is from/ leaf
3. pick the style jutsu you want them to use/ fire, lightning
4 pick his strongest justu/ combo of the two chakras, Darkness Inferno
5 leave 3 more (not including his strongest) Thundering Assault
Incinerating Star
Spark Volcano

Message me bak with what you think
i would send the story but the site wont let me sry but good characters

Vermillian
04-26-2009, 03:55 PM
il help you out
but u wil have 2 send me ur finished story thn :)
tht is if u pick me

1leave the name/ Takami Hyujiro
2leave the village he/she is from/ leaf
3. pick the style jutsu you want them to use/ fire, lightning
4 pick his strongest justu/ combo of the two chakras, Darkness Inferno
5 leave 3 more (not including his strongest) Thundering Assault
Incinerating Star
Spark Volcano

Message me bak with what you think
i would send the story but the site wont let me sry but good characters

*cough*PM*cough* :) sorry had a lil somethign in my uh... keyboard?

Anime Man
04-28-2009, 11:03 AM
Name:Silent
Village: Village hidden in the volcano
Jutsu style: lighting and fire
Strongest jutsu: Summoing storm of death(a fury of fire and lightning blasts)
Other jutsu: Inferno death, lightning quick strike, enflamed lightning sword

seannfma
04-28-2009, 11:05 AM
Name:Silent
Village: Village hidden in the ground
Jutsu style: Earth
Strongest jutsuj: Earth style summoning Multi serpants of death
Other jutsu: Earth style sphere of graves, Earth style earthquake jutsu, Earth style boulder crush.
nice charecter

Viceroy
04-28-2009, 11:12 AM
1. Bob
2. Village of the Unknown
3. Wind Style
4. Mach 5 Blast
5. Ear Drum Pierce, Raging Wind, Last Resort

perplexing anime
04-28-2009, 04:41 PM
Nature Type: Lighting(main) wind (secondary)
Kekkei Genkai: She can master any jutsu including other kekkei genkai and is the
only one in the world. If their is someone who claims to be the same or in the same clan it is not true because the whole clan was wiped out with only Hitachi the remaining survivor.
Name: Hitachi (girl)
Profile: leaf ninja, konahagakure
She is a drop dead gorgeous ninja. Using her very special kekkei genkei she has mastered the sharingan, rinnegan, byakugan, and dead bone pulse. She graduated the ninja academy when she was 3 years of age. Regarded as the most gifted child of the century, she mastered many techniques. Her whole clan was wiped out when she was only a baby. She was cared by a close family friend, Akemi Sato. Akemi died when Hitachi was 13 years of age making Hitachi an orphan. She was seen alot with Kakashi Hatake in the 2 1/2 year time laps. Walking around toqether, going to movies,and training. People suggest a relationship but this can not be confirmed.
Rank: ex-anbu captain, kage level(but not a hokage), jonin
Signature Technique: Lightning Pulse
What it does: Revives anyone dead or not but does not take the life of the user. Note: regarded as a forbidden justu. Hitachi only uses it in desperate times of need
Drawback: Hitachi can not use this technique on herself or she drains almost all of her chakra.
Strongest Technique: Reverse Sharingan(works with Rinnegan or Byakugan but the Sharingan has the best effect)
What it does: lets the opponent use the sharingan
Drawback for the opponent: the opponent most likely tries to use Amaterasu or some other jutsu. Right when the opponent is going to use it on the user it overwhelms him, killing the opponent.
Type: Ninjustu, Genjustu, Taijustu
Clothing: white or black(reverse able) long sleeved shirt tall collar and billowing sleeves, black pants.
Trivia: When Hitachi was in her mother she was tested on to see if she was healthy and something happened. Hitachi's blood was mixed somehow with a test tube's blood letting her have this one of a kind kekkei genkai.
Depending on how fast the kekkei genkai can be copied varies on how old the kekkei genkai is or how old the clan is.
Weight: 100.245

This is really good, and it reminded me of a character that I was thinking about except there's some differences and yours is wayy more in depth. :)

k+h4ever
04-28-2009, 05:43 PM
um thanks I guess

perplexing anime
04-28-2009, 07:23 PM
um thanks I guess

well I was just trying to be nice... and your thing really was one of the best ones that had been posted. :)

k+h4ever
04-28-2009, 08:07 PM
lol thanks : )

narutolord37
04-29-2009, 04:17 AM
keep them coming 2 months left till slection but i will keep this going for more stories




titile:naruto and the legendrey village of gold


in 10 days i will post the topic of it adn i have seen 2 very good characters who have a good chance

C-C
04-29-2009, 11:51 AM
i thought about this so why not make up your own character (note the names dont have to be japanese)




ok this is why i posted this i write storys and i going to write a naruto story but i need your help to make some characters

instructions
1leave the name
2leave the village he/she is from (make one up if you want)
3. pick the style jutsu you want them to use (make one up if you want for example cable style)
4 pick his strongest justu
5 leave 3 more (not including his strongest)
6 i will choose 4 but i never stop writing so u might not get picked this time but mabye next time

Ok well mind is a girl
I described her on another topic before

Name: Alissa
Age: 16 yrs old
Height: 5"3
Village: (mad up village) Morphic
Style: Fire style, Dark style, Metal Style
Strongest Jutsu: Dark void (puts someone into a nightmare.)
3 more jtusu: Fire style: Fire vortex, Dark style: Chaos, Metal style: protection

surferninja
04-29-2009, 05:49 PM
1. Tusiah Kusah
2. Hidden Leaf Village
3.Nova Style (combo of wind and fire)
4.Summoning: Three headed Inferno Dragon
5. Fiery Hurricane, Thousand Candle Strike, Nova Blast

age; 15
His parents died fighting the nined tailed fox and he ran away from the hidden leaf village thinking that it was the village's fault his parents died. Now apon hearing of the near destruction of the leaf village beacause of limelight he returns and now fights for the greater good of the hiidden leaf village.

KyuubiAkatsuki
05-03-2009, 03:12 AM
Real Name:Ruziki Tensai
Known by:Bloodlust
Village:Village Hidden in the Clouds (Or is it called Village Hidden in Thunder O_o?)
Style:Air, Fire
Strongest Jutsu:Dead Body Snatch Jutsu (Traps victim and himself in a barrier made out of chakra, Ruziki needs to be killed for jutsu to work, when killed his soul comes back from the grave and takes over the body of the victim retaining all original jutsu and element chakra from Ruziki's original body, and getting all of the victim's including kekkegenkai. If used with more than one victim, all abilities gathered in desired user's body and takes over that body.) This jutsu has been used once
Other Jutsu:Wind Pressure Cage Jutsu (traps victim in Air cage, where pressure greatly increases and kills victim), Internal Fire Jutsu (starts fire inside the victim), Hellfire Hurricane Jutsu (rains fire, and hurricanes form destroying everything in sight)
Status:Rogue ninja
Real age:18 New body's age:late 30's
Original body:5ft 6in. with kinda bluish short hair
New body:6ft 1in. with long dark hair that covers eyes and reaches his shoulders
Story:Falsely framed for murder of his family, 13 year old Ruziki leaves his village in search of real murderer. Becoming a rogue ninja, he develops new jutsu. Three years later he finds the murderer. There he fights him, but gets beaten close to death, he uses Dead Body Snatch Jutsu where he takes over the body of the murderer. Cursed with the body of his family's murderer, he stays on his own, and kills randomly. Bloodthirsty and with no conscience now, people give him the name Bloodlust. He is 18 by the time he becomes a B-ranked criminal.

narutolord37
05-05-2009, 05:19 PM
i no its early/ but i going away for awhile so heres the topic


team 7+8 lead by kakashi and yamato to escort three ninja when they ar attacked by five tugs (i am only choosing 4 because i have one)one of them can drain chakra out of the opponet there is a secret bihind the three ninja what is it and whos good and whos eviel

Luna Kobentori
05-05-2009, 05:27 PM
Luna Kobentori

Mine would have blond hair and brown eyes, and hidden mist headband over a blue bandana around her forehead. She would be wearing a light blue strapless top that goes no lower than her belly button and a matching skirt no lower than half way inbetween the knees and the feet. For shoes she would wear leather sandles. Most of the time she carries a bamboo stick that she can transform into a pure moonstone sword as her only weapon, glove on her right hand to hide a curse mark Orochimaru gave her, and sometimes you can see a black flower pendant neckless either around her neck or wrapped around the wrist of her left arm. She doesn't use jistu because her father restricted it at birth but she found her own power which encouaged her to run away from the hidden mist after earning her first head band in secret from Kymiko Sensei.

which was blank


Skin: Light Peach
Height: 6'0''
Weight: 100lb
BDay: June 30
Age Shippuden: 17
Age Akatsuki: 22
Village: Hidden Mist
Element: Water

because she was born a cancer

tentenfanboy1
05-05-2009, 05:30 PM
i thought about this so why not make up your own character (note the names dont have to be japanese)




ok this is why i posted this i write storys and i going to write a naruto story but i need your help to make some characters

instructions
1leave the name
2leave the village he/she is from (make one up if you want)
3. pick the style jutsu you want them to use (make one up if you want for example cable style)
4 pick his strongest justu
5 leave 3 more (not including his strongest)
6 i will choose 4 but i never stop writing so u might not get picked this time but mabye next time

Kitsora
Village hidden in scrolls
Scroll style
Thousand Scroll Million kunai jutsu

KIBAFAN321
05-20-2009, 09:36 PM
If I could make up a character it would be:
1. her name would be Akira
2. She is from the village hidden in the mist
3. water type and ice type jutsus

I think that's all. :|

zerosameri
05-20-2009, 09:53 PM
1- ukki-kun
2- leaf-boy
3- lighting
4- water shock (combo of water and lighting)
5- zero(boy) geko(boy) Noi(girl)

i found this very fun ( well kinda :D )

narutolord37
08-11-2009, 05:07 PM
this is ending in 5 days when i will pike the new characters

itachifan100
08-11-2009, 05:09 PM
ok.....

Sasuke726
08-11-2009, 05:10 PM
wait wat is this thread about

itachifan100
08-11-2009, 05:15 PM
name-Dark Naraku
village-hidden sunset(my village)
jutsu-
dark fireball
lightning orb blast
distructive hell flames
lightning dragon


strongets jutsu-distructive hell flames

formsdemon mode
http://i29.tinypic.com/2rh4bx2.jpg (http://i29.tinypic.com/2rh4bx2.jpg)
normal mode
http://i29.tinypic.com/2akitsl.jpg (http://i29.tinypic.com/2akitsl.jpg)
lycan mode
http://i31.tinypic.com/2wel9i0.jpg (http://i31.tinypic.com/2wel9i0.jpg)

Sasuke726
08-11-2009, 05:16 PM
wat is this thread about

mastershaji
08-20-2009, 07:37 PM
Name:Iraya Saitetchu

Village:hidden in the leaves (Konoha-gakure)

Affilation:Ninja of the leaf village

Mission completed: 209 D-rank mission,103 B-rank missions,100 C-rank missions,87 A-rank missions 23 S-rank missions.

Weight: 48,07 kg

Height:164,0 cm

Favorie food:Tsukomen's and Japanese teas

Least favorite food:Fish (Not tuna) and cury

Blood type:AB

Zodiac sign:Cancer

Born:13 july

Current ninja rank:Saanin

Age:19

Hobby:Training

#Registrated ninja: 203451

Learned just:Kiss aspired chakra,body Transpoltation,Lightning nails, Invocantion giant cyclop,Byatsukiyasha (kekeigenkai eye),Gloomy eyes (Kekeigenkai),Kingjutsu (invented by her clan),twisted body (Gengetsu of her clan)Secret technique:Setokaishi(the opponet riskes his life to destroy an entire place whit 20 km!)

Clan:One of the most popular clan of the leaf just like the Uchiha and the Hyuuga clan:Saitetchu.Experienced in Kingjust,the justu whit technique really powerful and secret.Everyone in that clan MUST have the elment lighting!

Her clothes:Black outfit whit a pink scarf and whit a giant sword like a soul reaper and hair really long whit gloomy purple eyes and a nice nose x) i know! And whit a charming smile!Hair curly and Brown really lighted!Whit a cute skirt red whit a dragon on it and a flower tatoon on her shoulder :)


Hows that x)

mangagirl
08-21-2009, 11:42 AM
read my siggy lolz

kakashi jiriya uzumaki
08-21-2009, 11:49 AM
kakashi jiraiya uzumaki, age:19
village hidden in the leaves
fire, lightning, wind
lightning style, rasen blade
summoning: dragon king/ summoning:indestructable dragon armor/ fire style: flame cage/ metal style: steel cage

SageNaruto
08-21-2009, 11:55 AM
You can see my character here at