View Full Version : Cade's FanFiction:One Night It Happened

07-17-2009, 05:35 PM
Grammar sometimes may be kinda bad so bear with me.

One night Ramon was coming out of the front door of a convenice store.He brought a couple of drinks for him.Down the dark shadowy street was a group of people wearing black leather jackets with a skull emblem on the back.They was known as the Skullheads,the neighborhood's most notorious gang.When Ramon first saw them he was shocked.He knew he had to move fast.Ramon turned around and walked the other way,but it was too late."Hey who that guy down there think he is",one of the members said.Ramon started to run.He heart was pumping with adrenaline.He ran fast as he could.He could'nt look back now.He heard footsteps getting closer.Suddently,Ramon tripped over a rock and fell down.The Skullheads circled around him."Were gonna kick your @$$ real good",one of the members said.They were holding bats in there hands.Ramon tried to escaped,but before he knew it,he got whacked in the head by a baseball bat.The Skullheads contuined to whack and pound on him.Ramon was beat unconcious.The police arrived five mintues later.The Skullheads scatttered and fleed away from the scene.Later a ambulance came.Ramon was wheeled and carried on a strecher.He was bleeding from his nose,and his lips were busted.He has a big knot on his forehead.One night it happened.

Vatanui AKA Pride
07-17-2009, 06:16 PM

Um...am I allowed to leave a comment here?

07-18-2009, 11:35 AM
Yes you can.