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mrsticky005
08-24-2012, 07:34 PM
This Prediction is dedicated to Bratchipheo and all you Tobitos.
I hardly mean to make it seem as if I'm claiming to be a Tobito.
I'm not. Though Tobito is very likely. However I wanted to see
if I could make this somehow not incredibly lame as I expect it will be.

Zero, don't go start any flame wars :lol:

Anywho...

Naruto 599: Under The Mask

Naruto: GOT YOU, YOU MASKED COWARD!

KABOOM!!

It takes a few moments for the smoke to clear

Naruto: Now you can't hide behind that stupid mask anymore

Tobi is covering his broken mask and face with his hand.

Kakashi and Guy:...

Tobi (thought): Might as well...

Tobi: Naruto, do you think people truly change? Do you think your so called friend Sasuke has changed into the monster of hate he is now...

Naruto: ...

Tobi takes off the mask but the reader doesn't see

Tobi: Or do you think that perhaps your initial impression that Sasuke was ever really your friend or had even the slightest spark of good was just... misled?

Naruto: What does it matter? I'll save Sasuke one way or another.

Tobi: Yes. Just like how I was saved. Isn't that right...Kakashi?

Kakashi: ...I'm sorry...I'm sorry you've turned out this way, Obito.

Tobi: Obito? No. As I told Naruto before...I'm nobody. Obito doesn't exist.
He never has and he never will. There's only no one. I'm nobody.

Kakashi: You loved Rin. But I couldn't protect her. This is for her, right?

Tobi: ...


The scene changes to Madara fighting the Kage.
Madara stops fighting when he sees Sasuke

Madara: Who are you?

Sasuke: ...

In a quick flash Madara is about to attack Sasuke...but stops

Madara: You show not an ounce of fear. Commendable.

Sasuke: I don't need some fossil praising me. I just want answers.

Orochimaru (thought): As arrogant as always

Madara: I've slaughtered children half your age. What makes you think I won't do worse to you?

Sasuke: Simple. Because you can't

Suigetsu (thought): He had to say it.

Madara: Hmph. Fool.

Orochimaru: Run you fools! Before he kills us all!

Orochimaru, Suigetsu, and Jugo run for cover as Madara attacks
Sasuke with all his Sussano.

The dust settles.

Sasuke is unharmed

Madara: How is that even possible?

Sasuke: Answer my questions and maybe I'll tell you.

Madara: ...Very well. What do you want to know?

Orochimaru (thought) I wonder what he wishes to ask Madara Uchiha?

Suigetsu: I just hope he doesn't piss him off again.

Jugo: I think Sasuke will be ok.

Suigetsu: I wasn't exactly worrying about Sasuke.

Sasuke: Did you slaughter the Uchiha Clan?

Madara: Like sheep

Sasuke: ...Then what about the Nine Tails attack on the Leaf?

Madara: I only wish I could take credit for that. That was the work of the masked man. The one you call "Tobi" and was masquerading as myself.

Sasuke: You know who he is. Don't you? Who is he? Who is Tobi?

Madara: He's nobody.

Sasuke: I didn't come here to play word games.

Madara: I never said I was. Let me tell you the story of how I met a young man just a few years younger than yourself. Of how I met...Nobody.

Sasuke: Make it quick.

Madara: I don't know how he found me. But this tattered young man who looked as if he was moments from death itself was standing before me.
Staring right into his darkened eyes I asked him "Why do you keep going?"
Without blinking he replied "Why the hell should I stop?"

Sasuke: That was Tobi, wasn't it? Who is he?

Madara: That was my next question. Yet he didn't know. He didn't know who he was. He didn't know where he was. He didn't know anything
about himself. He didn't even know what he wanted to do. All he knew
was he didn't want to stop. He knew he had to do something.

Sasuke: I thought I said to make it quick.

Madara: Later we found his grave stone. He was a leaf ninja. I asked the young man why there was a grave stone there but yet no body?
It took him a while but then he remembered "We were at war.
They thought I died in enemy land." It made sense but then I asked
"Do you know the war is over? Why haven't they looked for you now?"
He had no answer. Then I asked him "Do you know who I am?" Again
he had no answer. He knew I was Uchiha but that was it. I told him
that I was the great Madara Uchiha. He didn't know who that was.
Then he asked "If you're so great. Then why aren't you talked about?"
I told him "Because they want to forget me. They want to forget you."
We are Uchiha. But for the Senju all that meant was we were just
another footstool. Once we were great. But now we mattered as
much as a stray dog--no less than that. Even our fellow clan members
betrayed us for the mere hope for peace. We, Uchiha are nobody, Sasuke.

Sasuke: ...


The scene changes back to Tobi talking to Kakashi

Tobi: For Rin?...

Tobi: HAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHA! What!? You think this is some revenge plot for some dumb useless wench!? How incredibly naive of you, Kakashi!

Kakashi: Then why are you doing this, Obito?

Tobi: I told you before. I'm not Obito. I'm nobody! Obito is what everyone called me. But deep down inside they knew who I really was. They knew I was nobody. They knew I was someone who didn't really matter at all.

I didn't matter to my parents. I was nobody but a disappointment to them. I didn't matter to the clan. I was nobody but a talentless Uchiha I didn't matter to Konoha. I was nobody but another one of their pawns. I didn't matter to Rin. I was nobody worth loving. I didn't matter to Sensei. I was nobody but a hassle. I didn't matter to you. I was nobody but a spare sharingan for you to take. I didn't matter to anyone. Like I said I'm nobody!

And because I'm nobody...I don't need anybody else!!

TRUE KAMUI!!

The End of 599

LilHinataGirl
08-24-2012, 07:41 PM
You made me freak out over this Sticky :lol:
I'm like: NOT that way HAHA!!
and isn't Kakashi unconcious ??

But I like your Madara and Sasuke discussion :p

megabbaut
08-24-2012, 07:43 PM
Good chapter idea though it'll piss off the anti-Obito fans.

mrsticky005
08-24-2012, 08:03 PM
Good chapter idea though it'll piss off the anti-Obito fans.

I'm anti-Obito=Tobi, you know?

It's more about HOW then the what.

Naruto321
08-24-2012, 08:21 PM
Hmm. So what are you really trying to say?

mrsticky005
08-24-2012, 08:52 PM
Hmm. So what are you really trying to say?

What I'm trying to say is that I don't particularly like Tobi=Obito
but I'm hoping Kishimoto can somehow make it work. However he's
gonna have to break the mold to do that.

So I was trying to write an interesting chapter 599 with Tobi=Obito in mind.

The difficulty however is there's a lot I wanted to say for a single chapter.

Naruto321
08-24-2012, 08:54 PM
So your hoping that what you wrote that Tobi is not Obito?

NaruSaku ShikaIno
08-24-2012, 08:57 PM
great story, its almost like Kishi story.
I think Tobi is Obito to!

Devils Lawyer
08-24-2012, 09:40 PM
Obito being Tobi is a boring over done manga cliche. Rin would be way more interesting.

Godaime Kazekage
08-24-2012, 09:57 PM
Not bad, but way too much info. for one chapter. If this were to be how things played out I can see 599 ending with the Madara saying: "let me tell you how I met Nobody."
Other Notes: I don't think Sasuke and Co. are going to meet Madara-they're going to Konoha. Madara slaughtering children would be OOC. I don't think Sasuke would act so arrogantly towards Madara in light of recent events. I still think/hope Tobi isn't Obito too.

BoxHead
08-24-2012, 10:01 PM
As great and thought out as this Tobito prediction is. I'd prefer a new character named Nobody Uchiha over Obito :lol:

lolohwd
08-24-2012, 11:18 PM
So......when the hell did madara die finally? cause if he slaughtered the uchiha clan......when was he slaughtered himself?

mrsticky005
08-24-2012, 11:48 PM
So your hoping that what you wrote that Tobi is not Obito?

I'm hoping Kishimoto can make Tobi's reveal not suck is what I'm hoping.
From the last few chapters it seems 99% likely it's Obito. I actually
rather it not be but if it is I hope Kishimoto can somehow make it work.

great story, its almost like Kishi story.
I think Tobi is Obito to!

Thanks but I hope you're not just liking it because I had Tobi as Obito here. The point here is NOT to make a prediction of Tobi being Obito.
Trust me, I've been one of the biggest opponents to that theory.
But rather to try and make Tobi being Obito somewhat interesting.

Obito being Tobi is a boring over done manga cliche. Rin would be way more interesting.

I agree. But given that's it's probably going to be Obito I wanted
to try and play with that info and attempt to make an interesting
prediction chapter.

Not bad, but way too much info. for one chapter. If this were to be how things played out I can see 599 ending with the Madara saying: "let me tell you how I met Nobody."
Other Notes: I don't think Sasuke and Co. are going to meet Madara-they're going to Konoha. Madara slaughtering children would be OOC. I don't think Sasuke would act so arrogantly towards Madara in light of recent events. I still think/hope Tobi isn't Obito too.

Yeah but like I said there was a lot I wanted to say.
I actually do think Sasuke will meet Madara and will talk to him.
Eh, I could see Madara slaughtering children. Sasuke acts
arrogant towards everyone so I don't see Madara being
any different.

As great and thought out as this Tobito prediction is. I'd prefer a new character named Nobody Uchiha over Obito :lol:

Well at least we have Obito thinking he's nobody here.


So......when the hell did madara die finally? cause if he slaughtered the uchiha clan......when was he slaughtered himself?

That will be for Chapter 600 Prediction :)

LilHinataGirl
08-25-2012, 10:41 AM
Obito being Tobi is a boring over done manga cliche. Rin would be way more interesting.
I said that before in a thread :lol:
I said it be funny if Rin was Tobi trololol

mrsticky005
08-25-2012, 10:44 AM
I said that before in a thread :lol:
I said it be funny if Rin was Tobi trololol

Siiiiiiiiigh

How many times do I have to say.
The point of the prediction IS NOT Tobi being Obito.

It's HOW that and WHY that would happen.

Please focus on that instead.

Kakashi11
08-25-2012, 11:53 AM
Really good story
Only criticism is the Sasuke and Madara scene, it sort of annoyed me how Sasuke was so arrogant and Orochimaru was running away, sort of wished Madara would of pwned Sasuke

mrsticky005
08-25-2012, 12:07 PM
Really good story
Only criticism is the Sasuke and Madara scene, it sort of annoyed me how Sasuke was so arrogant and Orochimaru was running away, sort of wished Madara would of pwned Sasuke

I was trying to move the plot along so that's why it's like that.
This would probably actually be several chapters long.

Jonesy
08-25-2012, 02:34 PM
I enjoyed reading this prediction. `:) Kishi could take a few pointers from you.

Kyūbi no Yōko
08-26-2012, 01:48 AM
Much better than Kishi (the Kishi of these chapters).

Pretty nice, it's really good writing, good story and I loved the part about the Uchiha being nobody.

Hando Craap
08-26-2012, 04:11 PM
I am actually thinking Sasuke's scroll that Suigetsu found may be a Rise of the Uchiharesurrection instruction scroll.He will use it to well resurrect some if not all the Uchiha and ask them !??!

But youR story idea sounds better,plus who wants to see more zombies unless they're chasing everybody screaming brains,Brains,BRAINS

slyfoxx
08-26-2012, 04:34 PM
"WENCH" Classic sticky when will the epic return of sai shaft happen the goodside is losing we need our hero

mrsticky005
08-26-2012, 07:58 PM
I am actually thinking Sasuke's scroll that Suigetsu found may be a Rise of the Uchiharesurrection instruction scroll.He will use it to well resurrect some if not all the Uchiha and ask them !??!

But youR story idea sounds better,plus who wants to see more zombies unless they're chasing everybody screaming brains,Brains,BRAINS

You know what could make that cool?

If the scroll required Sasuke to murder in order to resurrect his family.

So if Naruto says "killing Konoha won't bring back your family"

Naruto will be dead wrong.

Kenshin Sarutobi
08-29-2012, 12:14 AM
Re: Naruto 599 Prediction: The man behind the mask

heres my prediction

After naruto cracked tobis mask tobi goes stumbling backwards soon after regaining his balance and holding the cracked mask on his face

Naruto- now its finally time to see who you are

Tobi- i guess at this point it doesn't matter

Tobi lets his cracked mask fall off

Naruto- i guess you were a coward after all , i dont even recognize your face

Tobi- like i said i am nobody, i dont expect you to kno who i am

Kakashi looks closer at his face


Kakashi- wait a second, that face it looks familiar... i kno who you are

Tobi-hmm kakashi you continue to surprise me

Might Gai- kakashi are you sure? i dont recognize him at all

Kakashi- i remember back when i always would report to the third hokage, there was a photo on the wall it was the thirds old squad photos, that guy is one of them

Kakashi- hes...... Uchiha Kagami

Tobi- that may have been my name years ago, years before i came up with the perfect plan to acquire ultimate peace

Naruto- but to had been a fellow team member of old man hokage you'd have to be at least 70 years old

Tobi- you have no idea the research and procedures i have went thru to sustain a fully active body, even tho i am still but a shell of my former self

Naruto- so u mean to tell me for all this time youve been planning how to obtain fake peace?!?

Tobi- you have no idea what real war is like, just how deep evil can go i was there...., i watched my sensei the second hokage die, murdered right infront of me, and all i did was hide in the woods, like a nobody, a weakling incapable
of protecting him which i cared for the most..

Naruto- so what is this, some time of revenge against the world for the lost of your sensei? doing that will only continue the cycle of hate

Tobi- not revenge... purification... i will end the cycle of hate today

Tobi- i took on the name tobi as in honor of my sensei tobirama

Tobi activates his never before seen mangekyo



Tobi- as the 2nd hokage was near death i went out to him when the ninjas that killed him had left. He may have left the title of Hokage to hiruzen sarutobi but the last words of the 2nd where to me

Tobi- Kagami, show the wolrd peace

End of chapter 599

Crystal Marionette
08-29-2012, 02:35 AM
Oooh, I liked it!

Also this (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EUChACHgOiM). The title reminded me of this