Afterlife Discussion Thread

[BoxHead]

Discuss Afterlife here.

[Schnarf]

Thank you.

[joon61]

sure.

[zombie ruler]

So this means no more random nonsense in the Afterlife thread and it will most likely be just chapter after chapter?

[joon61]

yeah.
i will go tell logan that i made this.

[joon61]

i also suggest that everyone removes their posts from the afterlife thread.
all in favor say aye.

[BoxHead]

No need. I have links, but just don't comment anymore on afterlife. Also, can I run this thread please?

[loganace]

That sounds perfect. Also I bet this thread will stray so far that It will be more of a random chat thread.

[BoxHead]

That sounds perfect. Also I bet this thread will stray so far that It will be more of a random chat thread.
This^

Anyways, time for a group debate... Who would win? Giovanna vs Akio?!

[loganace]

/crackes nuckles.
/thinks.

I would have to say Akio. Giovanna has a very aggresive fighting style herself, But akio is a little bit more aggresive. She is lacking in the defense department. So is akio. But Akio would hammer her constantly with attacks. The only thing she would be able to do is get back and activate her form two. I would say Giovanna if he didn't activate it but he would. It would be close range hell with far range attacks. I would normally say Giovanna but he could teloport right to her. Whereas she has no wat to keep him at far range. After he teloports at her from behind it is over. If she could predict him he could go to the other side the second she turns around. They are equally powerful but Akio has the slight edge. It would be one awesome battle.

[BoxHead]

Whoo, that's good. Now I wanna see zombie defend her character.

[loganace]

so do I. I want to see what Zombie will say. I accually believe Zombies character is stronger. But wouldn't do well in close range with a gun. She would win if I couldn't attack her and get to her so fast with the teloportation. But I have thought of ways for her to defend herself from that...

[BoxHead]

Honestly, if it weren't for Hayden's air phasing, then he would have lost the duel.

[joon61]

No need. I have links, but just don't comment anymore on afterlife. Also, can I run this thread please?
sure.

[loganace]

Honestly, if it weren't for Hayden's air phasing, then he would have lost the duel.
That is true. You said Hayden was going to get a weakness sone is that still going to happen?

[BoxHead]

That is true. You said Hayden was going to get a weakness sone is that still going to happen?
Well, he can't control phasing by will. It's like the time-slowing. It only happens on the verge of death.

It's hard to come up with a weakness for air.

[loganace]

you can make it so his form two has a short time it can be active.

[BoxHead]

Yes, bu there has to be a weakness to intangibility, because he's gonna learn how to conrol it, along with spirit energy soon.

[loganace]

if he can't use it very long it will be a weakness. Also will you implement the new character I sent you?

[BoxHead]

...nevermind.

[loganace]

are you going to implement the other character I sent you?

[BoxHead]

...maybe. I might just implement the 2nd form.

[loganace]

Good enough for me.

[BoxHead]

Good enough for me.

Start ye fanfic!

[BoxHead]

I'll dish out at least 2 chapters each week. I'll post a tier list once I'm done with book one.

[loganace]

Start ye fanfic!
I can't for a while. I might also change what it's about.

[loganace]

I'll dish out at least 2 chapters each week. I'll post a tier list once I'm done with book one.
how many more chapters do you have left in book 1?

[zombie ruler]

This^

Anyways, time for a group debate... Who would win? Giovanna vs Akio?!

/crackes nuckles.
/thinks.

I would have to say Akio. Giovanna has a very aggresive fighting style herself, But akio is a little bit more aggresive. She is lacking in the defense department. So is akio. But Akio would hammer her constantly with attacks. The only thing she would be able to do is get back and activate her form two. I would say Giovanna if he didn't activate it but he would. It would be close range hell with far range attacks. I would normally say Giovanna but he could teloport right to her. Whereas she has no wat to keep him at far range. After he teloports at her from behind it is over. If she could predict him he could go to the other side the second she turns around. They are equally powerful but Akio has the slight edge. It would be one awesome battle.

*rubs my head thinking*

Like Logan said defend wise Giovanna and Akio are pretty much on par with each other and yes Akio has the speed advantage can could close the distance between them pretty quickly once he activates his second form. Now even though Gio's second form is a ranged physical I would figure that she could use all ranges that would include close range. Now I have a reason to believe that she can use all ranges because in one chapter Box wrote she used a shotgun and from what I know shotguns are usually a close to mid range weapon and that it is usually more potent when use at a shorter range. Now assuming what I said is true than it would safe to assume that she could create a few close range weapons like maybe twin pistols or something. Now again, assuming everything I said is true and she did create a duel close range weapon then if Akio activated his second form and teleports behind Gio and she did predict where he would be, he would teleport behind her again but with the twin short range weapon she wouldn't need to turn completely to counter.

Then again I could be completely wrong and then it throws everything I said out the window and Logan can be right. `:|

[loganace]

*rubs my head thinking*

Like Logan said defend wise Giovanna and Akio are pretty much on par with each other and yes Akio has the speed advantage can could close the distance between them pretty quickly once he activates his second form. Now even though Gio's second form is a ranged physical I would figure that she could use all ranges that would include close range. Now I have a reason to believe that she can use all ranges because in one chapter Box wrote she used a shotgun and from what I know shotguns are usually a close to mid range weapon and that it is usually more potent when use at a shorter range. Now assuming what I said is true than it would safe to assume that she could create a few close range weapons like maybe twin pistols or something. Now again, assuming everything I said is true and she did create a duel close range weapon then if Akio activated his second form and teleports behind Gio and she did predict where he would be, he would teleport behind her again but with the twin short range weapon she wouldn't need to turn completely to counter.

Then again I could be completely wrong and then it throws everything I said out the window and Logan can be right. `:|
I think everything you said is true. But the part where you win. If you were to try to shoot me I would still be able to get away. But I would have no chance hitting her. I would teleport around until Gio runs out of energy and her form 2 deactivates. Do I need to say more? It would be over.

[BoxHead]

I think everything you said is true. But the part where you win. If you were to try to shoot me I would still be able to get away. But I would have no chance hitting her. I would teleport around until Gio runs out of energy and her form 2 deactivates. Do I need to say more? It would be over.
...Until she fires a missile, interrupting his focus, leaving him open to fire :lol: I'm just sayin'

Anyways, I've been feeling like crap and can't sleep. Guess what time I hit the hay last night? Funny, because I didn't.

[loganace]

...Until she fires a missile, interrupting his focus, leaving him open to fire :lol: I'm just sayin'

Anyways, I've been feeling like crap and can't sleep. Guess what time I hit the hay last night? Funny, because I didn't.
I hope you can sleep now!

She could try. But he would get out of the way before the Missile gets to him. Therefore she would just waist her energy.

[zombie ruler]

Hey Gio may be a reckless lady but I think she could be smart enough to find a way to beat Akio or at least stretch the fight out to get a draw

[loganace]

it is never stated that Akio has an energy limit of his teloports. So he could even hide if he needed to regenerate energy. He can teloport far away and rest till Gio finds him.

[BoxHead]

it is never stated that Akio has an energy limit of his teloports. So he could even hide if he needed to regenerate energy. He can teloport far away and rest till Gio finds him.
He'll have a weakness...

[loganace]

he dosen't yet.

[loganace]

When will the next chapter come put daddy box????/

[BoxHead]

I need motivation.

[joon61]

you might get payed for making an awesome novel.
how's that?
also i am going to bump the afterlife thread.is that ok with you box?

[loganace]

It'll be bumped when box ets his motovation back. Think about this. All your die-hard fans will be so happy and like you all the more. And you'll posibily get rich from this!

[BoxHead]

Dude, I'm not even 18, plus I doubt a book like this may make me some dough, but whatever.

[loganace]

What we'rsaying is you can eventually publiit when you are 18. I would buy it......... I would buy youseries if it is a series. Even if it is 7 or more books long.

[BoxHead]

What we'rsaying is you can eventually publiit when you are 18. I would buy it......... I would buy youseries if it is a series. Even if it is 7 or more books long.
Planning 6, but okay.

[loganace]

As the BD going to be the main problem in each of them.

[BoxHead]

No, book 2 has them as a side villain, and book 3 barely includes them at all.

[loganace]

Okay.

[joon61]

bump.

[loganace]

I want a new chapter Daddy Box!

[BoxHead]

I have gotten every last thing planned out.

[loganace]

Are you going to implement that character I gave you?

[BoxHead]

Not this book.

[joon61]

do you want to finish that fight box or do you just want to stop it?

[BoxHead]

Yeah, it's fine. I'm kinda done.

[BoxHead]

Hey guys! I have a shameless plugin today!

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[loganace]

Me read it!

[loganace]

Not this book.
In a different book?

[BoxHead]

In a different book?
Next book in the series.

[loganace]

YAAAAAAY! Is this one almost over?

[BoxHead]

Yeah, fights left:

Hayden vs. Schmidt

Thomas, Chase, and Roy vs. Schmidt and Dazzling Umbra
Thomas vs Schmidt
Hayden vs Memories

[loganace]

Cool. I am guessing, six chapters.:geek:

[joon61]

Box,why you no continue this?

[BoxHead]

I'll most likely rewrite the series, if anything.

[joon61]

But it was already so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*Whines*

[BoxHead]

It'll be better >.>

[joon61]

k. I hope so. *whines some mor*

[joon61]

*Erases the old afterlife out of my head.*

[loganace]

Are all the characters we submitted before gonna still be in here, or complete reboot, new characters and stuff like that.?

[BoxHead]

Depends on character. Your character will still stay.

[Noctis Arashi]

What's this about characters? D:

[BoxHead]

I don't remember. Did you submit one? :lol:

[Noctis Arashi]

No? I don't think so.

[BoxHead]

Otey den.

//finished a whole day's work of projects
//pokerman timez

[loganace]

When Box started writing afterlife he let us submit characters.

[BoxHead]

FInally dished out chapter 1.

[Maikeru D. Shinigami]

I like this first chapter more than your other one.

[BoxHead]

Yes, I do too.

Also, I fogot to lock the thread, so I will move the posts now.

*swish*

[Shisko Shi]

talk about it? Well I think stay on earth as a ghost so I can scare people haha.

[BoxHead]

We mean this: http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showthread.php?t=123463

[takuya]

I want more!

[joon61]

I was in to this. It's much better than the other 1st chapter. I also like how alex and alice's relationship accelerated.

[BoxHead]

Yeah, I have TONS of new plans. The chapters will all be long like the 1st one, but probably not quite as long.

[joon61]

Etheir way,it's ok.

[BoxHead]

I spent like 4 hours striaght writing last night e.e

[joon61]

Wow. I have points in my storys. I just wing it on how the story reaches that point.
You should get more sleep.

[BoxHead]

Sleep is for the weak. That's why I stayed up until 6.

[joon61]

Is your timeline the same as mine cause right now,it's 3:39.

[BoxHead]

6 AM this morning.

[joon61]

Wow. I have never done that before. But sometimes i can't sleep and end up falling to sleep at about 12 or 2.

[BoxHead]

Okeay. Finally done after working on it periodically.

[takuya]

Good chapter. NOW GIVE US MOAR, YOU HOAR!

[joon61]

Awesome chapter. I can't wait until the next one.

[BoxHead]

lolreally?

Also, I want you guys to come up with some uberhax ideas of powers.

[takuya]

One Thousand Years of Death (Reaper Style)? It is a reaper's super powered butt poke which spells instant death.

[joon61]

lolreally?

Also, I want you guys to come up with some uberhax ideas of powers.
Yep.


Time manipulaton
Hellfire
Absolute hypnosis
Unbreakable metal
Math manipulation(PM me about this one. It's a doozy.)

[loganace]

You want some hax powers? Well, Joon got some of them down.

genetic manipulation
temporal rifts in the space time continuum
Super unbreakable armor
Soul manipulation
ect...

[joon61]

God powers. XD

[loganace]

Atom manipulation
Slicing at a molecular level
SUPER STREEEENGTH OVER 90000!!!

[joon61]

Manipulation. Nuff said.

[Maikeru D. Shinigami]

Intriguing.

Here's a hax power. Controlling dark matter. The universe doesn't move you, you move the universe.

[loganace]

That, time manipulation, and atom manipulation are pretty much the most hax powers altogether,

[Maikeru D. Shinigami]

I got the idea by watching Futurama.

[loganace]

Nice. Maik, Would you be interested in making a character for the story I am writing?

[Maikeru D. Shinigami]

Not at all.

[BoxHead]

Man, I need to get back to this :lol:

I think I'll continue writing now.

[joon61]

Yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[BoxHead]

New-ish character coming in. Only thing that he shares with an old character is sort of the style of a level 2 scythe and name.

[joon61]

Awesome! I can't wait!

[BoxHead]

A few pages written up and posted. I'm back.

[BoxHead]

Did anyone actually read this? :lol:

[joon61]

I did. Logan did.
I don't know anybody else who did. I have not read the chapter you just posted yet but I will soon. Then I'll give you my thoughts on it. ^_^