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Jakropha
08-29-2012, 08:43 PM
Flashback

Obito: Shisui??

Shisui: Soon, you will learn your true potential, as the next in line of the Tobi heirarchy! The Pinnacle of the Uchiha! The line of blood that started with our grandfather Madara Uchiha!

Obito: How are you using Kamui?? Is that right eye of yours Fathers?

Shisui: Yes, he understands our family's plight as well as I do... That's why he gave me this eye... I can use Kotoamatsukami in my left eye, which the recovery is lessened with my recent Senju implant, and use Kamui in my right... it is mine after all, just passed down a generation, it's getting kind of old... this might be it's last night, but I'm not worrying about that now.

Obito: This is all happening too fast...

Obito's Sharingan flutters around.
Shisui's eyes widen.
Rin screams out to Kakashi in one sudden plea for help!
Kakashi confronts the Redsashed man.

Kakashi: RIN?!
Redsash: Hahaha!!

The Redsash man drops something and then kills himself through Seppuko.
It is merely a document, a note signed by Danzo.

Kakashi: This note... Danzo is working with Orochimaru!

A explosive tag is thrown out of nowhere, and the note is burned in the explosion.

Kakashi: I have to get back and save Rin!

Rin breaths her second to last breath.
Kakashi appears to see her die wording "I Love..."
Kakashi starts to tear up... but the Mangekyo doesn't appear...

Shisui: Damn, the White Fang's failure of a child failed to obtain the Mangekyo... which means that he didn't have much feeling toward her at all. How does that make you feel brother?

Obito has obtained the Mangekyo Sharingan and he takes the Bandages off.

Obito: Angry!!!

Shisui: Good... now we must go, I have to implant this eye in yours, replacing everything around and such, soon we will have a rotatable Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan capable of using Kamui!

Obito: .....

Shisui places his mask on, and Obito places his on as well...
Kakashi brings Rin's body back to the leaf village.

Other events take place, Obito is seen silently killing off Jonin ninja, while the Kyubi is rampaging the village, he kills Iruka's parents, smirking as their blood drips to the stone foundation of a burning home.
He slaughters 10s of Uchiha, all while staying away from Itachi's sight.

He see's Sasuke run toward Itachi

Obito: Pitiful child... I would make you my next victim... but I see the resolve in your eyes! The resolve of the next Tobi!

Itachi glances toward Obito

Itachi in thought: That bastard had better not touch him!

Obito warps away...

Itachi in thought: What I had to do... even worse is I had to help him...

Shisui is without both of his eyes, Itachi is walking away, and Shisui falls into the waters below...
Obito is there, and he places his Tobi mask back on.

Tobi: There truly was no regret in that mans life, but in his death... he had to lie through the teeth to keep the idea alive...

Nagato: Do you think the other Uchiha noticed?

Tobi: No, he only saw what he wanted to see...

Tobi has two Mangekyo, one appears to be normal, and the other appears to be different, Eternal Mangekyo.

Nagato: What is your next plan, do we kill that sloth Danzo?

Tobi: That pleasure will be all mine... My plan will succeed without fail if I get Shisui's Sharingan from him, but without a doubt he will protect himself, even if he thinks the masked man is dead... no Danzo, he still lives on...

Danzo is in a surgery room

Danzo: Orochimaru... are you sure Shisui was the man Itachi talked about.

Orochimaru: Certain, there is nobody else it could be... Soon a new leader inside Akatsuki will need to arise, I will take Itachi's Sharingan with your help, and assume the leadership role! That fool Pain won't know what hit him!

Danzo: Pain is going to win, he has the Rinnegan, but I want the Rinnegan for myself you know...

Tobi is seen on top of the Madara Statue in the Valley of The End.

Obito: And here is where my idea will start... just a simple Idea, with a complicated loose end... the brat Naruto is where it will all be focused around... and his sadistic rival...

601 end

Jakropha
08-30-2012, 08:52 AM
>.>

I still think there are plenty of holes within this...

One of which is, it was very difficult to actually make another person viable to have tamed the 9 Tails, while retaining a warping ability, as Obito STILL would not fit this position, while leaving Obito to kill Uchiha would have been an easy Retcon.
As for Obito killing Rin and Kakashi failing to save her is sort of like Star Wars three, where Anakin is truly at fault, and yet the loser still blames Obi Wan, the never failing god of the star wars verse.
Everything started too fall apart on where I had to hinge the idea of Tobi, Madara has to have Kamui too... or this isn't possible.
Shisui has to have easy recharge Kotoamatsukami.
And Obito should have known Nagato as Shisui/Tobi were training him, making Tobi the longest lasting Secret in the Naruto world. A secret Danzo thought would have died, making him extra cautious around him. And Itachi knowing him, would die with many more secrets he never told Sasuke. If I were Itachi at least warn him of Tobi?
What I really want is for Kishi to pull the best explanation out of his butt.