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sakura_blossom
12-13-2011, 02:19 PM
So I'm going to post a couple poems I wrote today. Once of them was a homework assignment for my English class and the other was just something I wrote because it was what I was feeling at the time. If you want to know why I wrote them, just ask.

Why?
(http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost.php?p=5819560&postcount=8)
People:

People are demons;
Their words acid,
Their deeds dirty
And we take them in
Like a drug we cannot live without

People are monsters;
Their hearts impure,
Their souls black
And their arrogance
Allows them to act
as if they were perfect

The malice is in all of us
Though we may not show it
We've all thought guilty thoughts
Done dirty things

We are demons;
Our words acid,
Our deeds dirty
And they let us in
Like a drug they cannot live without

We are monsters;
Our hearts impure,
Our souls black
And our arrogance
Allows us to act as if we were perfect



Silence is a Weapon:
Silence is a weapon;
It haunts, it hurts, it kills
Silence is drug;
It destroys, it breaks us
It creates out worst fears
Silence allows us to retreat
To escape into the confides of our mind
And as our mind wonders
That which we fear becomes reality
And reality becomes a weapon
It hurts, it haunts, it kills
Reality becomes a drug;
It destroys, it breaks us
Into silvers of our former selves
And we become a shell;
Empty and hollow
A ghost of who we once were
Until the hands of death embrace us
Silence is a weapon
It haunts, it hurts, it kills

Vatanui AKA Pride
12-13-2011, 03:39 PM
The first one was a tad too dark for my tastes, but I took a liking for the latter.

Silence really is a weapon. Any who, nice job.

Ino's Girl
12-13-2011, 03:57 PM
Good poems!

sakura_blossom
12-13-2011, 04:00 PM
Thank you, both of you! (:

GaaraXSaiFan
01-06-2012, 03:29 PM
Nice poems d(^_~)b

sakura_blossom
01-06-2012, 03:30 PM
Thank you!

GaaraXSaiFan
01-06-2012, 03:38 PM
No problem ^^

sakura_blossom
01-09-2012, 04:35 PM
More bad poetry by Rizzy :O

This was simply a response of a poem for a poetry scrapbook (my English project).

Why?
Why can't I be pretty?
Why am I the one with terrible hair,
the one with acne/
Why am I the one who no one seems to like, the one everyone hates?
Why am I so insecure, so unconfident about my body?
Why is everyone around me so confident about themselves as a whole?
Why can't I be more like them?
Why does everyone get aggravated and claim that I'm fishing for compliments when this is how I truly feel?
Why can I only seem to find comfort in the fictional ideas in my mind?
Why, just why?

Skrillex
01-10-2012, 03:50 PM
Riz, you poetry is wonderful as ever. (:

Finally you decide to do your school work?

By the way you should post the Robert Frost parody...

sakura_blossom
01-10-2012, 03:53 PM
Thank you, Ali.

Yes -.-'' I'm doing my school work. The Poetry Scrapbook is soo much easier than a damned eight page essay.

Meeeh. I means going back through the scrapbook and retyping it

Skrillex
01-10-2012, 03:58 PM
You're welcome Riz.

I bet, but don't you have to do twenty of them before tomorrow?

You're sooo lazy!

sakura_blossom
01-10-2012, 04:02 PM
I can write twenty poems by tomorrow, no problem. I'm not limited to what I can do and my imagination can run free. Besides I'm better at poetry and actual stories than I am at writing essays and reports.

I knooooow.

Skrillex
01-10-2012, 04:07 PM
Someone's confident in their writing abilities. I thought you like writing your essay. It was on Poe for crying out loud and you, like, idolize the insane bastard.


Dooo iiiitt!

sakura_blossom
01-10-2012, 04:09 PM
I liked the topic, but it was difficult to find 1500 words to describe it. I'm not good with word limits. So what if I idolize the insane bastard? <.<

Lattttteeer!

Skrillex
01-10-2012, 04:16 PM
I liked the topic, but it was difficult to find 1500 words to describe it. I'm not good with word limits. So what if I idolize the insane bastard? <.<

Lattttteeer!

Dork.

Nooowww!

sakura_blossom
01-10-2012, 04:17 PM
Later!

Shinagami
06-06-2012, 09:27 PM
Great poems :)

sakura_blossom
06-11-2012, 01:21 PM
Thank you >.<

Jonesy
06-14-2012, 03:11 AM
Very nice poems.