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Shkin
07-20-2009, 07:10 PM
an end so unlike the beginning
cried my heart out while i was laughing
flickered and died before my very eyes
cold flame burning fueled by lies
so near yet so beyond my grasp
what i could've kept and made to last

it happened achingly on its own
the way night comes when day is done
____________________________

TO THOSE I NEED NOT NAME
JUST SO YOU'LL KNOW HOW SORRY I AM....

Deaths Revenge
07-21-2009, 06:57 PM
I know its not me youre apologizing, but thats good, keep writing, Id love to see some more stuff.

<Aurega?>
07-22-2009, 04:42 PM
wut is this?

It's a poem....

SRhyse
07-22-2009, 04:44 PM
It's a poem....
No, it's a good poem. There's a difference ;).

Taker369
07-22-2009, 04:47 PM
LOL good one.

ItachiUchiha62
01-13-2011, 11:33 PM
That was really really good, you should write more :). I can feel the emotion of that poem :).

Err
01-13-2011, 11:35 PM
That was really really good, you should write more :). I can feel the emotion of that poem :).

That's because shkin wrote it.