shino 4
12-24-2011, 02:48 PM
This is the origin of how my character became a vampire and entered the world of the Cullens.
This is half of my characters origins.
Twilight story
In the year of 1960 I Richard Jones live a prosperous life, I was 16 years old living with his two loving parents who never was around after I turned 16. On a rainy day in Wisconsin I was trying out for the baseball team for my local high school; when I was about to swig the baseball bat for the third time (I had already had gotten two strikes) my chest started hurting and I coughed up blood and collapsed.
Richard: (coughing up blood)
Coach: call the ambulance
Teammate #1: yes sir
(the ambulance arrives and takes Richard to the hospital)
Doctor#1: what is the patients prognosis Mr. Cullen
Cullen: please just call me Carlisle and there is nothing in my years of doctoring that I can see wrong with him
Doctor#1: what are trying to say
Carlisle: there is no medicine that treat him
Richard’s mom: NO!!!! *sobs*
Richard’s dad: are you sure doctor Cullen
Carlisle: I’m positive, so the only thing we can do is hope for a miracle
Carlisle: *but I can’t just leave this boy here suffering like this*
Chapter 2 Carlisle’s Choice
Carlisle: *if I’m going to do this it will half to happen at night*
So Carlisle waited until Richard’s parents left for food later that night, while he had to do a routine check up on Richard
Carlisle: Richard wake up
Richard slowly opened his eyes to look up at the doctor
Carlisle: Richard what if told you that I might have a way for you to live
Richard:*slowly* well what is it
Carlisle: well for starters I’m a vampire
Richard: *shocked*
Carlisle: the only way this will work if I inject you with some of my venom
Richard: venom?
Carlisle: yea my venom in other words I bite your neck
Richard grabs his collar shirt to expose his neck ready for the venom with no hesitation
Carlisle: *guess that mean he’s ready for the venom*
Carlisle: well let me tell you something before I do this your going to have a burning sensation in your neck for about 6 months and your going to have a thirst for human blood in that time as well but I have found a way to loose that feeling with a different type of blood
Richard: I completely understand but once I’m a vampire were will I stay
Carlisle: with me and your new name will be Richard Hale
Richard: I understand
Carlisle closed the curtains and proceeded to give Richard his venom;
30 seconds later Carlisle backed away in a rush to give Richard human blood
While Richard was slurping up the blood on the ground Carlisle spoke about his plan on how to get Richard out of the hospital.
The plan that Carlisle told Richard was that he would half to jump out the window after Carlisle leaves his for 5 minutes
Richard: but Carlisle sir I’m on the 3rd floor
Carlisle: believe me you wont’ be hurt anyway
So Richard believes him and do as he says and jumped out the window
(while Richard was falling he noticed Carlisle by the road waiting for him)
Carlisle: get Richard your going to my home right away
Richard: all right then
Carlisle drove Richard to his home way on the outskirts of town
CHAPTER 3: New Home
Carlisle pulled up in his drive way
Carlisle: Richard this is your new home
Richard: its beautiful Mr. Cullen
Carlisle: please just call me Carlisle
Carlisle gets out of the car and opens the front door for Richard
Richard sees 6 pale faced people in the doorway
Carlisle: this is your new family just like you Richard
The short black haired came over to greet Richard first
Alice: hello Richard I’m Alice and I had feeling that we would be getting a new family member
Richard: (nervously) um hello there Alice but how did you know I was coming here
Alice: well I kinda see the future but since the future can always change its really push and go sometimes
Next person to greet Richard was a mom like person
Esme: hello there Richard I’m Esme Cullen Carlisle is my husband and welcome to your new home
Richard: thank you Esme
Then a buff guy came over to give Richard a bear hug, but Richard quickly elbowed him in the gut and walked slowly away
Emmett: pretty quick there and your cautious as well
Richard: (smirks) why thank you
Emmett: by the way my name is Emmett and the blonde beauty over there is Rosalie
Richard: (wow this family is amazing leaving together with there different personalities)
Edward: thanks for the compliment Richard
Richard: wait how do you know what I was talking about
Edward: well I kind read minds, nothing really safe in your head
Richard: (well I think that is an invasion of privacy)
Edward: (laughs) by the way my name is Edward
Finally the quietest person in the room who examining me for the past 10 minutes said something
Jasper: (Nervously) um…. Hello there Richard my name is jasper and its pleasure to meet you
Richard: like wise jasper
Alice the happily skipped over towards Richard
Alice: well now since you have met everyone, please allow me to give you tour of the house
Carlisle: wait, we need to get him adapted to our eating pattern before we do anything else
Alice: I will go with him
Emmett: and I will too
Rosalie: (leaves the room)
Emmett: (whisper) don’t worry about her
Edward hands Richard some of his clothes and shoes
Richard: hmm… thanks
Carlisle: well go ahead and change clothes I will explain what’s about to happen
This is half of my characters origins.
Twilight story
In the year of 1960 I Richard Jones live a prosperous life, I was 16 years old living with his two loving parents who never was around after I turned 16. On a rainy day in Wisconsin I was trying out for the baseball team for my local high school; when I was about to swig the baseball bat for the third time (I had already had gotten two strikes) my chest started hurting and I coughed up blood and collapsed.
Richard: (coughing up blood)
Coach: call the ambulance
Teammate #1: yes sir
(the ambulance arrives and takes Richard to the hospital)
Doctor#1: what is the patients prognosis Mr. Cullen
Cullen: please just call me Carlisle and there is nothing in my years of doctoring that I can see wrong with him
Doctor#1: what are trying to say
Carlisle: there is no medicine that treat him
Richard’s mom: NO!!!! *sobs*
Richard’s dad: are you sure doctor Cullen
Carlisle: I’m positive, so the only thing we can do is hope for a miracle
Carlisle: *but I can’t just leave this boy here suffering like this*
Chapter 2 Carlisle’s Choice
Carlisle: *if I’m going to do this it will half to happen at night*
So Carlisle waited until Richard’s parents left for food later that night, while he had to do a routine check up on Richard
Carlisle: Richard wake up
Richard slowly opened his eyes to look up at the doctor
Carlisle: Richard what if told you that I might have a way for you to live
Richard:*slowly* well what is it
Carlisle: well for starters I’m a vampire
Richard: *shocked*
Carlisle: the only way this will work if I inject you with some of my venom
Richard: venom?
Carlisle: yea my venom in other words I bite your neck
Richard grabs his collar shirt to expose his neck ready for the venom with no hesitation
Carlisle: *guess that mean he’s ready for the venom*
Carlisle: well let me tell you something before I do this your going to have a burning sensation in your neck for about 6 months and your going to have a thirst for human blood in that time as well but I have found a way to loose that feeling with a different type of blood
Richard: I completely understand but once I’m a vampire were will I stay
Carlisle: with me and your new name will be Richard Hale
Richard: I understand
Carlisle closed the curtains and proceeded to give Richard his venom;
30 seconds later Carlisle backed away in a rush to give Richard human blood
While Richard was slurping up the blood on the ground Carlisle spoke about his plan on how to get Richard out of the hospital.
The plan that Carlisle told Richard was that he would half to jump out the window after Carlisle leaves his for 5 minutes
Richard: but Carlisle sir I’m on the 3rd floor
Carlisle: believe me you wont’ be hurt anyway
So Richard believes him and do as he says and jumped out the window
(while Richard was falling he noticed Carlisle by the road waiting for him)
Carlisle: get Richard your going to my home right away
Richard: all right then
Carlisle drove Richard to his home way on the outskirts of town
CHAPTER 3: New Home
Carlisle pulled up in his drive way
Carlisle: Richard this is your new home
Richard: its beautiful Mr. Cullen
Carlisle: please just call me Carlisle
Carlisle gets out of the car and opens the front door for Richard
Richard sees 6 pale faced people in the doorway
Carlisle: this is your new family just like you Richard
The short black haired came over to greet Richard first
Alice: hello Richard I’m Alice and I had feeling that we would be getting a new family member
Richard: (nervously) um hello there Alice but how did you know I was coming here
Alice: well I kinda see the future but since the future can always change its really push and go sometimes
Next person to greet Richard was a mom like person
Esme: hello there Richard I’m Esme Cullen Carlisle is my husband and welcome to your new home
Richard: thank you Esme
Then a buff guy came over to give Richard a bear hug, but Richard quickly elbowed him in the gut and walked slowly away
Emmett: pretty quick there and your cautious as well
Richard: (smirks) why thank you
Emmett: by the way my name is Emmett and the blonde beauty over there is Rosalie
Richard: (wow this family is amazing leaving together with there different personalities)
Edward: thanks for the compliment Richard
Richard: wait how do you know what I was talking about
Edward: well I kind read minds, nothing really safe in your head
Richard: (well I think that is an invasion of privacy)
Edward: (laughs) by the way my name is Edward
Finally the quietest person in the room who examining me for the past 10 minutes said something
Jasper: (Nervously) um…. Hello there Richard my name is jasper and its pleasure to meet you
Richard: like wise jasper
Alice the happily skipped over towards Richard
Alice: well now since you have met everyone, please allow me to give you tour of the house
Carlisle: wait, we need to get him adapted to our eating pattern before we do anything else
Alice: I will go with him
Emmett: and I will too
Rosalie: (leaves the room)
Emmett: (whisper) don’t worry about her
Edward hands Richard some of his clothes and shoes
Richard: hmm… thanks
Carlisle: well go ahead and change clothes I will explain what’s about to happen