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Candice Uchiha
07-15-2009, 05:52 AM
This is our story

Sephiroth
07-15-2009, 05:53 AM
ok then

Candice Uchiha
07-15-2009, 05:54 AM
well u start part 1 then i'll do 2 then u do 3 and so on and so like that ok?

Sephiroth
07-15-2009, 05:55 AM
hmm ok then *thinks*

Sephiroth
07-15-2009, 05:59 AM
part 1

one day before i became a ninja i going throught villages, then i found one that caught my eyes it was the village hidden in the darkness it was perfect for me to join this place so i did, when i first started out there was alot of people around the village and i couldnt get down who everyone was until i got help from the kage of teh village,one day while i was walking throught the village this girl came up to me and introduced her self,here name was kari then but now candice,we became friends since we said hello everytime i walk throught the village she said hello but then one time she disappeared and we didnt know where she went where did she go??

Candice Uchiha
07-15-2009, 06:04 AM
Part 2

I couldn't take the village anymore so i left and joined the akatsuki soon after we almost captured all the jinchuuriki,we broke off and the organization of true power was the new akatsuki,which turned into the black rains(founder yori uchiha)we destroyed the darkness village but got rebuilt by zeek uchiha,then i realized the life of a rogue wasn't meant for me so i returned to the village

Sephiroth
07-15-2009, 06:08 AM
part 3
one day i was sitting there in the village, i was watching the front gates and i seen some one coming i got ready for an attack and then as the person got closer i seen who it was it was her she was comeing back for the village but what could i do i couldnt do nothing as she came thought the gates she didnt even look at me it was like i wasnt even there then, did she even remeber me??

Candice Uchiha
07-15-2009, 06:13 AM
part 4
as i walked thru the village gates, a man sitting on a bench i couldn't remember his name but he was familiar so i ignored him,i went to the kage imediatly and discussed i wanted to come back he asked and wat have u aquired so far*suddenly i swung a sword out of it's slot*this i said he looked at the sword and gasped Tsunagi The Sword Of Moonlight he said u may come back he said*i walked out into the field and the man again who was he?*i walked over to the training grounds and sat down on a bench

Sephiroth
07-15-2009, 06:17 AM
part 5
as i was sitting there waiting for my sift to be up i couldnt figure out why she was here after she left for so long as i start to think i see a comrad come and releave me as he did i asked where did that girl go he said to the training grouds i told him thanks and start to go there i couldnt figure out what she wanted with us so i quickly got there and i seen her sitting on a bench i walk up behind her and ask y are u here

Sephiroth
07-15-2009, 06:26 AM
candice i got to go c ya in like 3 hours or so bye

Candice Uchiha
07-15-2009, 06:28 AM
bye jeremy*kisses him*

Candice Uchiha
07-15-2009, 06:33 AM
i am here bcuz i don't have anywhere else 2 go if u have a problem*puts hand on sword*we can always battle it out*smiles*

Vatanui AKA Pride
07-15-2009, 09:59 AM
...........Good Story.

Sephiroth
07-15-2009, 06:22 PM
u have no where to go huh....are u planing to attack us or something??

dogboy22
07-15-2009, 06:29 PM
you two remind me of a show what show the names candice and jeremy

Candice Uchiha
07-15-2009, 06:45 PM
*takes hand off sword*no i just got here i used to be in this village *puts hand on hip*if u haven't noticed,u annoy me im going to the mansion*starts walking to the mansion*

Vatanui AKA Pride
07-15-2009, 06:47 PM
Are you guys dating now?

Candice Uchiha
07-15-2009, 06:47 PM
look at our sig's

Sephiroth
07-15-2009, 06:48 PM
*runs to catch her* hey i didnt introduce my self i jeremy *starts to walk beside her*

Candice Uchiha
07-15-2009, 06:49 PM
*looks at him*im Candice*walks a bit faster*

Sephiroth
07-15-2009, 06:51 PM
hmm candice *stops and starts to think* candice......hmm u sure ur candice u look offely familer?

Candice Uchiha
07-15-2009, 06:52 PM
yes im candice i used to be here under a spy name kari now please leave me to my buisness*starts to run towards the mansion*

Sephiroth
07-15-2009, 06:54 PM
*is left there standing and starts to pace* so that is kari huh oh well *sits on the bench* she dont even remeber me

Candice Uchiha
07-15-2009, 06:55 PM
*appears in front of him*of course i remember u mr.hotshot all the grlz always wanted u and zeek*rolls eyes*but not me i didn't care that much about u

Vatanui AKA Pride
07-15-2009, 06:55 PM
Answer me or else!!!!! *pulls out broadsword*

Candice Uchiha
07-15-2009, 06:56 PM
i said yes

Hawk
07-15-2009, 06:58 PM
Answer me or else!!!!! *pulls out broadsword*
Pride your ruining the story lol :lol:, *pulls out sword* woo sword fighting time

Sephiroth
07-15-2009, 06:58 PM
hmm we did date once rember candice and me mr.hotahot yeah rite *walks off
*

dogboy22
07-15-2009, 07:02 PM
*eats popcorn* its like the movies

Kuroda Taishi
07-15-2009, 07:02 PM
yes im candice i used to be here under a spy name kari now please leave me to my buisness*starts to run towards the mansion*

I knew it!

Candice Uchiha
07-15-2009, 07:04 PM
we did once,ok then bye*thinks to self by the count of three he's gonna come running to me*1,2,3

Sephiroth
07-15-2009, 07:05 PM
*keeps walking& oh well i hope to c u around candice

dogboy22
07-15-2009, 07:07 PM
we did once,ok then bye*thinks to self by the count of three he's gonna come running to me*1,2,3

oh he got jacked

animelover
07-15-2009, 07:08 PM
hmm...........

Candice Uchiha
07-15-2009, 07:09 PM
*rolls eyes*appears in the uchikage mansion lord kage i want to take a mission,fine he said but u have to take jeremy with u Y?!?!?! he's a fool,u have to take him he says,fine,so wats the mission i ask,there r recent disturbances in the trees around the village we think it's ninja coming into our village to try to ambush us,yes sir i will get straight at it*disappears*jeremy!

Vatanui AKA Pride
07-15-2009, 07:10 PM
Pride your ruining the story lol :lol:, *pulls out sword* woo sword fighting time

Yes. Yes, I am.

Sephiroth
07-15-2009, 07:11 PM
*appears beside candice* did u sommon me candice......oh a new mission with u wow how did i get so lucky

animelover
07-15-2009, 07:12 PM
*rolls eyes*appears in the uchikage mansion lord kage i want to take a mission,fine he said but u have to take jeremy with u Y?!?!?! he's a fool,u have to take him he says,fine,so wats the mission i ask,there r recent disturbances in the trees around the village we think it's ninja coming into our village to try to ambush us,yes sir i will get straight at it*disappears*jeremy!
Nice! Can't wait for part.....what ever number

*sits back and watches*

Candice Uchiha
07-15-2009, 07:17 PM
just stay outta my way okay u can go search somewhere ok?*closes eyes*eye of the snake!there's one crystals grow around and one shoots at a tree and a ninja fallsd out

Candice Uchiha
07-15-2009, 07:18 PM
that was easy

Sephiroth
07-15-2009, 07:18 PM
*disappears and comes back with four ninja on my shoulders* well thats all of them candice here u can take the credit *disappears*

Candice Uchiha
07-15-2009, 07:24 PM
*gets mad*ugghhhh he gets on my nerves i don't need the credit i don't need any of this uggh*walks home*ruff ruff,hey miranda*scratches her head*walks over to computer room and gets ipod and listens to it

Sai's brother
07-15-2009, 07:24 PM
Good Story

Sephiroth
07-15-2009, 07:25 PM
*appears on teh village gate* ahh dang it im on night watch again what a drag *sits and thinks y is she really here*

Candice Uchiha
07-15-2009, 07:33 PM
*a crystal shoots at jeremy and slices his side*

Sephiroth
07-15-2009, 07:34 PM
*clone poof* who was that *appears beside candice with a sword to her back* now tell me y are u really here

Rasaga
07-15-2009, 07:37 PM
*hangs upside down in a tree* Oh, this is getting good!

dogboy22
07-15-2009, 07:38 PM
*hangs upside down in a tree* Oh, this is getting good!

i know popcorn

Sephiroth
07-15-2009, 08:03 PM
*clone poof* who was that *appears beside candice with a sword to her back* now tell me y are u really here
candice??

Vatanui AKA Pride
07-15-2009, 08:12 PM
I am saddened...I was just repped down....by Candice...

Sephiroth
07-15-2009, 08:13 PM
aww where is she?

Vatanui AKA Pride
07-15-2009, 08:36 PM
IDK.....I'm still saddened.

dogboy22
07-15-2009, 08:43 PM
aww where is she?

it says she is here

Candice Uchiha
07-16-2009, 05:56 AM
*clone turns into snakes*comes back up out of the ground*smiles*i told u im here because i don't have anywhere else to go ok?*puts hand on my giant sword*but the reason i did that was because u get on my last nerves plus i've killed many men in my days but ur chkra is oustanding so i think i wana test *smiles*i haven't had a good fight in forever*runs towards and jumps in the air*take this*slams my sword into the ground*how was that?

Hawk
07-16-2009, 06:24 AM
*turns into my wolf form and digs a hole*

Sephiroth
07-16-2009, 06:47 AM
so u like my chakra level huh *jumps out of the way of the slam* if u think u knw what i can do u havent seen anything yet candice...ok ill fight u *smiles* this is going to be really fun

animelover
07-16-2009, 07:06 AM
w t ....

*changes avatar NOW*

animelover
07-16-2009, 07:40 AM
No, do what you want, idc, good story, bye

Vatanui AKA Pride
07-16-2009, 08:52 AM
*watches with popcorn*

temvvy
07-16-2009, 11:42 AM
nice u guys

Ninja Pink
07-16-2009, 11:46 AM
*Stares with mouth open*

Sephiroth
07-16-2009, 05:13 PM
as i jumped up to dodge her attack i reallized that she was going to try to kill me but y i guess she wanted to c what i got so i decided i couldnt hold anything back from this girl

Candice Uchiha
07-16-2009, 05:14 PM
*smiles*ur chakra attracts me sound style-impulse!*puts hand on ground and blast happens under jeremy*that should've finished him off

Sephiroth
07-16-2009, 05:16 PM
after the dust fade away i was still there standing barely a scratch on me* u got to do better than that candice *before she knew wat was happening my shadows was allready crwling up her body so she couldnt move*

Candice Uchiha
07-16-2009, 05:18 PM
*smiles,shadows start receeding*that jutsu doesn't work on me now let me show u real power!striking shadow snakes!

Sephiroth
07-16-2009, 05:19 PM
i seen her snakes coming at me i had to do something fast or i was done for i activated my kamimeh and got out of the way of the snakes i charged at her and uses 128 palms on her

dogboy22
07-16-2009, 05:23 PM
*watches* this is confusing how can any one be attracted to chakra

Sai's brother
07-16-2009, 05:23 PM
*watches* this is confusing how can any one be attracted to chakra


Karin is attracted to sasuke's Chakara

dogboy22
07-16-2009, 05:25 PM
Karin is attracted to sasuke's Chakara

oh yeah *eats popcorn* is this supposed to be like a sope opera

Candice Uchiha
07-16-2009, 05:26 PM
*my body has 128 dents in it*smiles*the dents go away im unstoppable *i punch his face and he goes flying*hmph

Sephiroth
07-16-2009, 05:28 PM
as she punches my clone went poof she didnt knw where i was* whats wrong candice ur bit slower than before *i threw some kunai at her*

KingJashin
07-16-2009, 05:30 PM
.................................................. .................................................. .......................... what the hell was that :?:

dogboy22
07-16-2009, 05:33 PM
.................................................. .................................................. .......................... what the hell was that :?:

shhh your ruining the movie

Candice Uchiha
07-16-2009, 05:34 PM
*catches the kunai in between fingers,smiles,puts a paper bomb on them and jumps up*now die ninja art multiplicating kunai*kunai with the bombs multilpy,the kunai shoot at the ground and explode in the trees and underground*hmmm where is he now

Sephiroth
07-16-2009, 05:35 PM
i quickly used subsitution to doge and appears behind her with my sword to her back* u done well candice but ur not as strong or as fast as me

Candice Uchiha
07-16-2009, 05:40 PM
*smiles*wana bet?*disappears and appears on the ground*now try this *jumps up to him,looks him in the eye and he's parlyzed*palm style-organ destruction*i touch jeremy's leg and arm*now i've cut ur bicep and rectus femoris or ur back leg bone,*smiles*now this will finish u if this messes up i'll beparlyzed 4 a sec snake style-wild destructive attack*i put my arm in the air and a million snakes pop out and r heading 4 jeremy*

Vatanui AKA Pride
07-16-2009, 05:41 PM
I just repped everybody up!
It's Free Rep Week!

Sephiroth
07-16-2009, 05:42 PM
as im flying away i c teh snakes i cant move so i ahev to i land on my feet but fall this can be happening i use chidori roataion and kill the snakes* u almost ahd me there candice

Candice Uchiha
07-16-2009, 05:45 PM
*falls on my flat on my face on the ground*that jutsu used so much chakra im parlyzed

Sephiroth
07-16-2009, 05:47 PM
*walks up to candice* hmm thats all u got *pulls out sword* hmm no i wont do it im not going to kill u *puls the sword back* well ill c u around then

dogboy22
07-16-2009, 05:47 PM
I just repped everybody up!
It's Free Rep Week!

cool.

Candice Uchiha
07-16-2009, 05:49 PM
*stands up*i guess u won *walks limps over to him*smiles*thnx 4 the fight i just wanted to test ur skills*hugs him*well thnx maybe i will see u again bye*walks away*

Sephiroth
07-16-2009, 05:51 PM
good bye candice *hears a horn* aww man nite watch again disspaeras and appears on the village gate* man she is pretty strong

Candice Uchiha
07-16-2009, 05:54 PM
*thinks to self(he was the hardest person i've ever fought maybe that's y people call him the one winged angel,while im the snake queen,i guess i'll see him 2morrow*walks home

Candice Uchiha
07-16-2009, 05:54 PM
*hears another horn*man now i've got watch duty*appears on the gate bside jeremy and sits down*hey

Sai's brother
07-16-2009, 05:55 PM
I just repped everybody up!
It's Free Rep Week!


even me?

(yays to me hoilday ^^)

Sephiroth
07-16-2009, 05:55 PM
*sits up on the gat thinksin* y is she so strong and she said she was attracked to my chakra hmm

Candice Uchiha
07-16-2009, 05:58 PM
*blushes,lays head on jeremy's shoulder*

Sephiroth
07-16-2009, 05:59 PM
*looks over* where did u come from??

Candice Uchiha
07-16-2009, 06:00 PM
i've got watch 2

Sai's brother
07-16-2009, 06:01 PM
-watches story-

Sephiroth
07-16-2009, 06:02 PM
ph yeah i was still in the story lol

Candice Uchiha
07-16-2009, 06:03 PM
jeremy....*blushes*

Sephiroth
07-16-2009, 06:04 PM
u want to continue

Sephiroth
07-16-2009, 06:08 PM
yes candice what is it?

Candice Uchiha
07-16-2009, 06:11 PM
*looks up to him,kisses him,lays head on his shoulder,and looks a the moon

Sephiroth
07-16-2009, 06:12 PM
*lays myhead on her shoulders too* its pretty aint it

Sai's brother
07-16-2009, 06:12 PM
OOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooooooooo

this has romanace now great ^^

Candice Uchiha
07-16-2009, 06:17 PM
it is*looks at him*

Sai's brother
07-16-2009, 06:18 PM
KISS!! KISS!! KISS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:shock:

Sephiroth
07-16-2009, 06:19 PM
*looks at her*

Sai's brother
07-16-2009, 06:20 PM
Kiss!!!

this is so suspensfull

Sephiroth
07-16-2009, 06:32 PM
candice?

BankaiNaruto
07-16-2009, 06:42 PM
*eats popcorn* *whispers* best movie ever!!! *continues eating popcorn*

Candice Uchiha
07-17-2009, 05:37 PM
*smiles,kisses him*

Sephiroth
07-17-2009, 05:38 PM
*smiles and kisses back*

Sai's brother
07-17-2009, 05:38 PM
Wooooooo!!!
=d

Ninja Pink
07-17-2009, 05:43 PM
Ummm....

Candice Uchiha
07-17-2009, 05:50 PM
*stares into the moonlight*

Sephiroth
07-17-2009, 05:56 PM
*looksa t the sky* its funny how we met and everything

Candice Uchiha
07-17-2009, 05:57 PM
*smiles*isn't it

Candice Uchiha
07-17-2009, 05:57 PM
so how was the story?

Sephiroth
07-17-2009, 05:59 PM
i thought it went good

Sai's brother
07-17-2009, 06:04 PM
-claps-

the ninja in the Darkness
07-17-2009, 06:27 PM
this is weird

Sephiroth
07-21-2009, 05:11 AM
hello

Sephiroth
07-21-2009, 05:11 AM
anyone here

Sephiroth
07-21-2009, 05:11 AM
i guess not oh well