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A Story I came up with and thought I'd share.
This first post will contain what this Story will be about and I'll continue with the first chapter in a lil' bit.
Little Summary of what its going to be about:
Cecil is a boy with major troubles in his life, bad grades,no friends and his Family is in shambles due to his Parents getting divorced.
One day though it all goes too much into his Head and he decides to ends his Life by hanging himself.
As he does that indeed and his life fades he finds himself in dark space where a demongirl called Jill seems to have been waiting for him, knowing his situation.
She offers Cecil a deal to change his life but in return she wants a price.
That being a daily sacrifice of her own choosing.
In despair Cecil accepts and awakes again.
On his next schoolday his Class receives a Transfer Student that being Jill.
Cecil awaits a new life for price however things soon get out of hand...
I'll begin the story tomorrow.:)
To demonstrate what the Characters look like I looked up some Images:
01-10-2012, 03:14 PM
Awesome. I'm excited. =] /Subscribes
01-10-2012, 03:15 PM
The Story of a boy who wishes for nothing more than a little happiness begins with another usual day for him, inside his Classroom where destiny takes its usual turn.
Chatter fills the entire class as usual as does the life of Cecil Jones.
With an empty look in his Eyes he glares out the Window until another daily routine takes place.
A slam on his desk seems to have awakened Cecil and a group of Boys began to talk to him.
???: Sup' Loser?I hope you know what day today is!
Cecil: Gary....yeah, I know.
Cecil: "After school ends meet us behind the Gym?"
Gary: Good Boy.You know your place.Just like the ;););););) you are.You give an order, and the dog obeys.Hahaha!
Gary: Cat got the dog's tongue?
Cecil: I got other worries than let myself get loosen on Money.
???: Your Parents huh?
Gary: I am sure Mark just asked you a question.
Mark: It's grand.It's not like we don't know already.I mean his Mother is pretty much the town's Mattress.
As he said this Mark let off a cocky grin on his Face.
Gary: HAHAHAHA!! Think she'll let us have a round!?
Mark and Gary: ?
Cecil: I said Shut up!!
As Cecil yelled out the entire Class turned silent.
It wasn't because someone yelled or what he said.
But WHO he said it to.
Everybody in school knows, you don't mess with Mark and Gary.Especially not Mark.
His entire appearance was that of a fragile,intelligent, quite and handsome Teenager but he has a tremendous Aura around him that shakes fear in Peoples hearts despite his looks.
He is just a typical Muscles.No brains just brawns.
Though they are a formidable duo terrorizing the school with their combination of Mark's Intellect and Gary's Muscle.
Gary: What did you just say, you little ;););););)?
Cecil immediately swallowed his words and his entire body was shaking in fear.
Mark: Calm it, Gary.Don't forget he is NOTHING.
Gary: ....HAHA! True that.
Mark: Now, Cecil if you excuse us.We got other matters to take care of.
Gary: Places to bust...
Mark: People to terrorize.
As the two left Cecils Eyes turned teary as he began to hear a warm girls voice.
???: My,My you really are useless huh?
Cecil looked around to see who just talked to him though he didn't notice anyone who did.
Who should anyway?
He is a signified Loser in school with noone to talk to him anyway.
He began to think:
Cecil: Am I losing it now...?
Hours later the schoolbell rang and Cecil made his way to the Gym, going sure noone saw him.
Why he didn't want anybody to see is something he doesn't know himself.
Firstly because noone dares getting in the way of Mark and Gary.
Secondly: Noone would help him anyway considering his Status.
Though to his surprise it was only Mark waiting for him and that wasn't the only surprise.
Mark: Ah, good to see you...Cecil.
The Situation was completely awkward.Mark and Gary seperated was a rare occasion.And Marks voice had a different tune to him than usual.
Mark: What's wrong?You look like you saw a Ghost.
Cecil: W..Whats going on?
Mark: Gary had some....business to take care of.
Mark: He, none of your business really.Now, you know the drill.The Money.
Cecil: Uh..yeah.Here 50 Bucks.
Mark: Good Boy.That ensures you another Day we won't beat you down.
Cecil: C-Can I go now?
Mark: Oh.yeah.You may.
Cecil turned his back on Mark thus not seeing the big grin on his Face.As he began to walk away:
Mark: Oh by the way Cecil...
Mark: From tomorrow on I demand 75 Bucks.
Mark: You decline?
Cecil: You know I can't pay that!
Mark: *sigh* You don't get it.I DON'T care if you can't.Either pay or....
And with that said a shadow appeared behind Cecil and before he knew it he was struck down.
From the ground he looked up and saw that it was noone else than Gary holding a Baseball Bat.
Gary: or you pay.HAHAHAHA!!!
Mark: Oh yeah."Business".I lied of course.
Mark: Because I can.Because WE can.
Mark: Gary...help me this guy's an Idiot.
Gary takes swing and Cecil has to take another hit to his ribs.
Mark: Let me make it clear for you.Because its fun.
Gary: HAHA.That is perfect for you, little ;););););).Your face in the dirt.Thats where you belong!HAHAHAHA!!!!
Mark: We got our Money.Lets go.
Mark walked away in his usual cool manner.Calm and collected as always.
Gary though wasn't finished yet and hit Cecil two more times.
Gary: Don't forget.75 Bucks!
Mark: Gary...come on.
The two walked away together and as time passed Cecil couldn't help but start crying for what seems to have been hours for him.
He then made his way home with his mind set on something drastic.
Meanwhile it is close to Midnight and in Cecils room hangs a rope with a chair underneath and the screams of his Parents echoes through the entire House.
He then stood on the Chair and put his head into the noose as he remembered the punishment and his miserable life.
But most of all Gary and Mark.
He the jumped off the chair....his life gone.
Or so he thought.He found himself in a dark space appearantly floating.
???: So you've actually done it.
Cecil remembered.It was the same voice he heard at school.
Cecil: Who are you?WHERE AM I!?
???: Don't you remember?You ended your life.
Suddenly a figure appeared in front of him.
It was a gorgeous girl with long blondebrown hair.Wearing clothes that seem...Victorian.Her expression was sweet and rather innocent.
Cecil couldn't help but blush at her beauty.
???: Hmm?Something wrong?
Cecil: EH? Nonononono.Just who are you?
???: My name...
???: It's Jill.
Cecil: Well I am
Jill: Cecil Jones.17 years old.A loser at school and life.
Cecil: Harsh...wait what the heck!?How do you know...
Jill: I know everything about you.Ever since you were born.
Cecil: WHAT!?What are you!?
Jill: I believe the most appropriate term would be a "Demon".
Cecil: A Demon....you expect me to believe that...?
Jill: Consider your situation.
Cecil: My Situa....!!
Jill: You are dead.The fact you and I talk proves my point.
Cecil: A Demon...
Jill: I know its hard to grasp but listen.
Jill: There is a reason to why you are here.
Cecil: And that is?
Jill: How does a second chance at life sound to you?
Cecil: Only to live for misery?No thanks.
Jill: I ain't done.I offer you a contract.
Jill: Yes.Let me show you the contract.
Jill opened her left hand palm and with a red light a scroll appeared in it.
She opened the scroll and read out the terms to Cecil:
Cecil Jones will receives a second chance at life.
However he will enjoy life at utmost bliss.
In return the Contractor Jill will demand a sacrifice.
This sacrifice will be:
One life of her choice taken by Jill each day.
Jill closed the scroll and looked at Cecil expectantly.
Jill: Well do you accept?
Cecil: So in order for me to live a second life of happiness you have to kill someone!?
Jill: Yes.Those are the terms.However I will give you time to think.
Cecil immediately raced to thoughts of what Jill just told him.
Cecil: A life...of happiness!? No more trashings from Mark and Gary?
But it costs live!s!!
Cecil stares at Jill who whole patiently lets him think.
Jill: Take your time.Not that it matters, since you're dead the concept of time has no meaning for you anyway.
Cecil: Dammit!What do I do!?!?!?
Cecils face clearly told his thoughts.He was completely torn and Jill noticed.While not looking for a second Jill chuckled silently then told Cecil:
Jill: How about I show you who the first sacrifice is?
Despite the protests from Cecil a screenlike light appeared and with at first the Image being unrecognizable it started to get shape.
Jill: Ready...Cecil?See your first sacrifice!!
Cecils face of uncertainty changed immediately into pure determination as the Person shown was noone else than Gary.
Jill: So...Cecil.I give you a second life.You get happiness and revenge against Gary Weissinger.Your choice please.
Cecils thoughts raced as he remembered what Pain Gary and Mark set him through until:
Cecil: .......I accept!
Jill: Cecil Jones!Hereby I declare this Contract as official!
Inside the scroll words began to take shape.
Sacrifice: Gary Weissinger
Jill: Now then.Time to fulfill my role.Your new life begins now!
As Jill finished Cecil began to fade away and woke up in his room.And in his bed nonetheless.No signs of a chair or a rope anywhere.
The Clock says Midnight....
Meanwhile back at the dark Space:
???: Kukukukukuku! You really are something Jill!!!
Jills expression was nowhere recognizable as it was to Cecil, it radiated utter evil.
Jill: What do you want Lucy?
Her voice changed also.It was purely threatening.
Lucy: Just being a spectator at this "Miracle".To think that YOU form a contract.
Lucy's voice was completely different than Jill's true voice.Playful and cheery.Fitting for he appearance.She looked like Innocence in Person with her golden locks.
Jill: Hmpf.If you got nothing else to say.
Jill: Make it quick!!
Lucy: ....Harsh as always.I just came to tell...that I'm watching you.Do NOT forget that.
Jill: Unfortunately...I know you do.
Jill began to fade away as well leaving Lucy behind who's face obtained a devilish smile and herself laughing out loud drastically.
The one demon I never thought obtains a contract!!
Let's see how you'll do..Jill DeRippa!!!DEMON OF WHITECHAPEL!!!
End of Chapter 1.
Cecils new life begins(?)
Whitechapel was the place where the Ripper Murder Series took place in the 1880's.
While the Prime Suspect was a man named Jack the Ripper there was also the Theory that The Ripper was female, thus the Legend of Jill The Ripper was born.
01-12-2012, 12:07 PM
Awesome. Moar! =]
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