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PlatonicZombie
12-14-2011, 09:44 PM
Some Background: I am, and will forever be, an aspiring writer. Lately, a friend and I text each other Haikus we write periodically. A Haiku, for those who do not know, is a three line poem that follows a structure of 5-7-5; meaning five sylls, seven sylls, and then five sylls again. (Sylls = Syllables). So, today I was sitting in a coffee shop and staring out at the clouds passing by, and before writing a Haiku about it Shikamaru came into my mind.

Now, before sharing my Haiku, I have decided to put forward, to those that would like to take it up, a fun little creative excersie that you can choose to share on here or not.

The Creative Task: Attempt to get into a Naruto character's mindset and write a Haiku based on this character's mindset. Now typically Haikus are about the current happenings in nature around the individual writing, but I think we can expand this to be open ended. So, since we're already assuming a fictional character's identity, we can then go further and expand the Haiku to anything our imagination sees; however, the 5-7-5 structure must remain. (Don't want to make it that easy on ya hahaha!!!) So now I will post my Haiku as an example, and I hope you all have as much fun as I did.


Aloof races float
Soft and free with the wind and
Out to worlds unseen.

- By: Shikamaru

katsu uchiha
12-14-2011, 09:55 PM
Dynamic changes
Like the weather in season
Always transforming

By: Naruto

(Ok I know my haiku may suck but cut me a break, i haven't been in school for awhile; i graduated already, so yeah)

PlatonicZombie
12-14-2011, 10:02 PM
Dynamic changes
Like the weather in season
Always transforming

By: Naruto

(Ok I know my haiku may suck but cut me a break, i haven't been in school for awhile; i graduated already, so yeah)



HAHAHAHA!!! No worries, I graduated College last year, so I get it. Still, dispite being out of school, you did real good!!!

PlatonicZombie
12-14-2011, 10:08 PM
Katsu - you inspired me with your Haiku. This is what I came up with thanks to you.

The morning mist sticks
To the ground like the steam from
A hot Ramen bowl.

By: Naruto

katsu uchiha
12-14-2011, 10:14 PM
HAHAHAHA!!! No worries, I graduated College last year, so I get it. Still, dispite being out of school, you did real good!!!
Thanks. I am a writer myself. I like to write so I think even if I haven't been in school for awhile. I did pretty good. Here's another one.

Sound of metal
Slices and cuts like a blade
Silent death call

By: Tenten